Is that simple English? I don't think so. I'll try to think of a better word.
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Is that simple English? I don't think so. I'll try to think of a better word.
Worth noting: it is a Catholic-only belief that Mary had anything to do with Jesus' conception, other than to bear him. Using "Simple" language, the Father conceived Jesus in Mary, who bore and gave birth to him.
I'd say the simple version is actually very, very close to being entirely accurate. There's no need for complexity; the message itself is simple.
Can I suggst we structure this page in a similar way to the Christianity page on the English wikipedia. That page has already had more thorough contributions and edits. We don't need to reinvent it all. At the moment this page suggests Christianity can be reduced to beleifs and a history of divisions. There is more to Christianity. Just nigel 06:35, 12 October 2006 (UTC)
Blockinbox said "our simple article was built up carefully and over a long time by many editors, and should not be chucked overnight in favor of a carbon-copy of the English article, which is notably deficient, but unlikely to improve because of the tiny clique that dominates that article." Whatever you think of the contributors on the English Wikipedia article on Christianity need not limit the extent of inormation we provide here. I can asure I am not just posting a carbon copy. I am however slowly working through this page to add my contribution and improve it. In my changes to the introduction yesterday, I used both the English site and the existing introduction here as resources. I was disappointed you removed those changes. They contained more information than was previously here. It also contained more references, when previously there were none. In the absense of any evidence what I wrote was incorrect, I have reinstated it.
If you wish to dispute any of the information I have added, please let us know. If you object to any of the references I have added, please let us know. If you think I have removed something important that the introduction used to contain or should contain in the future, please let us know. If you think the introduction is now too long to serve as an adequate introduction, please let us know. (Just nigel 04:41, 25 October 2006 (UTC))
Reasons why the belief's section needed rewriting: The beleifs as they were paid too little reguard for the Jewish history of Christianity and the Old Testament or Hebrew Scriptures, which make up the majority of the Christian scriptures. My suggested remedy was to add Abraham, Moses, Ruth, David and Isaiah as significant examples from this history. Beliefs about the Holy Spirit were absent excpet for naming the Spirit in the abstract when describing the Trinity. Some comments like "Catholics beleive this but it is not biblical..." were unatributed and too argumentative. I simplified language. Concepts like "sin" and "salvation" are important to Christian beliefs but needed more simple english descriptions at first use. Just nigel 05:47, 12 October 2006 (UTC)
"Jesus never did sin" ...???
We might need to say something about how common, and added references to verify that these are Christian beleifes (common or otherwise). Some things like Jesus' life and death may be very common beleifs among Christians. Others like the escatology described here would be far more contested among people who identify themselves as Christian. (Again a lack of references hinders this section - where is the eveidence that Gehenna is the same thing as Hell?)
We might also need to say something about what constitutes belief and the role of 'belief' within Christianity. One of my concerns about this article is it suggests Christianity is defined by what one believes. What of the role of following Jesus' way in life ("taking up the cross and following him" as described in the Gospels) or the cultural associations many people have with Christianity, which are not or only loosly based on belifs (as in the description of a country as a Christian country)? (Just nigel 05:25, 25 October 2006 (UTC))
I like how this section uses an historic approach to describe differences within the people who identify themselves as Christian. I think it is a very helpful way to describe how the groups have emerged and relate in varying degrees with each other.
I think it is simplistic too say such differences are just about doctirne. I have already added the phrase "and practice" but there are other factors too such as political and cultural differnces. An editing of this section could allow for their influences too.
Later in this section it describes cultic practices, as in the ways people within the religion express their worship. Could we eventually divide this into two major sections, one describing the denominations/movements/traditions/sect of Christianity and another specifically about churches at worship/ritual/sacrament?
And before I go, there is still a lack of NPOV. I might have stripped references to "Catholics aren't Biblical" earlier in this page but what does it mean when it says "Some Protestant churches have ceremonies more or less similar to the Mass, but they believe the bread and wine are just symbols that remind us of what Jesus did." (Just nigel 05:36, 25 October 2006 (UTC))
Is it really useful to have a reference to the Cathars as the first external link? They are an (albeit important) footnote in western European Christian history. I think it confuses the article to have a fringe (and as far as I know no longer practiced) theological system linked here. If we started listing all the historically significant fringe groups in the Chrisitan faith, just the links to those groups' histories would be longer than the present article in its entirety. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 67.9.152.44 (talk • contribs)
From the intro:
"Despite being called a religion, it is actually based around finding a relationship with Jesus."
