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Hello professor. I am a student in this class (Everyday Life and Social Structure)。I have joined the dashboard system. and Completed training tasks. Ask the professor to check. Hanyuanyuan613 (talk) 06:58, 9 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240309065800","author":"Hanyuanyuan613","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Hanyuanyuan613-20240309065800-Deadline_1(Week2)HANYUANYUAN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240315235500-Hanyuanyuan613-20240309065800"]}}-->
@Hanyuanyuan613 Well done! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here23:55, 15 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240315235500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240315235500-Hanyuanyuan613-20240309065800","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello, Professor. I am a student in Everyday Life and Social Structure.I have joined the dashboard system.and completed the training.Please check my assignment . Thank you for your time and guidance. Orange-1203 (talk) 07:30, 9 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240309073000","author":"Orange-1203","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Orange-1203-20240309073000-Deadline_1(Week2)CHENZHITONG","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316012900-Orange-1203-20240309073000"]}}-->
@Orange-1203 Well done! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here01:29, 16 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240316012900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316012900-Orange-1203-20240309073000","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello, Professor. I am a student in this class (Introduction to Information Sociology) and (Collective Intelligence in Practice: Understanding Wikipedia). I attended the training, you can check it out via this link.Thank you! Yangpeifu (talk) 08:54, 9 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240309085400","author":"Yangpeifu","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Yangpeifu-20240309085400-Deadline_1(Week2)YANGPEIFU","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316013000-Yangpeifu-20240309085400"]}}-->
Well done! --Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here01:30, 16 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240316013000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316013000-Yangpeifu-20240309085400","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello, Professor. I am a student of your three classes (Everyday Life and Social Structure, Introduction to Information Sociology and Collective Intelligence and Wikipedia).
@Rachel.zrq Well done! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here01:30, 16 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240316013000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316013000-Rachel.zrq-20240309122100","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Please check and have a wonderful day! 왕예화 (talk) 03:17, 10 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240310031700","author":"\uc655\uc608\ud654","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-\uc655\uc608\ud654-20240310031700-Deadline_1(Week2)WANG_YIHUA","replies":["c-\uc655\uc608\ud654-20240310044900-\uc655\uc608\ud654-20240310031700","c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316013100-\uc655\uc608\ud654-20240310031700"]}}-->
The screenshot of the training is here. 왕예화 (talk) 04:49, 10 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240310044900","author":"\uc655\uc608\ud654","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-\uc655\uc608\ud654-20240310044900-\uc655\uc608\ud654-20240310031700","replies":[]}}-->
@왕예화: Well done! --Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here01:31, 16 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240316013100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316013100-\uc655\uc608\ud654-20240310031700","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Please check it. Thank you!TMXX0818 (talk) 04:15, 10 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240310041500","author":"TMXX0818","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-TMXX0818-20240310041500-Deadline_1(Week2)_-_LI_MENGRU","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316013100-TMXX0818-20240310041500"]}}-->
@TMXX0818 Well done! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here01:31, 16 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240316013100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316013100-TMXX0818-20240310041500","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Good afternoon, professor.
I have completed over ten edits on Wikipedia. Please check.
Have a nice day!TMXX0818 (talk) 04:21, 10 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240310042100","author":"TMXX0818","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-TMXX0818-20240310042100-Weekly_editing_-_LI_MENGRU","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316022600-TMXX0818-20240310042100"]}}-->
@TMXX0818: Good, and thank you for linking your contributions. Please note that Facebook is not considered a reliable source (it is ok to cite official Facebook accounts, but they should be replaced by non-social media sources if possible). But it was still very good to add references to the unreferenced article - good job. Note I've added the code to display references in the proper place: see here. I recommend using this script to see what references are good or not (bad ones are marked in red, weak are marked in yellow: User:Headbomb/unreliable.js. We will be learning how to install the script in class in the near future, but if you want to get a head start, go to your preferences>gadgets>Install scripts without having to manually edit JavaScript files and then try install the Headbomb script. --Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:26, 16 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240316022600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316022600-TMXX0818-20240310042100","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Please check. I would appreciate if the professor could give advice or correction. Zhongxxin (talk) 04:32, 10 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240310043200","author":"Zhongxxin","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Zhongxxin-20240310043200-Deadline_1(Week2)ZHONG_XIN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316022700-Zhongxxin-20240310043200"]}}-->
@Zhongxxin Well done, all looks good! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:27, 16 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240316022700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316022700-Zhongxxin-20240310043200","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Please check it. Thank you! CHENG SHIYI (talk) 04:49, 10 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240310044900","author":"CHENG SHIYI","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-CHENG_SHIYI-20240310044900-Deadline_1(Week2)CHENG_SHIYI","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316023000-CHENG_SHIYI-20240310044900"]}}-->
@CHENG SHIYI: Well done! --Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:30, 16 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240316023000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316023000-CHENG_SHIYI-20240310044900","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello, Professor.
I am a student of Collective Intelligence course.
I have enrolled in our course,and also completed the training.
Please check it. Thank you!AYAO32269 (talk) 06:42, 10 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240310064200","author":"AYAO32269","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-AYAO32269-20240310064200-Deadline_1(Week2)_ZHANG_LINYUE","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316023000-AYAO32269-20240310064200"]}}-->
@AYAO32269 Good job! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:30, 16 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240316023000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316023000-AYAO32269-20240310064200","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello, Professor.
I am a student of Collective Intelligence course.
I have enrolled in our course https://outreachdashboard.wmflabs.org/users/1eleven0086 and also completed the training https://dashboard.wikiedu.org/training/students
Please check it. Thank you! 1eleven0086 (talk) 06:52, 10 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240310065200","author":"1eleven0086","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-1eleven0086-20240310065200-Deadline_1(Week2)LIU_YUNXIANG","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316024800-1eleven0086-20240310065200"]}}-->
@1eleven0086: Good job! --Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:48, 16 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240316024800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316024800-1eleven0086-20240310065200","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Hello, Professor. I am a student of Collective Intelligence course.
I completed Wikipedia training and enrolled in the dashboard system.
Please check it. Thank you! Leeyj0401 (talk) 06:57, 10 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240310065700","author":"Leeyj0401","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Leeyj0401-20240310065700-Deadline_1_(Week_2)_Lee_yunjoo","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316024800-Leeyj0401-20240310065700"]}}-->
@Leeyj0401 Well done! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:48, 16 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240316024800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316024800-Leeyj0401-20240310065700","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Hello professor. I am a student in this class (Everyday Life and Social Structure)。I have joined the dashboard system. and Completed training tasks. Ask the professor to check. Eunbini(talk) 06:58, 10 March 2024 (UTC) Eunbini (talk) 07:57, 10 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240310075700","author":"Eunbini","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Eunbini-20240310075700-Deadline1(Week_2)_Jang_Eunbin","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316025500-Eunbini-20240310075700"]}}-->
@Eunbini: Well done!--Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:55, 16 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240316025500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316025500-Eunbini-20240310075700","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hi professor. I am student of your class, Everyday Life and Social Structure. I have joined the dashboard system and completed the Wikipedia:Training/For students. I also eddited 2 pages in wikipedia! Please check them! Thank you! https://outreachdashboard.wmflabs.org/courses/Hanyang_University/Sociology_of_Everyday_Life_(2024)/students/articles/Shinseongmin1917Shinseongmin1917 (talk) 08:18, 10 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240310081800","author":"Shinseongmin1917","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Shinseongmin1917-20240310081800-Deadline1_(Week_2)_Shin_Seongmin","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316030600-Shinseongmin1917-20240310081800"]}}-->
For edits here and here, please add references. We will be learning how to do so in a class soon, but I see you already know how to do this. In your next edits, please add references, otherwise the content you have added ma be removed as unreferenced (see Wikipedia:Verifiability). The reference you added here should be converted to a footnote - ask me in class or during office hours how to do so if you need help.
But as I said - very good job! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:06, 16 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240316030600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316030600-Shinseongmin1917-20240310081800","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello, Professor.I am a student of Course Everyday Life and Social Structure and Course Collective Intelligence in Practice.I have completed the Wikipedia:Training/For students and enrolled in the courses. Please check it!Thank you! Han77720 (talk) 10:15, 10 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240310101500","author":"Han77720","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Han77720-20240310101500-Deadline1(Week_2)LIU_RUOHAN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316033000-Han77720-20240310101500"]}}-->
@Han77720: Very good! --Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:30, 16 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240316033000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316033000-Han77720-20240310101500","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello, Professor.I am a student of Course Everyday Life and Social Structure.I have completed the Wikipedia:Training/For students and enrolled in the courses. Please check it!Thank you! !Wsw1357 (talk) 11:37, 10 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240310113700","author":"Wsw1357","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Wsw1357-20240310113700-Deadline1(Week_2)WANG_SIWEN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316033200-Wsw1357-20240310113700"]}}-->
@Wsw1357 A good start! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:32, 16 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240316033200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316033200-Wsw1357-20240310113700","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello professor. I am a student in this class (Everyday Life and Social Structure)。I have joined the dashboard system. and completed the training. Ask the professor to check. MouFengcoo (talk) 11:45, 10 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240310114500","author":"MouFengcoo","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-MouFengcoo-20240310114500-Deadline_1_(Week_2)QIU_PENGYU","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316033300-MouFengcoo-20240310114500"]}}-->
@MouFengcoo: Looks good! --Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:33, 16 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240316033300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316033300-MouFengcoo-20240310114500","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Hello, professor? I'm Lee Jiyoon, taking collective intelligence.
I have completed both Wikipedia training and registered on the dashboard.
Please check. Thank you!
Jiyoon Leee (talk) 12:38, 10 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240310123800","author":"Jiyoon Leee","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Jiyoon_Leee-20240310123800-Deadline_1_(Week_2)_Lee_jiyoon","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316033300-Jiyoon_Leee-20240310123800"]}}-->
@Jiyoon Leee Looks good! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:33, 16 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240316033300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316033300-Jiyoon_Leee-20240310123800","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello Professor. I am a student studying Everyday Life and Social Structure. I completed additional training to earn extra credits, including Special topics/How-to refreshers/Exercises/Discussions/Additional resources. Please check my homework. Thank you for your time and guidance. 220.74.81.4 (talk) 12:44, 10 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240310124400","author":"220.74.81.4","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-220.74.81.4-20240310124400-Deadline1(Week_2)WANG_SIWEN_2","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316033700-220.74.81.4-20240310124400"]}}-->
Dear Wang Siewn. You forgot to log in. To complete the task, please log in and sign your post. Edits made without logging in are not counted for our course as they are not tied to your account. --Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:37, 16 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240316033700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316033700-220.74.81.4-20240310124400","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello Professor.I am a student of Course Everyday Life and Social Structure.I have completed Wikipedia training and dashboard registration.Please check it!Thank you! 유신예 (talk) 14:14, 10 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240310141400","author":"\uc720\uc2e0\uc608","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-\uc720\uc2e0\uc608-20240310141400-Deadline_1(Week2)LIU_XINRUI","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316033700-\uc720\uc2e0\uc608-20240310141400"]}}-->
@유신예 Good job! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:37, 16 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240316033700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316033700-\uc720\uc2e0\uc608-20240310141400","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Professor, I would like to select 王白渊 as the Wiki article for an “Introduction to Information Sociology”.I want to choose this "Eggy Party" that needs to be expanded as the wiki article for my "Collective Intelligence and Wikipedia", is it okay? If it’s too little, can I add another one? Yangpeifu (talk) 05:46, 11 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240311054600","author":"Yangpeifu","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Yangpeifu-20240311054600-Wiki_article","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316033900-Yangpeifu-20240311054600"]}}-->
@Yangpeifu: “Introduction to Information Sociology” does not have a wiki assignment, although wiki edits can be used for extra credits. The topics you selected seem good, please talk to me after class and we will record them in the spreadsheet. --Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:39, 16 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240316033900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316033900-Yangpeifu-20240311054600","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello professor. I'm a student of Everyday Life and Social Structure. I took all the required training and enrolled in the course. please check it here. thank you. Cookinu (talk) 05:55, 11 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240311055500","author":"Cookinu","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Cookinu-20240311055500-Deadline1(Week2)_Kwon_Jaeeun","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316034000-Cookinu-20240311055500"]}}-->
@Cookinu Good job! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:40, 16 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240316034000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316034000-Cookinu-20240311055500","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Deadline1(Week2) - Sociology of Everyday Life - CHENG SIYU
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Hello professor. I'm CHENG SIYU, a student of Sociology of Everyday Life. I have completed training and confirmed registration for the dashboard system.[2]Please review, thank you. Csiiiyu (talk) 06:14, 11 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240311061400","author":"Csiiiyu","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Csiiiyu-20240311061400-Deadline1(Week2)_-_Sociology_of_Everyday_Life_-_CHENG_SIYU","replies":["c-Csiiiyu-20240313152500-Csiiiyu-20240311061400"]}}-->
I also did additional Korean language training for extra credit in here, please check it out. Csiiiyu (talk) 15:25, 13 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240313152500","author":"Csiiiyu","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Csiiiyu-20240313152500-Csiiiyu-20240311061400","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316034200-Csiiiyu-20240313152500"]}}-->
Well done! --Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:42, 16 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240316034200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316034200-Csiiiyu-20240313152500","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Hi professer Piotr K. I am a student of course Everyday Life and Social Structure. I completed Wikipedia:Traning/For students and enrolled in our course at dashboard system. Also, I did additional training in Korean at 위키백과:길라잡이 for extra credit. I additionally completed the section of Discussions/Additional resources and Special Topics(“contributing images and media files” , “translating articles”)and as many of the Exercises as I can. Please check my wikipedia assignment and my extra credit. Thank you. Kimseoeun2023079825 (talk) 06:16, 11 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240311061600","author":"Kimseoeun2023079825","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Kimseoeun2023079825-20240311061600-Deadline_1(week_2)_Kim_Seo_Eun","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316035000-Kimseoeun2023079825-20240311061600"]}}-->
@Kimseoeun2023079825 Good. Please include a screenshot showing that you completed those activities for extra credit or implement what you learned in practice by contributing useful images to Wikimedia Commons. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:50, 16 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240316035000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316035000-Kimseoeun2023079825-20240311061600","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Please check it. thank you! Ckdduq0919 (talk) 07:51, 11 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240311075100","author":"Ckdduq0919","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Ckdduq0919-20240311075100-Deadline_1(week_2)_Changyeop_Jung","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316035100-Ckdduq0919-20240311075100"]}}-->
@Ckdduq0919: Very good! --Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:51, 16 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240316035100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316035100-Ckdduq0919-20240311075100","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Hello, I'm Kim Yeonjun. I've completed training[3] and joining the dashboard [4]
please check it. thanks professor.
(I hope you understand that I used Instagram because the picture didn't go up well)
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@Kim1357 Ok, but please sign again. Your signature should display your username - look at the comments by other students for examples Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:46, 16 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240316044600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316044600-Kim1357-20240311092900","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello professor, I'm Chaehyun Lee who is taking 'Everyday Life and Social Structure'. and I have completed Deadline 1 (Week 2).[Basic],[How to refreshers],[5]. so please check it out. Thank you very much. Chaekyo (talk) 12:54, 11 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240311125400","author":"Chaekyo","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Chaekyo-20240311125400-Deadline_1(Week_2)_Chaehyun_LEE","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316044600-Chaekyo-20240311125400"]}}-->
@Chaekyo: Good job! --Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:46, 16 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240316044600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316044600-Chaekyo-20240311125400","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Deadline 1(Week 2) LI YULUN(Collective Intelligence and Wikipedia)
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Hello, professor. I'm LIYULUN.I have completed Wikipedia training and registered dashboards. Please check LIYULUN (talk) 13:09, 11 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240311130900","author":"LIYULUN","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-LIYULUN-20240311130900-Deadline_1(Week_2)_LI_YULUN\uff08Collective_Intelligence_and_Wikipedia\uff09","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316044700-LIYULUN-20240311130900"]}}-->
@LIYULUN Well done! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:47, 16 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240316044700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316044700-LIYULUN-20240311130900","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello professor, I have completed the Wikipedia:Training/For students and have additionally completed enrollment in our course dashboard, which you can see verified images of here.
Also, since the registration for the extra class has not been confirmed yet, I am not currently registered in the LMS for the course, so I cannot see the announcement.
If you have already been invited to blog for our course, please let me know!
For all others, I will handle other tasks once extra registration is confirmed, thank you! Soongki (talk) 14:25, 11 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240311142500","author":"Soongki","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Soongki-20240311142500-Deadline_1(Week_2)_Soongki_Kim","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316044800-Soongki-20240311142500"]}}-->
@Soongki: Well done. If you provided email for our spreadsheet, then you should be able to access our blog. Pleae let me know if there are any issues - you can stop by my office too. --Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:48, 16 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240316044800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316044800-Soongki-20240311142500","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Hello, Professor. I am a student of Collective Intelligence and Wikipedia.
I've completed my first and second weeks of weekly Wikipedia edits, totaling over twenty edits recorded.Hoping to get some extra points.Please check:[6]
I would appreciate if the professor could give advice or correction. Zhongxxin (talk) 15:46, 11 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240311154600","author":"Zhongxxin","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Zhongxxin-20240311154600-Weekly_wiki_edits-ZHONG_XIN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316045000-Zhongxxin-20240311154600"]}}-->
@Zhongxxin Good job. I see you are editing Chinese Wikipedia; that's very good but please remember that half of the weekly edits should be done on English Wikipedia. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:50, 16 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240316045000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316045000-Zhongxxin-20240311154600","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello professor, I'm ZHANG QI who is taking 'Everyday Life and Social Structure' and ‘Collective Intelligence in Practice’. And I have completed Deadline 1 (Week 2).
I received the Everyday Life and Social Structure course yesterday, so I apologize for not completing my previous assignments and attendance.
Please check it. Thanks! ZHANGQI1066 (talk) 00:58, 12 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240312005800","author":"ZHANGQI1066","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-ZHANGQI1066-20240312005800-Deadline_1(Week_2)_ZHANG_QI","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316045000-ZHANGQI1066-20240312005800"]}}-->
@ZHANGQI1066: Well done! --Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:50, 16 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240316045000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316045000-ZHANGQI1066-20240312005800","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Muqing112233 (talk) 03:30, 12 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240312033000","author":"Muqing112233","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Muqing112233-20240312033000-2024_spring_collective_intelligence_week2_Task","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316045100-Muqing112233-20240312033000"]}}-->
@Muqing112233 Good job! Your recent edits seem good as well (adding captions). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:51, 16 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240316045100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316045100-Muqing112233-20240312033000","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello, Professor. I'm a student of "Collective Intelligence in Practice" and "Introduction to Information Sociology" course, soganan. soganan. I'm not up to date with the course additions, but I've finished the week2 video study https://dashboard.wikiedu.org/training/students and homepage creation and editing, here's my homepage: please check it out, thank you! SHAO JIANUAN (talk) 04:26, 12 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240312042600","author":"Sssnuan","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Sssnuan-20240312042600-Deadline_1(Week_2)Soganan\/Shao_Jianuan","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316045400-Sssnuan-20240312042600"],"displayName":"please"}}-->
@Sssnuan Good job! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:54, 16 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240316045400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316045400-Sssnuan-20240312042600","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello, Professor. My name is SHAOJIANUAN and I have edited the article "NINGBO". Please check, thank you.Ningbo: Revision history - Wikipedia SHAO JIANUAN (talk) 04:42, 12 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240312044200","author":"Sssnuan","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Sssnuan-20240312044200-Additional_editing_SHAOJIANUAN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316045500-Sssnuan-20240312044200"],"displayName":"SHAO JIANUAN"}}-->
@Sssnuan Good start. To make your edits better, please add references next time you edit Wikipedia to your edit here and elsewhere. Content we add to Wikipedia should be referenced - see Wikipedia:Verifiability . We will be learning how to add references in class shortly. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:55, 16 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240316045500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316045500-Sssnuan-20240312044200","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello, Professor! i’m a student of'Everyday Life and Social Structure'. my name is WEN JIAYAO.I have completed all modules of the basics and joined the course. Please check and see if there is anything else I can do. Thank you! Wjyy1212 (talk) 07:58, 12 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240312075800","author":"Wjyy1212","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Wjyy1212-20240312075800-Deadline_1(week_2)","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316045600-Wjyy1212-20240312075800"]}}-->
@Wjyy1212: Well done! --Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:56, 16 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240316045600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316045600-Wjyy1212-20240312075800","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Dear professor, my name is machenxiao,My student number is 2020093790,I completed my Dashboard system.
And I also applied for the course 정보사회학입문, but I haven’t registered it in LMS .
This is my homepage, professor please check https://outreachdashboard.wmflabs.org/users/Mcx8202229Mcx8202229 (talk) 10:10, 13 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240313101000","author":"Mcx8202229","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Mcx8202229-20240313101000-Deadline_1_Ma_Chenxiao","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316061700-Mcx8202229-20240313101000"]}}-->
@Mcx8202229 Well done! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here06:17, 16 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240316061700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316061700-Mcx8202229-20240313101000","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello Professer!I'm a student of'Everyday Life and Social Structure'.I have completed Deadline 1.Please check it.Thank you. Liangyiqiao2004 (talk) 08:41, 12 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240312084100","author":"Liangyiqiao2004","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Liangyiqiao2004-20240312084100-Deadline_1_Liang_Yiqiao","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316061800-Liangyiqiao2004-20240312084100"]}}-->
@Liangyiqiao2004 Good job! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here06:18, 16 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240316061800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316061800-Liangyiqiao2004-20240312084100","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello Professor. I am Li Haochang. My group member is Han Yuanyuan. Our Chinese translation into English is this (because the Chinese content is a bit sparse, we will also add it after it is translated into English.). The English translation into Chinese is this.
thank you professor Lihaochang678 (talk) 11:28, 12 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240312112800","author":"Lihaochang678","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Lihaochang678-20240312112800-Deadline_2_(Week_3)LI_HAOCHANG\u3001HANYUANYUAN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316062000-Lihaochang678-20240312112800"]}}-->
@Lihaochang678: Well done. I have added your project to our spreadsheet. Please add it to the dashboard and let me know who else is in your group. --Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here06:20, 16 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240316062000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316062000-Lihaochang678-20240312112800","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor, I have finished my weekly editing.Please check, thank you!AYAO32269 (talk) 14:49, 12 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240312144900","author":"AYAO32269","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-AYAO32269-20240312144900-Extra_editing--ZHANG_LINYUE","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316062200-AYAO32269-20240312144900"]}}-->
@AYAO32269 Good job adding references here. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here06:22, 16 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240316062200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316062200-AYAO32269-20240312144900","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Collective Intelligence and Wikipedia Deadline 1(Week 2):ZHANG ZEHUA
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@ZHANG0822ZHThis looks very good! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here06:23, 16 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240316062300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316062300-ZHANG0822ZH-20240313043600","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Hello, professor. I am a student of your class, Everyday Life and Social Structure. I have completed training for students
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[https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User_talk:Kim_younggyun/talk_page_tutorial&action=history} and enrolled in our course
at dashboard [8]
I also did additional training in Korean at 위키백과:길라잡이 for extra credit.
Please check my wikipedia assignment and my extra credit. Thank you.--Kim younggyun (talk) 18:55, 14 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240314185500","author":"Kim younggyun","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Kim_younggyun-20240314185500-Deadline1(Week2)_Kim_younggyun","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316063000-Kim_younggyun-20240314185500"]}}-->
@Kim younggyun Good job! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here06:30, 16 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240316063000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316063000-Kim_younggyun-20240314185500","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Hello, professor. I am a student of your class, Everyday Life and Social Structure. I have completed training for students and enrolled in your dashboard system. please check. Chaeyeong09 (talk) 03:13, 15 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240315031300","author":"Chaeyeong09","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Chaeyeong09-20240315031300-Deadline1(Week2)_Lee_chaeyeong","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316063200-Chaeyeong09-20240315031300"]}}-->
@Chaeyeong09 Well done. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here06:32, 16 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240316063200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316063200-Chaeyeong09-20240315031300","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Hello professor, I'm Sieon Choi. taking collective intelligence. I completed training and enrolled dashboard.
thank you! Choisieon (talk) 04:13, 15 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240315041300","author":"Choisieon","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Choisieon-20240315041300-Deadline_1(week_2)_Si_Eon_Choi","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316063900-Choisieon-20240315041300"]}}-->
@Choisieon Well done! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here06:39, 16 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240316063900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316063900-Choisieon-20240315041300","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Hello professor, I have completed this week's assignment. Please take a look, here is the link. Jzhdylb (talk) 05:08, 15 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240315050800","author":"Jzhdylb","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Jzhdylb-20240315050800-Deadline_1(week_2)_FAN_XINRU","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316063900-Jzhdylb-20240315050800"]}}-->
@Jzhdylb Good! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here06:39, 16 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240316063900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316063900-Jzhdylb-20240315050800","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hi Piotrus, please advise your students to put more thoughts when commenting on the Village Pump. (zh:Special:Diff/81899480/81901449) These short snippets do not contribute much to the discussions there. Mys_721tx (talk) 05:15, 15 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240315051500","author":"Mys 721tx","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Mys_721tx-20240315051500-Class_activities","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316064400-Mys_721tx-20240315051500"],"displayName":"Mys_721tx"}}-->
@Mys 721tx Thank you for your feedback. I was unable to review some of those in class since I do not speak Chinese and cannot translate their comments to English in classroom quickly. Having reviewed them, they do not seem wrong - many seem constructive to me? However, I'd appreciate further feedback. I am now posting the content of class activities I am asking my students to do at User:Hanyangprofessor2#Collective_intelligence - feel free to suggest tweaks, rewordings, new content, and anything else! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here06:44, 16 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240316064400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316064400-Mys_721tx-20240315051500","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello, Professor. I am a student in this class (Introduction to Information Sociology) and (Collective Intelligence in Practice: Understanding Wikipedia). I attended the training, you can check it out via this https://imgur.com/a/94f9ix1.
and registered for course Collective Intelligence and Wikipedia~
Thank you Zhangzhang111 (talk) 05:29, 15 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240315052900","author":"Zhangzhang111","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Zhangzhang111-20240315052900-Deadline1\uff08week2\uff09ZHANG_BINGYI","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316064700-Zhangzhang111-20240315052900"]}}-->
@Zhangzhang111 Good job! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here06:47, 16 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240316064700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316064700-Zhangzhang111-20240315052900","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Hello, professor. I am a student of your class, Everyday Life and Social Structure. I have completed training for students and enrolled in your dashboard system. please check. Hayoung1 (talk) 05:57, 15 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240315055700","author":"Hayoung1","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Hayoung1-20240315055700-Deadline1(Week2)_Ha_young_Kwon","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316064800-Hayoung1-20240315055700"]}}-->
@Hayoung1: Ok! --Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here06:48, 16 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240316064800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316064800-Hayoung1-20240315055700","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Hello professor, I'm Kim minjun. I am taking collective intelligence. I completed training and uploaded in my imgur website. Also, i entered Collective intelligence Dashboard. Thank you. Please check it.
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@KMJ0521 Good job! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here06:54, 16 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240316065400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316065400-KMJ0521-20240315060500","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Hi, professer, I'm dayean your class student. The class name is Everyday Life and Social Structure. I have completed training for student and enrolled in your dashboard system. Please check. Jeong dayean (talk) 06:20, 15 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240315062000","author":"Jeong dayean","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Jeong_dayean-20240315062000-Deadline_1(week_2)_Jeong_Da_Yean","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316070400-Jeong_dayean-20240315062000"]}}-->
@Jeong dayean Good! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:04, 16 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240316070400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316070400-Jeong_dayean-20240315062000","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello, Professor. I am a student of your three classes (Everyday Life and Social Structure, Introduction to Information Sociology and Collective Intelligence and Wikipedia).
@WYRRRR Well done! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:04, 16 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240316070400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316070400-WYRRRR-20240315062700","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello professor, I’m Wanting Zeng from the class ‘Everyday Life and Social Structure’, I completed the training and also enrolled in the dashboard, please check it, thank you! Wantiin (talk) 07:35, 15 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240315073500","author":"Wantiin","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Wantiin-20240315073500-Deadline_1_(Week_2)_ZENG_WANTING","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316070900-Wantiin-20240315073500"]}}-->
@Wantiin Good! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:09, 16 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240316070900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316070900-Wantiin-20240315073500","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello professor, I am Huang Yanhan from the Collective Intelligence in Practice course. I have completed the training on Wikipedia, please verify it.https://dashboard.wikiedu.org/training/studentsHYH031277777 (talk) 09:35, 15 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240315093500","author":"HYH031277777","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-HYH031277777-20240315093500-Deadline_1_(Week_2)_HUANG_YANHAN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316071000-HYH031277777-20240315093500"]}}-->
@HYH031277777 Well done. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:10, 16 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240316071000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316071000-HYH031277777-20240315093500","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello professor, I am Jang Seoyoon from the Everyday Life and Social Structure. I just completed the training Wikipedia and participated the dash board. Plesase check it. Seoyoon J (talk) 09:58, 15 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240315095800","author":"Seoyoon J","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Seoyoon_J-20240315095800-Deadline_1_(Week2)_Seoyoon_Jang","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316071000-Seoyoon_J-20240315095800"]}}-->
@Seoyoon J Good job Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:10, 16 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240316071000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316071000-Seoyoon_J-20240315095800","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello professor, I’m TIAN XIAOYU from the class ‘Everyday Life and Social Structure’, I completed the training and also enrolled in the dashboard, please check it, thank you. Sephyy (talk) 10:02, 15 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240315100200","author":"Sephyy","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Sephyy-20240315100200-Deadline_1_(week2)_TIAN_XIAOYU","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316071200-Sephyy-20240315100200"]}}-->
@Sephyy Good! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:12, 16 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240316071200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316071200-Sephyy-20240315100200","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello Professor, I am ZHANGMINGSHUO from Collective Intelligence in Practice class, I have finished the extra editing of "Qingcheng Park". Please check it, thank you.Qingcheng Park:修订历史 - Wikipedia Shuo1103 (talk) 10:02, 15 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240315100200","author":"Shuo1103","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Shuo1103-20240315100200-Additional_editing_ZHANG_MINGSHUO","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316071400-Shuo1103-20240315100200"]}}-->
@Shuo1103 Good start! Please add references to it in your next series of edits, per Wikipedia:Verifiability (we will cover how to add references in class next week). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:14, 16 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240316071400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316071400-Shuo1103-20240315100200","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello professor, I am Gaoxiaoxia from the Everyday Life and Social Structure. I just completed the training Wikipedia and participated the dash board. Plesase check it. Thank you. Babaibiaobin (talk) 10:19, 15 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240315101900","author":"Babaibiaobin","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Babaibiaobin-20240315101900-Deadline_1_(week2)_Gao_xiaoxia","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316071400-Babaibiaobin-20240315101900"]}}-->
@Babaibiaobin Good! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:14, 16 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240316071400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316071400-Babaibiaobin-20240315101900","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello, Professor. I'm a student of "Collective Intelligence in Practice" and "Introduction to Information Sociology" course, HUANGQIHAO . I'm not up to date with the course additions, but I've finished the week2 video study Training
And I finished editing my personal homepage.User:Hkiho - WikipediaPlease check it out. Hkiho (talk) 10:45, 15 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240315104500","author":"Hkiho","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Hkiho-20240315104500-Deadline_1_(week2)HUANG_QIHAO","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316073200-Hkiho-20240315104500"]}}-->
@Hkiho Very good! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:32, 16 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240316073200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316073200-Hkiho-20240315104500","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Dear Professor, I have finished my weekly editing.Please check, thank you! Sichuan Conservatory of MusicRedyeoni (talk) 10:59, 15 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240315105900","author":"Redyeoni","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Redyeoni-20240315105900-Additional_editing_HONG_JIARAN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316073900-Redyeoni-20240315105900"]}}-->
@Redyeoni Good start! Regarding your edit here, please add references to it in your next series of edits, per Wikipedia:Verifiability (we will cover how to add references in class next week). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:39, 16 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240316073900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316073900-Redyeoni-20240315105900","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Hello Professor! Can I choose Animal welfare and rights in China as my translation target? I will translate it into Chinese. WANGYIFAN2024 (talk) 06:02, 15 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240315060200","author":"WANGYIFAN2024","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-WANGYIFAN2024-20240315060200-Deadline_2_(Week_3)_'s_selection_WANG_YIFAN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316064900-WANGYIFAN2024-20240315060200"]}}-->
@WANGYIFAN2024 Yes, but you need to tell me which class you want this project to be assigned to as you are taking two of my classes. Remember that you will need to translate more than one article for each class; see syllabus for details. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here06:49, 16 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240316064900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316064900-WANGYIFAN2024-20240315060200","replies":["c-WANGYIFAN2024-20240316072500-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316064900"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
In Collective Intelligence in Practice, I will independently translate Animal welfare and rights in China and Tattooing in China as my translation target. WANGYIFAN2024 (talk) 07:25, 16 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240316072500","author":"WANGYIFAN2024","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-WANGYIFAN2024-20240316072500-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316064900","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316113100-WANGYIFAN2024-20240316072500"]}}-->
Collective Intelligence in Practice topics are approved as translation to zh for sole work. Good luck! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here11:31, 16 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240316113100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316113100-WANGYIFAN2024-20240316072500","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I am a student in both the Collective Intelligence in Practice and Introduction to Information Sociology courses.
I've finished my Wikipedia editing duties this week.Here's the link.
Please check it. Thank you. CHENG SHIYI (talk) 11:29, 13 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240313112900","author":"CHENG SHIYI","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-CHENG_SHIYI-20240313112900-Weekly_editing_-_CHENG_SHIYI","replies":[]}}-->
Hello Professer!I'm a student of'Everyday Life and Social Structure'.I have completed Deadline 1.Please check it.Thank you. ZixuanHE (talk) 05:43, 14 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240314054300","author":"ZixuanHE","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-ZixuanHE-20240314054300-Weekly_editing_-_CHENG_SHIYI","replies":["c-CHENG_SHIYI-20240315061500-ZixuanHE-20240314054300"]}}-->
Hi, I think you left your message in the wrong place. You should add a new one topic. CHENG SHIYI (talk) 06:15, 15 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240315061500","author":"CHENG SHIYI","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-CHENG_SHIYI-20240315061500-ZixuanHE-20240314054300","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316062900-CHENG_SHIYI-20240315061500"]}}-->
@CHENG SHIYI @ZixuanHE Indeed. Zixuan, you should create your own section for your message here instead of replying in a section used by one of your collogues. As for CHENG SHIYI, good job, but please take look at the issue raised on your talk page at User_talk:CHENG_SHIYI#Regarding_Baidu_aggregator_news_sourcesPiotrus at Hanyang| reply here06:29, 16 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240316062900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316062900-CHENG_SHIYI-20240315061500","replies":["c-CHENG_SHIYI-20240316080200-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316062900"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Thanks to your reminder, professor, I have identified my issue. I am trying to find the correct news source. CHENG SHIYI (talk) 08:02, 16 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240316080200","author":"CHENG SHIYI","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-CHENG_SHIYI-20240316080200-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316062900","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316113600-CHENG_SHIYI-20240316080200"]}}-->
@CHENG SHIYI Very good. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here11:36, 16 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240316113600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":5,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316113600-CHENG_SHIYI-20240316080200","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello, Professor. I'm a student of "Collective Intelligence in Practice" and "Introduction to Information Sociology" course, ZHANGMINGSHUO . I'm not up to date with the course additions, but I've finished the week2 video study TrainingAnd I finished editing my personal homepage.User:Shuo1103 WikipediaPlease check it out Shuo1103 (talk) 11:08, 15 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240315110800","author":"Shuo1103","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Shuo1103-20240315110800-Deadline_1_(week2)ZHANG_MINGSHUO","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316113600-Shuo1103-20240315110800"],"displayName":"User:Shuo1103"}}-->
@Shuo1103 Well done Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here11:36, 16 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240316113600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316113600-Shuo1103-20240315110800","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Hello, professor! I'm Kim Yu-jin, who takes an understanding class of daily life and social structure. Registered to dashboard system. https://dashboard.wikiedu.org/training/studentsHuejyi (talk) 11:13, 15 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240315111300","author":"Huejyi","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Huejyi-20240315111300-Deadline_1_(week2)_KIM_YUJIN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316113700-Huejyi-20240315111300"]}}-->
@Huejyi Good job Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here11:37, 16 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240316113700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316113700-Huejyi-20240315111300","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Hello, Professor. I'm a student of "Collective Intelligence in Practice" and "Introduction to Information Sociology" course, HONGJIARAN . I'm not up to date with the course additions, but I've finished the week2 video study Traning And I finished editing my personal homepage.User:[[9]] WikipediaPlease check it out Redyeoni (talk) 11:35, 15 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240315113500","author":"Redyeoni","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Redyeoni-20240315113500-Deadline_1_(week2)_HONG_JIARAN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316113700-Redyeoni-20240315113500"]}}-->
@Redyeoni Good job! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here11:37, 16 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240316113700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316113700-Redyeoni-20240315113500","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello professor.
1. I have added the translation task to the dashboard. Check, please
2. I finished editing outside the sandbox. References and hyperlinks added. Check, please. Lihaochang678 (talk) 13:58, 15 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240315135800","author":"Lihaochang678","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Lihaochang678-20240315135800-Deadline_3_(Week_4)LI_HAOCHANG","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316113900-Lihaochang678-20240315135800"]}}-->
@Lihaochang678 Good job! Your edits look good Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here11:39, 16 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240316113900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316113900-Lihaochang678-20240315135800","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello professor. I am a student in this class (Everyday Life and Social Structure)。I have joined the dashboard system. and Completed training tasks. Ask the professor to check. YZY2233 (talk) 14:16, 15 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240315141600","author":"YZY2233","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-YZY2233-20240315141600-Deadline_1_(week2)_YUE_ZIYI","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316113900-YZY2233-20240315141600"]}}-->
@YZY2233 Well done! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here11:39, 16 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240316113900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316113900-YZY2233-20240315141600","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello Professor. I am a student majoring in Collective Intelligence in Practice. I completed additional training to earn extra credits, including Special topics/How-to refreshers/Exercises/Discussions/Additional resources,Please check my homework. Thank you for your time and guidance. YZY2233 (talk) 14:25, 15 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240315142500","author":"YZY2233","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-YZY2233-20240315142500-Deadline_1(Week2)YUE_ZIYI","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316113900-YZY2233-20240315142500"]}}-->
@YZY2233 Ok! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here11:39, 16 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240316113900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316113900-YZY2233-20240315142500","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello, professor. I would like to translate Beer in Japan into korean. It is possible? 14.7.46.57 (talk) 15:45, 15 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240315154500","author":"14.7.46.57","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-14.7.46.57-20240315154500-Deadline_2(Week3)_Chaeyeong_Lee","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316114800-14.7.46.57-20240315154500"]}}-->
Yes. Please remember to log in before editing Wikipedia in the future. Also, you'll need to choose another topic and let me know which class this is for. --Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here11:48, 16 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240316114800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316114800-14.7.46.57-20240315154500","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello, professor. I'm LI LINLIN. I'm taking classes of 'Understanding Wikipedia' 、'Introduction to Information Sociology'and 'Everyday Life and Social Structure'. I have completed deadline 1.
I have completed the [Basic, Special topics, how to refreshers, and some exercises] in the 'Student training module'. Here is the link.
I have entered in our courses 'Understanding Wikipedia' and 'Everyday Life and Social Structure '.
Please check it, best wishes! Leeinm (talk) 01:52, 16 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240316015200","author":"Leeinm","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Leeinm-20240316015200-Deadline_1(Week_2)-LI_LINLIN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316114800-Leeinm-20240316015200"]}}-->
@Leeinm Very good Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here11:48, 16 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240316114800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316114800-Leeinm-20240316015200","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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please check it Bai0926 (talk) 11:51, 16 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240316115100","author":"Bai0926","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Bai0926-20240316115100-Collective_Intelligence_and_Wikipedia_Deadline_1(Week_2):BAILINHAN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316115600-Bai0926-20240316115100"]}}-->
@Bai0926 Good. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here11:56, 16 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240316115600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316115600-Bai0926-20240316115100","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear professor, we have selected our topic :12 May I ask if we can translation for these two articles in to Chinese? Thank you. Hhhlx (talk) 06:11, 15 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240315061100","author":"Hhhlx","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Hhhlx-20240315061100-Deadline_2_(Week_3)_Huang_Lingxuan&Liu_Yunxiang","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316070300-Hhhlx-20240315061100"]}}-->
@Hhhlx The topics are very good, but first, you need to tell me which class you want them assigned to (as you are taking two of my classes), and second, remember that a group needs to translate one article to English. Check the online syllabus for details. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:03, 16 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240316070300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316070300-Hhhlx-20240315061100","replies":["c-Hhhlx-20240316072700-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316070300"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear professor, we would like to assign these two articles to the assignment for the course "Collective Intelligence and Wikipedia".The article translated from English to Chinese is: 1. The article translated from Chinese to English is: 2. Thank you. Hhhlx (talk) 07:27, 16 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240316072700","author":"Hhhlx","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Hhhlx-20240316072700-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316070300","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316113300-Hhhlx-20240316072700"]}}-->
@Hhhlx I see. Those are good topics to expand. Please tell me who is the other person on your team. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here11:33, 16 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240316113300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316113300-Hhhlx-20240316072700","replies":["c-Hhhlx-20240316114800-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316113300"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear professor, my other team member is:Liu Yunxiang@1eleven0086. Hhhlx (talk) 11:48, 16 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240316114800","author":"Hhhlx","type":"comment","level":5,"id":"c-Hhhlx-20240316114800-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316113300","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316115700-Hhhlx-20240316114800"]}}-->
@Hhhlx Ok - I've updated the spreadsheet with your choices. Good luck! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here11:57, 16 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240316115700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":6,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316115700-Hhhlx-20240316114800","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Hi, professor. I’m nakyoung your classs student. The class name is Everyday Life and Social Structure. I have completed training for student and enrolled in your dashboard system. Please check. njkcs478. 218.235.241.134 (talk) 03:17, 15 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240315031700","author":"218.235.241.134","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-218.235.241.134-20240315031700-Deadline1(week2)_Kim_nakyoung","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316063800-218.235.241.134-20240315031700"]}}-->
Dear Kim nakyoung. You need to complete this assignment while logged in. Edits made without logging in cannot be tracked and are not counted for our course. Please try to sign your post here again while logged in. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here06:38, 16 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240316063800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316063800-218.235.241.134-20240315031700","replies":["c-Njkcs478-20240318024400-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316063800"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I logged in. Please check again. Njkcs478. Njkcs478 (talk) 02:44, 18 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240318024400","author":"Njkcs478","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Njkcs478-20240318024400-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316063800","replies":[]}}-->
Hallo Professor!I am LIU XINRUI and my team member is MU QING.The two articles we chose are English translation into Korean and English translation into Chinese.The link to the article is https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Cannabis_in_Japan ,https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sexuality_in_South_Korea .Please check it, thank you. 유신예 (talk) 10:11, 13 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240313101100","author":"\uc720\uc2e0\uc608","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-\uc720\uc2e0\uc608-20240313101100-Deadline_2_(Week_3)LIU_XINRUI\u3001MU_QING","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316062600-\uc720\uc2e0\uc608-20240313101100"]}}-->
@유신예 and @Muqing112233 While the topics are good and , please remember that as stated in our syllabus, a group of two will need to write or translate one article in English. You have chosen one article to tranbslat eto Korean, and one to Chinese. The second one can be considered for extra credit, but you need to chose a topic to add to English Wikipedia for half of your main project. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here06:26, 16 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240316062600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316062600-\uc720\uc2e0\uc608-20240313101100","replies":["c-\uc720\uc2e0\uc608-20240317145500-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316062600"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
@유신예 Yes, both topics are approved. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:49, 18 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240318084900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240318084900-\uc720\uc2e0\uc608-20240317145500","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Hi, professor.
I chose the theme of the wave of democracy.
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Waves_of_democracy
I would like to translate into Korean and add to this document about the history of the democratization movement, which is the wave of democracy in Korea. Is it possible? Jeong dayean (talk) 06:56, 15 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240315065600","author":"Jeong dayean","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Jeong_dayean-20240315065600-Deadline_2_(week3)_Jeong_da_yean","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316070700-Jeong_dayean-20240315065600"]}}-->
@Jeong dayean This is a good topic (Waves of democracy to Korean). Please let me know if you are working solo or in a group, and what is your second article that you want to work on. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:07, 16 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240316070700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316070700-Jeong_dayean-20240315065600","replies":["c-Jeong_dayean-20240318045100-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316070700"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I will translate and edit this document. Jeong dayean (talk) 04:51, 18 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240318045100","author":"Jeong dayean","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Jeong_dayean-20240318045100-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316070700","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240318085000-Jeong_dayean-20240318045100"]}}-->
@Jeong dayean OK! Approved. --Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:50, 18 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240318085000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":5,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240318085000-Jeong_dayean-20240318045100","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello Professor, I have chosen the topic of esports player (Deft). Could I translate this Wikipedia article from English to Chinese?
Also, if I do my homework alone, could I choose just one Wikipedia translation?
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Deft_(gamer)?wprov=sfti1Sephyy (talk) 10:38, 15 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240315103800","author":"Sephyy","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Sephyy-20240315103800-Deadline_2(week3)_TIAN_XIAOYU","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316071600-Sephyy-20240315103800"]}}-->
@Sephyy The topic is approved. But you need to complete two translations to complete the project, so you need to chose one more topic. Also, you need to tell me which of my two classes you are taking you want to assign this article to. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:16, 16 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240316071600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316071600-Sephyy-20240315103800","replies":["c-Sephyy-20240317043200-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316071600"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello, Professor. In my Everyday Life and Social Structure class, I want to translate these two Wikipedia articles:
@Sephyy Ok - approved for Everyday Life Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here09:06, 18 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240318090600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240318090600-Sephyy-20240317043200","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Deadline2(Week3) - Sociology of Everyday Life - CHENG SIYU
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Hello, professor. I'm CHENG SIYU, a student of Sociology of Everyday Life. I plan to complete the wiki online assignment alone. The article I chose is this. Please check whether it matches the course theme. And can I edit it. Looking forward to your reply, thank you. Csiiiyu (talk) 10:39, 15 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240315103900","author":"Csiiiyu","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Csiiiyu-20240315103900-Deadline2(Week3)_-_Sociology_of_Everyday_Life_-_CHENG_SIYU","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316072300-Csiiiyu-20240315103900"]}}-->
@Csiiiyu This is a good topic and it is approved. But you will need to chose and complete one more translation to complete this project (see syllabus for details). Also, please let me know what language you want to translate your articles to. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:23, 16 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240316072300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316072300-Csiiiyu-20240315103900","replies":["c-Csiiiyu-20240317080200-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316072300"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I get it, Professor. I found another article here. I will translate these two articles into Chinese. Csiiiyu (talk) 08:02, 17 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240317080200","author":"Csiiiyu","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Csiiiyu-20240317080200-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316072300","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240318091100-Csiiiyu-20240317080200"]}}-->
@Csiiiyu Ok! Topic approved. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here09:11, 18 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240318091100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240318091100-Csiiiyu-20240317080200","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Dear professor, good afternoon. I have finished editing this week, please check it out.
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@Muqing112233 Good job! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here09:17, 18 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240318091700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240318091700-Muqing112233-20240316045700","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Hello, professor.
I'm Lee Yunjoo. I'm taking classes of 'Collective Intelligence in Practice'
Leeyj0401 (talk) 09:13, 16 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240316091300","author":"Leeyj0401","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Leeyj0401-20240316091300-Deadline_2(week_3)_Lee_yunjoo","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316115200-Leeyj0401-20240316091300"]}}-->
@Leeyj0401 Population growth is approved but I am afraid the other topic has already been reserved by another student and you will need to choose another topic.
Good job with your first weekly edits! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here11:52, 16 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240316115200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316115200-Leeyj0401-20240316091300","replies":["c-Leeyj0401-20240317084100-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316115200"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Then I will translate this article: Global North and Global South. Leeyj0401 (talk) 08:41, 17 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240317084100","author":"Leeyj0401","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Leeyj0401-20240317084100-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316115200","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240318091800-Leeyj0401-20240317084100"]}}-->
@Leeyj0401 Ok, topic approved! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here09:18, 18 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240318091800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240318091800-Leeyj0401-20240317084100","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
1. I have added the translation content to the control panel. Check, please.
2. And outside the sandbox, an edit was made and a reference was added. Check, please. 218.235.241.116 (talk) 07:46, 16 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240316074600","author":"218.235.241.116","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-218.235.241.116-20240316074600-Deadline_3_(Week_4)HAN_YUANYUAN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316113500-218.235.241.116-20240316074600"]}}-->
@Hanyuanyuan613 Dear HAN YUANYUAN. You forgot to log in. To complete the task, please log in and sign your post. Edits made without logging in are not counted for our course as they are not tied to your account . Only edits I can see at User contributions for Hanyuanyuan613 can be counted. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here11:35, 16 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240316113500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316113500-218.235.241.116-20240316074600","replies":["c-Hanyuanyuan613-20240318025000-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316113500"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Got it professor. (Establish an independent brand company) This is what I made and it doesn’t show up. I made another one and added the quote. Check, please. Hanyuanyuan613 (talk) 02:50, 18 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240318025000","author":"Hanyuanyuan613","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Hanyuanyuan613-20240318025000-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316113500","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240318092100-Hanyuanyuan613-20240318025000"]}}-->
@Hanyuanyuan613: I see. Good. However, I have removed the 'social influence' part as it was written in a tone that is too similar to marketing/advertising and not neutral/encyclopedic (see WP:NPOV); it was also sourced to a blog and blogs are not good sources. But you still get full credit for trying - try to be more neutral in your writing in the future, however. --Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here09:21, 18 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240318092100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240318092100-Hanyuanyuan613-20240318025000","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Good evening, Professor.I've finished my Wikipedia editing duties this week.Here's the link.Please check it. Thank you. AYAO32269 (talk) 15:23, 16 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240316152300","author":"AYAO32269","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-AYAO32269-20240316152300-Weekly_editing_-_ZHANG_LINYUE","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240318092300-AYAO32269-20240316152300"]}}-->
@AYAO32269 Good job! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here09:23, 18 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240318092300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240318092300-AYAO32269-20240316152300","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello, Professor.
I am a student of Collective Intelligence course.
I have enrolled in our course,and also completed the training.
Please check it. Thank you Sephyy (talk) 19:25, 16 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240316192500","author":"Sephyy","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Sephyy-20240316192500-Deadline1\uff08week2\uff09TIANXIAOYU","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240318092300-Sephyy-20240316192500"]}}-->
@Sephyy: Ok! --Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here09:23, 18 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240318092300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240318092300-Sephyy-20240316192500","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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A related discussion is ongoing about your students' undocumented/unauthorized use of machine-generated content to participate in Chinese Wikipedia editing and discussion. I hope you can understand this discussion and provide your feedback via GPT or machine translator, if not please ask your questions. YFdyh000 (talk) 20:11, 16 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240316201100","author":"YFdyh000","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-YFdyh000-20240316201100-Discuss_your_students'_edits_on_Chinese_Wikipedia","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240318092400-YFdyh000-20240316201100"]}}-->
@YFdyh000 Thank you, I'll take a look. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here09:24, 18 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240318092400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240318092400-YFdyh000-20240316201100","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello professor. I'm Seoyoon Jang from Everyday Life and Social Structure. I just selected the article Korean rock. This article deals with the origin and development of Korean rock. It doesn't translated into Korean yet, so if you allow me, I will do my best. Seoyoon J (talk) 03:04, 17 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240317030400","author":"Seoyoon J","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Seoyoon_J-20240317030400-Deadline2_(week3)_Seoyoon_Jang","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240318094400-Seoyoon_J-20240317030400"]}}-->
@Seoyoon J Good choice, the topic is approved. But you will need to chose one more topic to translate. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here09:44, 18 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240318094400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240318094400-Seoyoon_J-20240317030400","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Sephyy (talk) 09:24, 17 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240317092400","author":"Sephyy","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Sephyy-20240317092400-Deadline_2(week3)TIAN_XIAOYU","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240318094900-Sephyy-20240317092400"]}}-->
@Sephyy: Yes, those are very good topics, both are approved. --Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here09:49, 18 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240318094900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240318094900-Sephyy-20240317092400","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello Professer!I'm a student of'Everyday Life and Social Structure'.I have completed Deadline 1.Please check it.Thank you. SU YIQI (talk) 11:52, 17 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240317115200","author":"SU YIQI","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-SU_YIQI-20240317115200-Deadline1\u2014\u2014SU_YIQI","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240318095700-SU_YIQI-20240317115200"]}}-->
@SU YIQI Ok! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here09:57, 18 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240318095700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240318095700-SU_YIQI-20240317115200","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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@전진이 Well done! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here09:58, 18 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240318095800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240318095800-\uc804\uc9c4\uc774-20240317123700","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Hello professor,I completed the training and I have finished editing this week, please review it.
In addition, this is my article ready to be translated from English to Chinese
Anti-American sentiment in KoreaMuqing112233 (talk) 09:25, 17 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240317092500","author":"Muqing112233","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Muqing112233-20240317092500-Sociology_of_Everday_Life_\u2014\u2014MU_QING","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240318095600-Muqing112233-20240317092500"]}}-->
The word deflagration is technically correct but is not often used in English. Try to locate a similar article on English Wikipedia and see how it is titled. Look at Category:Gas explosions in China for example.
If you can finish this article successfully, it will be worth a good amount of extra credit points.
As for your translation from English to Chinese, it is approved, but remember to chose one more topic for your main project. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here09:56, 18 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240318095600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240318095600-Muqing112233-20240317092500","replies":["c-Muqing112233-20240318135100-Hanyangprofessor2-20240318095600"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
ok sir.I'll try again. Muqing112233 (talk) 13:51, 18 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240318135100","author":"Muqing112233","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Muqing112233-20240318135100-Hanyangprofessor2-20240318095600","replies":[]}}-->
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Hello, professor. Can I choose yellow journalism as my target? I want to translate it into Korean. Is it possible?
Please understand that the submission has been delayed because it was registered in LMS after going through the course increase period. Hayoung1 (talk) 15:21, 15 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240315152100","author":"Hayoung1","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Hayoung1-20240315152100-Deadline_2(Week3)_Ha_young_Kwon","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316114100-Hayoung1-20240315152100"]}}-->
@Hayoung1 Yes, yellow journalism is a good choice, approved. But please note that you still need to chose a second topic (if working solo, another translation to Korean will be ok). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here11:41, 16 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240316114100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316114100-Hayoung1-20240315152100","replies":["c-Hayoung1-20240317084700-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316114100"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Okay. Is it okay to choose The New York Times as the second topic? Hayoung1 (talk) 08:47, 17 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240317084700","author":"Hayoung1","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Hayoung1-20240317084700-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316114100","replies":["c-Hayoung1-20240317085100-Hayoung1-20240317084700"]}}-->
I am revising it. Is it okay to translate the New York Times into Korean as the second topic? Hayoung1 (talk) 08:51, 17 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240317085100","author":"Hayoung1","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hayoung1-20240317085100-Hayoung1-20240317084700","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240318091100-Hayoung1-20240317085100"]}}-->
@Hayoung1 Yes, the Korean article is short and can be expanded. Topic approved. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here09:11, 18 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240318091100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":5,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240318091100-Hayoung1-20240317085100","replies":["c-Hayoung1-20240318143500-Hanyangprofessor2-20240318091100"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Thank you for the confirmation, and I added 2 topics to the dashboard profile, please check. Hayoung1 (talk) 14:35, 18 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240318143500","author":"Hayoung1","type":"comment","level":6,"id":"c-Hayoung1-20240318143500-Hanyangprofessor2-20240318091100","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240319041300-Hayoung1-20240318143500"]}}-->
@Hayoung1 well done Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:13, 19 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240319041300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":7,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240319041300-Hayoung1-20240318143500","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hope you have a nice day :) Leeinm (talk) 02:20, 16 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240316022000","author":"Leeinm","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Leeinm-20240316022000-Deadline2(week_3)-LI_LINLIN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316114900-Leeinm-20240316022000"]}}-->
@Leeinm Yes, those are all approved. Please let me know which class you want to assign them to. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here11:49, 16 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240316114900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316114900-Leeinm-20240316022000","replies":["c-Leeinm-20240317044900-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316114900"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I want to assign Women’s history ; Beer in Japan to class ‘Understanding Wikipedia’ and assign Women in South Korea ; The coming Conflict with China to class‘Everyday Life and Social Structure’. Leeinm (talk) 04:49, 17 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240317044900","author":"Leeinm","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Leeinm-20240317044900-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316114900","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240318091600-Leeinm-20240317044900"]}}-->
@Leeinm All are approved except Beer in Japan which unfortunately has been selected by another group earlier. How about translating Beer in India instead? Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here09:16, 18 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240318091600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240318091600-Leeinm-20240317044900","replies":["c-Leeinm-20240318095400-Hanyangprofessor2-20240318091600"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
That's a great propose. I will translate Beer in India instead.
Thank you~ Leeinm (talk) 09:54, 18 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240318095400","author":"Leeinm","type":"comment","level":5,"id":"c-Leeinm-20240318095400-Hanyangprofessor2-20240318091600","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240319041400-Leeinm-20240318095400"]}}-->
@Leeinm Ok - approved :) Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:14, 19 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240319041400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":6,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240319041400-Leeinm-20240318095400","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Good evening , professor. I am a student of Collective Intelligence course.
I have completed over ten edits on Wikipedia. Please check.
Thank you!TMXX0818 (talk) 13:10, 17 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240317131000","author":"TMXX0818","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-TMXX0818-20240317131000-Weekly_editing_-_LI_MENGRU_2","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240319041700-TMXX0818-20240317131000"]}}-->
@TMXX0818: Good job adding references! --Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:17, 19 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240319041700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240319041700-TMXX0818-20240317131000","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Good evening, professor.
I have completed over ten edits on Wikipedia. Please check.
Have a nice day! WYRRRR (talk) 13:34, 17 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240317133400","author":"WYRRRR","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-WYRRRR-20240317133400-Weekly_editing_-_WANG_YUERONG","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240319042500-WYRRRR-20240317133400"]}}-->
@WYRRRR: Good job! Here, rather then delete the content, it would be better to move it to a new section called 'Geography' and add a reference. --Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:25, 19 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240319042500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240319042500-WYRRRR-20240317133400","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello professor. I'm sorry that I didn't give you the feedback on the task of deadline 1 until today because the administration department only approved my application for the increase of staff in the course this week. I am a student of Collective Intelligence course. I have enrolled in our course,and also completed the training. Please check it. Thank you. WSH0927 (talk) 13:52, 17 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240317135200","author":"WSH0927","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-WSH0927-20240317135200-Deadline_1_(Week_2)","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240319043900-WSH0927-20240317135200"]}}-->
@WSH0927 That's ok. Better late then never, as they say. Assignment approved. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:39, 19 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240319043900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240319043900-WSH0927-20240317135200","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Hello, professor. I am a student taking Everyday Life and Social Structure class. I have completed the wiki training course and dashboard assignment, so please check it. https://dashboard.wikiedu.org/training/studentsSangrok02 (talk) 02:11, 18 March 2024 (UTC)
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@Sangrok02 Well done Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:39, 19 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240319043900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240319043900-Sangrok02-20240318021100","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Article translated from Chinese to English-LIURUOHAN
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Hello, professor. I am a student taking Everyday Life and Social Structure class.We're students in group six.Below is the article we chose to translate from Chinese to English.https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E6%8A%95%E5%B8%81%E7%A5%88%E7%A6%8FPlease check. Han77720 (talk) 03:08, 18 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240318030800","author":"Han77720","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Han77720-20240318030800-Article_translated_from_Chinese_to_English-LIURUOHAN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240319045000-Han77720-20240318030800"]}}-->
@Han77720 Ok - topic approved! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:50, 19 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240319045000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240319045000-Han77720-20240318030800","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello, Professor. In my Collective Intelligence in Practice class, I want to translate these two Wikipedia articles
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Living_wage From English to Korean
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sociology_of_culture From English to Korean
Sangrok02 (talk) 04:12, 18 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240318041200","author":"Sangrok02","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Sangrok02-20240318041200-Deadline_2_(Week_3)\uff1aKim_Sangrok","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240319052700-Sangrok02-20240318041200"]}}-->
Ok - topic approved. --Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:27, 19 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240319052700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240319052700-Sangrok02-20240318041200","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello professor. I'm a student of 'Everyday Life and Social Structure'. I completed 'Deadline1', so please check it! I'm sorry for late. Thank you. Jeongha1 (talk) 04:40, 18 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240318044000","author":"Jeongha1","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Jeongha1-20240318044000-Deadline1_(Week_2)_Jeongha_Ahn","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240319054800-Jeongha1-20240318044000"]}}-->
@Jeongha1: - it's ok! --Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:48, 19 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240319054800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240319054800-Jeongha1-20240318044000","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello professor. I'm Jeongha Ahn and I'm a student of 'Everyday Life and Social Structure'. I chose two themes, 'culture shock'(https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Culture_shock) and 'entertainment'(https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Entertainment). I want to translate these two themes. Is it possible? 218.235.241.132 (talk) 04:52, 18 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240318045200","author":"218.235.241.132","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-218.235.241.132-20240318045200-Deadline2_(week3)_Jeongha_Ahn","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240319061600-218.235.241.132-20240318045200"]}}-->
@Jeongha1 Yes, translation to Korean is approved. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here06:16, 19 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240319061600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240319061600-218.235.241.132-20240318045200","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
@Zhuo1221: Well done. --Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here06:19, 19 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240319061900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240319061900-Zhuo1221-20240318051400","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Hello, professor. I am a student taking Collective Intelligence in Practice class. Han77720 and I (Yue03090616)are on a team.
Below is the article we chose to translate from Chinese to English. 天山大峡谷 - Wikipedia
Below is the article we chose to translate from English to Chinese Astroturfing
Please check. Yue03090616 (talk) 05:26, 18 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240318052600","author":"Yue03090616","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Yue03090616-20240318052600-Article_translated_from_Chinese_to_English-TANGJUNYUE","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240319062100-Yue03090616-20240318052600"]}}-->
@Yue03090616 @Han77720 Very good - topics approved! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here06:21, 19 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240319062100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240319062100-Yue03090616-20240318052600","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Professor, I'm in Everyday Life and Social Structure,I chose https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Freedom_of_speech and https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Fake_news Can I translate this Wikipedia article from English to Korea? Eunbini(talk) 17:22, 18 March 2024 (UTC) Eunbini (talk) 08:23, 18 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240318082300","author":"Eunbini","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Eunbini-20240318082300-Deadline_2_(Week_3)'s_selection_Eunbin_Jang","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240319063100-Eunbini-20240318082300"]}}-->
@EunbiniFreedom of speech and fake news are approved - good choices Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here06:31, 19 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240319063100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240319063100-Eunbini-20240318082300","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello Professor! After you told me last time, I chose to translate "Wang Baiyuan" from Chinese to English in my Collective Intelligence in Practice class, and use "Eggy Party" as my bonus wiki and complete it on time ten times a week. Please check it out, thank you! Yangpeifu (talk) 10:07, 18 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240318100700","author":"Yangpeifu","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Yangpeifu-20240318100700-Deadline_2\uff08week3\uff09YANGPEIFU","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240319071600-Yangpeifu-20240318100700","c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240319071900-Yangpeifu-20240318100700"]}}-->
@Yangpeifu Very good. But remember that 10 wiki edits a week have to done on article(s) different from your main project, so you will have to edit articles other than on Wang Baiyuan to get points for that assignment. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:16, 19 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240319071600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240319071600-Yangpeifu-20240318100700","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
PS. To give you early feedback on your draft: 1) it needs many more sources 2) it needs major copyediting for English (grammar, vocabulary) and 3) it should not be using bullet point style. Compare William ShakespearePiotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:19, 19 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240319071900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240319071900-Yangpeifu-20240318100700","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Good evening , professor. I am a student of 'Collective Intelligence course' and ‘Everyday Life and Social Structure’.I have completed over ten edits on Wikipedia. Please check it. ZHANGQI1066 (talk) 11:48, 18 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240318114800","author":"ZHANGQI1066","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-ZHANGQI1066-20240318114800-Weekly_editing_-_ZHANG_QI","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240319072000-ZHANGQI1066-20240318114800"]}}-->
@ZHANGQI1066:This is a good start, but please add references to your edits, like we learned in the class on Monday. Unreferenced content can be deleted from Wikipedia, per WP:V. --Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:20, 19 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240319072000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240319072000-ZHANGQI1066-20240318114800","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello Professor, I am ZHANG QI and I am a student of 'Collective Intelligence course' and ‘Everyday Life and Social Structure’. My teammate is HUANGYANHAN. We've decided that the theme for this term is HANGZHOU DAILY and FILM CENSORSHIP. ZHANGQI1066 (talk) 12:15, 18 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240318121500","author":"ZHANGQI1066","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-ZHANGQI1066-20240318121500-Deadline_2_(week3)_-ZHANG_QI","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240319072100-ZHANGQI1066-20240318121500"]}}-->
@ZHANGQI1066 Good, topics approved Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:21, 19 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240319072100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240319072100-ZHANGQI1066-20240318121500","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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@Kimseoeun2023079825 Well done, topics approved! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:23, 19 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240319072300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240319072300-Kimseoeun2023079825-20240318125300","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello professor, I am a student taking the course 'Everyday Life and Social Structure'. In this assignment, I will be working alone and I have been approved to work on the Korean translation of the articles Overexploitation and Lookism. Also, I have written these topics in a spreadsheet today. Finally, I also uploaded these two articles to my dashboard, please check it out! Chaekyo (talk) 13:59, 18 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240318135900","author":"Chaekyo","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Chaekyo-20240318135900-Deadline_2(Week_3)_ChaeHyun_LEE","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240319072300-Chaekyo-20240318135900"]}}-->
@Chaekyo Well done, topics approved! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:23, 19 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240319072300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240319072300-Chaekyo-20240318135900","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello Professor! In Everyday Life and Social Structure,I have chosen the https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Tattooing_in_China and https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Social_psychology_(sociology)
Could I translate this Wikipedia article from English to Chinese?I do my homework alone. YZY2233 (talk) 07:47, 18 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240318074700","author":"YZY2233","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-YZY2233-20240318074700-Deadline_2_(Week_3)_'s_selection_YUE_ZIYI","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240319062700-YZY2233-20240318074700"]}}-->
@YZY2233 I am afraid the first topic has already been reserved by another student, so you may have to chose another (how about Sailor tattoos?). The second one is approved. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here06:27, 19 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240319062700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240319062700-YZY2233-20240318074700","replies":["c-YZY2233-20240319073000-Hanyangprofessor2-20240319062700"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Thank you professor for your recommendation! Then I chose Sailor tattoos and Social psychology for translation YZY2233 (talk) 07:30, 19 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240319073000","author":"YZY2233","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-YZY2233-20240319073000-Hanyangprofessor2-20240319062700","replies":[]}}-->
I am a student in both the Collective Intelligence in Practice and Introduction to Information Sociology courses.
Here are my Wikipedia edits for the week, more than 20 in all. Please check it out, thank you. CHENG SHIYI (talk) 12:29, 19 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240319122900","author":"CHENG SHIYI","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-CHENG_SHIYI-20240319122900-Weekly_editing_-_CHENG_SHIYI_2","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240320051900-CHENG_SHIYI-20240319122900"]}}-->
@CHENG SHIYI Well done, your edits look good. Try to learn the skills suggested by the reviewer on your talk page. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:19, 20 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240320051900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240320051900-CHENG_SHIYI-20240319122900","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear professor, I am ZHANG ZEHUA, a student of Collective Intelligence and Wikipedia.
1.I want to complete this article in To create or improve on English Wikipedia Etiquette in China. I hope you can pass it.
2.Here are my ten Wikipedia edits for the week, please check them out Wu_Sha
Thank you!
ZHANG0822ZH (talk) 00:22, 20 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240320002200","author":"ZHANG0822ZH","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-ZHANG0822ZH-20240320002200-Deadline2(week3)\uff1aZHANG_ZEHUA","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240320052200-ZHANG0822ZH-20240320002200"]}}-->
@ZHANG0822ZH Very good idea - topic approved. Your weekly edits look very good too, well done! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:22, 20 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240320052200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240320052200-ZHANG0822ZH-20240320002200","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Hello professor, I'm Lee wooyeon, taking the class 'Everyday Life and Social Structure'. I have completed training for students and enrolled in your dashboard system. (https://dashboard.wikiedu.org/training/students). Please check my assignment(deadline 1). Thank you! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Lee Wooyeon (talk • contribs) 08:57, 17 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240317085700","author":"Lee Wooyeon","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Lee_Wooyeon-20240317085700-Deadline_1_(Week2)_Lee_Wooyeon","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240318094700-Lee_Wooyeon-20240317085700"]}}-->
@Lee Wooyeon Good job! And your topic of Cannabis in Japan translation to Korean is approved. But you will need to chose one more topic. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here09:47, 18 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240318094700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240318094700-Lee_Wooyeon-20240317085700","replies":["c-Lee_Wooyeon-20240320102600-Hanyangprofessor2-20240318094700"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I decided on one more topic. I will translate 'Film Censorship' from English to Korean. (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Film_censorship) Is that okay? Lee Wooyeon (talk) 10:26, 20 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240320102600","author":"Lee Wooyeon","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Lee_Wooyeon-20240320102600-Hanyangprofessor2-20240318094700","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240321044900-Lee_Wooyeon-20240320102600"]}}-->
@Lee Wooyeon Yes, that should be fine. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:49, 21 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240321044900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240321044900-Lee_Wooyeon-20240320102600","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I want to complete this article in To create or improve on English Wikipedia Fashion in China . I hope you can pass it. Bai0926 (talk) 09:45, 20 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240320094500","author":"Bai0926","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Bai0926-20240320094500-Deadline(week3)\uff1aBAILINHAN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240321045600-Bai0926-20240320094500"]}}-->
@Bai0926 Ok, topic approved! You can reuse content found at Chinese_clothing#Modern_fashion. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:56, 21 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240321045600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240321045600-Bai0926-20240320094500","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello, professor. We are Gao xiaoxia(2022083990)and Qiu pengyu(2022079825)from Everyday Life and Social Structure. We will finished our homework in a group. We chose "Censorship of TikTok"and"Polyethnicty".All translated from English to chinese.Is it possible? Babaibiaobin (talk) 11:08, 19 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240319110800","author":"Babaibiaobin","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Babaibiaobin-20240319110800-Deadline2(week3)","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240320051600-Babaibiaobin-20240319110800","c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240320051800-Babaibiaobin-20240319110800"]}}-->
@Babaibiaobin If you work as a group, you need to chose one topic to translate to Chinese, and one to translate to English from Chinese. Polyethnicity is approved, as the other topic was already reserved by another group. For a list of ideas to translate from Chinese to English see User:Piotrus/Ideas_for_students#To_create_or_improve_on_English_WikipediaPiotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:16, 20 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240320051600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240320051600-Babaibiaobin-20240319110800","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Also, please talk me after class - you need to update the spreadsheet with your wiki usernames. Based on your message I do not know if "Babaibiaobin" belongs to Gao xiaoxia(2022083990) or Qiu pengyu(2022079825). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:18, 20 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240320051800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240320051800-Babaibiaobin-20240319110800","replies":["c-Babaibiaobin-20240320061500-Hanyangprofessor2-20240320051800"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Professor,I'm Gaoxiaoxia.Can we choose this "网络游戏防沉迷系统"https://zh.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E7%BD%91%E7%BB%9C%E6%B8%B8%E6%88%8F%E9%98%B2%E6%B2%89%E8%BF%B7%E7%B3%BB%E7%BB%9F as the topic of translation from Chinese to English? Babaibiaobin (talk) 06:15, 20 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240320061500","author":"Babaibiaobin","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Babaibiaobin-20240320061500-Hanyangprofessor2-20240320051800","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240320062800-Babaibiaobin-20240320061500","c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240320063100-Babaibiaobin-20240320061500"]}}-->
@Babaibiaobin 网络游戏防沉迷系统 is a good topic but it is rather short. You may need to select another short article to reach the required word length for translation. I'll approve it for now. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here06:28, 20 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240320062800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240320062800-Babaibiaobin-20240320061500","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
To reach the required size of your translation, I'd recommend zh:家新闻出版署关于进一步严格管理_切实防止未成年人沉迷网络游戏的通知 for your second topic, as it is related to your first choice. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here06:31, 20 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240320063100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240320063100-Babaibiaobin-20240320061500","replies":["c-Babaibiaobin-20240320075400-Hanyangprofessor2-20240320063100"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Yes, we will choose this as the second topic. Thank you Professor Babaibiaobin (talk) 07:54, 20 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240320075400","author":"Babaibiaobin","type":"comment","level":5,"id":"c-Babaibiaobin-20240320075400-Hanyangprofessor2-20240320063100","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240321045900-Babaibiaobin-20240320075400"]}}-->
Ok! Topic approved! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:59, 21 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240321045900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":6,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240321045900-Babaibiaobin-20240320075400","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Hello, professor. I'm Kim Yujin, taking an "Everyday Life and Social" structure. I decided on the article. Fashion in South Korea(https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Fashion_in_South_Korea), Yellow journalism (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Yellow_journalism). I would like to translate two articles into Korean. Is it possible? 61.77.178.20 (talk) 10:53, 16 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240316105300","author":"61.77.178.20","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-61.77.178.20-20240316105300-Deadline_2_(week_3)_Kim_Yujin","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316115400-61.77.178.20-20240316105300"]}}-->
Dear Yujin. First, please remember to log in while editing Wikipedia.
I am afraid Fashion in South Korea has already been translated to Korean and Yellow journalism has been reserved by another students just recently, so you will need to reconsidered your topics. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here11:54, 16 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240316115400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316115400-61.77.178.20-20240316105300","replies":["c-Huejyi-20240319131100-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316115400"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello professor! I would like to select TikTok censorship (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Censorship_of_TikTok) topic and freedom of speech (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Freedom_of_speech) topic) and translate it into Korean. Is it possible? Huejyi (talk) 13:11, 19 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240319131100","author":"Huejyi","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Huejyi-20240319131100-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316115400","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240322030200-Huejyi-20240319131100"]}}-->
Approved in class with one change. --Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:02, 22 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240322030200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240322030200-Huejyi-20240319131100","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Hello, professor. I've been checked about the wiki topic in class, but please check it one more time.
https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Media_biashttps://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Social_class전진이 (talk) 04:13, 18 March 2024 (UTC)전진이 (talk) 04:14, 18 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240318041300","author":"\uc804\uc9c4\uc774","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-\uc804\uc9c4\uc774-20240318041300-Deadline_2_(week3)_Jean_Jin_E","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240319054800-\uc804\uc9c4\uc774-20240318041300"]}}-->
@전진이 I have your assignments in our spreadsheet listed as media bias and culture war. .Is this ok? Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:48, 19 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240319054800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240319054800-\uc804\uc9c4\uc774-20240318041300","replies":["c-\uc804\uc9c4\uc774-20240321055600-Hanyangprofessor2-20240319054800"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Ok then, we keep it as media bias and culture war. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:16, 22 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240322031600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240322031600-\uc804\uc9c4\uc774-20240321055600","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Hello professor, I have enrolled in our dashboard system, and I have completed training courses(https://dashboard.wikiedu.org/training/students). Please check my assignment(deadline 1). Thank you.
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Dear Lee Seung Mi. You forgot to log in. To complete the task, please log in and sign your post. Edits made without logging in are not counted for our course as they are not tied to your account. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here09:22, 18 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240318092200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240318092200-218.235.241.134-20240318023400","replies":["c-Seungmilsm-20240321070000-Hanyangprofessor2-20240318092200"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello, professor. I'm sure I logged in and carried out the deadline 1 assignment, but I think there was an error. Can you check it again? Seungmilsm (talk) 07:00, 21 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240321070000","author":"Seungmilsm","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Seungmilsm-20240321070000-Hanyangprofessor2-20240318092200","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240322032000-Seungmilsm-20240321070000"]}}-->
@Seungmilsm Now it is correct. Good luck with Deadline 2! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:20, 22 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240322032000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240322032000-Seungmilsm-20240321070000","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hi professor I added the references in the article Workers' Solidarity. I like to expand korean articles 사회주의의 역사 and 홀로코스트 부정론 by translate History of socialism and Holocaust denial. Thanks! Have a nice day! Shinseongmin1917 (talk) 08:51, 21 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240321085100","author":"Shinseongmin1917","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Shinseongmin1917-20240321085100-Deadline2_(Week_3)_Shin_Seongmin","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240322032100-Shinseongmin1917-20240321085100"]}}-->
@Shinseongmin1917 Good - topics approved! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:21, 22 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240322032100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240322032100-Shinseongmin1917-20240321085100","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello Professor, I am HUANG YANHAN and I am a student of 'Collective Intelligence course' . My teammate is ZHANG QI. We've decided that the theme for this term is HANGZHOU DAILY and FILM CENSORSHIP. HYH031277777 (talk) 10:00, 21 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240321100000","author":"HYH031277777","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-HYH031277777-20240321100000-Deadline_2(Week_3)_HUANG_YANHAN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240322032200-HYH031277777-20240321100000"]}}-->
@HYH031277777 Good job! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:22, 22 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240322032200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240322032200-HYH031277777-20240321100000","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I've already been approved by email.
I'm also posting a Wikipedia talk page!
--Kim younggyun (talk) 10:17, 21 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240321101700","author":"Kim younggyun","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Kim_younggyun-20240321101700-Deadline_2(Week_3)_Younggyun_Kim","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240322032300-Kim_younggyun-20240321101700"]}}-->
@Kim younggyun Yes, topics approved. Good job Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:23, 22 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240322032300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240322032300-Kim_younggyun-20240321101700","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I would appreciate it if you could check out these two articles and give me some feedback.
Thank you! Soongki (talk) 14:43, 21 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240321144300","author":"Soongki","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Soongki-20240321144300-Deadline_2(Week_3)_:_Soongki_Kim","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240322032300-Soongki-20240321144300"]}}-->
@Soongki Good choices - topics approved. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:23, 22 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240322032300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240322032300-Soongki-20240321144300","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor, I have finished my weekly editing.Please check, thank you!longquanyi219.248.199.103 (talk) 10:01, 15 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240315100100","author":"219.248.199.103","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-219.248.199.103-20240315100100-Additional_editors\u2014HUANGQIHAO","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316071100-219.248.199.103-20240315100100"]}}-->
Dear student. You forgot to log in. To complete the task, please log in and sign your post. Edits made without logging in are not counted for our course as they are not tied to your account. --Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:11, 16 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240316071100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316071100-219.248.199.103-20240315100100","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316071200-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316071100"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
@Hkiho If this is your edit, please add references to it in your next series of edits, per Wikipedia:Verifiability (we will cover how to add references in class next week). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:12, 16 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240316071200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316071200-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316071100","replies":["c-Hkiho-20240323095000-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316071200"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Thank you, professor, and I'll keep an eye out for it in future edits Hkiho (talk) 09:50, 23 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240323095000","author":"Hkiho","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hkiho-20240323095000-Hanyangprofessor2-20240316071200","replies":[]}}-->
Hello, professor.
I am taking a lecture 'Everyday Life and Social Structure'.
I have completed the Korean translation task. And I registered those articles on my personal dashboard.
If you check each document's rivison history, you'll find my editing history. [11][12] — Preceding unsigned comment added by Kim younggyun (talk • contribs) 19:26, 21 March 2024 (UTC)
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@Kim younggyun That's a good start. Please make sure that the content you add is referenced and has sufficient blue links (hyperlinks) that point to other Wikipedia articles.
Content that you translate and add from English to Korean needs to have references, otherwise it can be removed from Wikipedia (Korean just as English). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:27, 22 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240322032700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240322032700-Kim_younggyun-20240321192600","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
And please review the important guidelines at ko:위키백과:번역 and ko:위키백과:번역에 대한 조언Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:29, 22 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240322032900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240322032900-Kim_younggyun-20240321192600","replies":["c-Kim_younggyun-20240323132900-Hanyangprofessor2-20240322032900"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Thank you for the feedback, professor.
As you said, I added the references and followed the translation guidelines. Kim younggyun (talk) 13:29, 23 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240323132900","author":"Kim younggyun","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Kim_younggyun-20240323132900-Hanyangprofessor2-20240322032900","replies":[]}}-->
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Hello professor, I chose the encyclopedia Environment of China in this class of 집단지성, translated from English to Chinese
Please check Mcx8202229 (talk) 09:48, 18 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240318094800","author":"Mcx8202229","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Mcx8202229-20240318094800-Deadline_2_Ma_Chenxiao","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240319065100-Mcx8202229-20240318094800"]}}-->
@Mcx8202229 I am afraid that article is already well translated to Chinese as zh:中国的自然环境. You will have to chose another article - how about Environment of India?. If you are working by yourself, remember you need to chose two translation topics. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here06:51, 19 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240319065100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240319065100-Mcx8202229-20240318094800","replies":["c-Mcx8202229-20240320083700-Hanyangprofessor2-20240319065100"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Okay, thank you professor for your guidance. Then my choice is Environment of India translated into English into Chinese, and The 三大队 (网络剧)https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E4%B8%89%E5%A4%A7%E9%98%9F_(%E7%BD%91%E7%BB%9C%E5%89%A7)Chinese into English. Is it okay? Mcx8202229 (talk) 08:37, 20 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240320083700","author":"Mcx8202229","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Mcx8202229-20240320083700-Hanyangprofessor2-20240319065100","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240321050100-Mcx8202229-20240320083700"]}}-->
@Mcx8202229 That seems fine, topics approved. See if you can add additional reviews to the movie article - currently it may be a bit too short (word count) for our main project. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:01, 21 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240321050100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240321050100-Mcx8202229-20240320083700","replies":["c-Mcx8202229-20240321053700-Hanyangprofessor2-20240321050100","c-Mcx8202229-20240321054400-Hanyangprofessor2-20240321050100"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I know Professor, I will write one more movie article and add all three articles to the dashboard. Thank you Professor for your guidance. Mcx8202229 (talk) 05:37, 21 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240321053700","author":"Mcx8202229","type":"comment","level":5,"id":"c-Mcx8202229-20240321053700-Hanyangprofessor2-20240321050100","replies":[]}}-->
Sorry, Professor, I made a typo. It’s two articles. Mcx8202229 (talk) 05:44, 21 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240321054400","author":"Mcx8202229","type":"comment","level":5,"id":"c-Mcx8202229-20240321054400-Hanyangprofessor2-20240321050100","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240322031500-Mcx8202229-20240321054400"]}}-->
@Mcx8202229 Ok - but let me know here what is the name of your chosen article when you pick one up. It should have at least some reviews or awards to meet WP:GNG policy. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:15, 22 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240322031500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":6,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240322031500-Mcx8202229-20240321054400","replies":["c-Mcx8202229-20240323040600-Hanyangprofessor2-20240322031500"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Ok professor, my choices are Environment of India and 三大队 (网络剧)https://w.wiki/9YS$, I will add these two articles to my dashboard Mcx8202229 (talk) 04:06, 23 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240323040600","author":"Mcx8202229","type":"comment","level":7,"id":"c-Mcx8202229-20240323040600-Hanyangprofessor2-20240322031500","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240324033800-Mcx8202229-20240323040600"]}}-->
@Mcx8202229 Topics approved. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:38, 24 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240324033800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":8,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240324033800-Mcx8202229-20240323040600","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
@Jiyoon Leee Beer in Japan is already reserved by other students for translation to Korean and Chinese. Illicit activities of North Korea has been translated into both Korean and Chinese. I am afraid you may need to choose different topics. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:23, 20 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240320052300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240320052300-Jiyoon_Leee-20240320050600","replies":["c-Jiyoon_Leee-20240320063100-Hanyangprofessor2-20240320052300"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
@Jiyoon Leee You did not tell me what language you want to translate them to. Tattooing_in_China can be translated to Korean. Online hate speech can be translated to Chinese. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:51, 21 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240321045100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240321045100-Jiyoon_Leee-20240320063100","replies":["c-Jiyoon_Leee-20240322052500-Hanyangprofessor2-20240321045100"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello, professor, I'm Jiyoon Lee and I'm taking a collective intelligence course. As I told you in class, I'll translate the following two articles into Korean. Please check. Thank you.
Funerary art , Cuisine of HawaiiJiyoon Leee (talk) 05:25, 22 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240322052500","author":"Jiyoon Leee","type":"comment","level":5,"id":"c-Jiyoon_Leee-20240322052500-Hanyangprofessor2-20240321045100","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240324033900-Jiyoon_Leee-20240322052500"]}}-->
@Jiyoon Leee Ok - topics approved. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:39, 24 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240324033900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":6,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240324033900-Jiyoon_Leee-20240322052500","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello, professor. I'm Gyeomgmin Hong,taking the collective intelligence course. I'll do the Wiki project alone. I want to translate [[Dune: Part2]] from English to Korean. please check it out and give me your feedback. Thank you! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Hkm5420 (talk • contribs) 00:12, 22 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240322001200","author":"Hkm5420","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Hkm5420-20240322001200-Deadline2(Week3)_-_Gyeongmin_Hong","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240322032900-Hkm5420-20240322001200"]}}-->
@Hkm5420 This is fine, but you will need to chose one more topic to translate if you are working by yourself. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:29, 22 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240322032900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240322032900-Hkm5420-20240322001200","replies":["c-Hkm5420-20240322035100-Hanyangprofessor2-20240322032900"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
and i will translate "Wonka(film)" from English to Korean. please check it again. thank you. Hkm5420 (talk) 03:51, 22 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240322035100","author":"Hkm5420","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Hkm5420-20240322035100-Hanyangprofessor2-20240322032900","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240324035000-Hkm5420-20240322035100"]}}-->
@Hkm5420 Approved :) Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:50, 24 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240324035000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240324035000-Hkm5420-20240322035100","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello, Professor. I am a student in this class (Introduction to Information Sociology) and (Collective Intelligence in Practice: Understanding Wikipedia). I attended the training, you can check it out via this link.Thank you! Donghem (talk) 05:37, 22 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240322053700","author":"Donghem","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Donghem-20240322053700-Deadline_1(Week2)XUE_DONGXIN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240324035100-Donghem-20240322053700"]}}-->
@Donghem Ok. Please try to complete future deadlines on time. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:51, 24 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240324035100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240324035100-Donghem-20240322053700","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Good evening, Professor.
I am a student in both the Collective Intelligence in Practice and Introduction to Information Sociology courses. Here's my wikivoyage edit assignmentThank you for checking. Shuo1103 (talk) 12:13, 22 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240322121300","author":"Shuo1103","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Shuo1103-20240322121300-Weekly_editing-ZHANGMINGSHUO","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240324040100-Shuo1103-20240322121300"]}}-->
@Shuo1103 Please note that the Collective Intelligence class does not have a wikivoyage assignment - but the edits can be accepted for our weekly edit assignment. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:01, 24 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240324040100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240324040100-Shuo1103-20240322121300","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Wishing you a pleasant weekend! 왕예화 (talk) 12:21, 22 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240322122100","author":"\uc655\uc608\ud654","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-\uc655\uc608\ud654-20240322122100-Deadline_2(Week_3)_:_WANG_YIHUA,LI_MENGRU","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240324040200-\uc655\uc608\ud654-20240322122100"]}}-->
@왕예화 Ok - topics have been recorded and approved. Good luck! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:02, 24 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240324040200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240324040200-\uc655\uc608\ud654-20240322122100","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Hello. Professor. My name is Kim minjun taking the Collective Intelligence class. I'll do the main Wiki project alone. I'd like to ask if it's possible for me to do it alone. Also, i selected the article about String of Pearls (Indian Ocean). I will translate that article to Korean. Please check it. I'll visit you one more time during next week's class to get confirmation on the topic. KMJ0521 (talk) 12:53, 22 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240322125300","author":"KMJ0521","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-KMJ0521-20240322125300-Deadline2(Week3)_-_Kim_minjun","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240324040300-KMJ0521-20240322125300"]}}-->
@KMJ0521 That's fine but you will need to chose one more topic to translate. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:03, 24 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240324040300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240324040300-KMJ0521-20240322125300","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Hello Professor, I am ZHONG XIN, a student of Collective Intelligence and Wikipedia.
I have completed more than twenty English Wikipedia edits this week, please check.
I would appreciate it if you could give me any corrections or suggestions.
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@Zhongxxin Good job! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:59, 24 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240324055900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240324055900-Zhongxxin-20240322163000","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear professor, good afternoon. Here are the 10 Wikipedia edits I made this week. Please review.
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@Muqing112233 Good. When you add a reference with Chinese title like you did here, please also add the translated title in English using the translated title parameter. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here06:01, 24 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240324060100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240324060100-Muqing112233-20240323034500","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello, professor, I have supplemented and explained the article peony on Wikipedia. Please check it, thank you. DENG HUICHEN (talk) 06:14, 23 March 2024 (UTC)
https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Paeonia_%C3%97_suffruticosa&action=edit§ion=8 — Preceding unsigned comment added by 등혜진 (talk • contribs) 07:39, 23 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240323061400","author":"\ub4f1\ud61c\uc9c4","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-\ub4f1\ud61c\uc9c4-20240323061400-Deadline_2(Week_3)_DENGHUICHEN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240324060600-\ub4f1\ud61c\uc9c4-20240323061400"],"displayName":"DENG HUICHEN"}}-->
@등혜진 Ok. But please remember all content added to Wikipedia has to be referenced (see WP:V). I have removed some content that was unreferenced and not written in correct English. In the future, please use Grammarly or similar tools to check for errors in the content you add. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here06:06, 24 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240324060600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240324060600-\ub4f1\ud61c\uc9c4-20240323061400","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Hello, professor! I've finished editing! Please check! I'll add translation work soon, too!
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@Huejyi Good. Please review why your edit was removed here. Your other edits to Tik Tok topics are very good. Keep it up! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here06:15, 24 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240324061500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240324061500-Huejyi-20240323063000","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Article translated from English to Chinese(DENGHUICHEN)
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Hello, professor! I'm DENGHUICHEN,taking the Collective Intelligence in Practice course.I want to add (Abortion in Japan ) this article and translate it from English into Chinese,thank you! DENG HUICHEN (talk) 08:02, 23 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240323080200","author":"\ub4f1\ud61c\uc9c4","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-\ub4f1\ud61c\uc9c4-20240323080200-Article_translated_from_English_to_Chinese(DENGHUICHEN)","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240324061800-\ub4f1\ud61c\uc9c4-20240323080200"],"displayName":"DENG HUICHEN"}}-->
@등혜진Abortion in Japan is a good choice, but you will need to chose one more topic to translate. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here06:18, 24 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240324061800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240324061800-\ub4f1\ud61c\uc9c4-20240323080200","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello, professor. I'm Lee Yunjoo, I'm taking classes of 'Collective Intelligence in Practice'. I added a reference to this article: History of Korea.
also, I finished editing wiki more than 10 this week. Leeyj0401 Please check it out. Thank you! Leeyj0401 (talk) 09:10, 23 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240323091000","author":"Leeyj0401","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Leeyj0401-20240323091000-Deadline_3(Week_4)_:Lee_Yunjoo","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240324062400-Leeyj0401-20240323091000"]}}-->
@Leeyj0401 Very good. But remember that all content we add to Wikipedia should be referenced. For example here I see some content you added that is not referenced. Please add references in your next week edits. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here06:24, 24 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240324062400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240324062400-Leeyj0401-20240323091000","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello Professor, we are students in the course Collective Intelligence and Wikipedia. @Redyeoniand I wanted to form the same team to complete the task of translating the article assigned by the professorWe are going to translate the article Russian fashion from English to Chinese, and the article 2024年河北邯郸初中生杀人埋尸案 from Chinese to English, please check if we are feasible, look forward to your reply, if approved I will be grateful, and start the translation work as soon as possible. Hkiho (talk) 09:13, 23 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240323091300","author":"Hkiho","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Hkiho-20240323091300-Deadline_2(Week_3)_\uff1aHUANGQIHAO,HONGJIARAN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240324062600-Hkiho-20240323091300"]}}-->
@Hkiho Good topics - all approved! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here06:26, 24 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240324062600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240324062600-Hkiho-20240323091300","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I'd like to tell you about my work this week and ask for feedback.
1.I completed Wikipedia edits ten times a week.
2.Published a blog post:W3.1WSH0927 (talk) 09:20, 23 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240323092000","author":"WSH0927","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-WSH0927-20240323092000-Weekly_editing_\u2014WU_SHUHAN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240324062900-WSH0927-20240323092000"]}}-->
@WSH0927 Well done. When you add references with Chinese titles, please add English translation of the titles using the translated title parameter. PS. I am glad you found the story of Michael S. Hart interesting. His biography can be translated to Chinese for extra credit. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here06:29, 24 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240324062900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240324062900-WSH0927-20240323092000","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Deadline3(Week4) - Sociology of Everyday Life - CHENG SIYU
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Hello, professor. I'm CHENG SIYU, the student of Sociology of Everyday Life. This week I translated "Observer Bias" in the sandbox. This is my sandbox. Please check. And I found that the second article I selected cannot seem to be edited at the same time as the first article. Should I start editing the second article after the first article is published?Looking forward to your reply, thank you. Csiiiyu (talk) 13:49, 23 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240323134900","author":"Csiiiyu","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Csiiiyu-20240323134900-Deadline3(Week4)_-_Sociology_of_Everyday_Life_-_CHENG_SIYU","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240324063700-Csiiiyu-20240323134900"]}}-->
@Csiiiyu Your translation is a good start. You can ask Chinese editors for feedback on Discord or the Help forum. Or try this: zh:维基百科:同行评审
I am not sure what you mean about the problem with the second article. You can create another sandbox to work on it - talk to me during or after class if you need help with this. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here06:37, 24 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240324063700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240324063700-Csiiiyu-20240323134900","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Hello professor, we are LIYULUN, SHAOJIANUAN from the eighth group. We discussed the theme of our group with you. English translation into Chinese - Intensive animal farming. Translated from Chinese to English - 开心宝贝Happy Baby. LIYULUN (talk) 16:56, 23 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240323165600","author":"LIYULUN","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-LIYULUN-20240323165600-Deadline_2(Week_3)_\uff1aLIYULUN_,SHAOJIANUAN,_group8(Collective_Intelligence_and_W","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240324063900-LIYULUN-20240323165600"]}}-->
@LIYULUN Good, topics approved! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here06:39, 24 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240324063900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240324063900-LIYULUN-20240323165600","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello Professor, I have finished editing Wikipedia this week and blogging weekly.Please check. Thank you. 유신예 (talk) 19:43, 23 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240323194300","author":"\uc720\uc2e0\uc608","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-\uc720\uc2e0\uc608-20240323194300-collective_intelligence_Deadline2(week3)\uff1aLIU_XINRUI","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240324064100-\uc720\uc2e0\uc608-20240323194300"]}}-->
@유신예 I am glad you found the story of Michael S. Hart interesting. His biography can be translated to Chinese for extra credit. Regarding your weekly edits, they look fine but remember that half of them should be in English. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here06:41, 24 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240324064100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240324064100-\uc720\uc2e0\uc608-20240323194300","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Hello, professor. I am Kim Yeon Jun from Everyday Life and Social Structure. I want to translate Online hate speech into Korean. Is it possible? Kim1357 (talk) 08:37, 17 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240317083700","author":"Kim1357","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Kim1357-20240317083700-Deadline2(Week3)_kim_yeonjun","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240318094600-Kim1357-20240317083700"]}}-->
@Kim1357 Yes, this is approved. But you will need to chose one more topic to translate. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here09:46, 18 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240318094600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240318094600-Kim1357-20240317083700","replies":["c-Kim1357-20240324134800-Hanyangprofessor2-20240318094600"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I will choose Mandate of Heaven as an additional topic. Is it possible? Kim1357 (talk) 13:48, 24 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240324134800","author":"Kim1357","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Kim1357-20240324134800-Hanyangprofessor2-20240318094600","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240324225300-Kim1357-20240324134800"]}}-->
@Kim1357 Yes - topic approved Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here22:53, 24 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240324225300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240324225300-Kim1357-20240324134800","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello, professor.
I'll do the Wiki project alone. I want to translate Promotion of anorexia from English to Korean. please check it out and give me your feedback. Thank you! Cookinu (talk) 17:33, 21 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240321173300","author":"Cookinu","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Cookinu-20240321173300-Deadline2(Week3)_-_Kwon_Jaeeun","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240322032500-Cookinu-20240321173300"]}}-->
@Cookinu That's a good topic - approved. But you will need to chose one more topic to translate if you are working by yourself. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:25, 22 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240322032500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240322032500-Cookinu-20240321173300","replies":["c-Cookinu-20240324133200-Hanyangprofessor2-20240322032500"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Then I would like to translate Film censorship from English to Korean. Cookinu (talk) 13:32, 24 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240324133200","author":"Cookinu","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Cookinu-20240324133200-Hanyangprofessor2-20240322032500","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240324225400-Cookinu-20240324133200"]}}-->
@Cookinu Ok - topic approved! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here22:54, 24 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240324225400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240324225400-Cookinu-20240324133200","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Hello Professor, I am LI MENGRU, a student of Collective Intelligence and Wikipedia.
I have completed more than ten English Wikipedia edits this week, please check here.
I would appreciate it if you could give me any suggestions. Thank you!TMXX0818 (talk) 06:53, 24 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240324065300","author":"TMXX0818","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-TMXX0818-20240324065300-Weekly_wiki_edits-LI_MENGRU","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240324230300-TMXX0818-20240324065300"]}}-->
@TMXX0818 Good job! See if you can use more scholarly references in the future. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here23:03, 24 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240324230300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240324230300-TMXX0818-20240324065300","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello, Professor. The article I will write is: articles about Chinese women missing from English Wikipedia . Hope you pass it. I will create an English article about the luxury lady. And I found that the Chinese Wikipedia also lacks the content about the luxury lady, I will try to edit. This is a Chinese encyclopedia about the luxury lady, you can refer to it and make suggestions. thank you. WSH0927 (talk) 13:26, 17 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240317132600","author":"WSH0927","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-WSH0927-20240317132600-Deadline_2_(Week_3)\uff1aWU_SHUHAN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240319042300-WSH0927-20240317132600"]}}-->
@WSH0927 This seems like a good topic. However, remember to use reliable sources such as books, academic papers or newspapers. Baidu cannot be used as a source on Wikipedia (see "WP:BAIDU), and we cannot copy content from baidu as it would be plagiarism and copyright violation. But you can write the article based on the sources cited on Baidu, as long as you can access them and read/verify their content. Please let me know what is the name of your article in Chinese and English. "the luxury lady" is not a name that the article can be published under. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:23, 19 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240319042300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240319042300-WSH0927-20240317132600","replies":["c-WSH0927-20240320064600-Hanyangprofessor2-20240319042300"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
@WSH0927 It sounds possible. Does she have an article on Chinese Wikipedia? If so, can you link it for me? Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:58, 21 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240321045800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240321045800-WSH0927-20240320064600","replies":["c-WSH0927-20240321060700-Hanyangprofessor2-20240321045800"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I'm sorry, Professor. I can't find She ci in Chinese Wikipedia. I think there's too little information about her. Not suitable for project work. I picked another Chinese woman who was interested: Tian Xiwei. This is the Chinese Wikipedia about her:田曦薇Can I create an article with Tian Xiwei as the title? WSH0927 (talk) 06:07, 21 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240321060700","author":"WSH0927","type":"comment","level":5,"id":"c-WSH0927-20240321060700-Hanyangprofessor2-20240321045800","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240322031800-WSH0927-20240321060700"]}}-->
@WSH0927 It is possible Shi Ci or your first suggestion (奢香夫人(约1361年—1396年)) would be fine - you can start by creating an article about her (them) on Chinese Wikipedia for extra credit, then translate it to English. With regards to Tian Xiwei, that article is very short, so while you can translate it to English, it would not be enough for a full project (but it is again totally fine to do it for extra points). Check our syllabus for word counts. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:18, 22 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240322031800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":6,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240322031800-WSH0927-20240321060700","replies":["c-WSH0927-20240323090900-Hanyangprofessor2-20240322031800"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Yes, Professor. I take your advice. Will my weekly progress be based on She Ci's Chinese Wikipedia? It is translated into English at the final stage. I would like to know what the weekly progress of my project should be in the future. WSH0927 (talk) 09:09, 23 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240323090900","author":"WSH0927","type":"comment","level":7,"id":"c-WSH0927-20240323090900-Hanyangprofessor2-20240322031800","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240324033600-WSH0927-20240323090900"]}}-->
@WSH0927 For your weekly edits, all edits that are not related to your main project will count. So first we need to decide what is your main project. If you are working solo, one English article will be ok. If She Ci does not have an article on Chinese nor English Wikipedia, you can use your weekly edits to create and improve her biography in Chinese and for your main project translate it to English. Please remember that content you add to Wikipedia has to be referenced to reliable sources (academic books, papers, or newspapers) and not Baidu or social media (blogs). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:36, 24 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240324033600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":8,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240324033600-WSH0927-20240323090900","replies":["c-WSH0927-20240325011100-Hanyangprofessor2-20240324033600"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Yes, professor. I understand. I will edit the English article with the title of She Ci as the main project. And She Ci's weekly Chinese article editing. WSH0927 (talk) 01:11, 25 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240325011100","author":"WSH0927","type":"comment","level":9,"id":"c-WSH0927-20240325011100-Hanyangprofessor2-20240324033600","replies":[]}}-->
Hello, professor. I am Chaeyeong Lee , taking an "Everyday Life and Social" structure. I decided on the article.I chose Beer in Japan(I told you last time) and The New York Times.I would like to translate two articles into Korean. Is it possible? Chaeyeong09 (talk) 09:44, 18 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240318094400","author":"Chaeyeong09","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Chaeyeong09-20240318094400-Deadline_2_(week3)_Chaeyeong_Lee","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240319063900-Chaeyeong09-20240318094400"]}}-->
@Chaeyeong09 Beer in Japan is approved but The New York Times has already been chosen by another student. How about The Economist instead? Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here06:39, 19 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240319063900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240319063900-Chaeyeong09-20240318094400","replies":["c-Chaeyeong09-20240325014800-Hanyangprofessor2-20240319063900"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
ok. so I chose Beer in Japan and The Economist. Chaeyeong09 (talk) 01:48, 25 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240325014800","author":"Chaeyeong09","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Chaeyeong09-20240325014800-Hanyangprofessor2-20240319063900","replies":[]}}-->
I'm LI LINLIN, taking classes of 'Understanding Wikipedia' and 'Everyday Life and Social Structure'.
I finished the deadline3: add an inline reference, both of the two classes, and I also use the User:Headbomb/unreliable after I add the references to make sure they are feasible. You can check here and here.
Thank u~ Leeinm (talk) 07:14, 22 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240322071400","author":"Leeinm","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Leeinm-20240322071400-Deadline_3(Week_4)-LI_LINLIN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240324035800-Leeinm-20240322071400"]}}-->
I have fixed the url, change it to the oversea link. You can check here. Leeinm (talk) 02:10, 25 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240325021000","author":"Leeinm","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Leeinm-20240325021000-Hanyangprofessor2-20240324035800","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240325030900-Leeinm-20240325021000"]}}-->
@Leeinm Very good Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:09, 25 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240325030900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240325030900-Leeinm-20240325021000","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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there is unnecessary underlinking, for example <u>had been bullying the victim at school</u>. It should be removed.
You will also need to add more blue links to other Wikipedia articles. If a topic exists in Chinese but not English, please link it using this tool: Template:Interlanguage link
the incident was covered by international media, including English. Please add some references in English. I recommend sources like CNN, Washington Post, The Guardian, BBC
for your existing references, add translated title (in English, do not replace to existing Chinese title - use the translated title parameter. Ask me in class if you need help). Add other missing medadata (date, names of authors) and fix publisher from url to company name (ex. not www.nbd.com.cn but National Business Daily).
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Hello, professor. Corrected the wrong reference forSugar (15& album)#Promotions. Please check. Thanks! Cookinu (talk) 14:52, 24 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240324145200","author":"Cookinu","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Cookinu-20240324145200-Deadline_3(Week4)_Kwon_Jaeeun","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240325032500-Cookinu-20240324145200"]}}-->
@Cookinu Good job replacing Facebook content with something less social media-ish. Keep it up! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:25, 25 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240325032500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240325032500-Cookinu-20240324145200","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Hi professor. I chose the CHINESE CENSORSHIP ABROAD and ONLINE HATE SPEECH for second project.
I would like to translate these two article into Korean. Is it available? Njkcs478 (talk) 01:58, 25 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240325015800","author":"Njkcs478","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Njkcs478-20240325015800-Deadline2(week3)_KIM_NAKYOUNG","replies":["c-Njkcs478-20240325022300-Njkcs478-20240325015800"]}}-->
Can you check CORRUPTION IN RUSSIA or INTERNET CENSORSHIP IN THE UNITED STATES is available topic instead of ONLINE HATE SPEECH? Njkcs478 (talk) 02:23, 25 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240325022300","author":"Njkcs478","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Njkcs478-20240325022300-Njkcs478-20240325015800","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240325034600-Njkcs478-20240325022300"]}}-->
Hello, professor. I am a student taking Everyday Life and Social Structure class. I have completed the wiki training course and dashboard assignment, so please check it. https://dashboard.wikiedu.org/training/studentsMinis707 (talk) 02:28, 25 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240325022800","author":"Minis707","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Minis707-20240325022800-Deadline1(\uc81c2\uc8fc)_\uae40\ubbfc\uc9c0","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240325034700-Minis707-20240325022800"]}}-->
@Minis707 Ok! Please try to complete other assignments on time. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:47, 25 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240325034700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240325034700-Minis707-20240325022800","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Deadline3(week4) Sociology of Everyday Life - Shin seongmin
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Hi professor! I added some references in article of Chin Jung-kwon notable South Korean aesthetician, critic, and professor and article of Ryu Ho-jeong a South Korean politician Shinseongmin1917 (talk) 02:30, 25 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240325023000","author":"Shinseongmin1917","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Shinseongmin1917-20240325023000-Deadline3(week4)_Sociology_of_Everyday_Life_-_Shin_seongmin","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240325034800-Shinseongmin1917-20240325023000"]}}-->
@Shinseongmin1917 Well done! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:48, 25 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240325034800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240325034800-Shinseongmin1917-20240325023000","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello, professor. I'm Seohyun Son. I am a student taking Everyday Life and Social Structure class. I have completed the wiki training course and dashboard assignment, so please check it. https://dashboard.wikiedu.org/training/students Seohyun S (talk) 02:30, 25 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240325023000","author":"Seohyun S","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Seohyun_S-20240325023000-Deadline1(\uc81c2\uc8fc)_\uc190\uc11c\ud604","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240325034800-Seohyun_S-20240325023000"]}}-->
@Seohyun S Good. Please try to complete other assignments on time. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:48, 25 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240325034800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240325034800-Seohyun_S-20240325023000","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello, professor. I am a student taking Everyday Life and Social Structure class.
