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User talk:Hanyangprofessor2
Deadline 3: Yujin Jang
Dear Professor I have completed deadline 3 of "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis" from the professor.
This is my draft Hongseong at Wikivoyage for main project individually.
Please check, Thanks.Yujin0203 (talk) 07:00, 4 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241004070000","author":"Yujin0203","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Yujin0203-20241004070000-Deadline_3:_Yujin_Jang","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241006065900-Yujin0203-20241004070000"]}}-->
- @Yujin0203 Good progress Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 06:59, 6 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241006065900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241006065900-Yujin0203-20241004070000","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear professor, I am taking Understanding Small Data and Big Data through Wikis. This is my understanding of small data and big data assignment. Please check it. Thank you！ Cuicuizan (talk) 16:16, 23 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241123161600","author":"Cuicuizan","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Cuicuizan-20241123161600-Deadline_5-CUI_ZAN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241124024600-Cuicuizan-20241123161600"]}}-->
- @Cuicuizan Good job. Please add a listing with GPS address for the main local bus station (in get in) so that it appears on the map.
- In the 'do' section please add information on local festivals. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 02:46, 24 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241124024600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241124024600-Cuicuizan-20241123161600","replies":["c-Cuicuizan-20241202053900-Hanyangprofessor2-20241124024600"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
- I have already added the festivals and bus stations（get in）. Could you please check them again? Thank you!
- 1 Cuicuizan (talk) 05:39, 2 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241202053900","author":"Cuicuizan","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Cuicuizan-20241202053900-Hanyangprofessor2-20241124024600","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241203031300-Cuicuizan-20241202053900"]}}-->
- @Cuicuizan I see. Please check that section again - why is "Zibo Railway Station " discussed under bus section? It should be under railway (train). And check if the link works, this one seems to be not for the train station but for some commercial ticket service at tickets.airportsupersaver.com which also seems to not work.
- Please add URL (links to websites) for festivals and entities like museums and others that usually have their own web pages. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 03:13, 3 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241203031300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241203031300-Cuicuizan-20241202053900","replies":["c-Cuicuizan-20241203174900-Hanyangprofessor2-20241203031300"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
- I have revised the section on major bus stations, specifically Zibo Railway Station, based on your request. Regarding this part, the bus station is located near the railway station, which is why it is named Zibo Railway Station. Typically, people traveling by train will first take a bus to this bus station.
- Additionally, I have added the URL for the museum, the URL for the festival, and the Wikidata URL. Please review these changes at your convenience. Thank you for your time and assistance! Cuicuizan (talk) 17:49, 3 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241203174900","author":"Cuicuizan","type":"comment","level":5,"id":"c-Cuicuizan-20241203174900-Hanyangprofessor2-20241203031300","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241206080900-Cuicuizan-20241203174900","c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241206081000-Cuicuizan-20241203174900"]}}-->
- @Cuicuizan Very good progress Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 08:09, 6 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241206080900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":6,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241206080900-Cuicuizan-20241203174900","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
- For the last step, please ask for review following the instructions from https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/User:Hanyangprofessor2#Final_review and then follow recommendations from the review, if any, Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 08:10, 6 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241206081000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":6,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241206081000-Cuicuizan-20241203174900","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241219025400-Hanyangprofessor2-20241206081000"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
- @Cuicuizan Just noting that this was not done correctly, at Wikivoyage:Requests for comment – Travel guide at Wikivoyage you linked your user talk page instead of your article's talk page (you posted your request in the wrong page - your userpage, it should be on the article's talk page). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 02:54, 19 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241219025400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":7,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241219025400-Hanyangprofessor2-20241206081000","replies":["c-Cuicuizan-20241219143300-Hanyangprofessor2-20241219025400"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
- Thank you for your reply! I have updated the link to point to the discussion page of the article.
- 1 Cuicuizan (talk) 14:33, 19 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241219143300","author":"Cuicuizan","type":"comment","level":8,"id":"c-Cuicuizan-20241219143300-Hanyangprofessor2-20241219025400","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241220044900-Cuicuizan-20241219143300"]}}-->
- @Cuicuizan Good. Is Zibo Railway Station (淄博火车站) the same as the Zibo Train Station (淄博火车站) ? If not, can you explain what is the difference in the article? People may be confused Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 04:49, 20 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241220044900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":9,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241220044900-Cuicuizan-20241219143300","replies":["c-Cuicuizan-20241220101400-Hanyangprofessor2-20241220044900"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
- Thank you for your reply! I have added an explanation in the article regarding the two different Zibo Railway Stations. Please take a look! Thank you! Cuicuizan (talk) 10:14, 20 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241220101400","author":"Cuicuizan","type":"comment","level":10,"id":"c-Cuicuizan-20241220101400-Hanyangprofessor2-20241220044900","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221044000-Cuicuizan-20241220101400"]}}-->
- @Cuicuizan Good,. Please double check your listings' links to Wikipedia and Wikidata. Zibo Railway Station has a broken link to Wikipedia. Zibo North Railway Station links to correct Wikidata item, but Zibo Train Station links to a listing of stations (a category) - please correct it.
- See if you can add wikidata links to your other listings (Wikipedia article can only be linked if ENGLISH Wikipedia article exists). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 04:40, 21 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241221044000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":11,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221044000-Cuicuizan-20241220101400","replies":["c-Cuicuizan-20241221181200-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221044000"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
- Thank you for your reply! I have updated the listing link for Zibo Railway Station to point to the correct Wikipedia and Wikidata pages. Additionally, based on further research, it has been agreed to standardize the name as "Zibo Railway Station." Regarding the other listings, most of them only have Chinese Wikipedia pages available, so it is not possible to add links to English Wikipedia or Wikidata. Is there anything else that needs to be revised? Thank you for reviewing this! Cuicuizan (talk) 18:12, 21 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241221181200","author":"Cuicuizan","type":"comment","level":12,"id":"c-Cuicuizan-20241221181200-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221044000","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241222043500-Cuicuizan-20241221181200"]}}-->
- @Cuicuizan If there is a Chinese Wikipedia page available, it should have a corresponding Wikidata element you can link. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 04:35, 22 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241222043500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":13,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241222043500-Cuicuizan-20241221181200","replies":["c-Cuicuizan-20241222102500-Hanyangprofessor2-20241222043500"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
- Thank you for your reply. I understand what needs to be done! I have added links (Wikidata and Wikipedia) for them and, based on the administrator's suggestions, included the hotel information in the sleep section of the listings. zibo Cuicuizan (talk) 10:25, 22 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241222102500","author":"Cuicuizan","type":"comment","level":14,"id":"c-Cuicuizan-20241222102500-Hanyangprofessor2-20241222043500","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223020200-Cuicuizan-20241222102500"]}}-->
- @Cuicuizan Very good. I removed the links from the bus station (they were incorrect). For the Sheraton Zibo Hotel we should link to the Wikidata page on that particular hotel, not company, or remove the link. Very good job overall, your score for that class is A/A+ Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 02:02, 23 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241223020200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":15,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223020200-Cuicuizan-20241222102500","replies":["c-Cuicuizan-20241223040400-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223020200"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
- Thank you for your reply! I understand what needs to be done. As I couldn’t find specific links for the hotel, I have removed the link for Sheraton Hotel. Thank you for your review！ Cuicuizan (talk) 04:04, 23 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241223040400","author":"Cuicuizan","type":"comment","level":16,"id":"c-Cuicuizan-20241223040400-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223020200","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241226005600-Cuicuizan-20241223040400"]}}-->
- @Cuicuizan That's fine. Good job Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 00:56, 26 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241226005600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":17,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241226005600-Cuicuizan-20241223040400","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor,
I am currently taking the courses "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis" and "Media Trends and Globalization."
This is the additional Wikipedia task I completed personally Lin Chih-chu Chen qixue Yiwei Guangzhou uprisingPlease check, thank you. Limengchen2777 (talk) 04:14, 3 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241203041400","author":"Limengchen2777","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Limengchen2777-20241203041400-Deadline_7_LI_MENGCHEN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241206083600-Limengchen2777-20241203041400"]}}-->
- @Limengchen2777 Good progress. Feedback provided in office hours, let me know if you have more questions Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 08:36, 6 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241206083600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241206083600-Limengchen2777-20241203041400","replies":["c-Limengchen2777-20241209062600-Hanyangprofessor2-20241206083600","c-Limengchen2777-20241210104400-Hanyangprofessor2-20241206083600"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
- Hello, Professor! This is the new bonus material I have created.Lü Thiat-chiuPlease review it. Thank you! Limengchen2777 (talk) 06:26, 9 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241209062600","author":"Limengchen2777","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Limengchen2777-20241209062600-Hanyangprofessor2-20241206083600","replies":[]}}-->
- Hello, Professor! This is the new bonus material I have created.Zhang Boju Hou Zhenya Huang HuaqingPlease review it. Thank you! Limengchen2777 (talk) 10:44, 10 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241210104400","author":"Limengchen2777","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Limengchen2777-20241210104400-Hanyangprofessor2-20241206083600","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241211061400-Limengchen2777-20241210104400"]}}-->
- @Limengchen2777 Very good, those will be awarded many extra points. I noticed a small error in one of your articles and explained it on your talk page. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 06:14, 11 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241211061400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241211061400-Limengchen2777-20241210104400","replies":["c-Limengchen2777-20241221230800-Hanyangprofessor2-20241211061400"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
- Hello professor, I have modified my question. Limengchen2777 (talk) 23:08, 21 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241221230800","author":"Limengchen2777","type":"comment","level":5,"id":"c-Limengchen2777-20241221230800-Hanyangprofessor2-20241211061400","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241222043600-Limengchen2777-20241221230800"]}}-->
- What question? Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 04:36, 22 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241222043600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":6,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241222043600-Limengchen2777-20241221230800","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor:
We are@Linlin406 taking Media Trends and Globalization. I've completed the second article. Here is the link Please check, thank you. Pineappleq (talk) 16:31, 8 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241208163100","author":"Pineappleq","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Pineappleq-20241208163100-Deadline_6_-_LIN_AIJIA_AND_QU_HONGYU","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241209011700-Pineappleq-20241208163100"]}}-->
- @Pineappleq
- Good progress.
- You can publish your article by moving the draft to the mainspace (see zh:Help:页面重命名 on how to do this); then we will see what the Chinese reviewers will say.
- Remember: if a term exists in English Wikipedia and has an article there, but not on Chinese Wikipedia, please use this tool zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi to link it. If you need help, I can demonstrate how to use it
- Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 01:17, 9 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241209011700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241209011700-Pineappleq-20241208163100","replies":["c-Linlin406-20241219212800-Hanyangprofessor2-20241209011700"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
- 网址：https://w.wiki/CLuVhello professor.this is my extra credit blog. Linlin406 (talk) 21:28, 19 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241219212800","author":"Linlin406","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Linlin406-20241219212800-Hanyangprofessor2-20241209011700","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221045000-Linlin406-20241219212800"]}}-->
- @Linlin406 The link is broken; in either case, Blog content should be posted on our blog, not on wiki Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 04:50, 21 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241221045000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221045000-Linlin406-20241219212800","replies":["c-175.196.155.235-20241224095300-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221045000"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
- Hello professor, this is my link to Chinese Wikipedia. Please check it out. Thank you for your hard work 175.196.155.235 (talk) 09:53, 24 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241224095300","author":"175.196.155.235","type":"comment","level":5,"id":"c-175.196.155.235-20241224095300-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221045000","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241224161000-175.196.155.235-20241224095300"]}}-->
- Good; I believe I replied by email. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 16:10, 24 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241224161000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":6,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241224161000-175.196.155.235-20241224095300","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor,
I am currently taking the courses "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis" and "Media Trends and Globalization."
This is the additional Wikipedia task I completed personally Lin Aqin , Qiu Jinlian ,Zhou Hongchou .Please check, thank you! Honghaotian (talk) 08:12, 11 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241211081200","author":"Honghaotian","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Honghaotian-20241211081200-Deadline7:HONG_HAOTIAN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241213030300-Honghaotian-20241211081200"]}}-->
- @Honghaotian Very nice. The main thing to improve in your submissions are links: If a term exists in Chinese Wikipedia and has an article there, but not on English Wikipedia, please use Template:Interlanguage link to link it. If you need help with this, stop by my office and I'll demonstrate. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 03:03, 13 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241213030300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241213030300-Honghaotian-20241211081200","replies":["c-Honghaotian-20241217030800-Hanyangprofessor2-20241213030300","c-Honghaotian-20241218041800-Hanyangprofessor2-20241213030300"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
- Dear Professor, I have revised the question you asked. Honghaotian (talk) 03:08, 17 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241217030800","author":"Honghaotian","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Honghaotian-20241217030800-Hanyangprofessor2-20241213030300","replies":[]}}-->
- Hello, Professor! This is the new bonus material I have created. Weng Kun De ，Chen Xue jun，Chen Daming . Please review it. Thank you! Honghaotian (talk) 04:18, 18 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241218041800","author":"Honghaotian","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Honghaotian-20241218041800-Hanyangprofessor2-20241213030300","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241218070700-Honghaotian-20241218041800"]}}-->
- @Honghaotian Very good, but for Chen Daming you should add more sources. A mention in a single obituary is not enough to estabilish Wikipedia:Notability Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 07:07, 18 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241218070700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241218070700-Honghaotian-20241218041800","replies":["c-Honghaotian-20241220100700-Hanyangprofessor2-20241218070700"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
- I have already added more sources. Please check! Honghaotian (talk) 10:07, 20 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241220100700","author":"Honghaotian","type":"comment","level":5,"id":"c-Honghaotian-20241220100700-Hanyangprofessor2-20241218070700","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221044100-Honghaotian-20241220100700"]}}-->
- @Honghaotian Wikipedia:BAIDU , as explained in the link here, is not considered a good source (it steals a lot of content from Wikipedia without attribution and has very low standards for guarding against fake information). Please look for better, more reliable sources (newspapers, books, journals). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 04:41, 21 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241221044100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":6,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221044100-Honghaotian-20241220100700","replies":["c-Honghaotian-20241221134500-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221044100"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
- I've revised the link, please check! Honghaotian (talk) 13:45, 21 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241221134500","author":"Honghaotian","type":"comment","level":7,"id":"c-Honghaotian-20241221134500-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221044100","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221164500-Honghaotian-20241221134500"]}}-->
- @Honghaotian Very good. Your grade for the Globalization class is A+; for the Big and Small data I recommend making some extra credit work if you want A+ for that class as well (best: extra edits to Wikivoyage). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 16:45, 21 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241221164500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":8,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221164500-Honghaotian-20241221134500","replies":["c-Limengchen2777-20241221204300-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221164500"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
- Please let us know what we need to add so that we can get a Limengchen2777 (talk) 20:43, 21 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241221204300","author":"Limengchen2777","type":"comment","level":9,"id":"c-Limengchen2777-20241221204300-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221164500","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241222043800-Limengchen2777-20241221204300"]}}-->
- @Limengchen2777 I recommended choosing an article about a different city and improving it with listings and some other content for extra credit. Please try to finish within 24h Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 04:38, 22 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241222043800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":10,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241222043800-Limengchen2777-20241221204300","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor,
We are taking 'Understanding Small and Big Data' class.
We completed the final draft reflecting the feedback you gave us. Here is the link.
Thank you and have a nice day :) Ysrfield (talk) 06:18, 16 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241216061800","author":"Ysrfield","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Ysrfield-20241216061800-Deadline_7:_Sarang_Yoon_&_Jisu_Lee","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241217082200-Ysrfield-20241216061800"]}}-->
- @Ysrfield @Xisuux Please double check that you have fixed all the issues raised on talk; I've received a message from a Wikivoyage reviewer (@Ground Zero) that you have not done so on time. Please make sure not to readd any errors.
- Things to fix in your article (which is overall looking good):
- please add a short (2-4 sentences) subsection on history to understand section
- your get in and get around section should clearly specify which bus stations are intercity and which are local (local bus stations do not need to be listed). Are there any train or subway stops in the city? They should be listed. See how this is done in Ansan – Travel guide at Wikivoyage
- Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 08:22, 17 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241217082200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241217082200-Ysrfield-20241216061800","replies":["c-Xisuux-20241222162400-Hanyangprofessor2-20241217082200"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
- Dear Professor,
- We are taking the 'Understanding Small and Big Data' class.
- We have completed the revisions based on your feedback and the DISCUSSION feedback.
- 1. Add information about subway stations in Gwangju, Gyeonggi-do.
- 2. Include descriptions of intercity bus terminals.
- 3. Remove information about local bus stops.
- 4. Add explanations about historical background.
- Thank you. We would appreciate it if you could review the revised content!
- Xisuux (talk) 16:24, 22 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241222162400","author":"Xisuux","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Xisuux-20241222162400-Hanyangprofessor2-20241217082200","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223034300-Xisuux-20241222162400"]}}-->
- @Xisuux Very good. Your grade for the Data class is A/A+. For the Globalization class I'd recommend som extra credit assignment to make it similar. Please note we only have about ~24h for submitting extra credit work; I cannot guarantee that I'll have time to grade on or after XMAS. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 03:43, 23 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241223034300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223034300-Xisuux-20241222162400","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor, I am taking 'Understanding Small and Big Data' class
I have added more city content on Jieyang's Wikivoyage, please check it out, thank you. Minazhuang777 (talk) 08:13, 16 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241216081300","author":"Minazhuang777","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Minazhuang777-20241216081300-Deadline6:_Zhuang_Minna","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241217083600-Minazhuang777-20241216081300"]}}-->
- @Minazhuang777 Ok. Things to fix:
- Please expand the first sentence by adding some more content (2-3 sentences) describing most interesting aspects of this location - tell people why they would want to visit this place, what makes it special.
- please expand 'understand' section. It should have a paragraph on history and another one on the climate, with a graph. See for example Ansan – Travel guide at Wikivoyage or Nonsan – Travel guide at Wikivoyage
- Please double check GPS coordinates for Kuitan station and Shuangfeng Temple. They seem very far from the city
- In your listings please fix the links to Wikipedia articles by removing the excessive URL code so that they work
- add listings for festivals to the do sections, if there are any in the area
- Please recenter/zoom out the map so it shows the pings for most attractions
- Then please ask for review and follow the recommendations from it (see https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/User:Hanyangprofessor2#Final_review). Then check for feedback in the next few days and carry out any fixes that are asked for
- Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 08:36, 17 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241217083600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241217083600-Minazhuang777-20241216081300","replies":["c-Minazhuang777-20241219140200-Hanyangprofessor2-20241217083600"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
- I have made some changes to Jieyang according to your request. Please check. Thank you. Minazhuang777 (talk) 14:02, 19 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241219140200","author":"Minazhuang777","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Minazhuang777-20241219140200-Hanyangprofessor2-20241217083600","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241220045800-Minazhuang777-20241219140200"]}}-->
- @Minazhuang777 Good, but I still do not see any information on the local festivals? And your request for reviews is not finished - you need to announce it at https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/Wikivoyage:Requests_for_comment#Articles_and_travel_content Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 04:58, 20 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241220045800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241220045800-Minazhuang777-20241219140200","replies":["c-Minazhuang777-20241222091300-Hanyangprofessor2-20241220045800"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
- Hello, I have made some changes according to your request, please check, thank you Minazhuang777 (talk) 09:13, 22 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241222091300","author":"Minazhuang777","type":"comment","level":5,"id":"c-Minazhuang777-20241222091300-Hanyangprofessor2-20241220045800","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241222094000-Minazhuang777-20241222091300"]}}-->
- @Minazhuang777 Good, I have updated your grade. I recommend more extra credit editing within the next 24h to improve your grade for that class to B. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 09:40, 22 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241222094000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":6,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241222094000-Minazhuang777-20241222091300","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor,
I am currently taking the courses "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis" and "Media Trends and Globalization."
I have completed our final project. This is the article I translated from Chinese to English, and it has already been published.Chiang Zhongzheng's Diary
This is the city I chose for Wikivoyage, and everything has been completed. Please review it.[1]
Thank you, Professor. Zzzxxxrrr (talk) 10:00, 17 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241217100000","author":"Zzzxxxrrr","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Zzzxxxrrr-20241217100000-Deadline\uff1aZHANG_XIAORUI","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241218032100-Zzzxxxrrr-20241217100000"]}}-->
- @Zzzxxxrrr Well done with your translation. For Mohe, the following fixes are needed:
- add a short 1-2 paragraphs subsection on 'history' to the 'understanding' section
- for 'Get in', add information (listing) for the local intercity bus station if one exists in the city
- can you add a listing for the Beiji Village, with the GPS coordinates to Mohe?