As opposed to members of other religions who have no relationship with their gods?
Well, that is what we believe. If you just reworked the wording and maybe moved it to the common beliefs section or something along those lines then it might sound less piety, if that's what you're trying to avoid here. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 97.85.185.169 (talk • contribs) 04:03, July 27, 2008 (UTC)
Hello, I split a longer section (about the different councils and splits) into shorter ones. I also added Council of Ephesos (where the Assyrian Church of the East split). If anyone has the time, a deeprer explanation of Nestorianism (as in the Ephesus council) vs. the nature of god contorversy (monophysitism/miaphysitism) as it surfaces in the Council of Chalcedon would be helpful. --Eptalon (talk) 12:09, 19 September 2008 (UTC)
Because many of our readers may be unfamiliar with Christianity or from non-Christian countries, I think it would be more respectful to use BCE (Before Common Era) and CE (common Era) for dates. The actual year is the same (321 AD becomes 321 CE) and the effect is more neutral. If most editors agree, could a bot do the fixing? Cwilsyn (talk) 05:18, 23 September 2008 (UTC)
I personally find nothing particularly respectful about BCE/CE compared with the other type when it comes to an article that actually deals with Christianity. Because our readership does not have good English skills I would suspect that they would find BCE/CE more confusing as it is less used and I believe it is is generally used by academics rather than in general writing.--Matilda (talk) 05:40, 23 September 2008 (UTC)Either CE and BCE or AD and BC can be used — spaced, undotted (without periods) and upper case. Choose either the BC–AD or the BCE–CE system, but not both in the same article. AD appears before or after a year ("AD 1066", "1066 AD"); the other abbreviations appear after ("1066 CE", "3700 BCE", "3700 BC"). If an article already uses one style, do not change to the other style unless there is a good reason for the change.
Hello just wanted to bring a few ideas:
We might mention that different Christian groups have different beliefs on the nature of Christ (myphysitism, monophysitism), though I don't know how to tell that in Simple English.--Eptalon (talk) 10:20, 23 September 2008 (UTC)
The idea of trinity is a well-accepted belief in Christianity. However what I added here is not yet in the trinity article. Only few groups disagree with the idea of trinity (however, there are differences in how it is seen, e.g. the filioque which splits Eastern Orthodox, and Western-rite Catholics). Therefore what probably needs ot be done is to merge the trinity info here to the trinity article.
Also note that the difference between Sabellianism and Trinty are very minor. Sabelianism talks aobut different "masks", in the idea of trinity, the three are different persons.--Eptalon (talk) 11:47, 30 September 2008 (UTC)
We should try to incorporate some of the criticism (see en:Criticism of Christianity) In my (personal) opinion, this article serves as a gateway, to tell what Christians believe (as opposed to Muslims, Jews, Buddhists, Hindus) - It is clear that in the 2k years after jesus' death different ideas developed (please note: this is also true for Muslims, and probably Jews and Hindus). In that context, how Protestants differ amongst each other, or from Catholics is perhaps not that important. IIRC Catholics and Orthodox believe almost the same things.
Anything else we should get in there? --Eptalon (talk) 12:46, 30 September 2008 (UTC)
Very informative. Christians who are in fact True Christians do not face judgement only rewards. --User:John Robert Fahlsing--
The title, list of bulletpoints sections don't look too good, can we perhaps make sentences there? --Eptalon (talk) 10:21, 2 October 2008 (UTC)
Some of the changes made since September have introduced incorrect information, especially about Catholicism. Can we editors get a thorough discussion going on this talk page before anyone makes more changes to the article? I think the definition of a gateway article is sometimes being overlooked, and I certainly agree with the problem of language difficulty. Cwilsyn (talk) 06:14, 30 December 2008 (UTC)
I shifted the introduction as close as I could to a -neutral- POV. It would appear that editors are letting their bias affect their edits. P/T
I have tried to edit the article towards a more neutral point of view. I have done this mostly by starting sentences with "Christians believe..." I wish I could think of something more varied to say because the repetition makes for boring reading. LovesMacs (talk) 16:25, 23 February 2009 (UTC)
I've tried to improve the NPOV, but someone keeps reverting it, and insisting that they know better than the dictionary definition of a word. Sadly someone is intent on pushing their POV more than being accurate. 134.161.227.84 (talk) 21:06, 24 February 2009 (UTC)
To clarify: The sentence "Christianity is based on the life and teachings of Jesus of Nazareth, the main (character or person) of the New Testament, a section of a book known as the Bible, which is viewed as sacred in Christianity" makes it very clear that we are not talking about a man named Jesus who may have lived, but are talking about *the* Jesus of the New Testament, complete with all the baggage that entails, and fully 75% of the world has a problem with that statement. To claim that there is no debate that the Jesus of the New Testament existed is *very* POV, self-centered, and egotistical to a high degree -- not to mention dishonest and insulting.