I chose to translate 'Korean rock' into Korean for my Week 3 assignment. I will also upload the translation assignment soon. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Korean_rock
Please check it out! Seohyun S (talk) 02:49, 25 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240325024900","author":"Seohyun S","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Seohyun_S-20240325024900-Deadline2(\uc81c3\uc8fc)_\uc190\uc11c\ud604","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240325035000-Seohyun_S-20240325024900"]}}-->
@Seohyun S I am afraid Korean rock is already reserved by another student. You will need to chose a different topic. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:50, 25 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240325035000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240325035000-Seohyun_S-20240325024900","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello Professor, I am taking every day Life and Social Structure class. I chose to translate Film Sensibility in South_Korea into Korean for my 3rd week assignment. I will also upload the translation assignment soon. Please check.
Dear student. Please remember to sign your wiki messages properly. That topic is already reserved for another student and you will need to choose a different one. --Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:51, 25 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240325035100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240325035100-Deadline2(\uc81c3\uc8fc)_\uae40\ubbfc\uc9c0","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello Professor, I have completed ten edits per week. Please check it. If there is anything I did not do well, please remind me and I will correct it immediately. Thank you! Hkiho (talk) 11:14, 23 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240323111400","author":"Hkiho","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Hkiho-20240323111400-Weekly_editing_-HUANGQIHAO","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240324063200-Hkiho-20240323111400"]}}-->
@Hkiho Good start. Unfortunately your edits were removed from Wikipedia because they were not referenced. Please remember to add only referenced content to Wikipedia - see WP:V . You can restore your edit if you can back it up with reliable sources. Baidu is not allowed as a reference on Wikipedia. See WP:BAIDUPiotrus at Hanyang| reply here06:32, 24 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240324063200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240324063200-Hkiho-20240323111400","replies":["c-Hkiho-20240325042700-Hanyangprofessor2-20240324063200"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Thank you, professor. Thanks to your reminder, I found the problem. I'll fix it next time Hkiho (talk) 04:27, 25 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240325042700","author":"Hkiho","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Hkiho-20240325042700-Hanyangprofessor2-20240324063200","replies":[]}}-->
Hello Professor, we are students in the course Collective Intelligence and Wikipedia.
@CHENG SHIYI and I wanted to form the same team to complete the task of translating the article assigned by the professor.We've already given feedback to the professor in class today that we plan to translate the article "中国史前文化" into English and then translate the article "Organic food culture" into Chinese.
Please check and let us know if this is feasible, thank you.
Have a wonderful weekend!
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@Zhongxxin This is good. However, 中国史前文化 is missing many references. Remember that only referenced content can be translated. Fortunately, you can also rely on French fr:Préhistoire de la ChineYo which is good quality and has many references. You can add content from French to Chinese for extra credit, then translate Chinese to English. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:56, 24 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240324055600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240324055600-Zhongxxin-20240322132100","replies":["c-Zhongxxin-20240325045600-Hanyangprofessor2-20240324055600"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Thank you for your suggestion. I will work hard to complete it Zhongxxin (talk) 04:56, 25 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240325045600","author":"Zhongxxin","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Zhongxxin-20240325045600-Hanyangprofessor2-20240324055600","replies":[]}}-->
Hello professor. I'm Changyeop Jung, taking the collective intelligence course. I'll do the Wiki project alone. I selected the article about Yang Hee-eun. Please check it. Thank you! Ckdduq0919 (talk) 05:57, 22 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240322055700","author":"Ckdduq0919","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Ckdduq0919-20240322055700-Deadline2_(Week3)_-_Changyeop_Jung","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240324035300-Ckdduq0919-20240322055700"]}}-->
@Ckdduq0919 Very good. You will improve her article in English? Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:53, 24 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240324035300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240324035300-Ckdduq0919-20240322055700","replies":["c-Ckdduq0919-20240325075800-Hanyangprofessor2-20240324035300"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Yes! I will improve her article in English. Ckdduq0919 (talk) 07:58, 25 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240325075800","author":"Ckdduq0919","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Ckdduq0919-20240325075800-Hanyangprofessor2-20240324035300","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240326052900-Ckdduq0919-20240325075800"]}}-->
@Ckdduq0919 Very good, I am looking forward to reading more about her! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:29, 26 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240326052900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240326052900-Ckdduq0919-20240325075800","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello, professor, I have joined the dashboard system. And completed the training task. Please ask the professor to check it. thank you! DENG HUICHEN (talk) 05:42, 23 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240323054200","author":"\ub4f1\ud61c\uc9c4","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-\ub4f1\ud61c\uc9c4-20240323054200-Deadline_1_(Week_2)_DENGHUICHEN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240324060100-\ub4f1\ud61c\uc9c4-20240323054200"],"displayName":"DENG HUICHEN"}}-->
@등혜진 Ok! Which training task did you complete? Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here06:01, 24 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240324060100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240324060100-\ub4f1\ud61c\uc9c4-20240323054200","replies":["c-\ub4f1\ud61c\uc9c4-20240324135300-Hanyangprofessor2-20240324060100"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
https://dashboard.wikiedu.org/training/studentsDENG HUICHEN (talk) 13:53, 24 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240324135300","author":"\ub4f1\ud61c\uc9c4","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-\ub4f1\ud61c\uc9c4-20240324135300-Hanyangprofessor2-20240324060100","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240326052900-\ub4f1\ud61c\uc9c4-20240324135300"],"displayName":"DENG HUICHEN"}}-->
Ok! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:29, 26 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240326052900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240326052900-\ub4f1\ud61c\uc9c4-20240324135300","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Seohyun S (talk) 04:11, 25 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240325041100","author":"Seohyun S","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Seohyun_S-20240325041100-Deadline2(\uc81c3\uc8fc)_\uc190\uc11c\ud604_2","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240326053200-Seohyun_S-20240325041100"]}}-->
@Seohyun S Good choice, topic approved, but remember you need to chose one more topic to translate. How about Vietnam War protest music? Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:32, 26 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240326053200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240326053200-Seohyun_S-20240325041100","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello professor, I am taking life and social structure classes every day. I decided again to translate Information overload into Korean for my week 3 assignment. I will also upload the translation assignment soon. Please check.
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@Minis707 Good choice, topic approved, but remember you need to chose one more topic to translate. Also, please talk to me after class as I cannot find Minis707 in our spreadsheet; there are two students with your name 김민지 but they reported two different Wikipedia usernames to me. Please let me know if one of them is yours (but wrong) or if you are a third 김민지 taking my class this year. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:36, 26 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240326053600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240326053600-Minis707-20240325041600","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Excuse me, Professor. .About my project assignment: Wikidata query: articles about Chinese women missing from English Wikipedia . As we discussed before, I will create an English Wikipedia with the title She Ci. But I suddenly discovered that her article already existed under another name: She Xiang. Although it has very little content. And here is her Chinese Wikipedia: She Xiang. Can I continue with my original project topic, or can I replace another Chinese woman to create the article? Please tell me your suggestion. WSH0927 (talk) 04:54, 25 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240325045400","author":"WSH0927","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-WSH0927-20240325045400-Project_operation\uff1aWU_SHUHAN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240326054300-WSH0927-20240325045400"]}}-->
@WSH0927 It is fine to continue - you can expand the Chinese article and the English one, as we discussed. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:43, 26 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240326054300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240326054300-WSH0927-20240325045400","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Hello professor,I made at least one edit outside the sandbox and added an inline reference to it inside the sandbox. And the editor of Wikivoyage.Please check it out, thank you! Yangpeifu (talk) 05:55, 25 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240325055500","author":"Yangpeifu","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Yangpeifu-20240325055500-Deadline3(week4)_YANG_PEIFU","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240328041700-Yangpeifu-20240325055500"]}}-->
@Yangpeifu Ok. Please make sure to check the feedback on your draft I provided at #Deadline 2(week3)YANGPEIFU above Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:17, 28 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240328041700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240328041700-Yangpeifu-20240325055500","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello! I'm taking Collective Intelligence and Wikipedia. I deleted dead link and added new Citation. Please check it Thank you! Ckdduq0919 (talk) 09:13, 25 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240325091300","author":"Ckdduq0919","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Ckdduq0919-20240325091300-Deadline_3_:_Week_4_-_Chang_yeop_Jung","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240328042700-Ckdduq0919-20240325091300"]}}-->
@Ckdduq0919 Good job! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:27, 28 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240328042700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240328042700-Ckdduq0919-20240325091300","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Deadline3: week4 - Kim minjun (Collective intelligence)
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@KMJ0521 Well done. When using edit summaries on Korean Wikipedia, it is ok and even recommended to use Korean not English. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:30, 28 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240328043000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240328043000-KMJ0521-20240325100900","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello! Professor. I am YUE ZIYI, a student majoring in sociology of daily life. This week I translated Sailor tattoos and Social psychology (sociology) in the sandbox. Here's mine User:YZY2233/沙盒2 and User:YZY2233/沙盒 , Please check. YZY2233 (talk) 10:48, 25 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240325104800","author":"YZY2233","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-YZY2233-20240325104800-Deadline_4_(Week_5)YUE_ZIYI","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240328043200-YZY2233-20240325104800"]}}-->
@YZY2233 Your translation is a good start. You can ask Chinese editors for feedback on Discord or the Help forum. Or try this: zh:维基百科:同行评审Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:32, 28 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240328043200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240328043200-YZY2233-20240325104800","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello, professor. I'm ZHANG QI, the student of Sociology of Everyday Life and Collective Intelligence in Practice. This week I translated "Hangzhou Daily" in the sandbox. This is my sandbox. Please check it.
I have a question, I have two of your classes with a total of four articles. Does this mean that I have to start preparing four articles at the same time, or can I finish one article before editing the next one. ZHANGQI1066 (talk) 13:39, 25 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240325133900","author":"ZHANGQI1066","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-ZHANGQI1066-20240325133900-Deadline_3(week4)_-ZHANG_QI","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240328050800-ZHANGQI1066-20240325133900"]}}-->
@ZHANGQI1066 It is totally fine to finish one before starting on another.
Your draft is quite good. A few sentences need clarification, for example "n March 1992, the folio 4-page "West Lake Weekend" (later expanded to 8 color printing)" is missing a verb. I recommend using a service like Grammarly to double check your prose.
Some content in your draft needs references, for example the paragraph "The Hangzhou Daily now has 8 pages on Mondays, 20 pages on Tuesdays and Wednesdays, 24 pages on Thursdays and Fridays, and 4 pages on Saturdays, Sundays and holidays. The content of the newspaper covers important news, Hangzhou news, district and county (city) news, Zhejiang news, China and international news, economic news, culture and sports news and supplements." If the Chinese version is also missing a reference, you can add it there as well for extra credit.
If a topic exists in Chinese but not English, please link it using this tool: Template:Interlanguage link. For example, I'd expect Shenyang Daily to have a zh wiki article. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:08, 28 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240328050800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240328050800-ZHANGQI1066-20240325133900","replies":["c-218.235.241.135-20240328051800-Hanyangprofessor2-20240328050800"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Thank you very much for the correction. During this period, I will make good revisions to my article. 218.235.241.135 (talk) 05:18, 28 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240328051800","author":"218.235.241.135","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-218.235.241.135-20240328051800-Hanyangprofessor2-20240328050800","replies":[]}}-->
Hello Professor, I am ZHANG QI and I am a student of 'Collective Intelligence course' and ‘Everyday Life and Social Structure’. I have completed the selection of the topic for my Collective Intelligence course. I want to choose the theme of Everyday Life and Social Structure for this course now.The theme I want to choose is https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Chinese_influence_on_Japanese_culture and https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/重庆历史ZHANGQI1066 (talk) 11:48, 25 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240325114800","author":"ZHANGQI1066","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-ZHANGQI1066-20240325114800-Deadline_2_(week3)_-ZHANG_QI_2","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240328043600-ZHANGQI1066-20240325114800"]}}-->
@ZHANGQI1066 Good. I assume the latter means that you will translate the former (Chinese influence...) to Chinese and expand the existing article on History of Chongqing in English? Topics approved. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:36, 28 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240328043600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240328043600-ZHANGQI1066-20240325114800","replies":["c-ZHANGQI1066-20240328052400-Hanyangprofessor2-20240328043600"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Yes, Chongqing history is an article I want to translate from Chinese to English. Chinese Influence on Japanese culture is an Article I Want to Translate from English to Chinese.These two articles are my own group of articles for the class on 'Everyday Life and Social Structure’ ZHANGQI1066 (talk) 05:24, 28 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240328052400","author":"ZHANGQI1066","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-ZHANGQI1066-20240328052400-Hanyangprofessor2-20240328043600","replies":[]}}-->
@Seohyun S Good choice, topic approved, but remember you need to chose one more topic to translate. How about Vietnam War protest music?
I see, professor. I will translate and upload 'South Korean protest music' and 'Vietnam War protest music'. Thank you.
+By when do I have to submit the assignment??? Seohyun S (talk) 12:55, 26 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240326125500","author":"Seohyun S","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Seohyun_S-20240326125500-Deadline2(\uc81c3\uc8fc)_\uc190\uc11c\ud604_3","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240328053200-Seohyun_S-20240326125500"]}}-->
@Seohyun S Topics approved. Good job. Please see syllabus for information on deadlines. If you cannot find them, ask me in class. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:32, 28 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240328053200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240328053200-Seohyun_S-20240326125500","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
You can check out the reference I added through here.
I would appreciate feedback on my reference after you confirm it.
Thank you. Soongki (talk) 15:29, 26 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240326152900","author":"Soongki","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Soongki-20240326152900-Deadline3(week_4)_-_Soongki_Kim","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240328053300-Soongki-20240326152900"]}}-->
@Soongki Very good, it looks fine. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:33, 28 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240328053300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240328053300-Soongki-20240326152900","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Professor, I am a student at Collective Intelligence in Practice: This is my 40th Wikipedia edit this month, pleasecheckitBai0926 (talk) 00:48, 27 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240327004800","author":"Bai0926","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Bai0926-20240327004800-Wikipedia_edit\uff1aBAILINHAN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240328054200-Bai0926-20240327004800"]}}-->
@Bai0926 Your edits look quite good, but some further fixes are needed.
In here, one of the paragraphs you added has no reference - this needs to be fixed - see Wikipedia:Verifiability.
In Pegasus 2, there is no need to add the same review to the lead and the body. First, add to the body, then summarize the content in the lead shortly. Baidu is also not an acceptable source (see WP:BAIDU). Some content is also unreferenced; I've removed some empty headings as Wikipedia does not allow empty section headings.
'Evaluate' is not a term that is used in section headings in English. Perhaps you mean 'Reception'. Please study IWikipedia:Manual of Style/Film - I expect you will find it very useful. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:42, 28 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240328054200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240328054200-Bai0926-20240327004800","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear professor, I am Zhang Zehua from the Collective Intelligence and Wikipedia course. These are the ten Wikipedia edits I completed this week Wu Sha, please check them out, thank you! ZHANG0822ZH (talk) 01:26, 27 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240327012600","author":"ZHANG0822ZH","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-ZHANG0822ZH-20240327012600-Deadline_3_(Week_4):ZHANG_ZEHUA","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240328061100-ZHANG0822ZH-20240327012600"]}}-->
@ZHANG0822ZH Excellent job, this looks very nice! Keep it up! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here06:11, 28 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240328061100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240328061100-ZHANG0822ZH-20240327012600","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Good evening professor. I translated KoreanRock Wiki. You can find my name on edit tab. Have a good night. Seoyoon J (talk) 10:42, 27 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240327104200","author":"Seoyoon J","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Seoyoon_J-20240327104200-Dead_line3(week_4)_Seoyoon_Jang","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240328063000-Seoyoon_J-20240327104200"]}}-->
@Seoyoon J Good, but please remember to add references or content you add may be removed from Wikipedia. See Wikipedia:Verifiability . This also applies to Korean Wikipedia, see ko:위키백과:확인 가능Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here06:30, 28 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240328063000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240328063000-Seoyoon_J-20240327104200","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello Professor! After you told me last time, I chose to translate "Ming Dynasty Zheng family" from Chinese to English in my Collective Intelligence in Practice class.Please check it out, thank you! Donghem (talk) 11:06, 27 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240327110600","author":"Donghem","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Donghem-20240327110600-Article_translation\uff1aXue_Dongxin","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240328063200-Donghem-20240327110600"]}}-->
@Donghem Ok, very good choice, topic approved. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here06:32, 28 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240328063200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240328063200-Donghem-20240327110600","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Hello Professor, my friend Tian Xiaoyu and I want to complete the translation work in a team. Tian Xiaoyu registered the translation work last week as a personal project and now wants to cancel the individual project to enter the team work.
Here are the translation topics we have chosen:
Collective Intelligence and Wikipedia:"copyfaud" This article was translated from English to Chinese."奇虎360相关争议"This article was translated from Chinese into English.
Everyday Life and Social Structure :"Censorship of TikTok "This article was translated from English to Chinese."豫章书院修身教育专修学校"This article was translated from Chinese into English.
Please help us check whether it is feasible, thank you!
Have a nice day! WYRRRR (talk) 07:55, 25 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240325075500","author":"WYRRRR","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-WYRRRR-20240325075500-Deadline_2(Week_3)_WANG_YUERONG,TIAN_XIAOYU","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240328042600-WYRRRR-20240325075500"]}}-->
@WYRRRR @Sephyy I see. Your friend Tian Xiaoyu previously told me they want to work individually and they have chosen articles they want to translate for Everyday Life (Deft (gamer) to zh 西遊記大結局之仙履奇緣 to en (Cinderella Wonders of the Great Finale)). Is this no longer correct?
They also have chosen other topics for the other class (Collective intelligence): Definitions of knowledge to zh and 对百度的争议 to en (Controversy over Baidu).
For now, I'll approve most other topics you mention for you. Please let me know in class which topics you want to keep and if you are working together or individually.
Censorship of TikTok is already reserved for another student, unfortunately, so you'll need to chose another topic. Translation of 豫章书院修身教育专修学校#立案与审判 to English is approved. Translation of copyfraud to zh is approved. 奇虎360相关争议 to en (Qihoo 360 controversy is approved. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:26, 28 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240328042600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240328042600-WYRRRR-20240325075500","replies":["c-Sephyy-20240328060000-Hanyangprofessor2-20240328042600"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello professor, I would like to cancel my personal translation project and form a team with my friend WANG YUERONG to complete the translation task.
Thank you. Sephyy (talk) 06:00, 28 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240328060000","author":"Sephyy","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Sephyy-20240328060000-Hanyangprofessor2-20240328042600","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240328063900-Sephyy-20240328060000"]}}-->
Ok. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here06:39, 28 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240328063900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240328063900-Sephyy-20240328060000","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
hello, Professor.
I am a student in both the Collective Intelligence in Practice and Introduction to Information Sociology courses.
Chinese to English中国近代史 English to Chinese Anak Krakatoa
I would appreciate it if you could check out these two articles and give me some feedback.I'll finish it myself.
Thank you! Shuo1103 (talk) 08:58, 23 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240323085800","author":"Shuo1103","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Shuo1103-20240323085800-Deadline_2(Week_3)_:ZHANG_MINGSHUO","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240324062200-Shuo1103-20240323085800"]}}-->
@Shuo1103 According to the spreadsheet you signed, you are taking Collective Intelligence and Everday Life courses, not Introduction. Anak Krakatoa can be translated to Chinese. zh:中国近代史 can be translated to English, but remember that only referenced part can be translated (see WP:V). Please let me know which course you want to assign those projects to (Everyday Life or Collective Intelligence?) Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here06:22, 24 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240324062200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240324062200-Shuo1103-20240323085800","replies":["c-Shuo1103-20240327080000-Hanyangprofessor2-20240324062200"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Excuse me, Professor.I am are students in the course Collective Intelligence and Wikipedia. Shuo1103 (talk) 08:00, 27 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240327080000","author":"Shuo1103","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Shuo1103-20240327080000-Hanyangprofessor2-20240324062200","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240328040800-Shuo1103-20240327080000"]}}-->
@Shuo1103 I have added Krakatoa to Chinese. zh:中国近代史 to English for Collective Intelligence. Is your name entry for Everyday Life an error? Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:08, 28 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240328040800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240328040800-Shuo1103-20240327080000","replies":["c-Shuo1103-20240328051000-Hanyangprofessor2-20240328040800"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I'm sorry, professor. I may have signed the wrong form. I'm a student of Introductory Course in Collective Intelligence and Sociology of Informationclasses. I don't have daily life. This class is causing trouble for the professor. Shuo1103 (talk) 05:10, 28 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240328051000","author":"Shuo1103","type":"comment","level":5,"id":"c-Shuo1103-20240328051000-Hanyangprofessor2-20240328040800","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240328064200-Shuo1103-20240328051000"]}}-->
@Shuo1103 Thank you for the clarification. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here06:42, 28 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240328064200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":6,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240328064200-Shuo1103-20240328051000","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello, professor. I edited the parts in the list you sent that I liked but were not translated properly. This is a famous Korean idol's song. However, I have a question. I would like to attach their album photos, but is that impossible even if it is for public use?
First off, I didn't use it. Please check it. Choisieon (talk) 01:18, 27 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240327011800","author":"Choisieon","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Choisieon-20240327011800-Deadline3(week4_)_Choi_sieon","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240328060100-Choisieon-20240327011800"]}}-->
@Choisieon I am afraid such images are copyrighted and thus not allowed on Wikipedia. On English Wikipedia one picture (cover art) might be allowed in low resolution per WP:FAIRUSE. For Korean wiki, see ko:위키백과:비자유 저작물의 공정한 이용 and ask on Korean wiki help forum or discord if you want to learn more. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here06:01, 28 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240328060100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240328060100-Choisieon-20240327011800","replies":["c-Choisieon-20240328080300-Hanyangprofessor2-20240328060100"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Oops. I choose one more topic. Please check it!
Proto-globalizationChoisieon (talk) 08:03, 28 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240328080300","author":"Choisieon","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Choisieon-20240328080300-Hanyangprofessor2-20240328060100","replies":[]}}-->
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Hello professor, this is the translation assignment of Han Yuanyuan and Li Haochang. We have completed 50% of the translation assignment. Please ask the professor to check 1 and 2. If there are any shortcomings, please give your suggestions and we will seriously revise it. Thank you, Professor, for your hard work. Hanyuanyuan613 (talk) 12:08, 23 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240323120800","author":"Hanyuanyuan613","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Hanyuanyuan613-20240323120800-Deadline_4_(Week_5)LI_HAOCHANG_HAN_YUANYUAN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240324063500-Hanyuanyuan613-20240323120800"]}}-->
@Hanyuanyuan613 This is a very good start. Please use Grammarly or similar service to check for the prose of your article in English. Please format the references so that they have all metadata: first and late name, date, publisher, title (in English as well as Chinese). You will also need to add more blue links to other Wikipedia articles. If a topic exists in Chinese but not English, please link it using this tool: Template:Interlanguage link
Regarding your Korean translation, try asking Korean editors for feedback on Discord or the Help forum. You can also ask here: ko:위키백과:함께 검토하기. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here06:35, 24 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240324063500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240324063500-Hanyuanyuan613-20240323120800","replies":["c-Hanyuanyuan613-20240329012800-Hanyangprofessor2-20240324063500"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Thanks for the advice, professor. Hanyuanyuan613 (talk) 01:28, 29 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240329012800","author":"Hanyuanyuan613","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Hanyuanyuan613-20240329012800-Hanyangprofessor2-20240324063500","replies":[]}}-->
Hello Professor,I finished editing Wikipedia this week.Special:Contributions/유신예 I translated the MZ세대 article in the sandbox and added references. Please check,thank you . 유신예 (talk) 14:52, 29 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240329145200","author":"\uc720\uc2e0\uc608","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-\uc720\uc2e0\uc608-20240329145200-Deadline3(week_4)_-LIU_XINRUI","replies":[]}}-->
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Quote completed. Check it out here [Special:Contributions/Kim1357] Kim1357 (talk) 16:59, 24 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240324165900","author":"Kim1357","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Kim1357-20240324165900-Deadline_3(Week_4)_kim_yeonjun","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240325032600-Kim1357-20240324165900"]}}-->
@Kim1357 The first part of your edit here is good. But for the second one, you need to replace a reference to Korean Wikipedia with a different, more reliable source. Wikipedia cannot use itself as a reference, please read about Circular reportingPiotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:26, 25 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240325032600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240325032600-Kim1357-20240324165900","replies":["c-Kim1357-20240331150900-Hanyangprofessor2-20240325032600"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I checked this. I'll fix it later. And I'm looking to change the online hot speech allocated to me to Net neutrality#By country. Can you please allow it? Kim1357 (talk) 15:09, 31 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240331150900","author":"Kim1357","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Kim1357-20240331150900-Hanyangprofessor2-20240325032600","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240401093000-Kim1357-20240331150900"]}}-->
@Kim1357 Yes - we did this in class I believe. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here09:30, 1 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240401093000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240401093000-Kim1357-20240331150900","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello professor, I edit two article. I have additionally translated the shortcomings in the documents here from English to Korean. And added new contents at here. Please check. Thanks! Cookinu (talk) 04:57, 25 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240325045700","author":"Cookinu","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Cookinu-20240325045700-Weekly_edit(extra_credit)_Kwon_Jaeeun","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240328041400-Cookinu-20240325045700"]}}-->
@Cookinu: I cannot see any edits of yours in the English superband article you linked (histor)? For the content added to Lucy, please try to add a reference. --Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:14, 28 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240328041400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240328041400-Cookinu-20240325045700","replies":["c-Cookinu-20240329022100-Hanyangprofessor2-20240328041400"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I wrote url incorrectly. You can see the history of superband documentation [| her]e. Cookinu (talk) 02:21, 29 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240329022100","author":"Cookinu","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Cookinu-20240329022100-Hanyangprofessor2-20240328041400","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240401093400-Cookinu-20240329022100"]}}-->
@Cookinu I see it now. Good job, but remember to add references as soon as you can. They are also needed on Korean Wikipedia; see ko:위키백과:확인 가능Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here09:34, 1 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240401093400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240401093400-Cookinu-20240329022100","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello, professor. I want to do this topic. This is because although it is widespread in Korea, I have never really looked into it in detail. Please check it.
History of feminism.Choisieon (talk) 00:57, 27 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240327005700","author":"Choisieon","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Choisieon-20240327005700-Deadline2(week_3)_Choi_sieon","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240328055800-Choisieon-20240327005700"]}}-->
@Choisieon Good choice - topic approved. But remember to chose one more topic to complete this assignment. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:58, 28 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240328055800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240328055800-Choisieon-20240327005700","replies":["c-Choisieon-20240328080200-Hanyangprofessor2-20240328055800"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Oops. I choose one more topic. Please check it!
Proto-globalizationChoisieon (talk) 08:02, 28 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240328080200","author":"Choisieon","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Choisieon-20240328080200-Hanyangprofessor2-20240328055800","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240401093700-Choisieon-20240328080200"]}}-->
@Choisieon Ok - topic approved! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here09:37, 1 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240401093700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240401093700-Choisieon-20240328080200","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Hello, professor. I'm Jiyoon Lee, taking Collective Intelligence. I deleted the dead external link for this article and added a reference.T-araJiyoon Leee (talk) 01:22, 28 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240328012200","author":"Jiyoon Leee","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Jiyoon_Leee-20240328012200-Deadline3(week_4)_Lee_jiyoon","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240328063300-Jiyoon_Leee-20240328012200"]}}-->
@Jiyoon Leee I am afraid you linked a wrong article - I do not see any edits of yours there (history). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here06:33, 28 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240328063300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240328063300-Jiyoon_Leee-20240328012200","replies":["c-Jiyoon_Leee-20240328135600-Hanyangprofessor2-20240328063300"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Sorry, I think I left a conversation without making a final update.
I switched to this article, added a reference, and erased some dead links from the external links. Please check. Jiyoon Leee (talk) 13:56, 28 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240328135600","author":"Jiyoon Leee","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Jiyoon_Leee-20240328135600-Hanyangprofessor2-20240328063300","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240401093900-Jiyoon_Leee-20240328135600"]}}-->
@Jiyoon Leee I see now, good job! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here09:39, 1 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240401093900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240401093900-Jiyoon_Leee-20240328135600","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello, professor, my name is Chen Gui. I am a student of "Everyday Life and Social Structure". I joined the dashboard and completed the training mission. Sorry for the late reply.https://dashboard.wikiedu.org/training/studentsChenGui (talk) 12:39, 28 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240328123900","author":"ChenGui","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-ChenGui-20240328123900-Deadline1\uff08week2\uff09Chen_Gui","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240401094600-ChenGui-20240328123900"]}}-->
@ChenGui Ok - better late than never :) Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here09:46, 1 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240401094600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240401094600-ChenGui-20240328123900","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello professor, I have completed two editing tasks. Please take a look at these,thank you. Here are the links.1.2Jzhdylb (talk) 13:38, 28 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240328133800","author":"Jzhdylb","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Jzhdylb-20240328133800-week4--FAN_XINRU","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240401094800-Jzhdylb-20240328133800"]}}-->
@Jzhdylb Well done! However, at Chinese tea the content you added should be moved down to the "varieties' section. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here09:48, 1 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240401094800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240401094800-Jzhdylb-20240328133800","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I noticed your edit for Casablanca film was reverted with an editor citing the WP:UNDUE policy. If you disagree, you can try to explain why your content is due (relevant) by making a comment on the talk page.
Here, you should make sure there is a reference for the final sentence(s). Right now your reference is in the middle of the paragraph, creating an impression the second half has no reference. In fact, those sentences were quickly removed as unreferenced - see here. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here09:46, 1 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240401094600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240401094600-WANGYIFAN2024-20240328104500","replies":["c-WANGYIFAN2024-20240401095000-Hanyangprofessor2-20240401094600"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Ok!thank you! I will check my editor immediately😊💗 WANGYIFAN2024 (talk) 09:50, 1 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240401095000","author":"WANGYIFAN2024","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-WANGYIFAN2024-20240401095000-Hanyangprofessor2-20240401094600","replies":[]}}-->
Hello Professor, I would like to select the article "When China rules the World" and translate it from English to Chinese. The second article is "South Korean protest music" translated into Chinese. ChenGui (talk) 13:40, 28 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240328134000","author":"ChenGui","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-ChenGui-20240328134000-Deadline_2_(week_3)_Chen_Gui","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240401095000-ChenGui-20240328134000"]}}-->
Hello, professor. My name is Wang Tao. I joined the dashboard and completed the training, please check. Thanks https://dashboard.wikiedu.org/training/studentsWangtao626 (talk) 15:44, 28 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240328154400","author":"Wangtao626","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Wangtao626-20240328154400-Deadline1\uff08week2\uff09Wang_Tao","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240401095100-Wangtao626-20240328154400"]}}-->
@Wangtao626 Ok - better late than never :) Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here09:51, 1 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240401095100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240401095100-Wangtao626-20240328154400","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello, professor. I'm HUANG YANHAN, the student of Collective Intelligence in Practice. This week I translated "Film censorship" in the sandbox. This is my sandbox. Please check it. HYH031277777 (talk) 19:13, 28 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240328191300","author":"HYH031277777","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-HYH031277777-20240328191300-Deadline_3_(Week_4)_HUANG_YANHAN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240401095500-HYH031277777-20240328191300"]}}-->
@HYH031277777 This is a good start but you'll need to expand it before I can give you any substantial feedback. When you think you are ready, you can also ask Chinese editors for feedback on Discord or the Help forum. Or try this: zh:维基百科:同行评审Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here09:55, 1 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240401095500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240401095500-HYH031277777-20240328191300","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello professor, I'm Gaoxiaoxia.I fixed the error in this entry https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Chinese_calligraphy?wprov=sfla1 this week and added some reference links. Please check Babaibiaobin (talk) 02:21, 29 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240329022100","author":"Babaibiaobin","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Babaibiaobin-20240329022100-Deadline3\uff08week4\uff09","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240401100300-Babaibiaobin-20240329022100"]}}-->
@Babaibiaobin I see. The link to Tatar wingceltis can be red and there is no need to remove it - see WP:RED. The link to Vietnamese painting seems more relevant than to Vietnamese calligraphy, although the latter is an important concept - but it (Vietnamese calligraphy) is linked from the article. Red links are reminders to readers and editors that those topics need to be written about.
I have corrected the article. Good job identifying that 楊凝式 has a Chinese Wikipedia article! Now it is linked from English. Perhaps you'd like to translate his article to English for extra credit? (Athough the zh wiki article, sadly, does not seem to be well referenced) Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here10:03, 1 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240401100300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240401100300-Babaibiaobin-20240329022100","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello, Professor. I want to translate these two Wikipedia articles https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sociology_of_law From English to Korean https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Social_class From English to Korean. I told the professor the article I chose last week in class, but I'm posting it again here just in case.
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Dear Lee Sung Mi. You forgot to sign your message here. Please remember to do it next time. Your projects are approved. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here10:05, 1 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240401100500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240401100500-166.104.240.147-20240329024100","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Hi professor! I added some references in Sejong Institute. Please check it Thank you! MouFengcoo (talk) 03:07, 29 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240329030700","author":"MouFengcoo","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-MouFengcoo-20240329030700-Deadline3(week4)_Sociology_of_Everyday_Life_QIU_PENGYU","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240401100600-MouFengcoo-20240329030700"]}}-->
@MouFengcoo Ok! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here10:06, 1 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240401100600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240401100600-MouFengcoo-20240329030700","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Hello, professor. I'm Gyeongmin Hong, taking Collective Intelligence. I completed deadline 3. I fixed the error and added some reference (citation); https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Gimbap. Please check. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Hkm5420 (talk • contribs) 04:01, 29 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240329040100","author":"Hkm5420","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Hkm5420-20240329040100-Deadline3(week_4)_Hong_gyeongmin","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240401100800-Hkm5420-20240329040100"]}}-->
@Hkm5420 I see. It looks ok for our class, but another editor disagreed and removed it here. I suggest you start a discussion on the talk page of that article and ask them for more details on why your edit was removed, Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here10:08, 1 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240401100800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240401100800-Hkm5420-20240329040100","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello professor! I did 20 extra wikipedia edit. please check it. Thank you! Ckdduq0919 (talk) 05:21, 29 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240329052100","author":"Ckdduq0919","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Ckdduq0919-20240329052100-Weekly_edit-_Changyeop_Jung","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240401101000-Ckdduq0919-20240329052100"]}}-->
@Ckdduq0919 I see. You are adding valuable content here, but remember that all content we add has to be referenced. Unreferenced content does not count for our class and it can be removed from Wikipedia, per Wikipedia:VerifiabilityPiotrus at Hanyang| reply here10:10, 1 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240401101000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240401101000-Ckdduq0919-20240329052100","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Dear professor, I have completed this week's homework, please check Mcx8202229 (talk) 05:23, 29 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240329052300","author":"Mcx8202229","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Mcx8202229-20240329052300-Deadline3(week4)_Ma_Chenxiao","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240401101100-Mcx8202229-20240329052300"]}}-->
@Mcx8202229 You are adding helpful content, but please remember that all content we add has to be referenced. Unreferenced content does not count for our class and it can be removed from Wikipedia, per Wikipedia:Verifiability . You can use your next week's edits to add the references. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here10:11, 1 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240401101100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240401101100-Mcx8202229-20240329052300","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello professor here are my 10 edits for the week.please check
Special:Contributions/Muqing112233Muqing112233 (talk) 06:00, 29 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240329060000","author":"Muqing112233","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Muqing112233-20240329060000-collective_intelligence_Deadline3(week4)_-MU_QING","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240401101200-Muqing112233-20240329060000"]}}-->
@Muqing112233 Well done! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here10:12, 1 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240401101200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240401101200-Muqing112233-20240329060000","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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And I translated a short article from English into Chinese. Please check
https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/迈克尔·杰克逊_(消歧义)Muqing112233 (talk) 05:22, 30 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240330052200","author":"Muqing112233","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Muqing112233-20240330052200-(Week_4)Sociology_of_Everyday_Life-MU_QING","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240401101600-Muqing112233-20240330052200"]}}-->
@Muqing112233 Good. But some of the content you added was removed - please see the edit history here. If you think it should be restored, please start a discussion on its talk page and notify the editor who removed that you wish to discuss it using the Wikipedia:ECHO feature.
Your extra credit translation to Chinese is a good start. But after you publish it, remember that unreferenced content can be removed. See zh:维基百科:可供查證Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here10:16, 1 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240401101600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240401101600-Muqing112233-20240330052200","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Please confirm, thank you very much. ChenGui (talk) 09:34, 30 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240330093400","author":"ChenGui","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-ChenGui-20240330093400-Deadline3_(week_4)_Chen_Gui","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240401101800-ChenGui-20240330093400"]}}-->
@ChenGui Good job. For your pictures, try to add high quality versions, the image you uploaded seems to be significantly downsized from the original. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here10:18, 1 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240401101800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240401101800-ChenGui-20240330093400","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello professor, this is the Wikipedia editing task I completed this week. Please review it. Thank you. The link is here. Jzhdylb (talk) 10:21, 30 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240330102100","author":"Jzhdylb","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Jzhdylb-20240330102100-Deadline3(week_4)_-FAN_XINRU","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240401102000-Jzhdylb-20240330102100"]}}-->
@Jzhdylb Good, but some of the content you added has been removed here. New World Encyclopedia is not a reliable source - see the linked article for information (it is a website that copies some Wikipedia content and introduces religious bias into the resulting articles). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here10:20, 1 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240401102000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240401102000-Jzhdylb-20240330102100","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello Professor, I'm Minji Kim, I'm taking life and social structure classes every day. I've completed the translation task, so please check it. Thank you.
@Minis707 This is a good start. Please work on adding references and hyperlinks (blue links) as well as images next. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here10:23, 1 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240401102300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240401102300-Minis707-20240330130700","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Good evening, Professor. I have added the group article to my entry.Please check it ,thankyou !AYAO32269 (talk) 13:20, 30 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240330132000","author":"AYAO32269","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-AYAO32269-20240330132000-Deadline2\uff08week_3\uff09-----ZHANG_LINYUE","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240401102400-AYAO32269-20240330132000"]}}-->
@AYAO32269 Ok! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here10:24, 1 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240401102400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240401102400-AYAO32269-20240330132000","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
@Zhuo1221 Ok! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here10:25, 1 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240401102500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240401102500-Zhuo1221-20240330135300","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Hello, professor.
I'm Lee Yunjoo. I'm taking classes of 'Collective Intelligence in Practice'
I'm almost done translating the 'population growth' article from English to Korean. Please give me your feedback and I'll fix it. Thank you. Leeyj0401 (talk) 14:28, 30 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240330142800","author":"Leeyj0401","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Leeyj0401-20240330142800-Deadline4\uff08week_5)_Lee_Yunjoo","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240401102700-Leeyj0401-20240330142800"]}}-->
@Leeyj0401 The formatting looks good. I recommend you ask for feedback from Korean speaking editors here: ko:위키백과:함께 검토하기 . If nobody replies for a few days, ask for feedback in Korean Discord server. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here10:27, 1 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240401102700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240401102700-Leeyj0401-20240330142800","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I am a student in both the Collective Intelligence in Practice and Introduction to Information Sociology courses.
Here's my assignment for this week's Wikipedia edit, please check it out, thanks. CHENG SHIYI (talk) 16:47, 30 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240330164700","author":"CHENG SHIYI","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-CHENG_SHIYI-20240330164700-Weekly_editing_-_CHENG_SHIYI_3","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240401102900-CHENG_SHIYI-20240330164700"]}}-->
@CHENG SHIYI Good job! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here10:29, 1 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240401102900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240401102900-CHENG_SHIYI-20240330164700","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Deadline4(Week5) - Sociology of Everyday Life - CHENG SIYU
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Good evening, professor. I'm CHENG SIYU, the student of Sociology of Everyday Life.
I've done more than 50% of the translation editing of a single article. It's here.
And I posted a blog about my thoughts after reading Goffman's book "The Presentation of Self in Everyday Life". Please check it out and hopefully I can get some extra points.
In the meantime I inserted a map into wikivoyage 'Nantong', hoping to get some extra points. Thank you very much and have a nice day. Csiiiyu (talk) 17:40, 30 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240330174000","author":"Csiiiyu","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Csiiiyu-20240330174000-Deadline4(Week5)_-_Sociology_of_Everyday_Life_-_CHENG_SIYU","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240401103100-Csiiiyu-20240330174000"]}}-->
@Csiiiyu Good job. To make the map useful, we should have at least one place with GPS coordinates in the article that would display on the map.
Regarding your translation to Chinese, it seems well formatted. I recommend that you ask Chinese editors for feedback on Discord or the Help forum. Or try this: zh:维基百科:同行评审
Note that on Wikivoyage one of your edits was undone - see rationale here. If you disagree, start a discussion on the talk page. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here10:31, 1 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240401103100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240401103100-Csiiiyu-20240330174000","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Deadline4(Week5) - Sociology of Everyday Life - WANG YUERONG
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Good evening, professor, I'm translating the article in the sandbox. Please check it.
And I've completed 20 Wikipedia editors. Please check it.
Thank you very much and have a nice day. WYRRRR (talk) 18:45, 30 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240330184500","author":"WYRRRR","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-WYRRRR-20240330184500-Deadline4(Week5)_-_Sociology_of_Everyday_Life_-_WANG_YUERONG","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240401103300-WYRRRR-20240330184500"]}}-->
@WYRRRR Your Chinese translation is a good start. Try to work on references next. When you are near finished, I recommend that you ask Chinese editors for feedback on Discord or the Help forum. Or try this: zh:维基百科:同行评审
Regarding your additions to English Wikipedia, please remember to add references. All content we add needs references, see Wikipedia:Verifiability - otherwise it can be removed and will not count for course credit. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here10:33, 1 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240401103300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240401103300-WYRRRR-20240330184500","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Good day professor. I translated wiki and put some references on article. http://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/K-rockSeoyoon J (talk) 03:50, 31 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240331035000","author":"Seoyoon J","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Seoyoon_J-20240331035000-Deadline4(Week5)_-_Sociology_of_Everyday_Life_-_Seoyoon_Jang","replies":[]}}-->
please check it and have a nice day — Preceding unsigned comment added by Seoyoon J (talk • contribs) 03:50, 31 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240331035000","author":"Seoyoon J","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Seoyoon_J-20240331035000-Deadline4(Week5)_-_Sociology_of_Everyday_Life_-_Seoyoon_Jang-1","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240401103400-Seoyoon_J-20240331035000"]}}-->
@Seoyoon J Looks good! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here10:34, 1 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240401103400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240401103400-Seoyoon_J-20240331035000","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hi professor, I'm a student in your class "Everyday Life and Social Structure". I edited and added references in here. please check. I used a citation template and make my reference have a title, author, publisher, date of publication and translated title. Chaekyo (talk) 06:15, 31 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240331061500","author":"Chaekyo","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Chaekyo-20240331061500-Deadline3\uff08week_4)_-Chaehyun_Lee","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240401103500-Chaekyo-20240331061500"]}}-->
@Chaekyo Looks good! Well done. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here10:35, 1 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240401103500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240401103500-Chaekyo-20240331061500","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Hi professor, I’m a student in your class “Everyday Life and Social Structure”. I uploaded my first licenced(free) image to wikimedia commons. This is my work. I’m not sure that if I do this correctly. I need your feedback. Thanks. Kimseoeun2023079825 (talk) 06:49, 31 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240331064900","author":"Kimseoeun2023079825","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Kimseoeun2023079825-20240331064900-Optional_weekly_project-_Kim_seo_eun","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240401104500-Kimseoeun2023079825-20240331064900"]}}-->
@Kimseoeun2023079825 It looks correct, well done! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here10:45, 1 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240401104500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240401104500-Kimseoeun2023079825-20240331064900","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Good afternoon Professor. I am Wang Yihua.I am a student in Collective Intelligence in Practice.
I have added relevant journals on abortion in China, please check.
Wishing you a pleasant day! 왕예화 (talk) 09:47, 31 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240331094700","author":"\uc655\uc608\ud654","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-\uc655\uc608\ud654-20240331094700-Deadline3\uff08week_4)_-_WANG_YIHUA","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240401105000-\uc655\uc608\ud654-20240331094700"]}}-->
@왕예화 Good job, using academic references is always very good. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here10:50, 1 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240401105000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240401105000-\uc655\uc608\ud654-20240331094700","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello Professor, I am a student of Collective Intelligence. I have the main project topics tracked to my dashboard and have started working in the sandbox. I've also finished adding citations this week. You can check it. thank you. WSH0927 (talk) 10:42, 31 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240331104200","author":"WSH0927","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-WSH0927-20240331104200-Deadline3\uff08week_4)_WU_SHUHAN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240402025800-WSH0927-20240331104200"]}}-->
@WSH0927 Good job, but some fixes are needed. Please check if your links work - for example, your reference 34 here seems to be broken (404). In addition, if the original reference has a Chinese title, you should include in the title= field, and add the English translation to the translated title= field. If you do not know how to do it, ask me in class or during office hours and I'll show you. Oh, and here you added just Chinese title but not the English translation. Both should be used. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:58, 2 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240402025800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240402025800-WSH0927-20240331104200","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Good evening, professor.I'm JIA MENGZHUO. Regarding the section on the history of Henan, I have added information about books related to the famine in the history of Henan.Please check https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Henan&diff=1216356392&oldid=1216028534Zhuo1221 (talk) 14:34, 30 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240330143400","author":"Zhuo1221","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Zhuo1221-20240330143400-Deadline3\uff08week_4\uff09-----JIA_MENGZHUO","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240401102800-Zhuo1221-20240330143400"]}}-->
@Zhuo1221 Very good. Can you add the page range to your citation? Which pages in that book discuss the events mentioned in this paragraph? Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here10:28, 1 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240401102800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240401102800-Zhuo1221-20240330143400","replies":["c-Zhuo1221-20240402080200-Hanyangprofessor2-20240401102800"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Good evening, Professor. For the history part of Xinxiang, I added the book information related to the history of Xinxiang. Please check it. Thank you!AYAO32269 (talk) 13:28, 30 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240330132800","author":"AYAO32269","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-AYAO32269-20240330132800-Deadline3\uff08week_4\uff09-----ZHANG_LINYUE","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240401102500-AYAO32269-20240330132800","c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240401102800-AYAO32269-20240330132800"]}}-->
@AYAO32269 Very good. Please add the title in English using the 'translated title' parameter. If you don't know how, ask me in class or afterward and I'll show you. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here10:25, 1 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240401102500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240401102500-AYAO32269-20240330132800","replies":["c-AYAO32269-20240402095100-Hanyangprofessor2-20240401102500"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Yes Professor. I've added the translation title and book page to the message. Please check. Thank you. AYAO32269 (talk) 09:51, 2 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240402095100","author":"AYAO32269","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-AYAO32269-20240402095100-Hanyangprofessor2-20240401102500","replies":[]}}-->
PS. Can you add the page range to your citation? Which pages in that book discuss the events mentioned in this paragraph? Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here10:28, 1 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240401102800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240401102800-AYAO32269-20240330132800","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I am a student in the Introduction to Collective Intelligence Practices and the Sociology of Information course.
Here is my assignment for this week's Wikipedia edit, please check it out, thank you. Shuo1103 (talk) 11:02, 31 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240331110200","author":"Shuo1103","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Shuo1103-20240331110200-Weekly_editing--ZHANGMINGSHUO","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240402105800-Shuo1103-20240331110200"]}}-->
@Shuo1103 Good job. But when you add content to Wikipedia, like you did here, make sure it is referenced. All content we add needs references, see Wikipedia:Verifiability - otherwise it can be removed and will not count for course credit. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here10:58, 2 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240402105800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240402105800-Shuo1103-20240331110200","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
HI, Professor.I am a student in the Introduction to Collective Intelligence Practices and the Sociology of Information course.I've finished this week's homework. Please check it out.
Redyeoni (talk) 11:06, 31 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240331110600","author":"Redyeoni","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Redyeoni-20240331110600-Weekly_editing--HONG_JIARAN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240402110200-Redyeoni-20240331110600"]}}-->
@Redyeoni I am afraid your edits are not acceptable. They were unreferenced and based on copying content from another website. All edits done for our class need to be referenced (see Wikipedia:Verifiability) and they have to be reworded (see Wikipedia:Copying text from other sources). Please try again. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here11:02, 2 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240402110200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240402110200-Redyeoni-20240331110600","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Good afternoon Professor.I am a student in Collective Intelligence in Practice.
I have added relevant journals on Chinese knotting, please check.
Wishing you a pleasant day! WYRRRR (talk) 11:34, 31 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240331113400","author":"WYRRRR","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-WYRRRR-20240331113400-Deadline3\uff08week_4)_-_WANG_YUERONG","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240402110300-WYRRRR-20240331113400"]}}-->
@WYRRRR Good. When you cite a book, please add a page range as well. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here11:03, 2 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240402110300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240402110300-WYRRRR-20240331113400","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hi professor, I am a student in both the Collective Intelligence in Practice,Everyday Life and Social Structure, and Introduction to Information Sociology courses. I edited and added references in here. please check. I used a citation template and make my reference have a title, author, publisher, date of publication and translated title.Rachel.zrq (talk) Rachel.zrq (talk) 11:46, 31 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240331114600","author":"Rachel.zrq","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Rachel.zrq-20240331114600-Deadline3\uff08week_4)_-_ZHANG_RUIQING","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240402110400-Rachel.zrq-20240331114600"]}}-->
@Rachel.zrq Very good. Your third paragraph here appears to need a reference? Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here11:04, 2 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240402110400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240402110400-Rachel.zrq-20240331114600","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Good evening, Professor. I am a student in Sociology of Everyday Life.
I added inline references, please check.Thank you.
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@WYRRRR Well done. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here11:07, 2 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240402110700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240402110700-WYRRRR-20240331124900","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
@Sephyy Good job! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here11:09, 2 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240402110900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240402110900-Sephyy-20240331125500","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
HI, Professor.I am a student in the Introduction to Collective Intelligence Practices and the Sociology of Information course.I've finished this week's homework. Please check it .Thank you. WYRRRR (talk) 13:16, 31 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240331131600","author":"WYRRRR","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-WYRRRR-20240331131600-Weekly_editing--WANG_YUERONG","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240402111000-WYRRRR-20240331131600"]}}-->
@WYRRRR Good job! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here11:10, 2 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240402111000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240402111000-WYRRRR-20240331131600","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Hi professor, I am a student in Everyday Life and Social Structure. I edited and added references in here. please check.https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Wsw1357/%E6%B2%99%E7%9B%92Wsw1357 (talk) 14:15, 31 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240331141500","author":"Wsw1357","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Wsw1357-20240331141500-Translation_assignments_on_the_wiki","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240402111100-Wsw1357-20240331141500"]}}-->
@Wsw1357 That's a good start but the adding a reference activity needs to be completed on a live (public) page, not in your sandbox. Please try to add a reference to an unreferenced content in a real article. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here11:11, 2 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240402111100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240402111100-Wsw1357-20240331141500","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Tai'an#cite_note-9Sephyy (talk) 14:33, 31 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240331143300","author":"Sephyy","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Sephyy-20240331143300-Deadline3\uff08week4\uff09\u2014\u2014TIANXIAOYU","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240402111200-Sephyy-20240331143300"]}}-->
@Sephyy I see. Your contributions look good, well done. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here11:12, 2 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240402111200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240402111200-Sephyy-20240331143300","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Hello, professor. I'm Kwon Ha-young, taking a course on Everyday Life and Social Structure. I've completed 50% of the translation assignment. Please check it. If there is anything lacking, please let me know. Thank you. Hayoung1 (talk) 15:03, 31 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240331150300","author":"Hayoung1","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Hayoung1-20240331150300-Deadline_4_(Week_5)_-_Everyday_Life_and_Social_Sturcture_-_Ha_young_Kwon","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240402112500-Hayoung1-20240331150300"]}}-->
Hello, Professor, I have already begun, my translation work has been translated into, Chinese translation has not been fully completed, please checkShuo1103 (talk) 15:11, 31 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240331151100","author":"Shuo1103","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Shuo1103-20240331151100-Deadline3\uff08week4\uff09ZHANG_MINGSHUO","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240402112800-Shuo1103-20240331151100"]}}-->
@Shuo1103 It is a good start. But your sandbox is on English Wikipedia. You should copy it to Chinese Wikipedia - the code on English is not the same as on Chinese one. The sooner you start working in Chinese Wikipedia, the better. I will provide more feedback after you copy your article there. You'll likely need to redo all the hyperlinks after the move Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here11:28, 2 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240402112800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240402112800-Shuo1103-20240331151100","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Hello Professor, I have completed more than twenty edits to the English Wikipedia this week (Week 4) (a total of more than eighty edits to the Wikipedia this month:12, as well as five blog post writings). please check.
I would appreciate it if you could give me advice or correct my mistakes! Zhongxxin (talk) 16:41, 31 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240331164100","author":"Zhongxxin","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Zhongxxin-20240331164100-Weekly_wiki_edits-ZHONG_XIN_3","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240402113000-Zhongxxin-20240331164100"]}}-->
@Zhongxxin Well done. I have removed some stray code here; other than that your edits look good. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here11:30, 2 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240402113000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240402113000-Zhongxxin-20240331164100","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Hello professor. I am Chaeyeong Lee, taking a course on Everyday Life and Social Structure.
I chose Beer in Japan and The Economist. Please check document allocation. Chaeyeong09 (talk) 02:27, 1 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240401022700","author":"Chaeyeong09","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Chaeyeong09-20240401022700-Deadline_2_(week3)_Chaeyeong_Lee_2","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240402113100-Chaeyeong09-20240401022700"]}}-->
@Chaeyeong09 Yes, that is confirmed - good choices. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here11:31, 2 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240402113100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240402113100-Chaeyeong09-20240401022700","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello, professor. I'm chaeyeong Lee, taking an "Everyday Life and Social" structure. Additional explanation along with citation has been added to the mascot section.
Doosan Bears Please check if it has been completed properly. Chaeyeong09 (talk) 03:47, 1 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240401034700","author":"Chaeyeong09","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Chaeyeong09-20240401034700-Deadline_3(week4)_Chaeyeong_Lee","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240402113200-Chaeyeong09-20240401034700"]}}-->
@Chaeyeong09 Good. There is one error to correct: the title of the reference should be in the original language (here, Korean). The English translation title should be moved to the translated title parameter. If you don't know how to do it, please ask me during or after class and I'll show you how to do it. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here11:32, 2 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240402113200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240402113200-Chaeyeong09-20240401034700","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Seohyun S (talk) 04:10, 1 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240401041000","author":"Seohyun S","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Seohyun_S-20240401041000-Deadline2(\uc81c3\uc8fc)_\uc190\uc11c\ud604_4","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240402113400-Seohyun_S-20240401041000"]}}-->
@Seohyun S This is a good start. However, to avoid code errors, each of your articles should be in a separate sandbox. Please move one of them to a new sandbox. If you do not know how to do it, ask me during or after class.
Next, you will need to add references and hyperlinks. Keep up the good progress! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here11:34, 2 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240402113400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240402113400-Seohyun_S-20240401041000","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Hello. I'm Gyeongmin Hong, taking Collective intellignece. I act for extra credit.
I found a Wikipedia article that should be deleted. I think that article have wrong information. Thus, I modify name of content. It was Sea of Japan after i fixed Donghae.(East sea) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Hkm5420 (talk • contribs) 04:48, 1 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240401044800","author":"Hkm5420","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Hkm5420-20240401044800-(week5)_Hong_Gyeongmin","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240402113800-Hkm5420-20240401044800"]}}-->
I also note that you have been adding unreferenced content to Wikipedia despite receiving numerous notifications not do so on your talk page, including one from me. Please note that only referenced content can be added to Wikipedia, per Wikipedia:Verifiability.
Unreferenced content is not allowed, and it does not count for extra credit or weekly tasks. If you keep adding unreferenced content, your account may be blocked from Wikipedia, making it difficult for you to complete tasks for our class. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here11:38, 2 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240402113800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240402113800-Hkm5420-20240401044800","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello professor, I'm Changyeop Jung, taking collective intelligence. I have completed the outline. Please check it. Thank you! Ckdduq0919 (talk) 09:13, 1 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240401091300","author":"Ckdduq0919","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Ckdduq0919-20240401091300-Deadline_4(week_5):_Chang_yeop_Jung","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240402114300-Ckdduq0919-20240401091300"]}}-->
@Ckdduq0919 The structure looks good, the assignment is completed. Now you need to add more text and remember that all content added needs to be referenced. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here11:43, 2 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240402114300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240402114300-Ckdduq0919-20240401091300","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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�Deadline4 (week5) : Kim minjun (Collective Intelligence)
2nd topic: 'Disinformation in the Russian invasion of Ukraine' (Sandbox Link) KMJ0521 (talk) 11:51, 1 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240401115100","author":"KMJ0521","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-KMJ0521-20240401115100-\ufffdDeadline4_(week5)\u00a0:_Kim_minjun_(Collective_Intelligence)","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240402114500-KMJ0521-20240401115100"]}}-->
@KMJ0521 The outlines look good. If you need help with formatting or if you want feedback on your prose, I recommend you ask for feedback from Korean speaking editors here: ko:위키백과:함께 검토하기 . If nobody replies for a few days, ask for feedback in Korean Discord server Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here11:45, 2 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240402114500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240402114500-KMJ0521-20240401115100","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello professor, I summarized the outline of promotion of anorexia, one of the two articles I translate, and the paragraphs by section. I couldn't do all of them, but I translated about 50% of the articles. There is [| my sandbox] Cookinu (talk) 13:42, 1 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240401134200","author":"Cookinu","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Cookinu-20240401134200-Deadline4(Week5)_Kwon_Jaeeun","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240402114600-Cookinu-20240401134200"]}}-->
@Cookinu The outlines look good. If you need help with formatting or if you want feedback on your prose, I recommend you ask for feedback from Korean speaking editors here: ko:위키백과:함께 검토하기 . If nobody replies for a few days, ask for feedback in Korean Wikipedia Discord serverPiotrus at Hanyang| reply here11:46, 2 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240402114600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240402114600-Cookinu-20240401134200","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Hello. Professor. I am Hong Gyeongmin, taking Collective intelligence class.
I've translated about 50% of the article. Here is the link. Please check it.
@Hkm5420: Please remember to WP:SIGN your talk page messages. The outlines look good. If you need help with formatting or if you want feedback on your prose, I recommend you ask for feedback from Korean speaking editors here: ko:위키백과:함께 검토하기 . If nobody replies for a few days, ask for feedback in Korean Wikipedia Discord server. --Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here11:48, 2 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240402114800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240402114800-Deadline4(Week5)_Hong_Gyeongmin","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Good evening Professor.I am taking Collective Intelligence and Wikipedia class. Here's my sandbox edit, please check it, thankyou.AYAO32269 (talk) 09:55, 2 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240402095500","author":"AYAO32269","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-AYAO32269-20240402095500-Deadline4(Week5)_ZHANG_LINYUE","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240402114900-AYAO32269-20240402095500"]}}-->
@AYAO32269 The outlines look good. If you need help with formatting or if you want feedback on your prose, I recommend that you ask Chinese editors for feedback on Chinese Wikipedia Discord server or the Help forum. Or try this: zh:维基百科:同行评审Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here11:49, 2 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240402114900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240402114900-AYAO32269-20240402095500","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Good evening, Professor. I have created the project outline in my personal sandbox and completed what needs to be done by this deadline, please check it https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Zhuo1221/sandbox Thank you. Have a nice day.Zhuo1221 (talk) 10:46, 2 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240402104600","author":"Zhuo1221","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Zhuo1221-20240402104600-Deadline4(Week5)_JIA_MENGZHUO","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240402115000-Zhuo1221-20240402104600"]}}-->
@Zhuo1221 This is a very good start. Please use Grammarly or similar service to check for the prose of your article in English. Please format the references so that they have all metadata: first and late name, date, publisher, title (in English as well as Chinese). You will also need to add more blue links to other Wikipedia articles. If a topic exists in Chinese but not English, please link it using this tool: Template:Interlanguage linkPiotrus at Hanyang| reply here11:50, 2 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240402115000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240402115000-Zhuo1221-20240402104600","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hi professor, I am a student in both the Collective Intelligence in Practice,Everyday Life and Social Structure.I have completed over 20 editing tasks, but the Chinese Wikipedia I edited does not appear on my homepage. I have placed the historical editing links for these entries here https://zh.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=%E5%A5%8E%E6%96%87%E5%8C%BA&action=history and https://zh.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=%E6%BD%8D%E5%9D%8A%E5%B8%82&action=history and here is my homepage. You can see my ID: ZHANGQI1066 in the link. I hope these editors can earn me extra points for both of these classes. ZHANGQI1066 (talk) 11:52, 31 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240331115200","author":"ZHANGQI1066","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-ZHANGQI1066-20240331115200-Weekly_editing_-ZHANG_QI","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240402110700-ZHANGQI1066-20240331115200"]}}-->
thanks! ZHANGQI1066 (talk) 14:24, 2 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240402142400","author":"ZHANGQI1066","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-ZHANGQI1066-20240402142400-Hanyangprofessor2-20240402110700","replies":[]}}-->
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Hi professor. I chose the theme 'Cannabis in Japan.' https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Cannabis_in_Japan I would like to translate into Korean and add to this document about Japan's cannabis which is illegal in Korea. And I'm going to do my work alone. Is it possible?
Hello Professor, I have completed the translation, please check it. Thank you. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Lee Wooyeon (talk • contribs) 03:58, 4 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240404035800","author":"Lee Wooyeon","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Lee_Wooyeon-20240404035800-Deadline_2_(Week3)_Lee_Wooyeon","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240404063000-Lee_Wooyeon-20240404035800"]}}-->
@Lee Wooyeon Please link to your translation and I will review it. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here06:30, 4 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240404063000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240404063000-Lee_Wooyeon-20240404035800","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello Professor, I am taking life and social structure classes every day. I decided again to translate Overexploitation into Korean for my Week 3 assignment. I will upload the translation assignment soon as well. Please check.
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/OverexploitationMinis707 (talk) 12:53, 30 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240330125300","author":"Minis707","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Minis707-20240330125300-Deadline2(\uc81c3\uc8fc)_\uae40\ubbfc\uc9c0_4","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240401102200-Minis707-20240330125300"]}}-->
@Minis707 I see. Unfortunately, Overexploitation has already been reserved for Korean translation by another student so you'll need to find a different topic. How about Overgrazing? Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here10:22, 1 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240401102200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240401102200-Minis707-20240330125300","replies":["c-Minis707-20240404045400-Hanyangprofessor2-20240401102200"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Yes, professor, I'll do it on that topic. Minis707 (talk) 04:54, 4 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240404045400","author":"Minis707","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Minis707-20240404045400-Hanyangprofessor2-20240401102200","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240404063100-Minis707-20240404045400"]}}-->
@Minis707 OK - topic accepted. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here06:31, 4 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240404063100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240404063100-Minis707-20240404045400","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Good afternoon Professor.I am a student in Collective Intelligence in Practice.
I have added relevant journals on abortion in China, please check.
Wishing you a pleasant day! TMXX0818 (talk) 10:06, 31 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240331100600","author":"TMXX0818","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-TMXX0818-20240331100600-Deadline3\uff08week_4)_-MENGRU_LI","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240401132600-TMXX0818-20240331100600"]}}-->
@TMXX0818 Which language did you do it in? You linked to your English contributions above. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here13:26, 1 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240401132600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240401132600-TMXX0818-20240331100600","replies":["c-TMXX0818-20240403004100-Hanyangprofessor2-20240401132600"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I'm sorry for the mistake in the link. I have added these references as follows. 1,2,3,4,5. If there is any problem, please let me know. Thank you very much!TMXX0818 (talk) 00:41, 3 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240403004100","author":"TMXX0818","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-TMXX0818-20240403004100-Hanyangprofessor2-20240401132600","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240404063300-TMXX0818-20240403004100"]}}-->
@TMXX0818 Good, very good - using academic references is commendable. But please fix the URLs in your first reference. It should link to the specific article. Your first url link however goes to a general Google query. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here06:33, 4 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240404063300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240404063300-TMXX0818-20240403004100","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
1.I've finished my Wikipedia edits for this week, please check it
2.This is my extension for this week, I don't know if this is how it was done, check it out
Thank you. Bai0926 (talk) 06:35, 3 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240403063500","author":"Bai0926","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Bai0926-20240403063500-Deadline4(Week5)_BAILINHAN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240404064700-Bai0926-20240403063500"]}}-->
@Bai0926 Well done, your edits at Moon Man look good.
However, your edits to Chinese clothing need improvement and I have undone them. In here, you changed content without providing a reference, and your style is incorrect - Wikipedia does not address the reader like this: "If we examine". "Why did you remove the mention of "Ancient Chinese literature"?
This addition was ok and you can restore it, but the reference should be at the end of a sentence, not in the middle.
This edit added several paragraphs. All but the last one appear to have no reference and the last one was referenced to Baidu. Baidu is not allowed on Wikipedia as a reference, see WP:BAIDU
In this edit, you added a reference. But I do not see how the cited source has anything to do with the information in this paragraph?
This reference is fine, but you broke the paragraph in two parts.
Here, you replaced a paragraph with another one, without a reference and with no explanation why you deleted the old paragraph.
While you added a reference in your next edit, the URL appears to be broken, taking me to a 404 error page.
In your next edit, you added some ok content, but you removed, again without explanation, some other content without providing a reason in your edit summary as to why that content was removed.
Please add only content that is referenced to Wikipedia, and if you remove content, you should clearly explain in your edit summary and/or on article's talk why something was removed (was it wrong?). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here06:47, 4 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240404064700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240404064700-Bai0926-20240403063500","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello, professor. I want to select "Corruption in the United States" as the translation task and translate it into Chinese. Wangtao626 (talk) 15:56, 28 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240328155600","author":"Wangtao626","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Wangtao626-20240328155600-Deadline2\uff08week3\uff09Wang_Tao","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240401095300-Wangtao626-20240328155600"]}}-->
@Wangtao626Corruption in the United States is approved for a topic, but if you are working solo, you'll need to chose one more topic. How about Corruption in Canada? Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here09:53, 1 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240401095300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240401095300-Wangtao626-20240328155600","replies":["c-Wangtao626-20240404084000-Hanyangprofessor2-20240401095300"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
certainly. “Corruption in Canada” sounds good to me. thank you professor Wangtao626 (talk) 08:40, 4 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240404084000","author":"Wangtao626","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Wangtao626-20240404084000-Hanyangprofessor2-20240401095300","replies":[]}}-->
Hi professer, I'm a student in your class, "Everyday of Life and Social Structure". I translated my first article "political correctness" in my sandbox here. or here. please check if I've done my work well. (i'm not sure if i did it right) Did I complete deadline 4 on time? Kimseoeun2023079825 (talk) 07:22, 3 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240403072200","author":"Kimseoeun2023079825","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Kimseoeun2023079825-20240403072200-Deadline4(week5)_kimseoeun","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240404083100-Kimseoeun2023079825-20240403072200"]}}-->
@Kimseoeun2023079825 Since you are translating to Korean, you should work on Korean Wikipedia (so your second link is good). The outlines look good. Next, add references and blue links. If you need help with formatting or if you want feedback on your prose, I recommend you ask for feedback from Korean speaking editors here: ko:위키백과:함께 검토하기 . Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:31, 4 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240404083100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240404083100-Kimseoeun2023079825-20240403072200","replies":["c-Kimseoeun2023079825-20240405022100-Hanyangprofessor2-20240404083100"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I added my references here please check if ‘ve done my work. Kimseoeun2023079825 (talk) 02:21, 5 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240405022100","author":"Kimseoeun2023079825","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Kimseoeun2023079825-20240405022100-Hanyangprofessor2-20240404083100","replies":[]}}-->
Hello, professor. I'm ZHANG QI, a student of Sociology of Everyday Life and Collective Intelligence in Practice. I translated "Hangzhou Daily" more than 50% in the sandbox. And i proved those mistakes that you told me last week. This is my sandbox. Please check it. i have another question in 'Sociology of Everyday Life', the blog is not necessary, right? Is it only an extra point? or do I need to write more blogs? ZHANGQI1066 (talk) 07:56, 3 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240403075600","author":"ZHANGQI1066","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-ZHANGQI1066-20240403075600-Deadline4(week5)ZHANG_QI","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240405033800-ZHANGQI1066-20240403075600"]}}-->
@ZHANGQI1066 Good progress. Some of your content still needs references, ex. all content under 'New Media' section. Once you add the references, you can merge your content (copy and paste) to the public article Hangzhou Daily. There is also content in the infobox that needs to be translated (ex. 机关报、日报). Do you need help adding the interlanguage links to articles that exist on Chinese Wikipedia but do not have an English version?
And yes, the blog is not necessary for that class, it is only for extra points. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:38, 5 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240405033800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240405033800-ZHANGQI1066-20240403075600","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Hello, Professor. I am taking an Everyday Life and Social Structure class, I want to translate these two Wikipedia articles https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Social_class From English to Korean https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sociology_of_law From English to Korean.
Seungmilsm (talk) 04:16, 4 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240404041600","author":"Seungmilsm","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Seungmilsm-20240404041600-Deadline_2_(week3):_Lee_Seung_Mi","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240405034200-Seungmilsm-20240404041600"]}}-->
@Seungmilsm Ok, projects are approved. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:42, 5 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240405034200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240405034200-Seungmilsm-20240404041600","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello Professor,, I am a student in Collective Intelligence in Practice, Everyday Life and Social Structure,Introduction to Information Sociology. I sorry for the late completion of my weekly editing project for March. Here's the editing page in Chinese and English, you can check it at here. Thanks. Rachel.zrq (talk) Rachel.zrq (talk) 06:36, 4 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240404063600","author":"Rachel.zrq","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Rachel.zrq-20240404063600-Weekly_editing_-ZHANG_RUIQING","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240405034600-Rachel.zrq-20240404063600"]}}-->
Regarding your edits to English article here, please move your references from headings to the end of relevant paragraph. The headings should be in English, not Chinese. You can provide the translation and Chinese characters in the text body.
Your Chinese translation is a good start. You can ask Chinese editors for feedback on Discord or the Help forum. Or try this: zh:维基百科:同行评Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:46, 5 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240405034600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240405034600-Rachel.zrq-20240404063600","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hi Professor. I am taking Collective Intelligence and Wikipedia class. Here's my sandbox edit, and I'll continue to refine the content and add more references. Please check it, thank you Rachel.zrq (talk) 16:17, 4 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240404161700","author":"Rachel.zrq","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Rachel.zrq-20240404161700-Deadline4(Week5)-_ZHANG_RUIQING","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240405035200-Rachel.zrq-20240404161700"]}}-->
@Rachel.zrq Well done. Refer to my previous comment about how to get additional feedback for your work in Chinese. Once you get that feedback, and have translated all of the article, you can publish it (move it from draft to the mainspace). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:52, 5 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240405035200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240405035200-Rachel.zrq-20240404161700","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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I've translated about 50% of the article. Check it out here[13] I'll add more citations later. Kim1357 (talk) 18:00, 1 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240401180000","author":"Kim1357","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Kim1357-20240401180000-Deadline4(Week5)_kim_yeonjun","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240402114600-Kim1357-20240401180000"]}}-->
@Kim1357 I will but I am afraid you linked to the English article, not to your work in progress. Please try again. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here11:46, 2 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240402114600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240402114600-Kim1357-20240401180000","replies":["c-Kim1357-20240405023900-Hanyangprofessor2-20240402114600"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I sent it wrong, here it is. Kim1357 (talk) 02:39, 5 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240405023900","author":"Kim1357","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Kim1357-20240405023900-Hanyangprofessor2-20240402114600","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240405035300-Kim1357-20240405023900"]}}-->
@Kim1357 This looks good, but remember that all content we add to Wikipedia needs a reference. If the original content you translate is missing one, you need to verify that it is correct and add a reference.
If you need help with formatting or if you want feedback on your prose, I recommend you ask for feedback from Korean speaking editors here: ko:위키백과:함께 검토하기 . If nobody replies for a few days, ask for feedback in Korean Wikipedia Discord server. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:53, 5 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240405035300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240405035300-Kim1357-20240405023900","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hi Professor, I am a student in both Collective Intelligence in Practice, Everyday Life and Social Structure. I have completed the editing of 20 Chinese Wikipedia articles.please check itZHANGQI1066 (talk) 05:32, 4 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240404053200","author":"ZHANGQI1066","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-ZHANGQI1066-20240404053200-Weekly_editing_-ZHANG_QI_2","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240405034300-ZHANGQI1066-20240404053200"]}}-->
@ZHANGQI1066 Ok - just remember that the weekly assignment requires that 5 edits each week at minimum should be in English Wikipedia. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:43, 5 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240405034300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240405034300-ZHANGQI1066-20240404053200","replies":["c-ZHANGQI1066-20240405040200-Hanyangprofessor2-20240405034300"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
ok! ZHANGQI1066 (talk) 04:02, 5 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240405040200","author":"ZHANGQI1066","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-ZHANGQI1066-20240405040200-Hanyangprofessor2-20240405034300","replies":[]}}-->
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Hello professor, I have made many extra edits, please check it, thank you.
Qingdao#Administrative divisionsDENG HUICHEN (talk) 12:08, 29 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240329120800","author":"\ub4f1\ud61c\uc9c4","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-\ub4f1\ud61c\uc9c4-20240329120800-weekly_edit(week4)_DENG_HUICHEN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240401101400-\ub4f1\ud61c\uc9c4-20240329120800"],"displayName":"DENG HUICHEN"}}-->
@등혜진 I see. But in (here:, you removed some useful text and code - please restore it (see bottom - the paragraph on "The sub-provincial city of Qingdao has seven..."). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here10:14, 1 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240401101400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240401101400-\ub4f1\ud61c\uc9c4-20240329120800","replies":["c-\ub4f1\ud61c\uc9c4-20240405044900-Hanyangprofessor2-20240401101400"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
OK, I get it DENG HUICHEN (talk) 04:49, 5 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240405044900","author":"\ub4f1\ud61c\uc9c4","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-\ub4f1\ud61c\uc9c4-20240405044900-Hanyangprofessor2-20240401101400","replies":[],"displayName":"DENG HUICHEN"}}-->
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Hello. Professor. I am Lee jiyoon, taking Collective intelligence class. I've translated about 50% of the article. Here is the link. User:Jiyoon Leee/sandbox By the way, one of the footnotes says it can only be seen in the English text, do you know why?Please check it. Jiyoon Leee (talk) 03:50, 4 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240404035000","author":"Jiyoon Leee","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Jiyoon_Leee-20240404035000-Deadline4(week5)_Lee_jiyoon","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240405034100-Jiyoon_Leee-20240404035000"]}}-->
@Jiyoon Leee The most important thing to do is to move (copy) your draft from English Wikipedia to Korean Wikipedia, since right now it is in the wrong place. The code on English is not the same as on Korean. This is likely relevant to your footnote error - it needs to be fixed after your project is on the correct Wikipedia. The sooner you start working in Korean Wikipedia, the better. I will provide more feedback after you copy your article there. You'll likely need to redo all the hyperlinks after the move. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:41, 5 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240405034100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240405034100-Jiyoon_Leee-20240404035000","replies":["c-Jiyoon_Leee-20240405043000-Hanyangprofessor2-20240405034100","c-Jiyoon_Leee-20240405043100-Hanyangprofessor2-20240405034100"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I changed the location to Korean Wikipedia. Please check. Jiyoon Leee (talk) 04:31, 5 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240405043100","author":"Jiyoon Leee","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Jiyoon_Leee-20240405043100-Hanyangprofessor2-20240405034100","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240406112100-Jiyoon_Leee-20240405043100"]}}-->
@Jiyoon Leee Very good. Some links point to English Wikipedia (like for Portuguese sweet bread). Please use ko:틀:임시링크 for such cases. If you are not sure how to do it, ask me in class or during office hours and I'll show you. If you need help with formatting or if you want feedback on your prose, I recommend you ask for feedback from Korean speaking editors here: ko:위키백과:함께 검토하기Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here11:21, 6 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240406112100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240406112100-Jiyoon_Leee-20240405043100","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello, professor. I am taking a lecture 'Everyday Life and Social Structure'. I have completed the Wikipedia Deadline 3. Please check my editing history through this link. I tried to comply with the citation rules as well.--Kim younggyun (talk) 14:01, 4 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240404140100","author":"Kim younggyun","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Kim_younggyun-20240404140100-Deadline_3(week4)_-_Younggyun_Kim","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240405034700-Kim_younggyun-20240404140100"]}}-->
@Kim younggyun Good. You should use the translated title parameter to split the English translation of the title from the Korean original. Ask me in class or during office hours for help if you don't know how to do it and I'll show you. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:47, 5 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240405034700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240405034700-Kim_younggyun-20240404140100","replies":["c-Kim_younggyun-20240405062200-Hanyangprofessor2-20240405034700"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I was going to ask you in person, but I was late to check. I use |trans-title= |, |language= |. I'd like to know if I applied it well.--Kim younggyun (talk) 06:22, 5 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240405062200","author":"Kim younggyun","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Kim_younggyun-20240405062200-Hanyangprofessor2-20240405034700","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240406112200-Kim_younggyun-20240405062200"]}}-->
@Kim younggyun Yes, it looks very good now. Good job! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here11:22, 6 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240406112200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240406112200-Kim_younggyun-20240405062200","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Please check it out, thank you and have a nice weekend! ZHANG0822ZH (talk) 04:54, 5 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240405045400","author":"ZHANG0822ZH","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-ZHANG0822ZH-20240405045400-Deadline4(Week5)\uff1aZHANG_ZEHUA","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240406112600-ZHANG0822ZH-20240405045400"]}}-->
@ZHANG0822ZH Your edits are good. For the etiquette article, try to find better sources (academic journals or books). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here11:26, 6 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240406112600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240406112600-ZHANG0822ZH-20240405045400","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Hello, professor. I am taking a lecture 'Everyday Life and Social Structure'. I have translated sustainability and working class. I translated English into Korean for both topics. Is this enough to finish Project 5? If not, is it okay to proceed with further research about Sport in South Korea?--Kim younggyun (talk) 07:04, 5 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240405070400","author":"Kim younggyun","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Kim_younggyun-20240405070400-Project5_:_Online_wiki_assignment_-_Younggyun_Kim","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240406112900-Kim_younggyun-20240405070400"]}}-->
@Kim younggyun Very good. At this point I recommend you ask for feedback regarding your articles here: ko:위키백과:함께 검토하기
You can work on the Sports.. topic for extra credit and to build up your portfolio - good idea! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here11:29, 6 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240406112900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240406112900-Kim_younggyun-20240405070400","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello professor here are my 10 edits for the week.please check
Special:Contributions/Muqing112233Muqing112233 (talk) 07:48, 5 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240405074800","author":"Muqing112233","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Muqing112233-20240405074800-collective_intelligence_Deadline4(week5)_-MU_QING","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240406113700-Muqing112233-20240405074800"]}}-->
@Muqing112233 Good, but please note some issues were raised at the talk. In particular, your edit to the deletion discussion had corrupted code, likely to due to the use of an aggressive translation script which you should be careful with.
At Giant panda, your edits were reverted since 1) there should be no image above the infobox and 2) the reference you added does not seem relevant to the sentence you added it to. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here11:37, 6 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240406113700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240406113700-Muqing112233-20240405074800","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Please check it out. Can I get extra bonus points? Thanks. CHENG SHIYI (talk) 08:01, 5 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240405080100","author":"CHENG SHIYI","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-CHENG_SHIYI-20240405080100-Commons:Photo_challenge-CHENG_SHIYI","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240406113800-CHENG_SHIYI-20240405080100"]}}-->
@CHENG SHIYI Yes, well done! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here11:38, 6 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240406113800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240406113800-CHENG_SHIYI-20240405080100","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Good evening, Professor.
I am a student in both the Collective Intelligence in Practice and Introduction to Information Sociology courses.
I finished my Wikipedia edits this week, which totaled over 20 edits. Please check it out, thank you. CHENG SHIYI (talk) 12:28, 5 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240405122800","author":"CHENG SHIYI","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-CHENG_SHIYI-20240405122800-Weekly_wiki_edits-CHENG_SHIYI","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240406114600-CHENG_SHIYI-20240405122800"]}}-->
@CHENG SHIYI Well done! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here11:46, 6 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240406114600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240406114600-CHENG_SHIYI-20240405122800","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello, professor. I'm HUANG YANHAN, the student of Collective Intelligence in Practice. This week I translated "Film censorship" in the sandbox. This is my sandbox. Please check it. HYH031277777 (talk) 12:55, 5 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240405125500","author":"HYH031277777","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-HYH031277777-20240405125500-Deadline4(week5)HUANGYANHAN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240406114700-HYH031277777-20240405125500"]}}-->
@HYH031277777 Good progress. The formatting looks good. When you have translated everything, for comments on the translation quality, you can ask Chinese editors for feedback on Discord or the Help forum. Or try this: zh:维基百科:同行评Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here11:47, 6 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240406114700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240406114700-HYH031277777-20240405125500","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Your translations look good and are close to being finished, very good. For articles that exist on English but not Korean Wikipedia, please use ko:틀:임시링크; if it is too hard please ask me in class or during office hours and I'll show you how to use it.
You can also ask for extra feedback on your articles here: ko:위키백과:함께 검토하기Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here11:52, 6 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240406115200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240406115200-Soongki-20240405140000","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
2.I translated 50% of Generation MZ's articles in the sandbox.Please confirm if the task I completed is correct, Thanks for your patience. 유신예 (talk) 16:30, 5 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240405163000","author":"\uc720\uc2e0\uc608","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-\uc720\uc2e0\uc608-20240405163000-Deadline4(week5)-LIU_XINRUI","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240406115600-\uc720\uc2e0\uc608-20240405163000"]}}-->
@유신예 Your edits look good but there are some fixes needed. If you review your edits here, you will see that one of your additions near the end is not referenced. Your book references need page ranges (which pages contain the information that is being referenced)? And the academic reference (with DOI 10.1017/S0261143001001271) was not formatted well. Talk to me in class or during office hours and I'll show you how to quickly fix it.
Your Chinese translation looks good. Remember that all content needs to be referenced or otherwise it may be deleted once you publish it outside your sandbox. When you have translated everything, for comments on the translation quality, you can ask Chinese editors for feedback on Discord or the Help forum. Or try this: zh:维基百科:同行评Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here11:56, 6 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240406115600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240406115600-\uc720\uc2e0\uc608-20240405163000","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Hello professor,I am a student in Collective Intelligence in Practice.
Wishing you a wonderful day. 왕예화 (talk) 18:41, 5 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240405184100","author":"\uc655\uc608\ud654","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-\uc655\uc608\ud654-20240405184100-Weekly_wiki_edits_-_WANG_YIHUA","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240406115900-\uc655\uc608\ud654-20240405184100"]}}-->
@왕예화 Good. Keep in mind that content we add to Wikipedia needs to be referenced, so try to add references to your edits like this one. Unreferenced additions may be removed (per Wikipedia:Verifiability) and will not count for extra credit. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here11:59, 6 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240406115900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240406115900-\uc655\uc608\ud654-20240405184100","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Good evening, I am taking Collective Intelligence and Wikipedia class.
Here's my assignment for this week's Wikipedia edit, please check it out, thank you!
Have a nice day!TMXX0818 (talk) 10:44, 6 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240406104400","author":"TMXX0818","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-TMXX0818-20240406104400-Weekly_wiki_edits-LI_MENGRU_2","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240406121200-TMXX0818-20240406104400"]}}-->
@TMXX0818 Good. Please note that DBpedia copies information from Wikipedia and as such is not allowed as a source (see Circular reporting problem) Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here12:12, 6 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240406121200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240406121200-TMXX0818-20240406104400","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Good morning Professor, I am a student of the Collective Intelligence course.
I have translated all the English versions of North Korean health into Chinese as 50% of my total. Please check and have a wonderful day! 왕예화 (talk) 17:40, 5 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240405174000","author":"\uc655\uc608\ud654","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-\uc655\uc608\ud654-20240405174000-Deadline_4(week_5)_-_WANG_YIHUA","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240406115700-\uc655\uc608\ud654-20240405174000"]}}-->
@왕예화 Your Chinese translation looks good. Remember that all content needs to be referenced or otherwise it may be deleted once you publish it outside your sandbox. When you have translated everything, for comments on the translation quality, you can ask Chinese editors for feedback on Discord or the Help forum. Or try this: zh:维基百科:同行评Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here11:57, 6 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240406115700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240406115700-\uc655\uc608\ud654-20240405174000","replies":["c-TheLonelyPather-20240406161400-Hanyangprofessor2-20240406115700"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
As a swing-by comment, the Chinese translation looks good! Please make sure it is referenced. I find it helpful to use the source editor and copy every "ref" tag. You should use other templates in the original article, such as "see also". Cheers, --The Lonely Pather (talk) 16:14, 6 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240406161400","author":"TheLonelyPather","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-TheLonelyPather-20240406161400-Hanyangprofessor2-20240406115700","replies":["c-\uc655\uc608\ud654-20240407091700-TheLonelyPather-20240406161400"],"displayName":"The Lonely Pather"}}-->
Hello, this is my educational assignment. So far, I have only roughly translated it. I will add the references later and further improve it. thanks 왕예화 (talk) 09:17, 7 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240407091700","author":"\uc655\uc608\ud654","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-\uc655\uc608\ud654-20240407091700-TheLonelyPather-20240406161400","replies":[]}}-->
Hello,professor, I am a student of Collective Intelligence and Wikipedia.I'd like to expand this article, please check it out, thank you.The link is here. Jzhdylb (talk) 01:15, 25 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240325011500","author":"Jzhdylb","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Jzhdylb-20240325011500-Deadline2(Week3)_\u2014\u2014FAN_XINRU","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240325033000-Jzhdylb-20240325011500"]}}-->
@Jzhdylb That article is already lengthy. I would recommend choosing a different topic. However, if you have located academic sources, you could use them to improve this article. Talk to me in class or during office hours if you would still like to edit this topic (and show me what sources you would like to use). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:30, 25 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240325033000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240325033000-Jzhdylb-20240325011500","replies":["c-Jzhdylb-20240326145700-Hanyangprofessor2-20240325033000"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Thank you, Professor. I have decided to change the topic. I would like to create an article with the theme of "Popular Mobile Software in China". Please review it. Thank you. Jzhdylb (talk) 14:57, 26 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240326145700","author":"Jzhdylb","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Jzhdylb-20240326145700-Hanyangprofessor2-20240325033000","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240328041200-Jzhdylb-20240326145700"]}}-->
@Jzhdylb I am afraid this topic can be difficult. Instead, how about translating an article (or articles, if they are short) from Chinese to English about popular Chinese software that does not have English article yet? Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:12, 28 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240328041200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240328041200-Jzhdylb-20240326145700","replies":["c-Jzhdylb-20240330051600-Hanyangprofessor2-20240328041200"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello dear professor. Regarding your proposal, I have carefully considered it but have not found any relevant articles on the topic in Wikipedia, so I am unable to complete the translation task for this topic article. If the difficulty of this question is relatively high, I would like to replace it with a new one, such as "Chinese style element trend in China". I feel confident that I can complete its creation task. I hope you can help me with the review. Thank you very much. Jzhdylb (talk) 05:16, 30 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240330051600","author":"Jzhdylb","type":"comment","level":5,"id":"c-Jzhdylb-20240330051600-Hanyangprofessor2-20240328041200","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240401093300-Jzhdylb-20240330051600"]}}-->
@Jzhdylb I appreciate your desire to create new topics, but we have to ensure they are correctly named. What is Chinese style element trend in China? Is this about architecture? Fashion? Software? I strongly encourage you to translate content rather than write it from scratch. There are many Chinese Wikipedia articles missing in English. If you want to work on a specific area (software, etc.) but have trouble finding related articles, come talk to me during office hours and we will look for something together. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here09:33, 1 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240401093300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":6,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240401093300-Jzhdylb-20240330051600","replies":["c-Jzhdylb-20240407150500-Hanyangprofessor2-20240401093300"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Thank you for your suggestion! I think your suggestion is correct. I am planning to change the theme and would like to expand this article or translate this article . I hope you can give me some advice, thank you very much. Jzhdylb (talk) 15:05, 7 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240407150500","author":"Jzhdylb","type":"comment","level":7,"id":"c-Jzhdylb-20240407150500-Hanyangprofessor2-20240401093300","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240408055400-Jzhdylb-20240407150500"]}}-->
@JzhdylbProto-globalization can be translated to Chinese but you will need to chose one more topic to work. Adding information Voluntary childlessness about Korea and expanding information about China would be a good second choice. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:54, 8 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240408055400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":8,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240408055400-Jzhdylb-20240407150500","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello, professor. I'm LI LINLIN,taking 'Everyday Life and Social Structure' and
'Understanding Wikipedia'.
I completed the first translated articles for each of the two classes, from English to Chinese, and added them to my Chinese sandbox. You can check it here.
Looking forward to your reply.
Thank you~ Leeinm (talk) 14:19, 4 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240404141900","author":"Leeinm","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Leeinm-20240404141900-Deadline_4(Week_5)-LI_LINLIN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240405035000-Leeinm-20240404141900"]}}-->
@Leeinm This is a good start, but you should split your translations into two separate sandboxes, one for each article. Ask me in class or during office hours if you are unsure how to do this.
For comments on the translation quality, you can ask Chinese editors for feedback on Discord or the Help forum. Or try this: zh:维基百科:同行评Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:50, 5 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240405035000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240405035000-Leeinm-20240404141900","replies":["c-Leeinm-20240407063700-Hanyangprofessor2-20240405035000"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I've split the translations into two separate sandboxes. You can check from here and here.
Hope you have a good day~ Leeinm (talk) 06:37, 7 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240407063700","author":"Leeinm","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Leeinm-20240407063700-Hanyangprofessor2-20240405035000","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240408055500-Leeinm-20240407063700"]}}-->
@Leeinm Very good. Please let me know when you ask for feedback and link to me to the ensuing discussion. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:55, 8 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240408055500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240408055500-Leeinm-20240407063700","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Good evening Professor.I am taking Collective Intelligence and Wikipedia class. Here's my sandbox edit, please check it, thank you!TMXX0818 (talk) 10:39, 6 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240406103900","author":"TMXX0818","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-TMXX0818-20240406103900-Deadline4(Week5)_LI_MENGRU","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240406120900-TMXX0818-20240406103900"]}}-->
@TMXX0818 Good progress. Please use a tool like Grammarly to check your prose. A lot of the content is hard to understand due to poor translation quality.
Some references in the translated article will need to be replaced with betters sources. For example, reference 71 is to a fan-wiki (Fandom (website)) and cannot be accepted. YouTube is also not accepted as a source unless we are linking to reporting by major news stations. , so references 31, 32, 55 and 60 will likely need replacing as well.
Due to poor referencing, I expect we may have to drop some parts of the content you translated (no worry, you will still get full credit from your work). I'll ping an experienced volunteer interested in Chinese topic who may be able to provide more feedback on some sources used and other issues: User:TheLonelyPatherPiotrus at Hanyang| reply here12:09, 6 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240406120900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240406120900-TMXX0818-20240406103900","replies":["c-TheLonelyPather-20240406160100-Hanyangprofessor2-20240406120900"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
How much does this article and Mass media in Taiwan overlap? It is possible that some of this can be added into "Mass media in Taiwan", instead of being a stand-alone article.
Poor sourcing
if we writing about "Controversies related to Taiwanese media", we should seek sources (preferably academic sources) that systematically examine the controversies regarding Taiwanese media. Right now, a large proportion of this article stops at the phenomenal part of the subject and becomes an indiscriminate collection of information-something that Wikipedia is not (see WP:INDISCRIMINATE). We should also be avoiding WP:original research.
Let me be a bit more clear about this point: if we want to talk about how "Business purpose" is a part of the "Controversies related to Taiwanese media", we should seek sources that systematically analyses the topic, such as the prevalence of commercialisation in the news industry of Taiwan. It is not enough to list a bunch of examples (news reports that are of very bad quality) as "evidence" and claim that commercialisation is a problem of Taiwanese media. That constitutes original research.
Unfortunately this is the case of the "Business purpose" section (and many similar sections), where we have a 15-ref-long WP:overcitation, all of them are news of poor quality that the original author of the Chinese Wikipedia page "uses" to "prove" their point of "Business purpose". None of them are WP:reliable by content: they prove the point by their existence, rather than their content, which is a sign of original research.
On the other hand, the original article has some good sources. Maybe listing them could demonstrate what I mean by "sources that systematically analyses the topic".
Lin, Zhaozhen. "當前台灣近似媒體觀察組織的幾個盲點" [Several blind spots in Taiwan’s current similar media observation organizations]. 新聞學研究. 60: 171–176.
Chen, Zongyi (2006-09-01). "新台灣新聞週刊 - 假自由真侵擾 新聞公害猖獗" [False freedom is really intrusive, and news pollution is rampant]. web.archive.org. Retrieved 2024-04-03.
Wu, Tingwei (2017-08-28). "從《獨家腥聞》看台灣主流媒體:一場「即時新聞」與「爆料文化」的腥風血雨 - The News Lens 關鍵評論網" [Looking at Taiwan's mainstream media from "Exclusive News": A bloody storm of "instant news" and "explosive culture"]. web.archive.org. Retrieved 2024-04-03.
The original article has bad formatting. Specifically, it uses a lot of "note" templates, which I think is used to support blatant original research in the original article. They need to be discarded.
I am sorry for possibly being critical and sounding harsh, but these are my conclusion and my suggestions for potential improvement. In the future, please make sure the original article is good enough to translate. I will update User:TheLonelyPather/Essays/Guide for a translator accordingly–you might find it useful too.
Let us see how many these "good" sources we can obtain. If we have enough, then this topic merits a stand-alone article. Regarding the translation, I am afraid that the poor quality of the original article is detrimental to everything that follows. If this is to be published, a lot of extra work is needed, and a lot of the original information needs to be discarded. The original article was tagged with "Inappropriate tone" two years ago. Cheers, --The Lonely Pather (talk) 16:01, 6 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240406160100","author":"TheLonelyPather","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-TheLonelyPather-20240406160100-Hanyangprofessor2-20240406120900","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240408060000-TheLonelyPather-20240406160100"],"displayName":"The Lonely Pather"}}-->
@TheLonelyPather Thank you for the feedback, TLP, with which I fully agree. There are some good parts in the original article, but yes, a lot of the low quality information needs to be discarded per your analysis.@TMXX0818: It is fine if the resulting article is short; short and good is better than long and bad. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here06:00, 8 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240408060000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240408060000-TheLonelyPather-20240406160100","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Good evening, Professor. My article has been outlined in the sandbox. You can check it. And I wrote a blog post this week, and it's here. thank you. WSH0927 (talk) 14:08, 6 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240406140800","author":"WSH0927","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-WSH0927-20240406140800-Deadline4(Week5)WU_SHUHAN\uff08Collective_intelligence\uff09","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240408090000-WSH0927-20240406140800"]}}-->
@WSH0927 This is a good start. Things to keep in mind: 1) the beginning of the article (WP:LEAD) should be a summary of concepts mentioned elsewhere. Right now your lead mentions many facts not repeated (and referenced) later, such as that she had a son An Di.
You will also need to format your references with missing metadata, including translated title (keep the Chinese title but add translated title in the dedicated citation field - ask me for help if you are not sure how to do it). Other missing metadata elements include information about publisher, dates and author information.
In the 'Cultural image' section, the Chinese title needs to include, well, the Chinese title, right now it has only the English title(s).
You should also run all of your text through a service that will improve the grammar (such as Grammarly or ChatGPT). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here09:00, 8 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240408090000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240408090000-WSH0927-20240406140800","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Good evening, professor. I'm CHENG SIYU, the student of Sociology of Everyday Life.
I attended Wikimedia Commons for the monthly competition. You can check it. Hope I can get extra points for this, thank you.
Have a great weekend. Csiiiyu (talk) 15:42, 6 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240406154200","author":"Csiiiyu","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Csiiiyu-20240406154200-Wikimedia_Commons_competition_-_CHENG_SIYU","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240408090400-Csiiiyu-20240406154200"]}}-->
@Csiiiyu Good, your new uploads qualify for extra point. However, one of your images will likely be deleted - see commons:Commons:Deletion requests/File:中国女装.jpg . If you think this image should be kept, you should explain it in the discussion by addressing why it is in the Public domain. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here09:04, 8 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240408090400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240408090400-Csiiiyu-20240406154200","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Wikipedia Extra Credit Photography Challenge - WANG YIHUA
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Hello professor,I am a student in Collective Intelligence in Practice.
I participated in two photography competitions in April, the first one was about vertical and the second one was about flames. Please check.
Have a nice day 왕예화 (talk) 06:42, 7 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240407064200","author":"\uc655\uc608\ud654","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-\uc655\uc608\ud654-20240407064200-Wikipedia_Extra_Credit_Photography_Challenge_-_WANG_YIHUA","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240408093300-\uc655\uc608\ud654-20240407064200"]}}-->
@왕예화 Very nice. Try to add a category for the locations - we will also practice this in the next few weeks. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here09:33, 8 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240408093300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240408093300-\uc655\uc608\ud654-20240407064200","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello professor. I am translating the first topic, proto-globalization. Citations and references are being revised. Please check.
초기 세계화Choisieon (talk) 10:23, 7 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240407102300","author":"Choisieon","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Choisieon-20240407102300-Deadline4(Week5)_Choi_sieon","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240408093400-Choisieon-20240407102300"]}}-->
@Choisieon Good start. But I noticed that your sandbox is on English Wikipedia. You should copy it to Korean Wikipedia - the code on English is not the same as on Korean. The sooner you start working in Korean Wikipedia, the better. I will provide more feedback after you copy your article there. You'll likely need to redo all the hyperlinks after the move. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here09:34, 8 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240408093400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240408093400-Choisieon-20240407102300","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
@Sephyy Good start. Remember that your translations will need to have references for all content. I will provide more feedback on the English translation once there are references; your prose seems fine. You will also need to add more blue links (see WP:BTW).
Regarding your Chinese translation, it looks fine. When you have translated everything, for comments on the translation quality, you can ask Chinese editors for feedback on Discord or the Help forum. Or try this: zh:维基百科:同行评Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here09:37, 8 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240408093700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240408093700-Sephyy-20240407123300","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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@Huejyi Good progress. Regarding your Korean translation, try asking Korean editors for feedback on Discord or the Help forum. You can also ask here: ko:위키백과:함께 검토하기. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here09:38, 8 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240408093800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240408093800-Huejyi-20240407132200","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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please check thank you Wangtao626 (talk) 02:20, 8 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240408022000","author":"Wangtao626","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Wangtao626-20240408022000-Deadline3_(week_4)_Wang_Tao","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240408094000-Wangtao626-20240408022000"]}}-->
@Wangtao626 Good job Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here09:40, 8 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240408094000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240408094000-Wangtao626-20240408022000","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
hello professor.i'm Chen zhitong from everyday life and social structure class.i have added references for the article zhongshan pleas check it.thank you. Orange-1203 (talk) 05:00, 8 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240408050000","author":"Orange-1203","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Orange-1203-20240408050000-Deadline3_(week_4)_Chen_whiting","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240408094500-Orange-1203-20240408050000"]}}-->
@Orange-1203 Unfortunately, your edit was not correct and has been removed. You did not add a WP:REFERENCE (which should be in a footnote format - see also our video on the LMS how to do so); instead you added unnecessary Wikipedia:External links .
Your second external link, while in the right section, was accompanied by a text that is not understandable in English ("SunWen XiLu WenHua LvYou BuXingJie).
You also changed the bullet points to less common number list without providing a Help:Edit summary.
Please review the linked materials and try again. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here09:45, 8 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240408094500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240408094500-Orange-1203-20240408050000","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello,profrssor,I added one of the article translation in the sandbox.Please check it out.Thank you.https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Babaibiaobin/sandboxBabaibiaobin (talk) 09:56, 5 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240405095600","author":"Babaibiaobin","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Babaibiaobin-20240405095600-Deadline4(week5)Gaoxiaoxia","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240406114400-Babaibiaobin-20240405095600"]}}-->
@Babaibiaobin This is a good start. You have completed the current deadlines well.
Feedback for the future: For articles that exist on Chinese but not English Wikipedia, please use Template:Interlanguage link; if it is too hard please ask me in class or during office hours and I'll show you how to use it. Your reference 1 needs to be changed a to a more reliable one, as WP:BAIDU is not allowed on Wikipedia. Many other references will need to be corrected for missing metadata (author, date, title/translated title, publisher, etc.). There is some content that is unreferenced - remember that each paragraph needs to have one more references that verify its content, including at the end. Lastly, please use a service like Grammarly to double check your English prose. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here11:44, 6 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240406114400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240406114400-Babaibiaobin-20240405095600","replies":["c-Babaibiaobin-20240409054400-Hanyangprofessor2-20240406114400"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello professor.We have corrected the errors in the work, is this correct?Another question is, if we do the homework in groups, should we just do one sandbox, or should we both do it? Babaibiaobin (talk) 05:44, 9 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240409054400","author":"Babaibiaobin","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Babaibiaobin-20240409054400-Hanyangprofessor2-20240406114400","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240410115000-Babaibiaobin-20240409054400"]}}-->
@Babaibiaobin If you work in a group, one sandbox will be enough (for one article). There is no need to duplicate a sandbox.
You will still need to fix the wrong metadata, including the now-incorrect description of publisher of one of your references as Baidu. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here11:50, 10 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240410115000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240410115000-Babaibiaobin-20240409054400","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Bai0926 (talk) 10:12, 8 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240408101200","author":"Bai0926","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Bai0926-20240408101200-Deadline4(Week5)_BAILINHAN_2","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240410115100-Bai0926-20240408101200"]}}-->
@Bai0926 It looks good but remember that all content we add to Wikipedia needs to be referenced to reliable sources. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here11:51, 10 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240410115100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240410115100-Bai0926-20240408101200","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello professor, this is the Wikipedia editing task I have completed. Please review it. Thank you. Jzhdylb (talk) 07:38, 9 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240409073800","author":"Jzhdylb","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Jzhdylb-20240409073800-Deadline3_\uff08week4\uff09-FAN_XINRU","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240410115300-Jzhdylb-20240409073800"]}}-->
@Jzhdylb Well done. One remark: one of the sources you used (123helpme) does not seem reliable. Who is the author of that essay? Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here11:53, 10 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240410115300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240410115300-Jzhdylb-20240409073800","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Hello Professor Piotr K. I am a student of Everyday Life and Social Structure. I enrolled in Training/Students, Wikipedia's dashboard system course. Also, I learned courses such as 'Special Topics', 'Exercise', and 'Discussion' for additional credits, so please check. Also, I took classes after the correction period and learned about the existence of deadlines late. So I am sorry for learning too late. I will do my assignments quickly and participate more actively from now on. Thank you. Kaldwl (talk) 10:53, 9 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240409105300","author":"Kaldwl","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Kaldwl-20240409105300-Deadline1(week2)_Kim_minji","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240410115400-Kaldwl-20240409105300"]}}-->
@Kaldwl Better late then never. Please chose a topic for your wiki assignment. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here11:54, 10 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240410115400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240410115400-Kaldwl-20240409105300","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello professor, I finished an edit outside the sandbox in here, please check it, thank you! Wantiin (talk) 08:45, 10 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240410084500","author":"Wantiin","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Wantiin-20240410084500-Deadline_3_(Week_4)_ZENG_WANTING","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240410115500-Wantiin-20240410084500"]}}-->
@Wantiin It looks good, well done! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here11:55, 10 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240410115500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240410115500-Wantiin-20240410084500","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear professor, this week I roughly completed the translation of the first article. The next step is to adjust and polish it. Please check it out. Mcx8202229 (talk) 08:52, 5 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240405085200","author":"Mcx8202229","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Mcx8202229-20240405085200-Article_translation-Ma_Chenxiao","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240406114000-Mcx8202229-20240405085200"]}}-->
@Mcx8202229 Please link your work here, then I will give you more feedback. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here11:40, 6 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240406114000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240406114000-Mcx8202229-20240405085200","replies":["c-Mcx8202229-20240406123800-Hanyangprofessor2-20240406114000"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
User:Mcx8202229/sandbox Here is my link please professor check Mcx8202229 (talk) 12:38, 6 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240406123800","author":"Mcx8202229","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Mcx8202229-20240406123800-Hanyangprofessor2-20240406114000","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240408055700-Mcx8202229-20240406123800"]}}-->
@Mcx8202229 It is a good start. But your sandbox is on English Wikipedia. You should copy it to Chinese Wikipedia - the code on English is not the same as on Chinese one. The sooner you start working in Chinese Wikipedia, the better. I will provide more feedback after you copy your article there. You'll likely need to redo all the hyperlinks after the move and some other content like images or references may display problems.
It is important to understand that Chinese Wikipedia is not the same website as English Wikipedia (zh =/= en). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:57, 8 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240408055700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240408055700-Mcx8202229-20240406123800","replies":["c-Mcx8202229-20240411060800-Hanyangprofessor2-20240408055700"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Thank you Professor, I have translated the article to Chinese Wikipedia. This is the link https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Mcx8202229/%E6%B2%99%E7%9B%92
So correspondingly, should I also translate Chinese-English articles into the English Wikipedia sandbox? Mcx8202229 (talk) 06:08, 11 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240411060800","author":"Mcx8202229","type":"comment","level":5,"id":"c-Mcx8202229-20240411060800-Hanyangprofessor2-20240408055700","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240412080300-Mcx8202229-20240411060800"]}}-->
@Mcx8202229 This is correct. Chinese-language articles should be at Chinese Wikipedia. If you work on an English-language article, it should be at English Wikipedia. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:03, 12 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240412080300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":6,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240412080300-Mcx8202229-20240411060800","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Dear professor
I am a student of Collective Intelligence and Wikipedia, here are my ten weekly Wikipedia edits for this week Shi Yuhao, please check it out, thank you! ZHANG0822ZH (talk) 04:54, 11 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240411045400","author":"ZHANG0822ZH","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-ZHANG0822ZH-20240411045400-Weekly_Wikipedia_Editors\uff1aZHANG_ZEHUA","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240412080500-ZHANG0822ZH-20240411045400"]}}-->
@ZHANG0822ZH Excellent job! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:05, 12 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240412080500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240412080500-ZHANG0822ZH-20240411045400","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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@Sangrok02 Good job adding references. But pleasecheck whether the last one you added is reliable - it is to a Naver blog. Blogs are usually not seen as reliable sources. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:07, 12 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240412080700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240412080700-Sangrok02-20240411163700","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Hello professor, I did not successfully sign in for 23624_집단지성 today. How should I remedy the situation? Mcx8202229 (talk) 06:30, 12 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240412063000","author":"Mcx8202229","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Mcx8202229-20240412063000-Sign_in_question","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240412080700-Mcx8202229-20240412063000"]}}-->
@Mcx8202229 If this is about attendance, please ask me after the next class and I will fix it for you. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:07, 12 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240412080700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240412080700-Mcx8202229-20240412063000","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Hello Professor I'm Seungmi Lee and I'm taking the Everyday Life and Social Structure class. I've completed adding inline citations. Please check. Here's the Wiki link I added citations. [14] and [15].