- Then please ask for review and follow the recommendations from it (see https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/User:Hanyangprofessor2#Final_review). Then check for feedback in the next few days and carry out any fixes that are asked for
- Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 03:21, 18 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241218032100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241218032100-Zzzxxxrrr-20241217100000","replies":["c-Zzzxxxrrr-20241223072900-Hanyangprofessor2-20241218032100"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
- Dear Professor, I have made revisions to my article on Mohe based on the questions you raised, and I have also requested a review of the article. Please check it, thank you. Zzzxxxrrr (talk) 07:29, 23 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241223072900","author":"Zzzxxxrrr","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Zzzxxxrrr-20241223072900-Hanyangprofessor2-20241218032100","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223112200-Zzzxxxrrr-20241223072900"]}}-->
- @Zzzxxxrrr To complete your requested for a review, please link it from here with a comment: "please review my article" or similar. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 11:22, 23 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241223112200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223112200-Zzzxxxrrr-20241223072900","replies":["c-Zzzxxxrrr-20241223152000-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223112200"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
- Dear Professor, . My article translation (Chinese to English) has been completed and has been published, and you said there were no other errors. But I was wondering because I saw that the final grade was F, I also completed all the tasks and even did the extra credit, so I'm confused about the grade.so I wanted to ask.This is my article.Thanks professor Zzzxxxrrr (talk) 15:20, 23 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241223152000","author":"Zzzxxxrrr","type":"comment","level":5,"id":"c-Zzzxxxrrr-20241223152000-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223112200","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241224161300-Zzzxxxrrr-20241223152000"]}}-->
- @Zzzxxxrrr Thank you for asking; I confirmed there was an error and your score was not displayed. I fixed it just now Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 16:13, 24 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241224161300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":6,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241224161300-Zzzxxxrrr-20241223152000","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear, Professor,
This is the final version of our extended English article, please check it.
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Fifi623623/sandbox
주영영2022009598
장문비2022096399 Fifi623623 (talk) 08:10, 18 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241218081000","author":"Fifi623623","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Fifi623623-20241218081000-wiki:ZHANG_WENFEI\u3001ZHU_YINGYING","replies":["c-Fifi623623-20241218081100-Fifi623623-20241218081000"]}}-->
- Niushoushan Fifi623623 (talk) 08:11, 18 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241218081100","author":"Fifi623623","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Fifi623623-20241218081100-Fifi623623-20241218081000","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241219044600-Fifi623623-20241218081100"]}}-->
- @Fifi623623 Good. But the links to Chinese Wikipedia need to be fixed. If a topic exists in Chinese but not English, please link it using this tool: Template:Interlanguage link. If you don't know how to use this, come to my office and I'll demonstrate.
- For example, Bao'en Temple should be linked to that temple's article in English if it exists, and if Chinese if not (if it exists in Chinese).
- If the source is in Chinese (ex. 景区概况), please use both the Chinese and English titles. Use Chinese title in the 'title' field, and English in the 'translated title' field. If you need help, stop by my office and I'll demonstrate how to do so. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 04:46, 19 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241219044600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241219044600-Fifi623623-20241218081100","replies":["c-Fifi623623-20241219064300-Hanyangprofessor2-20241219044600"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
- I corrected it as I understood it, and I don't know if it's correct.
- User:Fifi623623/sandbox Fifi623623 (talk) 06:43, 19 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241219064300","author":"Fifi623623","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Fifi623623-20241219064300-Hanyangprofessor2-20241219044600","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241220050500-Fifi623623-20241219064300"]}}-->
- @Fifi623623 Please read them manuals again. There are still some wrong links like " Xuanyang Gate (now Zhonghua Gatezh：中华门)," or "uddha’s parietal bone reliczh：舍利"
- There are still some places in the article that need references (footnotes). I marked them with [citation needed].
- Please fix the issue I explained above ("If the source is in Chinese..."), it has not been fixed yet, Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 05:05, 20 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241220050500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":5,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241220050500-Fifi623623-20241219064300","replies":["c-Fifi623623-20241220131200-Hanyangprofessor2-20241220050500","c-Fifi623623-20241220134500-Hanyangprofessor2-20241220050500"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
- I made a correction, please check it.
- User:Fifi623623/sandbox#cite note-:4-3 Fifi623623 (talk) 13:12, 20 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241220131200","author":"Fifi623623","type":"comment","level":6,"id":"c-Fifi623623-20241220131200-Hanyangprofessor2-20241220050500","replies":[]}}-->
- I made a correction, please check it.
- User:Fifi623623/sandbox#cite note-:4-3 Fifi623623 (talk) 13:45, 20 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241220134500","author":"Fifi623623","type":"comment","level":6,"id":"c-Fifi623623-20241220134500-Hanyangprofessor2-20241220050500","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221044600-Fifi623623-20241220134500"]}}-->
- @Fifi623623 Ok, now please fix this and other issues in Niushoushan (you don't have to work in your sandbox). Please note I and others made some fixes to that article already. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 04:46, 21 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241221044600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":7,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221044600-Fifi623623-20241220134500","replies":["c-Fifi623623-20241221155400-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221044600"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
- Niushoushan Fifi623623 (talk) 15:54, 21 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241221155400","author":"Fifi623623","type":"comment","level":8,"id":"c-Fifi623623-20241221155400-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221044600","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221164700-Fifi623623-20241221155400","c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221164900-Fifi623623-20241221155400"]}}-->
- @Fifi623623 Please review your changes. You have fixed some stuff but broke other stuff fixed by others, such as native name; and you removed some references (footnotes) resulting in some paragraphs being unreferenced. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 16:47, 21 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241221164700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":9,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221164700-Fifi623623-20241221155400","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
- Please restore all good fixes that you removed in your recen edit (native name, links like that to Ashoka Pagoda, and references) Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 16:49, 21 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241221164900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":9,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221164900-Fifi623623-20241221155400","replies":["c-Fifi623623-20241222054100-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221164900"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
- Niushoushan
- I have revised it again, please check it. Fifi623623 (talk) 05:41, 22 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241222054100","author":"Fifi623623","type":"comment","level":10,"id":"c-Fifi623623-20241222054100-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221164900","replies":[]}}-->
Dear Professor
I'm taking 'Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis' class.
Here is my final draft for the Wikivoyage article on Pyeongtaek. I have incorporated all the feedback you provided in Deadlines 5 and 6.
Please let me know which parts should be further revised or improved to achieve an A+ grade.
Thank you for your checking. Dbinni (talk) 10:27, 18 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241218102700","author":"Dbinni","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Dbinni-20241218102700-Deadline_7:_Dabin_Kim","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241219045500-Dbinni-20241218102700"]}}-->
- @Dbinni Good.
- The following fixes are still needed:
- add a short 1-2 paragraphs subsection on 'history' to the 'understanding' section
- Pyeongtaek Bus Terminal should have a proper listing with GPS coordinates
- see section should have at least 10 entries. Can you find some other landmarks in the area to recommend to tourists? Some old historical buildings, or natural landmarks? How about the two museums I see mentioned at THE BEST Pyeongtaek Specialty Museums (2024) - Tripadvisor ?
- Have you seen the feedback you got at Talk:Pyeongtaek – Travel guide at Wikivoyage ? If so, please reply there to the editor who reviewed, pinging them and thanking them for their review, and tell them all has been fixed so they can double check.
- Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 04:55, 19 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241219045500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241219045500-Dbinni-20241218102700","replies":["c-Dbinni-20241222092300-Hanyangprofessor2-20241219045500"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
- Dear Professor,
- As per your suggestions, I have made the necessary adjustments. Here’s a summary of the changes:
- - Added a 1-2 paragraph subsection on the history of Pyeongtaek in the "Understand" section.
- - Included proper GPS coordinates for Pyeongtaek Bus Terminal.
- - Expanded the "See"(and other) section with additional recommendations, including landmarks, historical buildings, and natural spots. I’ve also added two museums mentioned on The Best Pyeongtaek Specialty Museums (2024) on TripAdvisor.
- - Responded to the feedback on Talk:Pyeongtaek – Travel guide at Wikivoyage, thanking the reviewer and informing them that all suggested changes have been made.
- Please feel free to double-check the article. Let me know if further revisions are needed to achieve an A+ grade..
- Thank you for your continued support! Dbinni (talk) 09:23, 22 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241222092300","author":"Dbinni","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Dbinni-20241222092300-Hanyangprofessor2-20241219045500","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241222094000-Dbinni-20241222092300"]}}-->
- @Dbinni Good; your grade should be A or A+ for both classes. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 09:40, 22 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241222094000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241222094000-Dbinni-20241222092300","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
__DTSUBSCRIBEBUTTONDESKTOP__{"headingLevel":2,"name":"h-Dbinni-20241218104300","type":"heading","level":0,"id":"h-Deadline_8,_Additional_Edit:_Dabin_Kim,_Eunyeong_Kang-Deadline_3:_Yujin_Jang-20241218104300","replies":["c-Dbinni-20241218104300-Deadline_8,_Additional_Edit:_Dabin_Kim,_Eunyeong_Kang"],"text":"Deadline 8, Additional Edit: Dabin Kim, Eunyeong Kang","linkableTitle":"Deadline 8, Additional Edit: Dabin Kim, Eunyeong Kang"}--> Deadline 8, Additional Edit: Dabin Kim, Eunyeong Kang__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"headingLevel":2,"name":"h-Dbinni-20241218104300","type":"heading","level":0,"id":"h-Deadline_8,_Additional_Edit:_Dabin_Kim,_Eunyeong_Kang-Deadline_3:_Yujin_Jang-20241218104300","replies":["c-Dbinni-20241218104300-Deadline_8,_Additional_Edit:_Dabin_Kim,_Eunyeong_Kang"]}}--> Dear Professor,
We're taking the "Media Trends and Globalization" course.
Here are the final document links for our main project:
"Abortion in Japan" (English to Korean)
"1st Korean Music Awards" (Korean to English)
Additionally, we have completed the following translation tasks for extra credit:
"We Need to Talk About Kevin" (Eunyeong Kang, English to Korean)
"Press Room and Press Corps of the South Korean Government" (Dabin Kim, Korean to English).
Please review the documents. Thank you! Dbinni (talk) 10:43, 18 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241218104300","author":"Dbinni","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Dbinni-20241218104300-Deadline_8,_Additional_Edit:_Dabin_Kim,_Eunyeong_Kang","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241219045800-Dbinni-20241218104300"]}}-->
- @Dbinni Very good. See the issues pointed out by reviewers at the top of your published press article. Can you fix any? Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 04:58, 19 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241219045800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241219045800-Dbinni-20241218104300","replies":["c-Dbinni-20241222092700-Hanyangprofessor2-20241219045800"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
- Dear Professor,
- Thank you for your helpful suggestions. I attempted to fix the issues pointed out by reviewers at the top of my published press article, but I found it difficult to do on my own and was unable to make the revisions.
- Since this is an edit for additional credit rather than the main project, I was wondering if not being able to make these changes will have any impact on my score.
- I appreciate your understanding and would be grateful for your guidance.
- Best regards,
- Dabin Kim Dbinni (talk) 09:27, 22 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241222092700","author":"Dbinni","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Dbinni-20241222092700-Hanyangprofessor2-20241219045800","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241222094100-Dbinni-20241222092700"]}}-->
- @Dbinni Your score is good enough for A in our classes, but I recommend fixing the issues above to improve your public digital portfolio for your own future. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 09:41, 22 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241222094100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241222094100-Dbinni-20241222092700","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello, Professor. I am currently taking the courses "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis" and "Media Trends and Globalization."
These are all the additional blogs I have completed. Please review
https://www.blogger.com/u/1/blog/post/edit/4180205057418254224/6929189803762457033
https://www.blogger.com/u/1/blog/post/edit/4180205057418254224/8100248827845527874
https://www.blogger.com/u/1/blog/post/edit/4180205057418254224/4707760513935566455
https://www.blogger.com/u/1/blog/post/edit/4180205057418254224/4707760513935566455
and wikipedia
https://zh.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E4%BB%B0%E8%9D%BD%E7%A7%91
User:WANGYIZHE1124/sandbox2#Variety arts
User:WANGYIZHE1124/sandbox1
WANGYIZHE1124 (talk) 08:01, 19 December 2024 (UTC)
https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:WANGYIZHE1124/sandbox3
https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:WANGYIZHE1124/sandbox4#Lake_Seema
https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:WANGYIZHE1124/sandbox5
https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:WANGYIZHE1124/sandbox6
https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:WANGYIZHE1124/sandbox7
https://zh.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E4%BA%9A%E5%8E%86%E5%B1%B1%E5%A4%A7%C2%B7%E9%BA%A6%E5%8D%A1%E6%B4%9B%E5%85%8B#%E5%8F%82%E8%80%83
https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:WANGYIZHE1124/sandbox8#References — Preceding unsigned comment added by WANGYIZHE1124 (talk • contribs) 09:45, 19 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241219080100","author":"WANGYIZHE1124","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-WANGYIZHE1124-20241219080100-Extra_credit_blog_and_Wikipedia_(WANGYIZHE\uff09","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221045400-WANGYIZHE1124-20241219080100"]}}-->
- @WANGYIZHE1124 Regarding your extra credit wiki drafts, please remember that ONLY REFERENCED CONTENT is accepted.
- You can publish your work IF it is referenced. Please make sure to link it to the translated original article clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button.
- Content that is unreferenced or only in sandbox will not be graded. Content that is deleted because the translation quality is too low will also not be accepted.
- Good luck Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 04:54, 21 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241221045400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221045400-WANGYIZHE1124-20241219080100","replies":["c-WANGYIZHE1124-20241223074800-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221045400","c-WANGYIZHE1124-20241223090400-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221045400","c-WANGYIZHE1124-20241223094200-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221045400"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
- Understanding Small and Big Data
- Extra credit
- https://en.m.wikivoyage.org/wiki/Xingyi
- https://en.m.wikivoyage.org/wiki/Langzhong
- https://en.m.wikivoyage.org/wiki/Hailar
- Please check ， Do I need to do it again if I want to get an A grade? WANGYIZHE1124 (talk) 07:48, 23 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241223074800","author":"WANGYIZHE1124","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-WANGYIZHE1124-20241223074800-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221045400","replies":[]}}-->
- and Please tell me my grades for another class. WANGYIZHE1124 (talk) 09:04, 23 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241223090400","author":"WANGYIZHE1124","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-WANGYIZHE1124-20241223090400-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221045400","replies":[]}}-->
- "Media Trends and Globalization."Extra credit
- https://zh.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E4%BB%B0%E8%9D%BD%E7%A7%91
- HuangZhou
- https://zh.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E4%BA%9A%E5%8E%86%E5%B1%B1%E5%A4%A7%C2%B7%E9%BA%A6%E5%8D%A1%E6%B4%9B%E5%85%8B#%E5%8F%82%E8%80%83
- Liuzhenlai
- Zou Qiguo
- Yangqi acupoint WANGYIZHE1124 (talk) 09:42, 23 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241223094200","author":"WANGYIZHE1124","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-WANGYIZHE1124-20241223094200-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221045400","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223113400-WANGYIZHE1124-20241223094200"]}}-->
- @WANGYIZHE1124 I am afraid your translations to English Wikipedia are of too low quality to be accepted - they are poorly translated and formatted, and very poorly referenced. I am afraid they will likely be deleted shortly by the reviewers. Regarding your translations, please make sure to link it to the translated original article clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button.
- Your Wikivoyage edits are better, but please make sure all listings you add are properly formatted with GPS data. Some, particularly in Hailar, look like very bad translation or AI hallucinations. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 11:34, 23 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241223113400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223113400-WANGYIZHE1124-20241223094200","replies":["c-WANGYIZHE1124-20241223142700-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223113400","c-WANGYIZHE1124-20241223150900-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223113400","c-WANGYIZHE1124-20241223174100-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223113400","c-WANGYIZHE1124-20241224085000-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223113400"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
- All right,I'll edit it again. WANGYIZHE1124 (talk) 14:27, 23 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241223142700","author":"WANGYIZHE1124","type":"comment","level":5,"id":"c-WANGYIZHE1124-20241223142700-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223113400","replies":[]}}-->
- Hello professor, please check the hailar again, I have revised it, and please let me know the current grade WANGYIZHE1124 (talk) 15:09, 23 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241223150900","author":"WANGYIZHE1124","type":"comment","level":5,"id":"c-WANGYIZHE1124-20241223150900-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223113400","replies":[]}}-->
- https://en.m.wikivoyage.org/wiki/Xingyi
- https://en.m.wikivoyage.org/wiki/Langzhong
- https://en.m.wikivoyage.org/wiki/Hailar
- Hello professor, please check again. I checked the gps and the gps is correct, I modified the content again WANGYIZHE1124 (talk) 17:41, 23 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241223174100","author":"WANGYIZHE1124","type":"comment","level":5,"id":"c-WANGYIZHE1124-20241223174100-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223113400","replies":["c-WANGYIZHE1124-20241223174500-WANGYIZHE1124-20241223174100"]}}-->
- Because the area is remote and the environment is complex, there are not many attractions and far away. WANGYIZHE1124 (talk) 17:45, 23 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241223174500","author":"WANGYIZHE1124","type":"comment","level":6,"id":"c-WANGYIZHE1124-20241223174500-WANGYIZHE1124-20241223174100","replies":[]}}-->
- and wiki https://zh.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E9%8A%80%E6%B2%B3%E9%81%8A%E9%A8%8E%E5%85%B5#%E5%8E%9F%E5%A3%B0%E5%A4%A7%E7%A2%9F
- https://zh.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E7%A5%96%E6%AF%8D%E7%BB%86%E8%83%9E#%E6%94%AF%E6%8C%81
- https://zh.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E7%B4%84%E7%BF%B0%C2%B7%E8%89%BE%E5%A5%87%E6%A3%AE WANGYIZHE1124 (talk) 08:50, 24 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241224085000","author":"WANGYIZHE1124","type":"comment","level":5,"id":"c-WANGYIZHE1124-20241224085000-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223113400","replies":["c-WANGYIZHE1124-20241224085100-WANGYIZHE1124-20241224085000"]}}-->
- https://zh.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E7%B4%84%E7%BF%B0%C2%B7%E8%89%BE%E5%A5%87%E6%A3%AE WANGYIZHE1124 (talk) 08:51, 24 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241224085100","author":"WANGYIZHE1124","type":"comment","level":6,"id":"c-WANGYIZHE1124-20241224085100-WANGYIZHE1124-20241224085000","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241224161400-WANGYIZHE1124-20241224085100"]}}-->
- @WANGYIZHE1124 Replied by email; additionally, please note that some of your edits to zh wiki were declined by the reviewers. Please work with them to fix any issues and report back to me on the results Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 16:14, 24 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241224161400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":7,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241224161400-WANGYIZHE1124-20241224085100","replies":["c-WANGYIZHE1124-20241224174800-Hanyangprofessor2-20241224161400"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
- I've communicated with them. These are the Wikipedia I've linked.