Furthermore, the term mythology is defined as a collection of stories concerning a peoples origin, major events, or deities. I would say that this *very* clearly is the case, as the body of Christianity is the traditions created by and surrounding the myths and stories surrounding what is the major event of that religion -- which also happens to be a story about their deity. 134.161.227.84 (talk) 21:16, 24 February 2009 (UTC)
If you are going to call the bible, and the stories about Jesus non-fiction, I am going to have to see proof. This ought to be impressive, as no one in the history of the world has been able to show the bible is non-fiction. Just because some believe there is evidence that a man named Jesus lived, there is not enough evidence to claim that the Jesus of the New Testament lived. There is a huge world of difference between the two people. You have done a decent job of showing that the former existed, but, sadly, the article is discussing the latter. Please be a little more intellectually honest and don't pretend that there is no difference.134.161.227.84 (talk) 21:29, 24 February 2009 (UTC)
Please discuss your changes here, American Eagle, and stop trying to force your POV in without discussion. You have repeatedly (more than 3 times today, alone) reverted or changed the same sections of text without discussion on this article. 134.161.227.84 (talk) 21:37, 24 February 2009 (UTC)
I agree, NPOV is important -- that is why I am *trying* to remove your POV and discuss the edits you are hammering home. Could you at least leave the page NPOV before you locked it? 134.161.227.84 (talk) 21:41, 24 February 2009 (UTC)
Oh? By earlier version, you mean the one you reverted to with this edit: http://simple.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Christianity&diff=1383432&oldid=1383427 where you replaced main character with 'center'? or do you mean this one: http://simple.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Christianity&diff=1381163&oldid=1380960 ? the one where *you* removed the word character and replaced it with person? Or do you mean the earliest version, before *you* started your streak of more than 3 revisions on this, where LovesMacs origionally used the term 'character', and this content was first added to the article? At the time I type this, it is still showing the latest version of *your* revisions. 134.161.227.84 (talk) 21:55, 24 February 2009 (UTC)
" Mythology (noun):A body or collection of myths belonging to a people and addressing their origin, history, deities, ancestors, and heroes." Please explain how this article does not fit that definition. 134.161.227.84 (talk) 21:40, 24 February 2009 (UTC)
What kind of silly logic is that? That you can't make a change to an article, unless it already exists on another article? So in otherwords, we need to delete the entire wikipedia database?
You have yet to show that the *dictionary definition* is wrong. This article *clearly* fits the definition, whether you are adult enough to admit that fact or not. Since you cannot give a good reason why we should not leave the NPOV version in place, and cannot justify your actions, you are clearly locking this article in a vandalised version, and are refusing to impartially discuss the changes. I politely request that you unlock the article, and do not use administrative tools on this article, as you clearly cannot remain fair, impartial, and adult regarding this topic. Either edit this page as an editor, or moderate this page as a moderator, not both. 134.161.227.84 (talk) 21:49, 24 February 2009 (UTC)
Please revert it to the content prior to your edit warring. You locked it at the latest of *your* revisions, despite attempts to discuss this.
Your argument is still horribly flawed. You would argue that I cannot add mythology to this article because it is not on the Judaism page -- but in the time it takes to add that edit to that page, you are already removing it from this one, opening *that* page up to the same argument in reverse.