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@Seungmilsm Unfortunately, I do not see any citations at the linked (English) articles. Perhaps you have done so in another language? Please try to link the correct article, preferably with Help:DiffPiotrus at Hanyang| reply here09:39, 8 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240408093900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240408093900-Seungmilsm-20240407133000","replies":["c-Seungmilsm-20240412133200-Hanyangprofessor2-20240408093900"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
This is the right link. Seungmilsm (talk) 13:32, 12 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240412133200","author":"Seungmilsm","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Seungmilsm-20240412133200-Hanyangprofessor2-20240408093900","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240415014500-Seungmilsm-20240412133200"]}}-->
@Seungmilsm Ok - now I see your work, it looks good, well done citing academic sources. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here01:45, 15 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240415014500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240415014500-Seungmilsm-20240412133200","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Good evening, Professor.
I am a student in both the Collective Intelligence in Practice and Introduction to Information Sociology courses.
Here's what I've been working on for this week's Wikipedia edit, please check it out thanks.
Have a great weekend. CHENG SHIYI (talk) 11:28, 12 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240412112800","author":"CHENG SHIYI","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-CHENG_SHIYI-20240412112800-Weekly_wiki_edits-CHENG_SHIYI_2","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240415014700-CHENG_SHIYI-20240412112800"]}}-->
@CHENG SHIYI Well done. When adding translated titles, you do not need to put "en:" in front of them. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here01:47, 15 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240415014700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240415014700-CHENG_SHIYI-20240412112800","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Good evening, professor. This is my editor of the week. Please check it .Thank you for your time! 유신예 (talk) 16:50, 13 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240413165000","author":"\uc720\uc2e0\uc608","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-\uc720\uc2e0\uc608-20240413165000-Week6\uff08Weekly_Editor\uff09-LIU_XINRUI","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240415020300-\uc720\uc2e0\uc608-20240413165000"]}}-->
@유신예 Good, but try to use more reliable references. WP:BAIDU is not allowed on Wikipedia. YouTube is also not a good source - unless we link to official videos. There are many bad (fan-made) videos which are not reliable. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:03, 15 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240415020300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240415020300-\uc720\uc2e0\uc608-20240413165000","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello professor, this is our group translating project in class Everyday Life and Social Structure, please check it, thank you! Wantiin (talk) 04:49, 14 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240414044900","author":"Wantiin","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Wantiin-20240414044900-Deadline4_(Week5):_ZENG_WANTING&ZHANG_RUIQING","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240415020400-Wantiin-20240414044900"]}}-->
@Wantiin Your Korean translation is progressing well, all the formatting looks good. If you need help with formatting or if you want feedback on your prose, I recommend you ask for feedback from Korean speaking editors here: ko:위키백과:함께 검토하기 . If nobody replies for a few days, ask for feedback in Korean Discord server. After receiving feedback you can publish your translation once all content is translated. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:04, 15 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240415020400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240415020400-Wantiin-20240414044900","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Deadline 5(Week 6) - Everyday Life and Social Sturcture - MU QING
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Good afternoon, sir. Instead of editing ten times this week, I have translated an extra article this week. This is an article I translated from English to Chinese.You can check it.
[16]乔治·福姆比George FormbyMuqing112233 (talk) 05:00, 14 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240414050000","author":"Muqing112233","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Muqing112233-20240414050000-Deadline_5(Week_6)_-_Everyday_Life_and_Social_Sturcture_-_MU_QING","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240415020500-Muqing112233-20240414050000"]}}-->
@Muqing112233 Good - see my feedback above for what you need to fix next (references). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:05, 15 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240415020500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240415020500-Muqing112233-20240414050000","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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I submit 2 translation assignments. I'll attach each link. Thank you.
사용자:Seohyun S/연습장2 - 위키백과, 우리 모두의 백과사전 (wikipedia.org)Seohyun S (talk) 02:19, 15 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240415021900","author":"Seohyun S","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Seohyun_S-20240415021900-Deadline2(Week3)_Son_Seohyun","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240415025100-Seohyun_S-20240415021900"]}}-->
@Seohyun S This is a good start for the outline. Next you need to add references and blue links to relevant Wikipedia articles. If a topic exists in English but not Korean, please link it using this tool: Template:Interlanguage link (ko:틀:임시링크)
If you need help with formatting or if you want feedback on your prose, I recommend you ask for feedback from Korean speaking editors here: ko:위키백과:함께 검토하기 . If nobody replies for a few days, ask for feedback in Korean Wikipedia Discord server. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:51, 15 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240415025100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240415025100-Seohyun_S-20240415021900","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
@Minis707 This is fine for the outline, but please remember that before publication you need to add blue links (hyperlinks) and correctly formatted references, as well as importing images. If a topic exists in English but not Korean, please link it using this tool: Template:Interlanguage link (ko:틀:임시링크). If you need help with formatting or if you want feedback on your prose, I recommend you ask for feedback from Korean speaking editors here: ko:위키백과:함께 검토하기 . If nobody replies for a few days, ask for feedback in Korean Wikipedia Discord server. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:14, 19 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240419041400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240419041400-Minis707-20240415022800","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Good afternoon, sir. Instead of editing ten times this week, I have translated an extra article this week. This is an article I translated from English to Chinese.
乔治·福姆比George FormbyMuqing112233 (talk) 03:45, 13 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240413034500","author":"Muqing112233","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Muqing112233-20240413034500-Deadline5_(week6)_:MU_QING(Collective_Intelligence)","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240415014900-Muqing112233-20240413034500"]}}-->
@Muqing112233 Good, but remember to add references to your extra credit translation. Content without references may be deleted and will not count for extra credit work. See zh:维基百科:可供查證Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here01:49, 15 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240415014900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240415014900-Muqing112233-20240413034500","replies":["c-Muqing112233-20240415032500-Hanyangprofessor2-20240415014900"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I added two references, please check if they are correct. Muqing112233 (talk) 03:25, 15 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240415032500","author":"Muqing112233","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Muqing112233-20240415032500-Hanyangprofessor2-20240415014900","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240419041600-Muqing112233-20240415032500"]}}-->
@Muqing112233 It is better now. But please note that the article has a warning message:
It was added here. Contact the editor who added it and ask them if the situation is sufficiently resolved. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:16, 19 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240419041600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240419041600-Muqing112233-20240415032500","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello professor, I edit article. I have additionally translated https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%96%B4%EB%B9%99_%EA%B3%A0%ED%94%84%EB%A8%BC#%EC%82%B6 the from English to Korean. Please check. Thanks! Cookinu (talk) 03:51, 15 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240415035100","author":"Cookinu","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Cookinu-20240415035100-Extra_credit_-_Kwon_Jaeeun","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240419041700-Cookinu-20240415035100"]}}-->
@Cookinu Well done, this will count for extra credit. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:17, 19 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240419041700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240419041700-Cookinu-20240415035100","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
2.This is my sandbox edit, I quoted reliable sources, please check
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@Bai0926 Good job with your extra edits. Regarding your sandbox draft, your middle reference is not reliable (see WP:BAIDU).
The other two sources are ok to start with but you should use scholarly sources like the ones seen here. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:14, 19 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240419081400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240419081400-Bai0926-20240415040600","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Deadline3: week4 - LI YULUN (Collective intelligence)
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Hello Professor, I have completed additional editing outside the sandbox in this article, please check it out LIYULUN (talk) 16:25, 15 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240415162500","author":"LIYULUN","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-LIYULUN-20240415162500-Deadline3:_week4_-_LI_YULUN_(Collective_intelligence)","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240419082700-LIYULUN-20240415162500"]}}-->
@LIYULUN Well done. You should proofread your article (I recommend a tool like Grammarly). Some errors may not be caught by AI - please check yourself. For example, the second paragraph talks about the TV series premiere in the future tense, but it already happened. You also need to proofread your 'evaluate' section (which should probably be renamed to 'Reception'). It reads ok until "; the structure of the novel" - there is something unclear about that sentence, missing word/verb; please check with Grammarly. Also, what is "Douqi Continent"? Douqi is not in English. Is this a Chinese concept? Does it have a Chinese Wikipedia article?
Your 'game' paragraph is missing content, it is just an unfinished sentence. If there is a related game, you should provide information - what kind of game, who published it, what are the reviews.
For your references, some are missing English translated title. Others may be missing other metadata like author name, date, publisher, etc.
It would be good if you could find more reviews / reception (more sources). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:27, 19 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240419082700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240419082700-LIYULUN-20240415162500","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Weekly wiki edits-LI YULUN (Collective intelligence)
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Hello professor, this is my weekly extra edit from the beginning of the semester so far, please check, thank you.
Good. Please remember to sign your comments. --Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here11:28, 19 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240419112800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240419112800-Weekly_wiki_edits-LI_YULUN_(Collective_intelligence)","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Deadline 4(Week 5) :LIYULUN ,SHAOJIANUAN, group8(Collective Intelligence and Wikipedia)
@LIYULUN Regarding your translation of the Happy Baby, what is needed is to show how this article meets WP:GNG (see also Wikipedia:Notability (television). You have to show the show is important by adding information on awards it won, or showing that it received reviews from major newspapers, magazines or in academic works.
Regarding your Chinese translation, I see good progress. When you are done translating all the content, you can ask Chinese editors for feedback on Discord or the Help forum. Or try this: zh:维基百科:同行评审Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here11:34, 19 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240419113400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240419113400-LIYULUN-20240415165800","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello professor. I am a student of Collective Intelligence in Practice.I have joined the dashboard system. and completed the training. Ask the professor to check. Kikolipu (talk) 13:41, 16 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240416134100","author":"Kikolipu","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Kikolipu-20240416134100-Deadline\uff08Week2\uff09LI_PEIYU","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240419113500-Kikolipu-20240416134100"]}}-->
@Kikolipu Better late then never. Please note that completing assignments after deadline results in reduced grade. You will need to do more extra credit edits to compensate for not completing assignments during the first half of the course. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here11:35, 19 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240419113500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240419113500-Kikolipu-20240416134100","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello professor, I will translate the following two articles, English to Chinese.Please be sure. Thank you.
History of human rightsHistory of Sino–Korean relations. ZixuanHE (talk) 00:08, 17 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240417000800","author":"ZixuanHE","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-ZixuanHE-20240417000800-Deadline\uff08Week2\uff09LI_PEIYU","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240419113700-ZixuanHE-20240417000800"]}}-->
@ZixuanHE You should leave your future messages in your own sections, not under those started by another student. Your topics are good and have been approved. Good luck Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here11:37, 19 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240419113700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240419113700-ZixuanHE-20240417000800","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello professor, I will translate the following two articles, English to Chinese, please confirm.Thank you.Electronics right to repair. https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/성별임금격차218.235.241.134 (talk) 00:08, 17 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240417000800","author":"218.235.241.134","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-218.235.241.134-20240417000800-Deadline\uff08Week2\uff09LI_PEIYU","replies":[]}}-->
Hello professor, I will translate the following two articles, English to Chinese, please confirm.Thank you.https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/성별임금격차https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Electronics_right_to_repairJINJINYAN (talk) 00:10, 17 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240417001000","author":"JINJINYAN","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-JINJINYAN-20240417001000-Deadline\uff08Week2\uff09LI_PEIYU","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240419114000-JINJINYAN-20240417001000"]}}-->
@JINJINYAN You should leave your future messages in your own sections, not under those started by another student. The first article linked was Korean, not English, but if you meant Gender pay gap then it is ok. Your topics are good and have been approved. Good luck Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here11:40, 19 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240419114000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240419114000-JINJINYAN-20240417001000","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello professor, I will translate the following two articles, English to Chinese.Please be sure. Thank you. History of Sino–Korean relationsHistory of human rights . ZixuanHE (talk) 00:15, 17 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240417001500","author":"ZixuanHE","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-ZixuanHE-20240417001500-Deadline_2_(week3)_ZIXUANHE","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240419114000-ZixuanHE-20240417001500"]}}-->
@ZixuanHE Good, see my reply above. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here11:40, 19 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240419114000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240419114000-ZixuanHE-20240417001500","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello professor, I will translate the following two articles, English to Chinese, please confirm.Thank you. Electronics right to repairhttps://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/성별임금격차JINJINYAN (talk) 00:15, 17 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240417001500","author":"JINJINYAN","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-JINJINYAN-20240417001500-Deadline_(Week3)_YANJINJIN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240419114000-JINJINYAN-20240417001500"]}}-->
@JINJINYAN Good, see my reply above. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here11:40, 19 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240419114000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240419114000-JINJINYAN-20240417001500","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Hello Professor! I am a student of Collective Intelligence in Practice. Can I choose Female infanticide in China as my translation target? I will translate it into Chinese. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Female_infanticide_in_ChinaKikolipu (talk) 04:13, 17 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240417041300","author":"Kikolipu","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Kikolipu-20240417041300-Deadline_2_(Week_3)_selection_LI_PEIYU","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240419114200-Kikolipu-20240417041300"]}}-->
@Kikolipu The topic is fine, but you have never signed my spreadsheet in class. Please see me after class to add your name to it. You will also need to chose another topic. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here11:42, 19 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240419114200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240419114200-Kikolipu-20240417041300","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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hello professor! I am a student of Everyday Life and Collective Intelligence.
I have been finished weekly edits.please check it and here is chinese edits. ZHANGQI1066 (talk) 07:37, 17 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240417073700","author":"ZHANGQI1066","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-ZHANGQI1066-20240417073700-Weekly_wiki_edits-ZHANG_QI","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240419114300-ZHANGQI1066-20240417073700"]}}-->
@ZHANGQI1066 Good. If a topic exists in Chinese but not English, please link it using this tool: Template:Interlanguage link . If this is not easy, ask me in class and I will show you how do use this tool. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here11:43, 19 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240419114300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240419114300-ZHANGQI1066-20240417073700","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear professor, I have completed the preliminary translation of the Chinese-English article. Next, I will search for more information to supplement this article.This is the sandbox linkUser:Mcx8202229/sandboxMcx8202229 (talk) 09:28, 17 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240417092800","author":"Mcx8202229","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Mcx8202229-20240417092800-Deadline_4_(Week_7)","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240419114500-Mcx8202229-20240417092800"]}}-->
@Mcx8202229 Good start. Please use a tool like Grammarly to go over your text for vocabulary and grammar.
What is needed is to show how this article meets WP:GNG (see also Wikipedia:Notability (television). You have to show the show is important by adding information on awards it won, or showing that it received reviews from major newspapers, magazines or in academic works. You have a good start under "evaluate" section (which needs to be renamed to Reception), but you will need more. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here11:45, 19 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240419114500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240419114500-Mcx8202229-20240417092800","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
@ZHANG0822ZH Well done. Double check the English prose added with a tool like Grammarly - there are small errors (ex. in the sentence " You must not eat anything in your mouth, or say anything unrelated to the salute while bowing" or "*Number of seats The seating order is). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:54, 22 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240422035400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240422035400-ZHANG0822ZH-20240418042600","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Hello Professor, I have completed 80% of my Chinese to English article translation assignment (中国史前文化). In addition,based on your suggestion,I have made a lot of additions to the original Chinese text of this article as well as the references, and I would appreciate if I could get some extra points.
Thank you. Zhongxxin (talk) 19:33, 18 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240418193300","author":"Zhongxxin","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Zhongxxin-20240418193300-Translation_of_the_article\u2014ZHONG_XIN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240422040000-Zhongxxin-20240418193300"]}}-->
@Zhongxxin Your work is progressing very well. Here are some comments:
Please note that the title should be "Prehistory of China" not "Prehistory in China"
If a topic exists in Chinese but not English, please link it using this tool: Template:Interlanguage link. For example, the Donggutuo site should be linked like this: Donggutuo site [zh]
Some references do not have any blue links to ISBN or websites. For example, reference 5 (" "Stone Age," Microsoft Encarta Online Encyclopedia 2007 Contributed by Kathy Schick, B.A., M.A., Ph.D. and Nicholas Toth, B.A., M.A., Ph.D."). Can you find if the original articles exist online? Here is a link for your reference 11: World's Oldest Ritual Discovered -- Worshipped The Python 70,000 Years Ago | ScienceDailyPiotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:00, 22 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240422040000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240422040000-Zhongxxin-20240418193300","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Hello Professor, I have completed over eighty Wikipedia edits this month (weeks 4-7), please check.
I would be grateful if you could give me suggestions. Zhongxxin (talk) 15:25, 19 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240419152500","author":"Zhongxxin","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Zhongxxin-20240419152500-Weekly_wiki_edits-ZHONG_XIN_4","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240422054000-Zhongxxin-20240419152500"]}}-->
@Zhongxxin Good, but please double check the url (links) in your references. While looking at this,
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Good afternoon, Professor.
I am a student in both the Collective Intelligence in Practice and Introduction to Information Sociology courses.
Here's my Wikipedia edit for the week, please check it out, thanks. CHENG SHIYI (talk) 15:27, 19 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240419152700","author":"CHENG SHIYI","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-CHENG_SHIYI-20240419152700-Weekly_wiki_edits-CHENG_SHIYI_3","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240422054200-CHENG_SHIYI-20240419152700"]}}-->
@CHENG SHIYI Good. Here, it would be good to find a better reference then WP:BAIDU, which is not allowed on Wikipedia (see link for reasons). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:42, 22 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240422054200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240422054200-CHENG_SHIYI-20240419152700","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello professor here are my 10 edits for the week.please check.MUQING
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@Muqing112233 Good, but remember that half of your weekly edits should be in English. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:46, 22 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240422054600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240422054600-Muqing112233-20240420073900","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello, Professor. I am a student in the course " Everyday Life and Collective Intelligence ". My student number is 2023025414. the 3.29 assignment you assigned has both mp4 and pdf options for submission. I have prepared the manuscript format as well. In your lesson plan, there is a note that Form B can also be submitted for assignments. I sent the recorded video. I would like to ask what the problem is? Because the marks are really worrying. Wsw1357 (talk) 14:23, 20 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240420142300","author":"Wsw1357","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Wsw1357-20240420142300-Deadline56(week7)_:MU_QING(Collective_Intelligence)","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240422054800-Wsw1357-20240420142300"]}}-->
@Wsw1357 Dear student. Since this is not an issue that concerns our Wikipedia assignment, please talk to me after our class, during our office hours, and I will review your case there. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:48, 22 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240422054800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240422054800-Wsw1357-20240420142300","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello professor, this is my editor of the week and a dozen additional edits.I'd appreciate it if I could get your confirmation. 유신예 (talk) 17:59, 20 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240420175900","author":"\uc720\uc2e0\uc608","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-\uc720\uc2e0\uc608-20240420175900-Week7\uff08Weekly_Editor\uff09-LIU_XINRUI","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240422055100-\uc720\uc2e0\uc608-20240420175900"]}}-->
@유신예 Good. I recommend using a tool like Grammarly to double check grammar and vocabulary. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:51, 22 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240422055100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240422055100-\uc720\uc2e0\uc608-20240420175900","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
ChenGui (talk) 09:56, 21 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240421095600","author":"ChenGui","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-ChenGui-20240421095600-Deadline_4_(Week_5)\uff1aChen_Gui","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240422055300-ChenGui-20240421095600"]}}-->
@ChenGui Your Chinese translation looks good. Remember to proofread your content to ensure that it reads well. When you have translated everything, for comments on the translation quality, you can ask Chinese editors for feedback on Discord or the Help forum. Or try this: zh:维基百科:同行评 . When you think your project is complete, you can publish it (move it to the main space) on Chinese Wikipedia. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:53, 22 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240422055300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240422055300-ChenGui-20240421095600","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello professor, I have finished the translation of The Coming Conflict with China article from English into Korean, please check it, thank you. This is my sandbox link(User:등혜진/sandbox) DENG HUICHEN (talk) 12:06, 21 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240421120600","author":"\ub4f1\ud61c\uc9c4","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-\ub4f1\ud61c\uc9c4-20240421120600-Deadline_4_(Week_7)\uff1aDENG_HUICHEN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240422055400-\ub4f1\ud61c\uc9c4-20240421120600"],"displayName":"DENG HUICHEN"}}-->
@등혜진 Your translation looks good. I recommend you ask for feedback from Korean speaking editors here: ko:위키백과:함께 검토하기 . If nobody replies for a few days, ask for feedback in Korean Discord server. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:54, 22 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240422055400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240422055400-\ub4f1\ud61c\uc9c4-20240421120600","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Good evening, Professor.
I am a student in both the Collective Intelligence in Practice and Introduction to Information Sociology courses.
I completed the task of translating the English-to-Chinese article (80%), in addition, I added the missing literature of the original article(Organic food culture) in the Chinese article. Here is my sandbox, please check it out.
If there are any problems, please let me know and I will make the changes right away, thank you. CHENG SHIYI (talk) 13:36, 21 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240421133600","author":"CHENG SHIYI","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-CHENG_SHIYI-20240421133600-Translation_of_the_article\u2014CHENG_SHIYI","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240422055600-CHENG_SHIYI-20240421133600"]}}-->
@CHENG SHIYI Your Chinese translation looks good. Remember to proofread your content to ensure that it reads well. When you have translated everything, for comments on the translation quality, you can ask Chinese editors for feedback on Discord or the Help forum. Or try this: zh:维基百科:同行评 . When you think your project is complete, you can publish it (move it to the main space) on Chinese Wikipedia. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:56, 22 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240422055600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240422055600-CHENG_SHIYI-20240421133600","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello, professor, this is an article that translates English into Chinese instead of the editor. I have added some citations. Can I get an extra score?
乔治·福姆比Muqing112233 (talk) 07:26, 24 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240424072600","author":"Muqing112233","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Muqing112233-20240424072600-MU_QING(Collective_Intelligence)","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240424074700-Muqing112233-20240424072600"]}}-->
@Muqing112233 Yes. good job. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:47, 24 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240424074700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240424074700-Muqing112233-20240424072600","replies":["c-Muqing112233-20240424080200-Hanyangprofessor2-20240424074700"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Think you, sir.Wish you have a wonderful day! Muqing112233 (talk) 08:02, 24 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240424080200","author":"Muqing112233","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Muqing112233-20240424080200-Hanyangprofessor2-20240424074700","replies":[]}}-->
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Hello Professor , I am a student in the course " Everyday Life and Collective Intelligence ". this is my English to Chinese translation of the Wikipedia sandbox of Anarchism in Korea .Is it okay for me to continue to complete this translation assignment as I am doing now?Thanks for the reply.my sandbox. Orange-1203 (talk) 05:49, 25 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240425054900","author":"Orange-1203","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Orange-1203-20240425054900-Translation_of_the_article-chen_zhitong","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240426025300-Orange-1203-20240425054900"]}}-->
@Orange-1203 It is a good start. But your sandbox is on English Wikipedia. You should copy it to Chinese Wikipedia - the code on English is not the same as on Chinese one. The sooner you start working in Chinese Wikipedia, the better. I will provide more feedback after you copy your article there. You'll likely need to redo all the hyperlinks after the move Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:53, 26 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240426025300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240426025300-Orange-1203-20240425054900","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello professor, this is my 10 English Wikipedia edits this week, and an additional 10 Chinese Wikipedia edits.I'd appreciate it if you could confirm! 유신예 (talk) 18:02, 25 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240425180200","author":"\uc720\uc2e0\uc608","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-\uc720\uc2e0\uc608-20240425180200-LIU_XINRUI--Weekly_Editor","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240426025500-\uc720\uc2e0\uc608-20240425180200"]}}-->
@유신예 Good. When you add a reference to a Chinese page in English, you should provide both the Chinese and English translated title (so not just "Different styles of second-hand roses, is it rock or northeast two people turn? ", but also 风格迥异的二手玫瑰,是摇滚还是二人转?). If you don't know how to do it - ask me in class or during my office hours and I'll demonstrate, Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:55, 26 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240426025500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240426025500-\uc720\uc2e0\uc608-20240425180200","replies":["c-1.241.68.131-20240426144700-Hanyangprofessor2-20240426025500"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I'll take note of that next time. Thank you for your guidance, professor. 1.241.68.131 (talk) 14:47, 26 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240426144700","author":"1.241.68.131","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-1.241.68.131-20240426144700-Hanyangprofessor2-20240426025500","replies":[]}}-->
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Good evening Professor. I'm CHENG SIYU, the student of Sociology of Everyday Life.
Let me report to you on my editing status on the wiki last month, except for the sandbox. This is my edit on English Wikipedia. In addition, I inserted the picture of the inner-painting pot on the Chinese Wikipedia, added content and added references. Wish I could get extra points.
Have a nice day. Csiiiyu (talk) 14:19, 15 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240415141900","author":"Csiiiyu","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Csiiiyu-20240415141900-Sociology_of_Everyday_Life_-_CHENG_SIYU","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240419081900-Csiiiyu-20240415141900"]}}-->
@Csiiiyu Good. In here, try to use Template:Interlanguage link to link. If you don't know how to do it, stop by my office and I'll show you. And remember we need a reference as well.
You should also add reference(s) to the end of the first paragraph and second here here.
You will get extra credit certainly if this activity is for the Everyday Life class. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:19, 19 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240419081900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240419081900-Csiiiyu-20240415141900","replies":["c-Csiiiyu-20240422023000-Hanyangprofessor2-20240419081900"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello Professor, I have made the modifications as you suggested. Not sure if what I linked is correct. I've added more references here. Please check. These activity is for the Everyday Life class. Have a good week. Csiiiyu (talk) 02:30, 22 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240422023000","author":"Csiiiyu","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Csiiiyu-20240422023000-Hanyangprofessor2-20240419081900","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240422034900-Csiiiyu-20240422023000"]}}-->
@Csiiiyu Well done. If the reference is in Chinese, then the title of the reference should be in the Chinese (ex. 羊肉是热性还是凉性 吃羊肉不能吃什么), while the English translation title (Is mutton hot or cold? What should not be eaten when eating mutton?) should go to the "translated title" parameter. If you do not know how to do this, ask me and I'll show it to you after class. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:49, 22 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240422034900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240422034900-Csiiiyu-20240422023000","replies":["c-Csiiiyu-20240426055800-Hanyangprofessor2-20240422034900"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello Professor,thank you for pointing that out. I have modified it, please check it. Csiiiyu (talk) 05:58, 26 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240426055800","author":"Csiiiyu","type":"comment","level":5,"id":"c-Csiiiyu-20240426055800-Hanyangprofessor2-20240422034900","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240429030900-Csiiiyu-20240426055800"]}}-->
@Csiiiyu Well done! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:09, 29 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240429030900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":6,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240429030900-Csiiiyu-20240426055800","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Dear professor, I have completed the preliminary translation of the Chinese-English article. Next, I will search for more information to supplement this article.This is the sandbox link:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Kikolipu/sandboxKikolipu (talk) 07:26, 26 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240426072600","author":"Kikolipu","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Kikolipu-20240426072600-Translation_of_the_article-LI_PEIYU","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240429031300-Kikolipu-20240426072600"]}}-->
@Kikolipu It is a good start. But your sandbox is on English Wikipedia. You should copy it to Chinese Wikipedia - the code on English is not the same as on Chinese one. The sooner you start working in Chinese Wikipedia, the better. I will provide more feedback after you copy your article there. You'll likely need to redo all the hyperlinks after the move Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:13, 29 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240429031300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240429031300-Kikolipu-20240426072600","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Deadline 5 (week9): ZENG WANTING and ZHANG RUIQING
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Hello professor, Our group in Social and Everyday life have finished our English to Chinese translation project, this is my sandbox link, can we publish it? Please check it, thank you! Wantiin (talk) 09:46, 26 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240426094600","author":"Wantiin","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Wantiin-20240426094600-Deadline_5_(week9):_ZENG_WANTING_and_ZHANG_RUIQING","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240429031800-Wantiin-20240426094600"]}}-->
@Wantiin Your Chinese translation looks good. Remember to proofread your content to ensure that it reads well. When you have translated everything, for comments on the translation quality, you can ask Chinese editors for feedback on Discord or the Help forum. Or try this: zh:维基百科:同行评 . When you think your project is complete, you can publish it (move it to the main space) on Chinese Wikipedia.
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Dear Professor, here are the images I uploaded on Wikimedia Commons with the relevant tags and picture descriptions, I hope you can check if they are correct.Hope I can get extra points for this.Thanks for your patience! 1.241.68.131 (talk) 14:43, 26 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240426144300","author":"1.241.68.131","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-1.241.68.131-20240426144300-Wikimedia_Commons-_LIU_XINRUI","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240429032000-1.241.68.131-20240426144300"]}}-->
@유신예 Good job, it looks good - I just removed one unnecessary category. Another user already removed another one. Only the most specific category is needed. See File:Chengdu Zhong Dumpling(Zhong Jiaozi).jpg: Revision history - Wikimedia CommonsPiotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:20, 29 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240429032000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240429032000-1.241.68.131-20240426144300","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor, I'm ready for review This is the linkUser:Mcx8202229/sandbox andhttps://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Mcx8202229/%E6%B2%99%E7%9B%92Mcx8202229 (talk) 17:34, 26 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240426173400","author":"Mcx8202229","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Mcx8202229-20240426173400-Deadline_5_(Week_9)","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240429033100-Mcx8202229-20240426173400","c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240429033200-Mcx8202229-20240426173400"]}}-->
@Mcx8202229 Good job. Things to fix in your English article:
your article should have (in the lead and in the infobox) the name of the movie in Chinese. Compare your article to, for example, No More Bets or The Knockout (Chinese TV series)
File:3-2312251Q553329.png (image) will soon be deleted because it is not correctly licenced - there is no proof the image is free. You can upload such images to English Wikipedia, but not Wikimedia Commons, and you have to fill in the WP:FAIRUSE template. If you need help with that, stop by my office hours and I will show you how to do so.
Some references used are not reliable and should be replaced (3, 5-9). You can see this if you install the script we used in Collective Intelligence and Wikipedia class: User:Headbomb/unreliable . Please install it and check your references - red ones should be replaced.
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As for your Chinese translation, it looks good. Remember to proofread your content to ensure that it reads well. When you have translated everything, for comments on the translation quality, you can ask Chinese editors for feedback on Discord or the Help forum. Or try this: zh:维基百科:同行评 . When you think your project is complete, you can publish it (move it to the main space) on Chinese Wikipedia. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:32, 29 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240429033200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240429033200-Mcx8202229-20240426173400","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Good evening professor.Two translations of our group have been basically completed.
1. English to Chinese "Sexuality in South Korea" article has been posted to the Wikipedia page and will continue to add new references. Here is the link to the article.
2.Chinese to English“李克强之死”.The article is basically finished, here is the link to the sandbox.
I hope to receive your inspection and advice. Thanks for your patience! 유신예 (talk) 11:42, 27 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240427114200","author":"\uc720\uc2e0\uc608","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-\uc720\uc2e0\uc608-20240427114200-Deadline_5_(Week_9)-_LIU_XINRUI\u3001MU_QING","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240429034600-\uc720\uc2e0\uc608-20240427114200"]}}-->
@유신예 Your Chinese translation looks good. Remember to proofread your content to ensure that it reads well. For comments on the translation quality, you can ask Chinese editors for feedback on Discord or the Help forum. Or try this: zh:维基百科:同行评 .
Regarding your English project, good job, but there are still things to fix:
Please proofread everything, including the title, using a tool like Grammarly. The title is not correct (see different meanings of "pass").
There are also factual errors. For example, you write that "The "English Tiger News" reported, citing Weibo sources," - what is "English Tiger News"? You cite The Standard (Hong Kong). And it does not mention Weibo, but WeChat.
You will also need to format your references with missing metadata, including translated title (when citing Chinese sources, keep the Chinese title but add translated title in the dedicated citation field - ask me for help if you are not sure how to do it). Other missing metadata elements include information about publisher, dates and author information. For example, your reference 43 (""Hong Kong politicians recall that Li Keqiang is approachable and conscientious, Liang Zhenying posts condolences"") should also display the Chinese title ("港政界忆李克强平易近人做事尽责 梁振英发贴哀悼")
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Hello professor, I finished this week's Wikipedia editing assignment.Here's the link, please check it out, thank you very much. Jzhdylb (talk) 16:07, 27 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240427160700","author":"Jzhdylb","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Jzhdylb-20240427160700-Deadline_5:_Week_9_---FAN_XINRU","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240429034800-Jzhdylb-20240427160700"]}}-->
@Jzhdylb Good job citing academic sources. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:48, 29 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240429034800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240429034800-Jzhdylb-20240427160700","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Deadline 5(Week 9) - Everyday Life and Social Sturcture - MU QING
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Hello, professor. This is my final article for this class, an English-Chinese translation. It has been published in my sandbox, please check it.
Also, I've finished editing this week, please check it out.
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@Muqing112233 Good. Remember that at least 5 of the weekly edits should be in English Wikipedia.
As for your Chinese translation, it looks good. Remember to proofread your content to ensure that it reads well. When you have translated everything, for comments on the translation quality, you can ask Chinese editors for feedback on Discord or the Help forum. Or try this: zh:维基百科:同行评 . When you think your project is complete, you can publish it (move it to the main space) on Chinese Wikipedia. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:50, 29 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240429035000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240429035000-Muqing112233-20240427175500","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello, Professor. I am a student in the Collective Intelligence in Practice.
I have translated the English article <Pension policy in South Korea> into Chinese and have posted the translated Chinese article on Wikipedia. Please check it, thank you! Rachel.zrq (talk) Rachel.zrq (talk) 07:25, 28 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240428072500","author":"Rachel.zrq","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Rachel.zrq-20240428072500-Deadline_5_(Week_9)-ZHANG_RUIQING","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240429035100-Rachel.zrq-20240428072500"]}}-->
@Rachel.zrq Your Chinese translation looks good. Remember to proofread your content to ensure that it reads well. When you have translated everything, for comments on the translation quality, you can ask Chinese editors for feedback on Discord or the Help forum. Or try this: zh:维基百科:同行评 . Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:51, 29 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240429035100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240429035100-Rachel.zrq-20240428072500","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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I'll keep adding references if possible. Please check. Thank you Leeyj0401 (talk) 11:13, 28 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240428111300","author":"Leeyj0401","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Leeyj0401-20240428111300-Deadline_5_(Week_9)_-_Lee_Yunjoo","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240429035400-Leeyj0401-20240428111300"]}}-->
@Leeyj0401 Well done. The formatting looks good. I recommend you ask for feedback regarding translation quality from Korean speaking editors here: ko:위키백과:함께 검토하기 . If nobody replies for a few days, ask for feedback in Korean Discord server Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:54, 29 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240429035400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240429035400-Leeyj0401-20240428111300","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Good evening, Professor.
I am a student in both the Collective Intelligence in Practice and Introduction to Information Sociology courses.
Here's my Wikipedia edit assignment for this week, please check it out, thanks. CHENG SHIYI (talk) 14:59, 28 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240428145900","author":"CHENG SHIYI","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-CHENG_SHIYI-20240428145900-Weekly_wiki_edits-CHENG_SHIYI_4","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240429053600-CHENG_SHIYI-20240428145900"]}}-->
@CHENG SHIYI They are good. Keep up the good job! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:36, 29 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240429053600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240429053600-CHENG_SHIYI-20240428145900","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Hello,professor,I finished the translating of the three articles.please check it .Thank you!(User:등혜진/sandbox) I have you two classes. DENG HUICHEN (talk) 02:09, 29 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240429020900","author":"\ub4f1\ud61c\uc9c4","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-\ub4f1\ud61c\uc9c4-20240429020900-Deadline_5(Week_9)_DENG_HUICHEN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240429053900-\ub4f1\ud61c\uc9c4-20240429020900"],"displayName":"DENG HUICHEN"}}-->
@등혜진 I see, ko:한국의 영화 검열 and ko:다가오는 중국과의 갈등 look good. I recommend you ask for feedback regarding translation quality from Korean speaking editors here: ko:위키백과:함께 검토하기 . If nobody replies for a few days, ask for feedback in Korean Discord server
I cannot locate the third article - can you link it here? Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:39, 29 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240429053900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240429053900-\ub4f1\ud61c\uc9c4-20240429020900","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Deadline 3 (Week 4) - Sociology of Everyday Life - HAYOUNG KWON
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Hello professor, I'm Hayoung Kwon, the student of Sociology of Everyday Life. This week I am editing "Yellow Journalism" in the sandbox. This is my sandbox. And I also added references and hyperlinks. Please check it. Thank you. Hayoung1 (talk) 14:46, 24 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240324144600","author":"Hayoung1","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Hayoung1-20240324144600-Deadline_3_(Week_4)_-_Sociology_of_Everyday_Life_-_HAYOUNG_KWON","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240325032400-Hayoung1-20240324144600"]}}-->
@Hayoung1 Good start. You will need to fix some references - ask me during or after class for help and I'll show you how. Try to use ISBN for books to generate better citations instead of links to worldcat (for example, for Skull in the Ashes). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:24, 25 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240325032400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240325032400-Hayoung1-20240324144600","replies":["c-Hayoung1-20240401080800-Hanyangprofessor2-20240325032400"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I revised the quote number 9. Please check it. Thank you. Hayoung1 (talk) 08:08, 1 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240401080800","author":"Hayoung1","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Hayoung1-20240401080800-Hanyangprofessor2-20240325032400","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240401093000-Hayoung1-20240401080800"]}}-->
@Hayoung1 It is better. But I noticed that your sandbox is on English Wikipedia. You should copy it to Korean Wikipedia - the code on English is not the same as on Korean. The sooner you start working in Korean Wikipedia, the better. I will provide more feedback after you copy your article there. You'll likely need to redo all the hyperlinks after the move. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here09:30, 1 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240401093000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240401093000-Hayoung1-20240401080800","replies":["c-Hayoung1-20240410172500-Hanyangprofessor2-20240401093000"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I have corrected it here, please check it, thank you. Hayoung1 (talk) 17:25, 10 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240410172500","author":"Hayoung1","type":"comment","level":5,"id":"c-Hayoung1-20240410172500-Hanyangprofessor2-20240401093000","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240412080100-Hayoung1-20240410172500"]}}-->
@Hayoung1 Good, outline is accepted. Now try to add missing links and reference content. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:01, 12 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240412080100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":6,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240412080100-Hayoung1-20240410172500","replies":["c-Hayoung1-20240429044000-Hanyangprofessor2-20240412080100"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Before doing Deadline 5, I have 2 questions to ask.
Q1. May I know once again how to add missing links and reference?
Q2. I added the first 'Yellow Journalism' edit to my sandbox, and I was wondering where I should add the second 'New York Times' edit.
I'm sorry to bother you, and I'll be waiting for your answer. Thank you. Hayoung1 (talk) 04:40, 29 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240429044000","author":"Hayoung1","type":"comment","level":7,"id":"c-Hayoung1-20240429044000-Hanyangprofessor2-20240412080100","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240429054200-Hayoung1-20240429044000"]}}-->
@Hayoung1 Regarding 1), ask me in after class or during office hours and I'll demonstrate. Regarding 2), you can create a new sandbox. I can demonstrate. Or you can read the guide here: Wikipedia:About_the_sandbox#Creating_more_sandboxes_in_your_User_namespacePiotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:42, 29 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240429054200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":8,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240429054200-Hayoung1-20240429044000","replies":["c-Hayoung1-20240501144400-Hanyangprofessor2-20240429054200"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Thank you for your detailed answer. Thanks to you, my second edit is going on here. Regarding the first question, I will ask you in the next class. Thank you. Hayoung1 (talk) 14:44, 1 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240501144400","author":"Hayoung1","type":"comment","level":9,"id":"c-Hayoung1-20240501144400-Hanyangprofessor2-20240429054200","replies":[]}}-->
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Hello, We are a group of three people (Chaehyun Lee, SeoEun Kim, and NaKyung Kim). we are student in your course 'Everyday Life and Social Structure'. Since we were unable to attend your in-person class today, we uploaded it to blog. This is our plan for Project 2. Please check it out! Chaekyo (talk) 06:11, 29 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240429061100","author":"Chaekyo","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Chaekyo-20240429061100-Planning_for_project_2","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240502014800-Chaekyo-20240429061100"]}}-->
@Chaekyo A library in Suwon is an acceptable place. You can get extra credit by writing about the place on Wikipedia and uploading photos to Wikimedia Commons :) Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here01:48, 2 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240502014800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240502014800-Chaekyo-20240429061100","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello, professor. Translating the topic was a difficult process. However, I enjoyed the process of learning about topic I didn't know anything about. Studying the proto-globalization helped me a lot academically.
I will upload one more topic soon!
If there are any problems, please point them out. I will edit it. Thanks.
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@Choisieon Well done. Double check references - there is one minor error. If you don't know how to fix it, ask me during office hours or in class. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here01:56, 2 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240502015600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240502015600-Choisieon-20240429072400","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Hello professor, I am a student of Collective Intelligence in Practice: Understanding Wikipedia . This is my translation assignment 1 and translation assignment 2. I have roughly completed the translation. Please check it. Thank you for your time. WANGYIFAN2024 (talk) 08:17, 29 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240429081700","author":"WANGYIFAN2024","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-WANGYIFAN2024-20240429081700-Deadline_5_(Week_9)_WANG_YIFAN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240502020400-WANGYIFAN2024-20240429081700"]}}-->
@WANGYIFAN2024 Your Chinese translatio looks good. Remember to proofread your content to ensure that it reads well. When you have translated everything, for comments on the translation quality, you can ask Chinese editors for feedback on Discord or the Help forum. Or try this: zh:维基百科:同行评 . When you think your project is complete, you can publish it (move it to the main space) on Chinese Wikipedia. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:04, 2 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240502020400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240502020400-WANGYIFAN2024-20240429081700","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Hello professor, we are students of Everyday Life and Social Structure. This is our assignment 1 and assignment 2. we have roughly completed the translation. Please check it. Thank you for your time.😊 WANGYIFAN2024 (talk) 08:22, 29 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240429082200","author":"WANGYIFAN2024","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-WANGYIFAN2024-20240429082200-Deadline_5_(Week_9)_WANG_YIFAN&HUANG_LINXUAN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240502021400-WANGYIFAN2024-20240429082200"]}}-->
@WANGYIFAN2024 Good. Regarding your Chinese project, note that a merge has been suggested - you may want to comment on that.
Regarding your English project, it reads well. When citing assessments like "As a successful example of Chinese dialect research, it has enriched" you can add attribution to the author or authors (ex. "According to professor Jon Smith from University of Washington", etc.).
For extra credit and review, you can try to nominate your work for front page exposure (see WP:DYK). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:14, 2 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240502021400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240502021400-WANGYIFAN2024-20240429082200","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello professor, I am a student of Collective Intelligence in practice: Understanding Wikipedia. This is my main project. I'm almost done writing this article. Please check it. Thank you! Ckdduq0919 (talk) 10:55, 29 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240429105500","author":"Ckdduq0919","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Ckdduq0919-20240429105500-Deadline_5_(Week_9)_Changyeop_Jung","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240502022000-Ckdduq0919-20240429105500"]}}-->
@Ckdduq0919 Good, but some content is unreferenced. Please add references for those parts. Only content that is referenced and verifiable counts for our class project (see also Wikipedia rules: Wikipedia:Verifiability).
Another minor issue to fix: your Korean language references should be accompanied by a title in English (use 'translated title' parameter in the citation table). If you are not sure how to do this, ask me in class or during office hours and I'll show you. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:20, 2 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240502022000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240502022000-Ckdduq0919-20240429105500","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello professor, I am a student of Everyday Life and Collective Intelligence. This is my translation hangzhou daily and translation 中国对日本文化的影响. I have roughly completed the translation. Please check it. Thank you for your time.I have another article, and once I finish uploading these two articles, I will start translating the third one. ZHANGQI1066 (talk) 11:05, 29 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240429110500","author":"ZHANGQI1066","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-ZHANGQI1066-20240429110500-Deadline_5_(Week_9)ZHANGQI","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240502022900-ZHANGQI1066-20240429110500"]}}-->
@ZHANGQI1066 Your Chinese translation looks good. One thing to fix: If a topic exists in English but not Chinese, please link it using this tool: Template:Interlanguage link (see zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi). Remember to proofread your content to ensure that it reads well. When you have translated everything, for comments on the translation quality, you can ask Chinese editors for feedback on Discord or the Help forum. Or try this: zh:维基百科:同行评 . When you think your project is complete, you can publish it (move it to the main space) on Chinese Wikipedia.
Regarding the English translation, I do not understand the meaning of the sentence "The comprehensive strength of this newspaper ranks among the top in the national vice provincial city party committee organ newspapers". New Media section needs references. Once you have added the references, please merge your content (copy and integrate) into the existing article on Hangzhou Daily. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:29, 2 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240502022900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240502022900-ZHANGQI1066-20240429110500","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Deadline5(Week9) - Sociology of Everyday Life - CHENG SIYU
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Hello professor. I'm CHENG SIYU, the student of Sociology of Everyday Life.
Let me report to you about my sandbox editing. Currently two of my articles are translated and ready for review. They are at 1 and 2 respectively. At the same time I posted a comment in "Wikipedia:Peer Review" to let other editors correct my problem. I will check and modify it in time. Please check.
Have a nice week. Csiiiyu (talk) 13:38, 29 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240429133800","author":"Csiiiyu","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Csiiiyu-20240429133800-Deadline5(Week9)_-_Sociology_of_Everyday_Life_-_CHENG_SIYU","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240502025400-Csiiiyu-20240429133800"]}}-->
@Csiiiyu Very good. Please let me know in a week or so whether you have gotten any reviews; if the are none I'll ask some people to prioritize your request. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:54, 2 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240502025400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240502025400-Csiiiyu-20240429133800","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Classroom (Week8)Sociology of Everyday Life - CHENG SIYU
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Hello professor. I'm CHENG SIYU, the student of Sociology of Everyday Life.
I'm sorry that I didn't attend the class last Friday because I wasn't feeling well. So regarding the classroom issues at that time, I drew pictures and published them on my blog. Wish I could get extra points. Please check. Thanks. Csiiiyu (talk) 11:44, 30 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240430114400","author":"Csiiiyu","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Csiiiyu-20240430114400-Classroom_(Week8)Sociology_of_Everyday_Life_-_CHENG_SIYU","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240502025500-Csiiiyu-20240430114400"]}}-->
@Csiiiyu Ok, I will award an extra point for that, good job. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:55, 2 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240502025500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240502025500-Csiiiyu-20240430114400","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Good evening, Professor.
I am a student in both the Collective Intelligence in Practice and Introduction to Information Sociology courses.
I completed the task of translating the English-to-Chinese article.Here is my sandbox, please check it out.Ask the professor to check and if there are no problems, I will post it to Wikipedia Shuo1103 (talk) 16:12, 30 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240430161200","author":"Shuo1103","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Shuo1103-20240430161200-Translation_of_the_article-ZHANGMINGSHUO","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240502025600-Shuo1103-20240430161200"]}}-->
@Shuo1103 Your Chinese translation looks good. One thing to fix: If a topic exists in English but not Chinese, please link it using this tool: Template:Interlanguage link (see zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi). Remember to proofread your content to ensure that it reads well. When you have translated everything, for comments on the translation quality, you can ask Chinese editors for feedback on Discord or the Help forum. Or try this: zh:维基百科:同行评 . When you think your project is complete, you can publish it (move it to the main space) on Chinese Wikipedia. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:56, 2 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240502025600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240502025600-Shuo1103-20240430161200","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Good evening, Professor.
I am a student in both the Collective Intelligence in Practice and Introduction to Information Sociology courses.
Here's my Wikipedia edit assignment for this week, please check it out, thanks. Shuo1103 (talk) 16:32, 30 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240430163200","author":"Shuo1103","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Shuo1103-20240430163200-Weekly_wiki_edits-ZHANGMINGSHUO","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240502025700-Shuo1103-20240430163200"]}}-->
@Shuo1103 Please see the message on your talk page regarding your edits. Remember that only referenced content is allowed on Wikipedia (see Wikipedia:Verifiability) and only such content counts for our class' credit. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:57, 2 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240502025700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240502025700-Shuo1103-20240430163200","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Please check, Thanks. Hkm5420 (talk) 04:09, 1 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240501040900","author":"Hkm5420","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Hkm5420-20240501040900-Deadline_5_(Week_9)_HongGyeongmin","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240502025900-Hkm5420-20240501040900"]}}-->
@Hkm5420 Good. Regarding your Korean translations, try asking Korean editors for feedback on Discord or the Help forum. You can also ask here: ko:위키백과:함께 검토하기 . Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:59, 2 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240502025900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240502025900-Hkm5420-20240501040900","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Hello professor,I am a student in the Collective Intelligence in Practice,Sociology of Everyday Life aka Everyday Life and Social Structure and Introduction to Information Sociology courses. I've completed my weekly wiki edits assignment for April, which you can check out here, please check it out, thanks. Rachel.zrq (talk) Rachel.zrq (talk) 06:42, 1 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240501064200","author":"Rachel.zrq","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Rachel.zrq-20240501064200-Weekly_wiki_edits-ZHANG_RUIQING","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240502030000-Rachel.zrq-20240501064200"]}}-->
@Rachel.zrq Well done Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:00, 2 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240502030000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240502030000-Rachel.zrq-20240501064200","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello, professor. I'm LI LINLIN,taking 'Everyday Life and Social Structure' and
'Understanding Wikipedia'.
I have completed the translation of all the articles for the two courses. In addition to the two articles reported to you in Week 5, here are the other two articles, which you can check here (trs Women in South Korea into zh)and here (trs Women's history into zh).
Hope u have a nice day :) Leeinm (talk) 12:14, 1 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240501121400","author":"Leeinm","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Leeinm-20240501121400-Deadline_5(Week_9)-LI_LINLIN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240502030500-Leeinm-20240501121400"]}}-->
@Leeinm Regarding your Chinese translation, it looks fine. When you have translated everything, for comments on the translation quality, you can ask Chinese editors for feedback on Discord or the Help forum. Or try this: zh:维基百科:同行评 . When you think your project is complete, you can publish it (move it to the main space) on Chinese Wikipedia. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:05, 2 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240502030500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240502030500-Leeinm-20240501121400","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I am a student in both the Collective Intelligence in Practice and Introduction to Information Sociology courses.
I have finished the English to Chinese translation of Organic food culture, here is my sandbox,Please check that. If there is no problem, I will post the article.
If there are any problems, please let me know and I will make the changes right away, thank you. CHENG SHIYI (talk) 15:33, 1 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240501153300","author":"CHENG SHIYI","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-CHENG_SHIYI-20240501153300-Deadline_5_(Week_9)\u2014CHENG_SHIYI","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240502030600-CHENG_SHIYI-20240501153300"]}}-->
@CHENG SHIYI Regarding your Chinese translation, it looks fine. When you have translated everything, for comments on the translation quality, you can ask Chinese editors for feedback on Discord or the Help forum. Or try this: zh:维基百科:同行评 . When you think your project is complete, you can publish it (move it to the main space) on Chinese Wikipedia. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:06, 2 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240502030600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240502030600-CHENG_SHIYI-20240501153300","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Good evening, Professor.
I am a student in both the Collective Intelligence in Practice and Introduction to Information Sociology courses.
Here's my Wikipedia edit assignment for this week, please check it out, thanks. CHENG SHIYI (talk) 18:11, 1 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240501181100","author":"CHENG SHIYI","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-CHENG_SHIYI-20240501181100-Weekly_wiki_edits\u2014CHENG_SHIYI","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240502030700-CHENG_SHIYI-20240501181100"]}}-->
@CHENG SHIYI Well done adding references and related content. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:07, 2 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240502030700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240502030700-CHENG_SHIYI-20240501181100","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello, professor. I'm Lee jiyoon, in the 'Collective Intelligence in Practice' class.
I've finished translating the two articles assigned to me.
here is my sandboxJiyoon Leee (talk) 23:42, 1 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240501234200","author":"Jiyoon Leee","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Jiyoon_Leee-20240501234200-Deadline_5(Week_9)-Lee_jiyoon","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240502030800-Jiyoon_Leee-20240501234200"]}}-->
@Jiyoon Leee Very good. If you need help with formatting or if you want feedback on your prose, I recommend you ask for feedback from Korean speaking editors here: ko:위키백과:함께 검토하기 . If nobody replies for a few days, ask for feedback in Korean Wikipedia Discord server. After addressing the feedback, you can publish your articles. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:08, 2 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240502030800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240502030800-Jiyoon_Leee-20240501234200","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello Professor!I am a student in both the Collective Intelligence in Practice and Introduction to Information Sociology courses.This is a change I made on Wikipedia this week, I fixed a lot of errors in the color of the links, please check, and some links still show purple instead of blue, please give a little suggestion thank you for a nice day! Hkiho (talk) 09:24, 31 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240331092400","author":"Hkiho","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Hkiho-20240331092400-Weekly_editing_-HUANGQIHAO_2","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240401104800-Hkiho-20240331092400"]}}-->
@Hkiho Good job. But when you add content to Wikipedia, like you did here, make sure it is referenced. All content we add needs references, see Wikipedia:Verifiability - otherwise it can be removed and will not count for course credit. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here10:48, 1 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240401104800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240401104800-Hkiho-20240331092400","replies":["c-Hkiho-20240502170600-Hanyangprofessor2-20240401104800"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello professor, as you said, this student translated without approval, but I have already completed most of the translations. I don't want to make me choose other articles because of her mistake, other Chinese articles that meet the requirements are difficult to find, but in order to be fair, I will not plagiarize her article, so I choose to find a new article. Because the time to re-translate the new article is urgent, if there is any mistake, please help me correct it. I wish you a good day! Hkiho (talk) 17:06, 2 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240502170600","author":"Hkiho","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Hkiho-20240502170600-Hanyangprofessor2-20240401104800","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240503035600-Hkiho-20240502170600"]}}-->
@Hkiho The topic is ok, but right now your draft is not close to the standards that are required for publication on English Wikipedia. It is primarily a plot summary with no information about the importance of the work; it is also not referenced. Remember that content added to English Wikipedia (and credited for our course) has to be referenced (as I mentioned above). For articles about movies or other works of arts, we need to provide information about awards and reception. Please see formatting and sections at Meteor Shower (TV series) or other entries in (for example) Category:2009 Chinese television series debuts, paying special attention to section(s) on "Reception".
Please also review Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Film, with special attention to "Critical reception" and the policy on importance (Wikipedia:Notability (films)) - right now nothing in your draft suggest the chosen production is important enough to warrant an entry in Wikipedia (for that, you need to include the said section on Reception, with reviews by reliable critics - in newspapers, magazines, or such, not social media) Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:56, 3 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240503035600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240503035600-Hkiho-20240502170600","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Dear professor
I am a student in both the Collective Intelligence in Practice . I have completed the Chinese translation of this article on Chinese Wikipedia,I will search for more information to supplement this article.This is the sandbox link:https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Kikolipu/%E6%B2%99%E7%9B%92
I finished this week's Wikipedia editing assignment.Here's the link:
I hope to receive your inspection and advice. Thanks for your patience!~~~ Kikolipu ( talk ) 2024 年 5 月 1 日 08:25 (UTC)
Dear student (User:Kikolipu). Please communicate using English. Thank you, --Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:01, 2 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240502030100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240502030100-Weekly_wiki_editors-LI_PEIYU","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240503040100-Hanyangprofessor2-20240502030100"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
@Kikolipu Thank you for translating your message. In the future, pleae also WP:SIGN your messages correctly.
Regarding your Chinese translation, when you have translated everything, for comments on the translation quality, you can ask Chinese editors for feedback on Discord or the Help forum. Or try this: zh:维基百科:同行评 . When you think your project is complete, you can publish it (move it to the main space) on Chinese Wikipedia.
Regarding your edits here, they look good but you should add references. See Wikipedia:Verifiability or in Chinese, zh:维基百科:可供查證Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:01, 3 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240503040100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240503040100-Hanyangprofessor2-20240502030100","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello, professor.
I'm JIA MENGZHUO, in the 'Collective Intelligence in Practice' class.
I have finished the translation of Chinese Academy of Cultural Heritage, here is my sandbox, please check.Zhuo1221 (talk) 09:11, 2 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240502091100","author":"Zhuo1221","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Zhuo1221-20240502091100-Deadline_5(Week_9)---JIA_MENGZHUO","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240503073900-Zhuo1221-20240502091100"]}}-->
@Zhuo1221 Well done, your article looks good. After you proofread everything (I recommend a tool like Grammarly) please publish it.
PS. There are few minor things to fix. Please format the references so that they have all metadata: first and late name, date, publisher, title (in English as well as Chinese). You will also need to add more blue links to other Wikipedia articles. If a topic exists in Chinese but not English, please link it using this tool: Template:Interlanguage link . There is no need to include French name in English. In the infobox, change China Academy to Chinese Academy. In the lead, the name of the organization is repeated twice (after the French name). Once is enough. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:39, 3 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240503073900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240503073900-Zhuo1221-20240502091100","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello, professor.
I'm ZHANG LINYUE, in the 'Collective Intelligence in Practice' class.
I have finished the translation of Classical Chinese poetry,here is my sandbox,please check it.Thankyou!AYAO32269 (talk) 09:35, 2 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240502093500","author":"AYAO32269","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-AYAO32269-20240502093500-Deadline_5(Week_9)---ZHANG_LINYUE","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240503074900-AYAO32269-20240502093500"]}}-->
@AYAO32269 Your Chinese translation looks good. One thing to fix: If a topic exists in English but not Chinese, please link it using this tool: Template:Interlanguage link (see zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi). Remember to proofread your content to ensure that it reads well. When you have translated everything, for comments on the translation quality, you can ask Chinese editors for feedback on Discord or the Help forum. Or try this: zh:维基百科:同行评 . When you think your project is complete, you can publish it (move it to the main space) on Chinese Wikipedia. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:49, 3 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240503074900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240503074900-AYAO32269-20240502093500","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Hello, professor.
I'm JIA MENGZHUO, in the 'Collective Intelligence in Practice' class.
I have completed 70 additional edits to wikivoyage, please check them out.Zhuo1221 (talk) 10:20, 2 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240502102000","author":"Zhuo1221","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Zhuo1221-20240502102000-Weekly_wiki_edits---JIA_MENGZHUO","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240503075500-Zhuo1221-20240502102000"]}}-->
@Zhuo1221 I see. It is good you are editing Wikivoyage - I see you have received some feedback on your talk page. I'll also add that you should try to add information (listings) of things that tourists may want to see (museums, parks, monuments) rather than listing for hotels, which are not as useful and therefore will not receive as much credit as a well written entry on a museum or such would generate.
Nice job adding useful information here. I would recommend adding some see and do listings there. Why should tourists visit that location? Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:55, 3 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240503075500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240503075500-Zhuo1221-20240502102000","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hi professor as you suggested before I made an article of the book Postwar World written by V. Tihanov also known as Pak Noja who is very famous russian-korean scholar in south korea and professor of the University of Oslo. It is about Ukraine War and critcism to Leftist who sympathize Putin. I think you would be interested in my article so I leave the message. Thank you! Shinseongmin1917 (talk) 13:25, 2 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240502132500","author":"Shinseongmin1917","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Shinseongmin1917-20240502132500-Wiki_edits","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240503081600-Shinseongmin1917-20240502132500"]}}-->
@Shinseongmin1917 Excellent job, as we discussed in the class. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:16, 3 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240503081600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240503081600-Shinseongmin1917-20240502132500","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello professor, this is a famous Chinese tokusatsu TV series I have chosen. Please correct any grammatical mistakes. Thank you! Hkiho (talk) 17:09, 2 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240502170900","author":"Hkiho","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Hkiho-20240502170900-Deadline_5(Week_9)---HUANGQIHAO","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240503081700-Hkiho-20240502170900"]}}-->
@Hkiho Good, I've provided feedback to you above at #Deadline3(week4)HUANGQIHAOPiotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:17, 3 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240503081700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240503081700-Hkiho-20240502170900","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello Professor, I have almost finished translating the article "中国史前文化" (Chinese to English:Prehistory of China).
Please check it. I would be grateful if you could give me suggestions or correct any mistakes. Zhongxxin (talk) 18:06, 2 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240502180600","author":"Zhongxxin","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Zhongxxin-20240502180600-Deadline_5(Week_9)\u2014ZHONG_XIN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240503083700-Zhongxxin-20240502180600","c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240503083900-Zhongxxin-20240502180600"]}}-->
@Zhongxxin Well done, your article looks ready to be published. I recommend you do so, and nominate your work at Wikipedia:Did you know for Main Page exposure and extra credit (please monitor the review there). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:37, 3 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240503083700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240503083700-Zhongxxin-20240502180600","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
PS. For main article, please use {{main}} - see how I fixed the code here. Do not use html small code tags, they are not used on Wikipedia. All text should be regular size. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:39, 3 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240503083900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240503083900-Zhongxxin-20240502180600","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Hello, professor.
I'm JIA MENGZHUO, in the 'Collective Intelligence in Practice' class.
I have completed 10 ditional edits to wikivoyage,please checkZhuo1221 (talk) 05:25, 3 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240503052500","author":"Zhuo1221","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Zhuo1221-20240503052500-Weekly_wiki_edits---JIA_MENGZHUO_2","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240503084000-Zhuo1221-20240503052500"]}}-->
@Zhuo1221 Ok - see my feedback above at #Weekly wiki edits---JIA MENGZHUOPiotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:40, 3 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240503084000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240503084000-Zhuo1221-20240503052500","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Deadline 5 (week 9 ) Kim minjun - Collective Intelligence
KMJ0521 (talk) 06:46, 3 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240503064600","author":"KMJ0521","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-KMJ0521-20240503064600-Deadline_5_(week_9_)_Kim_minjun_-_Collective_Intelligence","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240503085400-KMJ0521-20240503064600","c-LR0725-20240503085700-KMJ0521-20240503064600"]}}-->
@KMJ0521 Good. Please review why one of your articles was declined for publication (now at ko:초안:러시아의 우크라이나 침공에 대한 허위 정보). It seems an experienced Korean volunteer has concerns about quality of your translation: LR0725talkcontribs러시아의 우크라이나 침공에 대한 허위 정보 문서를 넘겨주기를 만들지 않고 초안:러시아의 우크라이나 침공에 대한 허위 정보 문서로 이동했습니다: 번역 . Please contact them on their talk page at ko:사용자토론:LR0725 and ask them for clarification if needed, improve the quality of your translation, and when they accept your work, publish it again and let me know. (Friendly ping to @LR0725) Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:54, 3 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240503085400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240503085400-KMJ0521-20240503064600","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
@KMJ0521: Please, don't use content-tranlsation tool if you are not familiar with tool. Actually, former page also has so many grammatical errors that it could be moved to draft page. Please proofread your pages one more time. LR0725 [ Talk | Contribs ]08:57, 3 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240503085700","author":"LR0725","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-LR0725-20240503085700-KMJ0521-20240503064600","replies":[]}}-->
Hello Professor, we are students in the course Collective Intelligence and Wikipedia. @Hkihoand I wanted to form the same team to complete the task of translating the article assigned by the professorWe are going to translate the article Russian fashion from English to Chinese, and the article 2024年河北邯郸初中生杀人埋尸案 from Chinese to English, please check if we are feasible, look forward to your reply, if approved I will be grateful, and start the translation work as soon as possible. Redyeoni (talk) 09:19, 23 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240323091900","author":"Redyeoni","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Redyeoni-20240323091900-Deadline_2(Week_3)_\uff1aHONGJIARAN\uff0cHUANGQIHAO","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240324062600-Redyeoni-20240323091900"]}}-->
@Redyeoni Good - approved! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here06:26, 24 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240324062600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240324062600-Redyeoni-20240323091900","replies":["c-TheLonelyPather-20240503202600-Hanyangprofessor2-20240324062600"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
zh:2024年河北邯郸初中生杀人埋尸案 is not available on Chinese Wikipedia? It was deleted on 1 April 2024. Cheers, --The Lonely Pather (talk) 20:26, 3 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240503202600","author":"TheLonelyPather","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-TheLonelyPather-20240503202600-Hanyangprofessor2-20240324062600","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240505021200-TheLonelyPather-20240503202600"],"displayName":"The Lonely Pather"}}-->
@TheLonelyPather The redirects are messed up after some moves and pointless (IMHO) deletions of said redirects, but the article I believe is here now: zh:邯郸初中生杀人案Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:12, 5 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240505021200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240505021200-TheLonelyPather-20240503202600","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello, Professor. I finished translating my project. This is my sandbox, please check it.In the course of my project, I found that a lot of content is not available in Chinese Wikipedia, so I used hyperlinks from English Wikipedia. And I didn't translate it completely, because I think his description is very strange, so I searched for content from other related Wikipedia and translated it instead of the original content, I don't know if it's OK. Please let me know if there is any problem, I am looking forward to your guidance, thank you, Professor. HYH031277777 (talk) 14:10, 4 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240504141000","author":"HYH031277777","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-HYH031277777-20240504141000-Deadline_5_(week_9_)_HUANG_YANHAN-_Collective_Intelligence","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240505022600-HYH031277777-20240504141000"]}}-->
Also, remember that content we add (including translations) should be referenced (see zh:维基百科:可供查證).
Regarding the quality of your translation, when you think you are ready, you can also ask Chinese editors for feedback on Discord or the Help forum. Or try this: zh:维基百科:同行评审 .
After addressing feedback, if any, you can publish your article. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:26, 5 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240505022600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240505022600-HYH031277777-20240504141000","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello, professor. I'm XUE DONGXIN, in the 'Collective Intelligence in Practice' class. I completed my task of translating my Wikipedia article.This is my article Ming Dynasty Zheng family, please check it.Thank you so much. Donghem (talk) 13:15, 2 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240502131500","author":"Donghem","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Donghem-20240502131500-Deadline_5(Week_9)---XUE_DONGXIN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240503081600-Donghem-20240502131500"]}}-->
@Donghem Your translation is a good start, but please use tools like Grammarly and AI to proofread it. There are many incomplete sentences, starting with the first sentence in lead, which ends in a comma, and the last in the lead, which is clearly missing a verb, if not more. There are some very awkward translations like "The extent to which he covered the sky with one hand can..." which do not make sense in English.
You should also double check the links from Chinese Wikipedia. Some have articles in English, such as the "Zheng Chenggong's family" which should link to House of Koxinga . If a topic exists in Chinese but not English, please link it using this tool: Template:Interlanguage link
Some of the references you use have incomplete metadata, or content only in Chinese. Please add missing metadata (author's names, titles, dates, etc.). If a title is in Chinese, please accompany it with an English title using the 'translated title' parameter in metadata. If you don't know how to do this, ask me in class or during my office hours. In other cases, you translated a title of a reference without leaving the Chinese original, ex. "Information on Zheng Chenggong's Activities in Chaozhou" - there is no such work. Please use both English and Chinese titles. If it is a book, it should have an ISBN number.
Finally, remember that only referenced content is allowed on Wikipedia. Some of the content you added is not referenced - please add references to it. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:16, 3 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240503081600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240503081600-Donghem-20240502131500","replies":["c-Donghem-20240506051100-Hanyangprofessor2-20240503081600"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
OK, I will correct it. Thank you so much. Donghem (talk) 05:11, 6 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240506051100","author":"Donghem","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Donghem-20240506051100-Hanyangprofessor2-20240503081600","replies":[]}}-->
Hello, professor. I'm Lee Yunjoo, in the 'Collective Intelligence in Practice' class.
I reviewed a 'Dune: Part 2' article by a Hkm5420 student, and left a small suggestion on his talk page.
Thank you. Leeyj0401 (talk) 07:29, 5 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240505072900","author":"Leeyj0401","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Leeyj0401-20240505072900-Deadline_6_(week_10)","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240506064300-Leeyj0401-20240505072900"]}}-->
@Leeyj0401 Good - I hope you will get feedback that is at least as helpful as the one you left. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here06:43, 6 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240506064300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240506064300-Leeyj0401-20240505072900","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Good afternoon Professor,
I am a student participating in the Collective Intelligence in Practice courses.
I have translated the English version of Health in North Korea into Chinese. Here is my sandbox, please check it.
Wishing you a pleasant weekend. 왕예화 (talk) 08:09, 5 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240505080900","author":"\uc655\uc608\ud654","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-\uc655\uc608\ud654-20240505080900-Deadline_5(Week_9)_\u2014_WANG_YIHUA","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240508013700-\uc655\uc608\ud654-20240505080900"]}}-->
@왕예화 The formatting looks good.. For feedback on quality fo the translation, you can ask Chinese editors for feedback on Discord or the Help forum. Or try this: zh:维基百科:同行评审 When you think you are read (when you have gotten the feedback, if any) you can publish your article (move it to mainspace). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here01:37, 8 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240508013700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240508013700-\uc655\uc608\ud654-20240505080900","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Thank you. Soongki (talk) 13:40, 5 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240505134000","author":"Soongki","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Soongki-20240505134000-Deadline5(week9)_:_Soongki_Kim","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240508051400-Soongki-20240505134000"]}}-->
@Soongki Well done, you are close to finishing. One of your articles has an untranslated quotation that needs to be translated to Korean. In addition, If a topic exists in English but not Korean, please link it using this tool: Template:Interlanguage link (ko:틀:임시링크) - if you do not know how to use it, ask me for help during class or office hours and I will demonstrate.
If you need help with formatting or if you want feedback on your prose, I recommend you ask for feedback from Korean speaking editors here: ko:위키백과:함께 검토하기 . If nobody replies for a few days, ask for feedback in Korean Wikipedia Discord server.
After resolving feedback from Korean reviewers, if any, you can move your work the mainspace (publish it). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:14, 8 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240508051400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240508051400-Soongki-20240505134000","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Hello Professor, I have completed over forty edits to Wikipedia (week 8 + week 9), please check:[19]
I would be grateful if you could give me some suggestions. Zhongxxin (talk) 17:56, 5 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240505175600","author":"Zhongxxin","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Zhongxxin-20240505175600-Weekly_wiki_edits-ZHONG_XIN_5","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240508052100-Zhongxxin-20240505175600"]}}-->
@Zhongxxin Good job, the edits look fine! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:21, 8 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240508052100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240508052100-Zhongxxin-20240505175600","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Deadline 5 (Week 9) - Sociology of Everyday Life - HAYOUNG KWON
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Hello Professor, I have finished the first Wikipedia edit here, and the second Wikipedia edit is going on here. Please check it out. Thank you. Hayoung1 (talk) 16:12, 6 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240506161200","author":"Hayoung1","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Hayoung1-20240506161200-Deadline_5_(Week_9)_-_Sociology_of_Everyday_Life_-_HAYOUNG_KWON","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240509024300-Hayoung1-20240506161200"]}}-->
@Hayoung1 I see. I think your translations need more blue links, preferably to Korean Wikipedia articles, but you can also link English ones like this: If a topic exists in English but not Korean, please link it using this tool: Template:Interlanguage link (ko:틀:임시링크)
I also think that Korean Wikipedia translates names of people and organizations to Korean, instead of leaving them in Latin characters. If you need help with formatting or if you want feedback on your prose and translation, I recommend you ask for feedback from Korean speaking editors here: ko:위키백과:함께 검토하기 . If nobody replies for a few days, ask for feedback in Korean Wikipedia Discord server. Once you address said feedback, if any, you can publish your articles in the mainspace. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:43, 9 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240509024300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240509024300-Hayoung1-20240506161200","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Hello, professor. I'm Hong Gyeongmin, taking 'Collective Intelligence in Practice' class.
I reviewed a <Global North and Global South> article by a @Leeyj0401, and left a suggestion on her talk page. Thank you Hkm5420 (talk) 02:34, 7 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240507023400","author":"Hkm5420","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Hkm5420-20240507023400-Deadline_6(Week10)_-_Hong_Gyeongmin","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240509024900-Hkm5420-20240507023400"]}}-->
@Hkm5420 Good - I hope you will get feedback that is at least as helpful as the one you left. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:49, 9 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240509024900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240509024900-Hkm5420-20240507023400","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello professor, we are students of Collective Intelligence and Wikipedia.you have not yet reviewed the report on Week 9 for me and my team members.please check. Thanks☺️.Hhhlx (talk) 05:36, 7 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240507053600","author":"Hhhlx","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Hhhlx-20240507053600-Deadlines_(Week9)_HUANG_LINGXUAN&LIU_YUNXIANG","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240509030300-Hhhlx-20240507053600"]}}-->
@Hhhlx You are correct. I have left you feedback there - you can check it now. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:03, 9 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240509030300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240509030300-Hhhlx-20240507053600","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Comment tasks and English Wikipedia edited——HUANG LINGXUAN
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Hello professor, I have completed the comment task and edited 115 edits on the English Wikipedia. Please check it out.Thank you😊. Hhhlx (talk) 06:25, 7 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240507062500","author":"Hhhlx","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Hhhlx-20240507062500-Comment_tasks_and_English_Wikipedia_edited\u2014\u2014HUANG_LINGXUAN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240509044800-Hhhlx-20240507062500"]}}-->
@Hhhlx Good - I hope you will get feedback that is at least as helpful as the one you left.
As for our weekly edits, please remember that the edits on your main project (here, Chinese clothing) do not count. Neither do edits such as leaving me messages, outside the very first weeks. Please see the syllabus for the details. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:48, 9 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240509044800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240509044800-Hhhlx-20240507062500","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Professor, This is an article that you couldn't check because there was a problem with the upload before. Now, I uploaded my article through translation correction, please check it.
@KMJ0521 Well done, it looks good. If you feedback on your prose and translation, I recommend you ask for feedback from Korean speaking editors here: ko:위키백과:함께 검토하기 . If nobody replies for a few days, ask for feedback in Korean Wikipedia Discord server. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:02, 9 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240509070200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240509070200-KMJ0521-20240507102800","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Hello, professor. I'm Lee jiyoon, in the 'Collective Intelligence in Practice' class.
I reviewed a 'Wonka (film)' article by a Hkm5420 student, and left a small suggestion on her talk page.
@Jiyoon Leee Good - I hope you will get feedback that is at least as helpful as the one you left. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:03, 9 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240509070300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240509070300-Jiyoon_Leee-20240507102800","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear professor, I have reviewed the article "Ming Dynasty Zheng Family" by Donghem and left feedback. Please take a look, professor.Thak you! Yangpeifu (talk) 13:25, 8 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240508132500","author":"Yangpeifu","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Yangpeifu-20240508132500-Deadline_6(Week10)_YANGPEIFU","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240509070300-Yangpeifu-20240508132500"]}}-->
@Yangpeifu Good - I hope you will get feedback that is at least as helpful as the one you left. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:03, 9 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240509070300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240509070300-Yangpeifu-20240508132500","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello, Professor, I have reviewed another student's article: User:Bai0926/User:Bai0926 fashion in China .I left my suggestion, you can check it, thank you. WSH0927 (talk) 05:47, 9 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240509054700","author":"WSH0927","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-WSH0927-20240509054700-Deadline_6(Week10)_WU_SHUHAN\uff08Collective_intelligence\uff09","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240509070400-WSH0927-20240509054700"]}}-->
@WSH0927 Good - I hope you will get feedback that is at least as helpful as the one you left. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:04, 9 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240509070400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240509070400-WSH0927-20240509054700","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I did the English to Chinese translation. Check, please. My team members did the translation from Chinese to English. Check, please.
Thanks for checking. We will make changes to your suggestions. Thank you for your hard work, Professor Lihaochang678 (talk) 05:34, 3 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240503053400","author":"Lihaochang678","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Lihaochang678-20240503053400-Deadline_5_(Week_9)LIHAOCHANG_HANYUANYUAN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240503085000-Lihaochang678-20240503053400"]}}-->
@Lihaochang678 Your Chinese translation looks good. One thing to fix: If a topic exists in English but not Chinese, please link it using this tool: Template:Interlanguage link (see zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi). Remember to proofread your content to ensure that it reads well. When you have translated everything, for comments on the translation quality, you can ask Chinese editors for feedback on Discord or the Help forum. Or try this: zh:维基百科:同行评 . When you think your project is complete, you can publish it (move it to the main space) on Chinese Wikipedia.
Regarding the English article, it shows good progress. Try to add more blue links - for example to Yellow River or Queshan County or State Council of the People's Republic of China. Some content in your article is unreferenced and will need to be referenced. For example, the first and third paragraphs in 'Origin' are missing references. Please format the references so that they have all metadata: first and late name, date, publisher, title (in English as well as Chinese).
References 3, 5 and 6 are to low quality sources and should be replaced by more reliable sources. See Wikipedia:GLOBALTIMES and WP:CGTN. If you keep them, content used from them should be clearly attributed ("According to Global Times "). I will ping a friendly expert on Chinese sources on whether they think we can keep those sources in this article (the topic does not seem controversial): @TheLonelyPather
There are some minor grammar issues, for example in the sentence "During the Iron Flower performance, a six-meter-high double-layered flower shed was set up in an open space." why is the past tense used? The last sentence of that paragraph also has a number of errors which make it hard or impossible to understand ("he iron flower ignites fireworks and firecrackers, and then adds " The performance of "Dragon Wearing Flowers" is a spectacular scene, thrilling, festive and lively.") Try to use a tool like Grammarly or a more advanced AI tool to proofread your article. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:50, 3 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240503085000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240503085000-Lihaochang678-20240503053400","replies":["c-TheLonelyPather-20240503202400-Hanyangprofessor2-20240503085000","c-Lihaochang678-20240510011800-Hanyangprofessor2-20240503085000"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
@Hanyangprofessor2Global Times and CGTN indeed should be specified. @Lihaochang678 Some more thoughts: please see Dashuhua–there is quite some overlap between the two activities, although it seems that Dashuhua happens in Hebei, whereas Datiehua (or "iron flower") happens in the Henan and Shanxi provinces.
The article's lede needs to be clarified and strengthened. Describing it as "a traditional folk firework" is not accurate–please use a detailed description, such as "creating a firework by hammering molten iron". Cheers, --The Lonely Pather (talk) 20:24, 3 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240503202400","author":"TheLonelyPather","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-TheLonelyPather-20240503202400-Hanyangprofessor2-20240503085000","replies":["c-Lihaochang678-20240510011900-TheLonelyPather-20240503202400"],"displayName":"The Lonely Pather"}}-->
Thank you for your valuable comments. Lihaochang678 (talk) 01:19, 10 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240510011900","author":"Lihaochang678","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Lihaochang678-20240510011900-TheLonelyPather-20240503202400","replies":[]}}-->
professor. Thank you very much for your help and advice. Lihaochang678 (talk) 01:18, 10 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240510011800","author":"Lihaochang678","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Lihaochang678-20240510011800-Hanyangprofessor2-20240503085000","replies":[]}}-->
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I hope to receive your inspection and advice. Thanks for your patience! Kikolipu (talk) 06:32, 9 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240509063200","author":"Kikolipu","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Kikolipu-20240509063200-Deadline_5_(Week_9)_LI_PEIYU","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240510040400-Kikolipu-20240509063200"]}}-->
@Kikolipu Yes, that topic is fine, but you have already reserved two other topics:
History of human rights to zh
History of Sino–Korean relations to zh
As for your weekly edits, please remember that at least 5 should be done in English. See also feedback you received in Chinese at zh:User_talk:KikolipuPiotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:04, 10 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240510040400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240510040400-Kikolipu-20240509063200","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello Professor, this is my sandbox creation on fashion in China , I've roughly finished it, please check it61.77.61.247 (talk) 08:40, 5 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240505084000","author":"61.77.61.247","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-61.77.61.247-20240505084000-Deadline5\uff08Week9\uff09\u2014BAILINHAN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240508015000-61.77.61.247-20240505084000"]}}-->
@Bai0926 Please remember to log in before making edits to Wikipedia (only edits that are made while logged in are counted for class credit).
Regarding your article, it looks like you have made good progress. Your article is well written (as far as English grammar and vocabulary are concerned) and reasonably comprehensive. There are however a number of issues to fix:
some paragraphs are unreferenced. Make sure that each paragraph has a reference, of more if necessary to support all the claims made in it
your article is underlinked (it needs more links to other Wikipedia articles). See Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Linking . If a topic exists in Chinese but not English, please link it using this tool: Template:Interlanguage link . Ask me for help if you do not know how to use that tool and I will demonstrate.
please add pictures to illustrate various types of clothing. You should be able to find them following the instructions from our module on adding media (see Assignment 5 in particular)
there are small parts which have not been translated, like "襦襦skirt"
please format the references so that they have all metadata: first and late name, date, publisher, title (in English as well as Chinese). If the source is in Chinese, add translated title (in English, do not replace to existing Chinese title - use the translated title parameter in metadata. Ask me in class if you need help).
reference 7 may be unreliable, see WP:BAIDU. If you think it is reliable, please tell me why - maybe it is a reprint (copy) or an article from a more reliable outlet?
It would be good to expand on the new fashion (section 'Since the founding of New China(1949 to present)')
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Professor, as per your suggestion, I have added content, please check it outBai0926 (talk) 13:01, 11 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240511130100","author":"Bai0926","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Bai0926-20240511130100-Hanyangprofessor2-20240508015000","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240512103700-Bai0926-20240511130100"]}}-->
@Bai0926 Very good. Can you add something about the most recent times - since 1990s? Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here10:37, 12 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240512103700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240512103700-Bai0926-20240511130100","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Hello, professor. I'm Kim minjun, in the 'Collective Intelligence' class.
I reviewed an article by a Choi sieon student, and left a small suggestion on his Talk page.
Please check it. Thank you.
KMJ0521 (talk) 09:47, 10 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240510094700","author":"KMJ0521","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-KMJ0521-20240510094700-Deadline_6_(week_10)_-_Kim_minjun","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240512104600-KMJ0521-20240510094700"]}}-->
@KMJ0521 Good - I hope you will get feedback that is at least as helpful as the one you left. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here10:46, 12 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240512104600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240512104600-KMJ0521-20240510094700","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello, professor. I'm Changyeop Jung, in the 'Collective Intelligence' class.
I accepted your feedback and added a reference to everything, and added a translated title to the reference title in Korean. Please check it. And I gave feedback to another student's article. Please check it.Ckdduq0919 (talk) 10:40, 11 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240511104000","author":"Ckdduq0919","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Ckdduq0919-20240511104000-Deadline_6_(week_10)_-_Changyeop_Jung","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240512105900-Ckdduq0919-20240511104000"]}}-->
@Ckdduq0919 Good - I hope you will get feedback that is at least as helpful as the one you left.
Regarding your article, please use Grammarly or AI tools to double check vocabulary and grammar. For example, this sentence contains errors: "After democratization in 1987, Yang's banned songs were all lifted and reevaluated as outstanding musicians." Songs cannot be lifted nor can be musicians. Many other sentences contain similar errors, in some cases making them impossible to understand (ex. " she became poor due to the tilt of her joining forces"). If your article has too many errors, the content you added may be removed due to being impossible to understand. One more example: " At the time of the release, the music label gave up promoting it because it was too heavy" - what does it mean for music to be "heavy"? I don't think she was doing heavy metal... Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here10:59, 12 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240512105900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240512105900-Ckdduq0919-20240511104000","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello, professor. We are students in everyday life and social structure.
Here are two articles we translated. 12 Please check it .Thank you! Han77720 (talk) 12:34, 11 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240511123400","author":"Han77720","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Han77720-20240511123400-Deadline_5(Week_9)\u2014LIU_RUOHAN\/TANG_JUNYUE","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240512111300-Han77720-20240511123400"]}}-->
@Han77720 Your translation to Chinese looks good. You can ask Chinese editors for feedback on Discord or the Help forum. Or try this: zh:维基百科:同行评审 and publish your article if you receive no feedback or address issues raised in a week or so.
Regarding your article, please use Grammarly or AI tools to double check vocabulary and grammar. Right now there are too many errors in the article for it to be published, starting with the strange title ("Invest in coins to pray for blessings"). Other examples include phrasing such as "the eyes of money" or "enough to watch the Taoists spend a year" which make no sense in English.
Next, ensure that all content is referenced. A number of your paragraphs have references in the middle but not at the end, suggesting that their final parts are unreferenced.
However, there is a very major problem with your article. Many references used are bad or do not support claims made. For example, the section on 'India' has a pointless reference to a dictionary entry on blessing, then to Britannica on 'American Indians', then to a dictionary on disinfectant. In fact, from what I see, vast majority of the references used in your article are fake or unreliable. I am afraid I have never seen so bad collections of references - at this point I believe not a single reference you have is usable. This is particularly puzzling as the article you are supposed to be translated, zh:投币祈福, has many good references. Instead of using them, it seems you added links to random websites. Can you explain to me what happened? Where you using some AI tool?
Lastly, please double check your blue links. There are some strange errors in linking; for example why did you link the common word "fundamentally" to University of Wisconsin–Madison? Another link in your article links the word "illegal" to Illegal drug trade. Please ensure all your links point to correct articles and remove links to common words; see WP:BTW. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here11:13, 12 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240512111300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240512111300-Han77720-20240511123400","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Please check it .Thank you! Yue03090616 (talk) 13:23, 11 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240511132300","author":"Yue03090616","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Yue03090616-20240511132300-Deadline_5(Week_9)\u2014LIU_RUOHAN\/TANG_JUNYUE_2","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240512112100-Yue03090616-20240511132300"]}}-->
@Yue03090616 Your translation to Chinese looks good. You can ask Chinese editors for feedback on Discord or the Help forum. Or try this: zh:维基百科:同行评审 and publish your article if you receive no feedback or address issues raised in a week or so.
However, your English project has a major error, identical to the issues I describe just above regarding another project by your groupmate. All your references are fake and need to redone. Please tell me how did this error happened, I've never seen anything like this in my life and I am very curious (zh:天山大峡谷 has correct references).
In addition, you need to redo your internal links (hyperlinks); there are major issues of overlinking and linking to common (unnecessary) or wrong terms (such as the word various linking to Various Positions, a music album). See Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Linking. You should remove all links and re-add them one by one, probably replicating the link structure from the original (Chinese) article.
It also would be good to add illustrations. Please see Assignment 5 in our module on adding media (Collective Intelligence) class on tips. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here11:21, 12 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240512112100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240512112100-Yue03090616-20240511132300","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Good evening, Professor.
I am a student in both the Collective Intelligence in Practice and Introduction to Information Sociology courses.
Here's my Wikipedia editing assignments for the week, totaling more than 20. Please check it out, thank you. CHENG SHIYI (talk) 16:40, 11 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240511164000","author":"CHENG SHIYI","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-CHENG_SHIYI-20240511164000-Weekly_wiki_edits-CHENG_SHIYI_5","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240512112900-CHENG_SHIYI-20240511164000"]}}-->
@CHENG SHIYI Well done Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here11:29, 12 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240512112900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240512112900-CHENG_SHIYI-20240511164000","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Regarding your Chinese translation, please make sure to complete it (right now it is missing references).
Your first draft contains numerous references to Chinese Wikipedia. Please replace them with references to reliable sources; Wikipedia cannot use itself as a reference.
Please format the references so that they have all metadata: first and late name, date, publisher, title (in English as well as Chinese). You will also need to add more blue links to other Wikipedia articles.
If a topic exists in Chinese but not English, please link it using this tool: Template:Interlanguage linkPiotrus at Hanyang| reply here11:34, 12 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240512113400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240512113400-Babaibiaobin-20240512102400","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello professor, I am a student of Everyday Life and Collective Intelligence. This is my translation Wang Baiyuan and I have expanded another article "Eggy Party", please check it out. Thank you, professor! Yangpeifu (talk) 13:27, 29 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240429132700","author":"Yangpeifu","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Yangpeifu-20240429132700-Deadline5\uff08Week9\uff09YANGPEIFU","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240502024600-Yangpeifu-20240429132700","c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240502024900-Yangpeifu-20240429132700"]}}-->
@Yangpeifu Regarding your first article (the biography), some content needs references (for example, second paragraph of 'stay in Japan' or 'Japanese authorities'). You also need to remove bullet points - content should be in prose format, not bullet point. You also need to proofread this for grammar and vocabulary (I recommend a tool like Grammarly). A number of sentences are in first person (ex. "during m stay in Japan". The entire heading 'Trivial matters and rumors' is strange - 'Trivial matters and rumors' are not encyclopedic (see WP:TRIVIA). Consider what can be merged into his biography and remove the "trivia". Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:46, 2 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240502024600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240502024600-Yangpeifu-20240429132700","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
PS. Another minor issue to fix: your Chinese language references should be accompanied by a title in English (use 'translated title' parameter in the citation table). If you are not sure how to do this, ask me in class or during office hours and I'll show you. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:49, 2 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240502024900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240502024900-Yangpeifu-20240429132700","replies":["c-Yangpeifu-20240510034400-Hanyangprofessor2-20240502024900"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello professor! I have revised everything according to your requirements, please check! Thank you! Yangpeifu (talk) 03:44, 10 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240510034400","author":"Yangpeifu","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Yangpeifu-20240510034400-Hanyangprofessor2-20240502024900","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240510035900-Yangpeifu-20240510034400"]}}-->
@Yangpeifu I have reviewed your recent edits. This is good, but I am afraid there are still many errors. Second sentence of biography repeats the same content: "he met Xie Chunmu, with whom he later collaborated with whom he would later collaborate". A few sentences later, "After graduation, she taught at the" - is the subject a female? Please read your article carefully to remove such obvious problems.
I also asked you to integrate the "trivia" section into the biography - this has not been done. Wikipedia articles cannot have trivia sections. If some content does not belong to his biography, consider what sections can be created. See Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Biography.
Does Xie Chunmu has an article on Chinese Wikipedia? If a topic exists in Chinese but not English, please link it using this tool: Template:Interlanguage link. From what I see, your article needs dozens of such links to Chinese Wikipedia - there are many people, places, organizations andconcepts mentioned that should be linked, and I expect they are linked in the Chinese article.
Finally, please format the references so that they have all metadata: first and late name, date, publisher, title (in English as well as Chinese). This is another item that I mentioned before ("Another minor issue to fix: your Chinese language references should be accompanied by a title in English") that you have not done. So, no, you have certainly not "revised everything according to your requirements" - but you still have time to do so now. Good luck! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:59, 10 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240510035900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240510035900-Yangpeifu-20240510034400","replies":["c-Yangpeifu-20240511140000-Hanyangprofessor2-20240510035900"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello Professor! I also translated the Xie Chunmu. Wang Baiyuan also modified it, please check it. I'll see you in the office on Monday and ask again. Yangpeifu (talk) 14:00, 11 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240511140000","author":"Yangpeifu","type":"comment","level":5,"id":"c-Yangpeifu-20240511140000-Hanyangprofessor2-20240510035900","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240512103300-Yangpeifu-20240511140000","c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240512103500-Yangpeifu-20240511140000"]}}-->
@Yangpeifu Well done, this will count for a good amount of extra credit. Please pay attention to consistency; that article mentions in some places "Hsieh Chun-mu" - is this the same person as "Xie Chunmu"? Please copyedit the article for grammer; the sentence that continues from " doing As he was about to set off" is very hard to understand. I certainly cannot understand if this is a joke or something else. The sentence "Xie Chunmu slept and ate together with Wang Baiyuan" implies that they had a romantic relationship. Is this what you meant? There are many errors in the paragraph in the section "After going to China" Please use a service like Grammarly or some AI tools to correct such errors. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here10:33, 12 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240512103300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":6,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240512103300-Yangpeifu-20240511140000","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
@TheLonelyPather You may enjoy reading those articles and/or reviewing them when you have the time. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here10:35, 12 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240512103500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":6,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240512103500-Yangpeifu-20240511140000","replies":["c-TheLonelyPather-20240512122800-Hanyangprofessor2-20240512103500"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Let me reiterate a principle from my essay that if the original article is not ideal, one must do extra work and make sure it fits into the criteria of English Wikipedia. @Yangpeifu I encourage you to cut down sections like "Comments from contemporary people and later generations" and "Other people's evaluations" because, long story short, English Wikipedia does not use this format or style. You should also be concise in writing your biographies. Cheers, --The Lonely Pather (talk) 12:28, 12 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240512122800","author":"TheLonelyPather","type":"comment","level":7,"id":"c-TheLonelyPather-20240512122800-Hanyangprofessor2-20240512103500","replies":[],"displayName":"The Lonely Pather"}}-->
Hello, Professor. I finished my project essay. This is my sandbox, please check it. Thank you. WSH0927 (talk) 13:23, 3 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240503132300","author":"WSH0927","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-WSH0927-20240503132300-Deadline_5_(week_9_)_WU_SHUHAN-_Collective_Intelligence","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240505022100-WSH0927-20240503132300"]}}-->
@WSH0927 Good progress! Only one paragraph needs references now, the one beginning with "In 1390 (the 23rd year of Hongwu), ..."
Other things to fix:
it is good to have many blue links, but you link the same terms multiple times. This is called Wikipedia:OVERLINKING. Please ensure that there are no duplicate links outside the lead (introduction). You can use this tool to help you identify unnecessary links: User:Evad37/duplinks-alt
your article should mention the subject's name in Chinese. Compare your lead to that of, for example, Jiao Yu or Wu Cheng (philosopher)
while your article is written reasonably well, there are small grammar/vocabulary issues, for example - why is the word "Bridges" capitalized in the lead? I recommend using a tool like Grammarly to proofread your article. Similar small errors can be see in sentences "1375 (the eighth year of Hongwu in the Ming Dynasty) She" or "Ai Cui died. Because of her son's young age, she Xiang assumed". They need to fixed before the article can be published.
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@Hanyangprofessor2 Hello Professor, I have modified my project article based on your suggestions. Are there any other errors I need to fix? Can I publish articles from the sandbox? WSH0927 (talk) 10:06, 13 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240513100600","author":"WSH0927","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-WSH0927-20240513100600-Hanyangprofessor2-20240505022100","replies":[]}}-->
I have completed this week's task. My team members (Huang Yanhan) and I evaluated each other's translated articles. Please check it. Thank you. ZHANGQI1066 (talk) 12:59, 12 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240512125900","author":"ZHANGQI1066","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-ZHANGQI1066-20240512125900-Deadline_6(Week10)_\u2014\u2014ZHANG_QI","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240513100900-ZHANGQI1066-20240512125900"]}}-->
@ZHANGQI1066 Good - I hope you will get feedback that is at least as helpful as the one you left. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here10:09, 13 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240513100900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240513100900-ZHANGQI1066-20240512125900","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I am a student in both the Collective Intelligence in Practice and Introduction to Information Sociology courses.
I reviewed a <Prehistory of China> article by @Zhongxxin , and left a suggestion on her talk page.Please check, thank you.
CHENG SHIYI (talk) 13:01, 12 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240512130100","author":"CHENG SHIYI","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-CHENG_SHIYI-20240512130100-Deadline_6_(Week_10)-CHENG_SHIYI","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240513101000-CHENG_SHIYI-20240512130100"]}}-->
@CHENG SHIYI Good - I hope you will get feedback that is at least as helpful as the one you left. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here10:10, 13 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240513101000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240513101000-CHENG_SHIYI-20240512130100","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello professor, I have commented on my companion, please check it out. HYH031277777 (talk) 13:10, 12 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240512131000","author":"HYH031277777","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-HYH031277777-20240512131000-Deadline_6_(week_10)_HUANG_YANHAN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240513101000-HYH031277777-20240512131000"]}}-->
@HYH031277777 Good - I hope you will get feedback that is at least as helpful as the one you left. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here10:10, 13 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240513101000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240513101000-HYH031277777-20240512131000","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello Professor. I have read LI MENGRU( @TMXX0818 )'s article and left some suggestions on her talk page, please check it. [20] Thank you. Zhongxxin (talk) 13:10, 12 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240512131000","author":"Zhongxxin","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Zhongxxin-20240512131000-Deadline_6_(week_10)\u2014ZHONG_XIN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240513101000-Zhongxxin-20240512131000"]}}-->
@Zhongxxin Good - I hope you will get feedback that is at least as helpful as the one you left. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here10:10, 13 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240513101000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240513101000-Zhongxxin-20240512131000","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I read other's topic and left feedback. Please check.
String of Pearls(Indian Ocean) theory was quite interesting.
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@Choisieon Good - I hope you will get feedback that is at least as helpful as the one you left. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here10:11, 13 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240513101100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240513101100-Choisieon-20240512144100","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor, I have reviewed the article " Wang Baiyuan " by Yangpeifu and left feedback. Please take a look, professor. Thak you! Zhangzhang111 (talk) 04:12, 13 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240513041200","author":"Zhangzhang111","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Zhangzhang111-20240513041200-Deadline6(Week10)_ZHANG_BINGYI","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240513101100-Zhangzhang111-20240513041200"]}}-->
@Zhangzhang111 Good - I hope you will get feedback that is at least as helpful as the one you left. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here10:11, 13 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240513101100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240513101100-Zhangzhang111-20240513041200","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello professor, this is the Wikipedia editing task I completed this week, please check it out, thank you. Jzhdylb (talk) 15:07, 12 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240512150700","author":"Jzhdylb","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Jzhdylb-20240512150700-Deadline_6:_Week_10_---FAN_XINRU","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240513101300-Jzhdylb-20240512150700"]}}-->
@Jzhdylb Good. Remember that all paragraphs need a reference; I see for example the first two paragraphs in the "Hsi Shih's hometown" section you added are missing references - please add references to them. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here10:13, 13 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240513101300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240513101300-Jzhdylb-20240512150700","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Hello professor. I'm CHENG SIYU, the student of Sociology of Everyday Life.
I posted here seeking opinions on "Observer bias" & "Women's clothing in China". But after two weeks I still haven’t gotten any feedback, what should I do? Please give me some advice. Thanks.
Have a great week. Csiiiyu (talk) 02:55, 13 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240513025500","author":"Csiiiyu","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Csiiiyu-20240513025500-Deadline6(Week10)_-_Sociology_of_Everyday_Life_-_CHENG_SIYU","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240513102800-Csiiiyu-20240513025500"]}}-->
@Csiiiyu I will ask some Chinese volunteers I know to take a look. If you receive no feedback in two weeks, you can publish your articles in their current form. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here10:28, 13 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240513102800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240513102800-Csiiiyu-20240513025500","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Thank you!! Zhangzhang111 (talk) 11:41, 6 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240506114100","author":"Zhangzhang111","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Zhangzhang111-20240506114100-Deadline_5_(week_9_)_ZHANG_BINGYI","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240508053300-Zhangzhang111-20240506114100"]}}-->
@Zhangzhang111 Good. The article seems to have many good references and the structure and language are mostly sound. There are however several issues to fix:
please change the name of the subject from Lin Zhijian to Lin Chih-chien as this is the name his main biography exists under on English Wikipedia
please ensure all paragraphs have a reference (or more if necessary)
there may be some overlinking - please read Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Linking and ensure important terms are linked, but no more then once (not counting the lead/introduction)
the explanatory note section does not seem correctly formatted - if they are notes, they should work as notes. Please stop by my office hours and I will show you the code to fix this
please proofread your article for English vocabulary and grammar; I recommend tool like Grammarly. I see numerous errors such as unfinished sentences ex "National Taiwan University announced on July 6, 2022, that from that day, all master and doctoral students must use the original comparison of text similarity before leaving the" or unclear sentences such as "Of the 173 students, only five were in public electronic full text " that are hard to understand; another problematic sentence is the very long one here (it needs to be split into several, it is too confusing and hard to understand, and likely has several errors in vocabulary and grammar that further affect it): "The school received a report containing Lin Zhijian copying Yu Zhenghuang, Yu Zhenghuang copying Lin Zhijian, and two people copying each other three; according to the school rules, the Academy of Social Sciences approved the report on the July 17 approval committee, the dean of the Academy of Social Sciences Su Hongda convener, based on the information provided to the committee of the information, and the accused to the committee replied data approval (but not including the parties not submitted to the committee, data published in other places)"
Perhaps @TheLonelyPather would like to offer some additional feedback. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:33, 8 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240508053300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240508053300-Zhangzhang111-20240506114100","replies":["c-TheLonelyPather-20240510133500-Hanyangprofessor2-20240508053300","c-Zhangzhang111-20240514004600-Hanyangprofessor2-20240508053300"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I am overwhelmed by this article and I am afraid I don't have enough time to give a comprehensive review. Piotrus, very sorry for the late reply. Cheers, --The Lonely Pather (talk) 13:35, 10 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240510133500","author":"TheLonelyPather","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-TheLonelyPather-20240510133500-Hanyangprofessor2-20240508053300","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240512103900-TheLonelyPather-20240510133500"],"displayName":"The Lonely Pather"}}-->
@TheLonelyPather No worries (btw I am pinging you because I don't know of anyone else who might be interested in reviewing student works in Asian topics - if you know, do let me know). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here10:39, 12 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240512103900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240512103900-TheLonelyPather-20240510133500","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello professor, I received the following message regarding this article. I don’t know what to do. Please help me!! professor,Thank you.
Deletion discussions usually run for seven days and are not votes. Our guide about effectively contributing to such discussions is worth a read. The most common issue in these discussions is notability, but it's not the only aspect that may be discussed; read the nomination and any other comments carefully before you contribute to the discussion. Last but not least, you are highly encouraged to continue improving the article; just be sure not to remove the tag about the deletion nomination from the top.
If you have any questions, please leave a comment here and prepend it with {{Re|Remsense}}. And don't forget to sign your reply with ~~~~ . Thanks! Zhangzhang111 (talk) 00:46, 14 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240514004600","author":"Zhangzhang111","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Zhangzhang111-20240514004600-Hanyangprofessor2-20240508053300","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240517041800-Zhangzhang111-20240514004600"]}}-->
@Zhangzhang111 You should comment at Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/Lin Zhijian's paper plagiarism case and address the issues raised. In particular, you should answer this: Which parts of the article are well referenced but too detailed to be merged into the main biography of the subject? Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:18, 17 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240517041800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240517041800-Zhangzhang111-20240514004600","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello professor, I am a student of Collective Intelligence in Practice: Understanding Wikipedia . This is my translation assignment 1 and translation assignment 2. I have roughly completed the translation. Please check it. Thank you for your time. YZY2233 (talk) 06:06, 9 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240509060600","author":"YZY2233","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-YZY2233-20240509060600-Deadline_5_(Week_9)_YUE_ZIYI","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240509070700-YZY2233-20240509060600"]}}-->
@YZY2233 Good progress. Both articles need more hyperlinks (blue links) to another article. If a topic exists in Chinese but not English, please link it using this tool: Template:Interlanguage link . Ask me for help if you do not know how to use that tool and I will demonstrate.
You should also translate the remaining reference and add (copy) pictures. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:07, 9 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240509070700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240509070700-YZY2233-20240509060600","replies":["c-YZY2233-20240514104500-Hanyangprofessor2-20240509070700"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello professor, I added a lot of new hyperlinks Please check it. This is my translation assignment 1 and translation assignment 2. Thank you for your time. YZY2233 (talk) 10:45, 14 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240514104500","author":"YZY2233","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-YZY2233-20240514104500-Hanyangprofessor2-20240509070700","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240517055500-YZY2233-20240514104500"]}}-->
@YZY2233 Well done. You can ask Chinese editors for feedback on Discord or the Help forum. Or try this: zh:维基百科:同行评审 and publish your article if you receive no feedback or address issues raised in a week or so. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:55, 17 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240517055500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240517055500-YZY2233-20240514104500","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Dear Professor, I have finished preparing the article on The Longly Warrior (Chinese: The Three Brigades). How should I move this article to my personal homepage?
This is the linkDraft:The Longly WarriorMcx8202229 (talk) 09:30, 9 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240509093000","author":"Mcx8202229","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Mcx8202229-20240509093000-Deadline_5_Ma_Chenxiao","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240510054400-Mcx8202229-20240509093000","c-TheLonelyPather-20240510133100-Mcx8202229-20240509093000"]}}-->
Also, you removed the image - why? I restored it for you on May 5, but now that you removed it it was deleted. You will have to re-add it again (I recommend asking for it to undeleted at Wikipedia:Requests for undeletion); otherwise you will have to reupload it again. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:44, 10 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240510054400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240510054400-Mcx8202229-20240509093000","replies":["c-Mcx8202229-20240510072100-Hanyangprofessor2-20240510054400"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor, I have re-uploaded a more suitable poster, please check it out Mcx8202229 (talk) 07:21, 10 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240510072100","author":"Mcx8202229","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Mcx8202229-20240510072100-Hanyangprofessor2-20240510054400","replies":[]}}-->
@Mcx8202229 I think it is the Lonely warrior, not the Longly warrior. Please see [21] or this China Daily article [22]. Cheers, --The Lonely Pather (talk) 13:31, 10 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240510133100","author":"TheLonelyPather","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-TheLonelyPather-20240510133100-Mcx8202229-20240509093000","replies":["c-Mcx8202229-20240511045600-TheLonelyPather-20240510133100"],"displayName":"The Lonely Pather"}}-->
oh! Sorry, Professor, this was my oversight. I have already solved this error. Mcx8202229 (talk) 04:56, 11 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240511045600","author":"Mcx8202229","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Mcx8202229-20240511045600-TheLonelyPather-20240510133100","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240512104500-Mcx8202229-20240511045600"]}}-->
@Mcx8202229 Good. Let me know when you fix the other issues I mentioned in my earlier review. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here10:45, 12 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240512104500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240512104500-Mcx8202229-20240511045600","replies":["c-Mcx8202229-20240515050700-Hanyangprofessor2-20240512104500"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear professor, I have changed all the problematic links. I want to delete the poster uploaded to Wikimedia Commons because I re-uploaded a new poster for the article in Wikipedia, but my current article is not in the sandbox. , what should I do?The Lonely Warrior#External linksThis is the current link Mcx8202229 (talk) 05:07, 15 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240515050700","author":"Mcx8202229","type":"comment","level":5,"id":"c-Mcx8202229-20240515050700-Hanyangprofessor2-20240512104500","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240517055700-Mcx8202229-20240515050700"]}}-->
@Mcx8202229 You are doing well. A poster is non-free media and cannot be uploaded to Wikimedia Commons. The poster at File:The Lonely Warrior poster.jpg should be enough. You should thank volunteer @Salavat who added a proper fair use explanation (thank you). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:57, 17 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240517055700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":6,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240517055700-Mcx8202229-20240515050700","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello professor.I am Chaeyeong Lee, the student of Sociology of Everyday Life. Completed 50% of the assignment for Deadline 4, “Beer in Japan” Please confirm. hereChaeyeong09 (talk) 13:16, 13 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240513131600","author":"Chaeyeong09","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Chaeyeong09-20240513131600-Deadline4(Week5)_Chaeyeong_Lee","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240517083600-Chaeyeong09-20240513131600"]}}-->
@Chaeyeong09 The formatting looks good. Once you are finished, I recommend you ask for feedback from Korean speaking editors here: ko:위키백과:함께 검토하기 . If nobody replies for a few days, ask for feedback in Korean Discord server. Once you address that feedback of if you receive no feedback in two weeks, you can publish your articles in their current form. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:36, 17 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240517083600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240517083600-Chaeyeong09-20240513131600","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello professor.I am Chaeyeong Lee, the student of Sociology of Everyday Life.I have completed the assignment corresponding to Deadline 5. (Beer in Japan) Please check and provide feedback. hereChaeyeong09 (talk) 14:42, 13 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240513144200","author":"Chaeyeong09","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Chaeyeong09-20240513144200-Deadline5(Week9)_Chaeyeong_Lee","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240517083700-Chaeyeong09-20240513144200"]}}-->
I believe I replied to you above (same article). Good job, Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:37, 17 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240517083700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240517083700-Chaeyeong09-20240513144200","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Wikimedia Commons - Sociology of Everyday Life - CHENG SIYU
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Hello professor. I'm CHENG SIYU, the student of Sociology of Everyday Life.