- NAME (Chinese girl group)
- Blossom (2024 Chinese mainland costume web drama)
- Lake Seema#Lake Seema
- Jiang Guhuai
- Zou Qiguo
- Liu Zhenlai#References
- and another one wikivoyage
- https://en.m.wikivoyage.org/wiki/Hechi WANGYIZHE1124 (talk) 17:48, 24 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241224174800","author":"WANGYIZHE1124","type":"comment","level":8,"id":"c-WANGYIZHE1124-20241224174800-Hanyangprofessor2-20241224161400","replies":["c-WANGYIZHE1124-20241224184200-WANGYIZHE1124-20241224174800"]}}-->
- https://en.m.wikivoyage.org/wiki/Shizuishan WANGYIZHE1124 (talk) 18:42, 24 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241224184200","author":"WANGYIZHE1124","type":"comment","level":9,"id":"c-WANGYIZHE1124-20241224184200-WANGYIZHE1124-20241224174800","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241225004600-WANGYIZHE1124-20241224184200","c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241225014900-WANGYIZHE1124-20241224184200"]}}-->
- @WANGYIZHE1124 You need to make some changes to your Wikipedia articles to bring them to minimum standards and prevent them from being declined. For the name, please add a Template:Infobox musical artist. as well as blue links to related Wikipedia articles (see Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Linking). Compare your work to others in Category:Chinese girl groups
- For Blossom, do likewise (use Template:Infobox television). For lake, use Template:Infobox body of water Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 00:46, 25 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241225004600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":10,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241225004600-WANGYIZHE1124-20241224184200","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
- @WANGYIZHE1124 For the data class, please fix the error mentioned here and let me know when you've done so. I'll update your grade after you fix the above items. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 01:49, 25 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241225014900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":10,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241225014900-WANGYIZHE1124-20241224184200","replies":["c-WANGYIZHE1124-20241225055000-Hanyangprofessor2-20241225014900"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
- Lake Seema#
- Blossom (2024 Chinese mainland costume web drama)
- NAME (Chinese girl group)
- please check out WANGYIZHE1124 (talk) 05:50, 25 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241225055000","author":"WANGYIZHE1124","type":"comment","level":11,"id":"c-WANGYIZHE1124-20241225055000-Hanyangprofessor2-20241225014900","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241225055900-WANGYIZHE1124-20241225055000"]}}-->
- @WANGYIZHE1124
- Good, but more items need to be fixed to prevent those articles from being deleted, which would reduce the credit given:
- The lake article is titled "Lake Seema" but the lead says "Xima Lake". Which is correct? Which used in English sources? Please find an example. We cannot invent names.
- When translating, please make sure to add blue links to related articles on English Wikipedia. If a term exists in Chinese Wikipedia and has an article there, but not on English Wikipedia, please use Template:Interlanguage link to link it. I see many blue links in Chinese version of the Blossom and NAME articles, but not in English. Please fix that too.
- Other articles exist on en wiki but you have not linked them, for example Qidian. Please read Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Linking
- There is some untranslated text, ex. "All lyrics are written by 周洁颖Zhou Jieying; all music is composed by 胡小鸥HuXiaoou:"
- Also, please add WP:CATEGORIES - see what categories are used on zh wiki and add similar ones here. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 05:59, 25 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241225055900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":12,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241225055900-WANGYIZHE1124-20241225055000","replies":["c-WANGYIZHE1124-20241225065200-Hanyangprofessor2-20241225055900"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
- I've finished linking and fixed some errors.but“ Also, please add WP:CATEGORIES - see what categories are used on zh wiki and add similar ones here.” I don't quite understand how to do it. WANGYIZHE1124 (talk) 06:52, 25 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241225065200","author":"WANGYIZHE1124","type":"comment","level":13,"id":"c-WANGYIZHE1124-20241225065200-Hanyangprofessor2-20241225055900","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241225073400-WANGYIZHE1124-20241225065200"]}}-->
- @WANGYIZHE1124 Try reading that guide or watch a video like How to add Categories on Wikipedia - Wikipedia For Beginners Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 07:34, 25 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241225073400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":14,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241225073400-WANGYIZHE1124-20241225065200","replies":["c-WANGYIZHE1124-20241225082900-Hanyangprofessor2-20241225073400"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
- I have added all finished please check，and give me a bonus on my grades.
- Blossom (2024 Chinese mainland costume web drama)
- NAME (Chinese girl group）
- Liu Zhenlai
- Jiang Guhuai
- Lake Seema WANGYIZHE1124 (talk) 08:29, 25 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241225082900","author":"WANGYIZHE1124","type":"comment","level":15,"id":"c-WANGYIZHE1124-20241225082900-Hanyangprofessor2-20241225073400","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241225131100-WANGYIZHE1124-20241225082900"]}}-->
- @WANGYIZHE1124 Good, I'll update your grade shortly. But your links in the text body to zh wiki are incorrect. Try to use the Template:Interlanguage link Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 13:11, 25 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241225131100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":16,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241225131100-WANGYIZHE1124-20241225082900","replies":["c-WANGYIZHE1124-20241225155100-Hanyangprofessor2-20241225131100"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
- I've changed it right. WANGYIZHE1124 (talk) 15:51, 25 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241225155100","author":"WANGYIZHE1124","type":"comment","level":17,"id":"c-WANGYIZHE1124-20241225155100-Hanyangprofessor2-20241225131100","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241226010000-WANGYIZHE1124-20241225155100","c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241226010000-WANGYIZHE1124-20241225155100-1"]}}-->
- @WANGYIZHE1124 In Blossom, Zhang Meng is still wrong. While others, like Li Yunrui, also do not use Template:Interlanguage link. So no, this has not been completed. Please fix such links. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 01:00, 26 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241226010000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":18,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241226010000-WANGYIZHE1124-20241225155100","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
- PS. I am in my office today until 3pm. If you want a demonstration on how to use this tool, stop by and I'll show you. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 01:00, 26 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241226010000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":18,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241226010000-WANGYIZHE1124-20241225155100-1","replies":["c-WANGYIZHE1124-20241226025900-Hanyangprofessor2-20241226010000"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
- I modified zhangmeng, sorry professor, I'm already in China now WANGYIZHE1124 (talk) 02:59, 26 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241226025900","author":"WANGYIZHE1124","type":"comment","level":19,"id":"c-WANGYIZHE1124-20241226025900-Hanyangprofessor2-20241226010000","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241226044700-WANGYIZHE1124-20241226025900"]}}-->
- @WANGYIZHE1124 You need to use Template:Interlanguage link to receive max credit for the assignment. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 04:47, 26 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241226044700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":20,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241226044700-WANGYIZHE1124-20241226025900","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor, I am taking the courses "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis" and "Media Trends and Globalization."
Here's my bonus Wikipedia：
1.https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Chinese_Paladin_3_(TV_series)
2.https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E9%9C%8D%E5%90%89%E7%88%BE%E5%9C%8B%E5%AE%B6%E5%85%AC%E5%9C%92
3.https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E5%AE%89%E5%82%91%E6%B4%9B%C2%B7%E5%A1%9E%E5%9F%BA
4.https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Link_Central_City
5.https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E5%88%A9%E6%9C%AA%E5%AE%B6%E4%B8%AD%E7%9A%84%E7%AD%B5%E5%B8%AD
6.https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Luo_Zenan
7. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Japanese_Navy_Chiefs
8.https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E6%A1%91%E8%A8%A5_(%E9%BB%98%E5%8B%92-%E9%AD%AF%E5%A7%86%E6%96%AF%E9%81%94%E7%88%BE%E9%83%A1)
A total of 8 articles. Jiayyyyy (talk) 08:04, 19 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241219080400","author":"Jiayyyyy","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Jiayyyyy-20241219080400-Extra_credit_Wikipedia_(JIA_YUAN)","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221045500-Jiayyyyy-20241219080400"]}}-->
- @Jiayyyyy Good. Referenced content that is published will be considered for extra points. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 04:55, 21 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241221045500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221045500-Jiayyyyy-20241219080400","replies":["c-Jiayyyyy-20241221140600-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221045500"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
- Dear Professor, this is my translation of the new Wikipedia project：1.https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E5%A4%A9%E4%B8%BB%E6%95%99%E9%9B%B7%E9%98%BF%E7%88%BE%E5%9F%8E%E6%95%99%E5%8D%80
- 2.https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E9%97%A8%E8%AF%BA%C2%B7%E8%A5%BF%E8%92%99%E6%96%AF Jiayyyyy (talk) 14:06, 21 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241221140600","author":"Jiayyyyy","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Jiayyyyy-20241221140600-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221045500","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221165500-Jiayyyyy-20241221140600"]}}-->
- @Jiayyyyy Ok. Your current score for the Glob class is C. Please ensure that your main translations are published and accepted by the reviewers. For the other class, your current score is D as your Wikivoyage article is not finished (it needs a short history section, several more listings for see and do, and listings for the main intercity bus station or stations). Your wikidata link there for Shangrao Station is wrong and needs to be fixed. Fixing this can improve the score for both classes to B. Good luck Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 16:55, 21 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241221165500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221165500-Jiayyyyy-20241221140600","replies":["c-Jiayyyyy-20241222014600-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221165500","c-Jiayyyyy-20241222020200-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221165500"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
- Dear Professor, here are two of my main Wikipedia translations:https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E4%BA%9A%E6%B4%B2%E4%B8%AD%E5%BF%83%E4%B8%BB%E4%B9%89
- https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E5%8D%B0%E5%BA%A6%E4%B8%AD%E5%BF%83%E4%B8%BB%E4%B9%89
- I have sent a message to the auditor's discussion page about my Asian centralism, but I have not received a reply. The auditor's home page said it was temporarily unable to process information due to physical reasons.
- About my wiki guide section, has been requested again as you requested, please check.https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/Shangrao
- Could you please tell me again what I can do to get an A in both subjects, thank you Jiayyyyy (talk) 01:46, 22 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241222014600","author":"Jiayyyyy","type":"comment","level":5,"id":"c-Jiayyyyy-20241222014600-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221165500","replies":[]}}-->
- All blog assignments and additional credits for the blog have been completed. Jiayyyyy (talk) 02:02, 22 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241222020200","author":"Jiayyyyy","type":"comment","level":5,"id":"c-Jiayyyyy-20241222020200-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221165500","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241222044400-Jiayyyyy-20241222020200"]}}-->
- @Jiayyyyy Please fix the issues reglated to Shangrao – Travel guide at Wikivoyage : " Your wikidata link there for Shangrao Station is wrong and needs to be fixed. " and add "listing for the main intercity bus station"
- Is the GPS for Shangrao Museum correct? It shows some unihabited part of land. Please double check your coordinates, and also add URLs to the museum listing and those of other organizations. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 04:44, 22 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241222044400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":6,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241222044400-Jiayyyyy-20241222020200","replies":["c-Jiayyyyy-20241222074600-Hanyangprofessor2-20241222044400"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
- Dear teacher, I have changed according to your question. All GPS is based on latitude and longitude at the entrance to the attraction. In addition, the list of major intercity bus stops has been added. The official website of all the attractions is also posted. Please check it out
- https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/Shangrao Jiayyyyy (talk) 07:46, 22 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241222074600","author":"Jiayyyyy","type":"comment","level":7,"id":"c-Jiayyyyy-20241222074600-Hanyangprofessor2-20241222044400","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241222094300-Jiayyyyy-20241222074600"]}}-->
- @Jiayyyyy Good. I recommend extra credit edits (adding more listings to this or another city article) to improve your grade to B or higher (but we only have 24h or so before I am going to be finalizign most grades). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 09:43, 22 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241222094300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":8,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241222094300-Jiayyyyy-20241222074600","replies":["c-Jiayyyyy-20241222105800-Hanyangprofessor2-20241222094300"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
- Dear Professor, I have done the additional credit editing for Wikipedians:
- https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/Tengchong
- What else can I do to get an A in both of ”Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis“ and ”Media Trends and Globalization.“ Jiayyyyy (talk) 10:58, 22 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241222105800","author":"Jiayyyyy","type":"comment","level":9,"id":"c-Jiayyyyy-20241222105800-Hanyangprofessor2-20241222094300","replies":["c-Jiayyyyy-20241222163600-Jiayyyyy-20241222105800"]}}-->
- Dear Professor, this is my second wiki guide for extra credits:https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/Jinzhou Jiayyyyy (talk) 16:36, 22 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241222163600","author":"Jiayyyyy","type":"comment","level":10,"id":"c-Jiayyyyy-20241222163600-Jiayyyyy-20241222105800","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223034700-Jiayyyyy-20241222163600"]}}-->
- @Jiayyyyy
- Your grade in both classes is now around B-A. You can still improve it by doing more extra credit work, but please note we only have about ~24h for submitting extra credit work; I cannot guarantee that I'll have time to grade on or after XMAS. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 03:47, 23 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241223034700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":11,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223034700-Jiayyyyy-20241222163600","replies":["c-Jiayyyyy-20241223054900-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223034700"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
- Dear Professor, this is my extra credit for the 3rd Wikivoyage：https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/Panzhihua Jiayyyyy (talk) 05:49, 23 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241223054900","author":"Jiayyyyy","type":"comment","level":12,"id":"c-Jiayyyyy-20241223054900-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223034700","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223061400-Jiayyyyy-20241223054900"]}}-->
- @Jiayyyyy Good - I will update your score shortly Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 06:14, 23 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241223061400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":13,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223061400-Jiayyyyy-20241223054900","replies":["c-Jiayyyyy-20241223090300-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223061400"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
- Dear Professor, here are my two additional Wikipedia credits:https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E5%B2%A9%E7%BE%8A
- https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E5%9B%AD%E5%9C%B0%E6%A0%BD%E5%9F%B9 Jiayyyyy (talk) 09:03, 23 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241223090300","author":"Jiayyyyy","type":"comment","level":14,"id":"c-Jiayyyyy-20241223090300-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223061400","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223113700-Jiayyyyy-20241223090300"]}}-->
- @Jiayyyyy Well done. I think your grades for both classes should be at A/A+ level. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 11:37, 23 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241223113700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":15,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223113700-Jiayyyyy-20241223090300","replies":["c-Jiayyyyy-20241223115200-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223113700"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
- Dear Professor, thank you very much. I have a question, if I want to make sure it's all A➕, do I need to keep doing extra credits? Jiayyyyy (talk) 11:52, 23 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241223115200","author":"Jiayyyyy","type":"comment","level":16,"id":"c-Jiayyyyy-20241223115200-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223113700","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223121900-Jiayyyyy-20241223115200"]}}-->
- @Jiayyyyy To be safe, this is a good idea, particularly as this year our classes are using a curved grading system and the total number of A and A+ grades I can give out is limited and dynamic Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 12:19, 23 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241223121900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":17,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223121900-Jiayyyyy-20241223115200","replies":["c-Jiayyyyy-20241224025100-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223121900"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
- Dear Professor, Here's an extra bonus point I did to keep A➕ on Wikipedia:https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E5%B7%B4%E9%9B%B7%E6%8B%89%E6%96%AF
- Wikivoyage:https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/Xiapu Jiayyyyy (talk) 02:51, 24 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241224025100","author":"Jiayyyyy","type":"comment","level":18,"id":"c-Jiayyyyy-20241224025100-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223121900","replies":["c-Jiayyyyy-20241224043200-Jiayyyyy-20241224025100"]}}-->
- Dear Professor, Here's an extra bonus point I did to keep A➕ on Wikipedia:https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E6%8B%89%E6%99%AE%E9%98%BF%E8%BF%90%E5%8A%A8 Jiayyyyy (talk) 04:32, 24 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241224043200","author":"Jiayyyyy","type":"comment","level":19,"id":"c-Jiayyyyy-20241224043200-Jiayyyyy-20241224025100","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241224161500-Jiayyyyy-20241224043200"]}}-->
- @Jiayyyyy Replied by email, well done Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 16:15, 24 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241224161500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":20,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241224161500-Jiayyyyy-20241224043200","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor, we have revised the draft of the Hong Kong media controversy again. The original Chinese text also adds the source. Please check it . CHEN HEBING (talk) 08:35, 19 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241219083500","author":"CHEN HEBING","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-CHEN_HEBING-20241219083500-CHEN_HEBING&LIU_JUNYU","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221045600-CHEN_HEBING-20241219083500"]}}-->
- @CHEN HEBING Good but as I said several times, you are supposed to reference ALL content or remove parts that are not referenced. Your submission will not be accepted until this is fixed. @Prince of Erebor - thanks for checking... Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 04:56, 21 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241221045600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221045600-CHEN_HEBING-20241219083500","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor Piotr, Our course is: Media Trends and Globalization.
This is our article translated from Chinese to English. This is our article translated from English to Chinese, please check it. This is @Alexk27 and @Sssnuan thank you for taking the time to read it. Alexk27 (talk) 09:10, 19 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241219091000","author":"Alexk27","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Alexk27-20241219091000-SHAO_JIANUAN&WANG_YIKE","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221050000-Alexk27-20241219091000"]}}-->
- @Alexk27 @Sssnuan
- Your Chinese translation was deleted due to very poor translation (see explanation at https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/User_talk:Alexk27 ). You can ask @Wcam to restore it to your sandbox and fix it there, and ask them to review it again but please remember the deadline for this assignment ends in 24-48h. You should have tried to complete it weeks ago, per the deadlines in our syllabus.
- Regarding your English translation, please make sure to link it to the translated original article clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button.
- It also has some uneferenced paragraphs. Please add references to them. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 05:00, 21 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241221050000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221050000-Alexk27-20241219091000","replies":["c-Alexk27-20241222041100-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221050000"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
- I am sorry that we missed the deadline, but we have worked hard to revise the article translated from Chinese to English. Thank you for reading. I am really sorry. Here is our link Alexk27 (talk) 04:11, 22 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241222041100","author":"Alexk27","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Alexk27-20241222041100-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221050000","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241222044700-Alexk27-20241222041100"]}}-->
- @Alexk27 Your new article is still assessed as being poorly translated. Please correct those errors quickly before your article is deleted again Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 04:47, 22 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241222044700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241222044700-Alexk27-20241222041100","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor Konieczny,
I am taking the course “Media Trends and Globalization”and 'Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis‘.
Media Trends and Globalization：My topic is Unemployment in China (Chinese translated into English). Here is the link.
Blogging through Media Trends and Globalization (2023). My blogger link.
Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis：My topic is Dazu. Here is the link.
I look forward to your feedback and any suggestions you might have on these topics. Wuwenhao19960507 (talk) 09:17, 19 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241219091700","author":"Wuwenhao19960507","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Wuwenhao19960507-20241219091700-Deadline_8_\uff1aWU_WENHAO","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221050500-Wuwenhao19960507-20241219091700"]}}-->
- @Wuwenhao19960507 Good.
- For the final step, ask experienced Wikivoyage editors for feedback by 1) starting a discussion on the discussion page of your article (make sure to have an appropriate heading and a comment below it) and 2) linking it from here with a comment: "please review my article" or similar. Please check for replies every few days (and before the final grading), address any issues raised (if you don't understand them, ask me for help) and after fixing them, reply to the people who reviewed your article telling them you fixed the issues raised. (Ping them by mentioning their name using the + button, see Wikovyage:Echo). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 05:05, 21 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241221050500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221050500-Wuwenhao19960507-20241219091700","replies":["c-Wuwenhao19960507-20241222072600-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221050500"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
- Hello, Professor. I have already requested the review of the reviewer on the discussion page on October 21, 2024. And I have changed the content according to the reviewer's guidance. @Hanyangprofessor2 Wuwenhao19960507 (talk) 07:26, 22 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241222072600","author":"Wuwenhao19960507","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Wuwenhao19960507-20241222072600-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221050500","replies":["c-Wuwenhao19960507-20241222074700-Wuwenhao19960507-20241222072600"]}}-->
- On November 21, a reviewer sent me a private message to report the problem. I also changed. Wuwenhao19960507 (talk) 07:47, 22 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241222074700","author":"Wuwenhao19960507","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Wuwenhao19960507-20241222074700-Wuwenhao19960507-20241222072600","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241222094400-Wuwenhao19960507-20241222074700"]}}-->
- @Wuwenhao19960507 Good but you should still ask for the feedback in the location (forum) listed in my post above. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 09:44, 22 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241222094400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":5,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241222094400-Wuwenhao19960507-20241222074700","replies":["c-Wuwenhao19960507-20241222113500-Hanyangprofessor2-20241222094400"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
- Hello Professor, am I supposed to leave a message here? I have completed it, and if anyone has any comments, I will make revisions.@Hanyangprofessor2 Wuwenhao19960507 (talk) 11:35, 22 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241222113500","author":"Wuwenhao19960507","type":"comment","level":6,"id":"c-Wuwenhao19960507-20241222113500-Hanyangprofessor2-20241222094400","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223034800-Wuwenhao19960507-20241222113500"]}}-->
- @Wuwenhao19960507 Close. You are supposed to leave it at the bottom of this page: Wikivoyage:Requests for comment – Travel guide at Wikivoyage Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 03:48, 23 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241223034800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":7,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223034800-Wuwenhao19960507-20241222113500","replies":["c-Wuwenhao19960507-20241223113300-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223034800"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
- Hello Professor, I have placed the link for Dazu at the bottom of the webpage. Thank you for your guidance this semester. I am pleased to have the opportunity to edit content about my hometown, increasing its appeal to more people. Wuwenhao19960507 (talk) 11:33, 23 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241223113300","author":"Wuwenhao19960507","type":"comment","level":8,"id":"c-Wuwenhao19960507-20241223113300-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223034800","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223121800-Wuwenhao19960507-20241223113300"]}}-->
- @Wuwenhao19960507 Good. Please make sure to check it for comments over the next 48h-72h as reviewers may stop by and comment. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 12:18, 23 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241223121800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":9,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223121800-Wuwenhao19960507-20241223113300","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello, Professor. I am currently taking the courses "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis" and "Media Trends and Globalization."These are all the additional wikipedia，thank you.