I still say that you are unable to be impartial about this -- you even lied on the talk page about what version you locked the article at! 134.161.227.84 (talk) 22:01, 24 February 2009 (UTC)
(<-) Just as a quick note: I added Cat:Mythology as a parent to Cat:Religion (in other words: it is no longer necessary to add it here); A quick rationale: To those who do not believe in a certain religion, whatever texts/teachings a given religion has will be just "mythology"--Eptalon (talk) 11:10, 25 February 2009 (UTC)
Perhaps this could be an opportunity for informal dispute resolution with a neutral third party? You can log the request at Wikipedia:Solving disputes noticeboard. I'd be willing to help, or you can just log the case and someone else could take the case. fr33kman t - c 22:42, 24 February 2009 (UTC)
Hello all of you, I have rewritten some of the paragraph:
My changes can be edited freely, but please do think before you edit. --Eptalon (talk) 09:45, 25 February 2009 (UTC)
Hello there, I just want to point out the following:
Just wanted to point them out. --Eptalon (talk) 10:10, 25 February 2009 (UTC)
When someone has the time, please copyedit to replace:
the passive voice sounds awful when we actually have an author. --Eptalon (talk) 13:01, 25 February 2009 (UTC)
Some editing needs to be done to ensure that when not directly referencing God (proper name), that "god" is used. For example, the first two sentences should read "Christianity is a monotheistic religion. This means that it is a religion that believes there is only one god." DBishop1984 (talk) 13:14, 21 October 2009 (UTC)
Yeah... sorry, but in this context it would be wrong to use "one God" - think of capitalised God as the name of the Christian god, while other gods, any-old god, has a lowercase. In this context, you're saying they believe in only one god, and one flapjack, etc. VelvetCommuter (talk) 21:02, 16 March 2015 (UTC)
Hello LoveMac, you're right! Josephus lived in the time of Jesus and recorded his death in terms very similar to the Bible, and wrote about his disciples too. I read it in a book in Korean, I'll try and find a good reference to quote from in English... Classical Esther (talk) 06:59, 14 January 2010 (UTC)
3.3 Now there was about this time Jesus, a wise man, if it be lawful to call him a man; for he was a doer of wonderful works, a teacher of such men as receive the truth with pleasure. He drew over to him both many of the Jews and many of the Gentiles. He was [the] Christ. And when Pilate, at the suggestion of the principal men amongst us, had condemned him to the cross, those that loved him at the first did not forsake him; for he appeared to them alive again the third day; as the divine prophets had foretold these and ten thousand other wonderful things concerning him. And the tribe of Christians, so named from him, are not extinct at this day.
Another part that supports Jesus historically is also from the same book, in chapter 20. Scholars say it's about the execution of James. Most scholars say this quotation is real (Louis H. Feldman, "Josephus" Anchor Bible Dictionary, Vol. 3, pp. 990-1).
And now Caesar, upon hearing the death of Festus, sent Albinus into Judea, as procurator. But the king deprived Joseph of the high priesthood, and bestowed the succession to that dignity on the son of Ananus, who was also himself called Ananus. Now the report goes that this eldest Ananus proved a most fortunate man; for he had five sons who had all performed the office of a high priest to God, and who had himself enjoyed that dignity a long time formerly, which had never happened to any other of our high priests. But this younger Ananus, who, as we have told you already, took the high priesthood, was a bold man in his temper, and very insolent; he was also of the sect of the Sadducees, who are very rigid in judging offenders, above all the rest of the Jews, as we have already observed; when, therefore, Ananus was of this disposition, he thought he had now a proper opportunity. Festus was now dead, and Albinus was but upon the road; so he assembled the sanhedrin of judges, and brought before them the brother of Jesus, who was called Christ, whose name was James, and some others; and when he had formed an accusation against them as breakers of the law, he delivered them to be stoned: but as for those who seemed the most equitable of the citizens, and such as were the most uneasy at the breach of the laws, they disliked what was done; they also sent to the king, desiring him to send to Ananus that he should act so no more, for that what he had already done was not to be justified; nay, some of them went also to meet Albinus, as he was upon his journey from Alexandria, and informed him that it was not lawful for Ananus to assemble a sanhedrin without his consent. Whereupon Albinus complied with what they said, and wrote in anger to Ananus, and threatened that he would bring him to punishment for what he had done; on which king Agrippa took the high priesthood from him, when he had ruled but three months, and made Jesus, the son of Damneus, high priest.
As for Pliny the Younger, he did speak of early Christians, but I don't think he said anything about Jesus.