Regarding the assignment of Project 2 Public Space Observation, I uploaded the images I took during the observation to Wikimedia Commons in the hope of gaining extra points. thank you. Csiiiyu (talk) 04:17, 14 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240514041700","author":"Csiiiyu","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Csiiiyu-20240514041700-Wikimedia_Commons_-_Sociology_of_Everyday_Life_-_CHENG_SIYU","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240517083900-Csiiiyu-20240514041700"]}}-->
@Csiiiyu Well done, the pictures look good! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:39, 17 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240517083900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240517083900-Csiiiyu-20240514041700","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Good afternoon Professor, here are my 10 edits for the week, please check them out.
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@Muqing112233 Good, but please not that Baidu Baike is not an acceptable reference on Wikipedia, so some of your edits were reverted. You can restore them if you can locate more reliable reference to verify the claims made. Read more at WP:BAIDUBAIKE. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:41, 17 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240517084100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240517084100-Muqing112233-20240516034700","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello Professor. I have read other’s article and left some suggestions on her talk page, please check it. Hayoung1 (talk) 02:03, 17 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240517020300","author":"Hayoung1","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Hayoung1-20240517020300-Deadline_6_(week_10)_-_Hayoung_Kwon","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240517084200-Hayoung1-20240517020300"]}}-->
@Hayoung1 Good - I hope you will get feedback that is at least as helpful as the one you left. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:42, 17 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240517084200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240517084200-Hayoung1-20240517020300","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Good morning Professor, here are my 10 edits for the week, please check them out.
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@Muqing112233 Good, see my comment above. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:42, 17 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240517084200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240517084200-Muqing112233-20240517024600","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Deadline 6(Week 10)-LIYULUN(Collective Intelligence and Wikipedia)
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Hello professor.I read other students' posts and left feedback, please check out.User talk:ZHANGQI1066#Feedback-LI YULUNLIYULUN (talk) 04:37, 17 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240517043700","author":"LIYULUN","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-LIYULUN-20240517043700-Deadline_6(Week_10)-LIYULUN(Collective_Intelligence_and_Wikipedia)","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240517084300-LIYULUN-20240517043700"]}}-->
@LIYULUN Good - I hope you will get feedback that is at least as helpful as the one you left. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:43, 17 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240517084300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240517084300-LIYULUN-20240517043700","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Sociology of Everyday Life - HAN YUANYUAN LI HAOCHANG
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Hello professor, this is my translation assignment after correction. It has been corrected according to your requirements. Please check it for me. If there are any deficiencies, I will correct it immediately. Thank you, Professor. Hanyuanyuan613 (talk) 04:22, 17 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240517042200","author":"Hanyuanyuan613","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Hanyuanyuan613-20240517042200-Sociology_of_Everyday_Life_-_HAN_YUANYUAN_LI_HAOCHANG","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240517084800-Hanyuanyuan613-20240517042200"]}}-->
@Hanyuanyuan613 I see some progress, but you need to follow my previous instructions. For example, I don't see that you have acted on my review from March (at #Deadline 4 (Week 5)LI HAOCHANG HAN YUANYUAN), later repeated at #Deadline 5 (Week 9)LIHAOCHANG HANYUANYUAN. Please reread my earlier feedback and act on it. You added references and rewrote one sentence, but many other errors I identified before remain (lack of links, lack of interlanguage links, poor reference formatting). The article still has unreferenced parts, and many strange grammar or vocabulary errors ("iron juice"?). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:48, 17 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240517084800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240517084800-Hanyuanyuan613-20240517042200","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Hello Professor, here is a Wikipedia article I translated, please check it out, thanks.
https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User:Wangtao626/sandbox&action=editWangtao626 (talk) 02:48, 13 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240513024800","author":"Wangtao626","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Wangtao626-20240513024800-Deadline_6_week10_WANG_TAO","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240513101700-Wangtao626-20240513024800"]}}-->
@Wangtao626 I am afraid the link to the article is broken. Please try to link it again and this time double check the link works, and I'll review it then. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here10:17, 13 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240513101700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240513101700-Wangtao626-20240513024800","replies":["c-Wangtao626-20240517115800-Hanyangprofessor2-20240513101700"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello Professor this is the new link.Corruption in the United States(美国的腐败) Wangtao626 (talk) 11:58, 17 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240517115800","author":"Wangtao626","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Wangtao626-20240517115800-Hanyangprofessor2-20240513101700","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240520033100-Wangtao626-20240517115800"]}}-->
@Wangtao626 Good progress. Please remove broken code ({{Use American English|date=April 2017}} found at the top of the article, and |group="Note" found in one reference.
Next,, you can ask Chinese editors for feedback on Discord or the Help forum. Or try this: zh:维基百科:同行评审 and publish your article if you receive no feedback or address issues raised in a week or so. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:31, 20 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240520033100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240520033100-Wangtao626-20240517115800","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
@ZHANG0822ZH Well done, your edits look fine. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:33, 20 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240520033300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240520033300-ZHANG0822ZH-20240517123400","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello,professor I have read other’s article and left some suggestions on other student talk page.Please chack it
https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/User_talk:YZY2233#FeedbackBabaibiaobin (talk) 17:56, 17 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240517175600","author":"Babaibiaobin","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Babaibiaobin-20240517175600-Deadline6(week10)-Gaoxiaoxia","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240520033300-Babaibiaobin-20240517175600"]}}-->
@Babaibiaobin Good - I hope you will get feedback that is at least as helpful as the one you left. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:33, 20 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240520033300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240520033300-Babaibiaobin-20240517175600","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello professor.I read other students' posts and left feedback, you can check out at here. Thank you. Rachel.zrq (talk) 14:15, 18 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240518141500","author":"Rachel.zrq","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Rachel.zrq-20240518141500-Deadline_6(Week_10)-ZHANG_RUIQING","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240520033400-Rachel.zrq-20240518141500"]}}-->
@Rachel.zrq Good - I hope you will get feedback that is at least as helpful as the one you left. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:34, 20 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240520033400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240520033400-Rachel.zrq-20240518141500","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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I hope to receive your inspection and advice. Thanks for your patience! Kikolipu (talk) 06:50, 18 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240518065000","author":"Kikolipu","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Kikolipu-20240518065000-Deadline_6_(Week_10)_LI_PEIYU","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240520033700-Kikolipu-20240518065000"]}}-->
@Kikolipu Good! But remember that only referenced content can be added to Wikipedia and counts for our assignment; some of the content you added does not appear to have references - please try to fix this shortly. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:37, 20 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240520033700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240520033700-Kikolipu-20240518065000","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Good afternoon, Professor.
I am a student in both the Collective Intelligence in Practice and Introduction to Information Sociology courses.
Here's what I've been working on for this week's Wikipedia edit, please check it out thanks. CHENG SHIYI (talk) 09:31, 18 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240518093100","author":"CHENG SHIYI","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-CHENG_SHIYI-20240518093100-Weekly_wiki_edits-CHENG_SHIYI_6","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240520033900-CHENG_SHIYI-20240518093100"]}}-->
@CHENG SHIYI Well done Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:39, 20 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240520033900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240520033900-CHENG_SHIYI-20240518093100","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Hello Professor, I have finished editing Wikipedia for week 10 + week 11 (more than 40 edits in total), please check it, thank you! Zhongxxin (talk) 13:42, 19 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240519134200","author":"Zhongxxin","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Zhongxxin-20240519134200-Weekly_wiki_edits-ZHONG_XIN_6","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240520033900-Zhongxxin-20240519134200"]}}-->
@Zhongxxin Good. Please double check your edits with tools like Grammarly to ensure there are no issues with English grammar or vocabulary. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:39, 20 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240520033900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240520033900-Zhongxxin-20240519134200","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Good morning professor,
I have completed ten edits on Wikipedia this week, please check.
Have a nice day! 왕예화 (talk) 16:29, 19 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240519162900","author":"\uc655\uc608\ud654","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-\uc655\uc608\ud654-20240519162900-Weekly_wiki_edits-_WANG_YIHUA","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240520034100-\uc655\uc608\ud654-20240519162900"]}}-->
@왕예화 Good! But remember that only referenced content can be added to Wikipedia and counts for our assignment; some of the content you added does not appear to have references - please try to fix this shortly.
Also, references (footnotes) should not be added in headings. You need to add at least one sentence to the body of the heading and move your reference there. For example, if it is a list of stations, you should say so. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:41, 20 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240520034100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240520034100-\uc655\uc608\ud654-20240519162900","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello,professor I have read other’s article and left some suggestions on other student talk page.Please chack it User talk:Csiiiyu and User talk:BabaibiaobinYZY2233 (talk) 04:53, 20 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240520045300","author":"YZY2233","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-YZY2233-20240520045300-Deadline6(week10)-YUE_ZIYI","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240520085300-YZY2233-20240520045300"]}}-->
@YZY2233 Good - I hope you will get feedback that is at least as helpful as the one you left. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:53, 20 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240520085300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240520085300-YZY2233-20240520045300","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear professor, I have completed the feedback, please checkUser talk:ZHANGQI1066#Feedback-Ma ChenxiaoMcx8202229 (talk) 05:13, 20 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240520051300","author":"Mcx8202229","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Mcx8202229-20240520051300-Deadline_6-Ma_Chenxiao","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240520085400-Mcx8202229-20240520051300"]}}-->
@Mcx8202229 Good - I hope you will get feedback that is at least as helpful as the one you left. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:54, 20 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240520085400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240520085400-Mcx8202229-20240520051300","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Hello professor. I'm CHENG SIYU, the student of Sociology of Everyday Life.
I read other people's articles and posted my suggestions on the talk page, please check it out.
Hope you have a great week. Csiiiyu (talk) 06:05, 20 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240520060500","author":"Csiiiyu","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Csiiiyu-20240520060500-Deadline6(Week10)_-_Sociology_of_Everyday_Life_-_CHENG_SIYU_2","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240520085500-Csiiiyu-20240520060500"]}}-->
@Csiiiyu Well done with your reviews. And since you got feedback and acted on it, I think you can publish your articles on Chinese Wikipedia - good job! Do monitor the Peer Review section to see if more comments appear there over the next few weeks. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:55, 20 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240520085500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240520085500-Csiiiyu-20240520060500","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
1.Hello Professor, my main Wikipedia Lin Zhijian's paper plagiarism case, received comments like the following: This article was nominated for deletion. The discussion was closed on 20 May 2024 with a consensus to merge the content into the article Lin Chih-chien. If you find that such action has not been taken promptly, please consider assisting in the merger instead of re-nominating the article for deletion. To discuss the merger, please use the destination article's talk page.
But I am not very good at merging the content into Lin Chih-chien . I am requesting your help, or if possible, I would like to go to the office and ask the professor for help.
2. In addition to my main task, I also completed Draft:Su Hongda for extra points and asked the professor to check it.
Thank you and have a nice day~~ Zhangzhang111 (talk) 02:34, 21 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240521023400","author":"Zhangzhang111","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Zhangzhang111-20240521023400-Deadline_5_(Week_9)ZHANG_BINGYI","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240524042400-Zhangzhang111-20240521023400"]}}-->
@Zhangzhang111 We can discuss the merge in my office; but the short version is - you have to identify the most important elements of your translated to be merged article that are missing from the target merge article and copy them over.
Regarding your draft, please shorten the too long heading ("He said the Palace Museum's transformation policy was to eliminate the Palace Museum transfer"). And note that another experienced editor, User:Saqib, expressed concerns that your article reads too promotional. As they have not provided any specific details, please ask them on the article's talk page or their talk page for such details and then try to address the issues they raise. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:24, 24 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240524042400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240524042400-Zhangzhang111-20240521023400","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Intensive animal farming 集约化畜牧业LIYULUN (talk) 07:58, 11 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240511075800","author":"LIYULUN","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-LIYULUN-20240511075800-Deadline_5(Week_9)-LIYULUN_,SHAOJIANUAN,_group8(Collective_Intelligence_and_Wiki","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240512105400-LIYULUN-20240511075800"]}}-->
@LIYULUN Well done. Your Chinese article about intensive farming is almost ready to be published - try to ensure all content is referenced.
Regarding happy baby, please double check interlanguage links as they seem to point to ch wiki instead of zh wiki.
You don't need to link to unimportant concepts like characters that will never have their own article ("Happy Superman, Sweetheart Superman, Playboy Superman, Careless Superman, Caution Superman, Jialuo and the big monsters and little monsters").
Please ensure that the first letter of any heading is capitalized. Do not capitalize unnecessary words. What do you mean by "Division Introduction"? I do not understand this concept. It seems you mean "Episode summary"? Most of your other headings contain errors - please review Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Film which will tell you how your headings should be named.
Please ensure all content is referenced (in particular, in section about related works).
What is missing is a section on critical reception, summarizing reliable reviews. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here10:54, 12 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240512105400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240512105400-LIYULUN-20240511075800","replies":["c-LIYULUN-20240523174900-Hanyangprofessor2-20240512105400"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello, Professor. We have modified our article according to your suggestion, please check if it can be published. LIYULUN (talk) 17:49, 23 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240523174900","author":"LIYULUN","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-LIYULUN-20240523174900-Hanyangprofessor2-20240512105400","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240524042800-LIYULUN-20240523174900"]}}-->
@LIYULUN Your article structure is fine now, but you need to rewrite your work to be in understandable English. For example, the first paragraph of 'Douban Movie' section is next to impossible to understand. Please proofread your text carefully with tools like Grammarly, AI tools or ask for help from someone fluent in English.
Lastly, Chinese name of the movie should be mentioned in the lead and infobox. Compare your article to other articles on Chinese movies and series on English Wikipedia, ex. The Wandering Earth or Meteor Garden (2018 TV series)Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:28, 24 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240524042800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240524042800-LIYULUN-20240523174900","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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I have completed the evaluation of another classmate. Ask the professor to check. Lihaochang678 (talk) 13:49, 21 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240521134900","author":"Lihaochang678","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Lihaochang678-20240521134900-Deadline_6_(Week_10)_LI_HAOCHANG","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240524042900-Lihaochang678-20240521134900"]}}-->
@Lihaochang678 Good job Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:29, 24 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240524042900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240524042900-Lihaochang678-20240521134900","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Hello Professor, I have completed more than ten edits to Wikipedia this week.Please check it, thank you. Zhongxxin (talk) 15:02, 23 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240523150200","author":"Zhongxxin","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Zhongxxin-20240523150200-Weekly_wiki_edits-ZHONG_XIN_7","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240524043200-Zhongxxin-20240523150200"]}}-->
@Zhongxxin Good job! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:32, 24 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240524043200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240524043200-Zhongxxin-20240523150200","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
As per your request I did a peer review please check.And also added this topic to my talk page. Check, please. Lihaochang678 (talk) 03:20, 24 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240524032000","author":"Lihaochang678","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Lihaochang678-20240524032000-LI_HAOCHANG","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240524043300-Lihaochang678-20240524032000"]}}-->
@Lihaochang678 Good job asking for the review, please check it in few days to see if there is feedback. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:33, 24 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240524043300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240524043300-Lihaochang678-20240524032000","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello, professor. I am HongGyeongmin, taking Collective Intellignece.
I accepted you and other students feedback and fixed it. please check. Dune2 / WonkaHkm5420 (talk) 04:00, 24 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240524040000","author":"Hkm5420","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Hkm5420-20240524040000-Deadline_7_(Weeks_11-12)_-_HongGyeongmin","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240524043400-Hkm5420-20240524040000"]}}-->
@Hkm5420 Good job. Check in your articles every week to make sure there is no feedback from Korean reviewers. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:34, 24 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240524043400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240524043400-Hkm5420-20240524040000","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello professor, we are students of Collective Intelligence and Wikipedia. This is our assignment 1 and assignment 2. we have roughly completed the translation. Please check it. Thank you for your time. Hhhlx (talk) 01:42, 1 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240501014200","author":"Hhhlx","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Hhhlx-20240501014200-Deadline5\uff08Week9\uff09HUANG_LINGXUAN&LIU_YUNXIANG","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240509030200-Hhhlx-20240501014200"]}}-->
@Hhhlx I did miss your message (post) here last time, apologies. Here is your feedback:
your Chinese translation looks fine, but please monitor it every week for the next few weeks to double check if Chinese volunteers leave any feedback or suggestions
regarding your expansion of Chinese clothing in English from early April (seen here), most of it lacked references and was removed or will be removed shortly. Each paragraph requires a reference (even if identical to a reference used in another paragraph). You can restore or save the content you added, but please ensure it has references. Only referenced content counts for our assignment. In addition, please double check your vocabulary. You talk about "deep clothing" but it seems you mean Deel (clothing)? There are also unencyclopedic sentences in what you wrote, such as "Let's delve deeper into the various characteristics and cultural symbols of deep clothing together." Please read the guide at WP:PRONOUN
Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:02, 9 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240509030200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240509030200-Hhhlx-20240501014200","replies":["c-1eleven0086-20240509065800-Hanyangprofessor2-20240509030200","c-Hhhlx-20240509085000-Hanyangprofessor2-20240509030200"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Ok we understand.But if we re-edit the previously deleted content and add references now ,our score will count as a normal score or as a late score Thank you. 1eleven0086 (talk) 06:58, 9 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240509065800","author":"1eleven0086","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-1eleven0086-20240509065800-Hanyangprofessor2-20240509030200","replies":[]}}-->
Hello, Professor. Shen Yi is not deel, It's Shenyi, I have corrected the mistake. Please check and correct. Thank you. Hhhlx (talk) 08:50, 9 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240509085000","author":"Hhhlx","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Hhhlx-20240509085000-Hanyangprofessor2-20240509030200","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240510054900-Hhhlx-20240509085000"]}}-->
@1eleven0086 @Hhhlx Your score will count as regular score; you completed the assignment on time. Errors can be fixed now - do not worry. If you can complete the assignment by the late June, your score will be very good.
All content you add needs to be referenced. Baidu is not allowed due to how many errors it has, see WP:BAIDUBAIKEPiotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:49, 10 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240510054900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240510054900-Hhhlx-20240509085000","replies":["c-1eleven0086-20240524153800-Hanyangprofessor2-20240510054900"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello professor, I have added reference in article please check! Thank you! 1eleven0086 (talk) 15:38, 24 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240524153800","author":"1eleven0086","type":"comment","level":5,"id":"c-1eleven0086-20240524153800-Hanyangprofessor2-20240510054900","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240527032700-1eleven0086-20240524153800"]}}-->
@1eleven0086 The reference looks good. Please add page range or ranges that support the information cited, and the translated title using the translated title parameter (do not remove the Chinese title). If you need help, stop by my office and I'll show you how. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:27, 27 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240527032700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":6,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240527032700-1eleven0086-20240524153800","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Special:Contributions/Muqing112233Muqing112233 (talk) 06:40, 25 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240525064000","author":"Muqing112233","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Muqing112233-20240525064000-collective_intelligence_Week_11--MUQING_2","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240527033200-Muqing112233-20240525064000"]}}-->
@Muqing112233 Good. But remember that 5 edits each week should be at English Wikipedia. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:32, 27 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240527033200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240527033200-Muqing112233-20240525064000","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Good evening, Professor.
I am a student in both the Collective Intelligence in Practice and Introduction to Information Sociology courses.
Here's what I've been working on for this week's Wikipedia edit, please check it out thanks.
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@CHENG SHIYI Good job! All Chinese articles should have Chinese characters in their leads. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:33, 27 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240527033300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240527033300-CHENG_SHIYI-20240525113900","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Good afternoon, Professor. Here are my 20 Wikipedia edits this week. Pleaes check.Hope you have a nice day! 1.241.68.131 (talk) 08:22, 26 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240526082200","author":"1.241.68.131","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-1.241.68.131-20240526082200-Weekly_Editor-_LIU_XINRUI","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240527033600-1.241.68.131-20240526082200"]}}-->
Good job! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:36, 27 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240527033600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240527033600-1.241.68.131-20240526082200","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Hello professor. I left a comment on another classmate's homepage for you to check. please check it out thanks.(https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/User_talk:ZHANGQI1066) DENG HUICHEN (talk) 09:35, 26 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240526093500","author":"\ub4f1\ud61c\uc9c4","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-\ub4f1\ud61c\uc9c4-20240526093500-week_12_DENG_HUICHEN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240527033700-\ub4f1\ud61c\uc9c4-20240526093500"],"displayName":"DENG HUICHEN"}}-->
@등혜진 Well done. I hope it is useful for them Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:37, 27 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240527033700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240527033700-\ub4f1\ud61c\uc9c4-20240526093500","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Good evening, professor,
I have completed more than ten edits to Wikipedia this week.Please check it,
Have a nice day. 왕예화 (talk) 14:04, 26 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240526140400","author":"\uc655\uc608\ud654","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-\uc655\uc608\ud654-20240526140400-Weekly_wiki_edits-WANG_YIHUA","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240527033900-\uc655\uc608\ud654-20240526140400"]}}-->
@왕예화 Well done! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:39, 27 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240527033900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240527033900-\uc655\uc608\ud654-20240526140400","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello, Professor. I finished the project essay. Can I publish it? WSH0927 (talk) 01:27, 27 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240527012700","author":"WSH0927","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-WSH0927-20240527012700-WUSHUHAN-Collective_intelligence","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240527034800-WSH0927-20240527012700"]}}-->
@WSH0927 Please use a tool like Grammarly to proofread your article or ask for help from someone fluent in English. There are some grammar and vocabulary errors resulting in sentences that are hard or impossible to understand, for example " Guizhou female Shui Xi soil department during the Ming Dynasty" or
"and developed into an Ai Cui moral wife" or "As she cohabitated with her spouse, She Xiang progressively enhanced the regent director's political acumen".
Or "She Xiang regency, just caught up with the Ming Dynasty and the Yuan army of the Yunnan war".
In " The man was well-known for his proficiency across several Shui West departments, adored by the clansmen, and recognized as "Tho Mu" (King chief)." - who is "the man"?
Please note that those are just examples from the beginning of your article. The errors continue later, ex. "She absorbed a lot of nutrients in Sinology"
There are too many errors in your article for it to be published in English (every second or third sentence is impossible to understand).
A different issue to be fixed is the lack of images. There are modern related entities such as She Xiang Museum - can you find freely licenced images of it or similar places to add to the article? Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:48, 27 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240527034800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240527034800-WSH0927-20240527012700","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Good afternoon Professor,
I am a student participating in the Collective Intelligence course.
I have completed the translation from Chinese to English in my sandbox. I checked the grammar using Grammerly and removed the non neutral parts of the article, as well as modified and deleted references that did not meet the requirements. Please check it.
I reviewed a <Organic food culture> article by @CHENG SHIYI , and left a suggestion on her talk page.
Looking forward to your reply, thank you!TMXX0818 (talk) 10:29, 12 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240512102900","author":"TMXX0818","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-TMXX0818-20240512102900-Deadline_5_and_6_\u2014\u2014LI_MENGRU","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240512115000-TMXX0818-20240512102900"]}}-->
As for your article in English, it is better than it was, but there are still issues raised in the last review that need replying. Have you read comments by TheLonelyPanther, concerning for example the section on 'Poor sourcing' at #Deadline4(Week5) LI MENGRU?
Some of my comments have not been addressed as well (ex. the blog pixnet is still used as a source). Reference 57 is to YouTube. Please remove all references to social media sites and blogs.
Much of the content in the bullet section ('Type and instance') seems like original research. This entire section is so poorly written and chaotic that I think it needs to be deleted wholesale. This is true for much of the article, which is often based on primary sources.
I am afraid that as I said before, much - most - of the article needs to be deleted as not meeting standards of English Wikipedia. As a rule of thumb, anything that is not cited to an academic journal, book, or major newspaper should likely be removed. You could use reliable sources like Zhaozhen (which is missing a url? how can I read it?) to expand the article instead.
Some parts of your article lack references and need to be removed if references cannot be found. Some references are in wrong / broken format (the ones that say note, like [note 13]). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here11:50, 12 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240512115000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240512115000-TMXX0818-20240512102900","replies":["c-TMXX0818-20240525141100-Hanyangprofessor2-20240512115000"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I'm sorry I couldn't find any academic references or major newspapers. Because I have referred to the original Chinese Wikipedia and the references cited seem to be original content. And I found that most of the content in the original text was based on personal comments posted on the internet, so my translation work was very difficult and it was difficult to prove that every sentence had reliable references. I am considering whether it would be better for me to change my article.
If possible, could I start my work again with a new article? Could I translate this article into English? Thank you for your reply!TMXX0818 (talk) 14:11, 25 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240525141100","author":"TMXX0818","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-TMXX0818-20240525141100-Hanyangprofessor2-20240512115000","replies":["c-TMXX0818-20240525141400-TMXX0818-20240525141100"]}}-->
I'm sorry I didn't link to this article. I want to translate it into English. Looking forward to your reply.Thank you. TMXX0818 (talk) 14:14, 25 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240525141400","author":"TMXX0818","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-TMXX0818-20240525141400-TMXX0818-20240525141100","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240527032800-TMXX0818-20240525141400","c-TheLonelyPather-20240527225500-TMXX0818-20240525141400"]}}-->
@TMXX0818 Certainly, you can translate that other article. You will get credit for both projects, so I am sure your grade will be good. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:28, 27 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240527032800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":5,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240527032800-TMXX0818-20240525141400","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
@TMXX0818 This other article has better references. Thank you in advance for your work. Cheers, --The Lonely Pather (talk) 22:55, 27 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240527225500","author":"TheLonelyPather","type":"comment","level":5,"id":"c-TheLonelyPather-20240527225500-TMXX0818-20240525141400","replies":[],"displayName":"The Lonely Pather"}}-->
Hello, professor. I'm LI LINLIN,taking 'Everyday Life and Social Structure' and
'Understanding Wikipedia'.
I have read other's article and left some suggestions on his talk page, please check it.
Have a nice day :)
Leeinm (talk) 14:27, 26 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240526142700","author":"Leeinm","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Leeinm-20240526142700-Deadline6--LI_LINLIN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240527034100-Leeinm-20240526142700"]}}-->
@Leeinm Your comment should be at their talk page, not their sandbox talk page. Please move it from User talk:Hanyuanyuan613/sandbox 打铁花 to User talk:Hanyuanyuan613Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:41, 27 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240527034100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240527034100-Leeinm-20240526142700","replies":["c-Leeinm-20240527050400-Hanyangprofessor2-20240527034100"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Thanks~ Leeinm (talk) 05:04, 27 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240527050400","author":"Leeinm","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Leeinm-20240527050400-Hanyangprofessor2-20240527034100","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240528025000-Leeinm-20240527050400"]}}-->
@Leeinm Good. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:50, 28 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240528025000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240528025000-Leeinm-20240527050400","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello, professor. I'm Changyeop Jung, in the 'Collective Intelligence' class.
I accepted your feedback and fixed it. please check article.Ckdduq0919 (talk) 04:43, 23 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240523044300","author":"Ckdduq0919","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Ckdduq0919-20240523044300-Deadline_7_(Weeks_11-12)_Changyeop_Jung","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240524043100-Ckdduq0919-20240523044300"]}}-->
@Ckdduq0919 I am afraid you did not see my message at #Deadline 6 (week 10) - Changyeop Jung or did not act on it. There are still many errors, including in specific sentences I mentioned, and other sentences you attempted to fix are still incorrect. Please use tools like Grammarly, AI tools or ask for help from someone fluent in English. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:31, 24 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240524043100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240524043100-Ckdduq0919-20240523044300","replies":["c-Ckdduq0919-20240527070000-Hanyangprofessor2-20240524043100"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
@Piotrus at Hanyang I fixed my article by using AI grammar tool. But Among the sentences you pointed out, "Yang's banned songs were all lifted" translates as "were all removed" or "were all revoked," indicating that a specific restriction or regulation has been removed. Ckdduq0919 (talk) 07:00, 27 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240527070000","author":"Ckdduq0919","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Ckdduq0919-20240527070000-Hanyangprofessor2-20240524043100","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240528030200-Ckdduq0919-20240527070000"]}}-->
@Ckdduq0919 That would make sense. You can say that restrictions or bans on her songs were removed (lifted would be ok too). Restrictions or bans can be lifted, songs cannot be lifted.
You are making good progress - almost all grammar and vocabulary issues are fixed, and the article is now well written. Please clarify " various dictatorships in Korea". Was there more than one dictatorship? It would be better to clearly name the particular "dictators" or relevant governments.
For Korean songs/albums/novels and such that do not have an English article, please provide the name in Hangul, like we learned in class yesterday (User:Hanyangprofessor2/Module/MoS). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:02, 28 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240528030200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240528030200-Ckdduq0919-20240527070000","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Hello professor. I'm YUE ZIYI, the student of Sociology of Everyday Life.
I posted here seeking opinions on "Social psychology (sociology)" & "Sailor tattoos". But after a weeks I still haven’t gotten any feedback, what should I do? Please give me some advice. Thanks. YZY2233 (talk) 04:29, 26 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240526042900","author":"YZY2233","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-YZY2233-20240526042900-Deadline6(Week10)_-_Sociology_of_Everyday_Life_-_YUE_ZIYI","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240527033500-YZY2233-20240526042900"]}}-->
@YZY2233 Can you link to the place you posted your requests for opinions? I am afraid your message above has no link for me to review. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:35, 27 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240527033500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240527033500-YZY2233-20240526042900","replies":["c-YZY2233-20240527130300-Hanyangprofessor2-20240527033500"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Sorry professor, I have re-added the link, please check:"Social psychology (sociology)" & "Sailor tattoos". YZY2233 (talk) 13:03, 27 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240527130300","author":"YZY2233","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-YZY2233-20240527130300-Hanyangprofessor2-20240527033500","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240528030600-YZY2233-20240527130300"]}}-->
@YZY2233 Since nobody else replied, I think you can publish your articles. You can also ask User:Ericliu1912 who left a short comment there if they'd like to say something more. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:06, 28 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240528030600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240528030600-YZY2233-20240527130300","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hi professor I finished translating these three english wiki articles into korean. 1985 (Dalos novel), György Dalos and Leila Khaled. Shinseongmin1917 (talk) 09:31, 29 May 2024 (UTC)
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@Shinseongmin1917 Excellent, thank you for teaching about the 1985 novel, it seems quite interesting, I'll add something to that article (in English) shortly :) Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:52, 31 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240531035200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240531035200-Shinseongmin1917-20240529093100","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Good afternoon, Professor.
I have read others posts and left some suggestions on his discussion page, please check it out. Have a great day!Zhuo1221 (talk) 08:12, 31 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240531081200","author":"Zhuo1221","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Zhuo1221-20240531081200-Deadline_6_(Week_10)----JIA_MENGZHUO","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240603080500-Zhuo1221-20240531081200"]}}-->
@Zhuo1221 Well done. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:05, 3 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240603080500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240603080500-Zhuo1221-20240531081200","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Hello, professor. I'm LI PEIYU, in the 'Collective Intelligence in Practice' class, I have completed more than ten edits to Wikipedia this week.Please check it, Special:Contributions/Kikolipu
Have a nice day. Kikolipu (talk) 07:44, 1 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240601074400","author":"Kikolipu","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Kikolipu-20240601074400-Weekly_wiki_edits---LI_PEIYU","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240603090500-Kikolipu-20240601074400"]}}-->
@Kikolipu Good but please remember to add only referenced content (some of your work was removed here), and when uploading pictures, only upload your own works. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here09:05, 3 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240603090500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240603090500-Kikolipu-20240601074400","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Sociology of Everyday Life - HAN YUANYUAN LI HAOCHANG
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Hello Professor, I have made the changes as you requested, please check. Hanyuanyuan613 (talk) 07:56, 2 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240602075600","author":"Hanyuanyuan613","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Hanyuanyuan613-20240602075600-Sociology_of_Everyday_Life_-_HAN_YUANYUAN_LI_HAOCHANG_2","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240603091600-Hanyuanyuan613-20240602075600"]}}-->
@Hanyuanyuan613 Good job adding interlanguage links, but not all changes were done. See my feedback above. For example, I told you to add a blue link to the State Council of China - this has not been done.
There are still language and vocabulary errors, some new. In the second sentence you repeat "national intangible cultural heritage" (perhaps you did not delete the content while adding the interlnauge link). The heading 'value meaning' is not understandable - please look at similar articles and see how this can be written in English. I do not understand what you mean by 'value meaning'.
All headings (sections) should begin with a capital letter. See Mos:headings . Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here09:16, 3 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240603091600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240603091600-Hanyuanyuan613-20240602075600","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I am a student in both the Collective Intelligence in Practice and Introduction to Information Sociology courses.
Here's what I've been working on for this week's Wikipedia edit, please check it out thanks. CHENG SHIYI (talk) 14:49, 2 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240602144900","author":"CHENG SHIYI","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-CHENG_SHIYI-20240602144900-Weekly_editing_-_CHENG_SHIYI_4","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240603091700-CHENG_SHIYI-20240602144900"]}}-->
@CHENG SHIYI Well done, your edits look good. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here09:17, 3 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240603091700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240603091700-CHENG_SHIYI-20240602144900","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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@Wangtao626 Good. Next, you can ask Chinese editors for feedback on Discord or the Help forum. Or try this: zh:维基百科:同行评审 . Please monitor your article for the next few weeks to see if any issues are raised on it through templates. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here09:19, 3 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240603091900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240603091900-Wangtao626-20240603025300","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Hello, professor.
I'm JIA MENGZHUO, in the 'Collective Intelligence in Practice' class.
In May, I completed 80 additional edits on Wikipedia, check it out.Zhuo1221 (talk) 10:40, 31 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240531104000","author":"Zhuo1221","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Zhuo1221-20240531104000-Weekly_wiki_edits---JIA_MENGZHUO_3","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240603081900-Zhuo1221-20240531104000"]}}-->
@Zhuo1221 You are doing very well. I also see you learned about disambiguation from the message on your talk page. Well done Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:19, 3 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240603081900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240603081900-Zhuo1221-20240531104000","replies":["c-Zhuo1221-20240603142600-Hanyangprofessor2-20240603081900"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Good evening, professor. I have reviewed the feedback and made corrections based on the comments provided on the feedback page.Zhuo1221 (talk) 14:26, 3 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240603142600","author":"Zhuo1221","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Zhuo1221-20240603142600-Hanyangprofessor2-20240603081900","replies":[]}}-->
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Hello professor, this is the article I chose for this class. It has been posted on the page, please check it.
韩国的反美情绪Muqing112233 (talk) 07:09, 2 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240602070900","author":"Muqing112233","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Muqing112233-20240602070900-Sociology_of_Everyday_Life\u2014\u2014MU_QING","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240603091000-Muqing112233-20240602070900"]}}-->
@Muqing112233 Good job. If you need help with the issue templated on top, stop by Chinese Discord or discussion forum. The categories seem to have been fine, there was just a stray nowiki code. Stop by my office if you need help. I am also not sure if you need to remove the links you have removed. They seem fine to me. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here09:10, 3 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240603091000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240603091000-Muqing112233-20240602070900","replies":["c-Muqing112233-20240604062200-Hanyangprofessor2-20240603091000"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
professor,I have revised it. Thank you for checking it again. Muqing112233 (talk) 06:22, 4 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240604062200","author":"Muqing112233","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Muqing112233-20240604062200-Hanyangprofessor2-20240603091000","replies":[]}}-->
Sorry Professor, I made a mistake in submitting the link last time and now resubmit it on this page.This is the Wikipedia article I edited, please check it out ,thank you. Jzhdylb (talk) 07:15, 31 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240531071500","author":"Jzhdylb","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Jzhdylb-20240531071500-Deadline_7:_Week_11_---FAN_XINRU","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240603060000-Jzhdylb-20240531071500"]}}-->
@Jzhdylb Well done, your expansion looks good. . If a topic exists in Chinese but not English, please link it using this tool: Template:Interlanguage link . You can see how I did this here. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here06:00, 3 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240603060000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240603060000-Jzhdylb-20240531071500","replies":["c-Jzhdylb-20240604075000-Hanyangprofessor2-20240603060000"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Okay, professor, I will learn how to use it. Thank you for your guidance. Jzhdylb (talk) 07:50, 4 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240604075000","author":"Jzhdylb","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Jzhdylb-20240604075000-Hanyangprofessor2-20240603060000","replies":[]}}-->
I am a student participating in the Collective Intelligence in Practice courses. I have translated the English version of Anti-Chinese sentiment in Korea into Chinese. Here is my sandbox,
Here's what I've been working on for this week's Wikipedia edit, please check it out thanks. Kikolipu (talk) 09:44, 3 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240603094400","author":"Kikolipu","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Kikolipu-20240603094400-Deadline_7_(Week_11)\u2014\u2014LI_PEIYU","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240606043700-Kikolipu-20240603094400"]}}-->
@Kikolipu Good job. Regarding your Chinese article, you can ask Chinese editors for feedback on Discord or the Help forum. Or try this: zh:维基百科:同行评审 and publish your article if you receive no feedback or address issues raised in a week or so. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:37, 6 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240606043700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240606043700-Kikolipu-20240603094400","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Good evening, Professor. I have completed my translation article. I hope you can help me check if there are any areas that need improvement. Please take a look.Zhuo1221 (talk) 14:20, 3 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240603142000","author":"Zhuo1221","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Zhuo1221-20240603142000-Regarding_the_Final_Manuscript---JIA_MENGZHUO","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240606044100-Zhuo1221-20240603142000"]}}-->
@Zhuo1221 Well done, you are almost done. Please check my feedback from few day ago at #Deadline 5(Week 9)---JIA MENGZHUO regarding references and metadata; some still are missing information, such as ""前进中的中国文化遗产研究院". 世界遗产: 144. 2014." which has no English title, etc. You can publish your work anytime, and then we can see if you will receive feedback from other volunteer reviewers. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:41, 6 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240606044100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240606044100-Zhuo1221-20240603142000","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Good morning, Professor. I have completed the 60 additional edits on Wikivoyage for this week. Please review them.Zhuo1221 (talk) 02:23, 4 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240604022300","author":"Zhuo1221","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Zhuo1221-20240604022300-Weekly_editing----JIA_MENGZHUO","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240606044200-Zhuo1221-20240604022300"]}}-->
@Zhuo1221 Good job, that'll give you nice amount of extra credit, but remember to make some edits to English Wikipedia too :) Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:42, 6 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240606044200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240606044200-Zhuo1221-20240604022300","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello, Professor. I have finished the final draft of the project article. Please review it. Thank you. WSH0927 (talk) 12:00, 4 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240604120000","author":"WSH0927","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-WSH0927-20240604120000-WU_SHUHAN-Collective_intelligence","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240606044700-WSH0927-20240604120000"]}}-->
@WSH0927 Well done. Now we can see if you will receive feedback from other volunteer reviewers Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:47, 6 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240606044700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240606044700-WSH0927-20240604120000","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello, Professor.
I am a student in the Collective Intelligence in Practice, Sociology of Everyday Life and Introduction to Information Sociology courses.
Here's what I've been working on for this week's Wikipedia edit, please check it out. Thank you. Rachel.zrq (talk) 04:25, 6 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240606042500","author":"Rachel.zrq","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Rachel.zrq-20240606042500-Weekly_editing_-_ZHANG_RUIQING","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240606050200-Rachel.zrq-20240606042500"]}}-->
@Rachel.zrq Remember that only referenced content is allowed on Wikipedia (see Wikipedia:Verifiability) and only such content counts for our class' credit. You need to add references to your recent (and older) edits if you want them to count for our class. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:02, 6 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240606050200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240606050200-Rachel.zrq-20240606042500","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Hello professor, I am xuedongxin. I have completed the translation task of Wikipedia and revised the question you asked. Check, please. Thank you. Ming Dynasty Zheng familyDonghem (talk) 05:59, 4 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240604055900","author":"Donghem","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Donghem-20240604055900-Sociology_of_Everyday_Life\u2014\u2014XUE_DONGXIN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240606044400-Donghem-20240604055900","c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240606044600-Donghem-20240604055900"]}}-->
@Donghem Well done, you are almost finished. Please double check my review from few days ago at #Deadline 5(Week 9)---XUE DONGXIN . Some references still need more metadata (such as English title in "台湾硏究所, 厦门大学; 编辑部, 中国第一历史档案馆 (1987). 郑成功滿文档案史料选译 (in Chinese). 福建人民出版社. pp. 55–58. ISBN 978-7-211-00169-9."; the English title should be in addition and not replacing the Chinese one. Please let me know if you need help adding it and I'll showy you ow to do so.). You can publish your article (move it to mainspace) anytime, and then we can see if you will receive feedback from other volunteer reviewers. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:44, 6 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240606044400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240606044400-Donghem-20240604055900","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Ps. Also, please ensure that all books in Chinese have a Chinese title, and/or ISBN. For example, Chinese title and/or ISBN are missing from this ref: "Zheng Xurong, "Information on Zheng Chenggong's Activities in Chaozhou", Chaoshan Historical and Cultural Research Center, 2007, pp. 390-391" Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:46, 6 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240606044600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240606044600-Donghem-20240604055900","replies":["c-Donghem-20240606050700-Hanyangprofessor2-20240606044600"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello professor. Thanks for pointing out the errors, I've fixed them. And I have published my article. Thank you so much.Ming Dynasty Zheng familyDonghem (talk) 05:07, 6 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240606050700","author":"Donghem","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Donghem-20240606050700-Hanyangprofessor2-20240606044600","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240607082900-Donghem-20240606050700"]}}-->
@Donghem Good. Please link your articles to from other articles to address the Wikipedia:Orphan issue that has been tagged. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:29, 7 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240607082900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240607082900-Donghem-20240606050700","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
This article is translated from English into Chinese.韩国的性Muqing112233 (talk) 02:36, 5 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240605023600","author":"Muqing112233","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Muqing112233-20240605023600-Collective_intelligence----LIU_XINRUI\u3001MU_QING","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240606045600-Muqing112233-20240605023600"]}}-->
@Muqing112233 Good, but there is more needed. The English article you translated does not contain all the content from the Chinese article, as noted by the review message at the top. I can see that most of the content from the 'Resigned from party and government positions' section is missing. There are other omissions, for example reaction from Taiwan in your translation only covers that of DPP and not that of MC, and is unreferenced. Please ensure all content is translated and referenced. Also, add categories (see Wikipedia:Categorization). Here I will also ping User:Oblivy who reviewed your article during recent AfD discussion and mentioned it is in the need of cleanup - feel free to tell my student what else should be improved (TIA).
Regarding your Chinese article, you can ask Chinese editors for feedback on Discord or the Help forum. Or try this: zh:维基百科:同行评审Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:56, 6 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240606045600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240606045600-Muqing112233-20240605023600","replies":["c-Oblivy-20240606060000-Hanyangprofessor2-20240606045600","c-Muqing112233-20240607071500-Hanyangprofessor2-20240606045600"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Thanks for the ping. As I said at the AfD discussion, it is a well sourced article and I have no concerns about keeping it, but it needs some revision.My concerns were very general but I can give a few examples for improvement:
the lead paragraph contains too much detail about his career and positions - he has his own article, in case anyone needs to know
check "location" in the infobox - there are red links and lack of proper word spacing
there is nothing called "English Tiger News" - the paper can be called the Hong Kong Standard or The Standard (HK).
the article has two sections - background and process - describing in detail his declining health, death, and announcement. This should be one shorter section. It also contains unnecessary details like the prevalence of heart disease among diabetes patients, and him waving to tourists during a visit to Dunhuang
many news sources and official sources appear in bold type which is usually limited to the article subject and related terms
there is a lot of overlap between "farewell ceremony" and "memorial events" and this could perhaps be collapsed into a single (shorter) section highlighting official events and spontaneous ones
I find the long "reactions" section to be a bit pointless but I understand why it's included and don't have a good reason to say it doesn't belong in the article
there were two more "process" sections at the end - one was a copy of material in "reactions" and the other was blank; I've gone ahead and removed them along with an extra paragraph that was a copy of material elsewhere
I hope my comments above help. Oblivy (talk) 06:00, 6 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240606060000","author":"Oblivy","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Oblivy-20240606060000-Hanyangprofessor2-20240606045600","replies":["c-Muqing112233-20240607021800-Oblivy-20240606060000"]}}-->
ok,I understand, I'll try to modify it.Think you. Muqing112233 (talk) 02:18, 7 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240607021800","author":"Muqing112233","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Muqing112233-20240607021800-Oblivy-20240606060000","replies":[]}}-->
I have modified it as you suggested, maybe you can check it again?
Death of Li KeqiangMuqing112233 (talk) 07:15, 7 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240607071500","author":"Muqing112233","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Muqing112233-20240607071500-Hanyangprofessor2-20240606045600","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240607083600-Muqing112233-20240607071500"]}}-->
@Muqing112233 If you want someone other than me (here) to see your reply, please WP:ECHO them like this: @Oblivy
Regarding your edit here. First, you should make sure your edits do not create errors, for example there is now a word (missing space): "MedicineDongyuan"
Second, if an article exits in Chinese Wikipedia but not English Wikipedia, use " Template:Interlanguage link to link to Chinese articles. So instead of removing a link to the "Shuguang Hospital Affiliated to Shanghai University of Traditional Chinese MedicineDongyuan District" you should use the tool (template) linked above so that it looks like this: Shuguang Hospital Affiliated to Shanghai University of Traditional Chinese Medicine [zh]. Note the zh link at the end. PS. I do not understand where the "Dongyuan" is coming from; the article mentions the location (for this hospital) as Huangpu District. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:36, 7 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240607083600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240607083600-Muqing112233-20240607071500","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
the first paragraph in the section 'Ancient Chinese sacrificial rituals' needs a reference; and so does the content in the introduction ("In most Chinese restaurants, there is no tip required unless it is explicitly posted. Tea is almost always provided, either in advance of the diners being seated or immediately afterward. A verbal "thank you" (谢谢; xiexie) should be offered to the server pouring the tea.") Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:00, 6 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240606050000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240606050000-ZHANG0822ZH-20240605070200","replies":["c-ZHANG0822ZH-20240606143200-Hanyangprofessor2-20240606050000"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor, I have added some links, please check them Etiquette in Asia#China, thank you! ZHANG0822ZH (talk) 14:32, 6 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240606143200","author":"ZHANG0822ZH","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-ZHANG0822ZH-20240606143200-Hanyangprofessor2-20240606050000","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240607084100-ZHANG0822ZH-20240606143200"]}}-->
@ZHANG0822ZH Good. But you should try to link more complex terms, such as sacrifice, and do it the first time they are used (you actually link to sacrifice, but only upon this term third or fourth use - please move the link to the first use). And remember to add missing reference(s). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:41, 7 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240607084100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240607084100-ZHANG0822ZH-20240606143200","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Good afternoon Professor, I am a student participating in the Collective Intelligence in Practice courses.
Wishing you a pleasant day! 왕예화 (talk) 07:58, 6 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240606075800","author":"\uc655\uc608\ud654","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-\uc655\uc608\ud654-20240606075800-Deadline_8_\u2014_WANG_YIHUA","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240607084500-\uc655\uc608\ud654-20240606075800"]}}-->
@왕예화 Good job. Please monitor your Chinese article for the next few weeks to ensure any issues raised by Chinese reviewers are addressed. You are doing good job so far! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:45, 7 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240607084500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240607084500-\uc655\uc608\ud654-20240606075800","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Good evening, Professor.
I am a student in both the Collective Intelligence in Practice and Introduction to Information Sociology courses.
I have finished adding the content of the English article ‘Organic food culture’, as well as the Chinese translation of that article, and have posted it.
@CHENG SHIYI Well done. Please monitor your Chinese article for the next few weeks to ensure any issues raised by Chinese reviewers are addressed. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 09:00, 7 June 2024 (UTC) PS. For extra credit, you can consider adding to that article (both in Chiense and English) a section on organic food culture and trends in China. --Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here09:01, 7 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240607090000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240607090000-CHENG_SHIYI-20240606152500","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Good evening, professor,I am a student participating in the Collective Intelligence in Practice courses.
I have completed ten edits on Wikipedia this week, please check.
Wishing you a pleasant day! 왕예화 (talk) 17:10, 6 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240606171000","author":"\uc655\uc608\ud654","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-\uc655\uc608\ud654-20240606171000-Weekly_wiki_edits-WANG_YIHUA_2","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240607090200-\uc655\uc608\ud654-20240606171000"]}}-->
@왕예화 Good job! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here09:02, 7 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240607090200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240607090200-\uc655\uc608\ud654-20240606171000","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor, this is the feedback I leave in other people's user suggestions.Please check it.Thank you! 유신예 (talk) 17:51, 6 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240606175100","author":"\uc720\uc2e0\uc608","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-\uc720\uc2e0\uc608-20240606175100-Deadline_6_(Week_10)-LIU_XINRUI","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240607090200-\uc720\uc2e0\uc608-20240606175100"]}}-->
@유신예 Well done! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here09:02, 7 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240607090200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240607090200-\uc720\uc2e0\uc608-20240606175100","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Hi professor I published translating these two english wiki articles into korean. here and hereJiyoon Leee (talk) 08:08, 7 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240607080800","author":"Jiyoon Leee","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Jiyoon_Leee-20240607080800-Deadline_8_\u2014_Lee_jiyoon","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240607090500-Jiyoon_Leee-20240607080800"]}}-->
@Jiyoon Leee Good but please revise your work with regards to Korean grammar and vocabulary; one of your articles has already been tagged for translation issues due to possible overreliance on machine translation and lack of proofreading. Please try to improve the prose of your translations to address such issues. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here09:05, 7 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240607090500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240607090500-Jiyoon_Leee-20240607080800","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Good afternoon, professor.I have completed ten edits this week, please check.
Special:Contributions/Muqing112233Muqing112233 (talk) 07:28, 7 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240607072800","author":"Muqing112233","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Muqing112233-20240607072800-Sociology_of_Everyday_Life\u2014\u2014MU_QING_2","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240607090600-Muqing112233-20240607072800"]}}-->
Ok - see above. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here09:06, 7 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240607090600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240607090600-Muqing112233-20240607072800","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello professor, I have completed the initial draft of the expansion task for this article, added a section about China, and established a relevant section for South Korea. Please review, thank you very much. Jzhdylb (talk) 14:09, 5 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240505140900","author":"Jzhdylb","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Jzhdylb-20240505140900-Deadline_5:_Week_9_---FAN_XINRU_2","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240508052000-Jzhdylb-20240505140900"]}}-->
@Jzhdylb Unfortunately, most of your additions have been removed from Wikipedia due to concerns over plagiarism and/or copyright violations - please see the information you received on your talk page. Content that is added to Wikipedia cannot be copied from other sources, but needs to be sufficiently rewritten and/or summarized to avoid being identical or significantly similar. The source you used link) is fine but you need to read it and summarize it, not copy paste content from it.
Please read the linked guides and instructions carefully. If you have trouble understanding them, please stop by my office hours and I will explain them more.
When you add further content to Wikipedia, please do it in your sandbox, not directly the public article. I will review it and let you know if it can be copied over to the public article. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:20, 8 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240508052000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240508052000-Jzhdylb-20240505140900","replies":["c-Jzhdylb-20240510042100-Hanyangprofessor2-20240508052000","c-Jzhdylb-20240531071800-Hanyangprofessor2-20240508052000"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Okay professor, I will correct the editing methods and add them to the sandbox. Thank you for your guidance. Jzhdylb (talk) 04:21, 10 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240510042100","author":"Jzhdylb","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Jzhdylb-20240510042100-Hanyangprofessor2-20240508052000","replies":[]}}-->
Hello professor, I expanded the selection of articles in the sandbox.We have expanded the section on "China" and "Korea", please check it out, thank you very much! Jzhdylb (talk) 07:18, 31 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240531071800","author":"Jzhdylb","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Jzhdylb-20240531071800-Hanyangprofessor2-20240508052000","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240603043700-Jzhdylb-20240531071800"]}}-->
@Jzhdylb Good job, your expansion looks good. Please use a tool like Grammarly to double check for English errors - there are some minor issues with vocabulary and punctuation. After you fix them, you can add your content to the main (public article). For references 2 and 3, please add translated English title and other missing metadata (author, publisher). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:37, 3 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240603043700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240603043700-Jzhdylb-20240531071800","replies":["c-Jzhdylb-20240607084500-Hanyangprofessor2-20240603043700"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello professor, I have added the expanded content to the public article according to your suggestion. Please check it out. Thank you very much! Jzhdylb (talk) 08:45, 7 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240607084500","author":"Jzhdylb","type":"comment","level":5,"id":"c-Jzhdylb-20240607084500-Hanyangprofessor2-20240603043700","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240607090800-Jzhdylb-20240607084500"]}}-->
@Jzhdylb Well done Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here09:08, 7 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240607090800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":6,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240607090800-Jzhdylb-20240607084500","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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@Mcx8202229 Good. Regarding your English article, when you add references with Chinese titles, please add English translation of the titles using the translated title parameter. (If you don't know how to do it, ask me in class or during office hours).
Regarding your Chinese article, you can ask Chinese editors for feedback on Discord or the Help forum. Or try this: zh:维基百科:同行评审 and publish your article if you receive no feedback or address issues raised in a week or so. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here09:23, 3 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240603092300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240603092300-Mcx8202229-20240603064600","replies":["c-Mcx8202229-20240603130900-Hanyangprofessor2-20240603092300","c-Mcx8202229-20240604071500-Hanyangprofessor2-20240603092300"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Thank you, professor. Where should I move to? Mcx8202229 🇨🇳❤️ (talk)13:09, 3 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240603130900","author":"Mcx8202229","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Mcx8202229-20240603130900-Hanyangprofessor2-20240603092300","replies":[]}}-->
Hello professor, I have published both articles on the corresponding Wikipedia and added cross-language links. I also decorated my personal homepage and changed my signature. Below are the two articles.
The Lonely Warrior,https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/印度的环境Mcx8202229 🇨🇳❤️ (talk)07:15, 4 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240604071500","author":"Mcx8202229","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Mcx8202229-20240604071500-Hanyangprofessor2-20240603092300","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240606043300-Mcx8202229-20240604071500","c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240606043600-Mcx8202229-20240604071500"]}}-->
@Mcx8202229 Well done. For your Chinese article, as you can see, there is one small problem tagged with a warning template at the top of the article. This is because your article has links to English Wikipedia, but done without the proper use of zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi .Please adjust your links to use this tool. You can easily find them in code editing mode, by doing a CTRL+F search for the string ":en". If you don't know how to fix this, stop by my office or ask me in class and I'll show you. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:33, 6 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240606043300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240606043300-Mcx8202229-20240604071500","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
It should look like this: Li Naiwen [zh]Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:36, 6 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240606043600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240606043600-Mcx8202229-20240604071500","replies":["c-Mcx8202229-20240606055800-Hanyangprofessor2-20240606043600"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear professor, my Chinese article has been revised.And my English article, am I right to revise it this way? Please help me point out the problem, professor. I would be very grateful. Mcx8202229 🇨🇳❤️ (talk)05:58, 6 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240606055800","author":"Mcx8202229","type":"comment","level":5,"id":"c-Mcx8202229-20240606055800-Hanyangprofessor2-20240606043600","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240607082300-Mcx8202229-20240606055800"]}}-->
@Mcx8202229 Please revise the links in the English article as follows: if an article exits in Chinese Wikipedia but not English Wikipedia, use Template:Interlanguage link to link to Chinese articles like zh:李乃文 . It should look like this: Li Naiwen [zh] .
Please let me know if this is clear or not. If not, ask me in class next time and I will demonstrate to you how to do this. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:23, 7 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240607082300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":6,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240607082300-Mcx8202229-20240606055800","replies":["c-Mcx8202229-20240607120700-Hanyangprofessor2-20240607082300"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Thank you, professor, I probably know, but I don't know what else I need to change right now. I'll ask you next Monday Mcx8202229 🇨🇳❤️ (talk)12:07, 7 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240607120700","author":"Mcx8202229","type":"comment","level":7,"id":"c-Mcx8202229-20240607120700-Hanyangprofessor2-20240607082300","replies":[]}}-->
Muqing112233 (talk) 07:28, 7 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240607072800","author":"Muqing112233","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Muqing112233-20240607072800-Collective_intelligence----MU_QING","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240607090300-Muqing112233-20240607072800"]}}-->
@Muqing112233 Good! But remember that only referenced content can be added to Wikipedia and counts for our assignment; some of the content you added does not appear to have references - please try to fix this shortly. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here09:03, 7 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240607090300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240607090300-Muqing112233-20240607072800","replies":["c-Muqing112233-20240608071900-Hanyangprofessor2-20240607090300"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Thank you professor.I have added a quote and a picture based on your suggestion. Please check again. Muqing112233 (talk) 07:19, 8 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240608071900","author":"Muqing112233","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Muqing112233-20240608071900-Hanyangprofessor2-20240607090300","replies":[]}}-->
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Good morning Professor.
I have read the posts of other students and left feedback,
Have a nice day! 왕예화 (talk) 16:36, 19 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240519163600","author":"\uc655\uc608\ud654","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-\uc655\uc608\ud654-20240519163600-Deadline_6(Week_10)-_WANG_YIHUA","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240520033500-\uc655\uc608\ud654-20240519163600"]}}-->
@왕예화 Good - I hope you will get feedback that is at least as helpful as the one you left.
Same problem as above - @Hhhlx - please copy your message too. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:35, 20 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240520033500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240520033500-\uc655\uc608\ud654-20240519163600","replies":["c-\uc655\uc608\ud654-20240526155900-Hanyangprofessor2-20240520033500","c-Hhhlx-20240607170000-Hanyangprofessor2-20240520033500"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello professor, I have made the necessary modifications,Please review왕예화 (talk) 15:59, 26 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240526155900","author":"\uc655\uc608\ud654","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-\uc655\uc608\ud654-20240526155900-Hanyangprofessor2-20240520033500","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240527033000-\uc655\uc608\ud654-20240526155900"]}}-->
@왕예화 Good, now it is in the right place. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:30, 27 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240527033000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240527033000-\uc655\uc608\ud654-20240526155900","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello professor,I'm sorry I didn't get your message until now. I have made the necessary modifications,Please reviewHhhlx (talk) 17:00, 7 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240607170000","author":"Hhhlx","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Hhhlx-20240607170000-Hanyangprofessor2-20240520033500","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240609035400-Hhhlx-20240607170000"]}}-->
@Hhhlx Well done. You can try to nominate your articles for WP:DYK if you want, for extra credit. But you'll have to monitor the review and reply to the reviewer(s). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:54, 9 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240609035400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240609035400-Hhhlx-20240607170000","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Looking forward to your reply:) Leeinm (talk) 14:13, 26 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240526141300","author":"Leeinm","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Leeinm-20240526141300-Deadline7(week11-12)--LI_LINLIN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240527034000-Leeinm-20240526141300"]}}-->
@Leeinm Well done. I think your article 3 needs more blue links (see Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Linking / zh:维基百科:格式手册/链接). Other than that, yes, you can publish your work - well done! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:40, 27 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240527034000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240527034000-Leeinm-20240526141300","replies":["c-Leeinm-20240530033800-Hanyangprofessor2-20240527034000","c-Leeinm-20240530075300-Hanyangprofessor2-20240527034000"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I've add more blue links in my article3, plz check here.
Hope u have a nice day~ Leeinm (talk) 03:38, 30 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240530033800","author":"Leeinm","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Leeinm-20240530033800-Hanyangprofessor2-20240527034000","replies":[]}}-->
Hello Professor.
I have published article 1.2.4 and added translation code to the discussion page of the article in accordance with Wikipedia's rules. It has also been edited in wikidata to link the translated article to the original article.You can check it here.
Thanks~ Leeinm (talk) 07:53, 30 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240530075300","author":"Leeinm","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Leeinm-20240530075300-Hanyangprofessor2-20240527034000","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240531032900-Leeinm-20240530075300","c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240531033300-Leeinm-20240530075300"]}}-->
@Leeinm Excellent! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:29, 31 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240531032900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240531032900-Leeinm-20240530075300","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
PS. There is a minor error in two of your articles as indicated by the error message at top - some contain links to English Wikipedia, but done without the proper use of zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi .
Please adjust your links to use this tool. You can easily find them in code editing mode, by doing a CTRL+F search for the string ":en". If you don't know how to fix this, stop by my office or ask me in class and I'll show you. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:33, 31 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240531033300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240531033300-Leeinm-20240530075300","replies":["c-Leeinm-20240531061300-Hanyangprofessor2-20240531033300"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I fix the contain which have linked to English Wikipedia.
Thank you ~ Leeinm (talk) 06:13, 31 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240531061300","author":"Leeinm","type":"comment","level":5,"id":"c-Leeinm-20240531061300-Hanyangprofessor2-20240531033300","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240603043800-Leeinm-20240531061300"]}}-->
@Leeinm Good. But I see that here you removed the content linking to English Wikipedia. It would be better to restore it and link it properly using the interlanguage tool I linked above. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:38, 3 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240603043800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":6,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240603043800-Leeinm-20240531061300","replies":["c-Leeinm-20240607091000-Hanyangprofessor2-20240603043800"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello, Professor.
I have fixed the contain links to English Wikipedia . You can check it out here.
Thank you~ Leeinm (talk) 09:10, 7 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240607091000","author":"Leeinm","type":"comment","level":7,"id":"c-Leeinm-20240607091000-Hanyangprofessor2-20240603043800","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240609035900-Leeinm-20240607091000"]}}-->
@Leeinm Very good job! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:59, 9 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240609035900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":8,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240609035900-Leeinm-20240607091000","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Good evening, Professor. I have checked the progress of another member's work and commented on it. Please check it, thank you.AYAO32269 (talk) 12:35, 7 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240607123500","author":"AYAO32269","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-AYAO32269-20240607123500-Deadline_6_-----ZHANG_LINYUE","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240609040000-AYAO32269-20240607123500"]}}-->
@AYAO32269 Good Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:00, 9 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240609040000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240609040000-AYAO32269-20240607123500","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I am Wang Siwen, a student of everyday life and social structure.My school number is 2023025414.Professor, my home network is not good, the submission of homework was postponed to 12 o'clock sharp, but when I submitted the homework, it was 11:59, I finished this homework.Just because the network is delayed by a minute without committing.But I did my homework carefully, and there were documentation and video formats.It has been sent to your Google and LMS mailboxes to demonstrate that job submissions failed at exactly twelve o'clock due to network delays.I'm really anxious.Please check.Thank you! 220.74.81.4 (talk) 15:32, 7 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240607153200","author":"220.74.81.4","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-220.74.81.4-20240607153200-Project_3_submission_failed","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240609040100-220.74.81.4-20240607153200"]}}-->
Ok. But please remember to sign your messages on wiki. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:01, 9 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240609040100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240609040100-220.74.81.4-20240607153200","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Hello professor.
I'm CHENG SIYU, the student of Sociology of Everyday Life.
I have revised and published the translations of the articles "observer bias" and "Women's clothing in China". I have also added relevant information to Wikidata. 1. 2. Please check it out.
Wish you a happy weekend. Csiiiyu (talk) 16:37, 7 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240607163700","author":"Csiiiyu","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Csiiiyu-20240607163700-Deadline_8_(The_Finals_Week)_-_Sociology_of_Everyday_Life_-_CHENG_SIYU","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240609040200-Csiiiyu-20240607163700"]}}-->
@Csiiiyu Well done. Now please monitor the articles to see if Chinese reviewers will leave you any feedback. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:02, 9 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240609040200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240609040200-Csiiiyu-20240607163700","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Hi Professor, we have completed and posted our two articles. But there seems to be a problem with the Happy Baby article, we have revised it according to the suggestions, and now I would like to ask you, Professor, to see what other revisions you can make. Thanks.
集约化畜牧业LIYULUN (talk) 18:26, 7 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240607182600","author":"LIYULUN","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-LIYULUN-20240607182600-Deadline_8_(The_Finals_Week)-LIYULUN_,SHAOJIANUAN,_group8(Collective_Intelligenc","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240609041500-LIYULUN-20240607182600"]}}-->
@LIYULUN Good progress. In Happy Baby, I see that the first two paragraphs of 'Critical reception' section are missing a reference - please add it (them) as necessary. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:15, 9 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240609041500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240609041500-LIYULUN-20240607182600","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Good afternoon, Professor.
I am a student in both the Collective Intelligence in Practice and Introduction to Information Sociology courses.
Here's my Wikipedia edit assignment for this week, please check it out, thanks.
Have a great weekend. CHENG SHIYI (talk) 08:28, 8 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240608082800","author":"CHENG SHIYI","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-CHENG_SHIYI-20240608082800-Weekly_wiki_edits\u2014CHENG_SHIYI_2","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240609041900-CHENG_SHIYI-20240608082800"]}}-->
@CHENG SHIYI Good job Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:19, 9 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240609041900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240609041900-CHENG_SHIYI-20240608082800","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Sociology of Everyday Life - HAN YUANYUAN LI HAOCHANG
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Good evening, professor. I have revised the article. Please help me check if there is anything else that needs to be revised. Thank you, professor. Hanyuanyuan613 (talk) 09:59, 8 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240608095900","author":"Hanyuanyuan613","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Hanyuanyuan613-20240608095900-Sociology_of_Everyday_Life_-_HAN_YUANYUAN_LI_HAOCHANG_3","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240609042600-Hanyuanyuan613-20240608095900"]}}-->
You can try to nominate your articles for WP:DYK if you want, for extra credit. But you'll have to monitor the review and reply to the reviewer(s). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:26, 9 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240609042600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240609042600-Hanyuanyuan613-20240608095900","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Hello, professor.
I'm JIA MENGZHUO, in the 'Collective Intelligence in Practice' class.
I completed 20 additional edits on Wikipedia this week. Please check it.Zhuo1221 (talk) 13:03, 8 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240608130300","author":"Zhuo1221","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Zhuo1221-20240608130300-Weekly_wiki_edits---JIA_MENGZHUO_4","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240609042900-Zhuo1221-20240608130300"]}}-->
@Zhuo1221 Well done. Regarding your Chinese Academy... project, you can try to nominate your articles for WP:DYK if you want, for extra credit. But you'll have to monitor the review and reply to the reviewer(s). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:29, 9 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240609042900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240609042900-Zhuo1221-20240608130300","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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�Everydaylife and Social Structure article translation- Kim Yu Jin
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Hello professor, I've completed the translation of the article titled 'censorship of TicTok'. Please review it. Thank you.https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%ED%8B%B1%ED%86%A1_%EA%B2%80%EC%97%B4Huejyi (talk) 13:09, 8 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240608130900","author":"Huejyi","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Huejyi-20240608130900-\ufffdEverydaylife_and_Social_Structure_article_translation-_Kim_Yu_Jin","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240609043100-Huejyi-20240608130900"]}}-->
@Huejyi Good. For articles that exist on English but not Korean Wikipedia, please use ko:틀:임시링크; if it is too hard please ask me in class or during office hours and I'll show you how to use it. Please monitor your article to see if you receive any feedback from Korean reviewers over the next two weeks Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:31, 9 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240609043100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240609043100-Huejyi-20240608130900","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Good evening, Professor.
I am a student in both the Collective Intelligence in Practice and Introduction to Information Sociology courses.
I have finished adding the content of the English article Anak Krakatoa,as well as the Chinese translation of that article, and have posted it.
@Shuo1103 Well done. Please monitor the article and check for feedback from Chinese editors. I see someone has proposed a merge of your article; you should take part in that discussion and try to explain why there are different (for example, English Wikipedia does not merge those topics). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:35, 9 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240609043500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240609043500-Shuo1103-20240608131600","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Good evening, Professor.
I'm JIA MENGZHUO, in the 'Collective Intelligence in Practice' class.
I have completed the task of translating the 'China Academy of Cultural Heritage' into English and finished moving the article on Wikipedia. Please review it.Zhuo1221 (talk) 13:40, 8 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240608134000","author":"Zhuo1221","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Zhuo1221-20240608134000-Deadline_8_(The_Finals_Week)---JIA_MENGZHUO","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240609044100-Zhuo1221-20240608134000"]}}-->
@Zhuo1221 Well done. Regarding your Chinese Academy... project, you can try to nominate your articles for WP:DYK if you want, for extra credit. But you'll have to monitor the review and reply to the reviewer(s). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:41, 9 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240609044100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240609044100-Zhuo1221-20240608134000","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Collective Intelligence in Practice wiki project-ZHANG RUIQING
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Hello, Professor!
I have finished translating and posted my two Article Assignments. They are: 日本—朝鲜关系 (Japan-North Korea relations), 韩国的养老金政策(Pension policy in South Korea).
Please check them, Thanks!
Have a nice weekend. Rachel.zrq (talk) 14:43, 8 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240608144300","author":"Rachel.zrq","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Rachel.zrq-20240608144300-Collective_Intelligence_in_Practice_wiki_project-ZHANG_RUIQING","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240609044500-Rachel.zrq-20240608144300"]}}-->
@Rachel.zrq Well done. Please monitor your articles over the next few weeks to see if Chinese reviewers will have any feedback. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:45, 9 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240609044500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240609044500-Rachel.zrq-20240608144300","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Hello professor, I also completed Deadline 5. Please check it. Attached is the link.
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Seungmilsm/sandboxSeungmilsm (talk) 13:19, 9 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240609131900","author":"Seungmilsm","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Seungmilsm-20240609131900-Deadline_5_(week9)_Lee_Seung_Mi","replies":[]}}-->
Comments left under posts by other blog editors. Please check.
Comments left under discussion on other editors' Wikipedia pages. Please check.
Thank you for your time and guidance.Zhuo1221 (talk) 15:30, 8 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240608153000","author":"Zhuo1221","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Zhuo1221-20240608153000-Deadline_7_(Extra_credit_opportunity_)_---JIA_MENGZHUO","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240609044800-Zhuo1221-20240608153000"]}}-->
@Zhuo1221 Very nice. For more extra points, please add more categories to your image uploads like File:刚完成的佛像搭建.jpg. For example, there always should be a category for location (city/town/village/province). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:48, 9 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240609044800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240609044800-Zhuo1221-20240608153000","replies":["c-Zhuo1221-20240609082400-Hanyangprofessor2-20240609044800"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello, Professor!
I'm JIA MENGZHUO, in the 'Collective Intelligence in Practice' class.
I've added a location category for the images I've uploaded, please check it.Zhuo1221 (talk) 08:24, 9 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240609082400","author":"Zhuo1221","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Zhuo1221-20240609082400-Hanyangprofessor2-20240609044800","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240610035800-Zhuo1221-20240609082400"]}}-->
@Zhuo1221 Good! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:58, 10 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240610035800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240610035800-Zhuo1221-20240609082400","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Good afternoon, Professor, this is the Wikipedia I edited 20 times this week.Please check it , thank you! 유신예 (talk) 10:01, 9 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240609100100","author":"\uc720\uc2e0\uc608","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-\uc720\uc2e0\uc608-20240609100100-Weekly_Editor-_LIU_XINRUI_2","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240610042200-\uc720\uc2e0\uc608-20240609100100"]}}-->
@유신예 Good, but some of the content you added appears to be unreferenced. Remember that only referenced content counts for our class credit.
Please also review the comment here: Talk:Sichuan_cuisine#Translation_of_yuxiang and consider replying there and if possible, fixing the issue in the article Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:22, 10 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240610042200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240610042200-\uc720\uc2e0\uc608-20240609100100","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
@Liangyiqiao2004 Regarding your Chinese article,you can now publish (WP:MOVE) your article. After that, please add WP:CATEGORIES: and link your article to the English one with the tool explained here Help:Interlanguage links . After that, you should monitor your article to check for any feedback from Chinese reviewers over the next few weeks.
Regarding the English Deng Dian article, please see the feedback I provided about it to your team mate above at #Chinese translation into EnglishPiotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:25, 10 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240610042500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240610042500-Liangyiqiao2004-20240609104200","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Hello professor, I completed Deadline 4. Please check it. Attached is the link.
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@Seungmilsm If you are translating article from English Wikipedia to Korean Wikipedia, your sandbox should be at Korean Wikipedia, not English Wikipedia. Please copy your article there, and add missing links and other content (images, references, etc). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:27, 10 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240610042700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240610042700-Seungmilsm-20240609131900","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Good evening, Professor.
I am a student in both the Collective Intelligence in Practice and Sociology of Everyday Life aka Everyday Life courses. I have three articles that need to be translated, which are hangzhou drily,中国文化对日本文化的影响, History of Chongqing. I have completed the first two articles, and due to sandbox limitations, I have just started translating the third article: History of Chongqing. I will complete the last article within the next week. Please review my first two articles and provide feedback, and I will make revisions accordingly. After completing the translation task for my third article, I will inform you again on the discussion page. ZHANGQI1066 (talk) 14:25, 9 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240609142500","author":"ZHANGQI1066","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-ZHANGQI1066-20240609142500-Deadline_8_(The_Finals_Week)\u2014ZHANG_QI","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240610043200-ZHANGQI1066-20240609142500"]}}-->
@ZHANGQI1066 Regarding your English article, if a topic exists in Chinese but not English, please link it using this tool: Template:Interlanguage link. If you don't know how to use this tool, ask me in class or during office hours and I'll demonstrate.
Please also note that some of your content was removed as it was unreferenced. You can restore it with references added.
Regarding your Chinese article,you can now publish (WP:MOVE) your article. After that, please add WP:CATEGORIES: and link your article to the English one with the tool explained here Help:Interlanguage links . After that, you should monitor your article to check for any feedback from Chinese reviewers over the next few weeks. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:32, 10 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240610043200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240610043200-ZHANGQI1066-20240609142500","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Hi professor. I'm HongGyeongmin taking Collective intelligence.
I published translating these two english wiki articles into korean. Dune2 / WonkaHkm5420 (talk) 04:37, 10 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240610043700","author":"Hkm5420","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Hkm5420-20240610043700-Deadline_8_(The_Finals_Week)_:_HongGyeongmin","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240610043900-Hkm5420-20240610043700"]}}-->
@Hkm5420 Regarding your Korean articles, good job. Now, you should monitor your article to check for any feedback from Korean reviewers over the next few weeks. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:39, 10 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240610043900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240610043900-Hkm5420-20240610043700","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I have added some links, please check them Etiquette in Asia#China, thank you! ZHANG0822ZH (talk) 01:30, 10 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240610013000","author":"ZHANG0822ZH","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-ZHANG0822ZH-20240610013000-Collective_intelligence\uff1aZHANG_ZEHUA_2","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240610043800-ZHANG0822ZH-20240610013000"]}}-->
@ZHANG0822ZH Good progress. Please don't forget about adding references to content that is unreferenced. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:38, 10 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240610043800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240610043800-ZHANG0822ZH-20240610013000","replies":["c-ZHANG0822ZH-20240610052300-Hanyangprofessor2-20240610043800"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor, I have added references for the uncited contentEtiquette in Asia#China. Please check it out. Thank you! ZHANG0822ZH (talk) 05:23, 10 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240610052300","author":"ZHANG0822ZH","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-ZHANG0822ZH-20240610052300-Hanyangprofessor2-20240610043800","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240610055500-ZHANG0822ZH-20240610052300"]}}-->
@ZHANG0822ZH Good job! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:55, 10 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240610055500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240610055500-ZHANG0822ZH-20240610052300","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
@Minis707 Regarding your Korean articles, good job. You can now publish (WP:MOVE) your article. After that, please add WP:CATEGORIES: and link your article to the English one with the tool explained here Help:Interlanguage links Now, you should monitor your article to check for any feedback from Korean reviewers over the next few weeks. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:56, 10 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240610055600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240610055600-Minis707-20240610051400","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Hello professor.
I'm YUE ZIYI, the student of Sociology of Everyday Life.
I have revised and published the translations of the articles "Social psychology (sociology)" and "Sailor tattoos".I have also added relevant information to Wikidata.1. 2. Please check it out. YZY2233 (talk) 05:41, 10 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240610054100","author":"YZY2233","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-YZY2233-20240610054100-Deadline_8_(The_Finals_Week)_-_Sociology_of_Everyday_Life-YUE_ZIYI","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240610055700-YZY2233-20240610054100"]}}-->
@YZY2233 Well done. Now, you should monitor your article to check for any feedback from Chinese reviewers over the next few weeks Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:57, 10 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240610055700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240610055700-YZY2233-20240610054100","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
+Also, I sent you an attendance confirmation that was not processed by email. Please reply. Thank you. Seohyun S (talk) 05:54, 10 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240610055400","author":"Seohyun S","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Seohyun_S-20240610055400-Deadline_3_(Week_4):_\uc190\uc11c\ud604_Seohyun_Son","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240610060200-Seohyun_S-20240610055400"]}}-->
@Seohyun S This is a good start, but there are various fixes needed, including finishing the translation (Representative artists section). Make sure all links are included; if an article exists in English but not Korean, please use ko:틀:임시링크; if it is too hard please ask me in class or during office hours and I'll show you how to use it. In two cases, you link to external websites from your article - such links should be used only as references. Much of your translation is missing footnotes, please ensure that each footnote is present in your translation. Images should be added as well.
After you address those issues, you can publish (WP:MOVE) your article. I recommend you ask me for feedback before moving to avoid having your article deleted from Korean Wikipedia, as your project is significantly delayed (you should have submitted this for a review over a month ago at the current stage).
After moving your article, please add WP:CATEGORIES: and link your article to the English one with the tool explained here Help:Interlanguage links Now, you should monitor your article to check for any feedback from Korean reviewers over the next few weeks. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here06:02, 10 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240610060200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240610060200-Seohyun_S-20240610055400","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I'm ZHONG XIN, a student in your Collective Intelligence in Practice: Understanding Wikipedia course.
I have finished adding content to the Chinese article “中国史前文化”, as well as the English translation of the article, and have posted it.
However, when I posted it, I realized that the title of my original translation “Prehistory of China” had already been taken, so I changed the title of my article to “The Prehistoric Culture of China".
Please check it and I would be grateful if you could give me any suggestions. Zhongxxin (talk) 11:43, 6 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240606114300","author":"Zhongxxin","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Zhongxxin-20240606114300-Deadline_8_\u2014ZHONG_XIN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240607085400-Zhongxxin-20240606114300"]}}-->
Please use Template:Main for linking "main articles"; see how I've done it here. Please also add correct WP:CATEGORIES to the article (check which ones exist in Chinese Wikipedia and try to add similar to your article; some may exist on English Wikipedia - check their interwiki links; if there is no identical category, try to add one or more of the relevant parent categories; if you don't know how to do so, ask me in class and I'll demonstrate). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:54, 7 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240607085400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240607085400-Zhongxxin-20240606114300","replies":["c-Zhongxxin-20240609141900-Hanyangprofessor2-20240607085400"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello Professor, I have made some changes to my article according to your request, please check it again.After moving my article, one of the editors has been helping me to fix some of the errors, there are two places marked [clarification needed] but I don't really know how to change them, I would be grateful if the professor gives me some advice. Thanks. Zhongxxin (talk) 14:19, 9 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240609141900","author":"Zhongxxin","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Zhongxxin-20240609141900-Hanyangprofessor2-20240607085400","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240610034300-Zhongxxin-20240609141900"]}}-->
@Zhongxxin Well done! Please review the very useful comments you can see in edit history of your article left by volunteer @Folly Moxhere; I also expect it is that volunteer who asked for clarification - you can contact her on her talk page or see if they reply here, and I am sure they'll explain to you what needs to be clarified further. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:43, 10 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240610034300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240610034300-Zhongxxin-20240609141900","replies":["c-Folly_Mox-20240610043800-Hanyangprofessor2-20240610034300"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
(summoned by ping) My apologies; I wasn't aware I was interfering with a class assignment. Zhongxxin, there's no need to open a conversation on my usertalk; we can discuss anything related to the article at Talk:Prehistory of China. The [clarification needed] tags were placed – in admittedly poor practice on my behalf – where I was not entirely understanding the translation, as notes to myself to peruse the Chinese language version of the article, which I have not yet done. I expect I'll be able to resolve them.Apologies again for my confusion. Folly Mox (talk) 04:38, 10 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240610043800","author":"Folly Mox","type":"comment","level":5,"id":"c-Folly_Mox-20240610043800-Hanyangprofessor2-20240610034300","replies":["c-Zhongxxin-20240610045400-Folly_Mox-20240610043800"]}}-->
Hello, thank you very much for your many useful suggestions on this article, it has helped me a lot. I'm a newbie editor who just started learning Wikipedia not long ago, and since English is not my first language, there may be some things that seem to be translated strangely, so thank you again for correcting me! Zhongxxin (talk) 04:54, 10 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240610045400","author":"Zhongxxin","type":"comment","level":6,"id":"c-Zhongxxin-20240610045400-Folly_Mox-20240610043800","replies":["c-Folly_Mox-20240610055000-Zhongxxin-20240610045400"]}}-->
You're welcome, Zhongxxin. Your English is a good deal better than my Chinese, and the two languages are not always easy to translate between. I'm glad to have been able to help in some way, and hope my edit summaries did not feel unkind. Folly Mox (talk) 05:50, 10 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240610055000","author":"Folly Mox","type":"comment","level":7,"id":"c-Folly_Mox-20240610055000-Zhongxxin-20240610045400","replies":["c-Zhongxxin-20240610142600-Folly_Mox-20240610055000"]}}-->
Your summaries are very useful for me 😀 Thanks! Zhongxxin (talk) 14:26, 10 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240610142600","author":"Zhongxxin","type":"comment","level":8,"id":"c-Zhongxxin-20240610142600-Folly_Mox-20240610055000","replies":[]}}-->
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Dear professor.
We the student participating in the Collective Intelligence in Practice.
According to the comments you gave us before, we have made some modifications to the article and discussed with the administrator. This is our revised 1 and 2. Please check. Thank you.😊 Hhhlx (talk) 17:12, 7 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240607171200","author":"Hhhlx","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Hhhlx-20240607171200-Deadline_8_(The_Finals_Week)-HUANG_LINGXUAN&LIU_YUNXIANG","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240609041100-Hhhlx-20240607171200"]}}-->
@Hhhlx Your Chinese article progress is good. However, your additions to the English article that had no references had been removed. Please see here. You can restore your content only if you can add references that confirm the claims made. Please see (read) WP:V. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:11, 9 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240609041100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240609041100-Hhhlx-20240607171200","replies":["c-Hhhlx-20240611033200-Hanyangprofessor2-20240609041100"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Professor, thank you for your advice. My team and I will add some necessary references to the article. thank you.Hhhlx (talk) 03:32, 11 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240611033200","author":"Hhhlx","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Hhhlx-20240611033200-Hanyangprofessor2-20240609041100","replies":[]}}-->
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Hello professor, I am a student of the Sociology of Everyday Life and Collective Intelligence in Practice wiki.
2.Transferred the content I thought was important to Lin Chih-chien.
3. There may have been unfinished blogs in Blogging through Wikipedia and Blogging Through Sociology of Everyday Life, but now they are all completed.
4. I have completed the review in Blogging Through Wkipedia (Comment 1), and I have also completed the review in Blogging Through Sociology of Everyday Life (Comment 2).
Please check it, professor. thank you!! Zhangzhang111 (talk) 06:33, 10 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240610063300","author":"Zhangzhang111","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Zhangzhang111-20240610063300-The_Finals_Week_-_Sociology_of_Everyday_Life_and_Collective_Intelligence_in_Prac","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240612034500-Zhangzhang111-20240610063300"]}}-->
@Zhangzhang111 Good. In Lin Chih-chien please ensure you use this name variant - in some parts of the text you still use "Lin Zhijian" instead. You can also expand his article from Chinese one for extra credit (translating referenced parts of Chinese biography into English one). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:45, 12 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240612034500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240612034500-Zhangzhang111-20240610063300","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I added four photos to Wikimedia Commons, two of which were also included in the monthly photography challenge. Through these activities, I not only enriched Wikipedia's multimedia resources, but also strengthened my photography skills and editing abilities.
Photos from June 10, 2024 and April 26, 2024 participated in the monthly challenge
Having polite discussions with other editors:
During the process of editing Wikipedia entries, I had many polite and constructive discussions with other editors. These interactions helped me understand Wikipedia's editorial policy and community guidelines, and also improved my communication skills.But the interface has been deleted after discussion, so I can't list the evidence.
I created my own user page on Wikipedia. Through this page, I detailed my interests and editing areas, and shared some personal information to let other editors get to know me better, thereby promoting cooperation and interaction.
Modifying signature:
In order to improve the recognition of my user page, I modified my signature. Mcx8202229 🇨🇳❤️ (talk)06:54, 10 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240610065400","author":"Mcx8202229","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Mcx8202229-20240610065400-Extra_Credit","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240612034700-Mcx8202229-20240610065400"]}}-->
@Mcx8202229 Well done completing various extra credit tasks! Consider uploading some more nice photos you have taken to Wikimedia Commons for extra credit, now that you know how to do this. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:47, 12 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240612034700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240612034700-Mcx8202229-20240610065400","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Dear Professor,I'm HUANG YANHAN, the student of Collective Intelligence in Practice.I am writing to inform you that I have completed the editing of the article titled "电影审查制度" (Film Censorship System).Please let me know if there are any further revisions or additional tasks you would like me to undertake.
Thank you for your guidance and support. HYH031277777 (talk) 08:10, 10 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240610081000","author":"HYH031277777","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-HYH031277777-20240610081000-Deadline_8_(The_Finals_Week)_HUANG_YANHAN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240612035000-HYH031277777-20240610081000"]}}-->
@HYH031277777 Well done. Please monitor your article for the next few weeks to see if there are any comments from Chinese reviewers. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:50, 12 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240612035000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240612035000-HYH031277777-20240610081000","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Seohyun S (talk) 11:19, 10 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240610111900","author":"Seohyun S","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Seohyun_S-20240610111900-Deadline_3_(Week_4):_\uc190\uc11c\ud604_Seohyun_Son_2","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240612035300-Seohyun_S-20240610111900"]}}-->
@Seohyun S I see that your work is progressing nicely. Your translations look good and are close to being finished, very good.
Your images need captions.
For articles that exist on English but not Korean Wikipedia, please use ko:틀:임시링크; if it is too hard please ask me in class or during office hours and I'll show you how to use it.
When you have finished translating all content (including references and image captions), you can move your article to public space like I mentioned above. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:53, 12 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240612035300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240612035300-Seohyun_S-20240610111900","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Hello Professor. I would like to report my progress to you.
1. I have completed all the extra credit blog questions. Please check.
2. I will make additional Wikipedia edits
3. My Wikipedia translation from English to Chinese is also completed. I have made modifications and added peer review according to your requirements and suggestions. Please check. Is my article ready to be published? I will continue to revise it after it is published. Looking forward to your reply. Thank you for your reply. Lihaochang678 (talk) 15:42, 10 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240610154200","author":"Lihaochang678","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Lihaochang678-20240610154200-Deadline_7_(Weeks_11-12)_LI_HAOCHANG","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240612035500-Lihaochang678-20240610154200"]}}-->
@Lihaochang678 Good job, you can publish your article. After publishing (moving) your article, please add WP:CATEGORIES: and link your article to the English one with the tool explained here Help:Interlanguage links Now, you should monitor your article to check for any feedback from Chinese reviewers over the next few weeks Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:55, 12 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240612035500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240612035500-Lihaochang678-20240610154200","replies":["c-Lihaochang678-20240612040500-Hanyangprofessor2-20240612035500"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Professor, thank you for your reply. I will continue to pay attention to my article and make revisions. Lihaochang678 (talk) 04:05, 12 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240612040500","author":"Lihaochang678","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Lihaochang678-20240612040500-Hanyangprofessor2-20240612035500","replies":[]}}-->
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@Sangrok02 Your expansion is a good start, but remember to add references. Only referenced content counts for our assignment (unreferenced content can be removed from Wikipedia).
Also, please remember to log in while editing Wikipedia (including leaving messages); edits that are logged out will not count for the class credit. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:34, 3 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240503073400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240503073400-2001:E60:9373:C250:302E:7E33:33B0:15FA-20240502045500","replies":["c-Sangrok02-20240613053000-Hanyangprofessor2-20240503073400"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I modified it Sangrok02 (talk) 05:30, 13 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240613053000","author":"Sangrok02","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Sangrok02-20240613053000-Hanyangprofessor2-20240503073400","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240614042700-Sangrok02-20240613053000"]}}-->
@Sangrok02 You have started, but you are not finished. You need to translate (add) all references (footnotes) from English to your Korean translations, not just a few. Right now, for example, ko:문화사회학 has just two references, while Sociology of culture, thirteen. Please ensure all content is properly translated and referenced, and note the issue has already been raised by Korean reviewers of your work (see templates added to the top of your translations). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:27, 14 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240614042700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240614042700-Sangrok02-20240613053000","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Good evening, professor.
I am the student participating in the Collective Intelligence in Practice.
I have completed edits on Wikipedia this week, please check.Thank you. 😊 Hhhlx (talk) 17:31, 7 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240607173100","author":"Hhhlx","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Hhhlx-20240607173100-Weekly_wiki_edits-HUANGLINGXUAN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240609041300-Hhhlx-20240607173100"]}}-->
@Hhhlx Good, but remember that 5 edits each week should be on English Wikipedia. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:13, 9 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240609041300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240609041300-Hhhlx-20240607173100","replies":["c-Hhhlx-20240611033300-Hanyangprofessor2-20240609041300","c-Hhhlx-20240614015300-Hanyangprofessor2-20240609041300"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I will complete the required number of edits.thank you. Hhhlx (talk) 03:33, 11 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240611033300","author":"Hhhlx","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Hhhlx-20240611033300-Hanyangprofessor2-20240609041300","replies":[]}}-->
Dear Professor, I have done 92 English Wikipedia edits and 160 Chinese Wikipedia edits. Please check. Thank you. Hhhlx (talk) 01:53, 14 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240614015300","author":"Hhhlx","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Hhhlx-20240614015300-Hanyangprofessor2-20240609041300","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240614043400-Hhhlx-20240614015300"]}}-->
@Hhhlx Good. Can you fix the error that was reported on your talk page in late may? (Disambiguation link notification for May 27). The correct link should be not Hua but Hua (surname)Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:34, 14 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240614043400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240614043400-Hhhlx-20240614015300","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello, professor I am taking life and social structure classes every day. I have completed the deadline 4 assignments. Please check and give me feedback. Sorry for the delay.
@Minis707 You are making good progress. Please remove stray content in 사용자:Minis707/연습장 under "제안" section.
After that, you can publish your article. After publishing (moving) your article, please add WP:CATEGORIES: and link your article to the English one with the tool explained here Help:Interlanguage links Now, you should monitor your article to check for any feedback from Korean reviewers over the next few weeks Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:39, 14 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240614043900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240614043900-Minis707-20240612075900","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
@ChenGui Well done. Please monitor the Chinese translations to see if there Chinese reviewers will leave you any feedback. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here06:01, 14 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240614060100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240614060100-ChenGui-20240612084900","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Dear Professor, I have revised the article. Is there anything else you need to pay attention to regarding the published Wikipedia entry? Mcx8202229 🇨🇳❤️ (talk)08:07, 9 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240609080700","author":"Mcx8202229","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Mcx8202229-20240609080700-Deadline_8_Ma_Chenxiao_2","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240610035900-Mcx8202229-20240609080700"]}}-->
@Mcx8202229 If you'd like me to review an article, please provide a link to it here. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:59, 10 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240610035900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240610035900-Mcx8202229-20240609080700","replies":["c-Mcx8202229-20240610060800-Hanyangprofessor2-20240610035900"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor, here are the links to my two articles
印度的环境,The Lonely WarriorMcx8202229 🇨🇳❤️ (talk)06:08, 10 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240610060800","author":"Mcx8202229","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Mcx8202229-20240610060800-Hanyangprofessor2-20240610035900","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240612034300-Mcx8202229-20240610060800"]}}-->
@Mcx8202229 Good. In Lonely Warrior, can you attribute the negative review? Which 文汇报 do you cite - Wen Wei Po or Wenhui Bao?
It would be good if you could find more reviews from other newspapers, magazines or websites. A rule of thumb is that if a media has a Wikipedia article (in en or zh) we can cite it for such context (movie reviews). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:43, 12 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240612034300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240612034300-Mcx8202229-20240610060800","replies":["c-Mcx8202229-20240613080400-Hanyangprofessor2-20240612034300"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear professor, I quoted from Wenhui Daily, and I added some new comments to supplement the comments. Mcx8202229 🇨🇳❤️ (talk)08:04, 13 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240613080400","author":"Mcx8202229","type":"comment","level":5,"id":"c-Mcx8202229-20240613080400-Hanyangprofessor2-20240612034300","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240614043700-Mcx8202229-20240613080400"]}}-->
@Mcx8202229 Good. I see you have added another reference to Negative section, (简直离谱到家!剧版《三大队》结局,是我今年看过最荒唐的结尾) but I do not see any new content? What did the Sohu reviewer say? You should add a sentence of few summarizing their views. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:37, 14 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240614043700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":6,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240614043700-Mcx8202229-20240613080400","replies":["c-Mcx8202229-20240614071300-Hanyangprofessor2-20240614043700"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor, I have revised the article Mcx8202229 🇨🇳❤️ (talk)07:13, 14 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240614071300","author":"Mcx8202229","type":"comment","level":7,"id":"c-Mcx8202229-20240614071300-Hanyangprofessor2-20240614043700","replies":[]}}-->
Also, I sent you an attendance confirmation by e-mail, so please check it. Seohyun S (talk) 09:38, 12 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240612093800","author":"Seohyun S","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Seohyun_S-20240612093800-Deadline_4_(Week_5):_\uc190\uc11c\ud604_Seohyun_Son","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240614075200-Seohyun_S-20240612093800"]}}-->
You are making good progress. Please remove stray content at the bottom of ko:사용자:Seohyun S/연습장.
After you have translated all content, you can publish your articles. After publishing (moving) your article, please add WP:CATEGORIES: and link your article to the English one with the tool explained here Help:Interlanguage links Now, you should monitor your article to check for any feedback from Korean reviewers over the next few weeks
Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:52, 14 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240614075200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240614075200-Seohyun_S-20240612093800","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/TikTok%EC%9D%98_%EA%B2%80%EC%97%B4 Hello professor! I have completed the translation of sensorhip by tiktok, please check! Thank you! Huejyi (talk) 12:34, 12 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240612123400","author":"Huejyi","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Huejyi-20240612123400-Deadline_8(The_Finals_Week)\uff1aKim_Yu_Jin","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240614080100-Huejyi-20240612123400"]}}-->
@Huejyi Well done! Now, you should monitor your article to check for any feedback from Korean reviewers over the next few weeks Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:01, 14 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240614080100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240614080100-Huejyi-20240612123400","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Good evening, professor,I am a student participating in the Collective Intelligence in Practice courses.
I have completed ten edits on Wikipedia this week, please check.
Wishing you a pleasant day! 왕예화 (talk) 12:38, 12 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240612123800","author":"\uc655\uc608\ud654","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-\uc655\uc608\ud654-20240612123800-Weekly_wiki_edits-WANG_YIHUA_3","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240614080600-\uc655\uc608\ud654-20240612123800"]}}-->
@왕예화 Well done Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:06, 14 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240614080600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240614080600-\uc655\uc608\ud654-20240612123800","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Hello professor. I finished translating the first topic well and did the second translation. During this process, I received pointing out about the translation. So after that, I edited the translation myself and made it again. However, the translation content I created is deleted again. Even though I have clearly read and interpreted the content on the topic, this situation arises. So I write a question. Choisieon (talk) 15:51, 12 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240612155100","author":"Choisieon","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Choisieon-20240612155100-Question_about_translation","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240614081500-Choisieon-20240612155100"]}}-->
@Choisieon Please post links to your deleted articles here. Have you read and engaged with people leaving you comments at your Korean Wikipedia's discussion page at ko:사용자토론:Choisieon? From what I see from the comments there and comments left by Korean volunteers, as well as your edit history there, your submission were declined due to poor translation, and you did not reply to concerns repeatedly raised there, which resulted in your account being blocked for refusal to communicate.
Learning how to communicate with others is an important part of learning about collective intelligence, new media and wikis., and we studied this in our Communication module, which I encourage you to revisit.
If you understand why your content was deleted and account blocked, please follow the unblock procedures at Korean Wikipedia and ask for your account to be unblocked there. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:15, 14 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240614081500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240614081500-Choisieon-20240612155100","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello professor, I'm Chaeyeong Lee, the student of Sociology of Everyday Life.Attached is a wiki edit for The Economist. Please check and feedback. hereChaeyeong09 (talk) 04:50, 13 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240613045000","author":"Chaeyeong09","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Chaeyeong09-20240613045000-\ufffdWiki_edits-_Chaeyoeng_Lee","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240614082400-Chaeyeong09-20240613045000"]}}-->
@Chaeyeong09It is good that you have started to work on this assignment, although you should have done so several months ago, per our deadlines. Missing deadlines will reduce the points you receive for your work, as explained in the syllabus.
Please add your content to the Korean article on The Economist. Please remember that all content you add should be referenced and proofread to avoid machine translation errors. Unreferenced or poorly translated content will likely be deleted by reviewing editors and will not count for our class credit. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:24, 14 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240614082400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240614082400-Chaeyeong09-20240613045000","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello, I am Minjee Kim, a student taking Everyday Life and Social Structure class. I left feedback on another classmate's post, so I completed Deadline 6. I'd appreciate it if you could check it out.
@Minis707 You have left your comment in the wrong place. Please try again and leave your comment at your classmate's talk pages, not in their sandbox article. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:26, 14 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240614082600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240614082600-Minis707-20240613045100","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello, I'm Seohyun Son. I submit Deadline 6. I added the [suggestion] part to another classmate's post, so I wrote my comment. Please check and give me your feedback. Attached is the link. Thank you.
@Seohyun S You have left your comment in the wrong place. Please try again and leave your comment at your classmate's talk pages, not in their sandbox article. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:26, 14 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240614082600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240614082600-Seohyun_S-20240613045600","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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@Sangrok02 Please remember to translate references. Your submissions have been tagged by the reviewers as missing most references. Please remember that all content you add should be referenced and proofread to avoid machine translation errors. Unreferenced or poorly translated content will likely be deleted by reviewing editors and will not count for our class credit. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:30, 14 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240614083000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240614083000-Sangrok02-20240613061000","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
See feedback at #Deadline 4 (Week 5): 손서현 Seohyun SonPiotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:31, 14 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240614083100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240614083100-Seohyun_S-20240613063000","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello Professor, I am Kim Min-jee, a student taking Everyday Life and Social Structure class. I organized the materials and pictures of the article as my 5th week assignment and organized the citations better. Please check and give me your feedback. Sorry for the delay.
@Minis707 Good. See feedback at Deadline 3 (Week 4): 김민지 and continue to follow the steps I outlined there (move your articles, add categories, interlanguage links, etc.) Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:33, 14 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240614083300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240614083300-Minis707-20240613071700","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello professor, I am Wang Yifan, a student of Collective Intelligence and Wikipedia. Here are my Wikipedia edit records (photos, articles), about 200 times in total. Please check them.
Articles 1 and articles 2 are assignments for my course Sociology of Everyday Life, and Articles 3 and articles 4 are assignments for my course Collective Intelligence and Wikipedia.Please check, thank you very much💗💗 WANGYIFAN2024 (talk) 04:37, 14 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240614043700","author":"WANGYIFAN2024","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-WANGYIFAN2024-20240614043700-The_Finals_Week\u2014\u2014WANG_YIFAN\ud83d\udc97","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240614085500-WANGYIFAN2024-20240614043700"]}}-->
@WANGYIFAN2024 Well done. You may want to join a discussion about renaming 中国大陆失业率; . Now, you should monitor your articles to check for any feedback from Chinese reviewers over the next few weeks. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:55, 14 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240614085500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240614085500-WANGYIFAN2024-20240614043700","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Good evening, professor, I am a student participating in the Collective Intelligence in Practice courses and everyday life.
I have only edited 50-60 weekly Wikipedia articles before, so I have completed over 100 Wikipedia editing tasks in the past few weeks. Please check https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Special:Contributions/ZHANGQI1066&target=ZHANGQI1066&offset=&limit=100 (talk) 05:54, 14 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240614055400","author":"ZHANGQI1066","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-ZHANGQI1066-20240614055400-Weekly_wiki_edits-ZHANG_QI_2","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240614085600-ZHANGQI1066-20240614055400"]}}-->
@ZHANGQI1066 Well done. Your edits look very good! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:56, 14 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240614085600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240614085600-ZHANGQI1066-20240614055400","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor, here are my 20 Wikipedia edits Yan An (table tennis)#Career, please check them, thank you! Have a great weekend! ZHANG0822ZH (talk) 06:10, 14 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240614061000","author":"ZHANG0822ZH","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-ZHANG0822ZH-20240614061000-Collective_intelligence\uff1aZHANG_ZEHUA_3","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240614085700-ZHANG0822ZH-20240614061000"]}}-->
@ZHANG0822ZH Well done. Please note one of your references was declined due to low quality of the source - can you replace it with something else? Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:57, 14 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240614085700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240614085700-ZHANG0822ZH-20240614061000","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Hello, professor.
I'm LI LINLIN, taking classes of 'Understanding Wikipedia' and 'Everyday Life and Social Structure'.
Here are my wiki edits for the semester, over 200 edits in total. Please check here and here.
Article 1 ; Article 2 are assignments for class 'Understanding Wikipedia' and Article 3 ; Article 4 are assignments for 'Everyday Life and Social Structure'.
Hope u have a nice day :) Leeinm (talk) 06:59, 14 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240614065900","author":"Leeinm","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Leeinm-20240614065900-The_Final_Week\u2014\u2014LI_LINLIN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240614085800-Leeinm-20240614065900"]}}-->
@Leeinm Well done. Now, you should monitor your articles to check for any feedback from Chinese reviewers over the next few weeks. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:58, 14 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240614085800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240614085800-Leeinm-20240614065900","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello professor, this is the Wikipedia editing task I have completed. Please review it. Thank you. Jzhdylb (talk) 11:51, 14 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240614115100","author":"Jzhdylb","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Jzhdylb-20240614115100-Week_15_---FAN_XINRU","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240615032500-Jzhdylb-20240614115100"]}}-->
@Jzhdylb Well done, I see you are interested in some classic concepts - very good, and your sources are good too. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:25, 15 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240615032500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240615032500-Jzhdylb-20240614115100","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Hello Professor, I have completed over sixty Wikipedia edits in three weeks (13, 14, and 15 weeks), please check them, thank you. Zhongxxin (talk) 13:37, 14 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240614133700","author":"Zhongxxin","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Zhongxxin-20240614133700-Weekly_wiki_edits-ZHONG_XIN_8","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240615040500-Zhongxxin-20240614133700"]}}-->
@Zhongxxin Well done! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:05, 15 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240615040500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240615040500-Zhongxxin-20240614133700","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Good evening, Professor.
I am a student in both the Collective Intelligence in Practice and Introduction to Information Sociology courses.
Here's my Wikipedia editing assignment for the week, with over 20 edits in total.
Please check it out and have a great weekend.
Thanks. CHENG SHIYI (talk) 15:36, 14 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240614153600","author":"CHENG SHIYI","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-CHENG_SHIYI-20240614153600-Weekly_wiki_edits\u2014CHENG_SHIYI_3","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240615040900-CHENG_SHIYI-20240614153600"]}}-->
@CHENG SHIYI Good. But remember that only referenced content should be added to Wikipedia (and only such content counts for our course credit). Some content you and @왕예화 have added has been removed as unreferenced (see here). You can restore it if you can find references to add to it. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:09, 15 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240615040900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240615040900-CHENG_SHIYI-20240614153600","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello Professor, I am Kim Min-jee, academic taking Everyday Life and Social Structure class. I posted the completed article in the public space. Please check it. Minis707 (talk) 03:12, 15 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240615031200","author":"Minis707","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Minis707-20240615031200-+_\ub9c8\uac10\uc77c_5_(\uc81c9\uc8fc):_\uae40\ubbfc\uc9c0_Minjee_Kim","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240615041000-Minis707-20240615031200"]}}-->
@Minis707 Ok - please link it here and I will review it. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:10, 15 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240615041000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240615041000-Minis707-20240615031200","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Professor, I've created all the contents of the sandbox. Please check itBai0926 (talk) 07:46, 28 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240528074600","author":"Bai0926","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Bai0926-20240528074600-BAI_LINHAN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240531034800-Bai0926-20240528074600"]}}-->
@Bai0926 Good progress. There are several issues that need to be fixed:
Please review our module on writing the lead (introduction): User:Hanyangprofessor2/Module/Lead. Your lead contains content that is not mentioned elsewhere in the article, ex. about Dompamine style. Please move such content to the relevant section(s).
please review the guideline on which terms should have blue links (Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Linking). Your article contains many important terms that are not linked. In the lead, for example China's economy, Tang suit or Hanbok . This is not a problem in the lead, many other terms are not linked in other parts of the article (ex. Genghis Khan). If a topic exists in Chinese but not English, please link it using this tool: Template:Interlanguage link.
Is the international fashion week you mention the same as China Fashion Week?
Use AI tools or Grammary to double check for errors, such as repeating of "On the one hand" twice in the lead
Please ensure all content is referenced. There is no reference for the first paragraphs of 'Wei and jin dynasties' or 'Sui and tang dynasties' sections, for example
Please try to add more pictures, particularly for the modern fashion you discuss (remember to add only pictures already found on Wikipedia, or your own - see User:Hanyangprofessor2/Instructions/6)
Please format the references so that they have all metadata: first and late name, date, publisher, title (in English as well as Chinese). See User:Hanyangprofessor2/Instructions/2
Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:48, 31 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240531034800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240531034800-Bai0926-20240528074600","replies":["c-Bai0926-20240607080200-Hanyangprofessor2-20240531034800"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Here is my answer to the question about World Fashion Week and China Fashion Week. World Fashion Week and China Fashion Week are not the same. China Fashion Week is an event organized by China Fashion Designers Association, abbreviation: CIFW. Bai0926 (talk) 08:02, 7 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240607080200","author":"Bai0926","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Bai0926-20240607080200-Hanyangprofessor2-20240531034800","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240607082000-Bai0926-20240607080200"]}}-->
@Bai0926 Regarding "China international fashion week", please ensure the name is properly capitalized. Is there a Chinese Wikipedia article for it, or for the China Fashion Designers Association? If not, please provide Chinese names in the right places, just as when we learned in the recent module on Manual of Style in class.
Please review my remarks above. You have not addressed majority of the issues raised. Your lead contains content that is not mentioned elsewhere in the article. You have added some links, but more are needed. I've listed specific examples above ("In the lead, for example China's economy, Tang suit or Hanbok") and you have not improved them. There are still unreferenced paragraphs; the references still have missing metadata, etc. Please address ALL of the issues I've raised CAREFULLY (not A FEW of the issues haphazardly), then ask me for the review again.