1 https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Qin_Ming_(forensic_doctor)
2 https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Tianyi_Ge_Museum
3 https://zh.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E7%B1%B3%E5%93%88%E4%BC%8A%E5%B0%94%C2%B7%E6%B3%A2%E8%8E%89%E7%BD%97%E5%A6%AE%E9%9B%85%E5%BE%B7
4https://zh.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E7%93%A6%E8%A5%BF%E8%8E%B1%C2%B7%E8%AF%BA%E9%9F%A6%E4%BA%9A%E5%8A%AA
5 https://zh.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E7%93%A6%E8%A5%BF%E8%8E%B1%C2%B7%E8%AF%BA%E9%9F%A6%E4%BA%9A%E5%8A%AA Tyuni06 (talk) 09:56, 19 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241219095600","author":"Tyuni06","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Tyuni06-20241219095600-Extra_credit_Wikipedia_\uff08TANG_YINI\uff09","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221051300-Tyuni06-20241219095600"]}}-->
- @Tyuni06
- Regarding your English translation, please make sure to link it to the translated original article clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button.
- It also has some uneferenced paragraphs. Please add references to them. Only referenced content is accepted for our class (unreferenced content can be deleted from Wikipedia at any moment).
- Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 05:13, 21 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241221051300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221051300-Tyuni06-20241219095600","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello professor, I have edited Wikipedia 80 times and hope to get extra points for my final grade. Thanks for looking, link here1.2.3.4.5.6.7.8. Jzhdylb (talk) 10:06, 19 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241219100600","author":"Jzhdylb","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Jzhdylb-20241219100600-Week_16---FAN_XINRU","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221051400-Jzhdylb-20241219100600"]}}-->
- @Jzhdylb Ok :) Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 05:14, 21 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241221051400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221051400-Jzhdylb-20241219100600","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor, I am taking the courses "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis" and "Media Trends and Globalization." Here's my bonus Wikipedia： 1.https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E5%86%B7%E8%97%8F%E8%88%B9
2.https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Taichung_Xingqi_Memorial_Hall
3.https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Modaomen_Waterway
4.https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Shen_Liming
5.https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Longxu_Ditch_(river) Guoying1 (talk) 10:32, 19 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241219103200","author":"Guoying1","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Guoying1-20241219103200-Extra_credit_Wikipedia_(GUO_YING)","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221052200-Guoying1-20241219103200"]}}-->
- @Guoying1 Your content was declined from zh wiki due to poor translation: Refrigerated Ships: A History of Revisions - Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia
- For Modaomen Waterway, please make sure to link it to the translated original article clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button, and do the same for your other translations.
- Shen Liming needs additional sources to show that the subject is important (more references like newspaper articles or academic works mentioning him). Otherwise it will be deleted shorty for failing the Wikipedia:Notability requirement Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 05:22, 21 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241221052200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221052200-Guoying1-20241219103200","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor, I am taking the courses "Media Trends and Globalization." Here's my Wikipedia：
https://zh.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Kdjdxx208/Low-power_broadcasting
User:Kdjdxx208/江西省图书馆
I'm also done with the blog about this class.
https://globsoc2023.blogspot.com/2024/12/china-and-globalization.html
https://globsoc2023.blogspot.com/2024/12/your-experiences-in-taking-english.html
Kdjdxx208 (talk) 11:55, 19 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241219115500","author":"Kdjdxx208","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Kdjdxx208-20241219115500-Extra_credit_Wikipedia_\uff08GUAN_RUI)","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221052300-Kdjdxx208-20241219115500"]}}-->
- @Kdjdxx208 Good. To finish your assignment, publish your article by moving the draft to the mainspace (see zh:Help:页面重命名 on how to do this); then we will see what the Chinese reviewers will say. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 05:23, 21 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241221052300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221052300-Kdjdxx208-20241219115500","replies":["c-Kdjdxx208-20241221185000-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221052300"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
- Hello professor, I have moved the Jiangxi Provincial Library article, but the low-power broadcasting that article can not find the moving button, which is very distressing to me Kdjdxx208 (talk) 18:50, 21 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241221185000","author":"Kdjdxx208","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Kdjdxx208-20241221185000-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221052300","replies":[]}}-->
Professor, I made 40 extral Wikipedia edits, please check them out Bai0926 (talk) 12:50, 19 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241219125000","author":"Bai0926","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Bai0926-20241219125000-Extra_credit_Wikipedia_\uff1aBAI_LINHAN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221052400-Bai0926-20241219125000"]}}-->
- @Bai0926 Good Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 05:24, 21 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241221052400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221052400-Bai0926-20241219125000","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Professor,I am taking the courses "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis" .I made 60 extral Wikivoyage edits.Wenzhou and Baoji HYH031277777 (talk) 13:04, 19 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241219130400","author":"HYH031277777","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-HYH031277777-20241219130400-Extra_credit_Wikivoyage_\uff1aHUANG_YANHAN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221052500-HYH031277777-20241219130400"]}}-->
- @HYH031277777 Good, I will consider them for extra credit Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 05:25, 21 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241221052500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221052500-HYH031277777-20241219130400","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor, this is the content that I have modified in response to your opinion, and this is the link, please check! Thank you very much! Xjx921 (talk) 14:19, 19 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241219141900","author":"Xjx921","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Xjx921-20241219141900-Wikipedia_content_correction:_XI_JIAXIN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221053100-Xjx921-20241219141900"]}}-->
- @Xjx921 Good progress. Reference 14, 16, 24 and 25 to Baidu Baike need to be changed per WP:BAIDU (Baidu has too much low quality content to be accepted as a reference).
- Please add more links to your article - the first time an important topic like Meizhou Island is mentioned, it should be linked.
- Please carefully check all references one by one to remove errors and to ensure they have metadata information (author, title, publisher, date). Next, if the source is in Chinese (ex. 福建省"), please use both the Chinese and English titles. Use Chinese title in the 'title' field, and English in the 'translated title' field. If you need help, stop by my office and I'll demonstrate how to do so.
- After that, you can publish your article (move it to mainspace, see Help:Move). After that, please make sure to link it to the translated original article clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button, and do the same for your other translations. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 05:31, 21 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241221053100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221053100-Xjx921-20241219141900","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor,
I am currently taking the courses "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis" and "Media Trends and Globalization."
I have completed our final project. These are the articles I translated from English to Chinese, and it has already been published. 1. 2
This is the city I chose for Wikivoyage, and everything has been completed. Please review it.[3]
Thank you,please check! Cuicuizan (talk) 14:42, 19 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241219144200","author":"Cuicuizan","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Cuicuizan-20241219144200-Deadline_7:_CUI_ZAN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221175500-Cuicuizan-20241219144200"]}}-->
- @Cuicuizan Good.
- You can do some extra credit assignment for Big/Small data to raise your grade from A to A+. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 17:55, 21 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241221175500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221175500-Cuicuizan-20241219144200","replies":["c-Cuicuizan-20241223061000-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221175500"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
- Dear Professor,
- I am currently working on the two extra credit Wikipedia articles for the Media Trends and Globalization course.
- Translated from English to Chinese: 鼠标 陶瓷器
- Please review them. Thank you! Cuicuizan (talk) 06:10, 23 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241223061000","author":"Cuicuizan","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Cuicuizan-20241223061000-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221175500","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223061700-Cuicuizan-20241223061000"]}}-->
- @Cuicuizan Good, I will include them in your score. Your points for both classes should be now at the A-level. Good job Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 06:17, 23 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241223061700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223061700-Cuicuizan-20241223061000","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor, I am taking the courses "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis" and "Media Trends and Globalization." Here's my bonus Wikipedia：
1. Gobara Koto
2. Taiwan Art Exhibition
3.Kinoshita Shizua
4.2010年巴西总统选举民意调查
5.臺灣美術展覽會
6.The temptation of Maaya Kisaragi
7. Yataro Miyata
8.希拉·帕特尔
9.德里发展局
10.印度的非法住房
Jihaiyun (talk) 14:52, 19 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241219145200","author":"Jihaiyun","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Jihaiyun-20241219145200-Extra_credit_Wikipedia_--JI_HAIYUN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221170000-Jihaiyun-20241219145200"]}}-->
- @Jihaiyun Good, but please fix the issues related to your main translation topics (Multicultural families in South Korea to zh, corruption in India to zh) and publish them on zh wiki.
- I also recommend making some extra edits to Wikivoyage (your grade for that class is C but adding some listings or such can improve it to B easily). Good luck, Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 17:00, 21 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241221170000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221170000-Jihaiyun-20241219145200","replies":["c-Jihaiyun-20241222120500-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221170000"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
- Hello Professor my Multicultural families in South Korea(https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:%E9%9F%A9%E5%9B%BD%E5%A4%9A%E6%96%87%E5%8C%96%E5%AE%B6%E5%BA%AD) and corruption in India(zh:印度的腐败) have been sent to zh Wikipedia for you to check out and I did a lot of Wikipedia articles as my bonus homework. I hope to get an A+ in both of my courses and if my grades are not enough so far please let me know and I can do a few more Wikipedia articles to get extra points. Please reply@Hanyangprofessor2 Jihaiyun (talk) 12:05, 22 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241222120500","author":"Jihaiyun","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Jihaiyun-20241222120500-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221170000","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223035000-Jihaiyun-20241222120500"]}}-->
- @Jihaiyun As you can see, your first draft (multcultural familias) has been declined; please work with the reviewers to get it accepted, but please note we only have about ~24h for submitting extra credit work; I cannot guarantee that I'll have time to grade on or after XMAS.
- If you made any extra credit work for either class, please send me the link; note that only published and not declined work will count for extra credit. Good luck Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 03:50, 23 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241223035000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223035000-Jihaiyun-20241222120500","replies":["c-Jihaiyun-20241223040300-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223035000"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
- Dear Professor,
- May I ask about my current grades for the two courses? So far, I have successfully published 11 Wikipedia articles, excluding the one about Korean multicultural families. Additionally, I have completed 4 extra blog tasks.
- I would like to know how many points I can earn for creating an additional qualified Wikipedia article or Wikivoyage entry. Also, could you let me know how much more content I need to produce to achieve an A+?
- Thank you, and I look forward to your response.@Hanyangprofessor2 Jihaiyun (talk) 04:03, 23 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241223040300","author":"Jihaiyun","type":"comment","level":5,"id":"c-Jihaiyun-20241223040300-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223035000","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223045500-Jihaiyun-20241223040300"]}}-->
- @Jihaiyun Your grade for the Glob class should be around B-A. For the other class it is a bit lower and I recommend doing more Wikivoyage extra credit edits in the next 24h.
- It is hard to tell you exactly how much you need to edit to improve the grade, as score received depends on quality of the edits (that also means that low quality machine translation / AI content added that gets removed by reviewers quickly does not generate any meaningful credit).
- If you make any extra credit edits, please post them here ASAP. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 04:55, 23 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241223045500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":6,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223045500-Jihaiyun-20241223040300","replies":["c-Jihaiyun-20241223053200-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223045500"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
- Dear Professor,
- Could you kindly let me know my grade for the second course? Additionally, I would like to inquire how much extra credit I could earn by completing one Wikivoyage article and one Wikipedia article. I would greatly appreciate it if you could provide an approximate range of the minimum and maximum possible points I might receive for each.
- I am determined to do my best over the next 24 hours to improve my score to an A+. Thank you for your understanding and support.@Hanyangprofessor2 Jihaiyun (talk) 05:32, 23 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241223053200","author":"Jihaiyun","type":"comment","level":7,"id":"c-Jihaiyun-20241223053200-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223045500","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223062000-Jihaiyun-20241223053200"]}}-->
- @Jihaiyun Your score for that class, based on my current calculations is 73=C. You can improve it to B or maybe even A by improving content related to another town (or towns). Depending on quality and quantity of edits, the extra score you can receive that way can range from 1 to 20 points. I recommend focusing on adding new listings for see and do with GPS, as well as missing elements such as maps or images, as well as expanding the lead and understand (with history and climate). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 06:20, 23 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241223062000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":8,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223062000-Jihaiyun-20241223053200","replies":["c-Jihaiyun-20241223105800-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223062000"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
- Dear Professor,
- I hope this message finds you well. I have completed a new WikiGuide article titled "Western Yunnan."[[2]] I kindly request you to review and assess the score for this article. I will continue to work hard and strive to improve my score as soon as possible.
- Thank you for your time and assistance. I look forward to your feedback!@Hanyangprofessor2 Jihaiyun (talk) 10:58, 23 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241223105800","author":"Jihaiyun","type":"comment","level":9,"id":"c-Jihaiyun-20241223105800-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223062000","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223113900-Jihaiyun-20241223105800","c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223114000-Jihaiyun-20241223105800"]}}-->
- @Jihaiyun Good, but please check the feedback you got in edit summaries (history) here: Western Yunnan: Revision history – Travel guide at Wikivoyage
- I see you also got some feedback on your talk page that you are following - very good. I will update your score shortly to reflect your activity Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 11:39, 23 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241223113900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":10,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223113900-Jihaiyun-20241223105800","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
- PS. I see some of your content was removed because it belongs in the city article(s), not province. You can rescue your work and credit by moving such information to the relevant city articles. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 11:40, 23 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241223114000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":10,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223114000-Jihaiyun-20241223105800","replies":["c-Jihaiyun-20241223115100-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223114000","c-Jihaiyun-20241224075300-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223114000"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
- Dear Professor,
- Thank you very much for your prompt feedback on the article I published. As far as I know, the "Western Yunnan" article I wrote does not refer to a province or a city but rather a regional division within a province, which includes multiple cities.
- Additionally, I have reviewed the comments left on the discussion page and the revision history. Following their suggestions, I have already made adjustments to my article. If you still find any issues with it, I would greatly appreciate it if you could provide more detailed feedback. I will continue revising the article until it is perfect. Jihaiyun (talk) 11:51, 23 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241223115100","author":"Jihaiyun","type":"comment","level":11,"id":"c-Jihaiyun-20241223115100-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223114000","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223122000-Jihaiyun-20241223115100"]}}-->
- @Jihaiyun Your work is good; I recommend continuing making extra credit to Wikivoyage to improve your grade further. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 12:20, 23 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241223122000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":12,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223122000-Jihaiyun-20241223115100","replies":["c-Jihaiyun-20241223123000-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223122000","c-Jihaiyun-20241223162100-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223122000","c-Jihaiyun-20241224130100-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223122000"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
- Okay, I'll keep editing. Thank you, Professor. Jihaiyun (talk) 12:30, 23 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241223123000","author":"Jihaiyun","type":"comment","level":13,"id":"c-Jihaiyun-20241223123000-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223122000","replies":["c-Jihaiyun-20241223202900-Jihaiyun-20241223123000"]}}-->
- Dear Professor, I have completed a new wiki guide article titled "Jinhua". I implore you to review and evaluate the score of this article. I will continue to work hard and try to improve my performance as soon as possible. Thank you for your time and help. Look forward to your feedback! Jihaiyun (talk) 20:29, 23 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241223202900","author":"Jihaiyun","type":"comment","level":14,"id":"c-Jihaiyun-20241223202900-Jihaiyun-20241223123000","replies":[]}}-->
- Dear Professor, I have completed a new wiki guide article titled "Mangshi". "5 I implore you to review and evaluate the score of this article. I will continue to work hard and try to improve my performance as soon as possible. Thank you for your time and help. Look forward to your feedback!@Hanyangprofessor2 Jihaiyun (talk) 16:21, 23 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241223162100","author":"Jihaiyun","type":"comment","level":13,"id":"c-Jihaiyun-20241223162100-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223122000","replies":[]}}-->
- Dear Professor, I have completed a new wiki guide article titled "Tongchuan". I implore you to review and evaluate the score of this article. I will continue to work hard and try to improve my performance as soon as possible. Thank you for your time and help. Look forward to your feedback! Jihaiyun (talk) 13:01, 24 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241224130100","author":"Jihaiyun","type":"comment","level":13,"id":"c-Jihaiyun-20241224130100-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223122000","replies":[]}}-->
- Dear Professor,
- May I kindly ask if my score has reached an A+ after completing these four WikiGuide bonus projects? If not, I will continue editing to improve.
- Western Yunnan Mangshi JinhuaTongchuan
- Thank you for your confirmation!@Hanyangprofessor2 Jihaiyun (talk) 07:53, 24 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241224075300","author":"Jihaiyun","type":"comment","level":11,"id":"c-Jihaiyun-20241224075300-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223114000","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241224161600-Jihaiyun-20241224075300"]}}-->
- @Jihaiyun Your score should be A+. I believe I replied by email too. Well done Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 16:16, 24 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241224161600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":12,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241224161600-Jihaiyun-20241224075300","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor, we are taking the courses Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis here is edit we have completed https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/Garz%C3%AA https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/Jishou please check thank you! 1eleven0086 (talk) 15:54, 19 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241219155400","author":"1eleven0086","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-1eleven0086-20241219155400-LIU_YUNXIANG&_SHAO_JIANUAN_&WANG_YIKE","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221180100-1eleven0086-20241219155400"]}}-->
- @1eleven0086 I am afraid those projects are far from finished; you should've asked me for review weeks ago.
- Garzê needs a climate and history sections, get in section needs listings for train and intercity bus station, a map, all entries in the see and do section need to be reformatted into listings, do section should list festivals.
- Jishou is little better, but at least it has some properly formatted listings and a map (but it is not zoomed in correctly).
- Please note that currently the poor state of your Wikivoyage articles and lack of relevant Wikidata activities and weekly assignments mean that you and your team grade for that class is passing at best.
- You have 48h to improve your work - good luck Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 18:01, 21 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241221180100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221180100-1eleven0086-20241219155400","replies":["c-Alexk27-20241222044200-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221180100"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
- Dear Professor I’ve updated the See and Do sections for Garzê into listings and added festivals under Do. The Buy section is also reformatted with more details about local products. A map has been added showing key locations. Let me know if anything else needs to be adjusted! Alexk27 (talk) 04:42, 22 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241222044200","author":"Alexk27","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Alexk27-20241222044200-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221180100","replies":[]}}-->
Dear Professor. I am currently taking the courses "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis" and "Media Trends and Globalization."These are all the additional wikipedia，thank you!
1.Historic Site of Daedong
2.Ruins of Xuejiagang
3.羑 Lane Historic Site
4.Ruins of Shijiahe
5.Ruins of Xiyin Village Buryab0ne (talk) 19:05, 19 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241219190500","author":"Buryab0ne","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Buryab0ne-20241219190500-Extra_credit_Wikivoyage--QIAN_ZIYI","replies":["c-Buryab0ne-20241220143800-Buryab0ne-20241219190500"]}}-->
- Professor, this is the translation of my two articles, English to Chinese.1.坦卡尔维尔城堡 2.马里波恩街道 Please check it. Thank you. Buryab0ne (talk) 14:38, 20 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241220143800","author":"Buryab0ne","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Buryab0ne-20241220143800-Buryab0ne-20241219190500","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221175300-Buryab0ne-20241220143800"]}}-->
- @Buryab0ne I am afraid the currently submitted extra credit assignments in English are too poorly written to be accepted. The references in the first one are unreliable (Wikipedia). Two out of four references in the second one link to Wikipedia as well. The references are not properly formatted (metadata errors). The last submission has no references. Your Chinese drafts are not even on zh wiki, but on en wiki (wrong website).
- Currently all your work is at an early draft level and would be deleted if published. You can try to fix it within the next 48h, but I am likely going to too busy to be able to offer you detailed feedback.