In conclusion, I am quite sure Jesus was a real person, though there may be disagreements whether he was really a Son of God or not. Yours respectfully,
Classical Esther (talk) 07:24, 14 January 2010 (UTC)
The neutrality tag was added 3 1/2 years ago and there has been hardly any discussion on the issue in the last couple of years. Do we still want the tag up? I won't make the call myself as I feel that as a Christian myself I may have a conflict of interest. Kansan (talk) 18:55, 11 September 2012 (UTC)
This is a good article. Does it include the beliefs of all denominations(groups) of Christianity? You can remove this if this question has already been answered. Also, maybe someone can list more Christian groups that are outside "the three big groups of denominations" section. Frogger48 (talk) 23:36, 7 October 2013 (UTC)
Should the article, "Criticism on Christianity" be merged into this article?
Frogger48 (talk) 01:36, 3 November 2013 (UTC)
Isn't the point of this page to give a Christian perspective? This is the page of Christianity, so surely it is the Christians who define it? Obviously we try to keep neutral, but it's hardly as if we ought add a disclaimer, "by the way, Son of God he ain't..." That's not what the page is for.
VelvetCommuter (talk) 21:24, 9 March 2015 (UTC)
Yes, well nothing new, but seriously the structure of this is mad. Jesus Christ ought not follow under worship, nor come so low down. I would suggest having a section for beliefs, and going through the Nicene Creed as a simple guideline. Then Worship, then something on the History of Christianity. If there are no objections I might see what I can do over the next few weeks... Thanks! VelvetCommuter (talk) 21:22, 9 March 2015 (UTC)
The "Criticism of Christianity" section of this article seems very biased (ex. " . . . or we could use IVF, but Christians hate that too"), uses informal language (ex. "Many Christian priests rape little boys"), and the section doesn't even cite a source. The entire section is written in a way that doesn't seem to reflect the neutral expectations of Wikipedia and feels out of place. I almost feel that the user who wrote the section was either trolling or deliberately trying to mislead readers. Can we please look into it and make the necessary changes? Thanks.
Wiki nol ege █[:]====▶• 20:55, 29 April 2015 (UTC)
Hi,
The information presented in the article on the Trinity is not an accurate representation of Christian belief. Here is my proposed revision:
Christians believe in the Trinity, which means that there are three distinct persons of the Godhead. The three persons are God the Father, God the Son and God the Holy Spirit. God created the world. God the Son is Jesus, because they believe Him to be the Son of God. They believe that He was the human son of the Virgin Mary and the divine Son of God. They believe He suffered and died to free humans from their sin[1], and was later raised from the dead to defeat death. He then went up into heaven, and is seated at the Right Hand of God the Father. Christians believe that Jesus will come back to Earth and judge everybody, both alive and dead, giving everlasting life to all Christians. The Holy Spirit is the spirit of God on the Earth that spoke through prophets.
Thank you.
Also, a user named Auntof6 removed my proposed revision claiming that it didn't belong on the talk page. It is quite obvious it does, as it is a proposed revision to the article.— This unsigned comment was added by Acts319Sam (talk • changes) on 05:54, 4 July 2015 UTC).
Should adherents be changed to people or something similar? Texan777 (talk) 23:03, 24 April 2021 (UTC)
In the "disagreements" section, it talks about the "first split" and the "third split" but never mentions a second split. 24.0.85.71 (talk) 06:20, 12 July 2023 (UTC)
The fourth paragraph of the lead (in the current version) is written more like a confession of faith than an encyclopedia, so it should probably be rephrased. Batrachoseps (talk) 16:53, 14 October 2024 (UTC)
Question: Why restate in the last sentence of the opening paragraphs what was stated in the first? Change the number in the first sentence to conform to that in the last? ("Opening paragraphs" refers to all those above the first heading, "Jesus Christ".) Jorjulio (talk) 12:11, 25 November 2024 (UTC)
Because as a Christian we are don't understand a Bible sometime and this book where's come from 41.115.15.53 (talk) 20:39, 11 July 2025 (UTC)
Everytime I attempt to add a source and complete the edit it just direct my sources to the previous source with that number ([1] as the previous [1]). Is this because the last part of the page is formatted differently, Is this just a problem on my end? KCanadianJ316 (talk) 23:14, 29 March 2026 (UTC)
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