Please check whether the links are correct. For example, Zhongshan suit should probably link to Mao suit. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:20, 7 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240607082000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240607082000-Bai0926-20240607080200","replies":["c-Bai0926-20240612121200-Hanyangprofessor2-20240607082000"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Professor, I have corrected the mistake as per your instructions, please check.
And I found a link to China Fashion Week, which has also been added.Let me know if I have any other questions Thanks! Bai0926 (talk) 12:12, 12 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240612121200","author":"Bai0926","type":"comment","level":5,"id":"c-Bai0926-20240612121200-Hanyangprofessor2-20240607082000","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240614043100-Bai0926-20240612121200"]}}-->
@Bai0926 Good. Next, please use Grammarly or similar service to check for the prose of your article in English. Please format the references so that they have all metadata: first and late name, date, publisher, title (in English as well as Chinese). For linking to other Wikipedia articles, if a topic exists in Chinese but not English, please link it using this tool: Template:Interlanguage link. After addressing those issues, you can can publish your article. After publishing (moving) your article, please add relevant WP:CATEGORIES. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:31, 14 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240614043100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":6,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240614043100-Bai0926-20240612121200","replies":["c-Bai0926-20240614093400-Hanyangprofessor2-20240614043100"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
For my richly referenced content, please checkBai0926 (talk) 09:34, 14 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240614093400","author":"Bai0926","type":"comment","level":7,"id":"c-Bai0926-20240614093400-Hanyangprofessor2-20240614043100","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240615030800-Bai0926-20240614093400"]}}-->
@Bai0926 Good. After you check for links to Chinese articles (interlanguage links) you can publish your article as I described above. (Move it to the mainspace) Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:08, 15 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240615030800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":8,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240615030800-Bai0926-20240614093400","replies":["c-Bai0926-20240616115500-Hanyangprofessor2-20240615030800"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Professor, I don't know how to do interlanguage links, can I ask you for advice on Monday before uploading it? Bai0926 (talk) 11:55, 16 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240616115500","author":"Bai0926","type":"comment","level":9,"id":"c-Bai0926-20240616115500-Hanyangprofessor2-20240615030800","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240617035900-Bai0926-20240616115500"]}}-->
@Bai0926 Of course, ask me during or after class and I'll demonstrate Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:59, 17 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240617035900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":10,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240617035900-Bai0926-20240616115500","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello, Professor
I modified and completed the translation of article based on your suggestion of modification, and other users' suggestions of modification.Please check. What else do we need to do?Thank you
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I believe I provided to you feedback earlier in my office hours, but do let me know if you have any questions. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:53, 17 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240617045300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240617045300-Babaibiaobin-20240615125300","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Hello Professor Piotr K.
I enrolled in Training/Students, Wikipedia's dashboard system course. Also, I learned courses such as 'Special Topics', 'Exercise', and 'Discussion' for additional credits, so please check.
I am sorry for learning too late.
Student Training Modules - Wiki Education DashboardJujuheee0408 (talk) 19:32, 15 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240615193200","author":"Jujuheee0408","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Jujuheee0408-20240615193200-Deadline_1_(week2)_KIM_JUHEE","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240617045500-Jujuheee0408-20240615193200"]}}-->
@Jujuheee0408 Dear student. It may be a bit challenging to try to start the major class project in the final week, but you are welcome to try. Please tell me which class or classes of mine you are taking. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:55, 17 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240617045500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240617045500-Jujuheee0408-20240615193200","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Hello, Professor. In my Collective Intelligence in Practice class, I want to translate these two Wikipedia articles Michael S. Hart From English to Korean Online hate speech From English to Korean. I'm so sorry I'm late... Jujuheee0408 (talk) 20:30, 15 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240615203000","author":"Jujuheee0408","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Jujuheee0408-20240615203000-Deadline_2_(week3)_KIM_JUHEE","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240617045600-Jujuheee0408-20240615203000"]}}-->
@Jujuheee0408 All right, topics approved, good luck. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:56, 17 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240617045600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240617045600-Jujuheee0408-20240615203000","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Hello, professor.
I have completed the translation.
Please check it. Thank you.
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@Jujuheee0408: Good progress, please publish your first article, and remember to proofread the content to avoid machine translation errors, which are a common reason to see submissions declined/deleted from Korean Wikipedia. --Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:57, 17 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240617045700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240617045700-Final_-_KIM_JUHEE","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240617045800-Hanyangprofessor2-20240617045700"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
PS. After moving (publishing) your article(s), please add categories (see bottom of the original English articles for English categories and try to add similar one to your article) and please link it to the English article (see how at Help:Interlanguage_links#Links_in_the_"Languages"_list). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:58, 17 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240617045800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240617045800-Hanyangprofessor2-20240617045700","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
@SU YIQI Good progress. Regarding your Chinese article,you can now publish (WP:MOVE) your article. After that, please add WP:CATEGORIES: and link your article to the English one with the tool explained here Help:Interlanguage links . After that, you should monitor your article to check for any feedback from Chinese reviewers over the next few weeks. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:19, 10 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240610041900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240610041900-SU_YIQI-20240609095600","replies":["c-SU_YIQI-20240616101500-Hanyangprofessor2-20240610041900"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Replied above. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:51, 17 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240617055100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240617055100-SU_YIQI-20240616101500","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Deadline 8 (The Finals Week): ZENG WANTING&ZHANG RUIQING
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Hello professor, we are students from Everyday Life and Social Structure, we already finished and pulished our wiki translate projects. Please checked it, Thank you!
Korean to English: Ansan Reed Marshy ParkWantiin (talk) 08:26, 12 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240612082600","author":"Wantiin","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Wantiin-20240612082600-Deadline_8_(The_Finals_Week):_ZENG_WANTING&ZHANG_RUIQING","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240614045100-Wantiin-20240612082600"]}}-->
@Wantiin Good progress. There are several things to fix in your English project:
If a topic exists in Korean but not English (such as ko:시화호 - Lake Sihwa) , please link it using this tool: Template:Interlanguage link. If you don't know how to use it, stop by my office hours or ask in class and I will demonstrate it.
please find the correct name of the "Hajja Engineering Company". There is no such entity ("Hajja Engineering Company").
some of your references are missing metadata; most often original data. For example, https://www.kyeonggi.com/article/201410150605456 is from 2014-10-15. Please add such dates. Another missing metadata element is the translated title (in English, do not replace to existing Korean title - use the translated title metadata parameter. Ask me in class if you need help
the "Conflict over artificial pump operating costs between municipalities" is based on news from 2014. Can you find more up to date coverage and update the article? You can also update the Korean one for extra credit
Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:51, 14 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240614045100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240614045100-Wantiin-20240612082600","replies":["c-Rachel.zrq-20240615074500-Hanyangprofessor2-20240614045100","c-Wantiin-20240615160100-Hanyangprofessor2-20240614045100"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello professor. Thanks for your feedback, we are revising our article. Regarding your reference to "Hajja Engineering Company", I have not been able to find any information about this company either. However, "하자엔지니어링사" (the Korean name of this company) is mentioned inside the Korean article of this article. But the Korean Wikipedia page also does not have a specific link to the company. Therefore I was unable to locate the co-company. So I have removed the reference to "Hajja Engineering Company" from the English article. Rachel.zrq (talk) 07:45, 15 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240615074500","author":"Rachel.zrq","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Rachel.zrq-20240615074500-Hanyangprofessor2-20240614045100","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240617055300-Rachel.zrq-20240615074500"]}}-->
@Rachel.zrq Good, I think this is the correct move. I think you can see why it is always important to use not only the translated title of something, but also the original. Here the error comes from the newspaper that reported poorly on this issue. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:53, 17 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240617055300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240617055300-Rachel.zrq-20240615074500","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello professor, we also added English translation of the title and dates in our article's references, please check it, Thank you! Wantiin (talk) 16:01, 15 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240615160100","author":"Wantiin","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Wantiin-20240615160100-Hanyangprofessor2-20240614045100","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240617055400-Wantiin-20240615160100"]}}-->
Very good! You are almost finished. I hope you can find some up to date information on how the conflict between Ansan and Hwaseong was resolved. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:54, 17 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240617055400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240617055400-Wantiin-20240615160100","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Hello professor, these are four articles I translated. I have two classes of yours. Please check them. Thank you! User:등혜진/sandboxDENG HUICHEN (talk) 08:44, 12 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240612084400","author":"\ub4f1\ud61c\uc9c4","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-\ub4f1\ud61c\uc9c4-20240612084400-Deadline_8_(The_Finals_Week_DENG_HUICHEN)_Everyday_Life_and_Social_Structure_and","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240614045500-\ub4f1\ud61c\uc9c4-20240612084400"],"displayName":"DENG HUICHEN"}}-->
@등혜진 Your sandbox contains links to more than four articles, I count eight links. Please link each article you would like me to review here, directly (i.e. please provide four links to four articles you'd like me to review here). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:55, 14 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240614045500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240614045500-\ub4f1\ud61c\uc9c4-20240612084400","replies":["c-\ub4f1\ud61c\uc9c4-20240614125700-Hanyangprofessor2-20240614045500"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
2.User:등혜진(Abortion in Japan) DENG HUICHEN (talk) 12:57, 14 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240614125700","author":"\ub4f1\ud61c\uc9c4","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-\ub4f1\ud61c\uc9c4-20240614125700-Hanyangprofessor2-20240614045500","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240615031700-\ub4f1\ud61c\uc9c4-20240614125700"],"displayName":"User:\ub4f1\ud61c\uc9c4"}}-->
@등혜진 1. You linked the article in English. I believe you were supposed to translate it to Korean or Chinese?
2. zh:User:등혜진/东德的电影审查制度 this looks good. Please add links to English articles that do not exist in Chinese using this tool: zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi . After that, you can publish your articles. After publishing (moving) your article, please add WP:CATEGORIES: and link your article to the English one with the tool explained here Help:Interlanguage links Now, you should monitor your article to check for any feedback from Chinese reviewers over the next few weeks
3. You again linked the English article instead of your translation
4. Regarding the draft at zh:User:등혜진 . It needs blue links to other articles on Chinese Wikipedia (and if the relevant articles don't exist, use interlanguage link tool I linked above to link to English ones). Please ensure all content is referenced. In some cases you split paragraphs into smaller ones, that's fine, but you should then copy the reference (footnote) to the end of each paragraph. After you do this, you can publish your article. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:17, 15 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240615031700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240615031700-\ub4f1\ud61c\uc9c4-20240614125700","replies":["c-\ub4f1\ud61c\uc9c4-20240616054000-Hanyangprofessor2-20240615031700"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
@등혜진 Good, your translations look fine, please monitor them to see if the Korean reviewers have any feedback over the next few weeks. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:55, 17 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240617055500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":6,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240617055500-\ub4f1\ud61c\uc9c4-20240616054000","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Dear Professor,
I have completed my translation work from Chinese to English and have published my article. I have linked my article to the Chinese article and added the categories. Please take a look.
Thank you!TMXX0818 (talk) 00:35, 14 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240614003500","author":"TMXX0818","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-TMXX0818-20240614003500-Deadline_8_(The_Finals_Week)_-_LI_MENGRU","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240614084400-TMXX0818-20240614003500"]}}-->
Please monitor your work for the next few weeks to see if the reviewers have any feedback. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:44, 14 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240614084400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240614084400-TMXX0818-20240614003500","replies":["c-TMXX0818-20240614142200-Hanyangprofessor2-20240614084400"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Have a great day. Thank you!TMXX0818 (talk) 14:22, 14 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240614142200","author":"TMXX0818","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-TMXX0818-20240614142200-Hanyangprofessor2-20240614084400","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240615031800-TMXX0818-20240614142200","c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240615032200-TMXX0818-20240614142200"]}}-->
@TMXX0818 Good. Can you link it from other relevant articles like Line 5 (Zhengzhou Metro)? Can you think of what other articles should mention this event? Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:18, 15 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240615031800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240615031800-TMXX0818-20240614142200","replies":["c-TMXX0818-20240616121600-Hanyangprofessor2-20240615031800"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello professor, I have linked "Zhengzhou subway flooding" to "Line 5 (Zhengzhou Metro)"and "Zhengzhou Metro".And I tried to add a template for interlanguage links, but because articles that only have Chinese but not English are included in the references,it seems like I haven't found a way to add interlanguage links to the references yet. Thank you for your reply.TMXX0818 (talk) 12:16, 16 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240616121600","author":"TMXX0818","type":"comment","level":5,"id":"c-TMXX0818-20240616121600-Hanyangprofessor2-20240615031800","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240617055800-TMXX0818-20240616121600"]}}-->
@TMXX0818 I believe we fixed this in the class - you are doing a very good job! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:58, 17 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240617055800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":6,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240617055800-TMXX0818-20240616121600","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
PS. The final item to improve is to link to articles that exist in Chinese but not English using Template:Interlanguage link. For example, zh:郑州北站 . There are several other articles that should be linked with this tool as well. Please compare the links in the Chinese and English articles and add missing links. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:22, 15 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240615032200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240615032200-TMXX0818-20240614142200","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Good evening, professor,I am a student participating in the Collective Intelligence in Practice courses.
I have completed ten edits on Wikipedia this week, please check.
Wishing you a pleasant day! 왕예화 (talk) 14:43, 16 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240616144300","author":"\uc655\uc608\ud654","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-\uc655\uc608\ud654-20240616144300-Weekly_wiki_edits-WANG_YIHUA_4","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240617090700-\uc655\uc608\ud654-20240616144300"]}}-->
@왕예화 Good job! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here09:07, 17 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240617090700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240617090700-\uc655\uc608\ud654-20240616144300","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Deadline 8 (The Finals Week) Collective Intelligence and Wikipedia---- ZHANG LINYUE & JIA MENGZHUO
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Good afternoon professor, I am a student of class Collective Intelligence. We have perfected and published it as per your request. This is our final result presentation.English Wikipedia & Chinese Wikipedia. Please check it. Thank you.AYAO32269 (talk) 04:16, 17 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240617041600","author":"AYAO32269","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-AYAO32269-20240617041600-Deadline_8_(The_Finals_Week)_Collective_Intelligence_and_Wikipedia----_ZHANG_LIN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240617093000-AYAO32269-20240617041600"]}}-->
@AYAO32269 Well done, your articles look good. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here09:30, 17 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240617093000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240617093000-AYAO32269-20240617041600","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
This is an article translated into Chinese in English:韩国的性Muqing112233 (talk) 04:59, 17 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240617045900","author":"Muqing112233","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Muqing112233-20240617045900-Collective_intelligence----MU_QING_,LIU_XINRUI","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240617093200-Muqing112233-20240617045900"]}}-->
@Muqing112233 Well done, your articles look good. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here09:32, 17 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240617093200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240617093200-Muqing112233-20240617045900","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello, Professor. I have completed your translation and I would like to ask you to check1、check2 it. I will seriously make corrections based on your suggestions. Thank you. ZixuanHE (talk) 03:14, 10 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240610031400","author":"ZixuanHE","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-ZixuanHE-20240610031400-HE_ZIXUAN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240610043800-ZixuanHE-20240610031400"]}}-->
@ZixuanHE Regarding your Chinese article, you can now publish (WP:MOVE) your article. After that, please add WP:CATEGORIES: and link your article to the English one with the tool explained here Help:Interlanguage links . After that, you should monitor your article to check for any feedback from Chinese reviewers over the next few weeks. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:38, 10 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240610043800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240610043800-ZixuanHE-20240610031400","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240617094100-Hanyangprofessor2-20240610043800"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
@ZixuanHE Please review the concerns raised over your work at zh:Wikipedia:互助客栈/其他#新用户通过撰写新条目的方式“完成学科作业”的处理讨论 and address them. Thank you Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here09:41, 17 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240617094100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240617094100-Hanyangprofessor2-20240610043800","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello, Professor. I used an article translation instead of editing this week. But I don't know why it can't be successfully connected to the English article.
迈克尔·斯特恩·哈特Muqing112233 (talk) 14:13, 13 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240613141300","author":"Muqing112233","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Muqing112233-20240613141300-Collective_intelligence----MU_QING_2","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240614084100-Muqing112233-20240613141300"]}}-->
@Muqing112233 Because you have not moved your article to public space. It should be at 迈克尔·斯特恩·哈特 but instead you moved it to User:迈克尔·斯特恩·哈特 (and several other wrong places). Try again - but this time, I recommend reading about Wikipedia:Namespace (:维基百科:命名空间) first - it should help you understand the problem. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:41, 14 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240614084100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240614084100-Muqing112233-20240613141300","replies":["c-Muqing112233-20240616142100-Hanyangprofessor2-20240614084100","c-Muqing112233-20240616143500-Hanyangprofessor2-20240614084100"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I moved this article. However, the English Wikipedia cannot be found on the homepage linked to the page. What should I do?
迈克尔·斯特恩·哈特Muqing112233 (talk) 14:21, 16 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240616142100","author":"Muqing112233","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Muqing112233-20240616142100-Hanyangprofessor2-20240614084100","replies":[]}}-->
Okay, I have realized the problem. There is no problem with my translation. It is because the author has set permissions to not allow others to edit, so that I can't link the two articles together. Muqing112233 (talk) 14:35, 16 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240616143500","author":"Muqing112233","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Muqing112233-20240616143500-Hanyangprofessor2-20240614084100","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240617055700-Muqing112233-20240616143500"]}}-->
@Muqing112233 I believe the problem is fixed now and your article is at zh:迈克尔·斯特恩·哈特 . Now, please try to add some WP:CATEGORIES to it - look at the ones at the bottom of the English article and try to add similar ones to your translated Chinese article. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:57, 17 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240617055700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240617055700-Muqing112233-20240616143500","replies":["c-Muqing112233-20240618050500-Hanyangprofessor2-20240617055700"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
The issue has been resolved, can I get extra points? Muqing112233 (talk) 05:05, 18 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240618050500","author":"Muqing112233","type":"comment","level":5,"id":"c-Muqing112233-20240618050500-Hanyangprofessor2-20240617055700","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240618064700-Muqing112233-20240618050500"]}}-->
Certainly, I will consider it when I am calculating the final grade. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here06:47, 18 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240618064700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":6,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240618064700-Muqing112233-20240618050500","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Professor, I'm sorry that my Wikipedia account has been blocked to 6.29.Now that I can't finish my homework, is there any other way I can finish my homework or do some other homework? Liangyiqiao2004 (talk) 05:22, 16 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240616052200","author":"Liangyiqiao2004","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Liangyiqiao2004-20240616052200-About_Wikipedia_Editing_Jobs","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240617050600-Liangyiqiao2004-20240616052200","c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240617050700-Liangyiqiao2004-20240616052200","c-SCP-2000-20240617130500-Liangyiqiao2004-20240616052200"]}}-->
@Liangyiqiao2004 To speed up your unblock, please also explain your situation at zh:维基百科:Discord交流群Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:32, 17 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240617073200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240617073200-Hanyangprofessor2-20240617050600","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I've checked the block and confirmed that it is correct. Admins including Manchiu (I believe) and me are willing to unblock once we are convinced that Liangyiqiao2004 understands why they got this block and how to avoid it. Translations from Wikipedias of another language does not violate copyright as long as they are properly tagged (see Template:Translated_page). It could be better for both your Liangyiqiao2004 and patrollers on zhwiki if their translations are done on draft pages or userpages. Translations under certain quality are subject to deletion on zhwiki while drafts and userpages are given way more patience. Tiger (Talk) 13:57, 17 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240617135700","author":"Tigerzeng","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Tigerzeng-20240617135700-Hanyangprofessor2-20240617050600","replies":[],"displayName":"Tiger"}}-->
PS. In the meantime, you can earn extra credit by doing constructive edits on English and Korean Wikipedias, as well as Wikimedia Commons or Wikivoyage. Please see syllabus for details of extra credit tasks. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:07, 17 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240617050700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240617050700-Liangyiqiao2004-20240616052200","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
@Liangyiqiao2004: Hello, you were blocked on Chinese Wikipedia due to copyright violation. Please note that you should not copy content from external websites (e.g. Baidu Baike) and paste on the article (e.g. your edits on zh:豌豆黄, zh:艾窝窝 these articles). You can discuss your unblock request with admins on your user talkpage on Chinese Wikipedia. Thanks.
cc @Tigerzeng: fyi. SCP-200013:05, 17 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240617130500","author":"SCP-2000","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-SCP-2000-20240617130500-Liangyiqiao2004-20240616052200","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240619084200-SCP-2000-20240617130500"],"displayName":"SCP"}}-->
@Liangyiqiao2004 Please respond to this on your zh wikipedia page, and to speed things up, please WP:ECHO the admins there. You can try to finish the assignment until June 26th. There is still enough time to resolve this matter. Good luck. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:42, 19 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240619084200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240619084200-SCP-2000-20240617130500","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
@SU YIQI I am afraid that link does not take me to your homepage. Please provide a working link for me to review. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here09:06, 17 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240617090600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240617090600-SU_YIQI-20240616133900","replies":["c-SU_YIQI-20240617105200-Hanyangprofessor2-20240617090600"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Please check my editing records on this page.https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E5%BC%A0%E8%BF%9C_(%E6%AD%8C%E6%89%8B)SU YIQI (talk) 10:52, 17 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240617105200","author":"SU YIQI","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-SU_YIQI-20240617105200-Hanyangprofessor2-20240617090600","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240619084400-SU_YIQI-20240617105200"]}}-->
@SU YIQI I see now, looks good. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:44, 19 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240619084400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240619084400-SU_YIQI-20240617105200","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Hello professor, I have translated the article "Cultural impact of TikTok" into Chinese in my sandbox, please check it. WYRRRR (talk) 13:49, 16 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240616134900","author":"WYRRRR","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-WYRRRR-20240616134900-Sociology_of_Everyday_Life--WANG_YUERONG","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240617090600-WYRRRR-20240616134900"]}}-->
@WYRRRR Well done. You can publish (move) your articles. After moving (publishing) your article(s), please add categories (see bottom of the original English articles for English categories and try to add similar one to your article) and please link it to the English article (see how at Help:Interlanguage_links#Links_in_the_"Languages"_list). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here09:06, 17 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240617090600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240617090600-WYRRRR-20240616134900","replies":["c-WYRRRR-20240617110800-Hanyangprofessor2-20240617090600"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Ok.Professor. Good evening, I have moved the article and linked it to the English article. Please check it. WYRRRR (talk) 11:08, 17 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240617110800","author":"WYRRRR","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-WYRRRR-20240617110800-Hanyangprofessor2-20240617090600","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240619084500-WYRRRR-20240617110800"]}}-->
@WYRRRR I see now, looks good. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:45, 19 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240619084500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240619084500-WYRRRR-20240617110800","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Dear Professor, I am Huang lingxuan a student of Collective Intelligence and Wikipedia. I have done English Wikipedia edits and Chinese Wikipedia edits about 250 times in total. And I have modified the problem of Hua you mentioned last time.Please check. Thank you. Hhhlx (talk) 02:19, 17 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240617021900","author":"Hhhlx","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Hhhlx-20240617021900-The_Final_Week_-_HUANG_LINGXUAN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240617091800-Hhhlx-20240617021900"]}}-->
@Hhhlx Good. See Zhou Fang (Tang dynasty) where reviewers have marked some parts that require citations or clarifications. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here09:18, 17 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240617091800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240617091800-Hhhlx-20240617021900","replies":["c-Hhhlx-20240618163000-Hanyangprofessor2-20240617091800"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Good afternoon professor, first of all, thank you for your reply. I added some links in the article, and answered the administrator's questions and modified the relevant questions, thank you. Hhhlx (talk) 16:30, 18 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240618163000","author":"Hhhlx","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Hhhlx-20240618163000-Hanyangprofessor2-20240617091800","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240619085000-Hhhlx-20240618163000"]}}-->
@Hhhlx Good, but please fix the links - many go to wappass.baidu.com which is not a website most people can access.
Check for other requests for sources or clarification - I still see several at large. For example here:
"He successively served as the Governor of Yuezhou and Xuanzhou.[when?]"
and here
it is the earliest style in ancient China with the characteristics of a painting school and is highly praised by painters throughout history.[citation needed]Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:50, 19 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240619085000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240619085000-Hhhlx-20240618163000","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Hello, Professor.
I would like to inform you that I have uploaded the main project for 'Everyday Life and Social Structure' course.
My articles have been completed since about a month ago.
1. the article "Education in India" translated from English to Korean, you can check it on here.
※ In addition, after taking the quiz in the Quiz tab on the LMS, I tried to retake the quiz to correct the content, but the content of the quiz item changed. Is there any problem in this case?
(I have already submitted the assignment)
Thank you. Soongki (talk) 09:52, 17 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240617095200","author":"Soongki","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Soongki-20240617095200-Deadline_8_(The_Finals_Week)_:_Kim_Soongki","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240619085300-Soongki-20240617095200"]}}-->
@Soongki Good. Please monitor your work to see if there is any feedback from Korean editors over the next few weeks. Your LMS issue should not affect your grade. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:53, 19 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240619085300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240619085300-Soongki-20240617095200","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Hello. Professor. I am Kim minjun taking Collective intelligence class. I finished my main wiki project.
Please check it. Thanks. I also finished my Blog post. KMJ0521 (talk) 10:34, 17 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240617103400","author":"KMJ0521","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-KMJ0521-20240617103400-Final_week_-_Kim_minjun","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240619085900-KMJ0521-20240617103400"]}}-->
@KMJ0521 Very good. Please monitor your work to see if there is any feedback from Korean editors over the next few weeks. Your extra credit wiki topic 2 needs WP:CATEGORIES - please try to add some (see English article for ideas) Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:59, 19 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240619085900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240619085900-KMJ0521-20240617103400","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello, professor. I would like to inform you that I have uploaded the main project for 'Everyday Life and Social Structure' course.
Originally, I was going to translate the Promotion of anorexia and Film censorship articles from English to Korean, but someone had already translated the film censorship article almost completely, so I translated the gaps in the Korean translation of the related article, Cinema of Japan, from English to Korean.
To summarize, I translated the promotion of anorexia and cinema of Japan articles from English to Korean.
The translated documentation is here. [[24]], [[25]]
Thanks. Cookinu (talk) 11:26, 17 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240617112600","author":"Cookinu","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Cookinu-20240617112600-Final_week_-_Kwon_Jaeeun","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240619090100-Cookinu-20240617112600"]}}-->
@Cookinu Well done. Please monitor your work to see if there is any feedback from Korean editors over the next few weeks.
Since your second translation is relatively short, perhaps you could translate another short topic from English to Korean? You can chose any topic you like (anything you find interesting). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here09:01, 19 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240619090100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240619090100-Cookinu-20240617112600","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Collective Intelligence in Practice courses —WANG YIHUA,LI MENGRU
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Good evening, professor,I am a student participating in the Collective Intelligence in Practice courses.
My team member @TMXX0818 and I have already published the translated article. This is my published article, please check it. This is my team member @TMXX0818's published article, please check it.
Have a nice day! 왕예화 (talk) 14:49, 17 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240617144900","author":"\uc655\uc608\ud654","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-\uc655\uc608\ud654-20240617144900-Collective_Intelligence_in_Practice_courses_\u2014WANG_YIHUA,LI_MENGRU","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240619090200-\uc655\uc608\ud654-20240617144900"]}}-->
@왕예화 Well done, your articles look good. Please monitor them over the next few weeks to see if there is any feedback Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here09:02, 19 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240619090200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240619090200-\uc655\uc608\ud654-20240617144900","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Good evening, professor,I am a student participating in the Collective Intelligence in Practice courses.
I have completed ten edits on Wikipedia this week, please check.
Wishing you a pleasant day! 왕예화 (talk) 15:37, 17 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240617153700","author":"\uc655\uc608\ud654","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-\uc655\uc608\ud654-20240617153700-Weekly_wiki_edits-WANG_YIHUA_5","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240619091200-\uc655\uc608\ud654-20240617153700"]}}-->
@왕예화 Good. When uploading images, please remember they should be your own work. Please add categories to your images - some are missing them. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here09:12, 19 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240619091200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240619091200-\uc655\uc608\ud654-20240617153700","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Good evening, Professor.
I am a student in both the Collective Intelligence in Practice and Introduction to Information Sociology courses.
Here's my Wikipedia editing assignment for the week, which totalled over 20 edits. Please check it, thank you. CHENG SHIYI (talk) 16:09, 17 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240617160900","author":"CHENG SHIYI","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-CHENG_SHIYI-20240617160900-Weekly_wiki_edits\u2014\u2014CHENG_SHIYI","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240619091300-CHENG_SHIYI-20240617160900"]}}-->
@CHENG SHIYI Good job Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here09:13, 19 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240619091300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240619091300-CHENG_SHIYI-20240617160900","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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The Korean translation of the 'Censorship of Tickettok' article has been added and the translation has been completed! Please check! I've completed both of them. Are you done with the Wiki part project? https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Censorship_of_TikTokHuejyi (talk) 07:40, 18 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240618074000","author":"Huejyi","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Huejyi-20240618074000-Deadline_8(Final_week)-_Kim_Yu_Jin","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240619091400-Huejyi-20240618074000"]}}-->
@Huejyi Your translations look good and are close to being finished, very good. For articles that exist on English but not Korean Wikipedia, please use ko:틀:임시링크 (you don't need to fix this in references, only in the main text). Please monitor your article to check for feedback from Korean editors. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here09:14, 19 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240619091400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240619091400-Huejyi-20240618074000","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello professor, these are the 15 blog posts I have completed this semester. Please review them. Thank you very much.1.2.3.4.5.6.7.8.9.10.11.12.13.14.15Jzhdylb (talk) 09:24, 18 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240618092400","author":"Jzhdylb","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Jzhdylb-20240618092400-FAN_XINRU","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240619091500-Jzhdylb-20240618092400"]}}-->
@Jzhdylb Good Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here09:15, 19 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240619091500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240619091500-Jzhdylb-20240618092400","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Final week--Show all homework content--ZHANG LINYUE
2.Here's a link to my all weekly extra Wikipedia edit.
3.This is a link to the final results of my articles<中國古典詩詞>.
4.This is the link to my group member article<Chinese Academy of Cultural Heritage> final results.
Please check! Thankyou!AYAO32269 (talk) 16:14, 18 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240618161400","author":"AYAO32269","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-AYAO32269-20240618161400-Final_week--Show_all_homework_content--ZHANG_LINYUE","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240619091800-AYAO32269-20240618161400"]}}-->
@AYAO32269 Well done. Can you add an image to Yanjin huoshao? It sounds tasty :) Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here09:18, 19 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240619091800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240619091800-AYAO32269-20240618161400","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello professor, these are two Wikipedia articles that I have edited. Please review them. Thank you very much.1,2Jzhdylb (talk) 16:45, 18 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240618164500","author":"Jzhdylb","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Jzhdylb-20240618164500-FAN_XINRU_2","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240619092600-Jzhdylb-20240618164500"]}}-->
@Jzhdylb Well done! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here09:26, 19 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240619092600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240619092600-Jzhdylb-20240618164500","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Hello professor, I am a student of your Sociology of Everyday Life class and Collective Intelligence in Practice courses studies, and I have completed two translations of Wikipedia,
I have translated the article "Copyfraud " into Chinese in my sandbox,
please check it. Sephyy (talk) 15:31, 17 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240617153100","author":"Sephyy","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Sephyy-20240617153100-The_Final_Week\u2014TIAN_XIAOYU","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240619091000-Sephyy-20240617153100"]}}-->
@Sephyy Regarding your English article, it looks good but we need some fixes:
If a topic exists in Chinese but not English, please link it using this tool: Template:Interlanguage link . A sample term to link in this way is zh:豫章書院 (南昌), but there are others - please compare Chinese text to English and see what is missing
some content is unreferenced. You can either remove it or add references to it for extra credit (ex. "
In May 2018, "Zimu", one of the main whistleblowers of the Yuzhang Academy incident, attempted suicide.
In April 2019, the company's name was changed from "Yuzhang Academy" to "Tangyuanwen".)
Regarding your Chinese article, it seems ready. You can publish (move) it. After moving (publishing) your article(s), please add categories (see bottom of the original English articles for English categories and try to add similar one to your article) and please link it to the English article (see how at Help:Interlanguage_links#Links_in_the_"Languages"_list) Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here09:10, 19 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240619091000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240619091000-Sephyy-20240617153100","replies":["c-Sephyy-20240619171200-Hanyangprofessor2-20240619091000"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello Professor,
I have corrected two citation errors and expanded the cross-language links. Following your suggestions, I have added new references 19 and 20.
Thank you. Sephyy (talk) 17:12, 19 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240619171200","author":"Sephyy","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Sephyy-20240619171200-Hanyangprofessor2-20240619091000","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240620045800-Sephyy-20240619171200"]}}-->
@Sephyy Good. Please monitor your work over the next few weeks to see if the reviewers mark any issues for fixing. The Chinese article already has one request at the top, from @暁月凛奈 - perhaps you can ask that user for more detailed feedback on what needs to be fixed. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:58, 20 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240620045800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240620045800-Sephyy-20240619171200","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Collective Intelligence and Wikipedia——WANG YUERONG
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Hello professor, I have translated the article "zh:奇虎360相关争议" into English in my sandbox. Please check it. WYRRRR (talk) 01:35, 17 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240617013500","author":"WYRRRR","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-WYRRRR-20240617013500-Collective_Intelligence_and_Wikipedia\u2014\u2014WANG_YUERONG","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240617091700-WYRRRR-20240617013500"]}}-->
@WYRRRR Good, you are almost finished. Below are issues to be fixed:
Some of the content in your article is missing references - please add them. If they are also missing from the original Chinese article, you can add them there as well for extra credit.
If a topic exists in Chinese but not English, please link it using this tool: Template:Interlanguage link - for example this is how you should link to zh:瑞星 and zh:快视频
After that, you can publish (move) your articles. I recommend the following name Criticism of Qihoo 360:
After moving (publishing) your article(s), please add categories (see bottom of the original English articles for English categories and try to add similar one to your article) and please link it to the English article (see how at Help:Interlanguage_links#Links_in_the_"Languages"_list). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here09:17, 17 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240617091700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240617091700-WYRRRR-20240617013500","replies":["c-WYRRRR-20240617132700-Hanyangprofessor2-20240617091700"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello, professor I added references and intermediate language links. Could you check it out for me? Can I move this article out now? WYRRRR (talk) 13:27, 17 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240617132700","author":"WYRRRR","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-WYRRRR-20240617132700-Hanyangprofessor2-20240617091700","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240619084800-WYRRRR-20240617132700"]}}-->
@WYRRRR Very good. Now you can move the article, add categories and link it to the zh wiki. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:48, 19 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240619084800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240619084800-WYRRRR-20240617132700","replies":["c-WYRRRR-20240619103900-Hanyangprofessor2-20240619084800"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello,Professor. Good evening, I have moved the article and linked it to the Chinese article. Please check it. WYRRRR (talk) 10:39, 19 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240619103900","author":"WYRRRR","type":"comment","level":5,"id":"c-WYRRRR-20240619103900-Hanyangprofessor2-20240619084800","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240620051100-WYRRRR-20240619103900"]}}-->
@WYRRRR Good job Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:11, 20 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240620051100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":6,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240620051100-WYRRRR-20240619103900","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Good evening, Professor. I am a student in both the Collective Intelligence in Practice and Sociology of Everyday Life aka Everyday Life courses. Last week, I submitted two translated articles and asked you questions in class. In the end, I completed the revisions to those two articles. And my third article was deleted, so I added some new references. This time it was not deleted, please check.
Third article: history of Chongqing zh to en ZHANGQI1066 (talk) 16:18, 18 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240618161800","author":"ZHANGQI1066","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-ZHANGQI1066-20240618161800-Deadline_8(Final_week)-ZHANG_QI","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240619092500-ZHANGQI1066-20240618161800"]}}-->
@ZHANGQI1066 I am afraid many of the references you have added are not good. References 11-14 are just meaningless text like "Reference for Ming Dynasty's control over Chongqing." - where is the actual reference? Links for references 21-32 to seem broken or lead to unrelated articles. Please fix them all, then format them so that they have correct metadata: first and late name, date, publisher, title (in English as well as Chinese). Currently they look like they've been generated by a hallucinating AI.
In addition, your article (history of) needs some improvements in its linking structure.
1) Some links you added are to Wikipedia:Disambiguation pages like Yuzhou. Which Yuzhou did you mean? To identify and fix the problem, go to your Preferences and activate the gadget called "Display links to disambiguation pages in orange". After you save your preferences and refresh (reload) your article, the wrong links will be in orange. Please fix them.
2) If a topic exists in Chinese but not English, please link it using this tool: Template:Interlanguage link (ex. Shannan West Circuit or Kuizhou Road). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here09:25, 19 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240619092500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240619092500-ZHANGQI1066-20240618161800","replies":["c-14.34.103.171-20240619093200-Hanyangprofessor2-20240619092500","c-ZHANGQI1066-20240619145500-Hanyangprofessor2-20240619092500"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
ok!I will correct it right away. Since there are a lot of parts that are in our national history textbooks, I didn't think the part about the Ming Dynasty needed any special detail. Sorry I will zai ci for the modification. I used ai in the revision process, because this article originally had English content, only due to the fact that the Chinese translation is very much after. So I used ai to combine my revised content in the sandbox with the original English of this article. This process may have caused a lot of errors, which I will fix right away. 14.34.103.171 (talk) 09:32, 19 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240619093200","author":"14.34.103.171","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-14.34.103.171-20240619093200-Hanyangprofessor2-20240619092500","replies":[]}}-->
I have completed the modifications. Firstly, regarding the reference citations of 11-14, I have removed some of the text and references, and changed the text references that I believe can continue to be retained into the form of external link references.
Secondly, I have made modifications to the citation section of 21-32. Due to some of the original citations being related to Dai Li, I have replaced those citations with a unified format and removed unnecessary ones. And regarding the reference to the Anti Japanese War section, my original text was deleted, so I found the link to this book on Amazon. I am not sure if this is feasible. And I had a link before that described an article about the North Korean government in Chongqing, but after clicking on it, it was an article about insects, and I also made modifications to this section.
Due to the fact that there have been English articles on this topic before, but the English section is only about one tenth of the Chinese section and the content does not overlap. So I have many problems when transferring translation content from Shahe to specific web pages. I asked AI if they could help me sort and combine my translated article and original text in a reasonable order, but this caused many citation issues. I'm sorry for the result.
Regarding the structural issues of the article:
1) I have completed the identification of 'yu zhou' and searched again for the most suitable website, so I did not use the method you proposed. I hope you can take a look at my results. And the specific Chinese characters for 'yu zhou' are mentioned in the next paragraph of the original text, so if you think it is necessary, I can make changes to the article and remind readers here.
2) I have completed this task, please check. ZHANGQI1066 (talk) 14:55, 19 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240619145500","author":"ZHANGQI1066","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-ZHANGQI1066-20240619145500-Hanyangprofessor2-20240619092500","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240620051800-ZHANGQI1066-20240619145500"]}}-->
@ZHANGQI1066 Good job fixing the errors. AI can be a very useful tool but as you can see it can also make many errors, and we need to supervise it carefully. It looks much better now. Well done Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:18, 20 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240620051800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240620051800-ZHANGQI1066-20240619145500","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Please check the above assignments and I would appreciate it if you could give me advice. CHENG SHIYI (talk) 11:06, 19 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240619110600","author":"CHENG SHIYI","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-CHENG_SHIYI-20240619110600-Final_week(Show_all_homework_content)\u2014CHENG_SHIYI","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240620052200-CHENG_SHIYI-20240619110600"]}}-->
@CHENG SHIYI Well done, your wiki assignments look good. Please double check them to see if any feedback from reviewers is given over the next few weeks. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:22, 20 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240620052200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240620052200-CHENG_SHIYI-20240619110600","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
4)This is all the blogs I have written this semester.
5)Wikipedia Extra Credit Photography Challenge:I have completed Photo challenge/2024- April - Flames,and Photo challenge/2024 - April - Vertical lines
Wishing you a pleasant summer vacation! 왕예화 (talk) 12:14, 19 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240619121400","author":"\uc655\uc608\ud654","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-\uc655\uc608\ud654-20240619121400-Final_week\u2014WANG_YIHUA","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240620052600-\uc655\uc608\ud654-20240619121400"]}}-->
@왕예화 Well done, , your wiki assignments look good. Please double check them to see if any feedback from reviewers is given over the next few weeks. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:26, 20 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240620052600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240620052600-\uc655\uc608\ud654-20240619121400","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello, professor! I'm Jeongha Ahn and I'm taking the Everyday Life and Social Structure class. I've finished editing deadline 3 and 4. Please check it! Thank you.
Deadline 4
hereJeongha1 (talk) 12:34, 19 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240619123400","author":"Jeongha1","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Jeongha1-20240619123400-Deadline_3&4_-_Jeongha_Ahn","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240620052800-Jeongha1-20240619123400"]}}-->
@Jeongha1 In here, please note that terms in headings are not usually linked, and links should go to other Wikipedia articles, not wiktionary. I recommend that you expand ko:문화 충격 directly, while keeping in mind that only referenced content can be added. Unreferenced content (or poorly translated content) may be removed by reviewing Korean Wikipedia editors, and it will not count for class credit - so make sure to add references together with your translations, and to proofread them carefully. Good luck! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:28, 20 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240620052800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240620052800-Jeongha1-20240619123400","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
@Seohyun SPlease double check feedback from the last time; ko:사용자:Seohyun S/연습장 still has some unnecessary text in English at the bottom, which I pointed out before. After you fix the issues I raised last time, you can publish your articles (make sure to add categories and connect your published articles to English originals). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:32, 20 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240620053200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240620053200-Seohyun_S-20240619135800","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello, professor. I have leave a feedback on user talk page https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User_talk:Chaekyo#feedback .Please chack it.
Another thing. I'm very sorry that my final assignment was submitted to the wrong place(Final - Everyday Life Story). I sent an email to explain, but I didn't get a reply. I hope professor will understand, thank you. MouFengcoo (talk) 05:06, 20 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240620050600","author":"MouFengcoo","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-MouFengcoo-20240620050600-Deadline_6_(Week_10)_-_QIU_PENGYU","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240620055700-MouFengcoo-20240620050600"]}}-->
@MouFengcoo I will check your final issue soon. I hope the other student finds your feedback useful; please remember that assignments completed late are awarded only some of the points you'd get if you complete them on time. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:57, 20 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240620055700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240620055700-MouFengcoo-20240620050600","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
@Lee Wooyeon Your translations are a good start but they are not finished. Please ensure that you translate all content - there are still untranslated parts, including most references. Please format the references so that they have all metadata: first and late name, date, publisher, title (in English as well as Korean).
For articles that exist on English but not Korean Wikipedia, please use ko:틀:임시링크 .
Also, please revisit our module on communicating on Wikipedia. You should leave your messages at the bottom of the talk page, and you should sign them properly. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:07, 21 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240621040700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240621040700-Lee_Wooyeon-20240620062000","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello professor, I'm Chaeyeong Lee, the student of Sociology of Everyday Life. Left a feedback on my friend's Wikipedia edit. Please check. hereChaeyeong09 (talk) 05:13, 13 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240613051300","author":"Chaeyeong09","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Chaeyeong09-20240613051300-Deadline_6(Week_7)-_Chaeyeong_Lee","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240614082800-Chaeyeong09-20240613051300"]}}-->
@Chaeyeong09 You have left your comment in the wrong place. Please try again and leave your comment at your classmate's talk page, not on their sandbox talk (subpage). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:28, 14 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240614082800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240614082800-Chaeyeong09-20240613051300","replies":["c-Chaeyeong09-20240621043300-Hanyangprofessor2-20240614082800"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I revised it, please check it again. hereChaeyeong09 (talk) 04:33, 21 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240621043300","author":"Chaeyeong09","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Chaeyeong09-20240621043300-Hanyangprofessor2-20240614082800","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240621045800-Chaeyeong09-20240621043300"]}}-->
@Chaeyeong09 Now it is correct. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:58, 21 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240621045800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240621045800-Chaeyeong09-20240621043300","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello professor. This is the Wikipedia editing task I have completed. Please review this and this. Thank you. Hayoung1 (talk) 12:21, 16 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240616122100","author":"Hayoung1","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Hayoung1-20240616122100-Deadline_7,_8_(Final)_-_Hayoung_Kwon","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240617090500-Hayoung1-20240616122100"]}}-->
@Hayoung1 Good progress. Your translations look good and are close to being finished, very good. For articles that exist on English but not Korean Wikipedia, please use ko:틀:임시링크
Make sure to include full bibliographical references for books and other sources cited at the bottom of your article.
After addressing the above, you can publish (move) your articles. After moving (publishing) your article(s), please add categories (see bottom of the original English articles for English categories and try to add similar one to your article) and please link it to the English article (see how at Help:Interlanguage_links#Links_in_the_"Languages"_list). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here09:05, 17 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240617090500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240617090500-Hayoung1-20240616122100","replies":["c-Hayoung1-20240620183700-Hanyangprofessor2-20240617090500"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello, professor.
I revised it to reflect the feedback and completed 황색언론 and 뉴욕 타임스.
Thank you. Hayoung1 (talk) 18:37, 20 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240620183700","author":"Hayoung1","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Hayoung1-20240620183700-Hanyangprofessor2-20240617090500","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240621050100-Hayoung1-20240620183700"]}}-->
@Hayoung1 Good. Please monitor your articles over the next few days to see if there is feedback from the Korean reviewers. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:01, 21 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240621050100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240621050100-Hayoung1-20240620183700","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Hello, Professor. I am a student in the Everyday Life and Social Structure class. I would like to report my final progress:
1. I have successfully published my article. It has been rated as Start-Class articles. And the language link has been added. Please check. Although there are still some shortcomings. I will work hard with the Wikipedia administrator to revise it. Thank you for your valuable suggestions on this article.
2. I have also completed all the extra credit activities for the blog. Please check it.
3. I will edit some additional English Wikipedia. The main edited article is this. Please check it.
Thank you for your help this semester. Thank you very much. Professor, you have worked hard. Lihaochang678 (talk) 15:18, 19 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240619151800","author":"Lihaochang678","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Lihaochang678-20240619151800-W16.1_June_17_(Mon)_LI_HAOCHANG","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240620053500-Lihaochang678-20240619151800"]}}-->
@Lihaochang678 Well done. Please note that several Chinese editors have reviewed your work and some have asked for additional fixes, you can see who they are here. I recommend you contact them on their talk pages and ask for detailed feedback.
Regarding your additions to the English article here, remember that all content added should be referenced, otherwise it can be removed form Wikipedia and will not count for course grade. Please add references to the content that is missing it to ensure your effort is not wasted. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:35, 20 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240620053500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240620053500-Lihaochang678-20240619151800","replies":["c-Lihaochang678-20240620081600-Hanyangprofessor2-20240620053500"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
OK, professor, I understand. Thank you for your advice.
1. I have communicated with those administrators. I basically know where the problem is. We will work together to revise this article.
2. I will continue to add some references to the additional edited Wikipedia. And make appropriate changes.
Thank you Lihaochang678 (talk) 08:16, 20 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240620081600","author":"Lihaochang678","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Lihaochang678-20240620081600-Hanyangprofessor2-20240620053500","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240621050400-Lihaochang678-20240620081600"]}}-->
@Lihaochang678 Good. Please keep me updated about your progress. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:04, 21 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240621050400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240621050400-Lihaochang678-20240620081600","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Hello, professor. I've added a few links and comments to Wikipedia's meda bias page. Please check. The link is here: https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EB%A7%A4%EC%B2%B4_%ED%8E%B8%ED%96%A5 Thank you! 전진이 (talk) 08:14, 20 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240620081400","author":"\uc804\uc9c4\uc774","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-\uc804\uc9c4\uc774-20240620081400-Deadline_3_-_Jeon_Jin_E","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240621051900-\uc804\uc9c4\uc774-20240620081400"]}}-->
@전진이That's fine for weekly extra credit, sure. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:19, 21 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240621051900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240621051900-\uc804\uc9c4\uc774-20240620081400","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
And yes, you can translate Asylums (book) for extra credit, good choice. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:28, 21 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240621052800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240621052800-Babaibiaobin-20240620145500","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
4.Here are the images I uploaded on Wikimedia Commons with the relevant tags and picture descriptions.
5.Here are the translations of two articles that I and my team member MU QING have completed.One is a Chinese translation into English.One is translated from English into Chinese. Both articles have been revised and published as recommended.
That's all I've done this semester.I hope to get your confirmation. Thank you for your help this semester. Thank you once again for your time and attention.Wishing you all the best and have a wonderful holiday! 1.241.68.131 (talk) 19:54, 20 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240620195400","author":"1.241.68.131","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-1.241.68.131-20240620195400-Final_week-_LIUXINRUI","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240621053200-1.241.68.131-20240620195400"]}}-->
@Muqing112233 Well done, I'll be calculating your grade in a short while and you can see if you need any extra credit then. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:32, 21 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240621053200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240621053200-1.241.68.131-20240620195400","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello, Professor. I am a student in the Everyday Life and Social Structure class.Here's my translation of Wikipedia. Check it out. [26]This Wikipedia is very new to me, so there are very many things that are not done well. The professor worked hard this semester, thank you. Orange-1203 (talk) 22:24, 20 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240620222400","author":"Orange-1203","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Orange-1203-20240620222400-final-chen_zhitong","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240621055300-Orange-1203-20240620222400"]}}-->
@Orange-1203 Regarding your Chinese article, it seems ready. You can publish (move) it. After moving (publishing) your article(s), please add categories (see bottom of the original English articles for English categories and try to add similar one to your article) and please link it to the English article (see how at Help:Interlanguage_links#Links_in_the_"Languages"_list)
But please keep in mind that if you are translating from English to Chinese for this assignment, you need to carry out TWO translations. Anarchism in Korea is one. What is your second one? If you have not chosen it yet, how about Anarchism in Poland? Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:53, 21 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240621055300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240621055300-Orange-1203-20240620222400","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello professor, I moved from English Wikipedia to Korean Wikipedia based on the feedback I received on Deadline 4, and I also added pictures and links. Additionally, I've completed all of Deadline 8. Please check. I'll attach the link below.
https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%82%AC%ED%9A%8C_%EA%B3%84%EA%B8%89https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EB%B2%95%EC%82%AC%ED%9A%8C%ED%95%99Seungmilsm (talk) 00:07, 21 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240621000700","author":"Seungmilsm","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Seungmilsm-20240621000700-Deadline_8\uff08The_Finals_Week\uff09Lee_Sung_Mi","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240621055400-Seungmilsm-20240621000700"]}}-->
@Seungmilsm Good. Now please monitor your work over the next few weeks to ensure that any feedback from Korean reviewers is promptly addressed. Remember to proofread your translations to eliminate any machine translation errors, for example. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:54, 21 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240621055400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240621055400-Seungmilsm-20240621000700","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Hello professor. I am a student of daily life and social structure. My academic number is 2023025414.This is my Wikipedia assignment.I'd like to ask you how to insert English pictures, but the pictures can't be inserted.And there's something else to add.Please check, thank you!https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Wsw1357/%E6%B2%99%E7%9B%92Wsw1357 (talk) 05:38, 17 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240617053800","author":"Wsw1357","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Wsw1357-20240617053800-The_Final_Week\u2014WANG_SIWEN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240617093500-Wsw1357-20240617053800"]}}-->
@Wsw1357 To use a picture, click "add image" on Chinese Wikipedia and add the picture name, or copy the code from "use this picture" option from the image page. You should be able to use File:Censorship of Tik Tok.svg and File:Banning of TikTok on state devices in the United States.svg on Chinese Wikipedia without any problems, although you may have to ask Chinese experienced editors on how to copy the advanced caption (legend) code from English - I recommend doing so here: at zh:维基百科:Discord交流群
After that, you can publish (move) your article. After moving (publishing) your article, please add categories (see bottom of the original English articles for English categories and try to add similar one to your article) and please link it to the English article (see how at Help:Interlanguage_links#Links_in_the_"Languages"_list). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here09:35, 17 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240617093500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240617093500-Wsw1357-20240617053800","replies":["c-211.36.149.43-20240620053800-Hanyangprofessor2-20240617093500"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello professor.I have successfully inserted this photo through your explanation.But for the last link, I don't have this option because I implemented the wrong upload a few weeks ago and the administrator has restricted my permissions on this. Can you delete this permission?Or maybe there are ways to solve it. 211.36.149.43 (talk) 05:38, 20 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240620053800","author":"211.36.149.43","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-211.36.149.43-20240620053800-Hanyangprofessor2-20240617093500","replies":["c-AlphaBetaGamma-20240620055000-211.36.149.43-20240620053800","c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240620060100-211.36.149.43-20240620053800"]}}-->
Just driving by because this edit triggered the edit filter, which I am patrolling, but you seem to be logged out, which is uncommon for a student editor. Maybe fix that? Also IP editors can't upload images if I'm correct. Anyways, I'm sure that if an image is protected from being uploaded, I'm sure people with appropriate permissions can do it. Also a drive by note that I've modified the archiving interval for this page since it's getting too laggy to patrol. ABG (Talk/Report any mistakes here) 05:50, 20 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240620055000","author":"AlphaBetaGamma","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-AlphaBetaGamma-20240620055000-211.36.149.43-20240620053800","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240620055800-AlphaBetaGamma-20240620055000"],"displayName":"ABG"}}-->
@AlphaBetaGamma Student forgetting to log in - not as uncommon as you think :P Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:58, 20 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240620055800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":5,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240620055800-AlphaBetaGamma-20240620055000","replies":["c-AlphaBetaGamma-20240620060500-Hanyangprofessor2-20240620055800"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Well I've encountered problematic student edits before, but they're more uncommon than you think, as much as an IP forgetting to log in during a discussion and causing a patroller to revert the comment because they thought a completely different person was replying. I had to get an administrator to protect an article from being made to prevent 4th recreation of CSD-worthy mess once, but that was about it. By the way, I've modified the archive date to 14d for the convenience of other people and myself as the page was getting too heavy, but I hope you don't mind. ABG (Talk/Report any mistakes here) 06:05, 20 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240620060500","author":"AlphaBetaGamma","type":"comment","level":6,"id":"c-AlphaBetaGamma-20240620060500-Hanyangprofessor2-20240620055800","replies":["c-AlphaBetaGamma-20240620061000-AlphaBetaGamma-20240620060500"],"displayName":"ABG"}}-->
Oh well. Anyways, @Wsw1357, I'm going to intervene but only autoconfirmed users can upload messages in Wikipedia and you have 9 edits to both ZH and EN versions, which regrettably is not enough for the status. ABG (Talk/Report any mistakes here) 06:10, 20 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240620061000","author":"AlphaBetaGamma","type":"comment","level":7,"id":"c-AlphaBetaGamma-20240620061000-AlphaBetaGamma-20240620060500","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240620114200-AlphaBetaGamma-20240620061000"],"displayName":"ABG"}}-->
@AlphaBetaGamma Sure. I was trying to keep more content here on the off chance some students would read it and learn from my comments to others, but, a, I've never seen any indication this happens, and b, yeah, this page is too big and I am having trouble loading it myself, so - good call. Cheers, Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here11:42, 20 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240620114200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":8,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240620114200-AlphaBetaGamma-20240620061000","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
@Wsw1357 You will need to publish (move) your article before you can link it to the English article. Please publish it first, then link it. Hopefully this will fix the issue you are having. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here06:01, 20 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240620060100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240620060100-211.36.149.43-20240620053800","replies":["c-Wsw1357-20240621064700-Hanyangprofessor2-20240620060100"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
@Hanyangprofessor2Professor, I don't have the option to move, which means I can't publish, I can only publish in my own sandbox.I tried but couldn't find a move option.If I can't publish it means I can't join the link, what should I do with the tasks I did earlier? Wsw1357 (talk) 06:47, 21 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240621064700","author":"Wsw1357","type":"comment","level":5,"id":"c-Wsw1357-20240621064700-Hanyangprofessor2-20240620060100","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240622035500-Wsw1357-20240621064700"]}}-->
@Wsw1357 I see. In that case, you need to ask for help from Chinese Wikipedia editors with advanced permission - see instructions here: zh:Help:页面重命名Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:55, 22 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240622035500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":6,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240622035500-Wsw1357-20240621064700","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Hello Professor, I am Kim Min-jee, academic taking Everyday Life and Social Structure class. I am attaching an article, so I would appreciate it if you could check it and give me feedback.
@Minis707 I am afraid the links you provided above are broken. Please link your articles here directly and double check that the links work from this page, then I'll provide feedback. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:30, 20 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240620053000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240620053000-Minis707-20240619125100","replies":["c-Minis707-20240621131900-Hanyangprofessor2-20240620053000"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
@Minis707 Good progress. Please finish your translation ASAP (for example, your Korean article on Overgrazing is missing more than half the references). Information overload is also missing many. Once you are done, you can move (publish) your article. Then please add categories (see bottom of the original English articles for English categories and try to add similar one to your article) and please link it to the English article (see how at Help:Interlanguage_links#Links_in_the_"Languages"_list). After that, please update me linking to your published articles, and monitor them to see if there is any feedback from Korean reviewers. In particular, make sure to proofread your work correctly to remove any errors from machine translation; too many errors can result in your article being deleted and the assignment failed. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:03, 22 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240622040300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240622040300-Minis707-20240621131900","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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@전진이 Good start, although you should have done so months ago, per our deadlines. Please try to finish your work ASAP, right now this is just a beginning that needs links and references and other advanced elements like images. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:40, 22 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240622044000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240622044000-\uc804\uc9c4\uc774-20240621062800","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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The deadline is 7,8 submissions.- 2022071194 Jeong Da-yeon taking <Everyday Life Story> class
Originally, I tried to edit Korean translations on two topics: 1. The Wave of Democracy document and 2. The censorship document of Korean movies. 2. Someone else has already translated the censorship document of Korean movies into Korean, so I translated the document on "Latin America's History" as a Wikipedia-recommended editing document into Korean.
I was going to visit the lab today Friday and talk to you in person, but I'm sorry to talk to you late because you didn't come today.
If there's anything I need to change, please let me know Jeong dayean (talk) 08:10, 21 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240621081000","author":"Jeong dayean","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Jeong_dayean-20240621081000-The_deadline_is_7,8_submissions.-_2022071194_Jeong_Da-yeon_taking_<Everyday_Life","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240622053400-Jeong_dayean-20240621081000"]}}-->
However, your translations have a number of errors. You need to add references in the form of footnotes to appopriate places. For articles that exist on English but not Korean Wikipedia, please use ko:틀:임시링크 to link articles from English Wikipedia. Remember to proofread your translations to eliminate any machine translation errors, for example - your articles have already been tagged as having translation problems. Please correct the issues promptly; poorly translated articles can be deleted and that would negatively affect our assignment.
Some content in your articles have been already fixed by the reviewers - please study the changes (1, 2) and learn from them for your future writing. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:34, 22 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240622053400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240622053400-Jeong_dayean-20240621081000","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Final week(all homework content)—LI YULUN(Collective Intelligence and Wikipedia)
Please check. I hope the professor has a nice vacation. LIYULUN (talk) 10:05, 21 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240621100500","author":"LIYULUN","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-LIYULUN-20240621100500-Final_week(all_homework_content)\u2014LI_YULUN(Collective_Intelligence_and_Wikipedi","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240622054300-LIYULUN-20240621100500"]}}-->
@LIYULUN Good job. To finish your English article, please Please the references so that they have all metadata: first and late name, date, publisher, title (in English as well as Korean).
There is also a potential problem with the review section: most of it comes from https://movie.douban.com/review/14024363/ . This seems like Wikipedia:User-generated content - what makes the reviewer 掌中萌虎 , a reliable source? Can you find reviews in newspapers, magazines and other reliable souces to improve this section? Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:43, 22 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240622054300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240622054300-LIYULUN-20240621100500","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Submitting the Final Deadline. Please give me feedback. Thank you.:) :) Seohyun S (talk) 13:08, 21 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240621130800","author":"Seohyun S","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Seohyun_S-20240621130800-Deadline_7,8(Final)_Seohyun_Son_\uc190\uc11c\ud604","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240622054800-Seohyun_S-20240621130800"]}}-->
@Seohyun S I am glad to see progress. Here are some final issues to fix:
Some of your links go to English Wikipedia.For articles that exist in English but not Korean, please use ko:틀:임시링크 to link articles from English Wikipedia.
Then please publish your articles. After moving (publishing) your article(s), please add categories (see bottom of the original English articles for English categories and try to add similar one to your article) and please link it to the English article (see how at Help:Interlanguage_links#Links_in_the_"Languages"_list).
And please monitor your work over the next few weeks to ensure that any feedback from Korean reviewers is promptly addressed. Remember to proofread your translations to eliminate any machine translation errors, for example. Poor translation can lead to your articles being deleted and that would negatively impact your grade, so please make sure to proofread them carefully before publication.
Please update me once your work is published. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:48, 22 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240622054800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240622054800-Seohyun_S-20240621130800","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Submitting the Final Deadline. Please give me feedback. Thank you. Minis707 (talk) 13:21, 21 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240621132100","author":"Minis707","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Minis707-20240621132100-Deadline_8_(Final)-_Kim_Min-jee","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240622055100-Minis707-20240621132100"]}}-->
@Minis707 Good. Please publish your articles as I described in my previous feedback (moving them, adding categories and linking to the English original). And please monitor your work over the next few weeks to ensure that any feedback from Korean reviewers is promptly addressed. Remember to proofread your translations to eliminate any machine translation errors, for example. Poor translation can lead to your articles being deleted and that would negatively impact your grade, so please make sure to proofread them carefully before publication. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:51, 22 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240622055100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240622055100-Minis707-20240621132100","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I am LI MENGRU, a student in the Collective Intelligence in Practice course.
I have completed all the blog assignments on time, please check them out.
Thank you very much for your help this semester, which has helped me gain a lot. I wish you a happy holiday!TMXX0818 (talk) 04:27, 22 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240622042700","author":"TMXX0818","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-TMXX0818-20240622042700-About_Blog","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240622055400-TMXX0818-20240622042700"]}}-->
Ok! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:54, 22 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240622055400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240622055400-TMXX0818-20240622042700","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I'm Yang Peifu, taking classes on 'Understanding Wikipedia' and 'Everyday Life and Social Structure'.
I have 10 edits per week, Please check it. Thank you!
Eggy Party and Taiwan Daily News are Wikipedia articles for increasing the score of Introduction to Sociology. Liu Shuqin, Zhang Wenhuan, Draft: Wang Baiyuan, Xie Lifa, and Wu Kunhuang are articles that need to be completed and increase the score of Collective Intelligence in Practice: Understanding Wikipedia. Please check them out. Thank you! Yangpeifu (talk) 12:23, 14 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240614122300","author":"Yangpeifu","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Yangpeifu-20240614122300-Week15\uff08YANGPEIFU\uff09","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240615035200-Yangpeifu-20240614122300"]}}-->
in Eggy Party, please format the references so that they have all metadata: first and late name, date, publisher, title (in English as well as Chinese). If you don't know how to do this, ask me in class or during office hours
in Taiwan Daily News, please add categories (look at Chinese article and its categories, then try to add similar categories to your English translation), and format references with metedata.
in Liu Shuqin, format references with metedata. That article can also use more blue links, for example to Tsinghua University. See what other terms can be linked and link them. For articles that exist in Chinese but not English use Template:Interlanguage link.
Zhang Wenhuan needs categories and metadata fixing in references
Wang Baiyuan can be moved to mainspace after you add categories (most references there are well formatted already with metadata). After publishing it (moving it), please link it to the Chinese article (see how at Help:Interlanguage_links#Links_in_the_"Languages"_list).
Please add links to your other articles in the same fashion (see how they are linked to in Chinese then try to add links from existing English articles)
Wu Kunhuang needs ref metadata, and addressing the orphan issue
Overall, you are doing a very good job! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:52, 15 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240615035200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240615035200-Yangpeifu-20240614122300","replies":["c-Yangpeifu-20240622065900-Hanyangprofessor2-20240615035200"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor,
I have been completing the above tasks these days, and I added "Guo Qiusen"'s article to solve the orphan article of "Liu Shuqin". I have moved "Wang Baiyuan"'s article and the cross-language links of the above articles. Please check, thank you!
My blog1 and blog2 assignments are also all completed, And commented on classmates' blogs more than a dozen times, please check, thank you, professor! Yangpeifu (talk) 06:59, 22 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240622065900","author":"Yangpeifu","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Yangpeifu-20240622065900-Hanyangprofessor2-20240615035200","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240622081400-Yangpeifu-20240622065900"]}}-->
@Yangpeifu Well done. Wang Baiyuan needs WP:CATEGORIES (see original Chinese articles or categories in Guo Qiusen for ideas). Well done expanding Guo Qiusen, it will count for extra credit. Please double check the references you added there - they may need metadata fixing (title, author, date, etc.). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:14, 22 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240622081400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240622081400-Yangpeifu-20240622065900","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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ZHANG LUYA 장로아 (talk) 09:06, 8 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240608090600","author":"\uc7a5\ub85c\uc544","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-\uc7a5\ub85c\uc544-20240608090600-\uc7a5\ub85c\uc544-20240608090500","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240609042300-\uc7a5\ub85c\uc544-20240608090600"]}}-->
@장로아 Please link your published article(s) that you want me to review directly like this: China,
(not the translation module). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:23, 9 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240609042300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240609042300-\uc7a5\ub85c\uc544-20240608090600","replies":["c-\uc7a5\ub85c\uc544-20240609071100-Hanyangprofessor2-20240609042300"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Do you think this is the right address? 장로아 (talk) 07:11, 9 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240609071100","author":"\uc7a5\ub85c\uc544","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-\uc7a5\ub85c\uc544-20240609071100-Hanyangprofessor2-20240609042300","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240610034700-\uc7a5\ub85c\uc544-20240609071100"]}}-->
@장로아 Yes, I can review this. I am afraid your article needs a lot of improvement before it is publishable.
The information at top should be in a properly formatted WP:INFOBOX.
Your article needs references; only referenced content is allowed on Wikipedia (and counts for class credit). See WP:V and our corresponding class module. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:47, 10 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240610034700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":5,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240610034700-\uc7a5\ub85c\uc544-20240609071100","replies":["c-\uc7a5\ub85c\uc544-20240615124500-Hanyangprofessor2-20240610034700"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Professor, this is my revised translation, please check
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:%EC%9E%A5%EB%A1%9C%EC%95%84/sandbox장로아 (talk) 12:45, 15 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240615124500","author":"\uc7a5\ub85c\uc544","type":"comment","level":6,"id":"c-\uc7a5\ub85c\uc544-20240615124500-Hanyangprofessor2-20240610034700","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240617054400-\uc7a5\ub85c\uc544-20240615124500"]}}-->
Most of your content still needs references. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:44, 17 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240617054400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":7,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240617054400-\uc7a5\ub85c\uc544-20240615124500","replies":["c-\uc7a5\ub85c\uc544-20240617081700-Hanyangprofessor2-20240617054400"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Professor, this is my revised translation, please check
User:장로아/sandbox장로아 (talk) 08:17, 17 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240617081700","author":"\uc7a5\ub85c\uc544","type":"comment","level":8,"id":"c-\uc7a5\ub85c\uc544-20240617081700-Hanyangprofessor2-20240617054400","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240617090200-\uc7a5\ub85c\uc544-20240617081700"]}}-->
@장로아 You are making progress, but please use a proper infobox template. Look at the infoboxes used in other similar articles (ex. Zhou Shen), and copy one of them and add it to your article, then modify accordingly.
After that, focus on adding references (and ensure they have the correct metadata - author, date, publisher, and title; if the source is Chinese the title should be both in Chinese and English). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here09:02, 17 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240617090200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":9,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240617090200-\uc7a5\ub85c\uc544-20240617081700","replies":["c-\uc7a5\ub85c\uc544-20240619113800-Hanyangprofessor2-20240617090200"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Professor, this is my revised translation, please check
User:장로아/sandbox장로아 (talk) 11:38, 19 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240619113800","author":"\uc7a5\ub85c\uc544","type":"comment","level":10,"id":"c-\uc7a5\ub85c\uc544-20240619113800-Hanyangprofessor2-20240617090200","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240622084500-\uc7a5\ub85c\uc544-20240619113800"]}}-->
@장로아 Good,but there are still many issues to fix. Some are the ones I mentioned before - For links to Chinese articles like "The Coming One 2 please use tool: Template:Interlanguage link. Some link to articles that do not even seem to exist on zh wiki like 见面吧!电台 .
Also, please add Chinese name of that person to your lead and infobox - again, compare your article with Zhou Shen "Zhou Shen (Chinese: 周深; pinyin: Zhōu Shēn; born 29 September 1992), also known as"
Your three references do not have correct metadata, and the biggest problem still remains - most of your article is still unreferenced. In order for you to be able to publish your article and complete the assignment,all the content needs to be referenced to reliable sources (see Wikipedia:Verifiability); as mentioned in our syllabus, only referenced content counts for our assignment. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:45, 22 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240622084500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":11,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240622084500-\uc7a5\ub85c\uc544-20240619113800","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I am ZHONG XIN, a student in the Collective Intelligence in Practice course.(Wikipedia ID: Zhongxxin)
I will give you a report on all the course tasks I have completed this semester:
1. I have added a lot of new content to the article "中国史前文化", and have translated the Chinese article into English (Prehistory of China) and then published and revised it.
2. In this semester, I have edited the English Wikipedia more than 340 times (on average, more than 20 times per week), the Chinese Wikipedia more than 50 times, the Wikivoyage more than 20 times, and the Wikicommons more than 50 times.
3. This is a total of 17 blog posts I wrote this semester. In addition to the weekly blog assignments, there were also blog discussions in Collective Intelligence in Practice course. And I have commented on my group member @CHENG SHIYI's blog post more than ten times.
These are all the tasks I have completed this semester, please check them. I hope I can get some extra marks from these.
I would be grateful if you could give me some advice.
Thank you for your hard work this semester, Professor. Thank you very much for your constant teaching and help. Zhongxxin (talk) 21:01, 20 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240620210100","author":"Zhongxxin","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Zhongxxin-20240620210100-Semester_Summary\u2014ZHONG_XIN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240621055000-Zhongxxin-20240620210100"]}}-->
@Zhongxxin Very good, I'll be calculating your grade shortly, I am sure it will be good. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:50, 21 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240621055000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240621055000-Zhongxxin-20240620210100","replies":["c-Zhongxxin-20240622121500-Hanyangprofessor2-20240621055000"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Thank you very much,Professor! Zhongxxin (talk) 12:15, 22 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240622121500","author":"Zhongxxin","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Zhongxxin-20240622121500-Hanyangprofessor2-20240621055000","replies":[]}}-->
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Good afternoon, professor. I have completed and published the translated article as you requested. Please check it. Hanyuanyuan613 (talk) 03:26, 17 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240617032600","author":"Hanyuanyuan613","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Hanyuanyuan613-20240617032600-Deadline_8_(The_Finals_Week)_-_HAN_YUANYUAN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240617092300-Hanyuanyuan613-20240617032600"]}}-->
@Hanyuanyuan613 Good. Please try to add references to the parts that do not have them (last paragraph of 'History and culture' and middle paragraph of 'Customary form') Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here09:23, 17 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240617092300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240617092300-Hanyuanyuan613-20240617032600","replies":["c-Hanyuanyuan613-20240617122000-Hanyangprofessor2-20240617092300"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Good evening professor, I have added some references appropriately, please check. Hanyuanyuan613 (talk) 12:20, 17 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240617122000","author":"Hanyuanyuan613","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Hanyuanyuan613-20240617122000-Hanyangprofessor2-20240617092300","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240619085200-Hanyuanyuan613-20240617122000"]}}-->
@Hanyuanyuan613 I still see parts that are unreferenced. To help you, I've marked them with "citation needed" template inline. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:52, 19 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240619085200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240619085200-Hanyuanyuan613-20240617122000","replies":["c-Hanyuanyuan613-20240620100400-Hanyangprofessor2-20240619085200"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Good evening, Professor. Thank you very much for your help. I have revised the article, please check it. Hanyuanyuan613 (talk) 10:04, 20 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240620100400","author":"Hanyuanyuan613","type":"comment","level":5,"id":"c-Hanyuanyuan613-20240620100400-Hanyangprofessor2-20240619085200","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240621050300-Hanyuanyuan613-20240620100400"]}}-->
Good evening, professor. I don't know how to add citations to some Chinese abbreviations, such as "dragon through flowers"(龙穿花). So I changed it to a description of the meaning of the word. And the sentence "exudes a unique charm" means that the iron flower has unique characteristics, which are displayed in front of the audience. How should I add citations to this sentence? Hanyuanyuan613 (talk) 16:44, 21 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240621164400","author":"Hanyuanyuan613","type":"comment","level":7,"id":"c-Hanyuanyuan613-20240621164400-Hanyangprofessor2-20240621050300","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240622035100-Hanyuanyuan613-20240621164400"]}}-->
@Hanyuanyuan613 You should check which of your existing sources confirms those facts, such as says that the iron flowe has unique characteristics, and add it to the relevant sentence. If none of your current sources contain that assertion, you need to find a new source to add or remove that sentence as unverifiable. See also Wikipedia:VerifiabilityPiotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:51, 22 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240622035100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":8,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240622035100-Hanyuanyuan613-20240621164400","replies":["c-Hanyuanyuan613-20240622111900-Hanyangprofessor2-20240622035100"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I have made appropriate modifications and added some citations. Please check it, professor. Hanyuanyuan613 (talk) 11:19, 22 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240622111900","author":"Hanyuanyuan613","type":"comment","level":9,"id":"c-Hanyuanyuan613-20240622111900-Hanyangprofessor2-20240622035100","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240622121100-Hanyuanyuan613-20240622111900"]}}-->
@Hanyuanyuan613 Well done Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here12:11, 22 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240622121100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":10,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240622121100-Hanyuanyuan613-20240622111900","replies":["c-Hanyuanyuan613-20240622154900-Hanyangprofessor2-20240622121100"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Thank you very much, professor. Hanyuanyuan613 (talk) 15:49, 22 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240622154900","author":"Hanyuanyuan613","type":"comment","level":11,"id":"c-Hanyuanyuan613-20240622154900-Hanyangprofessor2-20240622121100","replies":[]}}-->
Hello Professor!
I am WEN JIAYAO(2023087238)a student of the Everyday Life and Social Structure.WANG SIWEN(2023025414)and I will finished our homework in a group. Our project is to translate a Wikipedia article about the license plate number of civil motor vehicles of the People's Republic of China. https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/中华人民共和国民用机动车号牌 In addition, We will complete a research on the identity and social status of car owners reflected by Shanghai license plate policy in recent years.!
What do you think, professor? I hope to hear your reply.
.My student numbeWen Jiayao and I finished our homework in a group. Her student number is202308723. Our project is to Wjyy1212 (talk) 06:10, 19 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240319061000","author":"Wjyy1212","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Wjyy1212-20240319061000-Deadline2(week3)_2","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240319072800-Wjyy1212-20240319061000"]}}-->
@Wjyy1212 @Wsw1357 The translation topic about Chinese car plates from Chinese to English is approved. Regarding your other topic I am not sure I fully understand it - I'd recommend you instead chose to translate a topic from my list here from English to Chinese: User:Piotrus/Ideas for students . If you are interested in motorization, how about History of steam road vehicles ? Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:28, 19 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240319072800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240319072800-Wjyy1212-20240319061000","replies":["c-Wjyy1212-20240319075700-Hanyangprofessor2-20240319072800"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Professor, we have chosen the topic of English translation into Chinese. Do you think it's okay?https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Censorship_of_TikTokWjyy1212 (talk) 07:57, 19 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240319075700","author":"Wjyy1212","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Wjyy1212-20240319075700-Hanyangprofessor2-20240319072800","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240320050500-Wjyy1212-20240319075700"]}}-->
@Wjyy1212 Ok - topic approved! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:05, 20 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240320050500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240320050500-Wjyy1212-20240319075700","replies":["c-Wjyy1212-20240331070900-Hanyangprofessor2-20240320050500"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello, professor! I have uploaded the translated content to the sandbox! And two photos were uploaded in the Wiki folk photo competition.
This is the link!Do you think it's okay? Professor?
https://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/File:江南夜市行.jpgWjyy1212 (talk) 07:09, 31 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240331070900","author":"Wjyy1212","type":"comment","level":5,"id":"c-Wjyy1212-20240331070900-Hanyangprofessor2-20240320050500","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240401092600-Wjyy1212-20240331070900"]}}-->
@Wjyy1212 Very good job with the pictures. For your images, can you add the description in English? You should also add categories (they are like tags). See Commons:Categories .
Regarding your sandbox translation, please link it here for a review. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here09:26, 1 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240401092600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":6,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240401092600-Wjyy1212-20240331070900","replies":["c-Wjyy1212-20240404141400-Hanyangprofessor2-20240401092600"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
This is my sandbox link, which contains the content I translated.The description and classification of the picture is a little difficult for me, because it has been uploaded. If you want to change it, you need to use coding. I am not very good at using it. I’m sorry, Professor. Wjyy1212 (talk) 14:14, 4 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240404141400","author":"Wjyy1212","type":"comment","level":7,"id":"c-Wjyy1212-20240404141400-Hanyangprofessor2-20240401092600","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240405022300-Wjyy1212-20240404141400"]}}-->
@Wjyy1212 This is a good start, but please use tools like Grammarly to improve your grammar; many sentences are hard to understand. Next, work on adding blue links (hyperlinks) and correctly formatted references, as well as importing images. If there are any code issues, talk to me during class or office hours, and I'll help you solve the problems. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:23, 5 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240405022300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":8,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240405022300-Wjyy1212-20240404141400","replies":["c-Wjyy1212-20240615070500-Hanyangprofessor2-20240405022300"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Professor, I didn't have time to visit you in the office on Friday because of the exam. I have slightly modified the translation. Do you have any questions?The translation is in my sandbox. Wjyy1212 (talk) 07:05, 15 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240615070500","author":"Wjyy1212","type":"comment","level":9,"id":"c-Wjyy1212-20240615070500-Hanyangprofessor2-20240405022300","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240617032600-Wjyy1212-20240615070500"]}}-->
@Wjyy1212 You are making good progress. Remember that all content added should be referenced, otherwise it can be removed form Wikipedia and will not count for course grade. You can publish your work (WP:MOVE it to the mainspace) anytime.
After moving it, please add categories (see bottom of the original Chinese articles for Chinese categories and try to add similar one to your article) and please link it to the Chinese article (see how at Help:Interlanguage_links#Links_in_the_"Languages"_list). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:26, 17 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240617032600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":10,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240617032600-Wjyy1212-20240615070500","replies":["c-Wjyy1212-20240621024400-Hanyangprofessor2-20240617032600"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I modified it as you said. Do you think there are any other problems? Wjyy1212 (talk) 02:44, 21 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240621024400","author":"Wjyy1212","type":"comment","level":11,"id":"c-Wjyy1212-20240621024400-Hanyangprofessor2-20240617032600","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240621044700-Wjyy1212-20240621024400"]}}-->
@Wjyy1212 Regarding your English translation about Chinese vehicle plates, there are two problems to fix in this round of the review:
1) Your categories are incorrect (red). Please try to identify working (blue) categories.
To identify and fix the problem, go to your Preferences and activate the gadget called "Display links to disambiguation pages in orange". After you save your preferences and refresh (reload) your article, the wrong links will be in orange. Please fix them, then you can publish (move) your page.
Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:47, 21 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240621044700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":12,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240621044700-Wjyy1212-20240621024400","replies":["c-Wjyy1212-20240621061300-Hanyangprofessor2-20240621044700"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
OK, I see, professor. When will it be completed at the latest? Wjyy1212 (talk) 06:13, 21 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240621061300","author":"Wjyy1212","type":"comment","level":13,"id":"c-Wjyy1212-20240621061300-Hanyangprofessor2-20240621044700","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240622025600-Wjyy1212-20240621061300"]}}-->
@Wjyy1212 If you are asking about deadline, please complete your Wikipedia project ASAP, at minimum by June 26th. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:56, 22 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240622025600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":14,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240622025600-Wjyy1212-20240621061300","replies":["c-Wjyy1212-20240622142800-Hanyangprofessor2-20240622025600"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I have fixed the above two problems. Do you have any other problems, professor? Wjyy1212 (talk) 14:28, 22 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240622142800","author":"Wjyy1212","type":"comment","level":15,"id":"c-Wjyy1212-20240622142800-Hanyangprofessor2-20240622025600","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240623031300-Wjyy1212-20240622142800"]}}-->
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Hi professor, I'm a student in your class "Everyday Life and Social Structure". I edited and added references in here. please check. I used a citation template and make my reference have a title, author, publisher, date of publication and translated title. Kimseoeun2023079825 (talk) 15:17, 25 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240325151700","author":"Kimseoeun2023079825","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Kimseoeun2023079825-20240325151700-Deadline3(week_4)-_Kim_Seo_Eun","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240328051000-Kimseoeun2023079825-20240325151700"]}}-->
@Kimseoeun2023079825 Your reference is good, but in your edit why did you chance "Haemaro" to "Haimarrow "? This seems like an error - please restore the original spelling unless you can explain to me why your version is better. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:10, 28 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240328051000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240328051000-Kimseoeun2023079825-20240325151700","replies":["c-210.98.151.244-20240329160900-Hanyangprofessor2-20240328051000"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Umm.. actually it’s not an error. I edited because the company’s official spelling is Haimarrow. Not the Haemaro. You can see here. Also, when you search haemaro in google, you cannot see the company that take over mom’s touch. When you search haimarrow, you can find the official site. Haimarrow and Haemaro, both can read “해마로“, its not a problem in korean, but i think it have to be more correct in enlglish wikipedia.(because it is a korea company, enlgish users can have a problem when they search it.) 210.98.151.244 (talk) 16:09, 29 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240329160900","author":"210.98.151.244","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-210.98.151.244-20240329160900-Hanyangprofessor2-20240328051000","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240401093600-210.98.151.244-20240329160900","c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240401093600-210.98.151.244-20240329160900-1"]}}-->
@Kimseoeun2023079825 I see. Thank you for correcting me, you are indeed right. I recommend you copy your explanation from here to the article's talk page at Talk:Mom's Touch for extra credit. Other people can be confused like I was and it is good to explain this to them. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here09:36, 1 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240401093600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240401093600-210.98.151.244-20240329160900","replies":["c-Kimseoeun2023079825-20240402123800-Hanyangprofessor2-20240401093600"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I copied my explanation to the article's talk page here. Kimseoeun2023079825 (talk) 12:38, 2 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240402123800","author":"Kimseoeun2023079825","type":"comment","level":5,"id":"c-Kimseoeun2023079825-20240402123800-Hanyangprofessor2-20240401093600","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240402134300-Kimseoeun2023079825-20240402123800"]}}-->
@Kimseoeun2023079825 Very good. I also recommend using software like Grammarly to improve your English output Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here13:43, 2 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240402134300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":6,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240402134300-Kimseoeun2023079825-20240402123800","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
PS. For extra credit, perhaps you can take a picture of the store (front and inside) and add it to the article? Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here09:36, 1 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240401093600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240401093600-210.98.151.244-20240329160900-1","replies":["c-Kimseoeun2023079825-20240622124700-Hanyangprofessor2-20240401093600"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I took a picture of the store and added to the article. please check. Kimseoeun2023079825 (talk) 12:47, 22 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240622124700","author":"Kimseoeun2023079825","type":"comment","level":5,"id":"c-Kimseoeun2023079825-20240622124700-Hanyangprofessor2-20240401093600","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240623032800-Kimseoeun2023079825-20240622124700"]}}-->
@Kimseoeun2023079825 I see your picture at Commons (File:Mom's touch picture.png) but it is not in the article yet. I'd recommend trying to take a better picture - the right half of your picture is taken up by unrelated content. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:28, 23 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240623032800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":6,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240623032800-Kimseoeun2023079825-20240622124700","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello, Professor. I have completed your translation and I would like to ask you to check1check2 it. I will seriously make corrections based on your suggestions. Thank you. JINJINYAN (talk) 07:28, 11 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240611072800","author":"JINJINYAN","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-JINJINYAN-20240611072800-YAN_JINJIN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240612040000-JINJINYAN-20240611072800"]}}-->
@JINJINYAN Good job, you can publish your article. After publishing (moving) your article, please add WP:CATEGORIES: and link your article to the English one with the tool explained here Help:Interlanguage links Now, you should monitor your article to check for any feedback from Chinese reviewers over the next few weeks Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:00, 12 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240612040000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240612040000-JINJINYAN-20240611072800","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240617094200-Hanyangprofessor2-20240612040000"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
@JINJINYAN Please review the concerns raised over your work at zh:Wikipedia:互助客栈/其他#新用户通过撰写新条目的方式“完成学科作业”的处理讨论 and address them. Thank you Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here09:42, 17 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240617094200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240617094200-Hanyangprofessor2-20240612040000","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240623033300-Hanyangprofessor2-20240617094200"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
@JINJINYAN Please note that majority of your translated content has been removed. You can still complete the assignment by addressing the issues raised at zh:Wikipedia:互助客栈/其他#新用户通过撰写新条目的方式“完成学科作业”的处理讨论Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:33, 23 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240623033300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240623033300-Hanyangprofessor2-20240617094200","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello, professor. We are students in everyday life and social structure.
We have made revisions to the editing of the English article. There has been no feedback received regarding the editing of the Chinese article. Please review, thank you! Han77720 (talk) 11:05, 15 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240615110500","author":"Han77720","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Han77720-20240615110500-LIU_RUOHAN&TANG_JUNYUE","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240617045000-Han77720-20240615110500"]}}-->
To identify and fix the problem, go to your Preferences and activate the gadget called "Display links to disambiguation pages in orange". After you save your preferences and refresh (reload) your article, the wrong links will be in orange. Please fix them, then you can publish (move) your page.
After moving it, please add categories (see bottom of the original Chinese articles for Chinese categories and try to add similar one to your article) and please link it to the Chinese article (see how at Help:Interlanguage_links#Links_in_the_"Languages"_list).
Regarding your Chinese article, you can publish it as well, following the same advice as I gave you above. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:50, 17 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240617045000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240617045000-Han77720-20240615110500","replies":["c-Han77720-20240617124700-Hanyangprofessor2-20240617045000"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello, professor.We have already moved the English and Chinese articles and added the categories. Please check, thank you! Han77720 (talk) 12:47, 17 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240617124700","author":"Han77720","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Han77720-20240617124700-Hanyangprofessor2-20240617045000","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240619083000-Han77720-20240617124700"]}}-->
@Han77720 Good. Please ensure that your article ls linked to from others (see Wikipedia:Orphan). I recommend checking what other articles link to the Chinese one and try to link your article from simialar article on English WIkipedia. See here: 链接至“投币祈福”的页面 - 维基百科,自由的百科全书 (wikipedia.org)Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:30, 19 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240619083000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240619083000-Han77720-20240617124700","replies":["c-Han77720-20240620143600-Hanyangprofessor2-20240619083000"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello, professor.We have added the 'See also' section. Please check it. Thank you! Han77720 (talk) 14:36, 20 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240620143600","author":"Han77720","type":"comment","level":5,"id":"c-Han77720-20240620143600-Hanyangprofessor2-20240619083000","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240621050000-Han77720-20240620143600"]}}-->
@Han77720 Good, but please try to address the Orphan issue I mentioned above. If you do not know what it means, read the linked article explaining this in detail (in short, it means you need to indentify other articles on English Wikipedia that should mention yours and link it from them). Good luck! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:00, 21 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240621050000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":6,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240621050000-Han77720-20240620143600","replies":["c-Han77720-20240622182400-Hanyangprofessor2-20240621050000"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello, professor. I have already linked the Chinese page in the article, please check. 1Han77720 (talk) 18:24, 22 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240622182400","author":"Han77720","type":"comment","level":7,"id":"c-Han77720-20240622182400-Hanyangprofessor2-20240621050000","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240623034600-Han77720-20240622182400"]}}-->
@Han77720 Well done. To improve your grade to A+ I recommend translating another (short) article into English or Chinese. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:46, 23 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240623034600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":8,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240623034600-Han77720-20240622182400","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Hello professor, our translated article has been completed, please check.
At the same time, our Chinese articles have not received feedback and are requested to be published directly.
Editing User:Yue03090616/沙盒 - WikipediaYue03090616 (talk) 11:08, 15 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240615110800","author":"Yue03090616","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Yue03090616-20240615110800-TANGJUNYUE_and_LIURUOHAN","replies":["c-Yue03090616-20240615111200-Yue03090616-20240615110800"]}}-->
User:Yue03090616/sandbox 111 - Wikipedia This is English article. Yue03090616 (talk) 11:12, 15 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240615111200","author":"Yue03090616","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Yue03090616-20240615111200-Yue03090616-20240615110800","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240617045200-Yue03090616-20240615111200"]}}-->
You should add some images to your article. If there are none on Chinese Wikipedia, try to locate them on Wikimedia Commons by searching it in English and Chinese for related terms.
To identify and fix the problem, go to your Preferences and activate the gadget called "Display links to disambiguation pages in orange". After you save your preferences and refresh (reload) your article, the wrong links will be in orange. Please fix them, then you can publish (move) your page.
After moving it, please add categories (see bottom of the original Chinese articles for Chinese categories and try to add similar one to your article) and please link it to the Chinese article (see how at Help:Interlanguage_links#Links_in_the_"Languages"_list).
Regarding your Chinese article, you can publish it as well, following the same advice as I gave you above.
Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:52, 17 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240617045200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240617045200-Yue03090616-20240615111200","replies":["c-Yue03090616-20240617131600-Hanyangprofessor2-20240617045200"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello, professor.We have already moved the English and Chinese articles and added the categories. Please check, thank you! Yue03090616 (talk) 13:16, 17 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240617131600","author":"Yue03090616","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Yue03090616-20240617131600-Hanyangprofessor2-20240617045200","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240619083700-Yue03090616-20240617131600","c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240619083800-Yue03090616-20240617131600"]}}-->
@Yue03090616 I see. Your article has one major problem - compared to the Chinese article, it has more references, but most of them seem to be fake / garbage such as links to irrelevant pages. Please remove all fake references from your article immediately, and ensure that the remaining references are properly formatted with metadata: first and late name, date, publisher, title (in English as well as Chinese). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:37, 19 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240619083700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":5,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240619083700-Yue03090616-20240617131600","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
The link to the Chinese article above is to your sandbox. Please publish your article (and then add categories, interlanguage link, etc.) and update me again. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:38, 19 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240619083800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":5,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240619083800-Yue03090616-20240617131600","replies":["c-Yue03090616-20240621100200-Hanyangprofessor2-20240619083800"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello professor, my English article has been revised again, and the Chinese article has been added to the language, and the mobile is complete. Please check, thank you! Yue03090616 (talk) 10:02, 21 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240621100200","author":"Yue03090616","type":"comment","level":6,"id":"c-Yue03090616-20240621100200-Hanyangprofessor2-20240619083800","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240622034300-Yue03090616-20240621100200","c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240622034500-Yue03090616-20240621100200"]}}-->
@Yue03090616Your English article still contains many fake/wrong references, likely a result of using a malfunctioning AI tool. Please remove ALL references from it, then add references from Chinese Wikipedia. Otherwise your English article will be deleted from English Wikipedia shortly, as it is not only effectively unreferenced, but it has fake/wrong references. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:43, 22 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240622034300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":7,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240622034300-Yue03090616-20240621100200","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Your Chinese article was published correctly. Please monitor it over the next few days to check for reviews from Chinese editors. Remember to proofread it to avoid errors introduced by machine translation - if the quality of the translation is too poor, the article may be deleted, which would cause the assignment to fail. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:45, 22 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240622034500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":7,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240622034500-Yue03090616-20240621100200","replies":["c-Han77720-20240622214600-Hanyangprofessor2-20240622034500"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello, professor. I have modified the footnote citation. Please check. Han77720 (talk) 21:46, 22 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240622214600","author":"Han77720","type":"comment","level":8,"id":"c-Han77720-20240622214600-Hanyangprofessor2-20240622034500","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240623035800-Han77720-20240622214600","c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240623040100-Han77720-20240622214600"]}}-->
@Yue03090616@Han77720 Very good. The final thing is to ensure they have all metadata: first and late name, date, publisher, title (in English as well as Chinese). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:58, 23 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240623035800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":9,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240623035800-Han77720-20240622214600","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
PS. Please send me an email with a link to your blogs or link them here; I cannot locate them. I also encourage you to consider translating additional content for extra credit. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:01, 23 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240623040100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":9,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240623040100-Han77720-20240622214600","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Professor, I may be in trouble, I had a problem with the article I posted, Chinese Fashion redirected to Chinese Clothing, the Chinese Fashion I wrote could not be named, and after being warned by the Wikipedia administrators I tried to move back to my home page but found that I could not do that either. I left a message on Wednesday but it didn't go out because of the internet, I'm sorry for the trouble, please show me how to solve it, thanks.https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Bai0926/Fashion_in_ChinaBai0926 (talk) 14:46, 20 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240620144600","author":"Bai0926","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Bai0926-20240620144600-BAILINHAN","replies":["c-Bai0926-20240620153800-Bai0926-20240620144600"]}}-->
Professor, are you in your office on Friday? Can I come to your office and ask you this question? Bai0926 (talk) 15:38, 20 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240620153800","author":"Bai0926","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Bai0926-20240620153800-Bai0926-20240620144600","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240621052600-Bai0926-20240620153800"]}}-->
@Bai0926 I am afraid I am not in the office today.
At this point I recommend that you try to merge the parts of the article that are referenced and not plagiarized into Chinese clothing, and to try to earn extra credit by translating some article(s) from English to Chinese Wikipedia, as we are running out of time to do further research on your chosen topic. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:26, 21 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240621052600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240621052600-Bai0926-20240620153800","replies":["c-Bai0926-20240621062800-Hanyangprofessor2-20240621052600"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Professor, I have compared and blended the content of my article with Chinese clothing, check it out!
If I want to translate an article into Chinese, should I just find a random article or should I choose from the original topic? Bai0926 (talk) 06:28, 21 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240621062800","author":"Bai0926","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Bai0926-20240621062800-Hanyangprofessor2-20240621052600","replies":["c-Bai0926-20240621083400-Bai0926-20240621062800"]}}-->
Professor, I apologize for the many interruptions. But I would like to explain that I did not plagiarize others' content, my article and the Chinese clothing are not the same in terms of citing articles and content although they are both strung together with time development. You can compare and check. Bai0926 (talk) 08:34, 21 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240621083400","author":"Bai0926","type":"comment","level":5,"id":"c-Bai0926-20240621083400-Bai0926-20240621062800","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240622041200-Bai0926-20240621083400"]}}-->
Your contributions to Chinse clothing will be recognized as part of your main project, so your effort will not be wasted. As for translating content to Chinese, you can chose any content you want, although if you want some suggestions, how about this? Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:12, 22 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240622041200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":6,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240622041200-Bai0926-20240621083400","replies":["c-Bai0926-20240622140200-Hanyangprofessor2-20240622041200"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I checked the translation assignment, is the score for this assignment an extra score or is it a score for my big assignment? It seems a bit difficult to complete in a short period of time.Also I have completed 20 more Wikipedia edits please check.
Looking forward to your reply. Bai0926 (talk) 14:02, 22 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240622140200","author":"Bai0926","type":"comment","level":7,"id":"c-Bai0926-20240622140200-Hanyangprofessor2-20240622041200","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240623040300-Bai0926-20240622140200","c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240623040400-Bai0926-20240622140200"]}}-->
@Bai0926 Your current score is very good (A), so you would only need to do a small extra credit translation to get to A+. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:03, 23 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240623040300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":8,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240623040300-Bai0926-20240622140200","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
A short, referenced article on “Dopamine,” or “New Chinese style” might be a good idea, for example (500-1000 words). Or you could chose something else you find is enjoyable. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:04, 23 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240623040400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":8,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240623040400-Bai0926-20240622140200","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Hi professor, I'm a student of your class 'everyday life and social structure'. I did the translation of two articles.
https://w.wiki/7nm6 and https://w.wiki/ATKJ please check. Also, this is my blog links.Kimseoeun2023079825 (talk) 12:32, 22 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240622123200","author":"Kimseoeun2023079825","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Kimseoeun2023079825-20240622123200-Deadline_5,8(final)-_kim_seo_eun","replies":["c-Kimseoeun2023079825-20240622134000-Kimseoeun2023079825-20240622123200"]}}-->
This is my weekly editing up to this day. Here's my deadline 6.Kimseoeun2023079825 (talk) 13:40, 22 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240622134000","author":"Kimseoeun2023079825","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Kimseoeun2023079825-20240622134000-Kimseoeun2023079825-20240622123200","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240623041000-Kimseoeun2023079825-20240622134000"]}}-->
@Kimseoeun2023079825 Well done. Your grade is very good. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:10, 23 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240623041000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240623041000-Kimseoeun2023079825-20240622134000","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
@Babaibiaobin Well done. Your grade is very good Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:11, 23 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240623041100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240623041100-Babaibiaobin-20240622133400","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
But try to address the Wikipedia:Orphan problem affecting your two translations. Check what articles link to the Chinese articles, then try to find similar articles on English Wikipedia and add link to your new English translations in them.
2. In this semester, I have edited the English Wikipedia more than 215 times .
3. I have written 15 blogs this semester.
4.I actively participated in class discussions during class and earned a total of 15 points.
These are all the tasks I have completed this semester, please check them. I hope I can get some extra marks from these.
I would be grateful if you could give me some advice.
Thank you for your hard work this semester, Professor. Thank you very much for your constant teaching and help. ZHANG0822ZH (talk) 16:02, 22 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240622160200","author":"ZHANG0822ZH","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-ZHANG0822ZH-20240622160200-ZHANG_ZEHUA","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240623041400-ZHANG0822ZH-20240622160200"]}}-->
@ZHANG0822ZH Well done, your grade should be good. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:14, 23 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240623041400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240623041400-ZHANG0822ZH-20240622160200","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
1. I discussed with the administrator. The administrator said that there are some unclear definitions in the English article itself. The administrator said: (The bigger problem is that the English version itself did not make it clear that when the media used the term "biohacker", they were referring to DIY biology in a broad sense or just body hacking in a narrow sense. In particular, the relevant reports of the Washington Post have a paywall, and it seems that it is impossible to verify without paying them a little money). So far, my translation has been completed. In terms of content, I will correct it with experts in this field based on the changes made in the English article.
2. My team member has also completed the translation. She sent it to you for inspection before. She also successfully published it. And completed the editing. Please check.
3. Professor, in order to facilitate you to check my blog directly. I added the link. Please check.
Thank you professor for watching. Lihaochang678 (talk) 06:36, 22 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240622063600","author":"Lihaochang678","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Lihaochang678-20240622063600-LI_HAOCHANG&HAN_YUANYUAN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240622082100-Lihaochang678-20240622063600"]}}-->
@Lihaochang678 Well done! Stop by my office next semseter if you want and I'll show you how to access Washington Post content. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:21, 22 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240622082100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240622082100-Lihaochang678-20240622063600","replies":["c-Lihaochang678-20240623051700-Hanyangprofessor2-20240622082100"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I am very willing to do so. It will be my honor. Learning more will also be a kind of improvement for me. Thank you, professor. You have worked hard. Lihaochang678 (talk) 05:17, 23 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240623051700","author":"Lihaochang678","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Lihaochang678-20240623051700-Hanyangprofessor2-20240622082100","replies":[]}}-->
4. for extra points, I created an entry for New Chinese Style and finished compiling it.
I'm sorry that I don't have an accurate memory of the number of POINTS gained from the class, so please confirm.
This is all I have done this semester, thank you for your help this semester and I hope to receive your approval. I wish you all the best! Bai0926 (talk) 05:14, 23 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240623051400","author":"Bai0926","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Bai0926-20240623051400-Final_Week:BAILINHAN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240623054600-Bai0926-20240623051400"]}}-->
@Bai0926 Well done, your grade should be very good now (A+). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:46, 23 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240623054600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240623054600-Bai0926-20240623051400","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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I originally added a Korean translation to the article.
Posting completed. Please check. Thank you. :) Seohyun S (talk) 06:16, 23 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240623061600","author":"Seohyun S","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Seohyun_S-20240623061600-Deadline_Final_Seohyun_Son_\uc190\uc11c\ud604","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240623090300-Seohyun_S-20240623061600"]}}-->
HI, Professor.I am a student in the Introduction to Collective Intelligence Practices and the Sociology of Information course.I have started to make translation homework Please check it.Thank you! Redyeoni (talk) 15:08, 31 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240331150800","author":"Redyeoni","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Redyeoni-20240331150800-Deadline3\uff08week4\uff09HONGJIARAN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240402112800-Redyeoni-20240331150800"]}}-->
@Redyeoni It is a good start. But your sandbox is on English Wikipedia. You should copy it to Chinese Wikipedia - the code on English is not the same as on Chinese one. The sooner you start working in Chinese Wikipedia, the better. I will provide more feedback after you copy your article there. You'll likely need to redo all the hyperlinks after the move Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here11:28, 2 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240402112800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240402112800-Redyeoni-20240331150800","replies":["c-Redyeoni-20240619101200-Hanyangprofessor2-20240402112800"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello professor Good evening, this is my translation homework has been completed Please check Thank you! Redyeoni (talk) 10:12, 19 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240619101200","author":"Redyeoni","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Redyeoni-20240619101200-Hanyangprofessor2-20240402112800","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240623102300-Redyeoni-20240619101200"]}}-->
@Redyeoni This is a good start, which you should have completed over a month ago. You need to move it to Chinese Wikipedia, fix errors resulting from interwiki move, then publish it. After moving it, please add categories (see bottom of the original English articles for English categories and try to add similar one to your article) and please link it to the English article (see how at Help:Interlanguage_links#Links_in_the_"Languages"_list). Remember to proofread your translations to eliminate any machine translation errors, for example. Poor translation can lead to your articles being deleted and that would negatively impact your grade, so please make sure to proofread them carefully before publication.
You will need to complete much extra credit work in addition to raise your grade to satisfactory levels, since you have not carried out most of the other assignments and missed most deadlines for the main one. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here10:23, 23 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240623102300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240623102300-Redyeoni-20240619101200","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Hello Professor!I am a student in both the Collective Intelligence in Practice and Introduction to Information Sociology courses.I have already started my translation work, I translated the first paragraph before it could be quoted and inserted, if there is any grammar problem, please give me your opinion, I will change it in time, thank you! Hkiho (talk) 14:59, 31 March 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240331145900","author":"Hkiho","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Hkiho-20240331145900-Deadline3\uff08week4\uff09HUANGQIHAO","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240402112400-Hkiho-20240331145900"]}}-->
@Hkiho This is a good start and the grammar is fine. However, as it happens, another of our students has translated this very article without discussing this with me - I assume this was done for extra credit although I have not heard from them yet. See User:Muqing112233/Handan Junior High School Student Kills a Student . As such, while you have successfully completed all assignments so far, and I will credit your work as well, I recommend that you change your topic. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here11:24, 2 April 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240402112400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240402112400-Hkiho-20240331145900","replies":["c-Hkiho-20240502171400-Hanyangprofessor2-20240402112400"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello professor, as you said, this student translated without approval, but I have already completed most of the translations. I don't want to make me choose other articles because of her mistake, other Chinese articles that meet the requirements are difficult to find, but in order to be fair, I will not plagiarize her article, so I choose to find a new article. Because the time to re-translate the new article is urgent, if there is any mistake, please help me correct it. I wish you a good day! Hkiho (talk) 17:14, 2 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240502171400","author":"Hkiho","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Hkiho-20240502171400-Hanyangprofessor2-20240402112400","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240503035700-Hkiho-20240502171400"]}}-->
The topic is ok, but right now your draft is not close to the standards that are required for publication on English Wikipedia. It is primarily a plot summary with no information about the importance of the work; it is also not referenced. Remember that content added to English Wikipedia (and credited for our course) has to be referenced (as I mentioned above). For articles about movies or other works of arts, we need to provide information about awards and reception. Please see formatting and sections at Meteor Shower (TV series) or other entries in (for example) Category:2009 Chinese television series debuts, paying special attention to section(s) on "Reception".
Please also review Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Film, with special attention to "Critical reception" and the policy on importance (Wikipedia:Notability (films)) - right now nothing in your draft suggest the chosen production is important enough to warrant an entry in Wikipedia (for that, you need to include the said section on Reception, with reviews by reliable critics - in newspapers, magazines, or such, not social media)
Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:57, 3 May 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240503035700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240503035700-Hkiho-20240502171400","replies":["c-Hkiho-20240603015900-Hanyangprofessor2-20240503035700"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Professor, can I meet the final requirements of the article now, because the previous article others choose, I can change the topic to meet the requirements of the article very few, I hope you can tell me what else to do, thank you very much for your reply Hkiho (talk) 01:59, 3 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240603015900","author":"Hkiho","type":"comment","level":5,"id":"c-Hkiho-20240603015900-Hanyangprofessor2-20240503035700","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240603043000-Hkiho-20240603015900"]}}-->
@Hkiho I am afraid I do not understand your question. Just above I told you what you need to do to bring your work up to acceptable quality. If anything I wrote is unclear, please let me know here or you can come to my office hours or talk to me after our class. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:30, 3 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240603043000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":6,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240603043000-Hkiho-20240603015900","replies":["c-Hkiho-20240616140200-Hanyangprofessor2-20240603043000"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Professor, thank you for helping me in class, I'm looking for a new topic now, I'll finish it as soon as possible this week if I can, thank you! Hkiho (talk) 14:02, 16 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240616140200","author":"Hkiho","type":"comment","level":7,"id":"c-Hkiho-20240616140200-Hanyangprofessor2-20240603043000","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240617035900-Hkiho-20240616140200"]}}-->
@Hkiho I discourage translating articles about seasons of TV shows, as it is hard to show their Wikipedia:Notability and they may be deleted. Instead, try to expand Joy of Life (TV series) with information on reviews and reception, or translate information about another show (but not a season of the show). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:59, 17 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240617035900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":8,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240617035900-Hkiho-20240616140200","replies":["c-Hkiho-20240618024700-Hanyangprofessor2-20240617035900","c-Hkiho-20240618162500-Hanyangprofessor2-20240617035900"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Thank you for your reply professor, so I decided not to focus on TV series anymore, this is my new article should meet the requirements, if possible, I will finish as soon as possible, thank you for your reply, wish you have a nice day! Hkiho (talk) 02:47, 18 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240618024700","author":"Hkiho","type":"comment","level":9,"id":"c-Hkiho-20240618024700-Hanyangprofessor2-20240617035900","replies":[]}}-->
Professor, I have completed my latest translation assignment and will upload it pending your approval." Hkiho (talk) 16:25, 18 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240618162500","author":"Hkiho","type":"comment","level":9,"id":"c-Hkiho-20240618162500-Hanyangprofessor2-20240617035900","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240619081700-Hkiho-20240618162500"]}}-->
@Hkiho This is an interesting topic. I have moved it to a better title. Here are items you need to fix:
please review the grammar and vocabulary with a tool like Grammarly. Some concepts are not translated properly' for example, you use the term Demonization but I am pretty sure you mean Discrimination
Your article needs a proper lead (summary) at the top. You can try to create one by asking an AI tool like ChatGPT to summarize your article - but please proofread the outcome and ensure it has no errors (hallucinations)
Please format the references so that they have all metadata: first and late name, date, publisher, title (in English as well as Chinese).
please add categories (see bottom of the original Chinese articles for Chinese categories and try to add similar one to your article)
Please ensure all content is referenced. I see several sentences (half-paragraphs, etc. that do not have references.
Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:17, 19 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240619081700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":10,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240619081700-Hkiho-20240618162500","replies":["c-Hkiho-20240619144800-Hanyangprofessor2-20240619081700"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Thanks to the professor's guidance, I corrected a lot of grammatical errors and corrected them according to your requirements, if it passes, I will upload it as required, thank you for your reply! Hkiho (talk) 14:48, 19 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240619144800","author":"Hkiho","type":"comment","level":11,"id":"c-Hkiho-20240619144800-Hanyangprofessor2-20240619081700","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240620050500-Hkiho-20240619144800"]}}-->
@Hkiho Good progress. For Xinyang Incident, please add a link using the Template:Interlanguage link. Ditto for 黄泛区, 苏北, 王士性 and 炒作 (double check first if they don't have English article, I fixed one link for you - 中国大陆 has an English Wikipedia article (Mainland China).
You also moved the article back to the previous title, despite my note above that I have moved it to a better title. Please move it to the title I used unless you have a good reason no to?
You should also add more blue links and double check the terminology. For example, Anti-Japanese War should be linked but in English it is usually known as "Second Sino-Japanese War", hence the article location at that title (Second Sino-Japanese War). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:05, 20 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240620050500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":12,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240620050500-Hkiho-20240619144800","replies":["c-Hkiho-20240620063100-Hanyangprofessor2-20240620050500"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Thank you professor for your opinion, I have revised the title, as well as the use of a lot of technical terms, and added a lot of blue links, but now the only problem is that there is no English article about the Xinyang incident, I tried to use Template:Interlanguage link.I would appreciate it if you could help!Thanks for your reply and I wish youEnjoyable day Hkiho (talk) 06:31, 20 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240620063100","author":"Hkiho","type":"comment","level":13,"id":"c-Hkiho-20240620063100-Hanyangprofessor2-20240620050500","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240621045600-Hkiho-20240620063100","c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240621045700-Hkiho-20240620063100"]}}-->
@Hkiho Well done. I've fixed the Xinyang link for you. Please double check that the link to Central Plains I fixed is correct now. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:56, 21 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240621045600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":14,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240621045600-Hkiho-20240620063100","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Please try to fix the link to "six central provinces", right now it is broken. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:57, 21 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240621045700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":14,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240621045700-Hkiho-20240620063100","replies":["c-Hkiho-20240621060900-Hanyangprofessor2-20240621045700"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello professor, thank you for fixing the link for me. After checking, it is correct. Thank you very much! And I fixed the link to Six Central Provinces and uploaded the English version of my translation for the original text. This is my assignment. Thank you for your reply and I wish you a pleasant day!! Hkiho (talk) 06:09, 21 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240621060900","author":"Hkiho","type":"comment","level":15,"id":"c-Hkiho-20240621060900-Hanyangprofessor2-20240621045700","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240622034000-Hkiho-20240621060900"]}}-->
@Hkiho Well done. For extra credit, now that your wiki skills have improved, you could consider finishing your old work from last year (still available in the history of your sandbox here).
Additionally, looking at my notes, I see you / your group where also supposed to translate the article Russian fashion from English to Chinese and zh:邯郸初中生杀人案 to English. Are you still working on those projects? What is their status? Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:40, 22 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240622034000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":16,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240622034000-Hkiho-20240621060900","replies":["c-Hkiho-20240623165000-Hanyangprofessor2-20240622034000"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello professor, about zh: Handan junior high school student murder to English this topic was written by other students before, you asked me to change the topic may you forgot, it is in the dialogue above. I have been unable to contact my team member, so I can only try my best to complete my own task. Thanks to the professor's affirmation, I learned a lot of skills in using Wikipedia in this class! Although there are many shortcomings, I will continue to work hard! I hope I can take your class again next time!! Hkiho (talk) 16:50, 23 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240623165000","author":"Hkiho","type":"comment","level":17,"id":"c-Hkiho-20240623165000-Hanyangprofessor2-20240622034000","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240624082300-Hkiho-20240623165000"]}}-->
You can also work on your Russian fashion article, which has been started here: zh:User:Redyeoni/沙盒Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:23, 24 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240624082300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":18,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240624082300-Hkiho-20240623165000","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
@Liangyiqiao2004 Good progress. Regarding your Chinese article,you can now publish (WP:MOVE) your article. After that, please add WP:CATEGORIES: and link your article to the English one with the tool explained here Help:Interlanguage links. After that, you should monitor your article to check for any feedback from Chinese reviewers over the next few weeks.
Regarding your English article, it needs much more work. Much of it is is unreferenced (see (WP:V and recall that only referenced content is allowed on Wikipedia and counts for our class credit). Next, your article needs throughout proofreading as right now it contains numerous grammar and vocabulary errors that make reading and understanding it very difficult. I am afraid that almost every sentence has errors or is written in unencyclopedic style (see Wikipedia:Writing_better_articles#Use_of_pronouns). Please have your article reviewed by someone who is fluent in English; you can also try to use tools like Grammarly but I am afraid the amount of errors I see will make any automatic tool struggle with fixing this.
Also, please let me know when you have asked for and gotten permission to translate this topic from Chinese in English? I cannot locate it in my records. (The topic is probably fine, but I need to know the name of the Chinese article you are translating to offer you more feedback and to ensure you have chosen a topic that is not already covered in English; like Siheyuan, which already is, and has some coverage under Siheyuan#Layout_of_Beijing_siheyuan) Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:18, 10 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240610041800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240610041800-Liangyiqiao2004-20240609093800","replies":["c-Liangyiqiao2004-20240615101000-Hanyangprofessor2-20240610041800","c-SU_YIQI-20240617031400-Hanyangprofessor2-20240610041800"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Professor, I have corrected the syntax error with grammarly, please check it.I'm sorry about the changed theme. I changed the theme to Beijing Courtyard because there were many themes that didn't have proper translation in English. Liangyiqiao2004 (talk) 10:10, 15 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240615101000","author":"Liangyiqiao2004","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Liangyiqiao2004-20240615101000-Hanyangprofessor2-20240610041800","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240617054900-Liangyiqiao2004-20240615101000"]}}-->
@Liangyiqiao2004 Good that you are improving the language. You should clarify the topic of your article - I assume it is about a type of a building?
Once you add references to unreferenced parts of your article, you can publish it (see WP:MOVE). After that, please add WP:CATEGORIES: and link your article to the Chinese one with the tool explained here Help:Interlanguage linksPiotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:49, 17 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240617054900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240617054900-Liangyiqiao2004-20240615101000","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
@SU YIQI I am afraid your work was declined from Chinese Wikipedia by a reviewer to due to poor translation (翻译品质不佳、格式不符,在草稿空间改善 ). Please improve it (fix the problems raised) and then ask the reviewer (@TimWu007) for a new review. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:51, 17 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240617055100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240617055100-SU_YIQI-20240617031400","replies":["c-SU_YIQI-20240623134700-Hanyangprofessor2-20240617055100"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:%E5%A1%94%E7%BD%97%E7%89%8C%E5%8D%A0%E5%8D%9CI published the revised draft on the 19th, but I still haven't got the reply and review from the administrator. What should I do? SU YIQI (talk) 13:47, 23 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240623134700","author":"SU YIQI","type":"comment","level":5,"id":"c-SU_YIQI-20240623134700-Hanyangprofessor2-20240617055100","replies":["c-SU_YIQI-20240623134900-SU_YIQI-20240623134700"]}}-->
@SU YIQI To get quick feedback, please ask here: zh:维基百科:Discord交流群Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:24, 24 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240624082400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":7,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240624082400-SU_YIQI-20240623134900","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Here are the 40 Wikipedia edits I made, please check them, thank you![28]ZHANG0822ZH (talk) 13:43, 23 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240623134300","author":"ZHANG0822ZH","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-ZHANG0822ZH-20240623134300-Collective_Intelligence_:ZHANG_ZEHUA","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240624082500-ZHANG0822ZH-20240623134300"]}}-->
@ZHANG0822ZH Good, I'll award you extra credit for that shortly. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:25, 24 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240624082500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240624082500-ZHANG0822ZH-20240623134300","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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@Sangrok02 Good progress, but some content of those articles is still not fully translated. Please ensure all is translated, included references (footnotes). Many references are not yet present in your translation. 생활임금 has 24, but the English version, over 90. (The other article is 11 vs 13) Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:28, 24 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240624082800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240624082800-Sangrok02-20240623151500","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello professor, I have completed the editing task for Wikipedia and hope to receive an additional score. These are five Wikipedia articles that I have edited: 1,2,3, 4, 5. This is the article that I corrected and marked as incorrect: 67. Please review, thank you very much. Jzhdylb (talk) 20:04, 23 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240623200400","author":"Jzhdylb","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Jzhdylb-20240623200400-FAN_XINRU_3","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240624083200-Jzhdylb-20240623200400"]}}-->
@Jzhdylb Good, you should have enough extra credit for A+. However, please double check whether content you added to subculture article has been added to the most relevant place. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:32, 24 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240624083200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240624083200-Jzhdylb-20240623200400","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello professor, these are my two article translations1HAHAHAHAHA_(Chinese_program) please check, my blog has also been completed. and This is my next edit from Wikipedia, please check itThank you very much. 218.37.101.231 (talk) 02:55, 20 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240620025500","author":"218.37.101.231","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-218.37.101.231-20240620025500-LINZIYU","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240620055500-218.37.101.231-20240620025500"]}}-->
Dear student @Linziyu1823. Remember to sign (Wikipedia:Signatures) your messages, otherwise you cannot be notified of my replies.
Your article (currently at HAHAHAHAHA (Chinese program)which is a bad title, due to wrong bracket and ambigious term in the parenthesis - it will be renamed shortly) has a number of problems.
First, you should have asked me whether this topic is a good one to translate - this is required in Deadline 2. I do not see that you have ever done so, and the article you have chosen is problematic. It does not appear to meet Wikipedia:Notability, because it lacks sections on awards (reviews) and reception (awards), which are used to demonstrate that the topic is important. You can rescue your article by adding such sections. For example of how this should look, see IPartment#Reception and Awards below, or much better Friends#Reception.
Please add Chinese name to the top of the article (see how it is done in iPartment).
Your article needs more blue links. Please compare it to the Chinese article and link all the important concepts (see Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Linking). If a topic exists in Chinese but not English, please link it using this tool: Template:Interlanguage link.
Please format the references so that they have all metadata: first and late name, date, publisher, title (in English as well as Chinese). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:55, 20 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240620055500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240620055500-218.37.101.231-20240620025500","replies":["c-Linziyu1823-20240620070700-Hanyangprofessor2-20240620055500","c-Linziyu1823-20240620074200-Hanyangprofessor2-20240620055500","c-Linziyu1823-20240620080200-Hanyangprofessor2-20240620055500"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Ok Professor, there is a question do I need to re-translate an article or improve this one? In addition, is my other translation OK?Please check itLinziyu1823 (talk) 07:07, 20 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240620070700","author":"Linziyu1823","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Linziyu1823-20240620070700-Hanyangprofessor2-20240620055500","replies":[]}}-->
Professor, I also translated another article, but it has not been published yet. Could you please check it?Linziyu1823 (talk) 07:42, 20 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240620074200","author":"Linziyu1823","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Linziyu1823-20240620074200-Hanyangprofessor2-20240620055500","replies":[]}}-->
Hello professor, the translations of my two articles are respectively
Please check it again. Thank you。 Linziyu1823 (talk) 08:02, 20 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240620080200","author":"Linziyu1823","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Linziyu1823-20240620080200-Hanyangprofessor2-20240620055500","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240621051800-Linziyu1823-20240620080200"]}}-->
@Linziyu1823 Regarding HAHAHAHAHA (Chinese TV series) as I noted above, you need to show the importance of this topic by adding information on reviews and awards. Otherwise it will be deleted and will not count for much course credit. If you find such sources and add them to the article, please also say so at the relevant deletion discussion (a Wikipedia reviewer has already nominted that article for deletion due to lack of importance).
Regarding your other work. zh:捷克建筑发展 was deleted from Chinese Wikipedia by a Chinese reviewer @Manchiu who explained the issues in their deletion comment (red box). Please read them carefully and improve your draft there so that the issues raised (ex. poor translation) are fixed before publishing it again.
I see you have chosen another topic for translation, Five thousand years of Chinese civilization. It is an good topic (notable) and I don't think it will be deleted. However, it has a number of problems that need to be fixed (as the Chinese article is simply not finished). Please format the references so that they have all metadata: first and late name, date, publisher, title (in English as well as Chinese). Then you should add references to unrefenced paragraphs and sentences. The article is also pretty short. Please expand it using the following high quality sources: one, two. If you cannot access them, ask for help in our Hanyang ERICA library. You can also use Chinese sources such as the ones found here (link). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:18, 21 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240621051800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240621051800-Linziyu1823-20240620080200","replies":["c-Linziyu1823-20240624083300-Hanyangprofessor2-20240621051800"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello professor. I have done additional translation. Hope it can add points. Please checkLinziyu1823 (talk) 08:33, 24 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240624083300","author":"Linziyu1823","type":"comment","level":5,"id":"c-Linziyu1823-20240624083300-Hanyangprofessor2-20240621051800","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240625024300-Linziyu1823-20240624083300","c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240625024500-Linziyu1823-20240624083300"]}}-->
@Linziyu1823 I'll update your grade shortly. Please publish your article. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:43, 25 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240625024300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":6,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240625024300-Linziyu1823-20240624083300","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
PS. Please let me know which class you want the points to be awarded; as you are taking two of my classes and both have room for the extra points. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:45, 25 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240625024500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":6,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240625024500-Linziyu1823-20240624083300","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I've finished editing the wiki. As you gave me the feedback on The Economist, I've added my editing to the Korean document, and I've also added a citation for it. Please give me your feedback. '이코노미스트' here and '일본의맥주' This is my page. Chaeyeong09 (talk) 05:26, 21 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240621052600","author":"Chaeyeong09","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Chaeyeong09-20240621052600-Deadline_7,8(Final)-_Chaeyeong_Lee","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240621055700-Chaeyeong09-20240621052600"]}}-->
And please monitor your work over the next few weeks to ensure that any feedback from Korean reviewers is promptly addressed. Remember to proofread your translations to eliminate any machine translation errors, for example. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:57, 21 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240621055700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240621055700-Chaeyeong09-20240621052600","replies":["c-Chaeyeong09-20240623175200-Hanyangprofessor2-20240621055700"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
As the professor gave me the feedback, I changed the 'The Economist(이코노미스트)' to natural Korean after reviewing it to avoid machine translation. Regarding the 'Japanese beer(일본의 맥주)', I added my editing content to the original document and quoted it, and changed it to natural Korean sentence to avoid machine translation. Please check it. The Economist(이코노미스트) is here and Japanese beer(일본의 맥주) is hereChaeyeong09 (talk) 17:52, 23 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240623175200","author":"Chaeyeong09","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Chaeyeong09-20240623175200-Hanyangprofessor2-20240621055700","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240624071600-Chaeyeong09-20240623175200"]}}-->
@Chaeyeong09 Well done. You are almost done. For articles that exist on English but not Korean Wikipedia, please use ko:틀:임시링크 to link articles from English Wikipedia. (for example, for :en:John_Ralston_Saul). See if there is any more content to translate from English for The Economist. I'll update your grade shortly Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:16, 24 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240624071600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240624071600-Chaeyeong09-20240623175200","replies":["c-Chaeyeong09-20240624083600-Hanyangprofessor2-20240624071600"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
To accommodate the feedback, I linked the English wiki for the contents that are not in the Korean wiki regarding the 'economist'. Also, for more information, I added the part that corresponds to 'censorship'. Please check. hereChaeyeong09 (talk) 08:36, 24 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240624083600","author":"Chaeyeong09","type":"comment","level":5,"id":"c-Chaeyeong09-20240624083600-Hanyangprofessor2-20240624071600","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240625024600-Chaeyeong09-20240624083600"]}}-->
@Chaeyeong09 Good Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:46, 25 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240625024600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":6,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240625024600-Chaeyeong09-20240624083600","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor,I have completed the task of translating the article from Chinese to English for extra credit. Please review it. Thank you! Have a pleasant day!ZHANGQI1066 (talk) 12:04, 24 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240624120400","author":"ZHANGQI1066","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-ZHANGQI1066-20240624120400-Extra_Credit_-_ZHANG_QI","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240625024800-ZHANGQI1066-20240624120400","c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240625024900-ZHANGQI1066-20240624120400"]}}-->
@ZHANGQI1066 Well done, your grade in both classes should be A+ now. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:48, 25 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240625024800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240625024800-ZHANGQI1066-20240624120400","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
PS. Please try to address the Wikipedia:Orphan problem tagged in your new article by linking it from relevant other articles. See here for what Chinese articles link to the Chinese one, try to find them in English and add similar links Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:49, 25 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240625024900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240625024900-ZHANGQI1066-20240624120400","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello professor. I'm Jeongha Ahn and I'm taking the Everyday Life and Social Structure class. I've finished editing deadline 5. I added a lot more content than what I edited on Deadline 4 and uploaded it supplemented. Please check it! Thank you.
hereJeongha1 (talk) 12:25, 24 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240624122500","author":"Jeongha1","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Jeongha1-20240624122500-Deadline5_-_Jeongha_Ahn","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240625025300-Jeongha1-20240624122500"]}}-->
@Jeongha1 You are now approaching the point your assignment should have reached in late April/early May. Remember the deadline to complete assignments is today. You have to finish translation, including adding blue links, properly formatted references and related media like images, and publish your work (see bottom of the English articles for English categories and try to add similar one to your article) and please link it to the English article (see how at Help:Interlanguage_links#Links_in_the_"Languages"_list). Remember to proofread your article, as content that is machine translated and not proofread will be quickly deleted from Korean Wikipedia, causing the assignment to fail. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:53, 25 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240625025300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240625025300-Jeongha1-20240624122500","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I am LI PEIYU, a student in the Collective Intelligence in Practice course. I would like to report on all the course tasks I have completed this semester. Here is a summary:
Please confirm. I am very grateful for your guidance this semester and hope to receive your recognition. I would be deeply appreciative.
Thank you very much. Kikolipu (talk) 09:53, 23 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240623095300","author":"Kikolipu","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Kikolipu-20240623095300-Final_Week:LI_PEIYU","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240623100200-Kikolipu-20240623095300"]}}-->
@Kikolipu Well done. Your grade is already very good (A). To imrove it further, try to address the issues noted by the reviewers in your article at zh:中国杀女婴现象 The reviewer of your article is @Tokisaki Kurumi - you can ask them for feedback and additional review through their discussion page on Chinese Wikipedia. See also feedback you got at zh:User talk:KikolipuPiotrus at Hanyang| reply here10:02, 23 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240623100200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240623100200-Kikolipu-20240623095300","replies":["c-Kikolipu-20240625124900-Hanyangprofessor2-20240623100200"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello Professor,This is the translation of my revised article. Please confirm it, and I would be very grateful for your guidance. Female infanticide in ChinaKikolipu (talk) 12:49, 25 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240625124900","author":"Kikolipu","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Kikolipu-20240625124900-Hanyangprofessor2-20240623100200","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240626021100-Kikolipu-20240625124900"]}}-->
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Hello, professor. I have completed all the tasks in Wiki and Task 4 for additional credits.
1.https://w.wiki/AUbb
2.https://w.wiki/AUbc
3. Task 4 was uploaded through lms, so please check it out. Thank you:)[User:전진이|전진이]] (talk) 20:15, 24 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240624201500","author":"\uc804\uc9c4\uc774","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-\uc804\uc9c4\uc774-20240624201500-Deadline_Final_-_Jeon_Jin_E","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240625025600-\uc804\uc9c4\uc774-20240624201500"]}}-->
I'll update your score with Project 4 score shortly. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:56, 25 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240625025600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240625025600-\uc804\uc9c4\uc774-20240624201500","replies":["c-\uc804\uc9c4\uc774-20240625032400-Hanyangprofessor2-20240625025600"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I also completed publishing my article at the very end of each wiki. 전진이 (talk) 03:24, 25 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240625032400","author":"\uc804\uc9c4\uc774","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-\uc804\uc9c4\uc774-20240625032400-Hanyangprofessor2-20240625025600","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240626021800-\uc804\uc9c4\uc774-20240625032400"]}}-->
@전진이 I don't see your content merged to ko:문화전쟁 and ko:매체 편향 which you were supposed to expand?
You need to copy your content from your sandboxes and merge it (integrate it) with the existing articles on Korean Wikipedia. Be careful not to remove any existing good content. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:18, 26 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240626021800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240626021800-\uc804\uc9c4\uc774-20240625032400","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hi professor, I'm a student of your class 'everyday life and social structure'.This is the three extra times I've posted the blog1,blog2,blog3,so hopefully I'll get some points in it, thanks. Orange-1203 (talk) 09:31, 25 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240625093100","author":"Orange-1203","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Orange-1203-20240625093100-extra_Credit_review_chen_zhitong","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240626022100-Orange-1203-20240625093100"]}}-->
@Orange-1203 Ok - your score was updated yesterday. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:21, 26 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240626022100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240626022100-Orange-1203-20240625093100","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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I translated this article from English to Korean. I will continue to fix and add the reference format today. 113.185.109.94 (talk) 10:09, 25 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240625100900","author":"113.185.109.94","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-113.185.109.94-20240625100900-Extar_credit_Lee_yunjoo","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240626022300-113.185.109.94-20240625100900","c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240626022600-113.185.109.94-20240625100900"]}}-->
Good, I'll update your grade shortly Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:23, 26 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240626022300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240626022300-113.185.109.94-20240625100900","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Unfortunately, while you have enough credits now for a passing grade, the system indicate you have insufficient attendance to pass. If you retake this class with me, you can get extra credit for your work that you submitted yesterday. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:26, 26 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240626022600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240626022600-113.185.109.94-20240625100900","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Hello professor. I wrote four blogs for extra credits. Please understand that I used the 2023 blog I used last year because I couldn't access the 2024 blog. These are the blogs I wrote.
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@전진이 Ok, I will update your score shortly Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:27, 26 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240626022700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240626022700-\uc804\uc9c4\uc774-20240625112300","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello professor. I am a student in the course (Collective Intelligence in Practice: Understanding Wikipedia). This is an extra Wikipedia translation I made. Please check it out. Hope it can help me get extra credit in this course.Thank you. Linziyu1823 (talk) 14:42, 25 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240625144200","author":"Linziyu1823","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Linziyu1823-20240625144200-LIN_ZIYU","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240626023700-Linziyu1823-20240625144200"]}}-->
@Linziyu1823 Good, please publish your article to receive credit. After moving it, please add categories (see bottom of the original Chinese articles for Chinese categories and try to add similar one to your article) and please link it to the Chinese article (see how at Help:Interlanguage_links#Links_in_the_"Languages"_list). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:37, 26 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240626023700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240626023700-Linziyu1823-20240625144200","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Hello professor. I tried writing a little more blog additionally. Please review it. Thank you :)
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@전진이 One of your blogs is not in English, and it wasn't graded. I've updated your grade with your other recent submissions. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:38, 26 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240626023800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240626023800-\uc804\uc9c4\uc774-20240625150000","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Hello professor, I'm a student in your class 'everyday life and social structure'. I created 2 English Wikipedia articles, Wan Guopeng and Wang Ziwei. In addition, I also translated and expanded an English article from Chinese: The Tale of Rose. Please check it out. Hopefully, I can get extra credit, Thank you~~!
With the summer break approaching, I hope you have a restful and enjoyable time filled with relaxation and good health.
Well done, I'll update your grade shortly. Please remember to sign your wiki messages correctly (see WP:SIGNATURE), otherwise, you won't receive a notification when I reply. --Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:33, 26 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240626023300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240626023300-Extra_Credit_-_WANG_TAO","replies":["c-Wangtao626-20240626030400-Hanyangprofessor2-20240626023300"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
OK, professor. Because I later modified the content and republished it, I accidentally deleted the signature information. I will pay attention to it next time. Thank you, professor. Wangtao626 (talk) 03:04, 26 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240626030400","author":"Wangtao626","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Wangtao626-20240626030400-Hanyangprofessor2-20240626023300","replies":[]}}-->
Hello professor, I have edited two more Wikipedia articles because I want to achieve higher scores. Please review it, if possible, thank you very much! 1. 2. Jzhdylb (talk) 06:38, 25 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240625063800","author":"Jzhdylb","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Jzhdylb-20240625063800-FAN_XINRU_4","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240626022000-Jzhdylb-20240625063800"]}}-->
@Jzhdylb Well done, your score was updated yesterday. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:20, 26 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240626022000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240626022000-Jzhdylb-20240625063800","replies":["c-Jzhdylb-20240626030900-Hanyangprofessor2-20240626022000"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Thank you, Professor, for your review. However, my grades seem to have not been updated yesterday, and there have been no other changes since the last update from 93 to 98. I'm sorry to disturb your vacation and wish you a pleasant one. Jzhdylb (talk) 03:09, 26 June 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240626030900","author":"Jzhdylb","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Jzhdylb-20240626030900-Hanyangprofessor2-20240626022000","replies":[]}}-->
Dear professor:
I am learning two courses from professors on media trends and globalization and understanding of small data and big data.
1.I have complete the Wikipedia:Training Here is my link (https://imgur.com/a/s1tC22B)please check it out Thanks!
2.I have completed the wiki dashboard for the two registered professor courses. Here is my link(https://imgur.com/a/hSjmKCE) please check it out Thanks! --BAISHIQI (talk) 04:34, 9 September 2024 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by 白诗棋 (talk • contribs) __DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240909043400","author":"BAISHIQI","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-BAISHIQI-20240909043400-Deadline1:_BAISHIQI","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240909074000-BAISHIQI-20240909043400"]}}-->
@白诗棋 This is a good start but you need to try again as you made two mistakes: first, you incorrectly signed your username as BAISHIQI when in fact it is y 白诗棋. Second, you incorrectly placed your message at the top of my talk page (it should be at the bottom). Please read the guide on how to leave messages again and try once more. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:40, 9 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240909074000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240909074000-BAISHIQI-20240909043400","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear professor:
I am learning two courses from professors on media trends and globalization and understanding of small data and big data.
1.I have complete the Wikipedia:Training Here is my link (https://imgur.com/a/EQeZzNF)please check it out Thanks!
2.I have completed the wiki dashboard for the two registered professor courses. Here is my link(https://imgur.com/a/Cc5nSAV) please check it out Thanks! --WANGRUITONG (talk) 04:34, 9 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240909043400","author":"WANGRUITONG","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-WANGRUITONG-20240909043400-Deadline1:_WANGRUITONG","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240909074700-WANGRUITONG-20240909043400"]}}-->
@WANGRUITONG Good but you made one mistake: you incorrectly placed your message at the top of my talk page (it should be at the bottom). Please read the guide on how to leave messages again and try once more. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:47, 9 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240909074700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240909074700-WANGRUITONG-20240909043400","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Please check it out thanks!Hanyangdaxue (talk) 04:05, 9 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240909040500","author":"Hanyangdaxue","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Hanyangdaxue-20240909040500-Deadline1:_LYU_YANGCHENG","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240909074700-Hanyangdaxue-20240909040500"]}}-->
@Hanyangdaxue Good but you made one mistake: you incorrectly placed your message at the top of my talk page (it should be at the bottom). Please read the guide on how to leave messages again and try once more. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:47, 9 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240909074700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240909074700-Hanyangdaxue-20240909040500","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Dear Professor:
I am taking two courses, "Media Trends and Globalization" and "Understanding Small and Big Data through Wiki".
Please check it out thanks!Caizzz (talk) 07:14, 7 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240907071400","author":"Caizzz","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Caizzz-20240907071400-Deadline1:_CAI_ZHIHANG","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240909074800-Caizzz-20240907071400"]}}-->
@Caizzz Good job! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:48, 9 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240909074800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240909074800-Caizzz-20240907071400","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I am taking two courses, “Media Trends and Globalization“ and ”Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis.”
1. I have completed the Wikipedia Training. Here is my link.
2. I have enrolled in the dashboard system for those two courses. Here is my link.
Please check it out. Thank you. Parkjeongeun0430 (talk) 06:40, 6 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240906064000","author":"Parkjeongeun0430","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Parkjeongeun0430-20240906064000-Deadline1:_Jeongeun_Park","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240909074900-Parkjeongeun0430-20240906064000"]}}-->
@Parkjeongeun0430 Good job! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:49, 9 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240909074900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240909074900-Parkjeongeun0430-20240906064000","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I am taking Media Trends and Globalization from a professor.
1.I have complete the Wikipedia:Training Here is my link, please check it out Thanks!
2.I have completed the wiki dashboard for registering to teach the course. Here is my link ,please check it out Thanks! Yangpeifu (talk) 09:16, 3 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240903091600","author":"Yangpeifu","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Yangpeifu-20240903091600-Deadline_1_:YANG_PEIFU","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240909074900-Yangpeifu-20240903091600"]}}-->
@Yangpeifu Good job! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:49, 9 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240909074900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240909074900-Yangpeifu-20240903091600","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor:I am taking Media Trends and Globalization from a professor.
1.I have completed the wiki dashboard for registering to teach the course. Here is my link ,please check it out Thanks!
2..I have complete the Wikipedia:Training Here is my link, please check it out Thanks! Zzzxxxrrr (talk) 07:41, 4 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240904074100","author":"Zzzxxxrrr","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Zzzxxxrrr-20240904074100-Deadline_1:ZHANG_XIAORUI","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240909074900-Zzzxxxrrr-20240904074100"]}}-->
@Zzzxxxrrr Good job! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:49, 9 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240909074900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240909074900-Zzzxxxrrr-20240904074100","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor:
I am taking Media Trends and Globalization from a professor.I have complete the Wikipedia:Training Here is my link [29]https://imgur.com/a/PkgMcEh please check it out Thanks! .I have completed the wiki dashboard for registering to teach the course. Here is my link [30]https://imgur.com/a/WzyDRLF please check it out Thanks! Tyuni06 (talk) 09:27, 4 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240904092700","author":"Tyuni06","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Tyuni06-20240904092700-Deadline_1_:TANG_YINI","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240909074900-Tyuni06-20240904092700"]}}-->
@Tyuni06 Good job! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:49, 9 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240909074900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240909074900-Tyuni06-20240904092700","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Dear Professor:
I am taking Media Trends and Globalization from a professor.
1.I have complete the Wikipedia:Training Here is my link, I also completed the Chinese at Wikipedia: Online Training/Student Edition (link) for extra credit. please check it out Thanks!
2.I have completed the wiki dashboard for registering to teach the course. Here is my link ,please check it out Thanks! YZY2233 (talk) 08:19, 5 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240905081900","author":"YZY2233","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-YZY2233-20240905081900-Deadline_1(Week_1)_:YUE_ZIYI_-Media_Trends_and_Globalization","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240909075000-YZY2233-20240905081900"]}}-->
@YZY2233 Good job! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:50, 9 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240909075000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240909075000-YZY2233-20240905081900","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Dear Professor:
I am taking Media Trends and Globalization from a professor.
1.I have complete the Wikipedia:Training Here is my link, I also completed the Chinese at Wikipedia: Online Training/Student Edition (link) for extra credit. please check it out Thanks!
2.I have completed the wiki dashboard for registering to teach the course. Here is my link ,please check it out Thanks! YZY2233 (talk) 08:21, 5 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240905082100","author":"YZY2233","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-YZY2233-20240905082100-Deadline_1(Week_1)_:YUE_ZIYI_-Understanding_Small_and_Big_Data_with_Wikis","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240909075000-YZY2233-20240905082100"]}}-->
@YZY2233 Good job! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:50, 9 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240909075000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240909075000-YZY2233-20240905082100","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I am taking Media Trends and Globalization from a professor.
1.I have complete the Wikipedia:Training Here is my link(https://imgur.com/a/wRLWsic), please check it out Thanks!
2.I have completed the wiki dashboard for registering to teach the course. Here is my link(https://imgur.com/a/iptK9vT) ,please check it out Thanks! Jiayyyyy (talk) 14:04, 5 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240905140400","author":"Jiayyyyy","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Jiayyyyy-20240905140400-Deadline_1_:JIA_YUAN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240909075000-Jiayyyyy-20240905140400"]}}-->
@Jiayyyyy Good job! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:50, 9 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240909075000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240909075000-Jiayyyyy-20240905140400","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Dear Professor: I am taking Media Trends and Globalization and understanding of small data and big data from professor.
1.I have complete the Wikipedia:Training Here is my link , please check it out Thanks!
2.I have completed the wiki dashboard for registering to teach the course. Here is my link, link ,please check it out Thanks! Jo HyeonSeong (talk) 04:28, 6 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240906042800","author":"Jo HyeonSeong","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Jo_HyeonSeong-20240906042800-Deadline1_:_Jo_HyeonSeong","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240909075000-Jo_HyeonSeong-20240906042800"]}}-->
@Jo HyeonSeong Good job! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:50, 9 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240909075000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240909075000-Jo_HyeonSeong-20240906042800","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I am taking Media Trends and Globalization from a professor.
1.I have complete the Wikipedia:Training Here is my link, please check it out Thanks!
2.I have completed the wiki dashboard for registering to teach the course. Here is my link ,please check it out Thanks! Kkm.hanyang22 (talk) 04:37, 6 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240906043700","author":"Kkm.hanyang22","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Kkm.hanyang22-20240906043700-Deadline_1_:Kim_Kyungmin","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240909075100-Kkm.hanyang22-20240906043700"]}}-->
@Kkm.hanyang22 Good job! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:51, 9 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240909075100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240909075100-Kkm.hanyang22-20240906043700","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I am learning two courses from professors on media trends and globalization and understanding of small data and big data.
1.I have complete the Wikipedia:Training Here is my link , please check it out Thanks!
2.I have completed the wiki dashboard for registering to teach the course. Here is my link Cite error: There are <ref> tags on this page without content in them (see the help page). , linkplease check it out Thanks! Jeong Ahram (talk) 04:38, 6 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240906043800","author":"Jeong Ahram","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Jeong_Ahram-20240906043800-Deadline_1:_Jeong_Aram","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240909075100-Jeong_Ahram-20240906043800"]}}-->
@Jeong Ahram Good job! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:51, 9 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240909075100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240909075100-Jeong_Ahram-20240906043800","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I am taking Media Trends and Globalization & understanding of small data and big data from a professor.
1.I have complete the Wikipedia:Training Here is my link, please check it out Thanks!
2.I have completed the wiki dashboard for registering to teach the course. Here is my link ,link ,please check it out Thanks! Kang Taeho (talk) 04:43, 6 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240906044300","author":"Kang Taeho","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Kang_Taeho-20240906044300-Deadline_1_:KANG_Taeho","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240909075300-Kang_Taeho-20240906044300"]}}-->
@Kang Taeho Good job! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:53, 9 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240909075300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240909075300-Kang_Taeho-20240906044300","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Dear professer,
I am learning two courses from professors on media trends and globalization and understanding of small data and big data.
I have complete the wikipedia:training. Here is my link
I have completed the production of the Wikipedia Dashboard to take this class. User talk:Xisuuxlinklink
Please check it out my assignment. Xisuux (talk) 04:47, 6 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240906044700","author":"Xisuux","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Xisuux-20240906044700-Deadline_1_:_Lee_jisu","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240909075400-Xisuux-20240906044700"]}}-->
@Xisuux Good job! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:54, 9 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240909075400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240909075400-Xisuux-20240906044700","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Dear Professor:
Hi. I am eunyeong. I am taking Media Trends and Globalization from a professor.
1.I have complete the Wikipedia:Training Here is my link, please check it out Thanks!
2.I have completed the wiki dashboard for registering to teach the course. Here is my link ,please check it out Thanks! Kang eunyeong (talk) 04:58, 6 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240906045800","author":"Kang eunyeong","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Kang_eunyeong-20240906045800-Deadline1:_Kang_eun_yeong","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240909075500-Kang_eunyeong-20240906045800"]}}-->
@Kang eunyeong Good job! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:55, 9 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240909075500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240909075500-Kang_eunyeong-20240906045800","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I am learning two courses from professors on media trends and globalization and understanding of small data and big data.
1.I have complete the Wikipedia:Training Here is my , please check it out Thanks!
2.I have completed the wiki dashboard for registering to teach the course. Here is my ,please check it out Thanks! Hanyuanyuan613 (talk) 05:18, 6 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240906051800","author":"Hanyuanyuan613","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Hanyuanyuan613-20240906051800-Deadline_1_:HAN_YUANYUAN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240909075600-Hanyuanyuan613-20240906051800"]}}-->
@Hanyuanyuan613 Good job! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:56, 9 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240909075600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240909075600-Hanyuanyuan613-20240906051800","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I am learning two courses from professors on media trends and globalization and understanding of small data and big data.
1.I have complete the Wikipedia:Training Here is my link, please check it out Thanks!
2.I have completed the wiki dashboard for registering to teach the course. Here is my link, please check it out Thanks! Limengchen2777 (talk) 05:28, 6 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240906052800","author":"Limengchen2777","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Limengchen2777-20240906052800-Deadline_1:Limengchen","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240909075700-Limengchen2777-20240906052800"]}}-->
@Limengchen2777 Good job! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:57, 9 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240909075700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240909075700-Limengchen2777-20240906052800","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I am a student who takes class named Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis.
1.I have complete the Wikipedia Training.
Here is my link
2.Also I have enrolled in the dashboard system for this class. Here is my link ,please check it out my assignment.JHyunlee (talk) 05:35, 6 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240906053500","author":"JHyunlee","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-JHyunlee-20240906053500-Deadline_1_:Lee_Jae-Hyun","replies":[]}}-->
JHyunlee (talk) 06:53, 6 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240906065300","author":"JHyunlee","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-JHyunlee-20240906065300-Deadline_1_:Lee_Jae-Hyun","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240909075900-JHyunlee-20240906065300"]}}-->
@JHyunlee Good job! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:59, 9 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240909075900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240909075900-JHyunlee-20240906065300","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I am learning two courses from professors on media trends and globalization and understanding of small data and big data.
1.I have complete the Wikipedia:Training Here is my link (https://imgur.com/a/kLoWbfD)please check it out Thanks!
2.I have completed the wiki dashboard for the two registered professor courses. Here is my link(https://imgur.com/a/9cF2AtH) ,(https://imgur.com/a/0DNd2Y2)please check it out Thanks! Guoying1 (talk) 05:49, 6 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240906054900","author":"Guoying1","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Guoying1-20240906054900-Deadline_:_GUO_YING","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240909075900-Guoying1-20240906054900"]}}-->
@Guoying1 Good job! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:59, 9 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240909075900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240909075900-Guoying1-20240906054900","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
2.I have completed the wiki dashboard for registering to teach the course. Here is my link(https://imgur.com/a/Ib7Yt9f ) ,please check it out Thanks! Jihaiyun (talk) 05:55, 6 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240906055500","author":"Jihaiyun","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Jihaiyun-20240906055500-Deadline1:_JIHAIYUN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240909075900-Jihaiyun-20240906055500"]}}-->
@Jihaiyun Good job! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:59, 9 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240909075900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240909075900-Jihaiyun-20240906055500","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I am learning two courses from professors on media trends and globalization and understanding of small data and big data.
1.I have complete the Wikipedia:Training Here is my link, please check it out Thanks!
2.I have completed the wiki dashboard for registering to teach the course. Here is mylink, please check it out Thanks!SHENZIHE (talk) 06:42, 6 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240906064200","author":"SHENZIHE","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-SHENZIHE-20240906064200-Deadline1:_SHENZIHE","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240909075900-SHENZIHE-20240906064200"]}}-->
@SHENZIHE Good job! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:59, 9 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240909075900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240909075900-SHENZIHE-20240906064200","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I am taking Media Trends and Globalization from a professor.
1.I have complete the Wikipedia:Training Here is my link, please check it out Thanks!
2.I have completed the wiki dashboard for registering to teach the course. Here is my link ,please check it out Thanks!MUYW (talk) 06:47, 6 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240906064700","author":"MUYW","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-MUYW-20240906064700-Deadline1:_MUYE","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240909080000-MUYW-20240906064700"]}}-->
@MUYW Good job! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:00, 9 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240909080000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240909080000-MUYW-20240906064700","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I am taking Media Trends and Globalization from a professor.
1.I have complete the Wikipedia:Training Here is my https://imgur.com/a/zMKOjwC , please check it out Thanks!
2.I have completed the wiki dashboard for registering to teach the course. Here is my https://imgur.com/a/k3Bhkeq ,please check it out Thanks! Xukeying2022039098 (talk) 06:55, 6 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240906065500","author":"Xukeying2022039098","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Xukeying2022039098-20240906065500-Deadline1:_XU_KEYING","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240909080000-Xukeying2022039098-20240906065500"]}}-->
@Xukeying2022039098 Good job! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:00, 9 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240909080000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240909080000-Xukeying2022039098-20240906065500","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I am taking two courses from professor on media trends and globalization and understanding of small data and big data.
1. I have completed the Wikipedia:Training. Here is my link, please check it out Thanks!
2. I have completed the wiki dashboard for registration . Here is my link, please check it out Thanks! Uuueol (talk) 07:00, 6 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240906070000","author":"Uuueol","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Uuueol-20240906070000-Deadline1:_GUANYUE","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240909080200-Uuueol-20240906070000"]}}-->
@Uuueol Good job! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:02, 9 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240909080200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240909080200-Uuueol-20240906070000","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I am learning two courses from professors on media trends and globalization and understanding of small data and big data.
1.I have complete the Wikipedia:Training Here is my link. please check it out Thanks!
2.I have completed the wiki dashboard for registering to teach the course. Here is my link ,please check it out Thanks! Wuwenhao19960507 (talk) 07:01, 6 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240906070100","author":"Wuwenhao19960507","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Wuwenhao19960507-20240906070100-Deadline1:_WU_WENHAO","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240909080300-Wuwenhao19960507-20240906070100"]}}-->
@Wuwenhao19960507 Good job! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:03, 9 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240909080300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240909080300-Wuwenhao19960507-20240906070100","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Dear Professor:
I am learning two courses from professors on media trends and globalization and understanding of small data and big data.
1.I have complete the Wikipedia:Training Here is my link, please check it out Thanks!
2.I have completed the wiki dashboard for registering to teach the course. Here is my link, please check it out Thanks! Honghaotian (talk) 07:04, 6 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240906070400","author":"Honghaotian","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Honghaotian-20240906070400-Deadline1:_HONG_HAOTIAN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240909080400-Honghaotian-20240906070400"]}}-->
@Honghaotian Good job! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:04, 9 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240909080400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240909080400-Honghaotian-20240906070400","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I am learning two courses from professors on media trends and globalization and understanding of small data and big data.
1.I have complete the Wikipedia:Training Here is my link, please check it out Thanks!
2.I have completed the wiki dashboard for the two registered professor courses. Here is my link please check it out Thanks! Cuicuizan (talk) 07:05, 6 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240906070500","author":"Cuicuizan","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Cuicuizan-20240906070500-Deadline_1_:CUI_ZAN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240909080400-Cuicuizan-20240906070500"]}}-->
@Cuicuizan Good job! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:04, 9 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240909080400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240909080400-Cuicuizan-20240906070500","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I am taking Media Trends and Globalization from a professor.
1.I have complete the Wikipedia:Training Here is my link, please check it out Thanks!
2.I have completed the wiki dashboard for registering to teach the course. Here is my link ,please check it out Thanks! Donghem (talk) 07:13, 6 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240906071300","author":"Donghem","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Donghem-20240906071300-Deadline1:_XUE_DONGXIN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240909080500-Donghem-20240906071300"]}}-->
@Donghem Good job! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:05, 9 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240909080500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240909080500-Donghem-20240906071300","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I am learning two courses from professors on media trends and globalization and understanding of small data and big data.
1.I have complete the Wikipedia:Training Here is my https://imgur.com/a/wnnUIC3, please check it out Thanks!
2.I have completed the wiki dashboard for registering to teach the course. Here is my https://imgur.com/a/wnnUIC3 ,please check it out Thanks! WANGYIZHE1124 (talk) 08:02, 6 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240906080200","author":"WANGYIZHE1124","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-WANGYIZHE1124-20240906080200-WANG_YIZHE","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240909080700-WANGYIZHE1124-20240906080200"]}}-->
@WANGYIZHE1124 Good job! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:07, 9 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240909080700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240909080700-WANGYIZHE1124-20240906080200","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor: I am taking Media Trends and Globalization from a professor.I have complete the Wikipedia:Training Here is my link https://imgur.com/a/GXLQbIr please check it out Thanks! .I have completed the wiki dashboard for registering to teach the course. Here is my link https://imgur.com/a/0rDjmTD please check it out Thanks! 주영영 (talk) 08:09, 6 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240906080900","author":"\uc8fc\uc601\uc601","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-\uc8fc\uc601\uc601-20240906080900-ZHUYINGYING","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240909080700-\uc8fc\uc601\uc601-20240906080900"]}}-->
@주영영 Good job! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:07, 9 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240909080700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240909080700-\uc8fc\uc601\uc601-20240906080900","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
@SongHyeonmin2020007129 Good job! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:07, 9 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240909080700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240909080700-SongHyeonmin2020007129-20240906104400","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Dear Professor: I am taking Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis from a professor.I have complete the Wikipedia:Training Here is my link https://imgur.com/a/28ID5Fk please check it out Thanks! . I have completed the wiki dashboard for registering to teach the course. Here is my link https://imgur.com/a/Jw4yDIA please check it out Thanks! Tyuni06 (talk) 14:06, 6 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240906140600","author":"Tyuni06","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Tyuni06-20240906140600-Deadline_1:_TANG_YINI---Understanding_Small_and_Big_Data_with_Wikis","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240909080800-Tyuni06-20240906140600"]}}-->
@Tyuni06 Good job! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:08, 9 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240909080800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240909080800-Tyuni06-20240906140600","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor:
I am learning two courses from professors on media trends and globalization and understanding of small data and big data.
1.I have complete the Wikipedia:Training Here is my link(https://imgur.com/a/V6gTLL5), please check it out Thanks!
2.I have completed the wiki dashboard for registering to teach the course. Here is my link(https://imgur.com/a/6tbKNJr) ,please check it out Thanks!
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@Kylo09 Good job! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:08, 9 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240909080800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240909080800-Kylo09-20240906152600","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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WANGYIZHE---Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis
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Dear Professor: I am taking Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis from a professor.I have complete the Wikipedia:Training Here is my link https://imgur.com/a/lImENmj ,please check it out Thanks! . I have completed the wiki dashboard for registering to teach the course. Here is my link https://imgur.com/a/lImENmj ,please check it out Thanks! WANGYIZHE1124 (talk) 15:32, 6 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240906153200","author":"WANGYIZHE1124","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-WANGYIZHE1124-20240906153200-WANGYIZHE---Understanding_Small_and_Big_Data_with_Wikis","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240909080800-WANGYIZHE1124-20240906153200"]}}-->
@WANGYIZHE1124 Good job! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:08, 9 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240909080800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240909080800-WANGYIZHE1124-20240906153200","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I am taking Media Trends and Globalization from a professor.
1.I have complete the Wikipedia:Training Here is my link, please check it out Thanks!
2.I have completed the wiki dashboard for registering to teach the course. Here is my link, please check it out Thanks!––Xuan6699 (talk) 16:16, 6 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240906161600","author":"Xuan6699","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Xuan6699-20240906161600-Deadline_1:_XU_YAN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240909080800-Xuan6699-20240906161600"]}}-->
@Xuan6699 Good job! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:08, 9 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240909080800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240909080800-Xuan6699-20240906161600","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Deadline 1: JIHAIYUN --Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis
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Dear Professor
I am taking Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis from a professor.I have complete the Wikipedia:Training Here is my (https://imgur.com/a/5pmyetm) please check it out Thanks! . I have completed the wiki dashboard for registering to teach the course. Here is my link (https://imgur.com/a/WdQHoaq) please check it out Thanks! Jihaiyun (talk) 16:21, 6 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240906162100","author":"Jihaiyun","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Jihaiyun-20240906162100-Deadline_1:_JIHAIYUN_--Understanding_Small_and_Big_Data_with_Wikis","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240909080900-Jihaiyun-20240906162100"]}}-->
@Jihaiyun Good job! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:09, 9 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240909080900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240909080900-Jihaiyun-20240906162100","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Deadline 1: JIA YUAN---Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis
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Dear Professor:
I am taking Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis from a professor.
1.I have complete the Wikipedia:Training Here is my link(https://imgur.com/a/LJk0ebF), please check it out Thanks!
2. I have completed the wiki dashboard for registering to teach the course. Here is my link(https://imgur.com/a/cdMlepB) ,please check it out Thanks! Jiayyyyy (talk) 17:44, 6 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240906174400","author":"Jiayyyyy","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Jiayyyyy-20240906174400-Deadline_1:_JIA_YUAN---Understanding_Small_and_Big_Data_with_Wikis","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240909080900-Jiayyyyy-20240906174400"]}}-->
@Jiayyyyy Good job! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:09, 9 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240909080900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240909080900-Jiayyyyy-20240906174400","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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JIHAIYUN— extra credit Wikipedia:Training/For students/Training complete
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Dear Professor:
I am learning two courses from professors on media trends and globalization and understanding of small data and big data.
I have completed the additional Wikipedia:Training/For students/Training complete Here is my link (https://imgur.com/a/c7rZd4S) Please check it Thanks! Jihaiyun (talk) 08:02, 7 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240907080200","author":"Jihaiyun","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Jihaiyun-20240907080200-JIHAIYUN\u2014_extra_credit_Wikipedia:Training\/For_students\/Training_complete","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240909080900-Jihaiyun-20240907080200"]}}-->
@Jihaiyun Good job! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:09, 9 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240909080900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240909080900-Jihaiyun-20240907080200","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor:
I am learning two courses from professors on media trends and globalization and understanding of small data and big data.
1.I have complete the Wikipedia
2.I have completed the wiki dashboard for registering to teach the course. Here is my link(https://imgur.com/a/TwWRTjn)please check it out Thanks!!yeomll(talk)
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@Yeomll Good job! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:09, 9 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240909080900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240909080900-Yeomll-20240907123500","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I am taking Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis from a professor.
1.I have complete the Wikipedia:Training Here is my link(https://imgur.com/a/lUHDxa9), please check it out Thanks!
2. I have completed the wiki dashboard for registering to teach the course. Here is my link(https://imgur.com/a/kmwCOUR), please check it out Thanks! Guoying1 (talk) 16:02, 7 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240907160200","author":"Guoying1","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Guoying1-20240907160200-Deadline1:GUO_YING","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240909080900-Guoying1-20240907160200"]}}-->
@Guoying1 Good job! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:09, 9 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240909080900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240909080900-Guoying1-20240907160200","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor:
I am learning two courses from professors on media trends and globalization and understanding of small data and big data.
1.I have complete the Wikipedia:Training Here is my , please check it out Thanks!
2.I have completed the wiki dashboard for registering to teach the course. Here is my ,please check it out Thanks! Shuo1103 (talk) 06:00, 8 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240908060000","author":"Shuo1103","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Shuo1103-20240908060000-Deadline_1_:ZHANG_MINGSHUO","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240909081200-Shuo1103-20240908060000"]}}-->
@Shuo1103 Good job! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:12, 9 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240909081200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240909081200-Shuo1103-20240908060000","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor:
I am taking Media Trends and Globalization from a professor.
1. I have completed the Wikipedia training. Here is my link
2. I have registered for the dashboard system for both courses. Here is my link
Please check it out thanks! WSH0927 (talk) 11:05, 8 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240908110500","author":"WSH0927","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-WSH0927-20240908110500-Deadline1:_WU_SHUHAN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240909081200-WSH0927-20240908110500"]}}-->
@WSH0927 Good job! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:12, 9 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240909081200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240909081200-WSH0927-20240908110500","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
@Wjyy1212 Good job! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:13, 9 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240909081300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240909081300-Wjyy1212-20240908123900","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Jeong seolah (talk) 14:35, 8 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240908143500","author":"Jeong seolah","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Jeong_seolah-20240908143500-Deadline_1:_Jeong_seolah","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240909081500-Jeong_seolah-20240908143500"]}}-->
@Jeong seolah Good job! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:15, 9 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240909081500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240909081500-Jeong_seolah-20240908143500","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor: I am learning two courses from professors on media trends and globalization and understanding of small data and big data.
1.I have complete the Wikipedia:Training Here is my link, please check it out Thanks
2.I have completed the wiki dashboard for registering to teach the course. Here is my link,please check it out Thanks! Kdjdxx208 (talk) 03:59, 9 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240909035900","author":"Kdjdxx208","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Kdjdxx208-20240909035900-Deadline_1:_Jeong_seolah","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240909081600-Kdjdxx208-20240909035900"]}}-->
@Kdjdxx208 Good but you made an error - you did not start a new section properly (you either replied to your friend Jeong above, or you forgot to enter a heading). Please do it again, this time with a proper heading for your message. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:16, 9 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240909081600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240909081600-Kdjdxx208-20240909035900","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I am taking Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis from a professor.
1.I have complete the Wikipedia:Training Here is my link [1]https://imgur.com/a/01y3yEI, please check it out Thanks!
2.I have completed the wiki dashboard for registering to teach the course. Here is my link [2]https://imgur.com/a/01y3yEI ,please check it out Thanks! Xukeying2022039098 (talk) 04:09, 9 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240909040900","author":"Xukeying2022039098","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Xukeying2022039098-20240909040900-XU_KEYING","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240909081600-Xukeying2022039098-20240909040900"]}}-->
@Xukeying2022039098 Good job! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:16, 9 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240909081600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240909081600-Xukeying2022039098-20240909040900","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I am taking two courses from professor on media trends and globalization and understanding of small data and big data.
1. I have completed the Wikipedia:Training. Here is my link, please check it out Thanks!
2. I have completed the wiki dashboard for registration . Here is my link, please check it out Thanks! Poeyal (talk) 04:37, 9 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240909043700","author":"Poeyal","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Poeyal-20240909043700-Deadline1:_LIUZIYE","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240909081600-Poeyal-20240909043700"]}}-->
@Poeyal Good job! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:16, 9 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240909081600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240909081600-Poeyal-20240909043700","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
2.I have completed the wiki dashboard for registering to teach the course. Here is my https://imgur.com/gallery/1-BkUULEC ,please check it out Thanks!
Jiseong754 (talk) 04:48, 9 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240909044800","author":"Jiseong754","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Jiseong754-20240909044800-Deadline_1_:jisung_choi","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240909082100-Jiseong754-20240909044800"]}}-->
@Jiseong754 Good job! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:21, 9 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240909082100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240909082100-Jiseong754-20240909044800","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
@Hee Jung, Yoon Good job! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:23, 9 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240909082300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240909082300-Hee_Jung,_Yoon-20240909052000","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello again from some months ago, it seems that some unregistered IPs you are probably related to are triggering edit filters and getting stopped from posting in this talk page. Viewing the abuse log of this page should bring up some of them. Thanks. ABG (Talk/Report any mistakes here) 05:22, 9 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240909052200","author":"AlphaBetaGamma","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-AlphaBetaGamma-20240909052200-Notice","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240909082700-AlphaBetaGamma-20240909052200"],"displayName":"ABG"}}-->
@AlphaBetaGamma Tnx. I don't see an abuse log in the logs for this page? Where can I find it? I'll ping you from a thread about a possibly related issue shortly... Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:27, 9 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240909082700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240909082700-AlphaBetaGamma-20240909052200","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I am taking Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis from a professor. 1.I have complete the Wikipedia:Training Here is my link, please check it out Thanks!
2.I have completed the wiki dashboard for registering to teach the course. Here is my link, please check it out Thanks! Xukeying2022039098 (talk) 05:24, 9 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240909052400","author":"Xukeying2022039098","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Xukeying2022039098-20240909052400-Deadline_1:Xukeying","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240909082700-Xukeying2022039098-20240909052400"]}}-->
@Xukeying2022039098 Good job! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:27, 9 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240909082700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240909082700-Xukeying2022039098-20240909052400","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor
I'm taking 'Media Trends and Globalization' and 'Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis' from the professor.
1. I have complete the Wikipedia:Training Here is my link, please check it out Thanks!
2. I have completed the wiki dashboard for registering to teach the course. Here is my link, please check it out Thanks! PMH-121 (talk) 05:25, 9 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240909052500","author":"PMH-121","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-PMH-121-20240909052500-Deadline_1:_MyeongHyeon_Park","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240909082800-PMH-121-20240909052500"]}}-->
@PMH-121 Good job! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:28, 9 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240909082800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240909082800-PMH-121-20240909052500","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Good afternoon, Professor. This is China's software Xiaohongshu I found in class. Please check it out. Hanyuanyuan613 (talk) 06:23, 9 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240909062300","author":"Hanyuanyuan613","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Hanyuanyuan613-20240909062300-Answer_questions_in_class\uff1aHAN_YUANYUAN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240909083000-Hanyuanyuan613-20240909062300"]}}-->
@Hanyuanyuan613 Thank you for the link! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:30, 9 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240909083000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240909083000-Hanyuanyuan613-20240909062300","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I am taking "Small Data and Big Data" from the professor.
1. I have completed the Wikipedia Training. Here is my link, please check it out Thanks!
2. I have completed the wiki dashboard for registering to teach the course. Here is my link.
Please check it out. Thank you. Parksungeun (talk) 06:53, 9 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240909065300","author":"Parksungeun","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Parksungeun-20240909065300-Deadline_1:_Parksungeun","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240909083000-Parksungeun-20240909065300"]}}-->
@Parksungeun Good job! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:30, 9 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240909083000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240909083000-Parksungeun-20240909065300","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
@Ysrfield Good job! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:31, 9 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240909083100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240909083100-Ysrfield-20240909070000","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Dear Professor:
I am taking two courses, "Media Trends and Globalization" and "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis".
1. I have completed the Wikipedia Training. Here is my link
2. I have enrolled in the dashboard system for those two courses. Here is my link
Please check it out. Thank you. Syouziiye (talk) 07:10, 9 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240909071000","author":"Syouziiye","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Syouziiye-20240909071000-Deadline1:_SHU_YING","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240909083100-Syouziiye-20240909071000"]}}-->
@Syouziiye Good job! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:31, 9 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240909083100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240909083100-Syouziiye-20240909071000","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
2.I have completed the wiki dashboard for registering to teach the course. Here is my https://imgur.com/gallery/week-1-dashboard-of-yeogeun-song-KuwMbgV ,please check it out Thanks!
송여근 (talk) 07:51, 9 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240909075100","author":"\uc1a1\uc5ec\uadfc","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-\uc1a1\uc5ec\uadfc-20240909075100-Deadline1:_Yeogeun_Song","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240909083100-\uc1a1\uc5ec\uadfc-20240909075100"]}}-->
@송여근 Good job! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:31, 9 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240909083100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240909083100-\uc1a1\uc5ec\uadfc-20240909075100","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Please check it out thanks!Hyodong318 (talk) 04:34, 10 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240910043400","author":"Hyodong318","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Hyodong318-20240910043400-Deadline1:_ZHANG_XIAOTONG","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240909074800-Hyodong318-20240910043400"]}}-->
@Hyodong318 Good but you made one mistake: you incorrectly placed your message at the top of my talk page (it should be at the bottom). Please read the guide on how to leave messages again and try once more. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:48, 9 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240909074800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240909074800-Hyodong318-20240910043400","replies":["c-Hyodong318-20240910113300-Hanyangprofessor2-20240909074800"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Okay, I'll take care of it next time. Thank you very much. Hyodong318 (talk) 11:33, 10 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240910113300","author":"Hyodong318","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Hyodong318-20240910113300-Hanyangprofessor2-20240909074800","replies":[]}}-->
Dear Professor:
I am learning two courses from professors on media trends and globalization and understanding of small data and big data.
1.I have complete the Wikipedia:Training Here is myhttps://imgur.com/a/anEj2dn , please check it out Thanks!
2.I have completed the wiki dashboard for registering to teach the course. Here is my ,please check it out Thanks! RiansLu (talk) 05:26, 6 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240906052600","author":"RiansLu","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-RiansLu-20240906052600-wushnegyu","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240909075700-RiansLu-20240906052600"]}}-->
@RiansLu Good job! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:57, 9 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240909075700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240909075700-RiansLu-20240906052600","replies":["c-182.220.146.230-20240913144900-Hanyangprofessor2-20240909075700"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
@RiansLu Good, I've recorded them both. But remember that as I said, 中国第一滩 is a bit too short and you will need to expand it (with reliable sources) or translate one more article. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:55, 14 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240914045500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240914045500-182.220.146.230-20240913144900","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello Professor:
I am taking two courses, “Media Trends and Globalization“ and ”Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis.”
1. I have completed the Wikipedia Training. Here is my linkI also completed the Chinese at wiki pedia:Online Training link
2.I have enrolled in the dashboard system for those two courses.link [link]Babaibiaobin (talk) 07:56, 6 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240906075600","author":"Babaibiaobin","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Babaibiaobin-20240906075600-Deadline1:gaoxiaoxia","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240914050400-Babaibiaobin-20240906075600"]}}-->
@Babaibiaobin Ok! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:04, 14 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240914050400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240914050400-Babaibiaobin-20240906075600","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Dear Professor:
I am taking Media Trends and Globalization from a professor.
1.I have complete the Wikipedia:Training Here is my link, please check it out Thanks!
2.I have completed the wiki dashboard for registering to teach the course. Here is my link, please check it out Thanks! Xuan6699 (talk) 16:22, 6 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240906162200","author":"Xuan6699","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Xuan6699-20240906162200-Deadline_1:_XU_YAN_2","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240914050400-Xuan6699-20240906162200"]}}-->
@Xuan6699 Ok! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:04, 14 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240914050400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240914050400-Xuan6699-20240906162200","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor:
I am taking Media Trends and Globalization also Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis from professor.
1.I have complete the Wikipedia:Training Here is my link please check it out Thanks!
2.I have completed the wiki dashboard for registering to teach the course. Here is my link ,please check it out Thanks you! KellyChen0221 (talk) 07:06, 9 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240909070600","author":"KellyChen0221","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-KellyChen0221-20240909070600-Deadline1:_Chen_Siting","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240914050500-KellyChen0221-20240909070600"]}}-->
@KellyChen0221 Good job! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:05, 14 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240914050500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240914050500-KellyChen0221-20240909070600","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I am taking two courses, "Media Trends and Globalization" and "Understanding Small and Big Data through Wiki".
1. I have completed the Wikipedia training. Here is my link.
2. I have registered for the dashboard system for both courses. Here is my link.
Please check it out thanks!Laoxinyi (talk) 08:40, 10 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240910084000","author":"Laoxinyi","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Laoxinyi-20240910084000-Deadline_1_:LAO_XINYI","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240914050600-Laoxinyi-20240910084000"]}}-->
@Laoxinyi Good job! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:06, 14 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240914050600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240914050600-Laoxinyi-20240910084000","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I am LI LINLIN taking Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis class.
1.I have complete the Wikipedia:Training. Please check it here.
2.I have completed the wiki dashboard for registering to the course.
have a nice day~ Leeinm (talk) 11:42, 10 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240910114200","author":"Leeinm","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Leeinm-20240910114200-Deadline_1(Week_1-2)-LI_LINLIN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240914050600-Leeinm-20240910114200"]}}-->
@Leeinm Good job! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:06, 14 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240914050600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240914050600-Leeinm-20240910114200","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor:
I am WANG YIKE. I am taking two courses, "Media Trends and Globalization" and "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis".
1. I have completed the Wikipedia Training. [Here is my link]
2. I have enrolled in the dashboard system for those two courses. Here is my link
Please check it out. Thank you. Alexk27 (talk) 01:16, 11 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240911011600","author":"Alexk27","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Alexk27-20240911011600-Deadline_1:WANG_YIKE","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240914050700-Alexk27-20240911011600"]}}-->
@Alexk27 Good job! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:07, 14 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240914050700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240914050700-Alexk27-20240911011600","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor: I am CHEN HEBING. I am taking two courses, "Media Trends and Globalization" and "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis". 1. I have completed the Wikipedia Training.2. I have enrolled in the dashboard system for those two courses. Here is my link Please check it out. Thank you. CHEN HEBING (talk) 03:44, 11 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240911034400","author":"CHEN HEBING","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-CHEN_HEBING-20240911034400-Deadline_1:CHEN_HEBING","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240914050700-CHEN_HEBING-20240911034400"]}}-->
@CHEN HEBING Good job! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:07, 14 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240914050700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240914050700-CHEN_HEBING-20240911034400","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Dear Professor:
I am taking two courses, "Media Trends and Globalization" and "Understanding Small and Big Data through Wiki".
1. I have completed the training on Wikipedia. Here is my link https://imgur.com/a/SV4emfs
2. I have registered for Dashboard Systems for both courses. Here is my link https://imgur.com/a/vHitY4o Please check it out,
thank you!have a nice day!
Peter011008 (talk) 04:48, 11 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240911044800","author":"Peter011008","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Peter011008-20240911044800-Deadline1_LIU_ZIFU","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240914050900-Peter011008-20240911044800"]}}-->
@Peter011008 Good job! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:09, 14 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240914050900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240914050900-Peter011008-20240911044800","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor: I am SHAOJIANUAN. I am taking two courses, "Media Trends and Globalization" and "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis". 1. I have completed the Wikipedia Training.2. I have enrolled in the dashboard system for those two courses. Here is my link/Here is my link Please check it out. Thank you. SHAOJIANUAN (talk) 13:44, 11 September 2024 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Sssnuan (talk • contribs) __DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240911134400","author":"SHAOJIANUAN","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-SHAOJIANUAN-20240911134400-Deadline_1:SHAOJIANUAN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240914051200-SHAOJIANUAN-20240911134400"]}}-->
@Sssnuan You incorrectly signed your post. Please read Wikipedia:Signature tutorial and try to sign your post correctly next time. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:12, 14 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240914051200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240914051200-SHAOJIANUAN-20240911134400","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
2. I have completed the wiki dashboard for registering to teach the course. Here is my https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:SoeunK. please check it out Thanks
SoeunK (talk) 15:01, 12 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240912150100","author":"SoeunK","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-SoeunK-20240912150100-Deadline_1:_Soeun_Kwon","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240914072500-SoeunK-20240912150100"],"displayName":"https:\/\/en.wikipedia.org\/wiki\/User:SoeunK"}}-->
@SoeunK Good job! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:25, 14 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240914072500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240914072500-SoeunK-20240912150100","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor, I am HUANG LINGXUAN. I am taking of your lecture: Media Trends and Globalization.
1. I have completed the relevant training on Wikipedia, here is my screenshot link.
2. I have completed registration and joined the wiki dashboard for this course. Here is my related link.
please check it . Thank you~
Hhhlx (talk) 13:27, 12 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240912132700","author":"Hhhlx","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Hhhlx-20240912132700-Deadline_1:_HUANGLINGXUAN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240914073100-Hhhlx-20240912132700"]}}-->
@Hhhlx Good job! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:31, 14 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240914073100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240914073100-Hhhlx-20240912132700","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor, I am HUANG LINGXUAN. I am taking of your lecture: Media Trends and Globalization.
Me and my group members @1eleven0086. Two articles have been selected for editing: this is the article translated from Chinese to English article, and this is the article translated from English to Chinese article. Please check it. Thank you~ Hhhlx (talk) 13:43, 12 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240912134300","author":"Hhhlx","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Hhhlx-20240912134300-Deadline_2_\uff1aHUANGLINGXUAN&LIU_YUNXIANG","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240914073300-Hhhlx-20240912134300"]}}-->
@Hhhlx As we discussed in class, those articles are pretty similar in both English and Chinese, so they are not good for the main project (you can still translate the content from them for extra credit). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:33, 14 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240914073300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240914073300-Hhhlx-20240912134300","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor: I am taking two courses, "Media Trends and Globalization" and "Understanding Small and Big Data through Wiki". 1. I have completed the training on Wikipedia. Here is my link https://imgur.com/gallery/deadline-1-liu-yunxiang-r6uzJi7 2. I have registered for Dashboard Systems for both courses. Here is my link https://imgur.com/5L22eb5 Please check it out, thank you! 1eleven0086 (talk) 14:21, 12 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240912142100","author":"1eleven0086","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-1eleven0086-20240912142100-Deadline_1:LIU_YUNXIANG","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240914073400-1eleven0086-20240912142100"]}}-->
@1eleven0086 Good job! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:34, 14 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240914073400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240914073400-1eleven0086-20240912142100","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
2. I have completed the wiki dashboard for registering to teach the course. Here is my link.https://imgur.com/O6rpuu7 ,please check it out Thanks! Waterooo (talk) 16:47, 12 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240912164700","author":"Waterooo","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Waterooo-20240912164700-Deadline_1:ZHOU_HAIRUO","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240914073400-Waterooo-20240912164700"]}}-->
@Waterooo Good job! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:34, 14 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240914073400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240914073400-Waterooo-20240912164700","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Dear Professor: I am SHAOJIANUAN. I am taking of your lecture: Media Trends and Globalization.
Me and my group members @ Alexk27 . Two articles have been selected for editing: this is the article translated from Chinese to English article, and this is the article translated from English to Chinese article. Please check it. Thank you~ Sssnuan (talk) 13:43, 13 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240913134300","author":"Sssnuan","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Sssnuan-20240913134300-Deadline_2_\uff1aSHAO_JIANUAN_&_WANG_YIKE","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240914073700-Sssnuan-20240913134300"]}}-->
@Sssnuan Those are good choices, as we discussed in class - approved Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:37, 14 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240914073700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240914073700-Sssnuan-20240913134300","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Dear Professor: I am CHEN HEBING. I am taking of your lecture: Media Trends and Globalization and Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis.
Me and my group members @ LJY2455. Two articles have been selected for editing: this is the article translated from Chinese to English article, and this is the article translated from English to Chinese article. Please check it. Thank you~ CHEN HEBING (talk) 04:21, 13 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240913042100","author":"CHEN HEBING","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-CHEN_HEBING-20240913042100-Deadline_2_\uff1aCHEN_HEBING_&_LIU_JUNYU","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240914074700-CHEN_HEBING-20240913042100"]}}-->
@CHEN HEBING @LJY2455 I am afraid 对百度的争议 has already been chosen by and reserved for another group. As for your idea to translate between Russian-South Korean relations and 俄羅斯—韓國關係, I see the content of the articles is pretty similar. There are small differences, but you can translate those for extra credit. For your main projects, however, you will need to choose other topics - please tell me your new ideas (or come see me during office hours for suggestions). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:47, 14 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240914074700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240914074700-CHEN_HEBING-20240913042100","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I have chosen two of your courses, 《Media Trends and Globalization》 and 《Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis》. Here is the link to my dashboard.
and I have completed the training.https://imgur.com/a/chWQc8TPlease check Mcx8202229 🇨🇳❤️ (talk)05:37, 13 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240913053700","author":"Mcx8202229","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Mcx8202229-20240913053700-Deadline_1:Ma_Chenxiao","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240914075100-Mcx8202229-20240913053700"]}}-->
@Mcx8202229 Good job! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:51, 14 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240914075100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240914075100-Mcx8202229-20240913053700","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Please check Thank youCaizzz (talk) 05:59, 13 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240913055900","author":"Caizzz","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Caizzz-20240913055900-Deadline_2\uff1aCAI_ZHIHANG&LYU_YANGCHENG","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240914075300-Caizzz-20240913055900"]}}-->
@Caizzz Good, topics approved Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:53, 14 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240914075300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240914075300-Caizzz-20240913055900","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Please check Thank you Hanyangdaxue (talk) 06:04, 13 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240913060400","author":"Hanyangdaxue","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Hanyangdaxue-20240913060400-Deadline_2\uff1aLYU_YANGCHENG&CAI_ZHIHANG","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240914075400-Hanyangdaxue-20240913060400"]}}-->
@Hanyangdaxue Good! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:54, 14 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240914075400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240914075400-Hanyangdaxue-20240913060400","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Please check Thank you Hyodong318 (talk) 06:14, 13 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240913061400","author":"Hyodong318","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Hyodong318-20240913061400-Deadline_2\uff1bZHANG_XIAOTONG_&_ZHUANG_MINNA","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240913072400-Hyodong318-20240913061400"]}}-->
@Hyodong318 Please double check your second link, it does not work Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:24, 13 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240913072400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240913072400-Hyodong318-20240913061400","replies":["c-Hyodong318-20240914073500-Hanyangprofessor2-20240913072400"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
It's been modified now, thank you. Hyodong318 (talk) 07:35, 14 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240914073500","author":"Hyodong318","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Hyodong318-20240914073500-Hanyangprofessor2-20240913072400","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240914075700-Hyodong318-20240914073500"]}}-->
@Hyodong318 Ok - topics approved! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:57, 14 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240914075700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240914075700-Hyodong318-20240914073500","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I am taking Media Trends and Globalization from a professor.
1.I have complete the Wikipedia:Training Here is my link, please check it out Thanks!
2.I have completed the wiki dashboard for registering to teach the course. Here is my link ,please check it out Thanks! Ydaeun0306 (talk) 06:15, 13 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240913061500","author":"Ydaeun0306","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Ydaeun0306-20240913061500-Deadline_1_\uff1aYoonDaeun","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240914080200-Ydaeun0306-20240913061500"],"displayName":"link"}}-->
@Ydaeun0306 Good job! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:02, 14 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240914080200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240914080200-Ydaeun0306-20240913061500","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Professor, I've completed my Wikipedia training. Please check. Bai0926 (talk) 11:20, 13 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240913112000","author":"Bai0926","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Bai0926-20240913112000-Deadline1\uff1aBAILINHAN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240914080200-Bai0926-20240913112000"]}}-->
@Bai0926 Well done! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:02, 14 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240914080200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240914080200-Bai0926-20240913112000","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello professor, I have taken the course Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis this semester.
1. This is the training I completed. 2. This is the dashboard registration I completed.
Please review, thank you very much! Jzhdylb (talk) 12:42, 13 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240913124200","author":"Jzhdylb","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Jzhdylb-20240913124200-Deadline1\uff1aFAN_XINRU","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240914080300-Jzhdylb-20240913124200"]}}-->
@Jzhdylb Well done! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:03, 14 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240914080300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240914080300-Jzhdylb-20240913124200","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I am taking Media Trends and Globalization from a professor.
1.I have complete the Wikipedia:Training Here is my [https://imgur.com/a/PU5cMWR]https://imgur.com/a/PU5cMWR, please check it out Thanks!
2.I have completed the wiki dashboard for registering to teach the course. Here is my https://imgur.com/a/xcot6Vk, please check it out Thanks! Xjx921 (talk) 13:47, 13 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240913134700","author":"Xjx921","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Xjx921-20240913134700-Deadline1:XI_JIAXIN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240914080300-Xjx921-20240913134700"]}}-->
@Xjx921 Well done! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:03, 14 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240914080300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240914080300-Xjx921-20240913134700","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
@YZY2233 Good choices - approved! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:04, 14 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240914080400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240914080400-YZY2233-20240914032800","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I'm taking your "Understanding Small and Big Data through Wiki" class.
This week I made 10 edits to two Wikipedia pages, 1 and 2.
please check thank you YZY2233 (talk) 03:52, 14 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240914035200","author":"YZY2233","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-YZY2233-20240914035200-Deadine2:_YUE_ZIYI(week2)","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240914080500-YZY2233-20240914035200"]}}-->
@YZY2233 Good! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:05, 14 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240914080500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240914080500-YZY2233-20240914035200","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I am taking two courses, “Media Trends and Globalization“ and ”Understanding Small and Big Data through Wiki.”
1. I have completed the Wikipedia Training. Here is my link [31].
2. I have enrolled in the dashboard system for those two courses. Here is my link.
Please check it out. Thank you. Dbinni (talk) 06:46, 14 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240914064600","author":"Dbinni","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Dbinni-20240914064600-Deadline1:_Dabin_Kim","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240914080500-Dbinni-20240914064600"]}}-->
@Dbinni Well done! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:05, 14 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240914080500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240914080500-Dbinni-20240914064600","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I am taking understanding of small data and big data from a professor.
1.I have complete the Wikipedia:Training Here is my link. please check it out Thanks!
2.I have completed the wiki dashboard for registering to teach the course. Here is my link ,please check it out Thanks!Yujin0203 (talk) 03:01, 15 September 2024 (UTC)Yujin0203 (talk)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240915030100","author":"Yujin0203","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Yujin0203-20240915030100-Deadline1:Jang_Yujin","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240909080500-Yujin0203-20240915030100"]}}-->
@Yujin0203: Please review the module on leaving talk page messages. You did nit WP:SIGN your post correctly (see above - there is no date). Please try to sign your post correctly using the signature button to complete the assignment. --Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:05, 9 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240909080500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240909080500-Yujin0203-20240915030100","replies":["c-Yujin0203-20240915030900-Hanyangprofessor2-20240909080500"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hanyangprofessor2I tried it again based on your feedback. Please review it.Yujin0203 (talk) 03:09, 15 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240915030900","author":"Yujin0203","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Yujin0203-20240915030900-Hanyangprofessor2-20240909080500","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240915032400-Yujin0203-20240915030900"]}}-->
@Yujin0203 It is correct now, good job Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:24, 15 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240915032400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240915032400-Yujin0203-20240915030900","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Please check Thank you ! Honghaotian (talk) 12:14, 14 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240914121400","author":"Honghaotian","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Honghaotian-20240914121400-Deadline_2_\uff1aHONGHAOTIAN_&_LIMENGCHEN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240915032500-Honghaotian-20240914121400"]}}-->
@Honghaotian Yes, this is good. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:25, 15 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240915032500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240915032500-Honghaotian-20240914121400","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor:
I have chosen two of your courses, 《Media Trends and Globalization》 and 《Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis》. Here is the link to my dashboard.
and I have completed the training.Please checkHYH031277777 (talk) 13:53, 14 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240914135300","author":"HYH031277777","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-HYH031277777-20240914135300-Deadline_1:_Huang_Yanhan","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240915032600-HYH031277777-20240914135300"]}}-->
@HYH031277777 Good job! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:26, 15 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240915032600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240915032600-HYH031277777-20240914135300","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I have introduced my homepage for you to check out! Thank you!
I have selected the Wikipedia article translated from Chinese to English - 何德来, and I have also selected the article (Wang Baiyuan)translated last semester to expand it.Please check it out! Thank you!
I have added my translation project to the dashboard. Here is my link, please check it out. Thank you! Yangpeifu (talk) 08:42, 12 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240912084200","author":"Yangpeifu","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Yangpeifu-20240912084200-Deadline_2\uff1aYANG_PEIFU_\uff08Week2\uff09","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240914072400-Yangpeifu-20240912084200","c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240914072400-Yangpeifu-20240912084200-1"]}}-->
You can expand Wang Baiyuan for extra credit, yes.
Are you working solo or in a group? Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:24, 14 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240914072400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240914072400-Yangpeifu-20240912084200","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
PS. Your userpage is a good start .See here how to make it better: Wikipedia:User page design guidePiotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:24, 14 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240914072400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240914072400-Yangpeifu-20240912084200-1","replies":["c-Yangpeifu-20240915041000-Hanyangprofessor2-20240914072400"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor,
I completed this article alone.
OK, I will watch Wikipedia:User page design guide carefully and improve my userpage . Yangpeifu (talk) 04:10, 15 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240915041000","author":"Yangpeifu","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Yangpeifu-20240915041000-Hanyangprofessor2-20240914072400","replies":[]}}-->
Hello, Professor. I am taking the course "Media Trends and Globalization". This is the article I selected translated from Chinese into English: 北京电子科技大学
. Please check it, thank you. WSH0927 (talk) 08:36, 15 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240915083600","author":"WSH0927","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-WSH0927-20240915083600-Deadline_2:WU_SHUHAN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240918045500-WSH0927-20240915083600"]}}-->
@WSH0927 Good choice, but the Chinese article is pretty short - you will need to expand your translation (you can get extra credit for expanding the Chinese original article, too). You are working by yourself (not in a group), right? Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:55, 18 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240918045500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240918045500-WSH0927-20240915083600","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Thanks~ Leeinm (talk) 00:37, 19 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240919003700","author":"Leeinm","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Leeinm-20240919003700-Deadline_2(Week_2-3)-LI_LINLIN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240919032100-Leeinm-20240919003700"]}}-->
@Leeinm Ok - topic approved! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:21, 19 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240919032100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240919032100-Leeinm-20240919003700","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I have selected this article2014年台湾劣质油品事件 (English title: 2014 Taiwanese Adulterated Oil Scandal)to translate from Chinese to English.
I will translate this article 毒豆干事件 (English title:Taiwanese Tofu Dried Bean Curd Scandal)as my bonus wiki task to get extra points.
Please check it out! Thank you! Donghem (talk) 01:04, 19 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240919010400","author":"Donghem","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Donghem-20240919010400-Deadline_2_:XUE_DONGXIN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240919032300-Donghem-20240919010400"]}}-->
@Donghem Excellent choices, both are approved Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:23, 19 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240919032300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240919032300-Donghem-20240919010400","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Limengchen2777 (talk) 01:56, 19 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240919015600","author":"Limengchen2777","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Limengchen2777-20240919015600-Deadline_2_:LIMENGCHEN_&_HONGHAOTIAN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240919032400-Limengchen2777-20240919015600"]}}-->
@Limengchen2777 Good, as I told your groupmate, the topics are approved Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:24, 19 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240919032400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240919032400-Limengchen2777-20240919015600","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
@Parksungeun Yes, this is a good choice, topic approved! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:07, 20 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240920030700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240920030700-Parksungeun-20240919063000","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Thank you! SoeunK (talk) 13:56, 19 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240919135600","author":"SoeunK","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-SoeunK-20240919135600-Deadline_2:_Soeun_Kwon","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240920031000-SoeunK-20240919135600"]}}-->
@SoeunK Good, topics are approved and recorded in our spreadsheet Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:10, 20 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240920031000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240920031000-SoeunK-20240919135600","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor:
I am taking two courses, "Media Trends and Globalization" and "Understanding Small and Big Data through Wiki".
1. I have completed the training on Wikipedia. Here is my link https://imgur.com/a/x7QIuO4
2. I have registered for Dashboard Systems for both courses. Here is my link https://imgur.com/a/JEJvQz3
Please check it out, thank you!Minazhuang777 (talk) 04:20, 10 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240910042000","author":"Minazhuang777","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Minazhuang777-20240910042000-Deadline1:_ZHUANGMINNA","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240914044800-Minazhuang777-20240910042000"]}}-->
@Minazhuang777 Good but you made one mistake: you incorrectly placed your message at the top of my talk page (it should be at the bottom). Please read the guide on how to leave messages again and try once more. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:48, 14 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240914044800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240914044800-Minazhuang777-20240910042000","replies":["c-Minazhuang777-20240920061500-Hanyangprofessor2-20240914044800"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Professor,I've completed the modification,please check it out, thank you! Minazhuang777 (talk) 06:15, 20 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240920061500","author":"Minazhuang777","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Minazhuang777-20240920061500-Hanyangprofessor2-20240914044800","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240920084800-Minazhuang777-20240920061500"]}}-->
Good! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:48, 20 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240920084800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240920084800-Minazhuang777-20240920061500","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor:
I am taking two courses, "Media Trends and Globalization" and "Understanding Small and Big Data through Wiki".
1. I have completed the training on Wikipedia. Here is my link https://imgur.com/a/x7QIuO4
2. I have registered for Dashboard Systems for both courses. Here is my link https://imgur.com/a/JEJvQz3
Please check it out, thank you!Minazhuang777 (talk) 04:20, 20 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240920042000","author":"Minazhuang777","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Minazhuang777-20240920042000-Deadline1:_ZHUANGMINNA_2","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240920084800-Minazhuang777-20240920042000"]}}-->
@Minazhuang777 This is correct now, good job Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:48, 20 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240920084800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240920084800-Minazhuang777-20240920042000","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear professor, these are the two articles I re-selected. This one is translated from Chinese to English, and this one is translated from English to Chinese. Please check them. Thank you. CHEN HEBING (talk) 11:28, 15 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240915112800","author":"CHEN HEBING","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-CHEN_HEBING-20240915112800-Deadline_2_:_CHEN_HEBING","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240918045800-CHEN_HEBING-20240915112800"]}}-->
@CHEN HEBING So you are working by yourself (not in a group_ and want to translate two articles from English to Chinese? If so, translation of Bronisław Malinowski and Abortion in Japan from English to Chinese is approved. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:58, 18 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240918045800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240918045800-CHEN_HEBING-20240915112800","replies":["c-CHEN_HEBING-20240918235000-Hanyangprofessor2-20240918045800"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear professor, it's a group mission. This is my team member LIU JUNYU @LJY2455。 CHEN HEBING (talk) 23:50, 18 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240918235000","author":"CHEN HEBING","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-CHEN_HEBING-20240918235000-Hanyangprofessor2-20240918045800","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240919031300-CHEN_HEBING-20240918235000"]}}-->
@CHEN HEBING Since you are a group, you need to find a topic to translate from Chinese to English, not English to Chinese. You already have one English to Chinese project approved (Bronisław Malinowski and Abortion in Japan - you should choose one of those; you don't need to translate both unless you do so for extra credit). Each group needs to translate one article from en to zh, and one from zh to en. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:13, 19 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240919031300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240919031300-CHEN_HEBING-20240918235000","replies":["c-CHEN_HEBING-20240919085900-Hanyangprofessor2-20240919031300"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
professor, we have found an article translated from Chinese to English. The article we want to translate from English to Chinese is this one. Please check it again. Thank you. CHEN HEBING (talk) 08:59, 19 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240919085900","author":"CHEN HEBING","type":"comment","level":5,"id":"c-CHEN_HEBING-20240919085900-Hanyangprofessor2-20240919031300","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240920025900-CHEN_HEBING-20240919085900"]}}-->
@CHEN HEBING Good, 香港傳媒爭議 is approved as your other topic (Chinese to English).
Please let me know if you intend to translate from English to Chinese Bronisław Malinowski, Abortion in Japan or both (for extra credit). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:59, 20 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240920025900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":6,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240920025900-CHEN_HEBING-20240919085900","replies":["c-CHEN_HEBING-20240920050200-Hanyangprofessor2-20240920025900"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Yes, we want to choose the article about abortion in Japan as the article to be translated from English to Chinese. CHEN HEBING (talk) 05:02, 20 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240920050200","author":"CHEN HEBING","type":"comment","level":7,"id":"c-CHEN_HEBING-20240920050200-Hanyangprofessor2-20240920025900","replies":["c-CHEN_HEBING-20240920052700-CHEN_HEBING-20240920050200"]}}-->
Professor, the two articles we selected are for the course "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis". CHEN HEBING (talk) 05:27, 20 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240920052700","author":"CHEN HEBING","type":"comment","level":8,"id":"c-CHEN_HEBING-20240920052700-CHEN_HEBING-20240920050200","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240920085000-CHEN_HEBING-20240920052700"]}}-->
@CHEN HEBING Ok, topics approved Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:50, 20 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240920085000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":9,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240920085000-CHEN_HEBING-20240920052700","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
This is the English-Chinese article Censorship by copyright that I selected in "Media Trends and Globalization"
This is the Chinese-English article "LifeAfter (Game)" that I selected in "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis"
Please check it, Professor Mcx8202229 🇨🇳❤️ (talk)05:32, 18 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240918053200","author":"Mcx8202229","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Mcx8202229-20240918053200-Deadline_2_:Ma_Chenxiao","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240919031900-Mcx8202229-20240918053200"]}}-->
@Mcx8202229 Those are good topics for "Media Trends and Globalization" (you can even get some extra points for them). But for Big and Small data you need to choose to expand a location article on Wikivoyage, not an article on Wikipedia.
I can approve the two articles above for your Globalization project. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:19, 19 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240919031900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240919031900-Mcx8202229-20240918053200","replies":["c-Mcx8202229-20240919044900-Hanyangprofessor2-20240919031900"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
OK, professor, I would like to choose to supplement the article Heze (heze) in the course "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis"
And can I choose the Chinese-English translation of "LifeAfter (Game)" in the course "Media Trends and Globalization"? Mcx8202229 🇨🇳❤️ (talk)04:49, 19 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240919044900","author":"Mcx8202229","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Mcx8202229-20240919044900-Hanyangprofessor2-20240919031900","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240920030400-Mcx8202229-20240919044900","c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240920030700-Mcx8202229-20240919044900"]}}-->
@Mcx8202229 The LifeAfter topic is good for Media... class.
But English Heze was already expanded by some of your friends last years (in 2023) so you should choose a different town. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:04, 20 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240920030400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240920030400-Mcx8202229-20240919044900","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Okay, Professor. Then I choose to complete the article on Sanmenxia with my team member HUANG YANHAN. Mcx8202229 🇨🇳❤️ (talk)06:59, 20 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240920065900","author":"Mcx8202229","type":"comment","level":5,"id":"c-Mcx8202229-20240920065900-Hanyangprofessor2-20240920030700","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240920085000-Mcx8202229-20240920065900"]}}-->
@Mcx8202229 Ok - topic approved! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:50, 20 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240920085000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":6,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240920085000-Mcx8202229-20240920065900","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor:
I am taking Media Trends and Globalization from a professor.
1.I have complete the Wikipedia:Training Here is my link, please check it out Thanks!
2.I have completed the wiki dashboard for registering to teach the course. Here is my link ,please check it out Thanks! Buryab0ne (talk) 04:05, 20 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240920040500","author":"Buryab0ne","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Buryab0ne-20240920040500-Deadline_1:QIAN_ZIYI","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240920085100-Buryab0ne-20240920040500"]}}-->
@Buryab0ne Good Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:51, 20 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240920085100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240920085100-Buryab0ne-20240920040500","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Thank you for your checking. --SongHyeonmin2020007129 (talk) 04:16, 20 September 2024 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by SongHyeonmin2020007129 (talk • contribs) 04:13, 20 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240920041600","author":"SongHyeonmin2020007129","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-SongHyeonmin2020007129-20240920041600-Deadline_2_:_Hyeonmin_Song","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240920085200-SongHyeonmin2020007129-20240920041600"]}}-->
@SongHyeonmin2020007129 Good, the topics are recorded Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:52, 20 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240920085200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240920085200-SongHyeonmin2020007129-20240920041600","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear professor: I am learning two courses from professors on media trends and globalization and understanding of small data and big data. 1.I have complete the Wikipedia:Training Here is my link (https://imgur.com/a/cmQoDDO)please check it out Thanks!
2.I have completed the wiki dashboard for the two registered professor courses. Here is my link please check it out Thanks! -- Aaiiuuu(talk) 04:34, 9 September 2024 (UTC) Aaiiuuu (talk) 05:00, 20 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240920050000","author":"Aaiiuuu","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Aaiiuuu-20240920050000-Deadline_1\uff1aFAN_JINGYU","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240920085200-Aaiiuuu-20240920050000"]}}-->
@Aaiiuuu Good Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:52, 20 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240920085200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240920085200-Aaiiuuu-20240920050000","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
This is the link to the article translated from Chinese to English:LifeAfter (Game)
This is the article I chose for the second class.yuzhouI chose to complete it alone in the second class.
Please check Thank you ! Hanyuanyuan613 (talk) 05:06, 20 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240920050600","author":"Hanyuanyuan613","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Hanyuanyuan613-20240920050600-Deadline_2_:HAN_YUANYUAN&MA_CHENXIAO","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240920085400-Hanyuanyuan613-20240920050600"]}}-->
@Hanyuanyuan613 Ok, topics recorded Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:54, 20 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240920085400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240920085400-Hanyuanyuan613-20240920050600","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
1. This is the link to the article translated from English to Chinese: Unemployment in South Korea Unemployment in South Korea
2. This is the link to the article translated from English to Chinese: Sociology of education Sociology of education
Thank you! Syouziiye (talk) 05:07, 20 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240920050700","author":"Syouziiye","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Syouziiye-20240920050700-Deadline_2:SHU_YING","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240920085400-Syouziiye-20240920050700"]}}-->
@Syouziiye Good, topics recorded Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:54, 20 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240920085400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240920085400-Syouziiye-20240920050700","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello professor, I want to create this, is it possible?
And I don't know how to join the blog, can you send me an invitation link? Bai0926 (talk) 05:39, 20 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240920053900","author":"Bai0926","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Bai0926-20240920053900-Deadline2\uff1aBAILINHAN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240920085900-Bai0926-20240920053900"]}}-->
@Bai0926 I have approved your modified topic (family in South Korea) today in the office. I will be sending blog invitations shortly. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:59, 20 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240920085900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240920085900-Bai0926-20240920053900","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240920090100-Hanyangprofessor2-20240920085900"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
@Bai0926 I could not invite you to our blog because the email you provided on our spreadsheet is broken. Please correct it on Monday or send me an email and I'll reinvite you Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here09:01, 20 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240920090100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240920090100-Hanyangprofessor2-20240920085900","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
This is the link to the article translated from Chinese to English:蒋中正日记 - 维基百科,自由的百科全书 https://zh.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E8%94%A3%E4%B8%AD%E6%AD%A3%E6%97%A5%E8%A8%98
Please check Thank you ! Zzzxxxrrr (talk) 07:06, 20 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240920070600","author":"Zzzxxxrrr","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Zzzxxxrrr-20240920070600-Deadline2\uff1aZHANG_XIAORUI","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240920090300-Zzzxxxrrr-20240920070600"]}}-->
@Zzzxxxrrr Good, as discussed in my office, topic approved Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here09:03, 20 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240920090300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240920090300-Zzzxxxrrr-20240920070600","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Please check Thank you ! Xjx921 (talk) 07:07, 20 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240920070700","author":"Xjx921","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Xjx921-20240920070700-Deadline2:XI_JIAXIN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240920090300-Xjx921-20240920070700"]}}-->
@Xjx921 Good, as discussed in my office, topic approved Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here09:03, 20 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240920090300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240920090300-Xjx921-20240920070700","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor I have selected this article (* Film censorship Korean is needed/Chinese needs expansion zh:电影审查制度)to translate from Chinese to English.
My group members and I chose this topic and translated it from English to Chinese. [Tattooing in China Korean is needed/Chinese still needed]
Please check it out! Thank you! 12:00, 20 September 2024 (UTC)[reply] Aaiiuuu(talk) 05:12, 20 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240920051200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240920051200-Deadline_2_:_\u767d\u8bd7\u68cb_&_Aaiiuuu","replies":[]}}-->
[subscribe] Aaiiuuu (talk) 06:06, 20 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240920060600","author":"Aaiiuuu","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Aaiiuuu-20240920060600-Deadline_2_:_\u767d\u8bd7\u68cb_&_Aaiiuuu","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240920090100-Aaiiuuu-20240920060600"]}}-->
@Aaiiuuu Please see my reply to your teammate above (#Deadline 2 : 白诗棋 & Aaiiuuu) regarding your topics Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here09:01, 20 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240920090100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240920090100-Aaiiuuu-20240920060600","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
This is the Chinese-English article Feng Shui master that I selected in "Media Trends and Globalization".I will be working on this topic alone.
And I have chosen the Sanmenxia as my topic for the "Understanding Small and Big Data through Wiki" course, and my teammate is Ma Chenxiao@Mcx8202229.
Please check it out Thanks! HYH031277777 (talk) 07:42, 20 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240920074200","author":"HYH031277777","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-HYH031277777-20240920074200-Deadline_2:HUANG_YANHAN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240920090500-HYH031277777-20240920074200"]}}-->
@HYH031277777 The topic is fine to translate, but it is very short and poorly referenced. You will need to improve the article (make it much longer) or select one more (or a different) topic to translate.
Topic for data class is approved. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here09:05, 20 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240920090500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240920090500-HYH031277777-20240920074200","replies":["c-HYH031277777-20240920093000-Hanyangprofessor2-20240920090500"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Thank you for your feedback. I have selected a new topic: The History of Chinese Lineage Clans (中国宗族史). Please let me know if this topic is suitable. HYH031277777 (talk) 09:30, 20 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240920093000","author":"HYH031277777","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-HYH031277777-20240920093000-Hanyangprofessor2-20240920090500","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240921024400-HYH031277777-20240920093000"]}}-->
@HYH031277777 That is longer, and has better references, so I approve your switch. You can still translate the other topic (Feng Shui master) for practice and extra credit. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:44, 21 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240921024400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240921024400-HYH031277777-20240920093000","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Dear Professor:
I am taking "Understanding Small Data and Big Data" from the professor.
I want to choose Nonsan - Travel guide at Wikivoyage to expand for main project individually. Is it possible?JHyunlee (talk) 10:56, 20 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240920105600","author":"JHyunlee","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-JHyunlee-20240920105600-Deadline_2:_Lee_Jae-Hyun","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240921024500-JHyunlee-20240920105600"]}}-->
@JHyunlee Good, that topic has been already approved and recorded for you. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:45, 21 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240921024500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240921024500-JHyunlee-20240920105600","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
It seems that I do not have enough permissions to change the English version of Dianbai First Tan. I re-chose electric white as my Chinese translation into English.Here's the link to my choice:Dianbai, MaomingIn addition, I also completed my English translation into Chinese, but I don't know why someone revoked my changes.https://zh.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=%E9%A9%AC%E8%92%82%E5%8E%84%C2%B7%E5%9F%83%E5%B0%94%E5%8D%9A&action=historyRiansLu (talk) 11:06, 20 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240920110600","author":"RiansLu","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-RiansLu-20240920110600-wushengyu","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240921025200-RiansLu-20240920110600"]}}-->
@RiansLu I am not sure what you mean regarding Dianbai First Tan - there is no such article. Your selected topic for English translation is zh:中国第一滩 (China's First Beach). Dianbai, Maoming seems like a short article, but you can expand it for practice and extra credit.
Regarding your edit at Chinese Wikipedia here, you can see from the history that it was reverted by Chinese Wikipedian @Shawwww . They did not provide a rationale for their edit - you can ask them on their talk page. Perhaps they did so because most of the content you added was unreferenced. You had a single footnote to hltv.org, but it was in the wrong place. A footnote should be added after the sentence it is referencing, not at the bottom of an article. Please remember that our class policies as well as Chinese Wikipedia rules require that you only add referenced content. See zh:维基百科:可供查證Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:52, 21 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240921025200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240921025200-RiansLu-20240920110600","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor, in the course "Media Trends and Globalization", I chose to translate (Unemployment in China) from Chinese to English. And I chose to translate (Global North and Global South) from English to Chinese as a bonus to get extra points.
In the second course "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wiki", I chose Dazu as an extension assignment for the Wikipedia Tour Guide. Wuwenhao19960507 (talk) 13:55, 20 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240920135500","author":"Wuwenhao19960507","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Wuwenhao19960507-20240920135500-Deadline_2_:WU_WENHAO","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240921025300-Wuwenhao19960507-20240920135500"]}}-->
@Wuwenhao19960507 Good, that topic has been already approved and recorded for you Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:53, 21 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240921025300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240921025300-Wuwenhao19960507-20240920135500","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I am taking Media Trends and Globalization & understanding of small data and big data from a professor.
1.I have complete the Wikipedia:Training Here is my link , please check it out Thanks!
2.I have completed the wiki dashboard for registering to teach the course. Here is my link ,please check it out Thanks! Kim jong min (hanyang) (talk) 07:58, 6 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240906075800","author":"Kim jong min (hanyang)","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Kim_jong_min_(hanyang)-20240906075800-Deadline_1_:Kim_Jong-Min","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240909080600-Kim_jong_min_(hanyang)-20240906075800"]}}-->
@Kim jong min (hanyang) Good job! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:06, 9 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240909080600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240909080600-Kim_jong_min_(hanyang)-20240906075800","replies":["c-Kim_jong_min_(hanyang)-20240921080400-Hanyangprofessor2-20240909080600"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello Professor, I am sorry to report to you over the weekend. Group 13 of the globalization class includes students Jong-min Kim and Tae-ho Kang, and the translation assignment topics were confirmed as English-Korean translation: Brantford and Korean-English: Jeong-hyo Lee.
We received feedback from the professor that there were not enough references on the 'Lee Jeong-hyo (KO)' page, but we decided to add references to Lee Jeong-hyo ourselves. :) Thank U for ur feedback!
And after the professor gave good feedback, we decided to develop the Wikivoyage (ENG): Pocheon, Gyeonggi-do page as an assignment topic for the data class of Kim Jong-min and Kang Tae-ho (Team 4).
I would like to inform you about this. If you need any feedback on our decisions, I'd really appreciate it if you could let me know. Have a nice weekend :) Kim jong min (hanyang) (talk) 08:04, 21 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240921080400","author":"Kim jong min (hanyang)","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Kim_jong_min_(hanyang)-20240921080400-Hanyangprofessor2-20240909080600","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240922040800-Kim_jong_min_(hanyang)-20240921080400"]}}-->
@Kim jong min (hanyang) Very good, your choices are recorded and approved. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:08, 22 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240922040800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240922040800-Kim_jong_min_(hanyang)-20240921080400","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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We have selected Fuding, China for expansion in Wikivoyage.
please check, thank you YZY2233 (talk) 06:02, 21 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240921060200","author":"YZY2233","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-YZY2233-20240921060200-Deadline2:_YUE_ZIYI_&_SHU_YING","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240922040900-YZY2233-20240921060200"]}}-->
@YZY2233 Good, your choice is recorded and approved. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:09, 22 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240922040900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240922040900-YZY2233-20240921060200","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Dear Professor:
I am taking Media Trends and Globalization from a professor.
I have complete the Wikipedia:Training Here is my link, I also completed the Chinese at Wikipedia: Online Training/Student Edition for extra credit. This is my link https://imgur.com/a/gQ5XiN5 please check it out Thanks!And this is my wiki dashboard link https://imgur.com/a/4hNDR87 Please check it out,Thanks! Linlin406 (talk) 13:00, 21 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240921130000","author":"Linlin406","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Linlin406-20240921130000-Deadline1_LIN_AIJIA","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240922041300-Linlin406-20240921130000"]}}-->
@Linlin406 Ok! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:13, 22 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240922041300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240922041300-Linlin406-20240921130000","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
please check, thank you 1eleven0086 (talk) 14:17, 21 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240921141700","author":"1eleven0086","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-1eleven0086-20240921141700-Deadline2_LIUYUNXIANG_&_SHAOJIANUAN_&_WANGYIKE","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240922041800-1eleven0086-20240921141700"]}}-->
@1eleven0086 While the groups should be made of two people, I will give you permission to work as a team of 3 if you work on those two articles. Topics approved Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:18, 22 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240922041800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240922041800-1eleven0086-20240921141700","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Cuicuizan (talk) 07:22, 20 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240920072200","author":"Cuicuizan","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Cuicuizan-20240920072200-Deadline_2:CUI_ZAN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240920090300-Cuicuizan-20240920072200"]}}-->
@Cuicuizan Good, as discussed in my office, topic approved Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here09:03, 20 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240920090300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240920090300-Cuicuizan-20240920072200","replies":["c-Cuicuizan-20240922151900-Hanyangprofessor2-20240920090300"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Also, I chose the city of Zibo, China, as the location for the extension of the wikivoyage, please check it out, thanks! Cuicuizan (talk) 15:19, 22 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240922151900","author":"Cuicuizan","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Cuicuizan-20240922151900-Hanyangprofessor2-20240920090300","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240923091700-Cuicuizan-20240922151900"]}}-->
@Cuicuizan Ok! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here09:17, 23 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240923091700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240923091700-Cuicuizan-20240922151900","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Perhaps you can find a less developed location to improve? Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:12, 22 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240922041200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240922041200-Laoxinyi-20240921072600","replies":["c-Laoxinyi-20240923071300-Hanyangprofessor2-20240922041200"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
@Hanyangprofessor2 how about Luzhou? There are no topics in the English Wikivoyage guide about Luzhou. Here is the link:https://zh.wikivoyage.org/wiki/%E6%B3%B8%E5%B7%9ELaoxinyi (talk) 07:13, 23 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240923071300","author":"Laoxinyi","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Laoxinyi-20240923071300-Hanyangprofessor2-20240922041200","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240923091900-Laoxinyi-20240923071300"]}}-->
@Laoxinyi This is good, topic approved. --Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here09:19, 23 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240923091900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240923091900-Laoxinyi-20240923071300","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I am taking two courses, "Media Trends and Globalization" and "Understanding Small and Big Data through Wiki".
I will select two English Wikipedia articles and translate two of them to Korean as I told you before on Email.
World-systems theoryTrade route
As for Understanding Small Data and Big Data, I would like to choose Wikivoyage ‘Seoul North’ to expand for main project.
Please check it out. Thanks!
Parkejeongeun0430 (talk) 16:50, 22 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240922165000","author":"Parkjeongeun0430","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Parkjeongeun0430-20240922165000-Deadline_2:_Jeongeun_Park","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240923092000-Parkjeongeun0430-20240922165000"],"displayName":"Parkejeongeun0430"}}-->
@Parkjeongeun0430 Ok, approved. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here09:20, 23 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240923092000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240923092000-Parkjeongeun0430-20240922165000","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
2. I will choose Siheung for "Understanding Small and Big Data through Wiki".
please check, Thanks PMH-121 (talk) 08:40, 22 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240922084000","author":"PMH-121","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-PMH-121-20240922084000-Deadline_2:_MyeongHyeon_Park","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240923092400-PMH-121-20240922084000"]}}-->
@PMH-121 Ok - topics approved. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here09:24, 23 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240923092400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240923092400-PMH-121-20240922084000","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I am taking "Understanding Small Data and Big Data" from the professor.
I want to choose Hongseong at Wikivoyage for main project individually.
Please check, Thanks. Yujin0203 (talk) 08:57, 22 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240922085700","author":"Yujin0203","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Yujin0203-20240922085700-Deadline_2:_Yujin_Jang","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240923092400-Yujin0203-20240922085700"]}}-->
@Yujin0203 Ok - topic approved. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here09:24, 23 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240923092400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240923092400-Yujin0203-20240922085700","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I am takin taking "Media Trends and Globalization"
I've done one extra edit outside of the sandbox, and I've added a reference to an article about "Zongzi." Please check. Thank you. Hhhlx (talk) 15:31, 22 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240922153100","author":"Hhhlx","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Hhhlx-20240922153100-Deadline3:_HUANG_LINGXUAN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240923101400-Hhhlx-20240922153100"]}}-->
@Hhhlx Good job Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here10:14, 23 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240923101400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240923101400-Hhhlx-20240922153100","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I am taking two courses "Media Trends and Globalization" and "Understanding Small and Big Data through Wiki" with @liuziye.
1. We have chosen this article 【Freedom Of Speech】 to expand and translate from English to Chinese. And we also chose this topic 【Giant Wild Goose Pagoda】 to translate it from Chinese to English.