- I recommend you use Wikipedia live chat help and ask volunteers to review your work and give you feedback using Wikipedia:Discord - Wikipedia , Wikipedia:IRC or Wikipedia:Teahouse - Wikipedia , If the volunteer or volunteers reviewing your work accept it and it is published within the next 48h or so, please let me know and I'll give you extra credit.
- For review of Chinese work, ask Chinese volunteers at one of the live chat options listed here: 维基百科:Discord交流群 - 维基百科，自由的百科全书
- Also, note that currently you have a passing grade in the Globalization class, but not in Big and Small data. Please see my review of your work for that class from few days ago above, and fix the issues raised ASAP.
- Good luck Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 17:53, 21 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241221175300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221175300-Buryab0ne-20241220143800","replies":["c-Buryab0ne-20241222112600-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221175300"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
- Professor, “Big and Small data”is there anything else I need to do in this class？TuT Buryab0ne (talk) 11:26, 22 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241222112600","author":"Buryab0ne","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Buryab0ne-20241222112600-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221175300","replies":[]}}-->
Would you please ask your students to leave edit summaries? There are three request to the student in question to leave edit summaries. While the latest edits are on talk pages and an ES may not be as much of an issue, that student has not left any ES. It seems few of your students are leaving ES.
Edit summaries are useful for searching the wp:page history to find specific edits. Please ask your students to leave edit summaries - see WP:FIES. People doing wp:RCP would rather not have to analyze edits when an ES could get to the point. Briefly describe your changes and a link to its help page is right there just above the "Publish changes" button. Please ask them to leave their reasoning especially if removing citations. Thank you Adakiko (talk) 19:35, 19 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241219193500","author":"Adakiko","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Adakiko-20241219193500-Please_ask_your_students_to_leave_edit_summaries","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221180600-Adakiko-20241219193500"]}}-->
- @Adakiko Oh, I ask them, for years. Some will not listen and will fail the course. Sorry for the trouble, Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 18:06, 21 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241221180600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221180600-Adakiko-20241219193500","replies":["c-Adakiko-20241221201000-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221180600"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
- Then please don't complain when they get reverted for not explaining deletions? I, and I suspect many other wp:RCP, would appreciate more edit summaries. ES are very helpful so that complex edits can be glossed over rather than having to analyzed in depth. I get that complaint often
 . Maybe have your students to check the Preferences -> Editor -> Prompt me when entering a blank edit summary box as the first thing after registering? I have it clicked or I would often forget to leave one.
- Thank you for teaching that course, I hope your students and Wikipedia benefit from it. Thank you Adakiko (talk) 20:10, 21 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241221201000","author":"Adakiko","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Adakiko-20241221201000-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221180600","replies":[]}}-->
Hello professor, this is my extra bonus homework, please check it out，thank you. Pineappleq (talk) 20:36, 19 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241219203600","author":"Pineappleq","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Pineappleq-20241219203600-Additional_Bonus_Operation:_QU_HONGYU","replies":["c-Pineappleq-20241220050700-Pineappleq-20241219203600"]}}-->
- I've changed my extra points homework, please professor check it out Pineappleq (talk) 05:07, 20 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241220050700","author":"Pineappleq","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Pineappleq-20241220050700-Pineappleq-20241219203600","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221044900-Pineappleq-20241220050700"]}}-->
- @Pineappleq Blog content should be posted on our blog, not on wiki Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 04:49, 21 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241221044900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221044900-Pineappleq-20241220050700","replies":["c-Pineappleq-20241223060900-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221044900"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
- Hello professor, my link to join the blog has expired, can you send me an invitation again,Thank you！ Pineappleq (talk) 06:09, 23 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241223060900","author":"Pineappleq","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Pineappleq-20241223060900-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221044900","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223062200-Pineappleq-20241223060900"]}}-->
- @Pineappleq Invitation has been sent. Please keep in mind that as written in our syllabus, AI generated text will not be awarded points; the blogs should be written by you, not AI. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 06:22, 23 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241223062200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":5,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223062200-Pineappleq-20241223060900","replies":["c-Pineappleq-20241223064600-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223062200"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
- OK, I have submitted the extra points to the blog, please professor check, thank you! Pineappleq (talk) 06:46, 23 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241223064600","author":"Pineappleq","type":"comment","level":6,"id":"c-Pineappleq-20241223064600-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223062200","replies":[]}}-->
Hello professor, this is my extra credit blog Linlin406 (talk) 21:33, 19 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241219213300","author":"Linlin406","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Linlin406-20241219213300-Extra_credit_blog:LIN_AIJIA","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221045000-Linlin406-20241219213300"]}}-->
- @Linlin406 Blog content should be posted on our blog, not on wiki Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 04:50, 21 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241221045000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221045000-Linlin406-20241219213300","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor i'm taking "Media Trends and Globalization"
I have completed Deadline 6. I wrote feedback on articles by Kim kyungmin article
송여근 (talk) 04:27, 20 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241220042700","author":"\uc1a1\uc5ec\uadfc","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-\uc1a1\uc5ec\uadfc-20241220042700-Deadlin6:_Yeogeun_Song","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221054000-\uc1a1\uc5ec\uadfc-20241220042700"]}}-->
- @송여근 Ok, but this is too late for your friend to benefit from it, so it is not going to be worth much credit Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 05:40, 21 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241221054000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221054000-\uc1a1\uc5ec\uadfc-20241220042700","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor,
We are currently taking courses "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis" and "Media Trends and Globalization."
We have completed our final projects. The articles we translated have already been published. One is from English to Chinese[言论自由], the other one is from Chinese to English[Giant Wild Goose Pagoda].
This is the city we chose for Wikivoyage, and the content has been completed. Please review it.[Shaoxing]
Thank you, please check! Uuueol (talk) 04:31, 20 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241220043100","author":"Uuueol","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Uuueol-20241220043100-Deadline_7:GUAN_YUE_&_LIU_ZIYE","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221054300-Uuueol-20241220043100"]}}-->
- @Uuueol Did you follow the advice that @暁月凛奈 gave you last time (seen here: 言論自由：修订历史 - 维基百科，自由的百科全书 ?)
- For your English article, there are several places where more references are need. I've marked them with [citation needed]
- Regarding your Wikivoyage article, please ask for review following the instructions from https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/User:Hanyangprofessor2#Final_review and then follow recommendations from the review, if any, Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 05:43, 21 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241221054300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221054300-Uuueol-20241220043100","replies":["c-Uuueol-20241221175300-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221054300","c-Uuueol-20241222111100-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221054300"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
- About 言论自由 I have revised the article according to the requirements. For the part about the Giant Wild Goose Pagoda, I’ve added references for the sections I contributed to. However, the "Surroundings and History" section was already there before my edits, so I’m not sure about its sources. As for Wikipedia, I have also asked for a review. Please check！Thank you！ Uuueol (talk) 17:53, 21 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241221175300","author":"Uuueol","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Uuueol-20241221175300-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221054300","replies":[]}}-->
- Dear Professor, I was wondering if there’s anything else I need to revise for my assignments on Wikipedia and Wikivoyage. Thank you! Uuueol (talk) 11:11, 22 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241222111100","author":"Uuueol","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Uuueol-20241222111100-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221054300","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223035200-Uuueol-20241222111100"]}}-->
- @Uuueol I recommend extra credit work on Wikipedia to improve your grade to B level or higher, but please note we only have about ~24h for submitting extra credit work; I cannot guarantee that I'll have time to grade on or after XMAS.
- If you made any extra credit work for either class, please send me the link; note that only published and not declined work will count for extra credit. Good luck Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 03:52, 23 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241223035200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223035200-Uuueol-20241222111100","replies":["c-Uuueol-20241223035600-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223035200","c-Uuueol-20241223040200-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223035200","c-Uuueol-20241223055200-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223035200"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
- I’ve included all the blogs I’ve completed, including the extra credit ones. Please let me know if there’s anything I need to revise. Thank you! Uuueol (talk) 03:56, 23 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241223035600","author":"Uuueol","type":"comment","level":5,"id":"c-Uuueol-20241223035600-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223035200","replies":[]}}-->
- And we have completed part of the content for Yanbian on Wikivoyage. Uuueol (talk) 04:02, 23 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241223040200","author":"Uuueol","type":"comment","level":5,"id":"c-Uuueol-20241223040200-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223035200","replies":[]}}-->
- Dear Professor,
- I have also personally completed two additional bonus articles for Wikipedia. One is translated from English to Chinese[白色恋人], and the other from Chinese to English[Broadway Circuit]. Please review them. Thank you! Uuueol (talk) 05:52, 23 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241223055200","author":"Uuueol","type":"comment","level":5,"id":"c-Uuueol-20241223055200-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223035200","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223062500-Uuueol-20241223055200"]}}-->
- @Uuueol Good. Regarding your translation to English, please add the interlanguage (interwiki) link clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button and linking the Chinese article. Also, please add WP:CATEGORIES - see what categories are used on en wiki and add similar ones here.
- Also, please double check the name is it "Broadway Circuit." or "Broadway Circuit"?
- The infobox provides yet another name: Suntech International Management Limited
- Which name is correct? Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 06:25, 23 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241223062500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":6,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223062500-Uuueol-20241223055200","replies":["c-Uuueol-20241223065800-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223062500"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
- I’ve added the categories and interlanguage links. As for the name, "Broadway Circuit" is already being used for another article on English Wikipedia, so I had to include the "." to make it distinct. However, the correct name should be "Broadway Circuit," but I’m not sure how to change it. Please let me know if there’s anything else I need to adjust. Thank you! Uuueol (talk) 06:58, 23 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241223065800","author":"Uuueol","type":"comment","level":7,"id":"c-Uuueol-20241223065800-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223062500","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223114600-Uuueol-20241223065800"]}}-->
- @Uuueol I see. The naming issue has already been fixed by other volunteers. Your score should be A or A+ for the globalization class; you can make some extra edits to wikivoyage to ensure similar grade for that course. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 11:46, 23 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241223114600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":8,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223114600-Uuueol-20241223065800","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor: I'm sorry I'm late
I'm taking "Media Trends and Globalization"
1. This is the link to the article translated from English to Korean: [[3]] (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Lookism)
2. This is the link to the article translated from English to Korean: [Korea–Ukraine relations]
218.235.241.133 (talk) 04:45, 20 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241220044500","author":"218.235.241.133","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-218.235.241.133-20241220044500-deadline_2_jisung_choi","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221054500-218.235.241.133-20241220044500"]}}-->
- Dear student. Please remember to sign your posts, otherwise I cannot notify you easily when I reply here.
- I do not see any content recently added to articles you mention, in either English or Korean. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 05:45, 21 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241221054500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221054500-218.235.241.133-20241220044500","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor:
Hello. I'm taking "Media Trends and Globalization"
I've done one extra edit outside of the sandbox, and I've added a reference to an article about 송강호's parasite
Jiseong754 (talk) 05:01, 20 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241220050100","author":"Jiseong754","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Jiseong754-20241220050100-dead_line_3_jisung_choi","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221054800-Jiseong754-20241220050100"]}}-->
- @Jiseong754 Your edit to that article was removed as incorrect.
- I am afraid it is too late for you to complete the assignments for that class; you should have started months ago and completed them on time. Please try again next semester. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 05:48, 21 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241221054800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221054800-Jiseong754-20241220050100","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
[4]https://w.wiki/CUCL Hello professor, this is my extra credit blog. Linlin406 (talk) 05:03, 20 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241220050300","author":"Linlin406","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Linlin406-20241220050300-Extra_creadit_blog\uff1aLIN_AIJIA","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241222092400-Linlin406-20241220050300"]}}-->
- Please submit any blogs on our blog platform Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 09:24, 22 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241222092400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241222092400-Linlin406-20241220050300","replies":["c-Linlin406-20241223060800-Hanyangprofessor2-20241222092400"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
- Hello professor, my blog invitation is not accessible Please send me another invitation, I will give you the homework right now.Thank you！！ Linlin406 (talk) 06:08, 23 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241223060800","author":"Linlin406","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Linlin406-20241223060800-Hanyangprofessor2-20241222092400","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223063200-Linlin406-20241223060800"]}}-->
- @Linlin406 Dear student. I do not have any data for LIN AIJIA, Wikipedia account Linlin406, in my grading spreadsheet. This also means I do not have your email on file (please send me an email and ask to be invited to the blog; do not post your email here).
- However, given that you have no points recorded in my spreadsheet, it appears that you have not completed any in-class activities. The only activity you completed was the Hofstede Project, which means your current score is <10 points. Considering that your main project is unfinished (Wuliangbao Pagoda), I am afraid it is too late for you to complete sufficient tasks to get sufficient score to pass this class this semester.
- You are welcome to try, but there is less than 24 remaining (I may not have time to grade anything after today). I recommend you take my class again next semester, and try to attend the class and complete all assignments on time. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 06:32, 23 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241223063200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223063200-Linlin406-20241223060800","replies":["c-Linlin406-20241223063700-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223063200"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
- Hello professor, I have sent the email Linlin406 (talk) 06:37, 23 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241223063700","author":"Linlin406","type":"comment","level":5,"id":"c-Linlin406-20241223063700-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223063200","replies":[]}}-->
Dear Professor. This is the xls that I exported and analyzed. This is the link, please check. Buryab0ne (talk) 05:59, 20 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241220055900","author":"Buryab0ne","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Buryab0ne-20241220055900-Extra_credit:_World_Value_Survey_country_comparison_--QIAN_ZIYI","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221054900-Buryab0ne-20241220055900"]}}-->
- @Buryab0ne Please post this on your blog for extra credit; it is too late to submit it as a regular project. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 05:49, 21 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241221054900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221054900-Buryab0ne-20241220055900","replies":["c-Buryab0ne-20241222111300-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221054900"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
- I have submitted, thank you！ Buryab0ne (talk) 11:13, 22 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241222111300","author":"Buryab0ne","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Buryab0ne-20241222111300-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221054900","replies":[]}}-->
Dear Professor,
I am currently taking the courses "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis" and "Media Trends and Globalization."
We have completed our final project. This is our article translated from Chinese to English 【1】
This is our article translated from English to Chinese 【2】
This is the city We chose for Wikivoyage, and everything has been completed. Please review it.
Thank you, Professor. Honghaotian (talk) 09:54, 20 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241220095400","author":"Honghaotian","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Honghaotian-20241220095400-Deadline\uff1aHONG_HAOTIAN&LI_MENGCHEN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221055200-Honghaotian-20241220095400"]}}-->
- @Honghaotian Your English article is very good, well done. This is true for both of them.
- But your Chinese article still needs to be improved - see reviewers' comments there. Please try to fix the issues raised there within the next 24-48h. If you are unclear what to do, please ask the Chinese reviewer for more information @Talimu0518 You can also ask for instant help here 维基百科:社群媒體 - 维基百科，自由的百科全书 Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 05:52, 21 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241221055200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221055200-Honghaotian-20241220095400","replies":["c-Talimu0518-20241221071500-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221055200","c-Talimu0518-20241221113800-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221055200","c-Honghaotian-20241221170600-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221055200"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
- Hi Professor,Thanks for contributing to Chinese Wikipedia.
- I recently checked your student's article and noticed some problem from The page.That page seems like writed by Machine Translate and it doesn't looks like similar Chinese.Please rewrite or Re-translate that page.when your work is done please told me so i can accepted your draft. Talimu0518 (talk) 07:15, 21 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241221071500","author":"Talimu0518","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Talimu0518-20241221071500-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221055200","replies":["c-Honghaotian-20241221171000-Talimu0518-20241221071500"]}}-->
- Hello, we have translated the article again. Please check! If you have any further questions, please let us know.Thank you！ Honghaotian (talk) 17:10, 21 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241221171000","author":"Honghaotian","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Honghaotian-20241221171000-Talimu0518-20241221071500","replies":[]}}-->
- Also,Using machine translate to edit Wikipedia pages is prohibited here,Please tole your students don't do it.If we warned that User again and again and he still using machine translate to contributing,He'll be blocked.So Please told them don't to do that,Thank you. Talimu0518 (talk) 11:38, 21 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241221113800","author":"Talimu0518","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Talimu0518-20241221113800-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221055200","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221170200-Talimu0518-20241221113800"]}}-->
- @Talimu0518 Thank you for the response. The students are told to carefully proofread their work (see instructions at User:Piotrus/Ideas for students - Wikipedia ). Sadly, many do not follow them :( Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 17:02, 21 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241221170200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221170200-Talimu0518-20241221113800","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
- Professor, I have made every effort to revise the English to Chinese translation of the article before the deadline. Please check！ Honghaotian (talk) 17:06, 21 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241221170600","author":"Honghaotian","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Honghaotian-20241221170600-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221055200","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221172800-Honghaotian-20241221170600"]}}-->
- @Honghaotian Good, I hope the zh wiki reviewers agree (@Talimu0518?).
- I recommend making some extra credit activity for the Wikivoyage / Wikidata class (for example, add some listings to a city article) to improve your score in this class from B to A. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 17:28, 21 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241221172800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221172800-Honghaotian-20241221170600","replies":["c-Limengchen2777-20241221223400-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221172800","c-Limengchen2777-20241221230100-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221172800","c-Honghaotian-20241229120600-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221172800"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
- Hello, professor. I made changes to Putian. Population introduction, urban area introduction, weather introduction and history section were added. Can I get an A in this way? Limengchen2777 (talk) 22:34, 21 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241221223400","author":"Limengchen2777","type":"comment","level":5,"id":"c-Limengchen2777-20241221223400-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221172800","replies":[]}}-->
- I've also added a map of the area of Putian. Limengchen2777 (talk) 23:01, 21 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241221230100","author":"Limengchen2777","type":"comment","level":5,"id":"c-Limengchen2777-20241221230100-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221172800","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241222092800-Limengchen2777-20241221230100"]}}-->
- @Limengchen2777 Good, but for A please add some listings to another town or make edit to another article; the article on Putian is good enough. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 09:28, 22 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241222092800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":6,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241222092800-Limengchen2777-20241221230100","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
- Ok！I have made additional edits to the Wuzhou Wikivoyage. Can I get an A+? If not, I need to edit a few additional Wikivoyage articles to get an A+? Honghaotian (talk) 12:06, 29 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241229120600","author":"Honghaotian","type":"comment","level":5,"id":"c-Honghaotian-20241229120600-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221172800","replies":[]}}-->
I submitted the Deadline 5 assignment on time; however, I was unable to incorporate Professor's feedback to move it to the mainspace. Therefore, I am resubmitting it here. Please check the link.
(Since I couldn’t reply to the original topic, I am creating a new one instead.)
Thank you for the wonderful class this semester. I hope you have a happy and warm holiday season! SoeunK (talk) 13:12, 20 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241220131200","author":"SoeunK","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-SoeunK-20241220131200-Deadline_5_(supplement)_:_Soeun_Kwon","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221055500-SoeunK-20241220131200"]}}-->
- @SoeunK Good, but I see your article was declined (without any rationale I can see, however) by @Aspere .
- Please ask that reviewer why the declined your work; if they do not reply you can publish your article again.
- After publication, please add the interlanguage (interwiki) link clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button and linking the Chinese article. Also, please add WP:CATEGORIES - see what categories are used on en wiki and add similar ones here. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 05:55, 21 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241221055500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221055500-SoeunK-20241220131200","replies":["c-SoeunK-20241222150100-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221055500"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
- Dear professor
- I publish it again. Here is the link
- Thank you SoeunK (talk) 15:01, 22 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241222150100","author":"SoeunK","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-SoeunK-20241222150100-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221055500","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223035500-SoeunK-20241222150100","c-Jeebeen-20241223040400-SoeunK-20241222150100"]}}-->
- @SoeunK I am afraid the reviewers still do not see your work as ready to be published, and it was declined again. Please ask them for explanation (I do not see it) and then fix whatever they ask you to fix. @Jeebeen
- please note we only have about ~24h for submitting extra credit work; I cannot guarantee that I'll have time to grade on or after XMAS.
- If you made any extra credit work for either class, please send me the link; note that only published and not declined work will count for extra credit. Good luck Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 03:55, 23 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241223035500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223035500-SoeunK-20241222150100","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
- @SoeunK: We would be grateful if you could take into consideration the comments provided in this request. --Jeebeen (talk) 04:04, 23 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241223040400","author":"Jeebeen","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Jeebeen-20241223040400-SoeunK-20241222150100","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223045800-Jeebeen-20241223040400"]}}-->
- @Jeebeen Thank you for pointing me to the review. I agree with it. Dear student @SoeunK, please fix the issues raised if you want your work to be graded well. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 04:58, 23 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241223045800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":5,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223045800-Jeebeen-20241223040400","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I am currently taking the course "Media Trends and Globalization".
This is my finished project: The Long Night.
Thank you,please check! Xuan6699 (talk) 17:46, 20 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241220174600","author":"Xuan6699","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Xuan6699-20241220174600-Deadline7\uff1aXU_YAN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221055600-Xuan6699-20241220174600"]}}-->
- @Xuan6699
- Good progress. To finish, please add the interlanguage (interwiki) link clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button and linking the Chinese article. Also, please add WP:CATEGORIES - see what categories are used on en wiki and add similar ones here Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 05:56, 21 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241221055600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221055600-Xuan6699-20241220174600","replies":["c-Xuan6699-20241221164600-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221055600"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
- It has been added. please check it. thank you, professor. Xuan6699 (talk) 16:46, 21 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241221164600","author":"Xuan6699","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Xuan6699-20241221164600-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221055600","replies":[]}}-->
Dear Professor
I'm taking 'Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis' class. I modified it according to the feedback. This is my draft Yangju. Thank you for your checking. SongHyeonmin2020007129 (talk) 08:11, 21 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241221081100","author":"SongHyeonmin2020007129","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-SongHyeonmin2020007129-20241221081100-Extra_fix:_Hyeonmin_Song","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221170300-SongHyeonmin2020007129-20241221081100"]}}-->
- @SongHyeonmin2020007129 Very good. Your current points for this class are at B. I recommend doing some extra edits to Wikivoyage to improve your score to A. Good luck, Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 17:03, 21 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241221170300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221170300-SongHyeonmin2020007129-20241221081100","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Professor, I edited 40 additional Wikipedia , please check it Bai0926 (talk) 15:34, 21 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241221153400","author":"Bai0926","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Bai0926-20241221153400-Extra_credit_Wikipedia\u2014\u2014BAILINHAN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221171200-Bai0926-20241221153400"]}}-->
- @Bai0926 Please let me know what is the status of your main project for the Globalization class. I have it recorded as "family in South Korea in english" but I am not aware of your work on this project (if you completed that project, please link it here).
- On Wikivoyage, your main project (Taierzhuang) is not well developed. Your current score for that class is D. Please see the review at https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/Talk:Taierzhuang , read it carefully and fix all the issues that the expert reviewer raised . Additionally, you should do the following:
- Please expand the first sentence by adding some more content (2-3 sentences) describing most interesting aspects of this location - tell people why they would want to visit this place, what makes it special.
- Get in section needs listing for main train and intercity bus stations
- Do section should list major local festivals or recurring events
- Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 17:12, 21 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241221171200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221171200-Bai0926-20241221153400","replies":["c-Bai0926-20241221171900-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221171200","c-Bai0926-20241221172200-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221171200"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
- Professor, I don't have the first class on Mondays and Fridays this semester. I only have Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis. But at the beginning of this class, I thought I was going to edit Wikipedia and create an article, so I chose Korean family and submitted the outline. But later I asked you and learned that my homework was to edit Wikitravel, so I didn't continue editing Korean family. In the end, I finished editing Wikitravel and posted a discussion, and also finished editing Wikipedia every month and edited it 80 times more. I am really sorry for not deleting the content of the first class. It was a misunderstanding and wasted your time.This is my second class homework, please check it again Bai0926 (talk) 17:19, 21 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241221171900","author":"Bai0926","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Bai0926-20241221171900-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221171200","replies":[]}}-->
- Sorry I didn't see the last sentence, I will change my Wikivoyage as quickly as possible. Bai0926 (talk) 17:22, 21 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241221172200","author":"Bai0926","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Bai0926-20241221172200-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221171200","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221172400-Bai0926-20241221172200"]}}-->
- @Bai0926 I see. I will move your extra points for this semester from Globalization to Big and Small Data. Your grade for that class is now at B, and if you fix the issues raised, you should be able to get an A. Good luck! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 17:24, 21 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241221172400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221172400-Bai0926-20241221172200","replies":["c-Bai0926-20241221182500-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221172400","c-Bai0926-20241222152900-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221172400"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
- Hello professor, I have carefully read the suggestions in the discussion area and made changes one by one. I added Chinese for each important area and deleted some content that I thought was unnecessary. I added the area and brief introduction of each scenic spot in get in. I wrote some restaurants and hotels according to the popularity of Chinese tourism apps. But unfortunately, Taierzhuang is not a very developed city, so there is almost no nightlife, and there are not many coffee shops and bars. I only filled in two. In addition, I also added transportation content according to the suggestions. Please check it out. I want to get a higher score. In addition to this assignment, can I continue to get extra points by editing Wikipedia?If possible, I would like to continue editing Wikipedia. Looking forward to your reply. Bai0926 (talk) 18:25, 21 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241221182500","author":"Bai0926","type":"comment","level":5,"id":"c-Bai0926-20241221182500-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221172400","replies":[]}}-->
- Hello professor, I edited Wikipedia 30 times in addition to editing my Wikivoage in order to get extra credit. Please check it thank you！ Bai0926 (talk) 15:29, 22 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241222152900","author":"Bai0926","type":"comment","level":5,"id":"c-Bai0926-20241222152900-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221172400","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223035700-Bai0926-20241222152900"]}}-->
- @Bai0926 Good, I have added more points to your Wikivoyage score. You can also get points for the other class that way, but lease note we only have about ~24h for submitting extra credit work; I cannot guarantee that I'll have time to grade on or after XMAS. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 03:57, 23 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241223035700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":6,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223035700-Bai0926-20241222152900","replies":["c-Bai0926-20241224125100-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223035700"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
- Sorry professor, when I saw this message, I found that my grade was already A+, and I didn't continue editing after getting the grade I was satisfied with. But when I woke up this morning, I found that my grade became A, so I edited 70 Wikipedia again, hoping to increase my score through additional editing. I added new topics, but you can also view my edits directly. Bai0926 (talk) 12:51, 24 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241224125100","author":"Bai0926","type":"comment","level":7,"id":"c-Bai0926-20241224125100-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223035700","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241224161800-Bai0926-20241224125100"]}}-->
- @Bai0926 For the Data class, you should try to edit Wikivoyage more than Wikipedia. I'll update your score now with your recent edits Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 16:18, 24 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241224161800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":8,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241224161800-Bai0926-20241224125100","replies":["c-Bai0926-20241224164800-Hanyangprofessor2-20241224161800"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
- Professor, I edited a Wikivoage article and added some content to it, such as a climate map, GPS of transportation hubs and GPS of entertainment venues. Can I get extra points for this? Bai0926 (talk) 16:48, 24 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241224164800","author":"Bai0926","type":"comment","level":9,"id":"c-Bai0926-20241224164800-Hanyangprofessor2-20241224161800","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241224165400-Bai0926-20241224164800"]}}-->
- @Bai0926 Can you change "Temple of Guandi in Guangrao town" into a proper listing with GPS coordinates and add a GPS coordinate for Dongying Science and Technology Museum? Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 16:54, 24 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241224165400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":10,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241224165400-Bai0926-20241224164800","replies":["c-Bai0926-20241224170300-Hanyangprofessor2-20241224165400"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
- yes！I'm done please check it Bai0926 (talk) 17:03, 24 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241224170300","author":"Bai0926","type":"comment","level":11,"id":"c-Bai0926-20241224170300-Hanyangprofessor2-20241224165400","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241225015900-Bai0926-20241224170300"]}}-->
- @Bai0926 I see the second, but what about the first? Where can we find the "Temple of Guandi in Guangrao town"? Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 01:59, 25 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241225015900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":12,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241225015900-Bai0926-20241224170300","replies":["c-Bai0926-20241225033500-Hanyangprofessor2-20241225015900"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
- Sorry I didn't see it professor, it has been changed and a new list has been added in see Bai0926 (talk) 03:35, 25 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241225033500","author":"Bai0926","type":"comment","level":13,"id":"c-Bai0926-20241225033500-Hanyangprofessor2-20241225015900","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241225045100-Bai0926-20241225033500"]}}-->
- @Bai0926 Good, I'll update your score to reflect your activity shortly Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 04:51, 25 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241225045100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":14,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241225045100-Bai0926-20241225033500","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor, I am taking the courses "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis" and "Media Trends and Globalization." Here's my bonus Wikipedia：Luo Zhewen Ma Jiahui Zhang Yunsheng https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E9%87%8C%E5%B0%94%E5%B8%82%E6%94%BF%E5%8E%85 Guoying1 (talk) 16:01, 21 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241221160100","author":"Guoying1","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Guoying1-20241221160100-Extra_credit_blog\uff1aGUO_YING","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221171600-Guoying1-20241221160100"]}}-->
- @Guoying1 Good. Please finish your Wikivoyage article at https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/Yangjiang
- add a short (few sentences) history section
- why there are two maps?
- for festivals, can you add their websites to their listings?
- can you add some more listings for seeing interesting locations?
- Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 17:16, 21 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241221171600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221171600-Guoying1-20241221160100","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221171800-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221171600"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
- PS. Because you skipped the Wikidata segment of that class, your current score for Big and Small Data class is low (at D). You can improve it to B with extra credit work (chose and improve another city guide on Wikivoyage, similar to Yangjiang) Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 17:18, 21 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241221171800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221171800-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221171600","replies":["c-Guoying1-20241222110200-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221171800"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
- Dear Professor, I have corrected Yangjiang https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/Yangjiang, please check, and I have made additional supplements and explanations for Jiamusi, https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/Jiamusi please check. What else can I do to get an A in "Understanding Small Data and Big Data using Wikis" and "Media Trends and Globalization"? " Guoying1 (talk) 11:02, 22 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241222110200","author":"Guoying1","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Guoying1-20241222110200-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221171800","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223035800-Guoying1-20241222110200"]}}-->
- @Guoying1 I will update your grade with your new score. Doing more edits/translations/etc. for either class can raise your grade, but please note we only have about ~24h for submitting extra credit work; I cannot guarantee that I'll have time to grade on or after XMAS Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 03:58, 23 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241223035800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":5,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223035800-Guoying1-20241222110200","replies":["c-Guoying1-20241223040700-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223035800"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
- https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/Yan%27an Dear Professor, I have also added content to the map of Yan'an. Please check it out. I'd like to know what my current score is with these additional edits. Guoying1 (talk) 04:07, 23 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241223040700","author":"Guoying1","type":"comment","level":6,"id":"c-Guoying1-20241223040700-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223035800","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223050000-Guoying1-20241223040700"]}}-->
- @Guoying1 Your score for the Data class should not be around B/B+. You can continue with similar extra work for the next 24h to improve your grade. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 05:00, 23 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241223050000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":7,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223050000-Guoying1-20241223040700","replies":["c-Guoying1-20241223192100-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223050000","c-Guoying1-20241224074400-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223050000"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
- Dear Professor, I have made additional edits for two cities. Please check. May I ask if my current grade can be improved to A+
- https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/Zhangye
- https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/Nyingchi Guoying1 (talk) 19:21, 23 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241223192100","author":"Guoying1","type":"comment","level":8,"id":"c-Guoying1-20241223192100-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223050000","replies":[]}}-->
- Dear Prof. Huang Mei also added content. I wonder if all three additional edits in total will improve my grade to A➕. Hope you can reply, thank you. https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/Huangmei Guoying1 (talk) 07:44, 24 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241224074400","author":"Guoying1","type":"comment","level":8,"id":"c-Guoying1-20241224074400-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223050000","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241224162100-Guoying1-20241224074400"]}}-->
- @Guoying1 Good, I'll update your score Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 16:21, 24 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241224162100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":9,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241224162100-Guoying1-20241224074400","replies":["c-Guoying1-20241224164700-Hanyangprofessor2-20241224162100"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
- https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/Chifeng
- Dear Professor, I made additional edits again. I would like to know whether my grade will remain A➕ after the change of the cut-off grade. Guoying1 (talk) 16:47, 24 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241224164700","author":"Guoying1","type":"comment","level":10,"id":"c-Guoying1-20241224164700-Hanyangprofessor2-20241224162100","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241224165500-Guoying1-20241224164700"]}}-->
- @Guoying1 Your grade should remain A+. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 16:55, 24 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241224165500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":11,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241224165500-Guoying1-20241224164700","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor, I am taking the course "Media Trends and Globalization". This is my translation of Wikipedia for extra credit.
1.https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E4%BA%9A%E6%B4%B2%E9%AA%84%E5%82%B2
2.https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E6%9C%AA%E6%9D%A5%E7%9A%84%E5%86%B2%E5%87%BB Xuan6699 (talk) 17:15, 21 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241221171500","author":"Xuan6699","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Xuan6699-20241221171500-Extra_credit_Wikipedia\uff1aXU_YAN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221172000-Xuan6699-20241221171500"]}}-->
- @Xuan6699 Good. Please make sure to proofread your article carefully; if it is declined due to poor translation, the score will be lower. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 17:20, 21 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241221172000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221172000-Xuan6699-20241221171500","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear professor.
I'm taking 'Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis' class.
I edited the Wikipedia article for extra credit.
Ha-seong Kim
Jecheon International Music & Film Festival
Jecheon
This is my editorial article. Please check, Thank you. :) Parksungeun (talk) 18:31, 21 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241221183100","author":"Parksungeun","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Parksungeun-20241221183100-Extra_credit_Wikipedia_:_Parksungeun","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241222045300-Parksungeun-20241221183100"]}}-->
- @Parksungeun Very good, your grade for that class should be A+ Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 04:53, 22 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241222045300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241222045300-Parksungeun-20241221183100","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello, Professor. These are all the additional blogs I have completed. Please review them.
Thank you, Professor Jiayyyyy (talk) 02:35, 22 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241222023500","author":"Jiayyyyy","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Jiayyyyy-20241222023500-Extra_credit_blog\uff1aJIA_YUAN","replies":[]}}-->
Dear Professor Piotr, Our courses are:Media Trends and Globalization.I am sorry that we missed the deadline, but we have worked hard to revise the article translated from Chinese to English. Thank you for reading. I am really sorry. Here is our link and my team members @Sssnuan Alexk27 (talk) 04:06, 22 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241222040600","author":"Alexk27","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Alexk27-20241222040600-SHAO_JIANUAN&WANG_YIKE_2","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241222045500-Alexk27-20241222040600"]}}-->
- @Alexk27 @Sssnuan As I replied above, please try to fix the issues raised at the top of the article in the orange box. You can ask for additional advice and explanation on live Wikipedia help chat in Chinese language. See places to ask for help listed at the top of the article here: 维基百科:IRC聊天频道 - 维基百科，自由的百科全书 Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 04:55, 22 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241222045500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241222045500-Alexk27-20241222040600","replies":["c-Alexk27-20241222052300-Hanyangprofessor2-20241222045500"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
- Thank you for your reply, I will look it up in Chinese Wikipedia and will correct our problem, thank you. Alexk27 (talk) 05:23, 22 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241222052300","author":"Alexk27","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Alexk27-20241222052300-Hanyangprofessor2-20241222045500","replies":[]}}-->
Dear Professor,Our course is: Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis. I’ve updated the See and Do sections for Garzê into listings and added festivals under Do. The Buy section is also reformatted with more details about local products. A map has been added showing key locations. In the section about Jishou I adjusted the map and modified the exact coordinates. Let me know if anything else needs to be adjusted!@Sssnuan@1eleven0086 Alexk27 (talk) 05:22, 22 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241222052200","author":"Alexk27","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Alexk27-20241222052200-WANG_YIKE&_SHAO_JIANUAN&LIU_YUNXIANG","replies":[]}}-->
Dear Professor,
I translated the English Wikipedia article about Nanjing City Wall Museum for extra credit in my class:
Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis.
Thank you for watching. Alexk27 (talk) 06:26, 22 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241222062600","author":"Alexk27","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Alexk27-20241222062600-extra_credit_Wikipedia_:_WANG_YIKE","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241222094500-Alexk27-20241222062600","c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241222094800-Alexk27-20241222062600"]}}-->
- @Alexk27 Ok. Please format your references (add URLs, Chinese titles, etc) Also, please add the interlanguage (interwiki) link by clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button and link the other language articles to connect them to the original you have translated. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 09:45, 22 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241222094500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241222094500-Alexk27-20241222062600","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
- Please make sure to add references to your article. Please remember that only referenced content can be added to English Wikipedia and only such content will count for credit. The content from Chinese article that has no references needs to be referenced first before being translated. See Wikipedia:Verifiability
- Please carefully check all references one by one to remove errors and to ensure they have metadata information (author, title, publisher, date). Next, if the source is in Chinese (ex. 李鹏《六四日记》), please use both the Chinese and English titles.
- Also, please note that your current score is not sufficient to pass either class (please try to fix issues related to your main projects I've mentioned in reviews above in the last few days, regarding your articles Jishou / Garzê and Mass mobilization to zh Hangzhou Cultural Radio Television Group from zh to en. You can complete more extra credit projects but there is only 1-2 days left before I will be finalizing the grades. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 09:48, 22 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241222094800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241222094800-Alexk27-20241222062600","replies":["c-Alexk27-20241223053000-Hanyangprofessor2-20241222094800"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
- Hello Professor Piotr, I have modified the cross-language links of Nanjing City Wall Museum, Hangzhou Cultural Radio and Television Group and Mass Mobilization. Our Wikivoyage: Ganzi and Jishou were also also modified the map, in and out of the city bus, festival list, etc. according to your requirements yesterday, and completed it according to the format. Thank you for wasting so much time for us, we really tried very hard to modify it. Alexk27 (talk) 05:30, 23 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241223053000","author":"Alexk27","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Alexk27-20241223053000-Hanyangprofessor2-20241222094800","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223063700-Alexk27-20241223053000","c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223063800-Alexk27-20241223053000"]}}-->
- @Alexk27 It is good that you are trying.
- I see you removed the links to articles on zh wiki. Instead, you should link them using this tool: If a term exists in Chinese Wikipedia and has an article there, but not on English Wikipedia, please use Template:Interlanguage link to link it.
- I will update your score to reflect your activities, but please note that edits which introduce errors or do not improve content significantly will not receive many extra credit points Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 06:37, 23 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241223063700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223063700-Alexk27-20241223053000","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
- PS. For the Globalization class, did you complete any blogs? If so, please link them here, I am not able to locate them Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 06:38, 23 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241223063800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223063800-Alexk27-20241223053000","replies":["c-Alexk27-20241223065600-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223063800","c-Alexk27-20241223080000-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223063800","c-Alexk27-20241223081100-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223063800","c-Alexk27-20241223081600-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223063800"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
- Because I was invited to the wrong blogger link, so these are my blogs. Thanks for your reply, I will now edit my en wiki. Alexk27 (talk) 06:56, 23 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241223065600","author":"Alexk27","type":"comment","level":5,"id":"c-Alexk27-20241223065600-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223063800","replies":[]}}-->
- Thank you for taking the time to look at our assignment. I have been working hard to revise my en Wikipedia. Alexk27 (talk) 08:00, 23 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241223080000","author":"Alexk27","type":"comment","level":5,"id":"c-Alexk27-20241223080000-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223063800","replies":[]}}-->
- I am sorry to tell you this, but I have already revised the assignments for Ganzi and Jishou in the course Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis. Since I am already a senior, it would be great if you could look at our revised records and revise my grades for me. Thank you. Alexk27 (talk) 08:11, 23 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241223081100","author":"Alexk27","type":"comment","level":5,"id":"c-Alexk27-20241223081100-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223063800","replies":[]}}-->
- This is Ganzi and Jishou, this is my en Wikipedia 1, .2 Alexk27 (talk) 08:16, 23 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241223081600","author":"Alexk27","type":"comment","level":5,"id":"c-Alexk27-20241223081600-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223063800","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223120600-Alexk27-20241223081600"]}}-->
- @Alexk27 I have graded your blogs for Globalization class (thank you for the links, it was indeed a wrong blog), but right now you still need points to compensate for activities you missed in class in order to get into the passing (D) range.
- I do not see any recent revisions to Jishou.
- In Garzê, please expand the first sentence by adding some more content (2-3 sentences) describing most interesting aspects of this location - tell people why they would want to visit this place, what makes it special.