2. Also, we chose Yanbian to complete its expansion on Wikivoyage .
Please check it out! Thank you! Uuueol (talk) 15:44, 22 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240922154400","author":"Uuueol","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Uuueol-20240922154400-Deadline2:_GUANYUE_&_LIUZIYE","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240923101500-Uuueol-20240922154400"]}}-->
@Uuueol Good, topics approved and recorded Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here10:15, 23 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240923101500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240923101500-Uuueol-20240922154400","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Hello Professor, I would like to expand the article on Environmental Justice or choose one of the articles on Globalization of Transport, Globalization of Communication, or Global Environmental Institutions to create an English article. Please help me review the available topics. Thank you very much. Jzhdylb (talk) 03:36, 23 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240923033600","author":"Jzhdylb","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Jzhdylb-20240923033600-Selection_of_Task_Articles--FAN_XINRU","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240923101600-Jzhdylb-20240923033600"]}}-->
@Jzhdylb As discussed, those topics may be too challenging. Please stop by my office hours for some ideas to consider instead. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here10:16, 23 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240923101600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240923101600-Jzhdylb-20240923033600","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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2. This is the link to the article translated from English to Korean: Criticism of capitalism (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Criticism_of_capitalism)
Kkm.hanyang22 (talk) 04:11, 23 September 2024 (UTC)
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@Kkm.hanyang22 Ok, topics approved and recorded Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here10:16, 23 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240923101600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240923101600-Kkm.hanyang22-20240923041100","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear professor:I am learning one course from professors on media trends and globalization.
Here is my link.And i have completed the wiki for registering to teach the course.Here is my link. ZAIWEI0328 (talk) 04:18, 23 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240923041800","author":"ZAIWEI0328","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-ZAIWEI0328-20240923041800-Deadline1\uff1aZAIWEI","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240923101700-ZAIWEI0328-20240923041800"]}}-->
@ZAIWEI0328 Good, now please try to catch up with other deadlines Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here10:17, 23 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240923101700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240923101700-ZAIWEI0328-20240923041800","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Dear Professor:
We are taking "Media Trends and Globalization" with @Kang Taeho
Thank you! Kim jong min (hanyang) (talk) 04:25, 23 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240923042500","author":"Kim jong min (hanyang)","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Kim_jong_min_(hanyang)-20240923042500-Deadline2_:_Kim_jong_min_,_Kang_tae_ho","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240923101700-Kim_jong_min_(hanyang)-20240923042500"]}}-->
@Kim jong min (hanyang) Good, topics approved and recorded Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here10:17, 23 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240923101700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240923101700-Kim_jong_min_(hanyang)-20240923042500","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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I am takin taking "Media Trends and Globalization"
I've done one extra edit outside of the sandbox, and I've added a reference to an article about LEE_JUNG_HYO Please check. Thank you Kang Taeho (talk) 04:41, 23 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240923044100","author":"Kang Taeho","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Kang_Taeho-20240923044100-Deadline3:_Kang_Taeho","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240923101800-Kang_Taeho-20240923044100"]}}-->
@Kang Taeho Well done Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here10:18, 23 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240923101800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240923101800-Kang_Taeho-20240923044100","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Dear Professor
I am taking "Media Trends and Globalization"
This is the link to the article translated from English to Korean:
@Xisuux Good, topics approved and recorded Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here10:18, 23 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240923101800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240923101800-Xisuux-20240923054400","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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I'm taking "Media Trends and Globalization" and "Small and Big Data"
I've done one extra edit outside of the sandbox, and I've added a reference to an article about Lee_Jung-hyo.
Please check. Thank you. Kim jong min (hanyang) (talk) 04:45, 23 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240923044500","author":"Kim jong min (hanyang)","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Kim_jong_min_(hanyang)-20240923044500-Deadline3:_Kim_jong_min","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240923101900-Kim_jong_min_(hanyang)-20240923044500"]}}-->
@Kim jong min (hanyang) Well done! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here10:19, 23 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240923101900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240923101900-Kim_jong_min_(hanyang)-20240923044500","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I am taking "Media Trends and Globalization" This is the link to the article translated from Chinese to English: https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E8%89%AF%E6%B8%9A%E9%81%97%E5%9D%80 Please check Thank you! Buryab0ne (talk) 04:50, 23 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240923045000","author":"Buryab0ne","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Buryab0ne-20240923045000-Deadline2\uff1aQIAN_ZIYI","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240923102000-Buryab0ne-20240923045000"]}}-->
@Buryab0ne Good topic. Approved. Just remember that only referenced content can be added to English Wikipedia and only such content will count for credit. The content from Chinese article that has no references needs to be referenced first before being translated. See Wikipedia:VerifiabilityPiotrus at Hanyang| reply here10:20, 23 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240923102000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240923102000-Buryab0ne-20240923045000","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I am taking Media Trends and Globalization from a professor.
1.I have complete the Wikipedia:Training Here is my link, please check it out Thanks!
2.I have completed the wiki dashboard for registering to teach the course. Here is my link ,please check it out Thanks! Jaeyun01 (talk) 04:51, 23 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240923045100","author":"Jaeyun01","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Jaeyun01-20240923045100-Deadline_1_:Jung_Jaeyun","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240923102100-Jaeyun01-20240923045100"]}}-->
@Jaeyun01 Good, now please try to catch up with other deadlines Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here10:21, 23 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240923102100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240923102100-Jaeyun01-20240923045100","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I have completed deadline 3 of "Media Trends and Globalization". I've done the citation work in this article.
Thank you for your checking.--SongHyeonmin2020007129 (talk) 05:00, 23 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240923050000","author":"SongHyeonmin2020007129","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-SongHyeonmin2020007129-20240923050000-Deadline_3_:_Hyeonmin_Song","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240923102100-SongHyeonmin2020007129-20240923050000"]}}-->
@SongHyeonmin2020007129 Good Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here10:21, 23 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240923102100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240923102100-SongHyeonmin2020007129-20240923050000","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Dear Professor
I am taking Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis.
I want to choose Dangjin for my wiki project.
It is already made by me in september 23rd class.
Also, I want to be a group with Jeong Aram
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@Jo HyeonSeong Ok, confirmed as approved Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here10:22, 23 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240923102200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240923102200-Jo_HyeonSeong-20240923065000","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Dear Professor :
We are taking the course "Media Trends and Globalization" .
We want to pick Minorities in South Korea for English to Korea and '유동열 (류동열)' for Korean to English. Jo HyeonSeong (talk) 07:40, 23 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240923074000","author":"Jo HyeonSeong","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Jo_HyeonSeong-20240923074000-Deadline_2_:_Jo_Hyeon_Seong_and_Jeong_Aram","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240923102300-Jo_HyeonSeong-20240923074000"]}}-->
@Jo HyeonSeong Ok, approved Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here10:23, 23 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240923102300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240923102300-Jo_HyeonSeong-20240923074000","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Dear Professor:
I am taking two courses, "Media Trends and Globalization" and "Understanding Small and Big Data through Wiki".
This is the location we chose. It's a Chinese city. https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/Libo_County
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@WANGRUITONG Good topics. Approved. Just remember that only referenced content can be added to English Wikipedia and only such content will count for credit. The content from Chinese article that has no references needs to be referenced first before being translated. See Wikipedia:VerifiabilityPiotrus at Hanyang| reply here10:23, 23 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240923102300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240923102300-WANGRUITONG-20240923075100","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Dear Professor:
I'm taking "Media Trends and Globalization" and "Small and Big Data"
I've done one extra edit outside of the sandbox, and I've added a reference to an article about Minorities in South Korea
Please check it. Thank you. Jo HyeonSeong (talk) 07:54, 23 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240923075400","author":"Jo HyeonSeong","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Jo_HyeonSeong-20240923075400-Deadline_3_:_Jo_Hyeon_Seong","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240923102400-Jo_HyeonSeong-20240923075400"]}}-->
@Jo HyeonSeong Good Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here10:24, 23 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240923102400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240923102400-Jo_HyeonSeong-20240923075400","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Dear Professor:
I'm taking "Media Trends and Globalization"
I've done one extra edit outside of the sandbox, and I've added a reference to an article about [32]
Thank you. Kkm.hanyang22 (talk) 08:52, 23 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240923085200","author":"Kkm.hanyang22","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Kkm.hanyang22-20240923085200-Deadline_3_:_Kim_Kyungmin","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240923102500-Kkm.hanyang22-20240923085200"]}}-->
@Kkm.hanyang22 Good, but claims in WP:LEAD do not need a citation if they have a reference in the body of the article Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here10:25, 23 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240923102500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240923102500-Kkm.hanyang22-20240923085200","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I am studying a course called “Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis”and this is a screenshot of my first week of study.
May I ask you a question about the wiki dashboard? After the first week of class, I entered my password and successfully joined the Wikidashboard. However, when I opened the confirmation again today, an error was displayed. Here is a screenshot of the page. I want to know what I can do to get it back to normal, and I would appreciate it if you could give me an answer. 유신예 (talk) 09:05, 22 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240922090500","author":"\uc720\uc2e0\uc608","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-\uc720\uc2e0\uc608-20240922090500-Deadline_1-LIU_XINRUI","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240923095400-\uc720\uc2e0\uc608-20240922090500"]}}-->
@유신예 Hopefully this is just a temporary error. If it persists, please stop by my office with your laptop and we will see how to fix it. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here09:54, 23 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240923095400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240923095400-\uc720\uc2e0\uc608-20240922090500","replies":["c-\uc720\uc2e0\uc608-20240923103900-Hanyangprofessor2-20240923095400"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor:I opened the wiki dashboard again today and it no longer shows errors and can enter normally. Thank you for your help! 유신예 (talk) 10:39, 23 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240923103900","author":"\uc720\uc2e0\uc608","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-\uc720\uc2e0\uc608-20240923103900-Hanyangprofessor2-20240923095400","replies":[]}}-->
I am talking two courses,For this class "Media Trends and Globalization" ,I translated my choice of "Anarchism in Korea” .For this course on Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis,I expanded on the theme of Hanzhong
Thank you for your checking. Tyuni06 (talk) 11:11, 25 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240925111100","author":"Tyuni06","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Tyuni06-20240925111100-Deadline_3\uff1aTANG_YINI","replies":[]}}-->
I am taking one of my professor's courses - “Media Trends and Globalization”.
1.I have complete the Wikipedia:Training Here is my link, please check it out Thanks!
2.I have completed the wiki dashboard for registering to teach the course. here is my link, please check it out thanks.
Wangtao626 (talk) 12:28, 14 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240914122800","author":"Wangtao626","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Wangtao626-20240914122800-Deadline1\uff1aWang_Tao","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240915032600-Wangtao626-20240914122800"]}}-->
@Wangtao626 Good job! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:26, 15 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240915032600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240915032600-Wangtao626-20240914122800","replies":["c-Wangtao626-20240923182600-Hanyangprofessor2-20240915032600"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
User:Wangtao626 Professor, I decorated my UI, please check it out Wangtao626 (talk) 18:26, 23 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240923182600","author":"Wangtao626","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Wangtao626-20240923182600-Hanyangprofessor2-20240915032600","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240926041100-Wangtao626-20240923182600"],"displayName":"User:Wangtao626"}}-->
@Wangtao626 Very good, extra credit will be awarded :) Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:11, 26 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240926041100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240926041100-Wangtao626-20240923182600","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Please check Thank you ! Xuan6699 (talk) 07:01, 20 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240920070100","author":"Xuan6699","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Xuan6699-20240920070100-Deadline2:_XU_YAN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240920090200-Xuan6699-20240920070100"]}}-->
@Xuan6699 The topic is approved. I assume you are working by yourself? If so, you still need to select another topic to translate from English to Chinese. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here09:02, 20 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240920090200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240920090200-Xuan6699-20240920070100","replies":["c-Xuan6699-20240922122800-Hanyangprofessor2-20240920090200"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello, professor, I want to re-select the subject.
This is the link to the article translated from Chinese to English:幸福到万家
And I chose to translate (Asian pride) from English to Chinese as a bonus to get extra points
Please check Thank you ! Xuan6699 (talk) 12:28, 22 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240922122800","author":"Xuan6699","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Xuan6699-20240922122800-Hanyangprofessor2-20240920090200","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240923091600-Xuan6699-20240922122800"]}}-->
@Xuan6699幸福到万家 has very little content. In order for this to be accepted on English Wikipedia, you will have to add a section about reception, which discusses reviews of this show in reliable sources (newspapers and such).
Translation of Asian pride to zh accepted. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here09:16, 23 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240923091600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240923091600-Xuan6699-20240922122800","replies":["c-Xuan6699-20240924072600-Hanyangprofessor2-20240923091600"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello, Professor. Can I change the article I translated from Chinese to English to The Silent Truth? Xuan6699 (talk) 07:26, 24 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240924072600","author":"Xuan6699","type":"comment","level":5,"id":"c-Xuan6699-20240924072600-Hanyangprofessor2-20240923091600","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240926041500-Xuan6699-20240924072600"]}}-->
@Xuan6699 Yes. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:15, 26 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240926041500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":6,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240926041500-Xuan6699-20240924072600","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
to expand for main project individually. Is it possible? Dbinni (talk) 14:52, 22 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240922145200","author":"Dbinni","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Dbinni-20240922145200-Deadline_2:_Dabin_Kim","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240923100200-Dbinni-20240922145200"]}}-->
@Dbinni That page is already pretty well developed. Please choose a topic that is not developed or does not exist on Wikivoyage yet. How about wikivoyage:Pyeongtaek ? Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here10:02, 23 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240923100200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240923100200-Dbinni-20240922145200","replies":["c-Dbinni-20240923102800-Hanyangprofessor2-20240923100200"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Thank you for your recommendation. Then, I’ll choose PyeongtaekDbinni (talk) 10:28, 23 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240923102800","author":"Dbinni","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Dbinni-20240923102800-Hanyangprofessor2-20240923100200","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240926043100-Dbinni-20240923102800"]}}-->
Ok! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:31, 26 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240926043100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240926043100-Dbinni-20240923102800","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I am taking the course "Media Trends and Globalization" .
I have completed deadline 3 of "Media Trends and Globalization",and I've done the citation work in this page[33]
Please check it. Thank you. Syouziiye (talk) 06:57, 23 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240923065700","author":"Syouziiye","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Syouziiye-20240923065700-Deadline_3:SHU_YING","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240923102200-Syouziiye-20240923065700"]}}-->
@Syouziiye To complete this assignment, you should add a citation to the article in public space, not to your sandbox. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here10:22, 23 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240923102200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240923102200-Syouziiye-20240923065700","replies":["c-Syouziiye-20240925143700-Hanyangprofessor2-20240923102200"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Sorry for the mistake.I have corrected the assignment of deadline3, please check. [34]Syouziiye (talk) 14:37, 25 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240925143700","author":"Syouziiye","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Syouziiye-20240925143700-Hanyangprofessor2-20240923102200","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240926043200-Syouziiye-20240925143700"]}}-->
@Syouziiye Well done. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:32, 26 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240926043200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240926043200-Syouziiye-20240925143700","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Dear Professor:
I am talking two courses, "Media Trends and Globalization" and "Understanding Small and Big Data through Wiki"with my group members @Yeomll
1. We will select this Wikipedia article to expand and translate them: [[35]]
Please check it out!Thank you !
—Kylo09 (talk) 14:00, 23 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240923140000","author":"Kylo09","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Kylo09-20240923140000-Deadline_2_:_ZHONG_QI_and_SHAO_TIANYI","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240926043800-Kylo09-20240923140000"]}}-->
Regarding the Wikivoyage assignment, remember that it needs to be completed in English, not Chinese. That means you should be expanding this: wikivoyage:Jining_(Shandong)Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:38, 26 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240926043800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240926043800-Kylo09-20240923140000","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I've done one extra edit outside of the sandbox, and I've added a reference to an article about Uzi (gamer).
Please check it. Thank you. Donghem (talk) 15:38, 23 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240923153800","author":"Donghem","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Donghem-20240923153800-Deadline_3_:XUE_DONGXIN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240926044000-Donghem-20240923153800"]}}-->
@Donghem Well done Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:40, 26 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240926044000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240926044000-Donghem-20240923153800","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear professor, I chose this article and added some references. There are some characters on Baidu but no specific references have been found. Is this okay? Is there anything else that needs to be modified?About diff, I read the tutorial, but I don't know where to find oldid.1908 in ChinaWjyy1212 (talk) 10:49, 24 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240924104900","author":"Wjyy1212","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Wjyy1212-20240924104900-Deadline_3.WEN_JIAYAO","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240926044300-Wjyy1212-20240924104900"]}}-->
You can read more at WP:DIFF or ask me for demonstration on how to get it in class or during my office hours. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:43, 26 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240926044300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240926044300-Wjyy1212-20240924104900","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I am talking two courses, For this class "Media Trends and Globalization," I selected the theme of translating "Anarchism in Korea" into Chinese.For this course on Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis, I chose to expand on the topic of "Hanzhong."
Thank you for your checking.
Tyuni06 (talk) 10:57, 25 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240925105700","author":"Tyuni06","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Tyuni06-20240925105700-Deadline2\uff1aTANG_YINI","replies":["c-Tyuni06-20240926043000-Tyuni06-20240925105700"]}}-->
Thank you for your checking。 Tyuni06 (talk) 04:30, 26 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240926043000","author":"Tyuni06","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Tyuni06-20240926043000-Tyuni06-20240925105700","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240926044400-Tyuni06-20240926043000"]}}-->
@Tyuni06 Good, topics approved Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:44, 26 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240926044400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240926044400-Tyuni06-20240926043000","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
@Xuan6699 Very good Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:44, 26 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240926044400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240926044400-Xuan6699-20240925122700","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I'm taking "Media Trends and Globalization"and "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis"
I've done one extra edit outside of the sandbox, and I've added a reference to an article about 佛得角签证
I added citations and some summaries for Cape Verdean visas. I found a summary of this visa on the website of our Ministry of Foreign Affairs and uploaded it on it.
Please check it. Thank you. Peter011008 (talk) 00:30, 26 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240926003000","author":"Peter011008","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Peter011008-20240926003000-Deadline3:LIU_ZIFU","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240926044600-Peter011008-20240926003000"]}}-->
@Peter011008 Well done Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:46, 26 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240926044600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240926044600-Peter011008-20240926003000","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I am a student named ZHANG QI. I am taking two courses, “Media Trends and Globalization“ and ”Understanding Small and Big Data through Wiki.”
1. I have completed the Wikipedia Training. Here is my link.
2. I have enrolled in the dashboard system for those two courses. Here is my link.
Please check it out. Thank you. ZHANGQI1066 (talk) 00:47, 26 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240926004700","author":"ZHANGQI1066","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-ZHANGQI1066-20240926004700-Deadline1:_ZHANG_QI","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240926044600-ZHANGQI1066-20240926004700"]}}-->
@ZHANGQI1066 Good Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:46, 26 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240926044600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240926044600-ZHANGQI1066-20240926004700","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I am ZHANG QI taking Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis class.
I want to translate this article form chinese to english 潍县战役.
And my teammate is LIU ZIFU. He has your consent offline, please add me to the second group.His translations its that.
ZHANGQI1066 (talk) 00:56, 26 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240926005600","author":"ZHANGQI1066","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-ZHANGQI1066-20240926005600-Deadline2:ZHANG_QI","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240926044800-ZHANGQI1066-20240926005600"]}}-->
@ZHANGQI1066 Very good, topics and group approved. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:48, 26 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240926044800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240926044800-ZHANGQI1066-20240926005600","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor
I have selected this article (* Film censorship Korean is needed/Chinese needs expansion zh:电影审查制度)to translate from Chinese to English.
My group members and I chose this topic and translated it from English to Chinese. [Tattooing in China Korean is needed/Chinese still needed]
Please check it out! Thank you! 12:00, 20 September 2024 (UTC)[reply] 白诗棋 (talk) 05:12, 20 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240920051200","author":"\u767d\u8bd7\u68cb","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-\u767d\u8bd7\u68cb-20240920051200-Deadline_2_:_\u767d\u8bd7\u68cb_&_Aaiiuuu_2","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240920085800-\u767d\u8bd7\u68cb-20240920051200"]}}-->
@白诗棋 First, you need to talk to me after class and sign our spreadsheet, I don't have your username recorded there so I do not who you are.
Second, the topics of translating film censorship to Chinese was already completed last semester by another group; of course there is no point in translating it the other direction. Likewise, tattoing in China was translated as well. Please stop by my office on Monday and tell me your new topics or I will help you select good articles. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:58, 20 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240920085800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240920085800-\u767d\u8bd7\u68cb-20240920051200","replies":["c-\u767d\u8bd7\u68cb-20240923042500-Hanyangprofessor2-20240920085800"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor,
I registered the name BAI SHIQI because I couldn't type Chinese , but the real username is 白诗棋. Could you change it for me,please? My group member and I chose this topic and translated it from English to Chinese. Global financial system. We have selected this article to translate have selected this article translate from Chinese to English. 社会学史白诗棋 (talk) 04:25, 23 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240923042500","author":"\u767d\u8bd7\u68cb","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-\u767d\u8bd7\u68cb-20240923042500-Hanyangprofessor2-20240920085800","replies":["c-\u767d\u8bd7\u68cb-20240923054100-\u767d\u8bd7\u68cb-20240923042500"]}}-->
We will change 纽约时报 Chinese to English. Professor, please take a look. 白诗棋 (talk) 05:41, 23 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240923054100","author":"\u767d\u8bd7\u68cb","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-\u767d\u8bd7\u68cb-20240923054100-\u767d\u8bd7\u68cb-20240923042500","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240923091300-\u767d\u8bd7\u68cb-20240923054100"]}}-->
@白诗棋 I fixed your name. Global financial system is approved, but you need to find a topic to translate from Chinese to English. The New York Times obviously has a better article in English than in Chinese - but if you are interested in media, look at the pages of Chinese newspapers. I expect many have not very good articles in English, or no articles at all. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here09:13, 23 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240923091300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":5,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240923091300-\u767d\u8bd7\u68cb-20240923054100","replies":["c-\u767d\u8bd7\u68cb-20240924014000-Hanyangprofessor2-20240923091300"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor,
If I use this article to translate it from Chinese to English, 对百度的争议is it possible? 白诗棋 (talk) 01:40, 24 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240924014000","author":"\u767d\u8bd7\u68cb","type":"comment","level":6,"id":"c-\u767d\u8bd7\u68cb-20240924014000-Hanyangprofessor2-20240923091300","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240926041300-\u767d\u8bd7\u68cb-20240924014000"]}}-->
@白诗棋 That article was chosen by another student. How about zh:Bilibili相关争议 instead? Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:13, 26 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240926041300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":7,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240926041300-\u767d\u8bd7\u68cb-20240924014000","replies":["c-\u767d\u8bd7\u68cb-20240927040800-Hanyangprofessor2-20240926041300"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
All right, professor. 白诗棋 (talk) 04:08, 27 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240927040800","author":"\u767d\u8bd7\u68cb","type":"comment","level":8,"id":"c-\u767d\u8bd7\u68cb-20240927040800-Hanyangprofessor2-20240926041300","replies":[]}}-->
Dear Professor, I am LIU YUNXIANG . I am taking of your lecture: Media Trends and Globalization.
Me and my group members @Hhhlx . Two articles have been selected for editing: this is the article translated from Chinese to English article, and this is the article translated from English to Chinese article. Please check it. Thank you! 1eleven0086 (talk) 07:17, 14 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240914071700","author":"1eleven0086","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-1eleven0086-20240914071700-Deadline_2_\uff1aLIUYUNXIANG_&_HUANGLINGXUAN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240914080700-1eleven0086-20240914071700"]}}-->
@1eleven0086 @Hhhlx The first topic is approved. The second topic is not linked correctly - please fix your link and then I can check it. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:07, 14 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240914080700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240914080700-1eleven0086-20240914071700","replies":["c-1eleven0086-20240916115900-Hanyangprofessor2-20240914080700"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Im so sorry about that, here is our English to Chinese article https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/中国和平崛起1eleven0086 (talk) 11:59, 16 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240916115900","author":"1eleven0086","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-1eleven0086-20240916115900-Hanyangprofessor2-20240914080700","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240918045300-1eleven0086-20240916115900"]}}-->
@1eleven0086 Since you have two people, and for your first, approved, topic you chose to translate Gender inequality in North Korea from English into Chinese, for the second topic you need to choose something that has a much better Chinese article then English (since you need to translate good content from zh wiki to en wiki). zh:中国和平崛起 does not appear to be such an article. Please chose another topic. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:53, 18 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240918045300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240918045300-1eleven0086-20240916115900","replies":["c-1eleven0086-20240919020000-Hanyangprofessor2-20240918045300"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor How about this article?Freedom of speech can we translate this from English to Chinese? 1eleven0086 (talk) 02:00, 19 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240919020000","author":"1eleven0086","type":"comment","level":5,"id":"c-1eleven0086-20240919020000-Hanyangprofessor2-20240918045300","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240919031100-1eleven0086-20240919020000"]}}-->
@1eleven0086 Since you are a group, you need to find a topic to translate from Chinese to English, not English to Chinese. You already have one English to Chinese project approved (gender inequality in NK). Each group needs to translate one article from en to zh, and one from zh to en. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:11, 19 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240919031100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":6,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240919031100-1eleven0086-20240919020000","replies":["c-1eleven0086-20240922131000-Hanyangprofessor2-20240919031100"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Professor can we translate this from Chinese to English? https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/漢字史 thank you. 1eleven0086 (talk) 13:10, 22 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240922131000","author":"1eleven0086","type":"comment","level":7,"id":"c-1eleven0086-20240922131000-Hanyangprofessor2-20240919031100","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240923091000-1eleven0086-20240922131000"]}}-->
@1eleven0086 The topic is good but the execution is bad. You can translate it but remember that only referenced content is accepted on English Wikipedia, and most of the Chinese article is unreferenced, as indicated by the article itself (see the orange warning template at the top). So yes, you can translate it, but first you will need to add references to the Chinese article. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here09:10, 23 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240923091000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":8,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240923091000-1eleven0086-20240922131000","replies":["c-1eleven0086-20240927094800-Hanyangprofessor2-20240923091000"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor we chose new article for this class from Chinese to English https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/生活在树上 please check, thank you, 1eleven0086 (talk) 09:48, 27 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240927094800","author":"1eleven0086","type":"comment","level":9,"id":"c-1eleven0086-20240927094800-Hanyangprofessor2-20240923091000","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240927132900-1eleven0086-20240927094800"]}}-->
@1eleven0086 Good, topic approved Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here13:29, 27 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240927132900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":10,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240927132900-1eleven0086-20240927094800","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
@유신예 This may be fine, but please stop by my office or talk to me after class, as you need to add your name to our speadsheet. Otherwise I cannot record your choice and award you points Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here09:55, 23 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240923095500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240923095500-\uc720\uc2e0\uc608-20240922091600","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
PS. Improvign priovince articles is difficult. I recommend choosing a town, like :wv:MohanPiotrus at Hanyang| reply here09:56, 23 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240923095600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240923095600-\uc720\uc2e0\uc608-20240922091600","replies":["c-\uc720\uc2e0\uc608-20240923103600-Hanyangprofessor2-20240923095600"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor: Thank you for your reply!I listened to your suggestion and chose another city in Yunnan as my extended task. Here is the link. Please check it, thank you. 유신예 (talk) 10:36, 23 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240923103600","author":"\uc720\uc2e0\uc608","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-\uc720\uc2e0\uc608-20240923103600-Hanyangprofessor2-20240923095600","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240926042900-\uc720\uc2e0\uc608-20240923103600"]}}-->
@유신예 I am afraid Pu'er has been reserved by another group. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:29, 26 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240926042900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240926042900-\uc720\uc2e0\uc608-20240923103600","replies":["c-\uc720\uc2e0\uc608-20240926174300-Hanyangprofessor2-20240926042900"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I re-selected a city in Henan Province, China, as my extended article. This is the link.Sorry to trouble you. Please check it again.thank you! 유신예 (talk) 17:43, 26 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240926174300","author":"\uc720\uc2e0\uc608","type":"comment","level":5,"id":"c-\uc720\uc2e0\uc608-20240926174300-Hanyangprofessor2-20240926042900","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240927133500-\uc720\uc2e0\uc608-20240926174300"]}}-->
@유신예 Anyang is good, approved. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here13:35, 27 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240927133500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":6,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240927133500-\uc720\uc2e0\uc608-20240926174300","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Thank you! Dbinni (talk) 13:54, 22 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240922135400","author":"Dbinni","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Dbinni-20240922135400-Deadline_2-_Dabin_Kim,_Eunyeong_Kang","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240923095800-Dbinni-20240922135400"]}}-->
@Dbinni The topics are fine for one person, but if you are working in a group, you need to choose one topic to translate from English to Korean, and one to translate from Korean to English. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here09:58, 23 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240923095800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240923095800-Dbinni-20240922135400","replies":["c-Dbinni-20240923105700-Hanyangprofessor2-20240923095800","c-Dbinni-20240926121300-Hanyangprofessor2-20240923095800"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
2. This is the link to the article translated from Korean to English:[[36]] Dbinni (talk) 10:57, 23 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240923105700","author":"Dbinni","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Dbinni-20240923105700-Hanyangprofessor2-20240923095800","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240926043100-Dbinni-20240923105700"]}}-->
@Dbinni Good, but 정재권 is rather short. You may need to translate another similar article to reach the required word count. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:31, 26 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240926043100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240926043100-Dbinni-20240923105700","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Professor, I'm sorry for the inconvenience, but can I change the article to be translated from Korean to English to 권진규? Dbinni (talk) 12:13, 26 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240926121300","author":"Dbinni","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Dbinni-20240926121300-Hanyangprofessor2-20240923095800","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240927133800-Dbinni-20240926121300"]}}-->
@Dbinni The subject is good but that article is missing footnotes. Please remember that only referenced content can be added to English Wikipedia and only such content will count for credit. The content from Korean article that has no references needs to be referenced first before being translated. See Wikipedia:Verifiability On the bright side, you can get extra credit for adding footnotes to the Korean article. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here13:38, 27 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240927133800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240927133800-Dbinni-20240926121300","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello professor, I am CHEN HEBING who attended your class 'Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis' yesterday. After class yesterday afternoon, I showed you an article called Shangrao in Wikivoyage that I had modified myself. The content and article skeleton were all newly created by me during class yesterday, and the historical records only show the content that I modified. However, the student in front of me yesterday found this article and used the theme for himself. Is this inappropriate? CHEN HEBING (talk) 04:42, 24 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240924044200","author":"CHEN HEBING","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-CHEN_HEBING-20240924044200-CHEN_HEBING","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240926044200-CHEN_HEBING-20240924044200"]}}-->
@CHEN HEBING I am not sure what you are asking. But since you have not chosen your project for this class, how about you and that student work together to improve this article? This assignment can be done by a group of two. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:42, 26 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240926044200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240926044200-CHEN_HEBING-20240924044200","replies":["c-CHEN_HEBING-20240926052600-Hanyangprofessor2-20240926044200"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Thank you for your response, but this is a new article I created myself. Someone saw it during class and set it as their own topic. This is plagiarism. CHEN HEBING (talk) 05:26, 26 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240926052600","author":"CHEN HEBING","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-CHEN_HEBING-20240926052600-Hanyangprofessor2-20240926044200","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240927134000-CHEN_HEBING-20240926052600"]}}-->
@CHEN HEBING Right. I don't see a problem with that? Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here13:40, 27 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240927134000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240927134000-CHEN_HEBING-20240926052600","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I'm taking "Media Trends and Globalization" and "Small and Big Data"
I've done one extra edit outside of the sandbox, and I've added a reference to an article about Minorities in South Korea[[37]]
Thank you for checking Jeong Ahram (talk) 06:07, 26 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240926060700","author":"Jeong Ahram","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Jeong_Ahram-20240926060700-Deadline_3_:_Jeong_Aram","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240927134100-Jeong_Ahram-20240926060700"]}}-->
@Jeong Ahram Well done Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here13:41, 27 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240927134100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240927134100-Jeong_Ahram-20240926060700","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I'm taking "Media Trends and Globalization" and "Small and Big Data".
I made one additional edit outside of the sandbox and added content and reference.Here is the link
Please check it. Thank you. Hyodong318 (talk) 13:05, 26 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240926130500","author":"Hyodong318","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Hyodong318-20240926130500-Deadline3:ZHANG_XIAOTONG","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240927134300-Hyodong318-20240926130500"]}}-->
@Hyodong318 Good Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here13:43, 27 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240927134300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240927134300-Hyodong318-20240926130500","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor: I am learning one courses from professors on media trends.1.I have complete the Wikipedia:Training Here is my https://imgur.com/a/kwcnjAA, please check it out Thanks! 2.I have completed the wiki dashboard for registering to teach the course. Here is my https://imgur.com/a/ljFpr2R ,please check it out Thanks! Pineappleq (talk) 16:47, 26 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240926164700","author":"Pineappleq","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Pineappleq-20240926164700-Dreadline1\uff1aQU_HONGYU","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240927134400-Pineappleq-20240926164700"]}}-->
@Pineappleq Good Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here13:44, 27 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240927134400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240927134400-Pineappleq-20240926164700","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor, I added a citation to the assignment for this class (Media Trends and Globalization). Here is the link Li Jun (Water Margin)Mcx8202229 🇨🇳❤️ (talk)00:51, 27 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240927005100","author":"Mcx8202229","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Mcx8202229-20240927005100-Deadline3:Ma_chenxiao","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240927134400-Mcx8202229-20240927005100"]}}-->
@Mcx8202229 Well done Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here13:44, 27 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240927134400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240927134400-Mcx8202229-20240927005100","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
@Hanyangdaxue Unfortunately, no. Please watch the LMS video on adding references, or revisit the part about adding references in the training tutorial. Or check how your friends have completed this assignment. Or ask me how to do so during the office hours. What you have done is to add an external link, not a reference (and Wikipedia does not include external links in article body, see Wikipedia:External links). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here13:47, 27 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240927134700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240927134700-Hanyangdaxue-20240927035100","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I'm taking "Media Trends and Globalization"and "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis"
I've done one extra edit outside of the sandbox, and I've added a reference to an article about Chan Ho Park
Please check.Thank you! Honghaotian (talk) 05:13, 27 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240927051300","author":"Honghaotian","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Honghaotian-20240927051300-Deadline3:HONG_HAOTIAN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240927135400-Honghaotian-20240927051300"]}}-->
@Honghaotian Well done Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here13:54, 27 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240927135400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240927135400-Honghaotian-20240927051300","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
@Minazhuang777 Good Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here13:57, 27 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240927135700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240927135700-Minazhuang777-20240927055100","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear student(s). Please do not delete older messages. Please do not edit older messages changing their content. Please ensure your posts are signed. Please talk to me in about your project during my office hours. --Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here09:18, 23 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240923091800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240923091800-Deadline_2_:_Yoon_daeun_&_Jeong_seolah","replies":["c-Ydaeun0306-20240927053400-Hanyangprofessor2-20240923091800"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear professor:
I'm sorry to delete older mhaessages.
We changed our article and country of main project.
We plan to create 'Yecheon' travel guide for main porject.
We have selected the wikivoyage article about Andong.
Because Andong is Gyeongsangbuk-do area like Yecheon.
Therefore we think it is an article related to the main project topic.
https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/AndongYdaeun0306 (talk) 05:34, 27 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240927053400","author":"Ydaeun0306","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Ydaeun0306-20240927053400-Hanyangprofessor2-20240923091800","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240927133500-Ydaeun0306-20240927053400"]}}-->
@Ydaeun0306 Right now I have your project as Yecheon.
Or do you wish it to be https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/Andong ? Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here13:35, 27 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240927133500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240927133500-Ydaeun0306-20240927053400","replies":["c-Ydaeun0306-20240929164400-Hanyangprofessor2-20240927133500"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
so we can get more information from this https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/AndongYdaeun0306 (talk) 16:44, 29 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240929164400","author":"Ydaeun0306","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Ydaeun0306-20240929164400-Hanyangprofessor2-20240927133500","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240930032300-Ydaeun0306-20240929164400"]}}-->
@Ydaeun0306 I see. Yes, you can change your primary topic to Andong. You can edit Yecheon for extra credit. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:23, 30 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240930032300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":5,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240930032300-Ydaeun0306-20240929164400","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I have completed deadline 3 of "Media Trends and Globalization". I've done the citation work in Future(zh)
Thank you for your checking. YZY2233 (talk) 04:27, 24 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240924042700","author":"YZY2233","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-YZY2233-20240924042700-Deadline_3_:_YUE_ZIYI","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240926044100-YZY2233-20240924042700"]}}-->
@YZY2233 Good, but for deadline 3 you need to add a citation to an article that is not your main project. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:41, 26 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240926044100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240926044100-YZY2233-20240924042700","replies":["c-YZY2233-20240926102300-Hanyangprofessor2-20240926044100"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Sorry for the mistake.I have corrected the assignment of deadline3 [38], please check. YZY2233 (talk) 10:23, 26 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240926102300","author":"YZY2233","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-YZY2233-20240926102300-Hanyangprofessor2-20240926044100","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240927134000-YZY2233-20240926102300"]}}-->
@YZY2233 You have added content and then deleted it, so I am not seeing the competed assignment? Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here13:40, 27 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240927134000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240927134000-YZY2233-20240926102300","replies":["c-YZY2233-20240929082000-Hanyangprofessor2-20240927134000"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
OK professor, I re-did it and added reference to Shaxian delicacies, please check it YZY2233 (talk) 08:20, 29 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240929082000","author":"YZY2233","type":"comment","level":5,"id":"c-YZY2233-20240929082000-Hanyangprofessor2-20240927134000","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240930032400-YZY2233-20240929082000"]}}-->
@YZY2233 Now it is well done. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:24, 30 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240930032400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":6,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240930032400-YZY2233-20240929082000","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Please check.Thank you. Waterooo (talk) 16:29, 27 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240927162900","author":"Waterooo","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Waterooo-20240927162900-Deadline2:ZHOU_HAIRUO","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240930034800-Waterooo-20240927162900"]}}-->
@Waterooo Both of those topics have already been reserved by another student(s), so you will need to choose a different ones. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:48, 30 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240930034800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240930034800-Waterooo-20240927162900","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor:
Hello. I'm taking "Media Trends and Globalization"
I've done one extra edit outside of the sandbox, and I've added a reference to an article about Song Jia
Thank you. WSH0927 (talk) 10:45, 28 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240928104500","author":"WSH0927","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-WSH0927-20240928104500-Deadline3\uff1aWU_SHUHAN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240930035600-WSH0927-20240928104500"]}}-->
@WSH0927 Well done Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:56, 30 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240930035600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240930035600-WSH0927-20240928104500","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
@Kylo09 Ok! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:57, 30 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240930035700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240930035700-Kylo09-20240929074800","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Thank you for your checking. Tyuni06 (talk) 08:33, 29 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240929083300","author":"Tyuni06","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Tyuni06-20240929083300-Deadline3:_TANG_YINI","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240930035800-Tyuni06-20240929083300"]}}-->
@Tyuni06 I see. This is a good stgart, but please see the warning messages added at the top of your articles in Chinese. You need to address those issues quickly, or your work may be deleted. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:58, 30 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240930035800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240930035800-Tyuni06-20240929083300","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
@Limengchen2777 Unfortunately, your edit was reverted. You added a malformatted heading, two unreferenced paragraphs, and the last paragraph had non-neutral language (wonderful performance), followed by a reference to low-quality source (see WP:BAIDU). Please try again, but first please read Wikipedia:Reliable sources and Wikipedia:Verifiability guides. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here13:56, 27 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240927135600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240927135600-Limengchen2777-20240927051400","replies":["c-Limengchen2777-20240929071000-Hanyangprofessor2-20240927135600"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
This is new, please check.Hyun-jinRyuLimengchen2777 (talk) 07:10, 29 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240929071000","author":"Limengchen2777","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Limengchen2777-20240929071000-Hanyangprofessor2-20240927135600","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240930032600-Limengchen2777-20240929071000"]}}-->
@Limengchen2777 This is much better, but the first of your two paragraphs is unreferenced. A footnote (citation, reference) should follow each paragraph. Please add a footnote to the first paragraph. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:26, 30 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240930032600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240930032600-Limengchen2777-20240929071000","replies":["c-Limengchen2777-20240930042200-Hanyangprofessor2-20240930032600"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
This is the latest change please check thank you! Hyun-jinRyuLimengchen2777 (talk) 04:22, 30 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240930042200","author":"Limengchen2777","type":"comment","level":5,"id":"c-Limengchen2777-20240930042200-Hanyangprofessor2-20240930032600","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240930050600-Limengchen2777-20240930042200"]}}-->
@Limengchen2777 Good, now this is correct Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:06, 30 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240930050600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":6,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240930050600-Limengchen2777-20240930042200","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Please check it. Thank you. Zzzxxxrrr (talk) 06:08, 27 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240927060800","author":"Zzzxxxrrr","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Zzzxxxrrr-20240927060800-Deadline3\uff1aZHANG_XIAORUI","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240927135900-Zzzxxxrrr-20240927060800"]}}-->
@Zzzxxxrrr Please note your edit was reverted, as it was deemed to add unimportant information to a wrong section of the article. Please try again and make sure the content you add is relevant to the place it is being added to. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here13:59, 27 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240927135900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240927135900-Zzzxxxrrr-20240927060800","replies":["c-Zzzxxxrrr-20240930043900-Hanyangprofessor2-20240927135900"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor: This is my latest change information about Article 20。 please check, thank you! Zzzxxxrrr (talk) 04:39, 30 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240930043900","author":"Zzzxxxrrr","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Zzzxxxrrr-20240930043900-Hanyangprofessor2-20240927135900","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240930050700-Zzzxxxrrr-20240930043900"]}}-->
@Zzzxxxrrr This looks good Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:07, 30 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240930050700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240930050700-Zzzxxxrrr-20240930043900","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor
I have completed deadline 3 of "Media Trends and Globalization". I add citation in [41]
Please check.Thank you Babaibiaobin (talk) 16:34, 25 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240925163400","author":"Babaibiaobin","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Babaibiaobin-20240925163400-Deadline3:gaoxiaoxia","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240926044500-Babaibiaobin-20240925163400"]}}-->
@Babaibiaobin That content already had a reference. Please try to add a reference to content that is missing it. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:45, 26 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240926044500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240926044500-Babaibiaobin-20240925163400","replies":["c-Babaibiaobin-20240930060800-Hanyangprofessor2-20240926044500"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I add a reference to content that is missing itBabaibiaobin (talk) 06:08, 30 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240930060800","author":"Babaibiaobin","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Babaibiaobin-20240930060800-Hanyangprofessor2-20240926044500","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240930063700-Babaibiaobin-20240930060800"]}}-->
@Babaibiaobin Ok Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here06:37, 30 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240930063700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240930063700-Babaibiaobin-20240930060800","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Dear Professor:
I'm taking "Media Trends and Globalization" and "Small and Big Data"
I've done one extra edit outside of the sandbox, and I've added a reference to an article about fish cakes.
Please check it. Thank you. Hanyuanyuan613 (talk) 04:52, 27 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240927045200","author":"Hanyuanyuan613","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Hanyuanyuan613-20240927045200-Deadline_3_:_HAN_YUANYUAN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240927135400-Hanyuanyuan613-20240927045200"]}}-->
@Hanyuanyuan613 First, please remember to log in before making edits. I assume this was your edit. Note that it was rejected by another editor as your first reference was to an unreliable source (Namuwiki is a low-quality source with many errors), while your last reference was added to an already referenced content. Your middle reference to BBC might have been fine - I'll ping @Barry Wom to hear their rationale for removing it as well. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here13:54, 27 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240927135400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240927135400-Hanyuanyuan613-20240927045200","replies":["c-Barry_Wom-20240927143200-Hanyangprofessor2-20240927135400","c-Hanyuanyuan613-20240927145600-Hanyangprofessor2-20240927135400"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I removed the link to the BBC recipe because it refers to a British version of the dish, and the "Composition" section into which it was inserted has been tagged as not providing a sufficiently worldwide view. Barry Wom (talk) 14:32, 27 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240927143200","author":"Barry Wom","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Barry_Wom-20240927143200-Hanyangprofessor2-20240927135400","replies":[]}}-->
I re-made an article outside the sandbox, please check, thanks.[42]Hanyuanyuan613 (talk) 14:56, 27 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240927145600","author":"Hanyuanyuan613","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Hanyuanyuan613-20240927145600-Hanyangprofessor2-20240927135400","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240930034000-Hanyuanyuan613-20240927145600"]}}-->
@Hanyuanyuan613 The assignment requires adding a citation to an unreferenced content. You have added a citation to a content that was already referenced. Please try again. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:40, 30 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240930034000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240930034000-Hanyuanyuan613-20240927145600","replies":["c-Hanyuanyuan613-20240930063000-Hanyangprofessor2-20240930034000"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Good afternoon professor, I re-selected an article outside the sandbox and added a reference, please check.[43]Hanyuanyuan613 (talk) 06:30, 30 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240930063000","author":"Hanyuanyuan613","type":"comment","level":5,"id":"c-Hanyuanyuan613-20240930063000-Hanyangprofessor2-20240930034000","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240930064100-Hanyuanyuan613-20240930063000"]}}-->
@Hanyuanyuan613 ok Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here06:41, 30 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240930064100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":6,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240930064100-Hanyuanyuan613-20240930063000","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Canal Tours Hello teacher, I have added this canal tour Hanyangdaxue (talk) 06:08, 27 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240927060800","author":"Hanyangdaxue","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Hanyangdaxue-20240927060800-Deadline3:LYU_YANGCHENG_2","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240927140000-Hanyangdaxue-20240927060800"]}}-->
@Hanyangdaxue I have reverted your edit, as the reference cited does not seem to support text added. Please note that adding false or misleading links as references can result in your account being blocked from Wikipedia, which will make it hard for you to complete our course. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here14:00, 27 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240927140000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240927140000-Hanyangdaxue-20240927060800","replies":["c-Hanyangdaxue-20240930053900-Hanyangprofessor2-20240927140000"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Coffee cake (American) The teacher did it again, look at it, thank you. Hanyangdaxue (talk) 05:39, 30 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240930053900","author":"Hanyangdaxue","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Hanyangdaxue-20240930053900-Hanyangprofessor2-20240927140000","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240930064200-Hanyangdaxue-20240930053900"]}}-->
@Hanyangdaxue That content was already referenced. Please add a reference to a paragraph that is missing it. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here06:42, 30 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240930064200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240930064200-Hanyangdaxue-20240930053900","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I'm taking "Media Trends and Globalization" and "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis"
I've done one extra edit outside of the sandbox, and I've added a reference to an article about [44]
Please check it. Thank you.Dbinni (talk) 09:28, 29 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240929092800","author":"Dbinni","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Dbinni-20240929092800-Deadline_3_:_Dabin_Kim","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240930050200-Dbinni-20240929092800"]}}-->
@Dbinni I have reverted your edits as the content was difficult to understand with many grammatical errors. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:02, 30 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240930050200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240930050200-Dbinni-20240929092800","replies":["c-Dbinni-20240930054500-Hanyangprofessor2-20240930050200"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I've added another reference to the same article. please check it. [45]Dbinni (talk) 05:45, 30 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240930054500","author":"Dbinni","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Dbinni-20240930054500-Hanyangprofessor2-20240930050200","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240930064300-Dbinni-20240930054500"]}}-->
@Dbinni Now this is ok Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here06:43, 30 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240930064300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240930064300-Dbinni-20240930054500","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello Professor
I'm taking "Media Trends and Globalization" and "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis"This is my blogging assignment 1Babaibiaobin (talk) 12:09, 29 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240929120900","author":"Babaibiaobin","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Babaibiaobin-20240929120900-Blog:gaoxiaoxia","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240930064400-Babaibiaobin-20240929120900"]}}-->
@Babaibiaobin Ok. Blogging does not need to be reported until the finals week; good job. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here06:44, 30 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240930064400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240930064400-Babaibiaobin-20240929120900","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor:
I'm taking "Media Trends and Globalization" and "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis"
I've added a reference to an article about it:https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Huang_Xiaoming&action=history
Please check it. Thank you!Laoxinyi (talk) 13:29, 29 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240929132900","author":"Laoxinyi","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Laoxinyi-20240929132900-Deadline_3_:_LAOXINYI","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240930064500-Laoxinyi-20240929132900"]}}-->
@Laoxinyi Well done Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here06:45, 30 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240930064500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240930064500-Laoxinyi-20240929132900","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I'm taking "Media Trends and Globalization"and "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis"
I've done one extra edit outside of the sandbox, and I've added a reference to an article about [46]
Please check. Thank you!
——Yeomll (talk) 14:15, 29 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240929141500","author":"Yeomll","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Yeomll-20240929141500-Deadline3:SHAO_TIANYI","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240930064500-Yeomll-20240929141500"]}}-->
@Yeomll Good, but one of your footnotes is incorrectly added to the bottom of the article - please fix that small error. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here06:45, 30 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240930064500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240930064500-Yeomll-20240929141500","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Hello, professor.
I'm taking "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis".
I want you to review about my article.
According to syllabus of 'Understanding small and Big Data with Wikis',
the content of Deadline 3 is 'Showing my draft'.
I'm not sure if that's the same as saying of "I'm going to review my particles.". But I'm posting what I've edited because you told at Deadline 3 "Please inform me through the Wikipedia system by leaving me a message on my talk page at User_talk: Hanyangproposer2 that your particles are ready for review."
Nonsan - Travel guide at Wikivoyage Here is my article. I've really added a lot of details over the past week.
Please give me a feedback about my article. Thanks for your lecture, professor. Sincerely.JHyunlee (talk) 14:21, 29 September 2024 (UTC)JHyunlee (talk) 14:22, 29 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240929142100","author":"JHyunlee","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-JHyunlee-20240929142100-Deadline_3_:_Lee_Jae-Hyun","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240930064600-JHyunlee-20240929142100"]}}-->
@JHyunlee Yes, as we discussed in class, you are doing fine. Good job Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here06:46, 30 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240930064600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240930064600-JHyunlee-20240929142100","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I'm taking "Media Trends and Globalization" and "Small and Big Datawith Wikis"
I've done one extra edit outside of the sandbox, and I've added a reference to an article about Hwang Sun-woo Please check it. Thank you. Xjx921 (talk) 06:13, 27 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240927061300","author":"Xjx921","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Xjx921-20240927061300-Deadline_3:XI_JIAXIN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240930065500-Xjx921-20240927061300"]}}-->
@Xjx921 Good, I see you already corrected your error (wikis like Namuwiki with poor quality control cannot be used as sources on Wikipedia). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here06:55, 30 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240930065500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240930065500-Xjx921-20240927061300","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor:
I'm taking "Media Trends and Globalization" and "Small and Big Datawith Wikis"
I've done one extra edit outside of the sandbox, and I've added a reference to an article about Janie (2006 film) Please check it. Thank you. Buryab0ne (talk) 06:50, 27 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240927065000","author":"Buryab0ne","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Buryab0ne-20240927065000-Deadline3:_QIAN_ZIYI","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240930070200-Buryab0ne-20240927065000"]}}-->
@Buryab0ne I've reverted your edits, as the sources you added don't mention the movie Janie. In one case you also removed the date of the award. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:02, 30 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240930070200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240930070200-Buryab0ne-20240927065000","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello.
I'm taking "Media Trends and Globalization"
I've done one extra edit outside of the sandbox, and I've added a reference to an article about [47]
Thank you.Jaeyun01 (talk) 06:55, 27 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240927065500","author":"Jaeyun01","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Jaeyun01-20240927065500-Deadline_3_:_Jung_Jaeyun","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240930070500-Jaeyun01-20240927065500"]}}-->
@Jaeyun01 Good, but note that content in WP:LEAD does not require references, if they are provided in the body of the article. Leads are just abstracts, summaries, and references usually are not added to them. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:05, 30 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240930070500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240930070500-Jaeyun01-20240927065500","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor:
I am taking one course "Media Trends and Globalization"
Me and my group members @WANGTAO
his is the link to the article translated from English to Chinese.
This is the link to the article translated from Chinese to English.
Please check Thank you ! ZAIWEI0328 (talk) 15:40, 29 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240929154000","author":"ZAIWEI0328","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-ZAIWEI0328-20240929154000-Deadline2:ZAIWEI&WANGTAO","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240930071500-ZAIWEI0328-20240929154000"]}}-->
@ZAIWEI0328@WANGTAO Please stop by my office hours as you did not sign the spreadsheet and I cannot record your choice.
World Values Survey is accepted for translation to Chinese.
Your other topic looks good too. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:15, 30 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240930071500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240930071500-ZAIWEI0328-20240929154000","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor: I'm taking "Media Trends and Globalization"and "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis" I've done one extra edit outside of the sandbox, and I've added a reference to an article about [弗拉·蒙雷亚莱][叶临之]Please check. Thank you! 白诗棋 (talk) 02:33, 30 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240930023300","author":"\u767d\u8bd7\u68cb","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-\u767d\u8bd7\u68cb-20240930023300-Deadline3:\u767d\u8bd7\u68cb","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240930071600-\u767d\u8bd7\u68cb-20240930023300"]}}-->
@白诗棋 Ok Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:16, 30 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240930071600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240930071600-\u767d\u8bd7\u68cb-20240930023300","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Dear Professor:
I'm taking "Media Trends and Globalization"
I've done one extra edit outside of the sandbox, and I've added a reference to an article about [4]
Thank you. Xisuux (talk) 04:09, 30 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240930040900","author":"Xisuux","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Xisuux-20240930040900-Deadline3_:_Lee_jisu","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240930071700-Xisuux-20240930040900"]}}-->
@Xisuux Well done Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:17, 30 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240930071700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240930071700-Xisuux-20240930040900","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Dear Professor:
I'm taking "Media Trends and Globalization"
Among the Deadline 4 tasks, I'm attaching the translation from my sandbox. Please check.
Thank you.
Kkm.hanyang22 (talk) 04:15, 30 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240930041500","author":"Kkm.hanyang22","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Kkm.hanyang22-20240930041500-Deadline_4_:_Kim_Kyungmin","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240930071700-Kkm.hanyang22-20240930041500"]}}-->
@Kkm.hanyang22 Good Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:17, 30 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240930071700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240930071700-Kkm.hanyang22-20240930041500","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I am taking "Understanding Small Data and Big Data" from the professor.
I want to choose https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/Danyang to expand for main project individually. Is it possible? Hee Jung, Yoon (talk) 05:35, 30 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240930053500","author":"Hee Jung, Yoon","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Hee_Jung,_Yoon-20240930053500-Deadline_2_:_Yoon_Hee_Jung","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240930071900-Hee_Jung,_Yoon-20240930053500"]}}-->
@Hee Jung, Yoon As discussed, yes, it's ok Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:19, 30 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240930071900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240930071900-Hee_Jung,_Yoon-20240930053500","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor:
I am taking two courses "Media Trends and Globalization" and "Understanding Small and Big Data through Wiki".
1. This is the link to the article translated from English to Chinese: 「Korean rock」「Climate change in North Korea」
2.Also, i chose JinCheng to complete its expansion on Wikivoyage .
Please check Thank you ! SHENZIHE (talk) 05:43, 30 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240930054300","author":"SHENZIHE","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-SHENZIHE-20240930054300-Deadline_2:SHENZIHE","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240930072000-SHENZIHE-20240930054300"]}}-->
@SHENZIHE As discussed, yes, it's ok Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:20, 30 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240930072000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240930072000-SHENZIHE-20240930054300","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor
I have completed deadline 3 of "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis' from the professor. This is my draft this article(Yangju).
I'll try to update it continuously. Thank you for your checking.--SongHyeonmin2020007129 (talk) 05:48, 30 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240930054800","author":"SongHyeonmin2020007129","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-SongHyeonmin2020007129-20240930054800-Deadline_3:Hyeonmin_Song","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240930072200-SongHyeonmin2020007129-20240930054800"]}}-->
@SongHyeonmin2020007129 Good Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:22, 30 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240930072200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240930072200-SongHyeonmin2020007129-20240930054800","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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I'll try to update it continuously. Thank you for your checking. Kim jong min (hanyang) (talk) 05:54, 30 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240930055400","author":"Kim jong min (hanyang)","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Kim_jong_min_(hanyang)-20240930055400-Deadline_3_:_Kim_Jong_min,_Kang_Taeho","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240930072200-Kim_jong_min_(hanyang)-20240930055400"]}}-->
@Kim jong min (hanyang) Well done Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:22, 30 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240930072200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240930072200-Kim_jong_min_(hanyang)-20240930055400","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Dear Professor: I'm taking "Media Trends and Globalization" Among the Deadline 4 task.
I've done some exercises to add a Director's experience to the sandbox User:Kang Taeho/sandbox and I've also inserted that into the actual Wikipedia.Lee Jung-hyo Please check. Kang Taeho (talk) 06:35, 30 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240930063500","author":"Kang Taeho","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Kang_Taeho-20240930063500-Deadline_4_:_Kang_Taeho","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240930072600-Kang_Taeho-20240930063500"]}}-->
@Kang Taeho Good, but that article is missing footnotes. Please remember that only referenced content can be added to English Wikipedia and only such content will count for credit. The content from Korean article that has no references needs to be referenced; otherwise it may be removed from English Wikipedia. See Wikipedia:Verifiability On the bright side, you can get extra credit for adding footnotes to the Korean article Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:26, 30 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240930072600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240930072600-Kang_Taeho-20240930063500","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Dear Professor: I'm taking "Media Trends and Globalization" Among the Deadline 4 task. I've done some exercises to add a Director's experience to the sandbox User:Kim jong min (hanyang)/sandbox and I've also inserted that into the actual Wikipedia.Lee Jung-hyo Please check. Thank U :) Kim jong min (hanyang) (talk) 06:40, 30 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240930064000","author":"Kim jong min (hanyang)","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Kim_jong_min_(hanyang)-20240930064000-Deadline_4_:_Kim_Jong_min","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240930072600-Kim_jong_min_(hanyang)-20240930064000"]}}-->
@Kim jong min (hanyang) Good, but see my comment above Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:26, 30 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240930072600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240930072600-Kim_jong_min_(hanyang)-20240930064000","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I'm taking "Media Trends and Globalization"and "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis"
I've done one extra edit outside of the sandbox, and I've added a reference to an article about Park Min-young.
Please check. Thank you Wuwenhao19960507 (talk) 06:49, 27 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240927064900","author":"Wuwenhao19960507","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Wuwenhao19960507-20240927064900-Deadline_3:WU_WENHAO","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240930070000-Wuwenhao19960507-20240927064900"]}}-->
@Wuwenhao19960507 Good. See how a more experienced user (@Paper9oll) improved on your edit, including removing duplicated text - please be more careful with your edits in the future Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:00, 30 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240930070000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240930070000-Wuwenhao19960507-20240927064900","replies":["c-Wuwenhao19960507-20241001083300-Hanyangprofessor2-20240930070000"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I'm so sorry, I just checked the link and found such a serious error. I will definitely check again after editing next time. Wuwenhao19960507 (talk) 08:33, 1 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241001083300","author":"Wuwenhao19960507","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Wuwenhao19960507-20241001083300-Hanyangprofessor2-20240930070000","replies":[]}}-->
I am taking two courses, "Media Trends and Globalization" and "Understanding Small and Big Data through Wiki".
This is the link to the article translated from Chinese to English:铠甲勇士
This is the link to the article translated from English to Chinese:Gozo Stadium
Thank you Shuo1103 (talk) 09:47, 27 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240927094700","author":"Shuo1103","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Shuo1103-20240927094700-Deadline2:ZHANG_MINGSHUO","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240930034400-Shuo1103-20240927094700"]}}-->
@Shuo1103 While the topic of 铠甲勇士 is interesting, the underlying zh wiki article is very bad, as seen from multiple warning messages at the top. If you want to translate it, you will need to start by referencing all facts (right now the zh wiki article has no references, and they are required both by our class policies - see syllabi - as well as Wikipedia:Verifiability policy), and by adding a section in awards and reception (reviews).
Gozo Stadium is fine, and I will approve this for you. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:44, 30 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240930034400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240930034400-Shuo1103-20240927094700","replies":["c-Shuo1103-20241001115100-Hanyangprofessor2-20240930034400"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
This is the link to the article translated from Chinese to English:包头战役
Can we change it to this one
Thank you Shuo1103 (talk) 11:51, 1 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241001115100","author":"Shuo1103","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Shuo1103-20241001115100-Hanyangprofessor2-20240930034400","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241002064400-Shuo1103-20241001115100","c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241002064500-Shuo1103-20241001115100"]}}-->
@Shuo1103 Yes, this is a good topic, approved Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here06:44, 2 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241002064400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241002064400-Shuo1103-20241001115100","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
PS. Are you working in a group or by yourself? If in a group, who is your groupmate? Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here06:45, 2 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241002064500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241002064500-Shuo1103-20241001115100","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor I'm taking "Media Trends and Globalization" I've done one extra edit outside of the sandbox, and I've added a reference to an article about 唐朝 - Wikipedia Thank you 1eleven0086 (talk) 04:46, 30 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240930044600","author":"1eleven0086","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-1eleven0086-20240930044600-Deadline_3\uff1aLIU_YUNXIANG","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240930071800-1eleven0086-20240930044600"]}}-->
@1eleven0086 I cannot locate your edit there. Please show it to me during my office hours or link here using the WP:DIFF method Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:18, 30 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240930071800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240930071800-1eleven0086-20240930044600","replies":["c-1eleven0086-20241001062000-Hanyangprofessor2-20240930071800"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor I've added a reference to an article 郴州市 - Wikipedia please check! 1eleven0086 (talk) 06:20, 1 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241001062000","author":"1eleven0086","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-1eleven0086-20241001062000-Hanyangprofessor2-20240930071800","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241002065100-1eleven0086-20241001062000"]}}-->
@1eleven0086 Ok Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here06:51, 2 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241002065100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241002065100-1eleven0086-20241001062000","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Professor. Our group's @LJY2455 editing of SuqianSuqian has been completed this week. Please check it out。 CHEN HEBING (talk) 08:12, 30 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240930081200","author":"CHEN HEBING","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-CHEN_HEBING-20240930081200-Deadline_4_:_CHEN_HEBING","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241002065700-CHEN_HEBING-20240930081200"]}}-->
@CHEN HEBING Well done Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here06:57, 2 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241002065700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241002065700-CHEN_HEBING-20240930081200","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I have completed deadline 4 of "Media Trends and Globalization" from the professor. I create an outline of my project in my personal sandbox.
Thank you for your checking.--SongHyeonmin2020007129 (talk) 10:28, 30 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240930102800","author":"SongHyeonmin2020007129","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-SongHyeonmin2020007129-20240930102800-Deadline_4:Hyeonmin_Song","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241002065700-SongHyeonmin2020007129-20240930102800"]}}-->
@SongHyeonmin2020007129 Good Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here06:57, 2 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241002065700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241002065700-SongHyeonmin2020007129-20240930102800","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I'm taking "Media Trends and Globalization"and "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis"
I've done one extra edit outside of the sandbox.Here are all the links:1、https://en.m.wikivoyage.org/wiki/Menghai#Safety 2、https://zh.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:WANGYIZHE1124
Please check it. Thank you WANGYIZHE1124 (talk) 15:18, 30 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240930151800","author":"WANGYIZHE1124","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-WANGYIZHE1124-20240930151800-Deadline_3\uff1aWANGYIZHE","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241002065800-WANGYIZHE1124-20240930151800"]}}-->
@WANGYIZHE1124 Please review the changes made by experienced editors at Menghai: Revision history – Travel guide at Wikivoyage following your edits. What can you learn from them? Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here06:58, 2 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241002065800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241002065800-WANGYIZHE1124-20240930151800","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor: I'm taking "Media Trends and Globalization"and "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis"
I've done one extra edit outside of the sandbox, and I've added a reference to an article about.
This is the link:https://zh.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=馬洛尼山&oldid=84414121
Thank you for your checking.
DEar student, I don't see any references added in your edit at [49]. Also, please remember to WP:SIGN your wiki messages at talk. --Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:00, 2 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241002070000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241002070000-Deadline_3:WANG_RUITONG","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
have a nice day Peter011008 (talk) 06:19, 1 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241001061900","author":"Peter011008","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Peter011008-20241001061900-Deadline_4\uff1aLIU_ZIFU","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241002070100-Peter011008-20241001061900"]}}-->
@Peter011008 Good, please keep up your practice. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:01, 2 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241002070100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241002070100-Peter011008-20241001061900","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Dear Professor:
I'm taking "Media Trends and Globalization" Among the Deadline 4 task, I've translated an article in Chinese and added references to my personal sandbox.
Please check. Syouziiye (talk) 05:16, 2 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241002051600","author":"Syouziiye","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Syouziiye-20241002051600-Deadline_4:_SHU_YING","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241002070400-Syouziiye-20241002051600"]}}-->
@Syouziiye Good Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:04, 2 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241002070400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241002070400-Syouziiye-20241002051600","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Professor here are my 40 Wikipedia edits from last month pleasecheck.
This is the blog invitation I received but it seems not from Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis, is it correct please?
I'll submit the sandbox draft separately before the deadline Thanks! Bai0926 (talk) 06:33, 2 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241002063300","author":"Bai0926","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Bai0926-20241002063300-Deadline4(Week5)_BAILINHAN_3","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241002070500-Bai0926-20241002063300"]}}-->
@Bai0926 That is correct. Big and Small data has no obligatory blog. You can post any extra credit blogs for that class on that other blog. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:05, 2 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241002070500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241002070500-Bai0926-20241002063300","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Dear Professor:
I'm taking your "UnderstandingSmall and Big Data with wikis " course. This is the first draft I completed. Please check if it is qualified. Or where improvements are needed.Thanks for your patience.Have a nice day! 2001:2D8:E206:B2E4:807E:8BCB:ED59:ED5C (talk) 08:30, 2 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241002083000","author":"2001:2D8:E206:B2E4:807E:8BCB:ED59:ED5C","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-2001:2D8:E206:B2E4:807E:8BCB:ED59:ED5C-20241002083000-Deadline_3\uff08Week5\uff09-_LIU_XINRUI","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241003073500-2001:2D8:E206:B2E4:807E:8BCB:ED59:ED5C-20241002083000"]}}-->
@유신예 Please remember to log in before making edits. Good job so far Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:35, 3 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241003073500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241003073500-2001:2D8:E206:B2E4:807E:8BCB:ED59:ED5C-20241002083000","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Thank you for your checking. Parksungeun (talk) 16:11, 2 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241002161100","author":"Parksungeun","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Parksungeun-20241002161100-Deadline_3:_Parksungeun","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241003073500-Parksungeun-20241002161100"]}}-->
@Parksungeun Good progress! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:35, 3 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241003073500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241003073500-Parksungeun-20241002161100","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor I have completed deadline 3 of "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis' from the professor.
This is my draft https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/Danyang Thank you. Hee Jung, Yoon (talk) 12:28, 3 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241003122800","author":"Hee Jung, Yoon","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Hee_Jung,_Yoon-20241003122800-Deadline_3:_Yoon_Hee_Jung","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241004034900-Hee_Jung,_Yoon-20241003122800"]}}-->
@Hee Jung, Yoon Topic is recorded and approved, good Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:49, 4 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241004034900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241004034900-Hee_Jung,_Yoon-20241003122800","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor, I added a citation to the assignment for this class (Media Trends and Globalization). Here is the link Xie Bao . HYH031277777 (talk) 13:51, 3 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241003135100","author":"HYH031277777","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-HYH031277777-20241003135100-Deadline3:HAUNG_YANHAN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241004035000-HYH031277777-20241003135100"]}}-->
@HYH031277777 Good Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:50, 4 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241004035000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241004035000-HYH031277777-20241003135100","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I'm taking "Media Trends and Globalization" Among the Deadline 4 task, I've translated an article in Chinese and added references to my personal sandbox.
Please check. SHENZIHE (talk) 03:17, 4 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241004031700","author":"SHENZIHE","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-SHENZIHE-20241004031700-Deadline4:SHENZIHE","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241004035100-SHENZIHE-20241004031700"]}}-->
@SHENZIHE Good start Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:51, 4 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241004035100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241004035100-SHENZIHE-20241004031700","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Please check it. Thank you!
SoeunK (talk) 15:04, 29 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240929150400","author":"SoeunK","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-SoeunK-20240929150400-Deadline3:_Soeun_Kwon","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240930071100-SoeunK-20240929150400"]}}-->
@SoeunK Good, but your reference is just a link (see Wikipedia:Bare URLs). Please edit it and add title, date, publisher, author, and other such details. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:11, 30 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240930071100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240930071100-SoeunK-20240929150400","replies":["c-SoeunK-20241004070700-Hanyangprofessor2-20240930071100"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I added details. Please check it. SoeunK (talk) 07:07, 4 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241004070700","author":"SoeunK","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-SoeunK-20241004070700-Hanyangprofessor2-20240930071100","replies":[]}}-->
Hello Professor, I worked on a new topic about missing entries in template translations(like Ni Chiang-huai etc) in User:Yangpeifu/sandbox2. Yangpeifu (talk) 12:58, 4 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241004125800","author":"Yangpeifu","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Yangpeifu-20241004125800-Deadline_4:YANG_PEIFU","replies":[]}}-->
Dear Professor:
I'm taking "Media Trends and Globalization"and "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis"
I've done one extra edit outside of the sandbox, and I've added a reference to an article about Siu Mei
Please check it. Thank you! Uuueol (talk) 06:48, 27 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240927064800","author":"Uuueol","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Uuueol-20240927064800-Deadline3:_GUANYUE","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240930065600-Uuueol-20240927064800"]}}-->
@Uuueol Please use more reliable sources - Baidu is a low quality source, see WP:BAIDUPiotrus at Hanyang| reply here06:56, 30 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240930065600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240930065600-Uuueol-20240927064800","replies":["c-Uuueol-20241004061000-Hanyangprofessor2-20240930065600"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear professor, I've added a reference to a new article, please check it again. Thank you! Uuueol (talk) 06:10, 4 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241004061000","author":"Uuueol","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Uuueol-20241004061000-Hanyangprofessor2-20240930065600","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241005030100-Uuueol-20241004061000"]}}-->
@Uuueol Very good Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:01, 5 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241005030100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241005030100-Uuueol-20241004061000","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
@Cuicuizan Please note that your edit was reverted for copying content without permission from other sources (@AlexLeeCN can add further comment, perhaps). Please be careful to avoid repeating such mistakes, or your account may be blocked, which will make it hard for you to complete assignments for our classes. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here06:58, 30 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240930065800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240930065800-Cuicuizan-20240927064900","replies":["c-Cuicuizan-20241004050400-Hanyangprofessor2-20240930065800"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
dear professor,I'm very sorry for this mistake, is it okay if I change it to this?烧烤Cuicuizan (talk) 05:04, 4 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241004050400","author":"Cuicuizan","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Cuicuizan-20241004050400-Hanyangprofessor2-20240930065800","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241005030500-Cuicuizan-20241004050400"]}}-->
@Cuicuizan The reference is ok. Make sure your content is reworded in the future (not directly copied). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:05, 5 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241005030500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241005030500-Cuicuizan-20241004050400","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Coffee cake (American) The teacher did it again, look at it, thank you. Hanyangdaxue (talk) 05:37, 30 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240930053700","author":"Hanyangdaxue","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Hanyangdaxue-20240930053700-Deadline3:LYU_YANGCHENG_3","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240930071900-Hanyangdaxue-20240930053700"]}}-->
@Hanyangdaxue As I replied above, this is incorrect. Please watch our LMS video on adding references and do it again Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:19, 30 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240930071900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240930071900-Hanyangdaxue-20240930053700","replies":["c-Hanyangdaxue-20241004073700-Hanyangprofessor2-20240930071900"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
@Hanyangdaxue That's better Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:06, 5 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241005040600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241005040600-Hanyangdaxue-20241004073700","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Thank you for your checking. Hanyuanyuan613 (talk) 04:23, 4 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241004042300","author":"Hanyuanyuan613","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Hanyuanyuan613-20241004042300-Deadline_3:HAN_YUANYUAN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241005041600-Hanyuanyuan613-20241004042300"]}}-->
@Hanyuanyuan613 Good progress Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:16, 5 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241005041600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241005041600-Hanyuanyuan613-20241004042300","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Course 2 (Learn about small data and big data through Wiki) :Themes:Ruili (Supplement the English Wikivoyage article.)
please check it out Thanks! Jihaiyun (talk) 04:39, 4 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241004043900","author":"Jihaiyun","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Jihaiyun-20241004043900-Deadline_2:_JIHAIYUN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241005041700-Jihaiyun-20241004043900"]}}-->
@Jihaiyun Recorded and approved Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:17, 5 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241005041700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241005041700-Jihaiyun-20241004043900","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I am taking two courses, "Media Trends and Globalization" and "Understanding Small and Big Data through Wiki".
on media trends and globalization, I will choose two English Wikipedia articles to translate into Chinese. The first theme is resource mobilization and the second is abortion in Poland. The two articles are linked below.
Course 2 (Learn about small data and big data through Wiki) :Themes:Yangjiang(Supplement the English Wikivoyage article.)Yangjiang
please check it out Thanks!
Guoying1 (talk) 04:48, 4 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241004044800","author":"Guoying1","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Guoying1-20241004044800-Deadline2:GUO_YING","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241005043200-Guoying1-20241004044800"]}}-->
@Guoying1 Yes, topics approved Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:32, 5 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241005043200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241005043200-Guoying1-20241004044800","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I am taking two courses, "Media Trends and Globalization" and "Understanding Small and Big Data through Wiki".
on media trends and globalization, I will choose one Chinese Wikipedia articles to translate into English. Here is a link to the article
please check it out Thanks! Xukeying2022039098 (talk) 00:01, 22 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241022000100","author":"Xukeying2022039098","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Xukeying2022039098-20241022000100-deadline2:xu_keying","replies":[]}}-->
Dear Professor:
This is the subject of translating from "Media Trends and Globalization": Asiacentrism.
This is the subject of expansion from "Understanding Small and Big Data through Wiki":shangrao. Jiayyyyy (talk) 05:13, 4 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241004051300","author":"Jiayyyyy","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Jiayyyyy-20241004051300-Deadline_3:JIA_YUAN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241006063300-Jiayyyyy-20241004051300"]}}-->
@Jiayyyyy Good, but you should choose one more topic to translate. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here06:33, 6 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241006063300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241006063300-Jiayyyyy-20241004051300","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Lesson 2: "Understanding Small Data and Big Data through Wikis" This week I have added content to the topic: 滇南. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Aaiiuuu (talk • contribs) 05:55, 4 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241004055500","author":"Aaiiuuu","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Aaiiuuu-20241004055500-Deadline_3:FAN_JINGYU","replies":[]}}-->
Thank you for your checking. Aaiiuuu (talk) 05:19, 4 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241004051900","author":"Aaiiuuu","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Aaiiuuu-20241004051900-Deadline_3:FAN_JINGYU","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241006064100-Aaiiuuu-20241004051900"]}}-->
@Aaiiuuu I am afraid your reference was removed, as you have added a low quality reference as a source - see the explanation in the edit summary here. Please try again.
As for your linked Wikivoyage article, I do not see any edits by you at this page. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here06:41, 6 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241006064100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241006064100-Aaiiuuu-20241004051900","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor: I am taking two courses, "Media Trends and Globalization" and "Understanding Small Data and Big Data through Wikis."
Lesson 1: "Media Trends and Globalization" This week I edited the topic: Resource mobilization.
Lesson 2: "Understanding Small Data and Big Data through Wikis" This week I have added content to the topic: YangJiang.
Thank you for your checking. Guoying1 (talk) 05:48, 4 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241004054800","author":"Guoying1","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Guoying1-20241004054800-Deadline_3:_GUOYING","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241006065300-Guoying1-20241004054800"]}}-->
@Guoying1 Good. Please note that the Chinese reviewers have tagged your translation as low quality. Please improve it - if errors are not fixed, your work may be deleted. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here06:53, 6 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241006065300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241006065300-Guoying1-20241004054800","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Thank you! KellyChen0221 (talk) 05:57, 4 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241004055700","author":"KellyChen0221","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-KellyChen0221-20241004055700-Deadline_3_\uff1aCHEN_SITING","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241006065600-KellyChen0221-20241004055700"]}}-->
@KellyChen0221 Good Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here06:56, 6 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241006065600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241006065600-KellyChen0221-20241004055700","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I'm taking "Media Trends and Globalization" and " "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis'
Among the Deadline 4 task, I've translated an article and added references to my sandbox.
Please check! Zzzxxxrrr (talk) 06:37, 4 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241004063700","author":"Zzzxxxrrr","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Zzzxxxrrr-20241004063700-Deadline4\uff1aZHANG_XIAORUI","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241006065800-Zzzxxxrrr-20241004063700"]}}-->
@Zzzxxxrrr Good. Please format the references so that they have an English title (in addition to the Chinese), and other information (author, date, publisher).
Also, please replace taiwan.huanqiu.com - that reference has been judged non-reliable - it cannot be trusted due to high volume of fake news and propaganda (see WP:GLOBALTIMES). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here06:58, 6 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241006065800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241006065800-Zzzxxxrrr-20241004063700","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Professor, I've finished the draft of the Family in South Korea, please check it out
Bai0926 (talk) 07:55, 4 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241004075500","author":"Bai0926","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Bai0926-20241004075500-Deadline_3\uff1aBAI_LINHAN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241006071400-Bai0926-20241004075500"]}}-->
@Bai0926 Very good. Your article has a good structure, but you need to use better references. Please make sure all your references clearly state the author, date and publisher.
Your first reference is optilingo. What is this website? Who is the author? Why do you think we can trust that site, particulary in the context of the author's understanding of Korean culture?
Your second reference, culturalatlas, is fine, as it is associated with reliable platforms and the author is known (see About — Cultural Atlas (sbs.com.au)).
Your reference #3 is fine as well, as koreatimes is a reliable newspaper. But make sure to add author, date, and spell the newspaper name corretly (The Korea Times).
Your references 4 and 5 are good too.
Please add references to the first paragraph of the 'The rise of the nuclear family' and the ending of the first paragraph of the 'Changes in marriage and fertility', which currently do not have them.
Regarding "a modern family dynamic similar to that of the Australians has been adopted" - please rewrite it, as Australian family structure is not particularly unique or special. The source you are using is suffering from Australia-centrism.
To finish your paper, please read and use some academic sources like
Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:14, 6 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241006071400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241006071400-Bai0926-20241004075500","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Among the Deadline 4 tasks, I'm attaching the translation from my sandbox. Please check it.
SoeunK (talk) 08:05, 4 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241004080500","author":"SoeunK","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-SoeunK-20241004080500-Deadline_4:_Soeun_Kwon","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241006071900-SoeunK-20241004080500"]}}-->
@SoeunK Good start. Now please move your draft from English Wikipedia to Korean WikipediaPiotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:19, 6 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241006071900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241006071900-SoeunK-20241004080500","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Dear Professor:
I'm taking "Media Trends and Globalization"
Among the Deadline 5 tasks, My article finished in my sandbox. I'm attaching the link, so please check
Thank you. Kkm.hanyang22 (talk) 09:14, 4 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241004091400","author":"Kkm.hanyang22","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Kkm.hanyang22-20241004091400-Deadline_5_:_Kim_Kyungmin","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241006072600-Kkm.hanyang22-20241004091400"]}}-->
@Kkm.hanyang22 Good progress Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:26, 6 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241006072600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241006072600-Kkm.hanyang22-20241004091400","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
1.I have complete the Wikipedia:Training Here is my link, please check it Thanks!
2.I have completed the wiki dashboard for registering to teach the course. here is my link , please check it thanks. Hnlyyyy (talk) 09:48, 4 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241004094800","author":"Hnlyyyy","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Hnlyyyy-20241004094800-Deadline_1\uff1aHAN_JIAYI","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241006072600-Hnlyyyy-20241004094800"]}}-->
@Hnlyyyy Good, now please catch up on other deadlines you have missed Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:26, 6 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241006072600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241006072600-Hnlyyyy-20241004094800","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I am still working on translating the templates in my sandbox), please check these links thanks! Yangpeifu (talk) 12:54, 4 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241004125400","author":"Yangpeifu","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Yangpeifu-20241004125400-Deadline_3:YANG_PEIFU","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241006072700-Yangpeifu-20241004125400"]}}-->
@Yangpeifu Very nice, those should generate good amount of extra credit.
Please format your references so that they have English title (in addition to the Chinese), and other information (author, date, publisher). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:27, 6 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241006072700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241006072700-Yangpeifu-20241004125400","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor, I have completed the sandbox editing of Media Trends and Globalization. Please check it. Mcx8202229 🇨🇳❤️ (talk)06:11, 5 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241005061100","author":"Mcx8202229","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Mcx8202229-20241005061100-Deadline_4:Ma_chenxiao","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241006072900-Mcx8202229-20241005061100"]}}-->
@Mcx8202229 Good. Remember that all content added needs to have references (footnotes). Right now much of your draft is not referenced (it has no footnotes). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:29, 6 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241006072900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241006072900-Mcx8202229-20241005061100","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor, I have finished editing the draft of Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis. Please check it.Sanmenxia
But I couldn't find the sandbox page on Wikitravel, so I edited it directly on the official entry. Mcx8202229 🇨🇳❤️ (talk)06:20, 5 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241005062000","author":"Mcx8202229","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Mcx8202229-20241005062000-Deadline_3:Ma_chenxiao","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241006073600-Mcx8202229-20241005062000"]}}-->
@Mcx8202229 It is ok to edit that page directly. Please review the history and see how experienced Wikivoyage editors are fixing your edits: Sanmenxia: Revision history – Travel guide at WikivoyagePiotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:36, 6 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241006073600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241006073600-Mcx8202229-20241005062000","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Dear professor, regarding Project 2, we are a group of four people, the others are Han yuanyuan, Zhang qi, Chen hebing, my question is when we submit the assignment, do we need to write our four names in the PDF? Mcx8202229 🇨🇳❤️ (talk)07:12, 5 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241005071200","author":"Mcx8202229","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Mcx8202229-20241005071200-aboutProject_2_Ma_chenxiao","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241006073700-Mcx8202229-20241005071200"]}}-->
@Mcx8202229 Yes. In addition, everyone should submit the assignment (upload file(s)) themselves, to avoid problems due to incorrect spelling of one name in the pdf. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:37, 6 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241006073700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241006073700-Mcx8202229-20241005071200","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I am taking two courses, "Media Trends and Globalization" and "Understanding Small Data and Big Data through Wikis."
"Understanding Small Data and Big Data through Wikis" This week I have added content to the topic:HohhotShuo1103 (talk) 07:35, 5 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241005073500","author":"Shuo1103","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Shuo1103-20241005073500-Deadline_3:ZHANG_MINGSHUO","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241006073700-Shuo1103-20241005073500"]}}-->
@Shuo1103 Good Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:37, 6 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241006073700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241006073700-Shuo1103-20241005073500","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I have completed the sandbox editing of Media Trends and Globalization. Please check it.thank you Shuo1103 (talk) 08:00, 5 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241005080000","author":"Shuo1103","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Shuo1103-20241005080000-Deadline_4:ZHANG_MINGSHUO","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241006073800-Shuo1103-20241005080000"]}}-->
@Shuo1103 Good progress Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:38, 6 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241006073800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241006073800-Shuo1103-20241005080000","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor:
I am taking two courses, "Media Trends and Globalization" and "Understanding Small and Big Data through Wiki".
The theme of "Media Trends and Globalization" is Asiacentrism.
The theme of "Understanding Small and Big Data through Wiki" is Shangrao. Jiayyyyy (talk) 04:41, 4 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241004044100","author":"Jiayyyyy","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Jiayyyyy-20241004044100-Deadline_2:JIA_YUAN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241005043100-Jiayyyyy-20241004044100"]}}-->
@Jiayyyyy Good, but remember to choose one more article to translate from English to Chinese in addition to Asiacentrism. How about Indocentrism ? It is a bit short but if you can add a short section on views of Indocentrism in Chinese literature, this should be fine. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:31, 5 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241005043100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241005043100-Jiayyyyy-20241004044100","replies":["c-Jiayyyyy-20241006074000-Hanyangprofessor2-20241005043100"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
OK, professor. I'll add Indocentrism for my second article translation. Jiayyyyy (talk) 07:40, 6 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241006074000","author":"Jiayyyyy","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Jiayyyyy-20241006074000-Hanyangprofessor2-20241005043100","replies":[]}}-->
2.This is the link to the article translated from English to Korean:Dependency theory
(https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Dependency_theory)
Jaeyun01 (talk) 04:22, 7 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241007042200","author":"Jaeyun01","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Jaeyun01-20241007042200-Deadline2:_Jung_Jaeyun","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241007072900-Jaeyun01-20241007042200"]}}-->
@Jaeyun01 Dear students. Please remember to add your new messages at the bottom of this page, not in the middle (unless you are continuing a previous discussion and replying to my comment). Your topics are approved and recorded. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:29, 7 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241007072900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241007072900-Jaeyun01-20241007042200","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor, Our group is working on the Deadline 4 assignments "Media Trends and Globalization" and "Understanding Small and Big Data".
We have done some exercises to add to the sandbox. This is my English translation of the article Abortion in Japan, and this is my group@LJY2455 member's Chinese translation of the article Hong Kong media controversy
Please check. Thank you CHEN HEBING (talk) 10:55, 6 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241006105500","author":"CHEN HEBING","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-CHEN_HEBING-20241006105500-Deadline_4_:_CHEN_HEBING_2","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241007073300-CHEN_HEBING-20241006105500"]}}-->
@CHEN HEBING @LJY2455 Those are good starts, but you need to add references (footnotes to reliable sources). Currently, both of your articles are missing footnotes. Please remember that only referenced content can be added to English Wikipedia and only such content will count for credit. The content from Chinese article that has no references needs to be referenced first before being published. See Wikipedia:Verifiability for more information. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:33, 7 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241007073300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241007073300-CHEN_HEBING-20241006105500","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I am taking a class on understanding small and big data. My classmate ZHANGQI and I decided to use "Longquanyi" as our homework. "Longquanyi" is an administrative district of Chengdu city. I have briefly made some preliminary introduction to this entry so far, if the professor agrees with us on this topic, my classmates and I will revise the layout and then officially start the assignment.
Thank you Peter011008 (talk) 11:32, 6 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241006113200","author":"Peter011008","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Peter011008-20241006113200-Deadline3:LIU_ZIFU_2","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241007073400-Peter011008-20241006113200"]}}-->
@Peter011008 As discussed, this is approved as Chengdu/Longquanyi Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:34, 7 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241007073400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241007073400-Peter011008-20241006113200","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor:
I'm taking "Media Trends and Globalization" Among the Deadline 4 task, I've translated an article in English and added references to my personal sandbox
Please check it out, thank you! Minazhuang777 (talk) 12:23, 6 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241006122300","author":"Minazhuang777","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Minazhuang777-20241006122300-Deadline4:_ZHUANG_MINNA","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241007074800-Minazhuang777-20241006122300"]}}-->
@Minazhuang777 This is looking very good. Now, we need to fix errors with references. Please install this wiki tool (User:Headbomb/unreliable). Then you will see which references in your article are marked in red (are unreliable). They need to be replaced by better ones. For example, several sources in your article are to Wikipedia:GLOBALTIMES, which has been banned from Wikipedia due to too many fake news and propaganda. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:48, 7 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241007074800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241007074800-Minazhuang777-20241006122300","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I'm taking "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis"
The first draft is here. At the same time, I've done one extra edit and showed it to you in class, you guided me to publish it. You can check it here.
Thanks~ Leeinm (talk) 12:57, 6 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241006125700","author":"Leeinm","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Leeinm-20241006125700-Deadline_3(Week_5)-LI_LINLIN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241007075300-Leeinm-20241006125700"]}}-->
@Leeinm Good. You should publish your draft Wikivoyage article about Burqin soon as well. Good job Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:53, 7 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241007075300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241007075300-Leeinm-20241006125700","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor,
I am taking a class on understanding small and big data.This is my job. I have perfected this place in Yancheng.
here is link:https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/Yancheng白诗棋 (talk) 13:52, 6 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241006135200","author":"\u767d\u8bd7\u68cb","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-\u767d\u8bd7\u68cb-20241006135200-Deadline_3:_Week_5\u767d\u8bd7\u68cb","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241007080300-\u767d\u8bd7\u68cb-20241006135200"]}}-->
Please make sure to add your content as proper listings, with addresses, GPS coordinates, and names in English and Chinese. Right now much of the content you added reads like AI-generated hallucinations that are hard to verify. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:03, 7 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241007080300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241007080300-\u767d\u8bd7\u68cb-20241006135200","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I'm taking "Media Trends and Globalization" with @Kylo09
Among the Deadline 4 tasks, I'm attaching the outline from my sandbox. Please check it.[[53]]
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@Yeomll This is a good start. Please make sure to add English title to your book titles using the 'translated title' parameter, and quote the relevant book range (which pages contain the information cited?). Please try to use high quality English references on this topic found here. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:06, 7 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241007080600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241007080600-Yeomll-20241006140600","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I am taking a class on understanding small and big data with @Kylo09 .
This is our job.
We have perfected this place in Jining. here is link:[[54]]
—Yeomll (talk) 14:27, 6 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241006142700","author":"Yeomll","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Yeomll-20241006142700-Deadline3:SHAO_TIANYI_&ZHONG_QI","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241007080700-Yeomll-20241006142700"]}}-->
@Yeomll Ok - see above for my suggestions. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:07, 7 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241007080700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241007080700-Yeomll-20241006142700","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
In the Deadline 4 mission, I've attached an outline from the sandbox. This is my link.Please check it out. Buryab0ne (talk) 14:50, 6 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241006145000","author":"Buryab0ne","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Buryab0ne-20241006145000-Deadline4:QIAN_ZIYI","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241007081000-Buryab0ne-20241006145000"]}}-->
@Buryab0ne Good start. Please improve your references:
Please remember that only referenced content can be added to English Wikipedia and only such content will count for credit. The content from Chinese article that has no references needs to be referenced first before being translated. See Wikipedia:Verifiability On the bright side, you can get extra credit for adding footnotes to the Korean article
Please format the references so that they have an English title (in addition to the Chinese), and other information (author, date, publisher).
Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:10, 7 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241007081000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241007081000-Buryab0ne-20241006145000","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I'm taking "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis" and "Media Trends and Globalization".
I am working on two topics, and I have completed the sandbox editing for Media Trends and Globalization, which is one of the topics that I need to translate.
Please check it. Thank you! Uuueol (talk) 16:13, 6 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241006161300","author":"Uuueol","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Uuueol-20241006161300-Deadline4:_GUAN_YUE","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241007081000-Uuueol-20241006161300"]}}-->
@Uuueol Good start. Now please move your draft from English Wikipedia to Chinese WikipediaPiotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:10, 7 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241007081000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241007081000-Uuueol-20241006161300","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Dear Professor.
I am studying “Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis” and “Media Trends and Globalization”.
I am working on two topics,I finished the translation of one of them and this is my sandbox edit!
Please check it out. Thanks! Cuicuizan (talk) 16:25, 6 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241006162500","author":"Cuicuizan","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Cuicuizan-20241006162500-Deadline4:_CUI_ZAN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241007081100-Cuicuizan-20241006162500"]}}-->
@Cuicuizan Good. When you have translated most content, you can publish your article by moving the draft to the mainspace (see zh:Help:页面重命名 on how to do this) Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:11, 7 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241007081100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241007081100-Cuicuizan-20241006162500","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I am studying “Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis” and “Media Trends and Globalization”.
We are working on two topics,I finished the translation of one of them and this is my sandbox edit!
Please check it out. Thanks! Limengchen2777 (talk) 04:12, 7 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241007041200","author":"Limengchen2777","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Limengchen2777-20241007041200-Deadline4:LI_MENGCHEN&HONG_HAOTIAN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241007081500-Limengchen2777-20241007041200"]}}-->
@Limengchen2777 Please see my comment to your groupmate above. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:15, 7 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241007081500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241007081500-Limengchen2777-20241007041200","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor,I have completed the sandbox editing of Media Trends and Globalization. Please check it.Thank you. Hanyuanyuan613 (talk) 04:20, 7 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241007042000","author":"Hanyuanyuan613","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Hanyuanyuan613-20241007042000-Deadline_4:HAN_YUANYUAN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241007081500-Hanyuanyuan613-20241007042000"]}}-->
@Hanyuanyuan613 Good. When you have translated most content, you can publish your article by moving the draft to the mainspace (see zh:Help:页面重命名 on how to do this) Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:15, 7 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241007081500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241007081500-Hanyuanyuan613-20241007042000","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor:
I'm taking "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis" and "Media Trends and Globalization".
I have completed the sandbox editing Underground Gardens
Please check it. Thank you! 白诗棋 (talk) 05:22, 7 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241007052200","author":"\u767d\u8bd7\u68cb","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-\u767d\u8bd7\u68cb-20241007052200-Deadline4:\u767d\u8bd7\u68cb","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241007081800-\u767d\u8bd7\u68cb-20241007052200"]}}-->
I assume this is an extra credit project, as I don't have 'underground gardens' recorded in your main project information.
Is this a translation of a Chinese article or your own work?
In either case, please remember that only referenced content can be added to English Wikipedia and only such content will count for credit. The content from Chinese article that has no references needs to be referenced first before being translated. See Wikipedia:Verifiability On the bright side, you can get extra credit for adding footnotes to the Korean article. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:18, 7 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241007081800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241007081800-\u767d\u8bd7\u68cb-20241007052200","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor, I have finished editing the draft of Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis. Please check it.Sanmenxia.My teammate is Ma Chenxiao@Mcx8202229. HYH031277777 (talk) 05:53, 7 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241007055300","author":"HYH031277777","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-HYH031277777-20241007055300-Deadline_3\uff1aHUANG_YANHAN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241007081900-HYH031277777-20241007055300"]}}-->
@HYH031277777 Good progress Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:19, 7 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241007081900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241007081900-HYH031277777-20241007055300","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Thank you for your checking. SHENZIHE (talk) 06:41, 7 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241007064100","author":"SHENZIHE","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-SHENZIHE-20241007064100-Deadline_3:_SHENZIHE","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241007082700-SHENZIHE-20241007064100"]}}-->
@SHENZIHE Good progress Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:27, 7 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241007082700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241007082700-SHENZIHE-20241007064100","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor,I have completed the sandbox editing of Media Trends and Globalization. Please check it.Thank you. HYH031277777 (talk) 08:05, 7 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241007080500","author":"HYH031277777","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-HYH031277777-20241007080500-Deadline4(week5)HUANGYANHAN_2","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241007082800-HYH031277777-20241007080500"]}}-->
@HYH031277777 Good start. Please make sure to add references to your article. Please remember that only referenced content can be added to English Wikipedia and only such content will count for credit. The content from Chinese article that has no references needs to be referenced first before being translated. See Wikipedia:VerifiabilityPiotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:28, 7 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241007082800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241007082800-HYH031277777-20241007080500","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I'm taking "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis'.Among the Deadline 3 tasks, I have attached the content from my sandbox. Please check.thank you~~https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/User:Laoxinyi/sandbox thank you!!Laoxinyi (talk) 11:23, 6 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241006112300","author":"Laoxinyi","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Laoxinyi-20241006112300-Deadline_3:_LAOXINYI","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241007061400-Laoxinyi-20241006112300"]}}-->
@Laoxinyi Please add some properly formatted listings, as well as the introduction paragraph, then publish your article in the mainspace by moving it or copying the content to a new article, correctly named. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here06:14, 7 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241007061400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241007061400-Laoxinyi-20241006112300","replies":["c-Laoxinyi-20241007091400-Hanyangprofessor2-20241007061400"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Thank you for the professor's advice. I will make modifications according to the professor's advice and then publish the article in the main space. Thank you~~!Laoxinyi (talk) 09:14, 7 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241007091400","author":"Laoxinyi","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Laoxinyi-20241007091400-Hanyangprofessor2-20241007061400","replies":[]}}-->
@Laoxinyi It looks good. Per my previous comment I suggest you work together with another student to finish this - once you think the translation is done, you can publish your work by moving the draft to the mainspace (see zh:Help:页面重命名 on how to do this). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here06:13, 7 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241007061300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241007061300-Laoxinyi-20241006111500","replies":["c-Laoxinyi-20241007123300-Hanyangprofessor2-20241007061300"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
@Hanyangprofessor2Ok, Professor, I have received your reply, and after discussion with this student, I have decided to form a group to complete the Chinese translation of this Wikipedia article about "Multicultural families in Korea". Please confirm. Laoxinyi (talk) 12:33, 7 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241007123300","author":"Laoxinyi","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Laoxinyi-20241007123300-Hanyangprofessor2-20241007061300","replies":[]}}-->
Dear Professor: I'm taking "Media Trends and Globalization"
I am translating the article "Future" and have finished the outline.
Please check YZY2233 (talk) 13:20, 6 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241006132000","author":"YZY2233","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-YZY2233-20241006132000-Deadline4:_YUE_ZIYI","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241007075600-YZY2233-20241006132000"]}}-->
@YZY2233 Please make sure to address the issues raised in the top (in the banner) on your Chinese article. I see you have also received a message on your Chinese talk page. You should try to fix those issues soon, otherwise your content could be deleted and/or your account banned, which will make it difficult for you to finish your project.
@ZhaoFJx I will add here that the student is translating article from English Wikipedia, so it should not be triggering copypaste/copyvio warnings? Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:56, 7 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241007075600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241007075600-YZY2233-20241006132000","replies":["c-YZY2233-20241007101700-Hanyangprofessor2-20241007075600","c-ZhaoFJx-20241007232200-Hanyangprofessor2-20241007075600"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
OK, Professor. I have also noticed the message from the administrator. I will revise the question carefully. YZY2233 (talk) 10:17, 7 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241007101700","author":"YZY2233","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-YZY2233-20241007101700-Hanyangprofessor2-20241007075600","replies":[]}}-->
Got it. Seems like some Chinese external websites used enwiki texts in their content, so the Future article is similar to other external websites. Thus, as long as it is from enwiki orginlly, the article should be fine. Sincerely ZhaoFJx(T)23:22, 7 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241007232200","author":"ZhaoFJx","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-ZhaoFJx-20241007232200-Hanyangprofessor2-20241007075600","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241008060900-ZhaoFJx-20241007232200"]}}-->
@ZhaoFJx Thank you for the update Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here06:09, 8 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241008060900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241008060900-ZhaoFJx-20241007232200","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Dear Professor:
I'm taking "Media Trends and Globalization"and "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis"
I completed the sandbox editing and added the reference.Here is the link
Please check. Thanks. Caizzz (talk) 12:16, 26 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240926121600","author":"Caizzz","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Caizzz-20240926121600-Deadline3:_CAI_ZHIHANG","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240927134200-Caizzz-20240926121600"]}}-->
@Caizzz Good start, but that assignment shoudl be done outside the sandbox. Sandbox is for your own practice. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here13:42, 27 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240927134200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240927134200-Caizzz-20240926121600","replies":["c-Caizzz-20240930041500-Hanyangprofessor2-20240927134200"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Here is the new link I marked the frosting https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E6%A4%B0%E5%AD%90%E8%9B%8B%E7%B3%95Caizzz (talk) 04:15, 30 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240930041500","author":"Caizzz","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Caizzz-20240930041500-Hanyangprofessor2-20240927134200","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240930050300-Caizzz-20240930041500"]}}-->
@Caizzz Wikipedia cannot be used as a reference for itself. Please add a reference that is realiable (read: Wikipedia:Reliable sources) Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:03, 30 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240930050300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240930050300-Caizzz-20240930041500","replies":["c-Caizzz-20240930053000-Hanyangprofessor2-20240930050300"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
@Caizzz You repeated the same error. Please read what I wrote, as well as WP:SPSPiotrus at Hanyang| reply here06:40, 30 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240930064000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":6,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240930064000-Caizzz-20240930053000","replies":["c-Caizzz-20241007063100-Hanyangprofessor2-20240930064000"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Note 23 Reference to Dragon Boat Race Caizzz (talk) 06:31, 7 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241007063100","author":"Caizzz","type":"comment","level":7,"id":"c-Caizzz-20241007063100-Hanyangprofessor2-20240930064000","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241007073100-Caizzz-20241007063100"]}}-->
@Caizzz Please note that your edit was reverted (rejected) by reviewing editors, because you used a low quality source (see Wikipedia:BAIDU). As Baidu has too many errors, it is not allowed to be a source on Wikipedia. Please try again, this time with a reliable source. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:31, 7 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241007073100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":8,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241007073100-Caizzz-20241007063100","replies":["c-Caizzz-20241007111100-Hanyangprofessor2-20241007073100"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Note 23 Reference to Dragon Boat Race Caizzz (talk) 11:11, 7 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241007111100","author":"Caizzz","type":"comment","level":9,"id":"c-Caizzz-20241007111100-Hanyangprofessor2-20241007073100","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241008061200-Caizzz-20241007111100"]}}-->
@Caizzz Ok Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here06:12, 8 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241008061200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":10,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241008061200-Caizzz-20241007111100","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Parkjeongeun0430 (talk) 20:13, 1 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241001201300","author":"Parkjeongeun0430","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Parkjeongeun0430-20241001201300-Deadline_3_:_Jeongeun_Park","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241002070300-Parkjeongeun0430-20241001201300"]}}-->
Please sign your posts properly - your username is @Parkjeongeun0430 not @Parkjeongeun430 . Please sign using the button, not manually
For deadline 3 for Globalization class, please add a reference to an unreferenced content, not as a general reference to a related article. Please find a sentence that has no reference and add a reference to it. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:03, 2 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241002070300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241002070300-Parkjeongeun0430-20241001201300","replies":["c-Parkjeongeun0430-20241004054200-Hanyangprofessor2-20241002070300"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
@Parkjeongeun0430 Unfortunately, this is still not correct. You added an external link in the body (see Wikipedia:External links) and a footnote at the bottom of the article. Please watch our video in the LMS on how to add references, and/or check the Training for Students module on this, then try again. Or come see my in my office and I'll demonstrate. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:13, 5 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241005041300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241005041300-Parkjeongeun0430-20241004054200","replies":["c-Parkjeongeun0430-20241007134000-Hanyangprofessor2-20241005041300"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Professor, I modified deadline 3 of Media Trend and Globalization.
@Parkjeongeun0430 Very good, now this is correct Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here06:14, 8 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241008061400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":6,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241008061400-Parkjeongeun0430-20241007134000","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Lesson 2: "Understanding Small Data and Big Data through Wikis" This week I have added content to the topic: Ruili.
Thank you for your checking. Jihaiyun (talk) 05:36, 4 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241004053600","author":"Jihaiyun","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Jihaiyun-20241004053600-Deadline_3:_JIHAIYUN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241006064700-Jihaiyun-20241004053600"]}}-->
@Jihaiyun @Laoxinyi Good. As you may be aware, your Chinese translation was moved to a draft space by Chinese Wikipedia administrators, as the current version was not good enough to make public. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here06:47, 6 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241006064700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241006064700-Jihaiyun-20241004053600","replies":["c-Laoxinyi-20241006110700-Hanyangprofessor2-20241006064700"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
@Jihaiyun @Laoxinyi I see. It seems that there is an error in our assignment of articles, as both of you are listed in my spreadsheet as translating this article to Chinese . To keep it simple and easy, I recommend that the two of you work together on translating this as a group. I will allow it as an exception to the group projects that require each group to translate an article into English. Instead, you can just translate this one together and finish your second translation individually.
Otherwise one of you will have to reselect the topic. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here06:11, 7 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241007061100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241007061100-Laoxinyi-20241006110700","replies":["c-Jihaiyun-20241007122600-Hanyangprofessor2-20241007061100"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
@Hanyangprofessor2 @LaoxinyiOk, Professor, I have received your reply, and after discussion with this student, I have decided to form a group to complete the Chinese translation of this Wikipedia article about "Multicultural families in Korea". Please confirm. Jihaiyun (talk) 12:26, 7 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241007122600","author":"Jihaiyun","type":"comment","level":5,"id":"c-Jihaiyun-20241007122600-Hanyangprofessor2-20241007061100","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241008061500-Jihaiyun-20241007122600"]}}-->
@Jihaiyun @Laoxinyi Good, approved Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here06:15, 8 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241008061500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":6,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241008061500-Jihaiyun-20241007122600","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Dear Professor, I am QU HONGYU. I am taking of your lecture: Media Trends and Globalization.
Me and my group members @Linlin406. Two articles have been selected for editing: this is the article translated from Chinese to English article, and this is the article translated from English to Chinese article. Please check it. Thank you~ Pineappleq (talk) 04:37, 27 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240927043700","author":"Pineappleq","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Pineappleq-20240927043700-Deadline2:_QU_HONGYU&_LIN_AIJIA","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240927135100-Pineappleq-20240927043700"]}}-->
@Pineappleq The en to zh topic (Derrick Rose) is fine, but the other topic is not better in zh then on (世界旅游日) and you need to choose another topic.
Also, @Linlin406 needs to sign our student spreadsheet, as I do not have their name or username recorded. Please stop by my office hours do fix that. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here13:51, 27 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240927135100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240927135100-Pineappleq-20240927043700","replies":["c-124.52.58.231-20240927150100-Hanyangprofessor2-20240927135100"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor, I am QU HONGYU. I am taking of your lecture: Media Trends and Globalization.
Me and my group members @Linlin406. Two articles have been selected for editing: this is the article translated from Chinese to English article, and this is the article translated from English to Chinese article. Please check it. Thank you~ 124.52.58.231 (talk) 15:01, 27 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240927150100","author":"124.52.58.231","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-124.52.58.231-20240927150100-Hanyangprofessor2-20240927135100","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240930033900-124.52.58.231-20240927150100"]}}-->
@Pineappleq 2014 Mount Ontake eruption is already covered sufficiently on zh wiki, and I have already approved your proposal to translate Derrick Rose, so I don't see the need to change.