- Please reorganize your sections according to the order in Wikivoyage:Article skeleton templates/Sections – Travel guide at Wikivoyage (see how it looks in a good article like Ansan – Travel guide at Wikivoyage )
- Convert all POIs mentioned in Scenic spots to proper listings, like the one above it (with GPS coordinates).
- Festivals should have a dedicated subsection under Do (see how it is done in Ansan, again).
- Note that even after fixing this and completing the main assignment, you do not have sufficient points to pass due to lack of in-class activity and homework. You can try to improve another city article to get extra credit, but please note there is very little time remaining. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 12:06, 23 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241223120600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":6,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223120600-Alexk27-20241223081600","replies":["c-Alexk27-20241223144100-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223120600","c-Alexk27-20241223151300-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223120600"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
- Thank you for your reply. I have revised the content about ganzi. Please check it. I will complete the Wikivoyage of other cities in a moment. Please wait. Thank you. Alexk27 (talk) 14:41, 23 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241223144100","author":"Alexk27","type":"comment","level":7,"id":"c-Alexk27-20241223144100-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223120600","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223150700-Alexk27-20241223144100"]}}-->
- @Alexk27 Please move history and climate under heading, where they should be lower level subsections. The scenic spots section is not merged into see. For festivals, please add URLs to their pages, and information when and where they happen, so tourists can find them. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 15:07, 23 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241223150700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":8,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223150700-Alexk27-20241223144100","replies":["c-Alexk27-20241223153500-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223150700","c-Alexk27-20241223155200-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223150700","c-Alexk27-20241224024800-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223150700"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
- I have modified Garzê as you requested. Alexk27 (talk) 15:35, 23 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241223153500","author":"Alexk27","type":"comment","level":9,"id":"c-Alexk27-20241223153500-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223150700","replies":[]}}-->
- @Hanyangprofessor2 Dear professor, thank you for taking the time to reply to me. I have been working hard on revising it, and I will be on the plane home in a few hours. I am already a senior, so it may be very necessary to pass it, otherwise I may delay graduation in the future. Of course, if there is anything else that needs me to revise, please let me know. Thank you for reading. Alexk27 (talk) 15:52, 23 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241223155200","author":"Alexk27","type":"comment","level":9,"id":"c-Alexk27-20241223155200-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223150700","replies":[]}}-->
- Dear professor, hello, because I have to catch a flight, I may not be able to add extra tasks now. I don't know if what I have done now is enough to modify my grade. Please. Although I am embarrassed to say this, I don't want to fail to graduate, please. Alexk27 (talk) 02:48, 24 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241224024800","author":"Alexk27","type":"comment","level":9,"id":"c-Alexk27-20241224024800-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223150700","replies":[]}}-->
- @Hanyangprofessor2Hello professor, this is an extra Wikivoyage I completed: Wuhu, I hope you can check it out. This is very disturbing to you, because this is my senior year, so I am very nervous. Can this situation change my grades in two courses?(After you also read my blogs) Alexk27 (talk) 15:13, 23 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241223151300","author":"Alexk27","type":"comment","level":7,"id":"c-Alexk27-20241223151300-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223120600","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241224162300-Alexk27-20241223151300","c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241224162500-Alexk27-20241223151300"]}}-->
- @Alexk27 I believe I replied by email. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 16:23, 24 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241224162300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":8,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241224162300-Alexk27-20241223151300","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
- PS. You should try to complete one more Wikipedia translation to receive a passing grade for the Globalization course Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 16:25, 24 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241224162500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":8,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241224162500-Alexk27-20241223151300","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor,
I am taking the courses "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis" and "Media Trends and Globalization."Here are all the blogs I have done. The extra points blogs I have completed are also here please check them.
Thank you
Syouziiye (talk) 08:48, 22 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241222084800","author":"Syouziiye","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Syouziiye-20241222084800-Extra_credit_Blog\uff1aSHU_YING","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241222095100-Syouziiye-20241222084800"]}}-->
- @Syouziiye Good; your grade for both classes is A/A+ Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 09:51, 22 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241222095100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241222095100-Syouziiye-20241222084800","replies":["c-Syouziiye-20241224134300-Hanyangprofessor2-20241222095100"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
- Extra Wikipedia translation assignments are linked here 1，2.Please check. Thank you Syouziiye (talk) 13:43, 24 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241224134300","author":"Syouziiye","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Syouziiye-20241224134300-Hanyangprofessor2-20241222095100","replies":[]}}-->
Hello Professor
This is the main project for Media Trends and Globalization.1，2，3
This is the main project for Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis.1
This is Extra credit Blog.1,2
This is Extra credit Wikipedia translate article.1,2
wikivoyage:3 Babaibiaobin (talk) 09:30, 22 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241222093000","author":"Babaibiaobin","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Babaibiaobin-20241222093000-Final_and_Extra_credit\uff1agaoxiaoxia","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241222095100-Babaibiaobin-20241222093000"]}}-->
- @Babaibiaobin Good; your grade for both classes is A/A+ Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 09:51, 22 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241222095100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241222095100-Babaibiaobin-20241222093000","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear professor.
I'm taking 'Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis' class. I edited the Wikipedia article for extra credit.
Pyeongtaek station
Pyeongtaek University
Pyeongtaek
This is my editorial article. Please check, Thank you. :) Dbinni (talk) 10:23, 22 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241222102300","author":"Dbinni","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Dbinni-20241222102300-Extra_credit_Wikipedia_:_Dabin_Kim","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223044800-Dbinni-20241222102300"]}}-->
- @Dbinni Good, but please remember that for Wikipedia edits, all content needs to be referenced per Wikipedia:Verifiability and our class policy, otherwise it can be removed by reviewers and does not count for class credit. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 04:48, 23 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241223044800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223044800-Dbinni-20241222102300","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear professor.
I'm taking 'Media Trends and Globalization' and 'Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis' class.
I have completed my contributions for this week's project(regularly edit): Wikipidia, Wikivoyage and would appreciate it if you could review my edits when you have a moment. I’m seeking feedback to ensure everything is on track and to earn the extra credit for the month.
Thank you for your guidance throughout the semester. :) Dbinni (talk) 10:36, 22 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241222103600","author":"Dbinni","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Dbinni-20241222103600-Extra_edit_:_Dabin_Kim","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223044900-Dbinni-20241222103600"]}}-->
- @Dbinni Overall, your grade is close to A+ for both classes (just please add references to unreferenced content added to Wikipedia if you want it to count for your score) Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 04:49, 23 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241223044900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223044900-Dbinni-20241222103600","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor, I am taking the courses "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis" and "Media Trends and Globalization." Here are 4 of my blogs. The extra points blogs I have completed are also here. please check them. Thank you Wuwenhao19960507 (talk) 12:09, 22 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241222120900","author":"Wuwenhao19960507","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Wuwenhao19960507-20241222120900-Extra_credit_Blog\uff1aWU_WENHAO","replies":[]}}-->
Dear Professor, I am taking the courses "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis" and "Media Trends and Globalization." Here are all the blogs I have done. The two extra credit blogs are also included in this link. please check them. Thank you！ Cuicuizan (talk) 12:55, 22 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241222125500","author":"Cuicuizan","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Cuicuizan-20241222125500-Extra_credit_Blogs\uff1aCUI_ZAN","replies":[]}}-->
Dear Professor,
I am currently taking the courses "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis" and "Media Trends and Globalization." I’ve included all the blogs I’ve completed, including the extra credit ones. Please let me know if there’s anything I need to revise. Thank you! Uuueol (talk) 12:55, 22 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241222125500","author":"Uuueol","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Uuueol-20241222125500-Extra_credit_Blog\uff1aGUAN_YUE","replies":[]}}-->
Dear Professor:
I'm taking Media Trends and Globalization. I've completed the both article.
This is my finished project:
KOR -> ENG : '사회문화적 진화' Here is the link.
KOR -> ENG : '근대화 이론' Here is the link.
Thank you for checking.
송여근 (talk) 13:27, 22 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241222132700","author":"\uc1a1\uc5ec\uadfc","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-\uc1a1\uc5ec\uadfc-20241222132700-Deadline7:_Yeogeun_Song","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223045100-\uc1a1\uc5ec\uadfc-20241222132700"]}}-->
- @송여근 I am afraid your content was declined from publication by the reviewer due to reasons explained in their edit summaries: 근대화 이론: Revision history - 위키백과 , 근대화 이론: Revision history - 위키백과 . If you can fix those issues, you can republish your work but please note we have only 24h for submission of extra credit work; I may not have time to review work submitted later
- See also the warning and advice you got at User talk:Song Yeo-geun - Wikipedia Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 04:51, 23 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241223045100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223045100-\uc1a1\uc5ec\uadfc-20241222132700","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
老师您好，这是我的 Wiki 了解小数据和大数据作业https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/Penglai数据”的作业“媒体趋势和全球化https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Hanyangdaxue/%E6%B2%99%E7%9B%92作业，谢谢 Hanyangdaxue (talk) 07:16, 23 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241223071600","author":"Hanyangdaxue","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Hanyangdaxue-20241223071600-Deadline\uff1aLYU_YANGCHENG","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223111800-Hanyangdaxue-20241223071600"]}}-->
- @Hanyangdaxue Your main project seems to have been declined again, this time by reviewer @Iokseng . Please ask him why and try to fix the issues ASAP. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 11:18, 23 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241223111800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223111800-Hanyangdaxue-20241223071600","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I am currently taking the courses "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis" and "Media Trends and Globalization." I’ve included all the blogs I’ve completed, including the extra credit ones. Please let me know if there’s anything I need to revise. Thank you! Shuo1103 (talk) 07:24, 23 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241223072400","author":"Shuo1103","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Shuo1103-20241223072400-Extra_credit_blog\uff1aZHANG_MINGSHUO","replies":[]}}-->
Hello, teacher. I am your student, LYU YANGCHENG2021008895. I went to your office to ask for your test score in the last class. You said it was 80 points. I just saw the results you sent. Teacher, did you make a mistake in the score? Teacher, please review it again Hanyangdaxue (talk) 07:35, 23 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241223073500","author":"Hanyangdaxue","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Hanyangdaxue-20241223073500-Deadline","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223111700-Hanyangdaxue-20241223073500"]}}-->
- @Hanyangdaxue Unfortunately, you have skipped most activities for the data class. Your main project (Penglai https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/Penglai) is unfinished, and you have very little activity in class recorded for that class and no evidence of weekly homework. The good news is that it is still possible to get a passing grade, but you need to complete your activities as soon as possible; I cannot be sure I can grade any work during or after XMAS. To finish Penglai, do the following: 1) add a short written subsection on climate and another on history (a few sentences each) to 'understand' 2) add at least five more listings, including converting the 'speedboat wharf' entry into listing 3) for do section, add a subsection on local festivals. Then I recommend doing extra credit editing - for example, try to create an entry on Longkou (but you can also choose any other town). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 11:17, 23 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241223111700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223111700-Hanyangdaxue-20241223073500","replies":["c-Hanyangdaxue-20241223171400-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223111700"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
- Dear teacher, is this ok? Thank you.https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/Penglai Hanyangdaxue (talk) 17:14, 23 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241223171400","author":"Hanyangdaxue","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Hanyangdaxue-20241223171400-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223111700","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241224162600-Hanyangdaxue-20241223171400"]}}-->
- @Hanyangdaxue I believe I replied by email. You need to improve one more city article for the Data class to have points to pass. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 16:26, 24 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241224162600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241224162600-Hanyangdaxue-20241223171400","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I am currently taking the courses "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis" and "Media Trends and Globalization." I’ve included all the blogs I’ve completed, including the extra credit ones. Please let me know if there’s anything I need to revise. Thank you! SHENZIHE (talk) 07:46, 23 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241223074600","author":"SHENZIHE","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-SHENZIHE-20241223074600-Extra_credit_blog:SHENZIHE","replies":[]}}-->
Hello Hanyangprofessor2,
I wanted to let you know that I just tagged Yangqi acupoint for deletion, because it's a redirect from an article title to a namespace that's not for articles.
If you don't want Yangqi acupoint to be deleted, you can contest this deletion, but don't remove the speedy deletion tag from the top.
You can leave a note on my talk page if you have questions. Thanks!
Message delivered via the Page Curation tool, on behalf of the reviewer.
C F A 13:51, 23 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241223135100","author":"CFA","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-CFA-20241223135100-Speedy_deletion_nomination_of_Yangqi_acupoint","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223150800-CFA-20241223135100"],"displayName":"C"}}-->
- @CFA That's fine, and I think the draftified mess could go as well, but let's wait a few days on the off chance the student who wrote it will try to improve that article Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 15:08, 23 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241223150800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241223150800-CFA-20241223135100","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor,
I am taking the courses "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis" and "Media Trends and Globalization." These are all the Wikipedia and wikivoyage pages I have translated additionally.
Wikipedia：1.2.3.4.5.6.7.8.
wikivoyage：1.
Thank you!
Tyuni06 (talk) 17:11, 23 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241223171100","author":"Tyuni06","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Tyuni06-20241223171100-Extra_credit_Wikipedia_and_wikivoyage\uff08TANG_YINI\uff09","replies":["c-Tyuni06-20241223171400-Tyuni06-20241223171100"]}}-->
- 6. Tyuni06 (talk) 17:14, 23 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241223171400","author":"Tyuni06","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Tyuni06-20241223171400-Tyuni06-20241223171100","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241224162900-Tyuni06-20241223171400"]}}-->
- @Tyuni06 I believe your current score should reflect your extra credit work, well done Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 16:29, 24 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241224162900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241224162900-Tyuni06-20241223171400","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello professor, my name is Zhang Bingyi, student number 2022011867, Wikipedia name is Zhangzhang111, and my blog has been sent to the blog via Sociology of Daily Life (2023) not 2024! Remember to check there! I've also written a lot of Wikipedia articles that have been well received by reviewers.
I wonder why my score is 0. Is it because of attendance? If so, I have submitted my leave request to the professor's email. .....but the professor has not read the mail, so please confirm! Thank you. Zhangzhang111 (talk) 17:19, 23 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241223171900","author":"Zhangzhang111","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Zhangzhang111-20241223171900-Questions_about_achievements","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241224163100-Zhangzhang111-20241223171900"]}}-->
- @Zhangzhang111 Your score should be updated now Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 16:31, 24 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241224163100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241224163100-Zhangzhang111-20241223171900","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello professor,I am QIAN ZIYI(2022022551) the core and final score of the course "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis" is zero. Is there anything wrong with it and what can I do to make up for it?This is my link.I'm sorry to bother you, but thank you very much. Buryab0ne (talk) 21:56, 23 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241223215600","author":"Buryab0ne","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Buryab0ne-20241223215600-Deadline_2","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241224163400-Buryab0ne-20241223215600"]}}-->
- @Buryab0ne You need 10 more points for a passing grade in that class. Your Pu'er article needs a proper banner, and more listings - at least 5, preferably 10. The three entries under 'do' belong to 'see'. Instead, for see, add information on Festivals. For good measure, I recommend extra credit work improving another town article.
- See Wikivoyage:Where you can stick it – Travel guide at Wikivoyage for some ideas on what do add to see and do Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 16:34, 24 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241224163400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241224163400-Buryab0ne-20241223215600","replies":["c-Buryab0ne-20241225045100-Hanyangprofessor2-20241224163400"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
- Professor, I modified Pu'er first, please check！ Buryab0ne (talk) 04:51, 25 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241225045100","author":"Buryab0ne","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Buryab0ne-20241225045100-Hanyangprofessor2-20241224163400","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241225055200-Buryab0ne-20241225045100"]}}-->
- @Buryab0ne Please convert Pu'er Tea Culture Exhibition Area to a listing, with a GPS coordiantes and URl to their official page. In the 'do', move Pu'er National Park to see and convert it itnto a listing. Theo ther two listings should be moved to 'go next, and I am pretty sure "Western Union Rainforest: Western Union is a county in Pu'er City" is incorrect - counties in China do not have English names. Convert festivals into listings, with GPS coordinates and links to their official pages (in URLs).
- And I asked you to add preferably 10 listings to see, I am still not seeing that many. This town has a population of 2.5m. Ansan which is 1/5 of the size has nearly 10 times as many listings. Surely you can find something more for tourist to see there? Ansan – Travel guide at Wikivoyage
- Also, your article needs banner. User:Hanyangprofessor2 – Travel guide at Wikivoyage
- When this is all finished, your project will receive max score of 35 which will give you a passing grade. Good luck, Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 05:52, 25 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241225055200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241225055200-Buryab0ne-20241225045100","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor,
I am LI LINLIN, taking 'Understanding Small Data and Big Data' course.
According to your suggestions in the email:
1. I solved the problems raised by the reviewers in the main project, replied to them on the talk page, and checked the usage of "burqin" in the article again.Please check here
2. I also edited the bonus article again, added some listings, and addressed questions raised by other reviewers of this article. Please check here
Hope u have a nice day~ Leeinm (talk) 00:47, 24 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241224004700","author":"Leeinm","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Leeinm-20241224004700-Extra_credit_to_improve_grade-LI_LINLIN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241224163500-Leeinm-20241224004700"]}}-->
- @Leeinm Good, if you received suggestion by email, you should have received my response there Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 16:35, 24 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241224163500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241224163500-Leeinm-20241224004700","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
[5]https://w.wiki/_qXs3 Hello, professor. This is my extra extra homework to improve my grades. I hope it will be useful. Thank you for your hard work. I hope you have a good day. Linlin406 (talk) 03:22, 24 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241224032200","author":"Linlin406","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Linlin406-20241224032200-Extra_points_for_homework_LIN_AIJIA","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241224163600-Linlin406-20241224032200"]}}-->
- @Linlin406 I replied by email. Your wiki drafts need much improvemnt, I am afraid Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 16:36, 24 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241224163600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241224163600-Linlin406-20241224032200","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor:
I'm taking "Small and Big Data with Wikis" class.
On the Chinese Wikivoyage, I expanded the content of Saipan and created an entry for Penglai.
1)saiban link:https://zh.wikivoyage.org/w/index.php?title=%E5%A1%9E%E7%8F%AD%E5%B2%9B&diff=200708&oldid=199758
2) penglai link（（Created Entries）：https://zh.wikivoyage.org/wiki/%E8%93%AC%E8%8E%B1
In addition, on the English Wikivoyage, I expanded the contents of the these entries: Jiuzhaigou, Zhangjiajie, Nanchong, Nanjing, Xi'an, guilin,xiamen，sanya.And I created an entry about Sanya Phoenix International Airport.
3）Jiuzhaigou link:https://en.wikivoyage.org/w/index.php?title=Jiuzhaigou_Nature_Reserve&diff=4993509&oldid=4940827
4)Zhangjiajie link: https://en.wikivoyage.org/w/index.php?title=Zhangjiajie&diff=4993521&oldid=4791615
5) Nanchong link: https://en.wikivoyage.org/w/index.php?title=Nanchong&diff=4993527&oldid=4988267
6) Nanjing link: https://en.wikivoyage.org/w/index.php?title=Nanjing&diff=4993547&oldid=4988347
7) Xi'an link: https://en.wikivoyage.org/w/index.php?title=Xi%27an&diff=4993585&oldid=4974579
8) guilin link:https://en.wikivoyage.org/w/index.php?title=Guilin&diff=4993809&oldid=4890176
9) xiamen link:https://en.wikivoyage.org/w/index.php?title=Xiamen&diff=4993814&oldid=4969323
10)sanya link:https://en.wikivoyage.org/w/index.php?title=Sanya&diff=4993821&oldid=4931705
11）Sanya Phoenix International Airport link（Created Entries）: https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/Sanya_Phoenix_International_Airport
Can I get extra points for the above work? Can these works be A+?Thank you!Laoxinyi (talk) 03:44, 24 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241224034400","author":"Laoxinyi","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Laoxinyi-20241224034400-Extra_points\uff1aLAOXINYI","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241224163900-Laoxinyi-20241224034400"]}}-->
- @Laoxinyi I see you are working hard. I am not sure if airport articles are accepted on Wikivoyage. Much of the content you add (history, geography) is more encyclopedic than tourist-guide style. Most useful and simplest edits would be addng more listings for see and do. I'll update your score to reflect your efforts. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 16:39, 24 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241224163900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241224163900-Laoxinyi-20241224034400","replies":["c-Laoxinyi-20241225004600-Hanyangprofessor2-20241224163900","c-Laoxinyi-20241225020700-Hanyangprofessor2-20241224163900"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
- @Hanyangprofessor2Can I get points for editing on the Chinese Wikipedias? Laoxinyi (talk) 00:46, 25 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241225004600","author":"Laoxinyi","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Laoxinyi-20241225004600-Hanyangprofessor2-20241224163900","replies":[]}}-->
- @Hanyangprofessor2 I expanded the following content on English Wikivoyage:
- 1) Harbin：https://en.wikivoyage.org/w/index.php?title=Harbin&diff=4994216&oldid=4985333
- 2) Qingdao：https://en.wikivoyage.org/w/index.php?title=Qingdao&diff=4994229&oldid=4976795
- 3) Shenyang:https://en.wikivoyage.org/w/index.php?title=Shenyang&diff=4994245&oldid=4917258
- 4) Wuhan:https://en.wikivoyage.org/w/index.php?title=Wuhan&diff=4994252&oldid=4956873
- 5) Zhengzhou:https://en.wikivoyage.org/w/index.php?title=Zhengzhou&diff=4994261&oldid=4896444
- Can the above work increase the score? Merry Christmas to you! Thank you for your hard work this semester! Laoxinyi (talk) 02:07, 25 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241225020700","author":"Laoxinyi","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Laoxinyi-20241225020700-Hanyangprofessor2-20241224163900","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241225032500-Laoxinyi-20241225020700"]}}-->
- @Laoxinyi Yes, editing Chinese Wikipedia is ok, and your Wikivoyage edits can give you cred too. However, remember that Wikivoyage is not Wikipedia and it does not need long sections on history or such. Best activity is to add listings to 'see' and 'do' sections', as well as 'get in' for transportation. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 03:25, 25 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241225032500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241225032500-Laoxinyi-20241225020700","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor,
I am taking the courses "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis" and "Media Trends and Globalization." These are all the Wikipedia and wikivoyage pages I have translated additionally.
I'm sorry that for some reasons the reading content edited is still in the review process
The content of wikivoyage has been revised as requested. This is the modified link：JINCHENG
Thank you! SHENZIHE (talk) 04:54, 24 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241224045400","author":"SHENZIHE","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-SHENZIHE-20241224045400-Extra_credit_Wikipedia_and_wikivoyage_SHENZIHE","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241224164200-SHENZIHE-20241224045400"]}}-->
- @SHENZIHE Your score should've been updated earlier today Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 16:42, 24 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241224164200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241224164200-SHENZIHE-20241224045400","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear teacher, this is my revised homework. Do you think it is okay? Thank you, teacher.https://en.wikivoyage.org/w/index.php?title=Penglai&action=submit Hanyangdaxue (talk) 05:35, 24 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241224053500","author":"Hanyangdaxue","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Hanyangdaxue-20241224053500-Final_bonus_points:_LYU_YANGCHENG","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241224164200-Hanyangdaxue-20241224053500"]}}-->
- @Hanyangdaxue As replied earlier, you need to improve more Wikivoyage content to generate extra credit Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 16:42, 24 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241224164200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241224164200-Hanyangdaxue-20241224053500","replies":["c-Hanyangdaxue-20241225105200-Hanyangprofessor2-20241224164200"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
- Teacher, please review it!https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/Penglai This is another city improvement entry https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/Weihai#Eat Teacher, I'm sorry for opening my email late and disturbing your time! Thank you! LYU YANGCHENG 2021008895 Hanyangdaxue (talk) 10:52, 25 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241225105200","author":"Hanyangdaxue","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Hanyangdaxue-20241225105200-Hanyangprofessor2-20241224164200","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241225132000-Hanyangdaxue-20241225105200"]}}-->
- @Hanyangdaxue Good. I will update your score. Can you fix the errors in Weihai GPS listings that have been made by someone else? I looked at some added to Weihai and they are wrong - many are in water. That cannot be correct. Happiness Gate, Cat Head Mountain and Vienna Hotel. There are also two listings for beaches that do not seem to be on the edge of the sea but inland - can you check them? Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 13:20, 25 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241225132000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241225132000-Hanyangdaxue-20241225105200","replies":["c-Hanyangdaxue-20241225154400-Hanyangprofessor2-20241225132000"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
- Teacher, I have rechecked and revised it. Please review it! Thank you for your help and encouragement! I will work harder in the future! Thank you for your hard work! I wish you a happy day! https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/Weihai#Eat Hanyangdaxue (talk) 15:44, 25 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241225154400","author":"Hanyangdaxue","type":"comment","level":5,"id":"c-Hanyangdaxue-20241225154400-Hanyangprofessor2-20241225132000","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241226010300-Hanyangdaxue-20241225154400"]}}-->
- @Hanyangdaxue Good job adding more listings, but it would be nice if you could fix the GPS errors for the listings I mentioned above. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 01:03, 26 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241226010300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":6,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241226010300-Hanyangdaxue-20241225154400","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
[6]https://w.wiki/_qXoh Hello, professor. This is my extra homework. I hope I can improve my score. Thank you. Linlin406 (talk) 06:00, 24 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241224060000","author":"Linlin406","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Linlin406-20241224060000-Extra_homework_LIN_AIJIA","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241224164200-Linlin406-20241224060000"]}}-->
- See previous reply or email Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 16:42, 24 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241224164200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241224164200-Linlin406-20241224060000","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Professor, I have made an additional 70 edits to Wikipedia. Please take a look. I hope this will help improve my score. Finally, Merry Christmas! Bai0926 (talk) 06:28, 24 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241224062800","author":"Bai0926","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Bai0926-20241224062800-Extra_points\uff1aBAI_LINHAN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241224164300-Bai0926-20241224062800"]}}-->
- @Bai0926 Yes, it has been scored Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 16:43, 24 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241224164300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241224164300-Bai0926-20241224062800","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
https://en.wikivoyage.org/w/index.php?title=Penglai&action=submitTeacher, please review my paper! Thank you for your hard work! Teacher, I will be very happy if you can give me a passing score! Thank you! Merry Christmas to you! Student LYU YANGCHENG2021008895 Hanyangdaxue (talk) 06:32, 24 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241224063200","author":"Hanyangdaxue","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Hanyangdaxue-20241224063200-LYU_YANGCHENG","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241224164300-Hanyangdaxue-20241224063200"]}}-->
- See above Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 16:43, 24 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241224164300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241224164300-Hanyangdaxue-20241224063200","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
[7]https://w.wiki/CWGFHello, professor. This is my extra homework. I hope I can improve my score. Thank you so much. Linlin406 (talk) 07:26, 24 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241224072600","author":"Linlin406","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Linlin406-20241224072600-Extra_homework_LIN_AIJIA_2","replies":[]}}-->
[8]https://w.wiki/CWHZ Hello professor. This is my extra homework. I hope I can improve my score. Thank you so much. Linlin406 (talk) 08:07, 24 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241224080700","author":"Linlin406","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Linlin406-20241224080700-Extra_homework_LIN_AIJIA_3","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241224164400-Linlin406-20241224080700"]}}-->
- See above Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 16:44, 24 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241224164400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241224164400-Linlin406-20241224080700","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor, . My article translation (Chinese to English) has been completed and has been published, and you said there were no other errors. But I was wondering because I saw that the final grade was F, I also completed all the tasks and even did the extra credit(Fang Lina,Yang Qi-dong )I'm confused about the grade,so I wanted to ask.This is my article(Chiang Zhongzheng's Diary).This grade is very important to me, so I had to bother you.
I have followed your instructions and submitted the article for review on the Wikivoyage page for Mohe.The link.
Professor, I’m sorry to bother you. Wishing you a Merry Christmas! Zzzxxxrrr (talk) 11:04, 24 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241224110400","author":"Zzzxxxrrr","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Zzzxxxrrr-20241224110400-ZHANG_XIAORUI","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241224164400-Zzzxxxrrr-20241224110400"]}}-->
- I believe I replied to you already above Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 16:44, 24 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241224164400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241224164400-Zzzxxxrrr-20241224110400","replies":["c-Zzzxxxrrr-20241225121100-Hanyangprofessor2-20241224164400"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
- Thank you very much, Professor. I have completed the revisions for the Mohe assignment on Wikivoyage as per your requirements and have applied for a review of the article. However, I have not yet received a response from the administrators. Do you think this could improve my grade?[9] Zzzxxxrrr (talk) 12:11, 25 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241225121100","author":"Zzzxxxrrr","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Zzzxxxrrr-20241225121100-Hanyangprofessor2-20241224164400","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241225132900-Zzzxxxrrr-20241225121100"]}}-->
- @Zzzxxxrrr Very good. I've asked admins to comment there, and I left a small feedback myself. Good job; I'll update your score tomorrow after I check comments there Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 13:29, 25 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241225132900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241225132900-Zzzxxxrrr-20241225121100","replies":["c-Zzzxxxrrr-20241226060900-Hanyangprofessor2-20241225132900","c-Zzzxxxrrr-20241226063400-Hanyangprofessor2-20241225132900"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
- Thank you very much, Professor! Zzzxxxrrr (talk) 06:09, 26 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241226060900","author":"Zzzxxxrrr","type":"comment","level":5,"id":"c-Zzzxxxrrr-20241226060900-Hanyangprofessor2-20241225132900","replies":[]}}-->
- Thank you very much, Professor. I have made revisions to my article based on the feedback and added new content. Please review it, thank you![10] Zzzxxxrrr (talk) 06:34, 26 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241226063400","author":"Zzzxxxrrr","type":"comment","level":5,"id":"c-Zzzxxxrrr-20241226063400-Hanyangprofessor2-20241225132900","replies":[]}}-->
Merry Christmas professor.I have modified my article as requested, please check。Thank you.1 MUYW (talk) 11:57, 24 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241224115700","author":"MUYW","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-MUYW-20241224115700-wikivoyage-muye","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241224164400-MUYW-20241224115700"]}}-->
- @MUYW I believe I replied here or by email Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 16:44, 24 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241224164400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241224164400-MUYW-20241224115700","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hi professor, this is my extra assignment to improve my marks additionally.
Swallowed Star Wangtao626 (talk) 11:59, 24 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241224115900","author":"Wangtao626","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Wangtao626-20241224115900-WANG_TAO","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241224164500-Wangtao626-20241224115900","c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241224164600-Wangtao626-20241224115900","c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241224164900-Wangtao626-20241224115900"]}}-->
- @Wangtao626 Please connect it to the original zh wiki article here
- Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 16:45, 24 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241224164500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241224164500-Wangtao626-20241224115900","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
- Additionally, this article seems very underlinked. If a term exists in Chinese Wikipedia and has an article there, but not on English Wikipedia, please use Template:Interlanguage link to link it.
- It also needs a better receptions section with reviews and awards to estabilish Wikipedia:Notability of the work. Most of your article is a plot summary, which is not very useful for Wikipedia (see WP:ALLPLOT). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 16:46, 24 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241224164600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241224164600-Wangtao626-20241224115900","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
- PS. I'll update your score shortly Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 16:49, 24 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241224164900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241224164900-Wangtao626-20241224115900","replies":["c-Wangtao626-20241224165500-Hanyangprofessor2-20241224164900","c-Wangtao626-20241224172700-Hanyangprofessor2-20241224164900"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
- Hello Professor, I have completed the links. I would like to inquire that the articles, weekly edits, blogs and extra credit blogs have all been completed, but the grade is still not good enough to get a B. Wangtao626 (talk) 16:55, 24 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241224165500","author":"Wangtao626","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Wangtao626-20241224165500-Hanyangprofessor2-20241224164900","replies":[]}}-->
- Merry Christmas, Professor., some of the issues raised earlier have been addressed.
- Here are the links to my two articles.Link 1，Link 2
- Here is my blog entry.Link3
- Here's my Wikipedia edit log.Link4
- I also turned in some points. But I only just got a B for my score.
- Thanks for checking it out and have a great day. Wangtao626 (talk) 17:27, 24 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241224172700","author":"Wangtao626","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Wangtao626-20241224172700-Hanyangprofessor2-20241224164900","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241225020100-Wangtao626-20241224172700","c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241225020200-Wangtao626-20241224172700"]}}-->
- @Wangtao626 B is correct given the total amount of points. Your score for in class activity and blog is lower, particularly for the blogs due to use of AI generated content, as explained in the syllabus. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 02:01, 25 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241225020100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241225020100-Wangtao626-20241224172700","replies":["c-Wangtao626-20241225065600-Hanyangprofessor2-20241225020100"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
- Hello Professor. I have revised the blog. Hopefully it will get marks.
- https://globsoc2024.blogspot.com/search/label/WANGTAO Wangtao626 (talk) 06:56, 25 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241225065600","author":"Wangtao626","type":"comment","level":5,"id":"c-Wangtao626-20241225065600-Hanyangprofessor2-20241225020100","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241225073500-Wangtao626-20241225065600"]}}-->
- Ok, but extra credit blogs at this point are worth a tiny amount of credit. Extra points are gained by wiki editing., Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 07:35, 25 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241225073500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":6,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241225073500-Wangtao626-20241225065600","replies":["c-Wangtao626-20241225094300-Hanyangprofessor2-20241225073500"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
- OK, I made additional editing additions.
- https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Special:Contributions/Wangtao626&target=Wangtao626&offset=&limit=500 Wangtao626 (talk) 09:43, 25 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241225094300","author":"Wangtao626","type":"comment","level":7,"id":"c-Wangtao626-20241225094300-Hanyangprofessor2-20241225073500","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241225133300-Wangtao626-20241225094300"]}}-->
- @Wangtao626 I'll add your points shortly, good. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 13:33, 25 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241225133300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":8,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241225133300-Wangtao626-20241225094300","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
- You can try to translate extra credit article or articles, but the final grade confirmation is tomorrow, and I will not be able to grade work submitted later on that day.  Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 02:02, 25 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241225020200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241225020200-Wangtao626-20241224172700","replies":["c-Wangtao626-20241225203400-Hanyangprofessor2-20241225020200"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
- Hello professor, I am sorry to trouble you. This is additional editing and supplement. I wish you a happy life.
- link Wangtao626 (talk) 20:34, 25 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241225203400","author":"Wangtao626","type":"comment","level":5,"id":"c-Wangtao626-20241225203400-Hanyangprofessor2-20241225020200","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241226010500-Wangtao626-20241225203400"]}}-->
- @Wangtao626 Good, but much of the text you have added is unreferenced. Please make sure to add references to your article. Please remember that only referenced content can be added to English Wikipedia and only such content will count for credit. The content from Chinese article that has no references can to be referenced first for extra credit too. See Wikipedia:Verifiability Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 01:05, 26 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241226010500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":6,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241226010500-Wangtao626-20241225203400","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear professor：
I made additional edits to Pingyang's Wikivoyage, hoping to get extra points.
Please check it. YZY2233 (talk) 14:55, 24 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241224145500","author":"YZY2233","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-YZY2233-20241224145500-Extra_homework_YUE_ZIYI","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241224165000-YZY2233-20241224145500"]}}-->
- @YZY2233 Very good, but your score for both classes should be around A+ already, no? Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 16:50, 24 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241224165000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241224165000-YZY2233-20241224145500","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor,
I have completed the article on the Wuliang Pagoda. Please review it at your convenience. Thank you so much.
https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wuliangbao_Pagoda Linlin406 (talk) 16:27, 24 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241224162700","author":"Linlin406","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Linlin406-20241224162700-Wuliang_Pagoda_Lin_Aijia","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241224165100-Linlin406-20241224162700","c-Linlin406-20241224195500-Linlin406-20241224162700"]}}-->
- @Linlin406 It is published on the wrong Wikipedia, and it is far from finished, as it is still mostly unreferenced. As such, this cannot generate any credit Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 16:51, 24 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241224165100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241224165100-Linlin406-20241224162700","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
- https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wuliang_Pagoda&wvprov=sticky-header Hello, Professor, this is my revised article. Please take a look at it. Thank you so much. Linlin406 (talk) 19:55, 24 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241224195500","author":"Linlin406","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Linlin406-20241224195500-Linlin406-20241224162700","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241225020300-Linlin406-20241224195500"]}}-->
- @Linlin406 Good job on progressing to a publishable state. There are still many problems that need to be fixed for the grade for this to reach max score (Which is 25 for the main project). I have added an interlanguage link - in the future translations, make sure to do it yourself (by clicking "add interlanguage link" button and connecting the article to the original, here, zh wiki) 南充白塔
- Next, you need to fix blue links in the article (see https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Manual_of_Style/Linking ). Many links in your article are to English Wikipedia but are formatted as external links. I fixed one here: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wuliang_Pagoda&diff=1265078595&oldid=1265040430 Please fix the others, If a topic exists in Chinese but not English, please link it using this tool: Template:Interlanguage link Also, please add WP:CATEGORIES - see what categories are used on zh wiki and add similar ones here. Finally, please carefully check all references one by one to remove errors and to ensure they have metadata information (author, title, publisher, date) - your references should be formatted using citation templates (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Citation_templates).
- Please note that you need more points to get a passing grade. See emails for details. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 02:03, 25 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241225020300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241225020300-Linlin406-20241224195500","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Teacher, please review it!https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/Penglai This is another city improvement entry https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/Weihai#Eat Teacher, I'm sorry for opening my email late and disturbing your time! Thank you! LYU YANGCHENG 2021008895 Hanyangdaxue (talk) 10:50, 25 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241225105000","author":"Hanyangdaxue","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Hanyangdaxue-20241225105000-LYU_YANGCHENG_2","replies":[]}}-->
https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/Weihai#Eat Teacher, I have rechecked and revised it. Please review it! Thank you for your help and encouragement! I will work harder in the future! Thank you for your hard work! I wish you a happy day! Hanyangdaxue (talk) 15:46, 25 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241225154600","author":"Hanyangdaxue","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Hanyangdaxue-20241225154600-LYU_YANGCHENG_3","replies":[]}}-->
Professor,"Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis" I've added as much space as I can to this class, maybe I can add some points？orz... Here's the https://en.m.wikivoyage.org/wiki/Pu%27er#Do. Please check it out. Have a nice day. [[User:Buryab0ne|Buryab0ne][ (talk) 04:18, 26 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241226041800","author":"Buryab0ne","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Buryab0ne-20241226041800-QIAN_ZIYI","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241226045200-Buryab0ne-20241226041800"]}}-->
- @Buryab0ne Please format POIs (points of interest) you have added (From 5.Pu'er Tea Culture Square. ) as proper listings, like we practiced in class many, many times. See Wikivoyage:Listings – Travel guide at Wikivoyage
- Then add some listings to another city. This should give you sufficient credit to pass Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 04:52, 26 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241226045200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241226045200-Buryab0ne-20241226041800","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear professor：
I made additional edits to Ningde Wikivoyage, hoping to get extra points.
Please check it. Limengchen2777 (talk) 10:36, 29 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241229103600","author":"Limengchen2777","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Limengchen2777-20241229103600-Extra_homework_LIMENGCHEN","replies":[]}}-->
Dear professor：
I made additional edits to Wuzhou Wikivoyage, hoping to get extra points.
Please check it.Thank you! Honghaotian (talk) 11:53, 29 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241229115300","author":"Honghaotian","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Honghaotian-20241229115300-Extra_homework:HONG_HAOTIAN","replies":[]}}-->
Dear Professor，I am taking the courses "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis" and "Media Trends and Globalization."
I would like to improve my grades in these two courses, so for the article translation tasks, I have completed four additional articles,（Xu Shuzhen，Wujiaquan，Li Family Fist，Erlongquan） making a total of six extra credit items.
For the Wikivoyage task, I have completed my basic task on Mohe and requested the administrator to review the article. Based on the feedback from both the administrator and yourself, I have made the necessary revisions. Please kindly review the updated article. Additionally, I have done extra work by supplementing content on Ganzhou, and this is reflected in my editing record.
I have also completed the survey you posted on LMS and have sent it to your email. I am wondering if this can help improve my grades in these two courses.
Thank you very much, and I wish you a Happy New Year in advance! Zzzxxxrrr (talk) 16:24, 29 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241229162400","author":"Zzzxxxrrr","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Zzzxxxrrr-20241229162400-Extra_homework:ZHANG_XIAORUI","replies":[]}}-->
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