Translating of World Tourism Day from Chinese to English is pointless, as it is already better in English than Chinese, so this is denied. If you cannot choose a topic by yourself, please stop by my office hours. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:39, 30 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240930033900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240930033900-124.52.58.231-20240927150100","replies":["c-218.235.241.135-20240930041000-Hanyangprofessor2-20240930033900"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor, I've changed the content, please check it outTwo articles have been selected for editing: this is the article translated from Chinese to English article, and this is the article translated from English to Chinese article. Please check it. Thank you~ 218.235.241.135 (talk) 04:10, 30 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240930041000","author":"218.235.241.135","type":"comment","level":5,"id":"c-218.235.241.135-20240930041000-Hanyangprofessor2-20240930033900","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240930050500-218.235.241.135-20240930041000"]}}-->
Again, 沈腾 looks no better in zh then in en. Please stop by my office and we will discuss some ideas for you. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:05, 30 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240930050500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":6,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240930050500-218.235.241.135-20240930041000","replies":["c-Pineappleq-20241009071100-Hanyangprofessor2-20240930050500"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello professor, maybe this article is okay? Chinese to EnglishPineappleq (talk) 07:11, 9 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241009071100","author":"Pineappleq","type":"comment","level":7,"id":"c-Pineappleq-20241009071100-Hanyangprofessor2-20240930050500","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241010075400-Pineappleq-20241009071100"]}}-->
@Pineappleq Hmmm, this is a bit outside my usual area of expertise, and it translates badly using machine translation, so I am not sure if this has an English term and whether this is notable (important) in Chinese. I'll ask some experienced Wikipedians fluent with Chinese whether they think this meets Wikipedia:Notability: @TheLonelyPather @Folly Mox
Do you guys think this article is worthwhile to translate to English? Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:54, 10 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241010075400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":8,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241010075400-Pineappleq-20241009071100","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
@Hanyangdaxue If you are translating from English to Chinese, you can reuse references from English article. You only need to find references for content that does not have references (footnote). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:41, 6 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241006074100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241006074100-Hanyangdaxue-20241006022800","replies":["c-Hanyangdaxue-20241009071000-Hanyangprofessor2-20241006074100"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Hanyangdaxue/%E6%B2%99%E7%9B%92 Dear teacher, I modified it, thank you. Hanyangdaxue (talk) 07:10, 9 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241009071000","author":"Hanyangdaxue","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Hanyangdaxue-20241009071000-Hanyangprofessor2-20241006074100","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241010075900-Hanyangdaxue-20241009071000"]}}-->
@Hanyangdaxue You have added more content, but your references are still wrong, as described above. If you don't understand, come to my office and I'll explain more. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:59, 10 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241010075900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241010075900-Hanyangdaxue-20241009071000","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Thank you for your checking. YZY2233 (talk) 11:50, 8 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241008115000","author":"YZY2233","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-YZY2233-20241008115000-Deadline_3:_YUE_ZIYI_&_SHU_YING","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241010080100-YZY2233-20241008115000"]}}-->
@YZY2233 Good progress. Check the changes by experienced editor here, and try to implement them in your other listings if necessary. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:01, 10 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241010080100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241010080100-YZY2233-20241008115000","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello professor. My computer was down last week but I made it up this week. I have translated about 1600 words of the project article in the sandbox. I will continue to expand this article. Please check it, thank you. WSH0927 (talk) 14:57, 8 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241008145700","author":"WSH0927","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-WSH0927-20241008145700-Deadline_4:_WU_SHUHAN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241010081200-WSH0927-20241008145700"]}}-->
@WSH0927 Good progress. If a term exists in Chinese Wikipedia and has an article there, but not on English Wikipedia, please use Template:Interlanguage link to link it. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:12, 10 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241010081200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241010081200-WSH0927-20241008145700","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Please check.Thank you. Hyodong318 (talk) 13:49, 6 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241006134900","author":"Hyodong318","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Hyodong318-20241006134900-Deadline4:ZHANG_XIAOTONG","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241007075700-Hyodong318-20241006134900"]}}-->
@Hyodong318 Good start. Now please move your draft from English Wikipedia to Chinese WikipediaPiotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:57, 7 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241007075700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241007075700-Hyodong318-20241006134900","replies":["c-Hyodong318-20241008100400-Hanyangprofessor2-20241007075700"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I've moved the draft to Chinese Wikipedia. Here's my sandbox. Please check it again. Hyodong318 (talk) 10:04, 8 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241008100400","author":"Hyodong318","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Hyodong318-20241008100400-Hanyangprofessor2-20241007075700","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241010080000-Hyodong318-20241008100400"]}}-->
@Hyodong318 Good, now keep up your work translating missing content. Don't forget to link important terms to relevant Chinese Wikipedia article (add blue links). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:00, 10 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241010080000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241010080000-Hyodong318-20241008100400","replies":["c-Hyodong318-20241011061300-Hanyangprofessor2-20241010080000"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I've translated the article in my sandbox and added a blue link. Hyodong318 (talk) 06:13, 11 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241011061300","author":"Hyodong318","type":"comment","level":5,"id":"c-Hyodong318-20241011061300-Hanyangprofessor2-20241010080000","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241011072200-Hyodong318-20241011061300"]}}-->
@Hyodong318 Good progress. When you have translated most content, you can publish your article by moving the draft to the mainspace (see zh:Help:页面重命名 on how to do this) Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:22, 11 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241011072200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":6,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241011072200-Hyodong318-20241011061300","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor:
I'm Study "Media Trends and Globalization"
In the Deadline 4 mission, I've attached an outline from the sandbox. This is my link.Please check it out. Xjx921 (talk) 04:03, 7 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241007040300","author":"Xjx921","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Xjx921-20241007040300-Deadline4\uff1aXI_JIAXIN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241007081300-Xjx921-20241007040300"]}}-->
@Xjx921 I see. If you are translating the content to English, please move it from Chinese to English Wikipedia. You should work on it in your sandbox on English Wikipedia. By working on it in the wrong language project, many errors can occur. After moving, please fix errors in links and references. It cannot be published until those errors are fixed. I will give you a new review after the content is moved to English Wikipedia - pleaes ping me when you have done so. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:13, 7 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241007081300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241007081300-Xjx921-20241007040300","replies":["c-Xjx921-20241011060400-Hanyangprofessor2-20241007081300"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello, Professor!
I have moved the article from the Chinese Wikipedia to the English Wikipedia sandbox. This is the link, please check! Thank you! Xjx921 (talk) 06:04, 11 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241011060400","author":"Xjx921","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Xjx921-20241011060400-Hanyangprofessor2-20241007081300","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241011072300-Xjx921-20241011060400"]}}-->
@Xjx921 Good. Please keep improving your draft, as you can see, it was for now declined from English Wikipedia (not made public) because it is mostly unreferenced (See Wikipedia:Verifiability). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:23, 11 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241011072300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241011072300-Xjx921-20241011060400","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor: I am taking two courses, "Media Trends and Globalization" and "Understanding Small Data and Big Data through Wikis."
Lesson 1"Media Trends and Globalization" : I edited my topic "Unemployment in China" in the sandbox (converted from Chinese to English). Additionally, I checked the terms of service on the Chinese government's website, and only articles with specific authorship require copyright fees. Since my citation is from publicly available information, there is no need to pay. However, I still followed your suggestion to change the language order, and after rechecking, the similarity rate has been reduced to 7%.Thank you for your guidance.
Lesson 2"Understanding Small Data and Big Data through Wikis" :I have completed part of the editing for the topic on Dazu
Thank you for your checking. Wuwenhao19960507 (talk) 15:26, 8 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241008152600","author":"Wuwenhao19960507","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Wuwenhao19960507-20241008152600-Deadline_4:_Wu_wenhao","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241011073400-Wuwenhao19960507-20241008152600"]}}-->
@Wuwenhao19960507 Excellent progress. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:34, 11 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241011073400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241011073400-Wuwenhao19960507-20241008152600","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Thank you for your checking. MUYW (talk) 14:48, 10 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241010144800","author":"MUYW","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-MUYW-20241010144800-Deadline2\uff1aMUYE","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241011073400-MUYW-20241010144800"]}}-->
@MUYW Good, both are recorded and confirmed Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:34, 11 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241011073400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241011073400-MUYW-20241010144800","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Thank you. Dbinni (talk) 13:38, 11 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241011133800","author":"Dbinni","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Dbinni-20241011133800-Dbinni-20241007082400","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241014015400-Dbinni-20241011133800"]}}-->
@Dbinni Good progress Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here01:54, 14 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241014015400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":5,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241014015400-Dbinni-20241011133800","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
This is our Deadline4 for Media Trends and Globalization 1
This is our Dealine4 for Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis 2Babaibiaobin (talk) 12:24, 11 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241011122400","author":"Babaibiaobin","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Babaibiaobin-20241011122400-Deadline4:gaoxiaoxia\/chensiting","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241014015600-Babaibiaobin-20241011122400"]}}-->
@Babaibiaobin Good progress. Please monitor the Chinese article to see if the Chinese reviewers will have any comments. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here01:56, 14 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241014015600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241014015600-Babaibiaobin-20241011122400","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Deadline 3 : Wang Tao-Media Trends and Globalization
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Hello Professor this is the reference I added, please check。Have a nice weekend!
@Wangtao626 Good. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here01:57, 14 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241014015700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241014015700-Wangtao626-20241011125900","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Regarding the English article: You will need to fix errors in the references; if the automatic generation does not work, you will need to fill in the citation templates manually - please let me know if you need help.
If a term exists in Korean Wikipedia and has an article there, but not on English Wikipedia, please use Template:Interlanguage link to link it. If you need help, I can demonstrate how to use it.
Regarding the Korean article:
Once you think the translation is done, you can publish your work by moving the draft to the mainspace (see ko:위키백과:문서_이동 on how to do this) Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:03, 14 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241014020300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241014020300-Dbinni-20241011133000","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Thank you.
Jaeyun01 (talk) 04:33, 12 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241012043300","author":"Jaeyun01","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Jaeyun01-20241012043300-Deadline_4_:_Jung_Jaeyun","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241014020500-Jaeyun01-20241012043300"]}}-->
@Jaeyun01: If a term exists in English Wikipedia and has an article there, but not on Korean Wikipedia, please use this tool ko:틀:임시링크 to link it. If you need help, I can demonstrate how to use it. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:05, 14 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241014020500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241014020500-Jaeyun01-20241012043300","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Hello professor, I have completed the expansion of some of the content in this Wikitravel article. I made this editing in a public article. If allowed to do so, please help me review it. thank you very much. Jzhdylb (talk) 07:06, 12 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241012070600","author":"Jzhdylb","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Jzhdylb-20241012070600-Deadline_4_:_FAN_XINRU","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241014020600-Jzhdylb-20241012070600"]}}-->
@Jzhdylb Good. Please try to add more listings. For the festival, please try to add dates and location too. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:06, 14 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241014020600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241014020600-Jzhdylb-20241012070600","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Sorry professor, I made a mistake in my homework before, and created a sandbox aboutFamily in South Korea. Later I changed it to edit the Wiki Travel of Taierzhuang. Is my editing correct? If there is an error, I will correct it immediately. If there is no problem, I will expand more content. Thank you. Bai0926 (talk) 13:58, 13 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241013135800","author":"Bai0926","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Bai0926-20241013135800-Deadline4(Week5)_BAILINHAN_4","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241014021100-Bai0926-20241013135800"]}}-->
@Bai0926 This is ok, but you should add elements we learned in class - listings, maps, climate graph, banner, etc. Right now your article does not look well formatted. I have removed content that was poorly written and of little interest to the tourists. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:11, 14 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241014021100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241014021100-Bai0926-20241013135800","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Thank you for your checking. 122.36.107.57 (talk) 14:17, 13 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241013141700","author":"122.36.107.57","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-122.36.107.57-20241013141700-Deadline_3:_MUYE","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241014021500-122.36.107.57-20241013141700"]}}-->
Dear student. Please remember to log in before making edits, otherwise you cannot sign your posts and I cannot ping you.
For your draft, please add properly formatted listings, and fix GPS errors in your current locations, which as you can see are not correct (see map). Then please add the climate section with graph and a banner, as we learned in class. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:15, 14 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241014021500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241014021500-122.36.107.57-20241013141700","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello professor, these are the 20 editing tasks I have completed for two Wikipedia articles. Please review them. Thank you very much.1.2. Jzhdylb (talk) 14:18, 13 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241013141800","author":"Jzhdylb","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Jzhdylb-20241013141800-Deadline_4---FAN_XINRU","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241014022000-Jzhdylb-20241013141800"]}}-->
@Jzhdylb Good. Please join the discussion at Talk:Shawn Dou as another editor has criticized the content you added there. I asked them to provide more detail. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:20, 14 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241014022000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241014022000-Jzhdylb-20241013141800","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor I have finished most of the translation of the first article, I have completed the User:MUYW/sandbox - Wikipedia editing of Media Trends and Globalization. Please check it.Thank you. 122.36.107.57 (talk) 14:29, 13 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241013142900","author":"122.36.107.57","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-122.36.107.57-20241013142900-Deadline_4:MUYE","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241014022200-122.36.107.57-20241013142900"]}}-->
If your content is a translation of English article to Chinese, please move your draft from English Wikipedia to Chinese Wikipedia. Then please fix any errors such as broken references and other code issues. For content in Chinese, you should work in Chinese Wikipedia, not English. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:22, 14 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241014022200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241014022200-122.36.107.57-20241013142900","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I hope this message finds you well. I apologize for interrupting your busy schedule. I have sent you an email regarding a matter that is quite urgent. I would greatly appreciate it if you could take a moment to review it.
Thank you very much for your time. Lihaochang678 (talk) 12:21, 14 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241014122100","author":"Lihaochang678","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Lihaochang678-20241014122100-Li_Haochang's_request.","replies":[]}}-->
User:WANGRUITONG: Good, but please remember to WP:SIGN your posts. Also, I cannot see your edits at the linked page (https://zh.wikivoyage.org/w/index.php?title=%E8%8D%94%E6%B3%A2&action=history) --Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:25, 7 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241007072500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241007072500-Deadline_3:_WANGRUITONG","replies":["c-WANGRUITONG-20241014092600-Hanyangprofessor2-20241007072500","c-WANGRUITONG-20241014133200-Hanyangprofessor2-20241007072500"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Please check again. Understanding Small Data and Big Data through Wikis" This week I have added content to the link https://zh.wikivoyage.org/wiki/%E8%8D%94%E6%B3%A2WANGRUITONG (talk) 09:26, 14 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241014092600","author":"WANGRUITONG","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-WANGRUITONG-20241014092600-Hanyangprofessor2-20241007072500","replies":[]}}-->
I'm sorry, my wikivoyage nickname is Tiztt. WANGRUITONG (talk) 13:32, 14 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241014133200","author":"WANGRUITONG","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-WANGRUITONG-20241014133200-Hanyangprofessor2-20241007072500","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241015011500-WANGRUITONG-20241014133200"]}}-->
@WANGRUITONG Please use the same single account for all your editing on all wikis from now on. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here01:15, 15 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241015011500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241015011500-WANGRUITONG-20241014133200","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Deadline 3 : Zai Wei-Media Trends and Globalization
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Hello Professor, please check my citation, thanks. Have a nice weekend.
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Special:Contributions/ZAIWEI0328ZAIWEI0328 (talk) 13:02, 11 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241011130200","author":"ZAIWEI0328","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-ZAIWEI0328-20241011130200-Deadline_3_:_Zai_Wei-Media_Trends_and_Globalization","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241014015900-ZAIWEI0328-20241011130200"]}}-->
@ZAIWEI0328 Please let me know which article you edit for Deadline 3, you linked your entire history. Also, please note that the content you added here will not count for credit for our class as it is unreferenced. According to our syllabus, only referenced content is accepted, see also Wikipedia:Verifiability . Please remember that Wikipedia:BAIDU is not accepted as a source. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here01:59, 14 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241014015900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241014015900-ZAIWEI0328-20241011130200","replies":["c-ZAIWEI0328-20241014172800-Hanyangprofessor2-20241014015900"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Sorry, Professor, please check my citations in this link ZAIWEI0328 (talk) 17:28, 14 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241014172800","author":"ZAIWEI0328","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-ZAIWEI0328-20241014172800-Hanyangprofessor2-20241014015900","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241015012200-ZAIWEI0328-20241014172800"]}}-->
@ZAIWEI0328 Now it is good :) Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here01:22, 15 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241015012200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241015012200-ZAIWEI0328-20241014172800","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Thank you for your checking. Ydaeun0306 (talk) 06:17, 14 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241014061700","author":"Ydaeun0306","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Ydaeun0306-20241014061700-Deadline_3_:_Yoon_Daeun_&_Jeong_seolah","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241015012800-Ydaeun0306-20241014061700"]}}-->
@Ydaeun0306 Good progress. Please remove unnecessary bolding from your article (compare your article to others, like Ansan or others). A lot of content in your article is using bullet points, which is not always good; it makes your article look like an
AI-generated text that was not formatted properly (again, compare your article with other good articles on Wikivoyage). Please rewrite content that is not listing into prose, adding listings / markers with GPS coordinates as needed. If you are not sure how to fix this, stop by my office and I will show you. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here01:28, 15 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241015012800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241015012800-Ydaeun0306-20241014061700","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Dear Professor.
I'm taking "Media Trends and Globalization" Among the Deadline 4 task. I did it with Jeong Aram, a member of group. @Jeong Aram
I've done some exercises to add a Director's experience to the sandbox and I've also inserted that into the actual Wikipedia minorities in south korea Please check this linkJo HyeonSeong (talk) 06:09, 13 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241013060900","author":"Jo HyeonSeong","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Jo_HyeonSeong-20241013060900-Deadline_4_:_Jo_HyeonSeong","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241014020600-Jo_HyeonSeong-20241013060900"]}}-->
@Jo HyeonSeong If you want me to a review your work, please link it here Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:06, 14 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241014020600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241014020600-Jo_HyeonSeong-20241013060900","replies":["c-Jo_HyeonSeong-20241014070700-Hanyangprofessor2-20241014020600"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Thank for your advice professor. I added link. Please check it. Jo HyeonSeong (talk) 07:07, 14 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241014070700","author":"Jo HyeonSeong","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Jo_HyeonSeong-20241014070700-Hanyangprofessor2-20241014020600","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241015012400-Jo_HyeonSeong-20241014070700"]}}-->
@Jo HyeonSeong Good. Your article is developed nicely. I see it was draftified to ko:초안:한국의 소수민족 @Ykhwong , presumably because your version from back then was not yet good enough for main space. Now, I hope it can be published - Ykhwong, do you agree? Or are there still issues you would like the student to fix? Thank you for taking time to inspect our work. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here01:24, 15 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241015012400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241015012400-Jo_HyeonSeong-20241014070700","replies":["c-Ykhwong-20241015014200-Hanyangprofessor2-20241015012400"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I have reviewed this article and confirmed that there are no significant issues with its quality. I've just moved it to the main namespace. ko:한국의 소수민족 Thank you. --ted (talk) 01:42, 15 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241015014200","author":"Ykhwong","type":"comment","level":5,"id":"c-Ykhwong-20241015014200-Hanyangprofessor2-20241015012400","replies":[],"displayName":"ted"}}-->
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Dear professer,
I have completed Deadline 4 of "Media Trends and Globalization".
Please check. Xisuux (talk) 06:31, 7 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241007063100","author":"Xisuux","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Xisuux-20241007063100-Deadline_4_:_Lee_jisu","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241007082100-Xisuux-20241007063100"]}}-->
@Xisuux Please double check your content. It seems you translated content of the wrong article (something related to the Russian invasion of Ukraine?), not about the Russian election of 2024. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:21, 7 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241007082100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241007082100-Xisuux-20241007063100","replies":["c-Xisuux-20241014051900-Hanyangprofessor2-20241007082100"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
When I chose the topic, I told them that I would translate from English to Korean, so I asked them to choose two topics.
So I told Deadline 2 that I would do "2024 Russian presentation" and "China and the Russian inspection of Ukraine".
I'm telling you again because I don't think it was delivered properly.
Please check it. Xisuux (talk) 05:19, 14 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241014051900","author":"Xisuux","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Xisuux-20241014051900-Hanyangprofessor2-20241007082100","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241015012000-Xisuux-20241014051900"]}}-->
@Xisuux The topics are fine, but it seems you translated Topic 2 under Topic 1 title. Please read the content and titles of your articles carefully Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here01:20, 15 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241015012000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241015012000-Xisuux-20241014051900","replies":["c-Xisuux-20241015062500-Hanyangprofessor2-20241015012000"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I revised it by reflecting the feedback.
Please check.
2022년 러시아의 우크라이나 침공과 중국Xisuux (talk) 06:25, 15 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241015062500","author":"Xisuux","type":"comment","level":5,"id":"c-Xisuux-20241015062500-Hanyangprofessor2-20241015012000","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241017012300-Xisuux-20241015062500"]}}-->
@Xisuux Good. Please check the advice that was given to you at ko:사용자토론:XisuuxPiotrus at Hanyang| reply here01:23, 17 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241017012300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":6,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241017012300-Xisuux-20241015062500","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I am taking two courses, "Media Trends and Globalization" and "Understanding Small and Big Data through Wiki".
Here are two translations of my “Media Trends and Globalization” course:Indocentrism,Asiacentrism
Here's my map extension to learn about "Understanding Small and Big Data through Wiki"course:ShangraoJiayyyyy (talk) 06:14, 16 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241016061400","author":"Jiayyyyy","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Jiayyyyy-20241016061400-Deadline_4_:_JIA_YUAN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241017013900-Jiayyyyy-20241016061400"]}}-->
@Jiayyyyy Very good. Please note that some concerns were raised at zh:亚洲中心主义 (see banner at the top). Please start a discussion at that article's talk, and ping the editors who expressed the concerns (you can see who they are in the article history), then ping them when you start a discussion, just like I ping you here. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here01:39, 17 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241017013900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241017013900-Jiayyyyy-20241016061400","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor I have finished most of the translation of the first article, I have completed the Chinese virusediting of Media Trends and Globalization. Please check it.Thank you. WANGYIZHE1124 (talk) 11:36, 15 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241015113600","author":"WANGYIZHE1124","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-WANGYIZHE1124-20241015113600-Deadline4:_WANGYIZHE","replies":["c-WANGYIZHE1124-20241015114300-WANGYIZHE1124-20241015113600","c-WANGYIZHE1124-20241017021400-WANGYIZHE1124-20241015113600"]}}-->
https://en.m.wikivoyage.org/wiki/Menghai# Understanding Small Data and Big Data WANGYIZHE1124 (talk) 11:43, 15 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241015114300","author":"WANGYIZHE1124","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-WANGYIZHE1124-20241015114300-WANGYIZHE1124-20241015113600","replies":[]}}-->
Hello. I'm taking "Media Trends and Globalization" I've done one extra edit outside of the sandbox, and I've added a reference to an article about JinChengHua Thank you. SHENZIHE (talk) 02:55, 29 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240929025500","author":"SHENZIHE","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-SHENZIHE-20240929025500-Deadline3:SHENZIHE","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240930035600-SHENZIHE-20240929025500"]}}-->
@SHENZIHE I am afraid I cannot locate your edit in that article. Please show it to me during my office hours or try again. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:56, 30 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240930035600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240930035600-SHENZIHE-20240929025500","replies":["c-SHENZIHE-20240930050500-Hanyangprofessor2-20240930035600"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I changed it again. Maybe that's okay?JinChengHuaSHENZIHE (talk) 05:05, 30 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240930050500","author":"SHENZIHE","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-SHENZIHE-20240930050500-Hanyangprofessor2-20240930035600","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240930070700-SHENZIHE-20240930050500"]}}-->
@SHENZIHE You have added a category, which is fine for an extra credit, for the activity, please show me your edit where you add a reference. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:07, 30 September 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20240930070700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20240930070700-SHENZIHE-20240930050500","replies":["c-SHENZIHE-20241011042100-Hanyangprofessor2-20240930070700"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I changed it again. Maybe that's okay?DaoXiaoMianSHENZIHE (talk) 04:21, 11 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241011042100","author":"SHENZIHE","type":"comment","level":5,"id":"c-SHENZIHE-20241011042100-Hanyangprofessor2-20240930070700","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241011072100-SHENZIHE-20241011042100"]}}-->
@SHENZIHE Please see here for why your edit was rejected from Chinese Wikipedia (see also Wikipedia:BAIDU) and try again. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:21, 11 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241011072100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":6,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241011072100-SHENZIHE-20241011042100","replies":["c-SHENZIHE-20241012132000-Hanyangprofessor2-20241011072100"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
The record of the change was deleted. I added it again in JinChengSHENZIHE (talk) 13:20, 12 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241012132000","author":"SHENZIHE","type":"comment","level":7,"id":"c-SHENZIHE-20241012132000-Hanyangprofessor2-20241011072100","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241014015200-SHENZIHE-20241012132000"]}}-->
Your new edit is not correct, as Wikipedia is not allowed to be a source for itself. Please add a reference to a reliable source (academic paper, book, or reliable newspaper. Hint: not WP:GLOBALTIMES). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here01:52, 14 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241014015200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":8,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241014015200-SHENZIHE-20241012132000","replies":["c-SHENZIHE-20241017025600-Hanyangprofessor2-20241014015200"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I have re-corrected this incorrect reference here JinChengSHENZIHE (talk) 02:56, 17 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241017025600","author":"SHENZIHE","type":"comment","level":9,"id":"c-SHENZIHE-20241017025600-Hanyangprofessor2-20241014015200","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241018024600-SHENZIHE-20241017025600"]}}-->
@SHENZIHE Your second reference here is good, but please remove your first one to Wikipedia, per the explanation here Wikipedia:List of citogenesis incidentsPiotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:46, 18 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241018024600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":10,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241018024600-SHENZIHE-20241017025600","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
@Xuan6699 This is a good start, but there are many issues to fix. First, all content (outside a brief plot summary)
that is not referenced cannot be published - you need to find references for This means you need to find references for information in the sections: Broadcast time, Cast list, Original Soundtrack, Differences from the original novel, , and fragments of the Honorary Awards (some have footnotes, but not all).
Second, Wikipedia prefers WP:PROSE to bullet points list. You should remove bullet points in your sections.
Section 'Propaganda' has a strange title. What is it about? The word Propaganda is not mentioned in the body. This reads like some random Wikipedia:TRIVIA
Section 'Differences from the original novel' seems like a case of WP:FANCRUFT and should be removed, unless you can find reliable references for this. Often, minute differences between modern novels/movies/comics are a topic that people talk about on social media, but nowhere else, and as such, they are trivial and not important enough to be discussed in an encyclopedia
Next, if the source is in Chinese (ex. 李鹏《六四日记》), please use both the Chinese and English titles. Use Chinese title in the 'title' field, and English in the 'translated title' field. If you need help, stop by my office and I'll demonstrate how to do so. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:55, 18 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241018025500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241018025500-Xuan6699-20241015064700","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor I have finished most of the translation of the first article, I have completed the Chinese virusediting of Media Trends and Globalization. Please check it.Thank you. WANGYIZHE1124 (talk) 11:35, 15 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241015113500","author":"WANGYIZHE1124","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-WANGYIZHE1124-20241015113500-Deadline4:_XU_YAN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241017013600-WANGYIZHE1124-20241015113500"]}}-->
@WANGYIZHE1124 Please post your messages in the new sections. Please post your work in your sandbox, not in the main Wikipedia space, for my review. See video guide in our LMS or come to my office if you are unsure how to create your sandbox. Your current work is not good enough for publication in public space - see also messages on your talk page. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here01:36, 17 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241017013600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241017013600-WANGYIZHE1124-20241015113500","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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@Xuan6699 I replied above to your earlier message with feedback. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:00, 18 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241018030000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241018030000-Xuan6699-20241017101100","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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I am studying "Media Trends and Globalization".
Here are two translations of my “Media Trends and Globalization” course:Mass mobilization and 杭州广播电视台. Check the link out, please.
Thank you. Sssnuan (User talk:Sssnuan) and Alexk27 (User talk:Alexk27)19:52, 18 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241018195200","author":"Alexk27","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Alexk27-20241018195200-Progress_in_translation\uff1aSHAO_JIANUAN_&_WANG_YIKE","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241021015100-Alexk27-20241018195200"]}}-->
Regarding your Chinese translation, I see some content still needs to be translated. Please let me know when you finish translating all content.
Regarding your English translation, you need to fix a number of issues:
If a term exists in Chinese Wikipedia and has an article there, but not on English Wikipedia, please use Template:Interlanguage link to link it
Please use a proper Wikipedia:INFOBOX. Copy one from an article about a similar Chinese TV station, then change the parameters.
Please make sure to add references to your article. Please remember that only referenced content can be added to English Wikipedia and only such content will count for credit. The content from Chinese article that has no references needs to be referenced first before being published, or deleted if it cannot be verified. See Wikipedia:Verifiability
Please fix errors in your citations (in red). It seems you have entered data into wrong fields, as well as made other errors (for example your reference #1 has Chinese characters in the data).
Next, if the source is in Chinese (ex. 李鹏《六四日记》), please use both the Chinese and English titles. Use Chinese title in the 'title' field, and English in the 'translated title' field.
If you need help, stop by my office and I'll demonstrate how to do so
Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here01:51, 21 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241021015100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241021015100-Alexk27-20241018195200","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Dear professor, I have done the Wikipedia Sandbox editing of Media Trends and Globalization and Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis, here are the links,User:Mcx8202229/sandboxhttps://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/Sanmenxiaplease check Mcx8202229 🇨🇳❤️ (talk)09:18, 19 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241019091800","author":"Mcx8202229","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Mcx8202229-20241019091800-Deadline_5_Ma_Chenxiao_2","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241021015500-Mcx8202229-20241019091800"]}}-->
Regarding your Wikipedia translation, please fix the following:
Please make sure to add references to your article. Please remember that only referenced content can be added to English Wikipedia and only such content will count for credit. The content from Chinese article that has no references needs to be referenced first before being published, or deleted if it cannot be verified. See Wikipedia:Verifiability .
If a term exists in Chinese Wikipedia and has an article there, but not on English Wikipedia, please use Template:Interlanguage link to link it
Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here01:55, 21 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241021015500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241021015500-Mcx8202229-20241019091800","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello, Professor. I am very sorry. I just found out that my blog has not been added and there is no way to publish it. Please invite me again. My email address is z2730151905@163.com.
Thank you!! Zhangzhang111 (talk) 09:36, 19 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241019093600","author":"Zhangzhang111","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Zhangzhang111-20241019093600-ZHANGBINGYI","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241021020000-Zhangzhang111-20241019093600"]}}-->
@Zhangzhang111 Ok Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:00, 21 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241021020000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241021020000-Zhangzhang111-20241019093600","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I'm taking "Media Trends and Globalization"and "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis"
I completed the sandbox editing and added the reference.Here is the Binzhou#Economy
Please check. Thanks.
Xukeying2022039098 (talk) 04:51, 20 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241020045100","author":"Xukeying2022039098","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Xukeying2022039098-20241020045100-Deadline3:Xu_keying","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241021025400-Xukeying2022039098-20241020045100"]}}-->
@Xukeying2022039098 Good Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:54, 21 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241021025400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241021025400-Xukeying2022039098-20241020045100","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I am taking two courses, "Media Trends and Globalization" and "Understanding Small and Big Data through Wiki".Here are two translations of my “Media Trends and Globalization” course:"Anarchism in Poland"and“Anarchism in Korea”.
Here's my map extension to learn about "Understanding Small and Big Data through Wiki"course:HanZhong。
Thank you for your confirmation.
Tyuni06 (talk) 07:56, 20 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241020075600","author":"Tyuni06","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Tyuni06-20241020075600-Deadline4\uff1aTANG_YINI","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241021025700-Tyuni06-20241020075600"]}}-->
@Tyuni06 Good. Please note there were concerns raised regarding the quality of the Korean article (see maintenance templates on the talk). Please see in the editing history of the article who added them and ask them if they are resolved in your newest version.
Your Hanzhong article needs a map, climate information with the graph template, and properly formatted listings with GPS coordinates. Right now this is just a start. Please improve it to the standards we learned in class in the last two months. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:57, 21 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241021025700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241021025700-Tyuni06-20241020075600","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello professor, I have edited these two articles on Wikipedia a total of 20 times. If possible, please help me check. Thank you very much. Here is the links.1.2. Jzhdylb (talk) 16:11, 20 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241020161100","author":"Jzhdylb","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Jzhdylb-20241020161100-Deadline5-FAN_XINRU","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241021025900-Jzhdylb-20241020161100"]}}-->
@Jzhdylb Well done, this looks good Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:59, 21 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241021025900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241021025900-Jzhdylb-20241020161100","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Please improve the grammar and vocabulary of your translation. Right now it contains too many errors to be published.
Next, please improve your references:
Please remember that only referenced content can be added to English Wikipedia and only such content will count for credit. The content from Chinese article that has no references needs to be referenced first before being translated. See Wikipedia:Verifiability On the bright side, you can get extra credit for adding footnotes to the Korean article
Please format the references so that they have an English title (in addition to the Chinese), and other information (author, date, publisher).
Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:15, 7 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241007081500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241007081500-Honghaotian-20241007041000","replies":["c-Honghaotian-20241018054600-Hanyangprofessor2-20241007081500"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
User:Limengchen2777/sandbox#cite note-35 We have changed the sandbox for Chinese to English translation. Do you have any other questions? Honghaotian (talk) 05:46, 18 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241018054600","author":"Honghaotian","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Honghaotian-20241018054600-Hanyangprofessor2-20241007081500","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241021014100-Honghaotian-20241018054600","c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241021014100-Honghaotian-20241018054600-1","c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241021052800-Honghaotian-20241018054600"]}}-->
@Honghaotian Please read my remarks above carefully. You have added English names to sources, but I said they should be "in addition to Chinese" - please restore Chinese name for Chinese sources (English name should be added to the "translated title" parameter - please stop by my office if you don't know how to do it and need a demonstration).
Additionally, much of your content still does not have references and cannot be published (and does not count for course credit). Please add references to all unreferenced content. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here01:41, 21 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241021014100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241021014100-Honghaotian-20241018054600","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
@Limengchen2777Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here01:41, 21 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241021014100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241021014100-Honghaotian-20241018054600-1","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
If a term exists in Chinese Wikipedia and has an article there, but not on English Wikipedia, please use Template:Interlanguage link to link it. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:28, 21 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241021052800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241021052800-Honghaotian-20241018054600","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I'm taking "Media Trends and Globalization" Among the Deadline 4 task. I did it with Jo Hyeonseong, a member of group. @Jo HyeonSeong
I've done some exercises to add a Director's experience to the sandbox and I've also inserted that into the actual Wikipedia minorities in south korea Please check. Jeong Ahram (talk) 05:59, 11 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241011055900","author":"Jeong Ahram","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Jeong_Ahram-20241011055900-Deadline_4:_Jeong_Aram","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241011073600-Jeong_Ahram-20241011055900"]}}-->
@Jeong Ahram Good. Regarding your ko:한국의 소수민족, please add blue links like in the English article, linking to other important concepts.
If the topic exists in English, but not Korean, please use this tool: ko:틀:임시링크Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:36, 11 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241011073600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241011073600-Jeong_Ahram-20241011055900","replies":["c-Jeong_Ahram-20241018060400-Hanyangprofessor2-20241011073600"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I've made the modification. 대한민국의 소수주민 Please check. Thank you. Jeong Ahram (talk) 06:04, 18 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241018060400","author":"Jeong Ahram","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Jeong_Ahram-20241018060400-Hanyangprofessor2-20241011073600","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241021014600-Jeong_Ahram-20241018060400"]}}-->
@Jeong Ahram I do not see any modifications from you. The last time you edited the article was on October 14. All changes since have been done by Korean Wikipedia volunteers. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here01:46, 21 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241021014600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241021014600-Jeong_Ahram-20241018060400","replies":["c-Jeong_Ahram-20241021050700-Hanyangprofessor2-20241021014600"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I wanted to say that our project '대한민국의 소수주민' was a draft page not a main page in wikipedia. But we requested to move our draft article to a general article.
So, wikipedia accepted our request and moved it to general article.
I wanted to say this. Jeong Ahram (talk) 05:07, 21 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241021050700","author":"Jeong Ahram","type":"comment","level":5,"id":"c-Jeong_Ahram-20241021050700-Hanyangprofessor2-20241021014600","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241022015700-Jeong_Ahram-20241021050700"]}}-->
@Jeong Ahram Ah, I see, good. Now try to use the ko:틀:임시링크 tool to add more links. If you don't know how to use it, stop by my office and I will demonstrate Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here01:57, 22 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241022015700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":6,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241022015700-Jeong_Ahram-20241021050700","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Professor I added some content about Wikivoyage, please check it outBai0926 (talk) 11:24, 20 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241020112400","author":"Bai0926","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Bai0926-20241020112400-Deadline_5(Week_6)-BAILINHAN_2","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241021025800-Bai0926-20241020112400"]}}-->
@Bai0926 Your article needs climate information with the graph template, and properly formatted listings with GPS coordinates. Right now, this is just a start. Please improve it to the standards we learned in class in the last two months Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:58, 21 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241021025800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241021025800-Bai0926-20241020112400","replies":["c-Bai0926-20241021083500-Hanyangprofessor2-20241021025800"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Professor I added gps and climate and other content, please check itBai0926 (talk) 08:35, 21 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241021083500","author":"Bai0926","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Bai0926-20241021083500-Hanyangprofessor2-20241021025800","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241022015800-Bai0926-20241021083500"]}}-->
@Bai0926 Good progress. Remember that listings with GPS coordinates are very important to make the article useful (and pretty). Try to add them soon Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here01:58, 22 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241022015800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241022015800-Bai0926-20241021083500","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Dear professor, I have completed the translation of Wikipedia from English to Chinese.
Please check it. If there is no problem, I will publish it on Wikipedia.
Thank you Peter011008 (talk) 06:07, 21 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241021060700","author":"Peter011008","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Peter011008-20241021060700-Deadline5_LIU_ZIFU","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241022020100-Peter011008-20241021060700"]}}-->
Regarding your Chinese article (translation), once you think the translation is completely done, you can publish your work by moving the draft to the mainspace (see zh:Help:页面重命名 on how to do this). Then we will see if the Chinese reviewers have any comments.
If a term exists in English Wikipedia and has an article there, but not on Chinese Wikipedia, please use this tool zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi to link it. If you need help, I can demonstrate how to use it. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:01, 22 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241022020100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241022020100-Peter011008-20241021060700","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Deadline 4 and 5 tasks: I've done my article "World System theory" in my sandbox. Check the link out, please. Thank you.
Parkjeongeun0430 Sandbox
Thank you. Parkjeongeun0430 (talk) 12:52, 16 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241016125200","author":"Parkjeongeun0430","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Parkjeongeun0430-20241016125200-Deadline_4&5_:_Jeongeun_Park","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241017013700-Parkjeongeun0430-20241016125200"]}}-->
@Parkjeongeun0430 Good. Once you think the translation is completely done, you can publish your work by moving the draft to the mainspace (see ko:위키백과:문서_이동 on how to do this) Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here01:37, 17 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241017013700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241017013700-Parkjeongeun0430-20241016125200","replies":["c-Parkjeongeun0430-20241017081500-Hanyangprofessor2-20241017013700"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I moved the my article. Please check. Parkjeongeun0430 (talk) 08:15, 17 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241017081500","author":"Parkjeongeun0430","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Parkjeongeun0430-20241017081500-Hanyangprofessor2-20241017013700","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241018025900-Parkjeongeun0430-20241017081500"]}}-->
@Parkjeongeun0430 This was not done correctly. I do not see any of your edits in the linked page. You should expand that article with your content from 세계 체제론 - 위키백과 (wikipedia.org) . I will also ping @Ykhwong who redirected your page (I see there was some trouble with page moves and redirects). Parkjeongeun0430, please add your content to the existing article - your task is to expand the existing article with content from English Wikipedia, not to create a WP:CONTENTFORK. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:59, 18 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241018025900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241018025900-Parkjeongeun0430-20241017081500","replies":["c-Ykhwong-20241018134800-Hanyangprofessor2-20241018025900"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
An article titled ko:세계체제론, which corresponds to World-systems theory, already exists on the Korean Wikipedia. However, User:Parkjeongeun0430 has created a duplicate article titled ko:세계 체제론 (note the space in the title). That is why I made ko:세계 체제론 a redirect to ko:세계체제론. He should make changes to ko:세계체제론, not ko:세계 체제론. --ted (talk) 13:48, 18 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241018134800","author":"Ykhwong","type":"comment","level":5,"id":"c-Ykhwong-20241018134800-Hanyangprofessor2-20241018025900","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241021014600-Ykhwong-20241018134800"],"displayName":"ted"}}-->
@Ykhwong I agree. I hope @Parkjeongeun0430 reads our remarks and understands what they need to fix. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here01:46, 21 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241021014600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":6,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241021014600-Ykhwong-20241018134800","replies":["c-Parkjeongeun0430-20241024083700-Hanyangprofessor2-20241021014600"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
@Parkjeongeun0430 Good, this is the right space. Now please wait and see if Korean reviewers have any comments about the quality of your translation and other issues. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here00:59, 25 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241025005900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":8,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241025005900-Parkjeongeun0430-20241024083700","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello Professor, I am very sorry, I just realized that my blog has not been added yet and I cannot post it, please re-invite me, my email :wangtao020626@sina.com Wangtao626 (talk) 03:34, 22 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241022033400","author":"Wangtao626","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Wangtao626-20241022033400-WANG_TAO","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241025010000-Wangtao626-20241022033400"]}}-->
@Wangtao626 Ok, invite sent Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here01:00, 25 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241025010000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241025010000-Wangtao626-20241022033400","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello Professor, I am very sorry, I just realized that my blog has not been added yet and I cannot post it, please re-invite me, my email :weizai653@gmail ZAIWEI0328 (talk) 16:24, 22 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241022162400","author":"ZAIWEI0328","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-ZAIWEI0328-20241022162400-ZAIWEI","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241025011400-ZAIWEI0328-20241022162400"]}}-->
@ZAIWEI0328 Ok, invite sent Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here01:14, 25 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241025011400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241025011400-ZAIWEI0328-20241022162400","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Have a nice life. Thank you. Wangtao626 (talk) 06:14, 24 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241024061400","author":"Wangtao626","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Wangtao626-20241024061400-Deadline4\uff1aWANG_TAO&ZAI_WEI","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241025011500-Wangtao626-20241024061400"]}}-->
@Wangtao626 Very good. Good progress. If you have translated most content, you can publish your article by moving the draft to the mainspace (see zh:Help:页面重命名 on how to do this) Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here01:15, 25 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241025011500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241025011500-Wangtao626-20241024061400","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Dear Professor: I am taking two courses, "Media Trends and Globalization" and "Understanding Small Data and Big Data through Wikis."
Lesson 1: Media Trends and Globalization: This is the article I edited in the Sandbox.版权审查
Lesson 2: Understanding Small and Big Data through Wikipedia: I have completed most of the editing.Yuzhou
Thank you for your checking.
Hanyuanyuan613 (talk) 13:33, 24 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241024133300","author":"Hanyuanyuan613","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Hanyuanyuan613-20241024133300-Deadline_5:_HAN_YUANYUAN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241025011700-Hanyuanyuan613-20241024133300"]}}-->
@Hanyuanyuan613 Good progress. When you have translated most content, you can publish your article by moving the draft to the mainspace (see zh:Help:页面重命名 on how to do this)
For your Wikivoyage article, try to add several images illustrating pretty landmarks. For the do section, try adding a subsection on festivals if they exist in that area (see https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/Ansan#Festivals ) Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here01:17, 25 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241025011700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241025011700-Hanyuanyuan613-20241024133300","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Have a nice life, thank you. Wangtao626 (talk) 03:47, 22 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241022034700","author":"Wangtao626","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Wangtao626-20241022034700-Deadline4:WANG_TAO&ZAI_WEI","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241025011200-Wangtao626-20241022034700"]}}-->
read WP:WTA and consider which words in your article may need removing as promotional (hint: masterpieces, for example)
"and are expected to become" - this needs attribution. Who is expecting that? A newspaper? A politician? A professor?
why in your infobox "CHINA" is capitalized?
Please add references to paragraphs that are missing them, for example first paragraphs of "Building List" and "Construction process". There are several others later on.
If a term exists in Chinese Wikipedia and has an article there, but not on English Wikipedia, please use Template:Interlanguage link to link it. Currently you link to the Chinese Wikipedia in a simpler way that is confusing to readers who may click the links, expecting to go to English article, but will arrive at Chinese
If the reference is in Chinese (ex. "城市随笔:珞珈樱花"), please use both the Chinese and English titles. Use Chinese title in the 'title' field, and English in the 'translated title' field. If you need help, stop by my office and I'll demonstrate how to do so.
Also, please ensure all references have filled in metadata - author name, date of publication, title and publisher are very important
Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here01:12, 25 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241025011200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241025011200-Wangtao626-20241022034700","replies":["c-Wangtao626-20241027173300-Hanyangprofessor2-20241025011200"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Thank you professor, we will improve this article Wangtao626 (talk) 17:33, 27 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241027173300","author":"Wangtao626","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Wangtao626-20241027173300-Hanyangprofessor2-20241025011200","replies":[]}}-->
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Dear Professor: I am taking two courses, "Media Trends and Globalization" and "Understanding Small Data and Big Data through Wikis."
Understanding Small and Big Data through Wikipedia: We have completed the editing.Putian
Thank you for your checking. Honghaotian (talk) 06:03, 25 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241025060300","author":"Honghaotian","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Honghaotian-20241025060300-Deadline_5:_HONG_HAOTIAN&LI_MENGCHEN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241028011000-Honghaotian-20241025060300"]}}-->
@Honghaotian Good progress. Please add the 'understand' section, and fill in the content in 'get around'. For 'do' section, add a subsection about local festivals. Compare how those sections look in Ansan, for example, and read the guide here https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/WV:SectionsPiotrus at Hanyang| reply here01:10, 28 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241028011000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241028011000-Honghaotian-20241025060300","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Thank you for your checking. Ydaeun0306 (talk) 06:42, 25 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241025064200","author":"Ydaeun0306","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Ydaeun0306-20241025064200-Deadline4\uff1aYoonDaeun","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241028011200-Ydaeun0306-20241025064200"]}}-->
@Ydaeun0306 Ok Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here01:12, 28 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241028011200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241028011200-Ydaeun0306-20241025064200","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I'm taking 'Media Trends and Globalization' class. I have finished deadline 5, so I leave a link .
Thank you for your checking. SongHyeonmin2020007129 (talk) 12:50, 25 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241025125000","author":"SongHyeonmin2020007129","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-SongHyeonmin2020007129-20241025125000-Deadline_5\uff1aHyeonmin_Song","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241028011400-SongHyeonmin2020007129-20241025125000"]}}-->
@SongHyeonmin2020007129 Good. Now you can integrate your content into the ko:페르미 역설 . After that, we will see what the Korean reviewers say about your work. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here01:14, 28 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241028011400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241028011400-SongHyeonmin2020007129-20241025125000","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear professor ,I'm taking 'Media Trends and Globalization' class, My original article is ’Gender inequality in North Korea‘ from English to Chinese ,Can i change my article to ’history of chocolate‘?, Because the previous article still does not allow me to edit, I translated the article on the web page but not allowed me to save it,And there's no record of my editing on the web.
@1eleven0086 Yes, you can change your topic. In the future, it is good to make a backup of your work (I recommend working in a wiki sandbox and saving your progress regularly). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here01:19, 28 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241028011900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241028011900-1eleven0086-20241026032700","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello professor, I have edited these two articles on Wikipedia a total of 20 times. If possible, please help me check. Thank you very much. Here is the link.1.2. Jzhdylb (talk) 09:47, 27 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241027094700","author":"Jzhdylb","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Jzhdylb-20241027094700-Deadline_5:_---FAN_XINRU","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241028012000-Jzhdylb-20241027094700"]}}-->
@Jzhdylb Good job Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here01:20, 28 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241028012000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241028012000-Jzhdylb-20241027094700","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I am taking two courses, "Media Trends and Globalization" and "Understanding Small Data and Big Data through Wikis." I have finished deadline 5, my article is ready for review.全球金融体系Also, the link to the blog invitation is invalid , can you re-invite me to enter? Email: baishiqi1011@gmail. 白诗棋 (talk) 05:22, 28 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241028052200","author":"\u767d\u8bd7\u68cb","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-\u767d\u8bd7\u68cb-20241028052200-Deadline5:\u767d\u8bd7\u68cb","replies":["c-\u767d\u8bd7\u68cb-20241029011900-\u767d\u8bd7\u68cb-20241028052200"]}}-->
Edit hisrory:https://w.wiki/BjdM白诗棋 (talk) 01:19, 29 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241029011900","author":"\u767d\u8bd7\u68cb","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-\u767d\u8bd7\u68cb-20241029011900-\u767d\u8bd7\u68cb-20241028052200","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241030013800-\u767d\u8bd7\u68cb-20241029011900"]}}-->
@白诗棋 Regarding the blog, that email is registered as an author, you just need to log in to the blogger portal.
Regarding your translation, it has some errors due to copying code from English Wikipedia. Your blue links should link to Chinese articles if they exist. If a term exists in English Wikipedia and has an article there, but not on Chinese Wikipedia, please use this tool zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi to link it. If you need help, I can demonstrate how to use it Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here01:38, 30 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241030013800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241030013800-\u767d\u8bd7\u68cb-20241029011900","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Thank you for your checking WANGYIZHE1124 (talk) 08:25, 28 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241028082500","author":"WANGYIZHE1124","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-WANGYIZHE1124-20241028082500-Deadline5_WANGYIZHE","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241030014400-WANGYIZHE1124-20241028082500","c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241030014500-WANGYIZHE1124-20241028082500"]}}-->
@WANGYIZHE1124 Regarding your translation from Chinese to English, please move it from Chinese Wikipedia to English Wikipedia (to your sandbox at English Wikipedia). What is the Chinese name of the article you are translating?
Regarding your Wikivoyage article, it needs much improvement. For starters, you should add more listings to see and do - right now, see just have three, and only one is correctly formatted. You should also add a banner, a climate chart, and expand the understand section, as we learned in class in the last two months. Right now your project is far from ready, and behind most of your collegues. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here01:44, 30 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241030014400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241030014400-WANGYIZHE1124-20241028082500","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
PS. If you forgot how to complete some tasks at Wikivoyage, you could see the list of our exercises we did in class here: User:Hanyangprofessor2 – Travel guide at WikivoyagePiotrus at Hanyang| reply here01:45, 30 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241030014500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241030014500-WANGYIZHE1124-20241028082500","replies":[],"displayName":"User:Hanyangprofessor2 \u2013 Travel guide at Wikivoyage"}}-->
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Dear Professor
we're taking 'Media Trends and Globalization' and 'Understanding Small Data and Big Data' classes.
@Kim jong min (hanyang) @Kang Taeho
We have finished deadline 5 of 'Media Trends and Globalization' , so here are the links
Kim jong min (hanyang) (talk) 03:59, 29 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241029035900","author":"Kim jong min (hanyang)","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Kim_jong_min_(hanyang)-20241029035900-Deadline5_-_Kim_jong_min_&_Kang_tae_ho","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241030014800-Kim_jong_min_(hanyang)-20241029035900"]}}-->
Please make sure to add references to your article. Please remember that only referenced content can be added to English Wikipedia and only such content will count for credit. The content from Korean article that has no references needs to be referenced first before being published, or it will be deleted if it cannot be verified. See Wikipedia:Verifiability
Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here01:48, 30 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241030014800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241030014800-Kim_jong_min_(hanyang)-20241029035900","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor:
I am taking two courses, "Media Trends and Globalization" and "Understanding Small and Big Data through Wiki".
Here are two translations of my “Media Trends and Globalization” course:Indocentrism,Asiacentrism. Here's my map extension to learn about "Understanding Small and Big Data through Wiki"course:ShangraoJiayyyyy (talk) 04:38, 29 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241029043800","author":"Jiayyyyy","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Jiayyyyy-20241029043800-Deadline5_:_JIA_YUAN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241030015300-Jiayyyyy-20241029043800"]}}-->
@Jiayyyyy Good. I see your 亚洲中心主义[编辑 | 编辑源代码] article has a number of issues tagged in the warning box at the top. Please work with editor or editors who added this warning to resolve them. You can identify them by looking at the history of your article, and then you should ask them for explanation if you don't understand the issues mentioned, or asked to check if they have been resolved if you have already tried to address them.
Please translate the short section on China from Indo-centrism from Chinese to English (you will get extra credit for that).
For Shangrao, please add a banner, a climate chart, and more listings. If you forgot how to complete some tasks at Wikivoyage, you could see the list of our exercises we did in class here: User:Hanyangprofessor2 – Travel guide at WikivoyagePiotrus at Hanyang| reply here01:53, 30 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241030015300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241030015300-Jiayyyyy-20241029043800","replies":[],"displayName":"User:Hanyangprofessor2 \u2013 Travel guide at Wikivoyage"}}-->
I am taking two courses, "Media Trends and Globalization" and "Understanding Small and Big Data through Wiki".Here are two translations of my “Media Trends and Globalization” course:"Anarchism in Poland"and“Anarchism in Korea”.
Here's my map extension to learn about "Understanding Small and Big Data through Wiki"course:HanZhong。
Thank you for your confirmation. Tyuni06 (talk) 05:31, 31 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241031053100","author":"Tyuni06","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Tyuni06-20241031053100-Deadline5_:TANG_YINI","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241101020800-Tyuni06-20241031053100"]}}-->
@Tyuni06 Good. I see your translation articles have a number of issues tagged in the warning box at the top, primarily related to the low quality of the translation. Please work with editor or editors who added this warning to resolve them. You can identify them by looking at the history of your article, and then you should ask them for explanation if you don't understand the issues mentioned or asked to check if they have been resolved if you have already tried to address them.
Regarding your Hanzhong article, it is missing a major element: all your entries in see and do should be in a listing format, with GPS coordinates, as we practiced in class on many occasions (if you forgot how to do it, see my during my office hours and I will demonstrate). Also, your see is too short - it should include some of what you list at do. Wuhou Temple is for example listed in both places. Please clean up your work. There are also many other issues; for example, you mention Nanhu Scenic Area in 'get around' but not in see or do. (This is just one of many similar errors). Please copyedit your article carefully. Please make sure to add Chinese names to each location mentioned, as well as an external link (like with Wuhou Temple) confirming that this place really exists and is not an AI hallucination/invention. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:08, 1 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241101020800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241101020800-Tyuni06-20241031053100","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear professor, We are taking two courses, "Media Trends and Globalization" and "Understanding Small and Big Data through Wiki".
We have completed the Wikipedia entry on Chinese superstitions.
Please check it. If there is no problem, I will publish it on Wikipedia.
This is our expanded Wikivoyage entry,[[58]]
Thank you
——Yeomll (talk) 15:13, 31 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241031151300","author":"Yeomll","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Yeomll-20241031151300-Deadline5_:SHAO_TIANYI&ZHONG_QI","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241101021500-Yeomll-20241031151300"]}}-->
@Yeomll This is a good start, but there is much cleanup needed. Some of your content is still missing citations and cannot be published (For example, in the section 'Characteristics of Chinese superstition' you have references for points 2, 3 and 4, but not for 1 and 5)..
For many other cases you cite a book, but without a page range. Please specify which page numbers or which short range contain information that you are citing for a given sentence.
Next, if the source is in Chinese (ex. 李鹏《六四日记》), please use both the Chinese and English titles. Use Chinese title in the 'title' field, and English in the 'translated title' field. If you need help, stop by my office and I'll demonstrate how to do so.
Your Wikivoyage entry is improving nicely. Please expand the climate section (with the graph, as we practiced in class).
Please convert items in do, buy and eat into listings (like in the see section). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:15, 1 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241101021500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241101021500-Yeomll-20241031151300","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor: I am taking two courses, "Media Trends and Globalization" and "Understanding Small Data and Big Data through Wikis."Me and my group members LINYUYANG@l01yy11
Lesson 1: "Media Trends and Globalization" This week I finished translating from English to Chinese is the link:Gender pay gap
We would like to change the Chinese to English translation of the Wikipedia title here is the link https: https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E5%8C%97%E5%B9%B3%E5%92%8C%E5%B9%B3%E8%A7%A3%E6%94%BE?wprov=sfti1#
Lesson 2: "Understanding Small Data and Big Data through Wikis" This week I finished the content is the link.: https://zh.wikivoyage.org/wiki/%E8%8D%94%E6%B3%A2
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I see your work is progressing on zh:性别薪酬差距. Please carefully proofread your work, I see some unfinished parts (English text remaining). If a term exists in English Wikipedia and has an article there, but not on Chinese Wikipedia, please use this tool zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi to link it. If you need help, I can demonstrate how to use it.
Regarding your edits to https://zh.wikivoyage.org/wiki/%E8%8D%94%E6%B3%A2 , this can count for extra credit, but remember that your main project is to improve the English Wikivouyage article, not Chinese Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:19, 1 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241101021900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241101021900-WANGRUITONG-20241031154900","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I have completed the Chinese to English translation of the Wikipedia article, here is my He Delai please check it out.
Thank you for your checking! Yangpeifu (talk) 04:28, 29 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241029042800","author":"Yangpeifu","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Yangpeifu-20241029042800-Deadline5_:_YANGPEIFU","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241030015000-Yangpeifu-20241029042800"]}}-->
@Yangpeifu Good, but please make sure to add references to your article. Please remember that only referenced content can be added to English Wikipedia and only such content will count for credit. The content from Chinese article that has no references needs to be referenced first before being translated. See Wikipedia:Verifiability
Also, if a term exists in Chinese Wikipedia and has an article there, but not on English Wikipedia, please use Template:Interlanguage link to link it. If you don't know how to use that tool, come to my office hours and I'll demonstrate. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here01:50, 30 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241030015000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241030015000-Yangpeifu-20241029042800","replies":["c-Yangpeifu-20241103120100-Hanyangprofessor2-20241030015000"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Dear Professor
I'm taking 'Media Trends and Globalization' class. I have finished deadline 5, so I leave a link (ENG -> KO) @Jeong Ahram @Jo HyeonSeong
Thank you for your checking. Jeong Ahram (talk) 04:12, 1 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241101041200","author":"Jeong Ahram","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Jeong_Ahram-20241101041200-Deadline_5:_Jeong_Aram_&_Jo_HyeonSeong","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241104024600-Jeong_Ahram-20241101041200"]}}-->
@Jeong Ahram Good progress Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:46, 4 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241104024600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241104024600-Jeong_Ahram-20241101041200","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Dear professor
I'm taking 'Media Trends and Globalization' class.
Please check it.Xisuux (talk) 05:01, 1 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241101050100","author":"Xisuux","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Xisuux-20241101050100-Deadline_6_:_Lee_jisu","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241104030300-Xisuux-20241101050100"]}}-->
@Xisuux Good Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:03, 4 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241104030300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241104030300-Xisuux-20241101050100","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Thank you for your checking.Jaeyun01 (talk) 05:08, 1 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241101050800","author":"Jaeyun01","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Jaeyun01-20241101050800-Deadline5_Jung_Jaeyun","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241104030400-Jaeyun01-20241101050800"]}}-->
If an article exists in English but not Korean, please link it using this tool: 틀:임시링크. If you don't know how to use it, ask me in class or during office hours Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:04, 4 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241104030400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241104030400-Jaeyun01-20241101050800","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Thank you for your cheking:)
Jaeyun01 (talk) 05:16, 1 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241101051600","author":"Jaeyun01","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Jaeyun01-20241101051600-Deadline_6_:_Jung_Jaeyun","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241104030600-Jaeyun01-20241101051600"]}}-->
@Jaeyun01 Good Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:06, 4 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241104030600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241104030600-Jaeyun01-20241101051600","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Thank you for checking. Jeong Ahram (talk) 05:27, 1 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241101052700","author":"Jeong Ahram","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Jeong_Ahram-20241101052700-Deadline_6:_Jeong_Aram","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241104030600-Jeong_Ahram-20241101052700"]}}-->
@Jeong Ahram Good Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:06, 4 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241104030600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241104030600-Jeong_Ahram-20241101052700","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Dear professor
I'm taking Media Trends and Globalization class
I've completed Deadline 6.
I wrote feedback on article 세계체제론 by Park jung eun
Thank you for checking. Jo HyeonSeong (talk) 05:41, 1 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241101054100","author":"Jo HyeonSeong","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Jo_HyeonSeong-20241101054100-Deadline_6:_Jo_HyeonSeong","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241104030600-Jo_HyeonSeong-20241101054100"]}}-->
@Jo HyeonSeong Good Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:06, 4 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241104030600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241104030600-Jo_HyeonSeong-20241101054100","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor: I am taking two courses, "Media Trends and Globalization" and "Understanding Small Data and Big Data through Wikis."
Understanding Small and Big Data through Wikipedia: We have completed the editing Mohe
"Media Trends and Globalization": I completed the translation of all my articles in the sandbox User:https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User%3ABuryab0ne%2Fsandbox&wvprov=sticky-header
Thank you for your checking. 218.235.241.134 (talk) 06:52, 1 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241101065200","author":"218.235.241.134","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-218.235.241.134-20241101065200-Deadline5\uff1aQIANZIYI","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241104031600-218.235.241.134-20241101065200"]}}-->
@Buryab0ne First, please remember to log in before making your edits (including posting messages). Only content from logged in accounts counts for our course credit.
Regarding your translation, there are many errors in the references. Please edit them carefully and fix all the fields like author, title, publisher, etc.
Next, if the source is in Chinese (ex. 李鹏《六四日记》), please use both the Chinese and English titles. Use Chinese title in the 'title' field, and English in the 'translated title' field. If you need help, stop by my office and I'll demonstrate how to do so.
Please copyedit your text - there are unncessary double footnote numbers like [1]. Please copyedit the text to more neutral - statements like "And will continue to enrich people's understanding of the history of Chinese civilization" are not neutral, not encyclopedic and arguably, poorly written (please proofread your article with a tool like Grammarly to ensure it reads well).
Are there any images of this that we can add? Please check the Chinese article for images.
Please remember that only referenced content can be added to English Wikipedia and only such content will count for credit. The content from Chinese article that has no references needs to be referenced first before being translated. See Wikipedia:Verifiability On the bright side, you can get extra credit for adding footnotes to the Chinese article Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:16, 4 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241104031600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241104031600-218.235.241.134-20241101065200","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor: I am taking two courses, "Media Trends and Globalization" and "Understanding Small Data and Big Data through Wikis."
Understanding Small and Big Data through Wikipedia: We have completed the editing Meizhou Mazu Temple
"Media Trends and Globalization": I completed the translation of all my articles in the sandbox
Thank you for your checking. Xjx921 (talk) 07:00, 1 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241101070000","author":"Xjx921","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Xjx921-20241101070000-Deadline5\uff1aXI_JIAXIN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241104032100-Xjx921-20241101070000"]}}-->
Please remember that only referenced content can be added to English Wikipedia and only such content will count for credit. The content from Chinese article that has no references needs to be referenced first before being translated. See Wikipedia:Verifiability On the bright side, you can get extra credit for adding footnotes to the Chinese article.
Regarding your translation, there are many errors in the references. Please edit them carefully and fix all the fields like author, title, publisher, etc.
Next, if the source is in Chinese (ex. 李鹏《六四日记》), please use both the Chinese and English titles. Use Chinese title in the 'title' field, and English in the 'translated title' field. If you need help, stop by my office and I'll demonstrate how to do so.
Then you need to fix English grammar and vocabulary. There are many badly translated parts like ("The building is dressed like Mazu."). Please use a tool like Grammarly or other AI tools to fix those issues. Many sentences are impossible to understand. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:21, 4 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241104032100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241104032100-Xjx921-20241101070000","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor: I am taking two courses, "Media Trends and Globalization" and "Understanding Small Data and Big Data through Wikis." Understanding Small and Big Data through Wikipedia: We have completed the editing Mohe "Media Trends and Globalization": I completed the translation of all my articles in the sandbox Thank you for your checking. 218.235.241.134 (talk) 07:02, 1 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241101070200","author":"218.235.241.134","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-218.235.241.134-20241101070200-Deadline5\uff1aQIANZIYI_2","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241104032100-218.235.241.134-20241101070200"]}}-->
I replied to you above. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:21, 4 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241104032100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241104032100-218.235.241.134-20241101070200","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Dear Professor
i'm taking "Media Trends and Globalization"
Among the deadline 5 task, my article finished in my sandbox and professor check in October 6. So I put in article.
Kkm.hanyang22 (talk) 07:47, 1 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241101074700","author":"Kkm.hanyang22","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Kkm.hanyang22-20241101074700-Deadline_6_:_Kim_Kyungmin","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241104032200-Kkm.hanyang22-20241101074700","c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241104032300-Kkm.hanyang22-20241101074700"]}}-->
@Kkm.hanyang22 Good. Please add blue links like in the English article, linking to other important concepts.
If the topic exists in English, but not Korean, please use this tool: ko:틀:임시링크 . If you don't know how to use it, stop by my office and I will demonstrate Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:22, 4 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241104032200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241104032200-Kkm.hanyang22-20241101074700","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Note that many articles like the ones mentioned here : Anarchism 및 Libertarian socialism 문서를 참고하십시오. exists on Korean Wikipedia, please locate them and link to them directly, not to English articles. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:23, 4 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241104032300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241104032300-Kkm.hanyang22-20241101074700","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Thank you for your review. Guoying1 (talk) 09:50, 1 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241101095000","author":"Guoying1","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Guoying1-20241101095000-Deadline_6\uff1aGUO_YING","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241104032500-Guoying1-20241101095000"]}}-->
@Guoying1 Good Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:25, 4 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241104032500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241104032500-Guoying1-20241101095000","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor: I am taking two courses, "Media Trends and Globalization" and "Understanding Small and Big Data through Wiki". Here are two translations of my “Media Trends and Globalization” course:Future,Spaghetti.
Here's my map extension to learn about "Understanding Small and Big Data through Wiki"course:Fuding
Check, please. YZY2233 (talk) 10:24, 1 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241101102400","author":"YZY2233","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-YZY2233-20241101102400-Deadline5:_YUE_ZIYI","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241104032800-YZY2233-20241101102400"]}}-->
I see some issues raised in the warning banner at the top of the article. Please work with editor or editors who added this warning to resolve them. You can identify them by looking at the history of your article, and then you should ask them for explanation if you don't understand the issues mentioned, or asked to check if they have been resolved if you have already tried to address them.
Your Fuding article looks good. At the top, please add a sentence or two advertisign the town - why would people want to go there?
Please adjust your map (zoom level and central location) so that it shows most locations. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:28, 4 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241104032800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241104032800-YZY2233-20241101102400","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor: I am taking two courses, "Media Trends and Globalization" and "Understanding Small Data and Big Data through Wikis."Me and my group members LINYUYANG@l01yy11
I've finished another Chinese to English translation. Please check the https://zh.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User:WANGRUITONG/%E6%B2%99%E7%9B%92&action=edit
--WANGRUITONG (talk) 00:15, 2 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241102001500","author":"WANGRUITONG","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-WANGRUITONG-20241102001500-DEADLINE_6:WANGRUITONG","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241104033100-WANGRUITONG-20241102001500"]}}-->
@WANGRUITONG Good progress. First, please move your article from Chinese Wikipedia sandbox to your sandbox at English Wikipedia, fix any code issues that appear after moving, then ask me for another review. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:31, 4 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241104033100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241104033100-WANGRUITONG-20241102001500","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor we are taking "Media Trends and Globalization" Here are two translations of “Media Trends and Globalization” course: English to Chinese No1,Chinese to englishNo2 please check thank you 1eleven0086 (talk) 05:31, 2 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241102053100","author":"1eleven0086","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-1eleven0086-20241102053100-Deadline5:LIUYUNXIANG&HUANGLINGXUAN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241104033500-1eleven0086-20241102053100"]}}-->
@1eleven0086 Regarding your 巧克力的演變史 article, I see some issues raised in the warning banner at the top of the article. Please work with editor or editors who added this warning to resolve them. You can identify them by looking at the history of your article, and then you should ask them for explanation if you don't understand the issues mentioned, or asked to check if they have been resolved if you have already tried to address them.
Regarding Living in a Tree, please proofread it carefully (you can use AI or tools like Grammarly). Right now, there are many grammar or vocabulary issues, and the article is very hard to read because of numerous errors. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:35, 4 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241104033500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241104033500-1eleven0086-20241102053100","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Hello professor, we chose United Nations System#Six principal organs[International Court of Justice] in P4. My team members are Han yuanyuan, Chen hebing, Liu Zifu, Zhang qi, and there are five of us. Mcx8202229 🇨🇳❤️ (talk)10:04, 2 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241102100400","author":"Mcx8202229","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Mcx8202229-20241102100400-Project_4_Ma_Chenxiao","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241104033600-Mcx8202229-20241102100400"]}}-->
@Mcx8202229 Ok Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:36, 4 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241104033600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241104033600-Mcx8202229-20241102100400","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I am taking two courses, "Media Trends and Globalization" and "Understanding Small and Big Data through Wiki".Here are two translations of my “Media Trends and Globalization” course: Resource mobilization, Abortion in Poland
Here's my map extension to learn about "Understanding Small and Big Data through Wiki"course: Yangjiang
Thank you for your confirmation. Guoying1 (talk) 13:37, 2 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241102133700","author":"Guoying1","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Guoying1-20241102133700-Deadline_4&5_:_GUO_YING","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241104033800-Guoying1-20241102133700"]}}-->
Regarding your Chinese article (translation), once you think the translation is completely done, you can publish your work by moving the draft to the mainspace (see zh:Help:页面重命名 on how to do this). Then we will see if the Chinese reviewers have any comments.
Your first article was published. I see some issues raised in the warning banner at the top of the article. Please work with editor or editors who added this warning to resolve them. You can identify them by looking at the history of your article, and then you should ask them for explanation if you don't understand the issues mentioned, or asked to check if they have been resolved if you have already tried to address them.
Regarding Yangjiang, please add GPS to the listings at See and Do that are missing them. The ones at Do, about festivals, seem to not be listings at all - please convert them into listings.
Also, please adjust the zoom on the map so that all locations are shown. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:38, 4 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241104033800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241104033800-Guoying1-20241102133700","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
1.Professor, I have added new content about Taierzhuang in Wiki voyage, please check it out.
2,Here are my 40 Wikipedia edits for October. Check them out.
Thank you! Bai0926 (talk) 14:31, 2 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241102143100","author":"Bai0926","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Bai0926-20241102143100-Deadline_4_BAILINHAN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241104034100-Bai0926-20241102143100"]}}-->
@Bai0926 I see some progress. Your map is broken - please try to add a working one (copy one from another article then adjust the GPS coordinates). Your article is missing a 'see' section (some content from 'do' should be there). Please review the guide at Wikivoyage:Article skeleton templates/Sections – Travel guide at Wikivoyage to understand better what should be in each section.
Please ensure all entries in your see and do are listings, with GPS coordinates. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:41, 4 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241104034100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241104034100-Bai0926-20241102143100","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello professor, I have edited these two articles on Wikipedia a total of 20 times. If possible, please help me check. Thank you very much. Here is the link.1.2. Jzhdylb (talk) 09:20, 3 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241103092000","author":"Jzhdylb","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Jzhdylb-20241103092000-Deadline_6_---FAN_XINRU","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241104034200-Jzhdylb-20241103092000"]}}-->
@Jzhdylb Good :) Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:42, 4 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241104034200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241104034200-Jzhdylb-20241103092000","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Dear professor
I'm taking 'Media Trends and Globalization' class.These are two articles translated by our group@LJY2455.This is an article translated from English to Chinese, and this is an article translated from Chinese to English.
Please check it. CHEN HEBING (talk) 09:22, 3 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241103092200","author":"CHEN HEBING","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-CHEN_HEBING-20241103092200-Deadline_6_---FAN_XINRU","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241104034400-CHEN_HEBING-20241103092200"]}}-->
Regarding your Chinese article (translation), once you think the translation is completely done, you can publish your work by moving the draft to the mainspace (see zh:Help:页面重命名 on how to do this). Then we will see if the Chinese reviewers have any comments.
Regarding your English translation, we have to fix the following issues:
Please remember that only referenced content can be added to English Wikipedia and only such content will count for credit. The content from Chinese article that has no references needs to be referenced first before being translated. See Wikipedia:Verifiability On the bright side, you can get extra credit for adding footnotes to the Korean article
Please format the references so that they have an English title (in addition to the Chinese), and other information (author, date, publisher).
Please add blue links like in the Chinese article, linking to other important concepts.
If a term exists in Chinese Wikipedia and has an article there, but not on English Wikipedia, please use Template:Interlanguage link to link it. If you need help, feel free to stop by my office. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:44, 4 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241104034400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241104034400-CHEN_HEBING-20241103092200","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Dear professor:
I'm taking two courses, "Media Trends and Globalization" and "Understanding Small Data and Big Data through Wikis."
I have completed Deadline 6. Suggesting editorial content for other editors.
@Peter011008 Very well done Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:45, 4 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241104034500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241104034500-Peter011008-20241103124400","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor: I am taking two courses, "Media Trends and Globalization" and "Understanding Small Data and Big Data through Wikis."
Lesson 1"Media Trends and Globalization" : I edited my topic "Unemployment in China" in the sandbox (converted from Chinese to English). I have finished editing, please review it.
Lesson 2"Understanding Small Data and Big Data through Wikis" :I have completed all the editing of the Dazu special topic.
Thank you for your checking Wuwenhao19960507 (talk) 16:39, 3 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241103163900","author":"Wuwenhao19960507","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Wuwenhao19960507-20241103163900-Deadline5:_WU_WENHAO","replies":[]}}-->
Your content in English looks good. Please proofread it with a tool like Grammarly, then add it to the relevant article.
Regarding your Wikivoyage article, For the get around section, you could mention if there are rental bicycles in the area, and what apps can be used?
For Festivals, I recommend moving this to the 'do' section, and converting each festival into a listing, with information on where it is happening (GPS) and when. See for example how this is done in the Wikivoyage article on Ansan.
Very nice job overall Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:49, 4 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241104034900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241104034900-Deadline5:_WU_WENHAO","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
2. This is the link to the article translated from English to Korean: South Korea–Ukraine relations
(https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/South_Korea–Ukraine_relations)
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I'm so late. I'll do my best until the other deadlines.
I've done one extra edit outside of the sandbox, and I've added a reference to an article about Korean entertainment company
Thank you.
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I'm taking "Media Trends and Globalization"and "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis".I'm translating the global financial system, please review it.全球金融体系白诗棋 (talk) 05:28, 22 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241022052800","author":"\u767d\u8bd7\u68cb","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-\u767d\u8bd7\u68cb-20241022052800-Progress_in_translation\uff1a\u767d\u8bd7\u68cb","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241025011300-\u767d\u8bd7\u68cb-20241022052800"]}}-->
@白诗棋 Good progress. If a term exists in English Wikipedia and has an article there, but not on Chinese Wikipedia, please use this tool zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi to link it. If you need help, I can demonstrate how to use it Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here01:13, 25 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241025011300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241025011300-\u767d\u8bd7\u68cb-20241022052800","replies":["c-Aaiiuuu-20241025041700-Hanyangprofessor2-20241025011300","c-\u767d\u8bd7\u68cb-20241025043000-Hanyangprofessor2-20241025011300","c-Aaiiuuu-20241025050000-Hanyangprofessor2-20241025011300"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello professor, the article I previously chose to translate has already been selected by another classmate. This is the article I have re selected, do you think it's okay? Aaiiuuu (talk) 04:17, 25 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241025041700","author":"Aaiiuuu","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Aaiiuuu-20241025041700-Hanyangprofessor2-20241025011300","replies":[]}}-->
OK, professor. Besides, I'm sorry, but I haven't blogged yet. Could you invite me again? My email address: baishiqi1011@gmail 白诗棋 (talk) 04:30, 25 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241025043000","author":"\u767d\u8bd7\u68cb","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-\u767d\u8bd7\u68cb-20241025043000-Hanyangprofessor2-20241025011300","replies":[]}}-->
Hello Professor,
I just realized that my blog has not been added yet and I cannot post it, please re-invite me. My email address:fjy1033151159@sina
Thank you! Aaiiuuu (talk) 05:00, 25 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241025050000","author":"Aaiiuuu","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Aaiiuuu-20241025050000-Hanyangprofessor2-20241025011300","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241028010800-Aaiiuuu-20241025050000"]}}-->
@白诗棋 @Aaiiuuu Ok, I've invited both of you to the classs blog Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here01:08, 28 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241028010800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241028010800-Aaiiuuu-20241025050000","replies":["c-Aaiiuuu-20241104094100-Hanyangprofessor2-20241028010800"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I'm taking "Media Trends and Globalization"and "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis".I'm translating the Economy of Germany, please review it. Aaiiuuu (talk) 09:41, 4 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241104094100","author":"Aaiiuuu","type":"comment","level":5,"id":"c-Aaiiuuu-20241104094100-Hanyangprofessor2-20241028010800","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241106024800-Aaiiuuu-20241104094100","c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241106025000-Aaiiuuu-20241104094100"]}}-->
In either case, your work looks good. Good progress. If you have translated most content, you can publish your article by moving the draft to the mainspace (see zh:Help:页面重命名 on how to do this); then we will see what the Chinese reviewers will say Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:48, 6 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241106024800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":6,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241106024800-Aaiiuuu-20241104094100","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
PS. In your case, you should not move the article but merge it with the existing one at 德國經濟 - 维基百科,自由的百科全书
See 维基百科:合并页面 - 维基百科,自由的百科全书 for advice on how to merge pages Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:50, 6 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241106025000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":6,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241106025000-Aaiiuuu-20241104094100","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I am taking two courses, "Media Trends and Globalization" and "Understanding Small and Big Data through Wiki".Here are two translations of my “Media Trends and Globalization” course:"Climate change in North Korea"and“Korean rock”.
Here's my map extension to learn about "Understanding Small and Big Data through Wiki"course:JinCheng. SHENZIHE (talk) 06:00, 1 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241101060000","author":"SHENZIHE","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-SHENZIHE-20241101060000-Deadline_5:_SHENZIHE","replies":["c-SCP-2000-20241101120600-SHENZIHE-20241101060000"]}}-->
@SHENZIHE: Hello, I am the patroller on Chinese Wikipedia. As Iming and UjuiUjuMandan mentioned on your talk page, using machine translation is disallowed on Chinese Wikipedia, and it is recommended that you rely on your own language skills to translate the article. You can also refer to the Translation Guideline and "Translationese" essay for further guidance.
You can use the article for creation process (條目建立專題) to submit your draft zh:User:SHENZIHE/韩国摇滚 and zh:User:SHENZIHE/朝鲜气候变化 for review by experienced editors. Thanks. SCP-200012:06, 1 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241101120600","author":"SCP-2000","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-SCP-2000-20241101120600-SHENZIHE-20241101060000","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241104024500-SCP-2000-20241101120600"],"displayName":"SCP"}}-->
@SHENZIHE? Please be careful while editing. Why did you remove the important message above?
Please improve the quality of your translations, then ask the Chinese editors to review them. Only when they are approved by the Chinese editors, they can be published and will count for course credit. 
Regarding your Jincheng articles, I do not see any map. Your article also needs a climate information with the graph template, and a banner. Please improve it to the standards we learned in class in the last two months. If needed, you can find our instructions for activities where we were learning those elements here: User:Hanyangprofessor2 – Travel guide at Wikivoyage
You can also come to my office if you have any questions. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:45, 4 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241104024500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241104024500-SCP-2000-20241101120600","replies":["c-SHENZIHE-20241104034200-Hanyangprofessor2-20241104024500","c-SHENZIHE-20241104034600-Hanyangprofessor2-20241104024500"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Because there is no way to change the name of the sandbox, the contents of the sandbox can only be copied to a new page. But why was it identified as machine translation. SHENZIHE (talk) 03:42, 4 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241104034200","author":"SHENZIHE","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-SHENZIHE-20241104034200-Hanyangprofessor2-20241104024500","replies":[]}}-->
This is the article I translated in the sandbox. But there is no way to connect to the original article."Climate change in North Korea"and“Korean rock”. SHENZIHE (talk) 03:46, 4 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241104034600","author":"SHENZIHE","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-SHENZIHE-20241104034600-Hanyangprofessor2-20241104024500","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241104035100-SHENZIHE-20241104034600"]}}-->
@SHENZIHE @SCP-2000 I am having trouble understanding your explanations. You can talk to SCP-2000 in Chinese (at their Chinese Wikipedia's talk page here User talk:SCP-2000 - 维基百科,自由的百科全书), and hopefully it will make it easier for you to resolve the issues. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:51, 4 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241104035100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":5,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241104035100-SHENZIHE-20241104034600","replies":["c-SHENZIHE-20241104095400-Hanyangprofessor2-20241104035100"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I'm terribly sorry, Professor. I've already asked about SCP-2000 on the discussion page. Many of the things I don't know much about are actually generated by the machine because of the direct copy of the translation content, and I will change my translation content again. Can I delete my topic and submit it after re-changing it? Looking forward to your reply. SHENZIHE (talk) 09:54, 4 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241104095400","author":"SHENZIHE","type":"comment","level":6,"id":"c-SHENZIHE-20241104095400-Hanyangprofessor2-20241104035100","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241106025200-SHENZIHE-20241104095400"]}}-->
@SHENZIHE You should be able to make fixes in your published articles, unless they have been deleted. SCP-2000 should be able to explain things to you; but unless your account is blocked, you should be able to edit those articles (the sooner, the better). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:52, 6 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241106025200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":7,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241106025200-SHENZIHE-20241104095400","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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@Kang eunyeong Good Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:53, 6 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241106025300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241106025300-Kang_eunyeong-20241104041800","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
@CHEN HEBING Very good Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:58, 6 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241106025800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241106025800-CHEN_HEBING-20241104042200","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
@Parksungeun Very good Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:59, 6 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241106025900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241106025900-Parksungeun-20241104050000","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor: I am taking two courses, "Media Trends and Globalization" and "Understanding Small Data and Big Data through Wikis."
Lesson 1"Media Trends and Globalization" : I have provided feedback to the author.
Lesson 2"Understanding Small Data and Big Data through Wikis" :I have provided feedback to the author. Wuwenhao19960507 (talk) 05:55, 4 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241104055500","author":"Wuwenhao19960507","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Wuwenhao19960507-20241104055500-Deadline6:_WU_WENHAO","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241106025900-Wuwenhao19960507-20241104055500"]}}-->
@Wuwenhao19960507 All good Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:59, 6 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241106025900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241106025900-Wuwenhao19960507-20241104055500","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Please check it. Thank you!
JHyunlee (talk) 05:59, 4 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241104055900","author":"JHyunlee","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-JHyunlee-20241104055900-Deadline_4\uff1aLee_Jae-hyun","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241106030100-JHyunlee-20241104055900"]}}-->
@JHyunlee Good Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:01, 6 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241106030100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241106030100-JHyunlee-20241104055900","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Please check, Thanks. Yujin0203 (talk) 06:04, 4 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241104060400","author":"Yujin0203","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Yujin0203-20241104060400-Deadline_4:_YUJIN_JANG","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241106030200-Yujin0203-20241104060400"]}}-->
@Yujin0203 Very good Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:02, 6 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241106030200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241106030200-Yujin0203-20241104060400","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor: I am taking two courses, "Media Trends and Globalization" and "Understanding Small Data and Big Data through Wikis."Me and my group members wushengyu Lesson 1: "Media Trends and Globalization" This week I finished translating from Chinese to English is the link:User:Xukeying2022039098/法拉盛草原可乐娜公园的历史Xukeying2022039098 (talk) 06:25, 4 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241104062500","author":"Xukeying2022039098","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Xukeying2022039098-20241104062500-Deadline_5:xu_keying","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241106030700-Xukeying2022039098-20241104062500"]}}-->
Your Chinese to English translation should be for zh:中国第一滩 .
(although it is too short to be valid for a full project - as I told you in class, you still need to choose one more short article to translate from Chinese to English, or expand t)
What I see in your sandbox is a copy of Flushing Meadows–Corona Park . This is not a content that is useful for our project and it has never been approved. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:07, 6 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241106030700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241106030700-Xukeying2022039098-20241104062500","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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We took a long time because we changed our topic. Please excuse us.
Thank you for checking and please give us feedback if there are something we should modify. Xisuux (talk) 06:41, 4 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241104064100","author":"Xisuux","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Xisuux-20241104064100-Deadline_3_:_Lee_jisu_&_Yoon_sarang","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241106030900-Xisuux-20241104064100"]}}-->
@Xisuux Your article is progressing nicely. Please write a few sentences for the climate section (compare to other good articles, like Ansan).
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Dear professor
I have completed deadline 4 of "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis" from the professor.
Thank you for checking.Xisuux (talk) 06:47, 4 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241104064700","author":"Xisuux","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Xisuux-20241104064700-Deadline_4_:_Lee_jisu_2","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241106031100-Xisuux-20241104064700"]}}-->
@Xisuux Good Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:11, 6 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241106031100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241106031100-Xisuux-20241104064700","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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I'm working on editing in this article. I'd appreciate it if you could check it out.
Thank you :) Ysrfield (talk) 07:00, 4 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241104070000","author":"Ysrfield","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Ysrfield-20241104070000-Deadline_2:_Yoon_sarang_&_Lee_jisu","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241106031200-Ysrfield-20241104070000"]}}-->
@Ysrfield Ok! See my comments above Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:12, 6 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241106031200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241106031200-Ysrfield-20241104070000","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I have completed deadline 4 of "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis".
I left my feedback in the article of 'Dangjin'.
Please check it! Thank you and have a nice day :) Ysrfield (talk) 07:03, 4 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241104070300","author":"Ysrfield","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Ysrfield-20241104070300-Deadline_4:_Yoon_Sarang","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241106031300-Ysrfield-20241104070300"]}}-->
@Ysrfield Very good, but please suggest something for improvement Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:13, 6 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241106031300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241106031300-Ysrfield-20241104070300","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I'm taking 'Media Trends and Globalization' class. I have finished deadline 6. I leave a link .
Thank you for your checking.
SongHyeonmin2020007129 (talk) 11:38, 4 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241104113800","author":"SongHyeonmin2020007129","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-SongHyeonmin2020007129-20241104113800-Deadline_6\uff1aHyeonmin_Song","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241106031300-SongHyeonmin2020007129-20241104113800"]}}-->
@SongHyeonmin2020007129 Very good Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:13, 6 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241106031300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241106031300-SongHyeonmin2020007129-20241104113800","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I'm taking 'Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis' class. I have finished deadline 4. This is my review .
Thank you for your checking. SongHyeonmin2020007129 (talk) 11:53, 4 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241104115300","author":"SongHyeonmin2020007129","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-SongHyeonmin2020007129-20241104115300-Deadline_4\uff1aHyeonmin_Song","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241106031300-SongHyeonmin2020007129-20241104115300"]}}-->
@SongHyeonmin2020007129 Good! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:13, 6 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241106031300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241106031300-SongHyeonmin2020007129-20241104115300","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor: I am taking two courses, "Media Trends and Globalization" and "Understanding Small Data and Big Data through Wikis."Me and my group members wushengyu Lesson 1: "Media Trends and Globalization" This week I finished translating from Chinese to English is the link:User:Xukeying2022039098/法拉盛草原可乐娜公园的历史Xukeying2022039098 (talk) 00:28, 5 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241105002800","author":"Xukeying2022039098","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Xukeying2022039098-20241105002800-Deadline_5:xu_keying_2","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241106031400-Xukeying2022039098-20241105002800"]}}-->
@Xukeying2022039098 Please see my comment above; this content is not your approved topic. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:14, 6 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241106031400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241106031400-Xukeying2022039098-20241105002800","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Dear Professor
I'm taking 'Media Trends and Globalization' class. I have finished deadline 6. I leave a Link
Thank you for your checking Kim jong min (hanyang) (talk) 02:22, 5 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241105022200","author":"Kim jong min (hanyang)","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Kim_jong_min_(hanyang)-20241105022200-Deadline6_:_Kim_jong_min(hanyang)","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241106031400-Kim_jong_min_(hanyang)-20241105022200"]}}-->
@Kim jong min (hanyang) Good Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:14, 6 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241106031400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241106031400-Kim_jong_min_(hanyang)-20241105022200","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Dear Professor
I'm taking 'Understanding small data and big data' class. I have finished deadline 4. I leave a [61]Link
Thank you for your checking Kim jong min (hanyang) (talk) 02:45, 5 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241105024500","author":"Kim jong min (hanyang)","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Kim_jong_min_(hanyang)-20241105024500-Deadline4_:_Kim_jong_min(hanyang)","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241106031400-Kim_jong_min_(hanyang)-20241105024500"]}}-->
@Kim jong min (hanyang) Good Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:14, 6 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241106031400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241106031400-Kim_jong_min_(hanyang)-20241105024500","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I'm taking 'Media Trends and Globalization' class. I have finished deadline 5. Please check the link
Thank you for your checking. SoeunK (talk) 14:05, 5 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241105140500","author":"SoeunK","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-SoeunK-20241105140500-Deadline5:_Kwon_Soeun","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241106031500-SoeunK-20241105140500"]}}-->
@SoeunK Good. Once you think the translation is completely done, you can publish your work by moving the draft to the mainspace (see ko:위키백과:문서_이동 on how to do this) Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:15, 6 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241106031500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241106031500-SoeunK-20241105140500","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I have completed deadline 4 of "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis". I left my feedback in the article of Menghai – Travel guide at Wikivoyage. Please check it here.
Thank you and have a nice day :) Leeinm (talk) 01:58, 6 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241106015800","author":"Leeinm","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Leeinm-20241106015800-Deadline_4-LI_LINLIN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241106031600-Leeinm-20241106015800"]}}-->
@Leeinm Good Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:16, 6 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241106031600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241106031600-Leeinm-20241106015800","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I am taking two courses, "Media Trends and Globalization" and "Understanding Small Data and Big Data through Wikis."
I have completed Deadline 5, which involved translating two articles in my sandboxes: one from Chinese to English and the other from English to Chinese.
Please check it. Thank you! Uuueol (talk) 22:20, 7 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241107222000","author":"Uuueol","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Uuueol-20241107222000-Deadline5:_GUANYUE","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241106024800-Uuueol-20241107222000"]}}-->
Regarding your English translation, you need to separate references from footnotes. See Help:Footnotes#Footnotes:_predefined_groups It seems you already have some, badly called 'Annotations'. Please format them all using the guide provided above, or come to my office for help.
Your current references 1-4 are footnotes, not references, and require references of their own.
Your other references should be formatted correctly with citation templates. Some are mostly in Chinese and as such cannot be understood by me or other English readers. This applies to ref 5, 6, 8 and 9, for example.
Next, if the source is in Chinese (such as your current ref 7 and probably 10 and others following), please use both the Chinese and English titles. Use Chinese title in the 'title' field, and English in the 'translated title' field. If you need help, stop by my office and I'll demonstrate how to do so.
Some content in your article has no references. Please make sure to add references to your article. Please remember that only referenced content can be added to English Wikipedia and only such content will count for credit. The content from Chinese article that has no references needs to be referenced first before being translated. See Wikipedia:Verifiability
Regarding your Chinese article,if you have translated most content, you can publish your article by moving the draft to the mainspace (see zh:Help:页面重命名 on how to do this); then we will see what the Chinese reviewers will say Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:48, 6 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241106024800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241106024800-Uuueol-20241107222000","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I have completed deadline 4 of "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis". Here is the link
Thank you. Parkjeongeun0430 (talk) 03:20, 6 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241106032000","author":"Parkjeongeun0430","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Parkjeongeun0430-20241106032000-Deadline4:_Jeongeun_Park","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241108014900-Parkjeongeun0430-20241106032000"]}}-->
@Parkjeongeun0430 Good Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here01:49, 8 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241108014900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241108014900-Parkjeongeun0430-20241106032000","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor I have completed deadline 4 of "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis" . Here's my comment for Ruili, please check it out.
Additionally, I have updated my Wikivoyage map for Yangjiang. Please take a look. Guoying1 (talk) 07:54, 6 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241106075400","author":"Guoying1","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Guoying1-20241106075400-Deadline_4:_GUO_YING","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241108015200-Guoying1-20241106075400"]}}-->
@Guoying1 Good and good Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here01:52, 8 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241108015200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241108015200-Guoying1-20241106075400","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor: I am taking two courses, "Media Trends and Globalization" and "Understanding Small Data and Big Data through Wikis."
We have completed the translation of Chinese into English. Please check.[62]Limengchen2777 (talk) 04:44, 1 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241101044400","author":"Limengchen2777","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Limengchen2777-20241101044400-Deadline_6:HONG_HAOTIAN&LI_MENGCHEN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241104030200-Limengchen2777-20241101044400"]}}-->
@Limengchen2777 Good progress, but there are still some parts that are missing references. Each paragraph needs at least one reference (or more, if one is not enough to verify all the claims made in it). I still see several paragraphs that do not have a reference - please double check your article.
There is also strange content here: "Explosion incident Main article: Burst".
There are places where links are missing, ex. "Main article: Pandownload § Author arrested" or "Baidu Japan".
I see you tried to link Chinese articles using the interlanguage template I requested, that is good, but the code is incorrect - the links are broken. Please fix them or stop by my office and I'll show you how to do it.
Please fix the issues above, and carefully proofread your article (I recommend using a tool like Grammarly). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:02, 4 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241104030200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241104030200-Limengchen2777-20241101044400","replies":["c-Honghaotian-20241108044600-Hanyangprofessor2-20241104030200"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
This is our revised Chinese-English translation, please check!User:Limengchen2777/sandboxHonghaotian (talk) 04:46, 8 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241108044600","author":"Honghaotian","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Honghaotian-20241108044600-Hanyangprofessor2-20241104030200","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241111003700-Honghaotian-20241108044600"]}}-->
I don't see that anything was fixed; all the issues I've pointed out still remain.
Much content is still missing a reference and needs to be either deleted or referenced. There should be a citation (or more than one) at the end of each paragraph.
The link at "Main article: Burst" does not make sense and the context is missing.
There are broken (wrong) links, such as Main article: Pandownload § Author arrested [zh] or Main article: Baidu library infringement incident [Wikidata] , despite me showing you how to fix them in my office. Please fix all the links in yoru article. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here00:37, 11 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241111003700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241111003700-Honghaotian-20241108044600","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
i'm taking‘ Media Trends and Globalization’ class.I have completed the task of deadline 6, here is my related link[63], please check. Thank you. Hhhlx (talk) 10:15, 1 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241101101500","author":"Hhhlx","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Hhhlx-20241101101500-Deadline_6\uff1a_HUANG_LINGXUAN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241104032500-Hhhlx-20241101101500"]}}-->
@Hhhlx Ok, but please try to suggest a way to make the article better. And if it is on Chinese Wikipedia, your comment should be in Chinese Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:25, 4 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241104032500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241104032500-Hhhlx-20241101101500","replies":["c-Hhhlx-20241108115200-Hanyangprofessor2-20241104032500"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor, I rewrote the article in Chinese and made some suggestions. Please check. Thank you. Hhhlx (talk) 11:52, 8 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241108115200","author":"Hhhlx","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Hhhlx-20241108115200-Hanyangprofessor2-20241104032500","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241111003800-Hhhlx-20241108115200"]}}-->
@Hhhlx Ok Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here00:38, 11 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241111003800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241111003800-Hhhlx-20241108115200","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello professor, I'm taking the course ''Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis''. I've finished deadline4. Please check it .Thank you. 유신예 (talk) 13:42, 6 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241106134200","author":"\uc720\uc2e0\uc608","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-\uc720\uc2e0\uc608-20241106134200-Deadline4-LIU_XINRUI","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241108015400-\uc720\uc2e0\uc608-20241106134200"]}}-->
@유신예 Your review should be at the article's Wikivoyage talk page, not Wikipedia talk page, since our assignment for that class in on Wikivoyage, not on Wikipedia. Please move your comment there. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here01:54, 8 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241108015400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241108015400-\uc720\uc2e0\uc608-20241106134200","replies":["c-\uc720\uc2e0\uc608-20241108095900-Hanyangprofessor2-20241108015400"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello professor, I have transferred the comments to Wikitourism, please check it, thank you for your assistance. 유신예 (talk) 09:59, 8 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241108095900","author":"\uc720\uc2e0\uc608","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-\uc720\uc2e0\uc608-20241108095900-Hanyangprofessor2-20241108015400","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241111003900-\uc720\uc2e0\uc608-20241108095900"]}}-->
@유신예 Ok Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here00:39, 11 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241111003900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241111003900-\uc720\uc2e0\uc608-20241108095900","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello professor, The topic of Multicultural families in South Korea was originally intended to be completed with classmate. But after discussing with our classmate, we decided to do Wikipedia homework separately. I re-selected the topic Beyond Utopia translates from English to Chinese. Is this theme okay?Laoxinyi (talk) 06:31, 7 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241107063100","author":"Laoxinyi","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Laoxinyi-20241107063100-Deadline_4_:_LAOXINYI_2","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241108015500-Laoxinyi-20241107063100"]}}-->
@Laoxinyi The topic is fine but it is too short to be sufficient for a full project. Please chose at least one more article of similar length; I suggest DefiladaPiotrus at Hanyang| reply here01:55, 8 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241108015500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241108015500-Laoxinyi-20241107063100","replies":["c-Laoxinyi-20241108051500-Hanyangprofessor2-20241108015500"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I'll choose this one to work on.thank youLaoxinyi (talk) 05:15, 8 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241108051500","author":"Laoxinyi","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Laoxinyi-20241108051500-Hanyangprofessor2-20241108015500","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241111004100-Laoxinyi-20241108051500"]}}-->
@Laoxinyi Ok, approved :) Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here00:41, 11 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241111004100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241111004100-Laoxinyi-20241108051500","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I've done deadline6 in Media Trends and Globalization cousre. Please check it out. Here is the link.
Thank you for your checking Parkjeongeun0430 (talk) 15:44, 7 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241107154400","author":"Parkjeongeun0430","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Parkjeongeun0430-20241107154400-Deadline6_:_Jeongeun_Park","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241108015700-Parkjeongeun0430-20241107154400"]}}-->
@Parkjeongeun0430 Good, but since you are leaving your comment on Korean Wikipedia, please translate it to Korean there. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here01:57, 8 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241108015700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241108015700-Parkjeongeun0430-20241107154400","replies":["c-Parkjeongeun0430-20241108054600-Hanyangprofessor2-20241108015700"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Okay, I translated it to Korean. Parkjeongeun0430 (talk) 05:46, 8 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241108054600","author":"Parkjeongeun0430","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Parkjeongeun0430-20241108054600-Hanyangprofessor2-20241108015700","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241111004100-Parkjeongeun0430-20241108054600"]}}-->
@Parkjeongeun0430 Ok Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here00:41, 11 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241111004100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241111004100-Parkjeongeun0430-20241108054600","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
—Kylo09 (talk) 06:50, 7 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241107065000","author":"Kylo09","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Kylo09-20241107065000-Deadline6_:_ZHONG_QI","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241111004200-Kylo09-20241107065000"]}}-->
@Kylo09 Good Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here00:42, 11 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241111004200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241111004200-Kylo09-20241107065000","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Dear Professor,
I am currently taking the courses "Media Trends and Globalization" and "Understanding Small Data and Big Data through Wiki." I have completed the translation of two Wikipedia articles: "Multicultural Families in South Korea" and "Corruption in India." My Wikivoyage expansion topic is "Ruili." In addition, because the original teammate gave up the translation task of this article, the current Wikipedia topic is "Korean multicultural family." This article will be completed by myself. Both the Wikipedia translation and the Wikivoyage expansion tasks have been completed. Please kindly confirm. Thanks! Jihaiyun (talk) 17:05, 7 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241107170500","author":"Jihaiyun","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Jihaiyun-20241107170500-Deadline_4_and_5:_JI_HAIYUN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241111005100-Jihaiyun-20241107170500"]}}-->
@Jihaiyun Good progress. Please note there are some issues raised at zh:Draft:韩国多文化家庭 in the warning box at the top. Please work with editor or editors who added this warning to resolve them. You can identify them by looking at the history of your article, and then you should ask them for explanation if you don't understand the issues mentioned, or asked to check if they have been resolved if you have already tried to address them.
印度的腐败 looks good for now, but please monitor it to see if any issues are raised by the reviewers.
For your listings, some are missing the Chinese name - please add them. See also comments on talk and fixes by other editors in the history of your article, to learn how your work has been corrected. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here00:51, 11 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241111005100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241111005100-Jihaiyun-20241107170500","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Dear Professor,
I am taking two courses, "Media Trends and Globalization" and "Understanding Small Data and Big Data through Wikis."
I have completed the deadline of 6. I left feedback and suggestions on the discussion pages of other students' articles.
@Jihaiyun Good Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here00:53, 11 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241111005300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241111005300-Jihaiyun-20241107171500","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
The class I am taking is Media Trends and Globalization.
I would like to inform you that I have completed the assignment for deadline 5. However, I must apologize for changing the topic without prior notice. The original topic, "The History of Chinese Clans," (中国宗族史)involved too many classical Chinese texts, which I found challenging to translate. Therefore, I took the liberty of modifying the topic to "The Four Talents of Wu."(吴中四大才子) I have ensured that the basic content for the new topic has been completed.
The link to my sandbox is here. Please check , thank you HYH031277777 (talk) 18:14, 7 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241107181400","author":"HYH031277777","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-HYH031277777-20241107181400-Deadline_5\uff1aHUANG_YANHAN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241111005700-HYH031277777-20241107181400"]}}-->
@HYH031277777 Good start. Please make sure to add references to your article. Please remember that only referenced content can be added to English Wikipedia and only such content will count for credit. The content from Chinese article that has no references needs to be referenced first before being translated. See Wikipedia:Verifiability
Your existing footnotes need to be formatted properly using citation templates, and content needs to be translated to English. Actually, right now only one footnote (5th) looks correct, if abberviated; the others seem to be comments, not references.
If a term exists in Chinese Wikipedia and has an article there, but not on English Wikipedia, please use Template:Interlanguage link to link it. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here00:57, 11 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241111005700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241111005700-HYH031277777-20241107181400","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear professor,in p4 we choose the World Bank Group (WBG),My team members are ZAIWEI,WangTao,HuangYanHan, and we are three people in total. ZAIWEI0328 (talk) 18:31, 7 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241107183100","author":"ZAIWEI0328","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-ZAIWEI0328-20241107183100-project4:ZAIWEI","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241111005700-ZAIWEI0328-20241107183100"]}}-->
@ZAIWEI0328 Ok Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here00:57, 11 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241111005700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241111005700-ZAIWEI0328-20241107183100","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Dear Professor:
I am taking two courses, "Media Trends and Globalization" and "Understanding Small Data and Big Data through Wikis."
I have completed Deadline 5, which involved translating two articles in my sandboxes: both translations are from English to Chinese:12
Please check it. Thank you! Cuicuizan (talk) 23:02, 7 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241107230200","author":"Cuicuizan","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Cuicuizan-20241107230200-Deadline5:_CUI_ZAN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241111010700-Cuicuizan-20241107230200"]}}-->
@Cuicuizan Your work looks good. Good progress. If you have translated most content, you can publish your article by moving the draft to the mainspace (see zh:Help:页面重命名 on how to do this); then we will see what the Chinese reviewers will say. If you are expanding an existing article, you should not move the article but merge it with the existing one. See 维基百科:合并页面 - 维基百科,自由的百科全书 for advice on how to merge pages Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here01:07, 11 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241111010700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241111010700-Cuicuizan-20241107230200","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I am taking two courses, "Media Trends and Globalization" and "Understanding Small Data and Big Data through Wikis."
I have completed the deadline of 6. I left feedback and suggestions on the discussion pages of other students' articles.
@SHENZIHE Good Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here01:08, 11 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241111010800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241111010800-SHENZIHE-20241108025900","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I have completed deadline 4 of "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis" from the professor.
I left the feedback on Nonsan.
Please check, Thanks. SHENZIHE (talk) 03:13, 8 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241108031300","author":"SHENZIHE","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-SHENZIHE-20241108031300-Deadline4:_SHENZIHE","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241111010800-SHENZIHE-20241108031300"]}}-->
@SHENZIHE Very nice Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here01:08, 11 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241111010800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241111010800-SHENZIHE-20241108031300","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
@HYH031277777 Well done Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here01:09, 11 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241111010900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241111010900-HYH031277777-20241108043800","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Dear Professor,
I made constructive comments on ZHANG XIAORUI's classmate's discussion page.@Zzzxxxrrr
@Honghaotian Good Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here01:09, 11 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241111010900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241111010900-Honghaotian-20241108052100","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Hello professor, I have completed constructive comments for my friends in two classes, one for Media Trends and Globalization User talk:Hanyuanyuan613#Article suggestionsand one for Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikishttps://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/Talk:Yuzhou. Mcx8202229 🇨🇳❤️ (talk)05:26, 8 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241108052600","author":"Mcx8202229","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Mcx8202229-20241108052600-WEEK_10_Ma_Chenxiao","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241111011000-Mcx8202229-20241108052600"]}}-->
@Mcx8202229 Good Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here01:10, 11 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241111011000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241111011000-Mcx8202229-20241108052600","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Dear Professor,
I made constructive comments on ZHANG XIAORUI's classmate's discussion page.@Zzzxxxrrr
@Limengchen2777 Good Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here01:10, 11 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241111011000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241111011000-Limengchen2777-20241108052700","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
@Hanyuanyuan613 Good Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here01:10, 11 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241111011000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241111011000-Hanyuanyuan613-20241108054000","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
User talk:SHENZIHE#Recommendations Hello teacher, I added suggestions in the sandbox of my classmates, thank you Hanyangdaxue (talk) 05:52, 8 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241108055200","author":"Hanyangdaxue","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Hanyangdaxue-20241108055200-Deadline6:LYU_YANGCHENG","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241111011000-Hanyangdaxue-20241108055200"]}}-->
@Hanyangdaxue Well done Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here01:10, 11 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241111011000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241111011000-Hanyangdaxue-20241108055200","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Hanyangdaxue/%E6%B2%99%E7%9B%92 Hello teacher, this is my translation of the English translation of the article, please take a look, thank you Hanyangdaxue (talk) 06:08, 8 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241108060800","author":"Hanyangdaxue","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Hanyangdaxue-20241108060800-Deadline6;LYU_YANGCHENG","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241111011500-Hanyangdaxue-20241108060800"]}}-->
@Hanyangdaxue Your work looks good. Good progress. If you have translated most content, you can publish your article by moving the draft to the mainspace (see zh:Help:页面重命名 on how to do this); then we will see what the Chinese reviewers will say.
Please check all your links first, however. I noticed at least one error in links (a link to Wikipedia rather than to the right movie, namely Vicky the Viking), and may small errors such as "edit" text. Please proofread your text carefully, 
Lastly, if a term exists in English Wikipedia and has an article there, but not on Chinese Wikipedia, please use this tool zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi to link it. If you need help, I can demonstrate how to use it Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here01:15, 11 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241111011500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241111011500-Hanyangdaxue-20241108060800","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I have completed deadline 4 of "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis". Here is the link , link, Thank you. Hee Jung, Yoon (talk) 06:26, 8 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241108062600","author":"Hee Jung, Yoon","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Hee_Jung,_Yoon-20241108062600-Deadline4_:_Yoon_Hee_Jung","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241111011600-Hee_Jung,_Yoon-20241108062600"]}}-->
@Hee Jung, Yoon Good Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here01:16, 11 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241111011600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241111011600-Hee_Jung,_Yoon-20241108062600","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
My team member【LIU ZIYE】@Poeyal and I 【GUAN YUE】would like to change the selected city for the Wikivoyage project from Yanbian to Shaoxing. Some content has already been added to the previously selected Yanbian page. We will start over with the Shaoxing Wikivoyage page.
@Uuueol Ok Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here01:16, 11 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241111011600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241111011600-Uuueol-20241109011200","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
The class I am taking is Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis.
I have completed deadline 4 of "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis". Here is the linkHYH031277777 (talk) 12:54, 9 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241109125400","author":"HYH031277777","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-HYH031277777-20241109125400-Deadline_4\uff1aHUANG_YANHAN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241111011700-HYH031277777-20241109125400"]}}-->
@HYH031277777 Good Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here01:17, 11 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241111011700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241111011700-HYH031277777-20241109125400","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
@Laoxinyi Good Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here01:20, 11 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241111012000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241111012000-Laoxinyi-20241110030000","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I've done deadline6 in Media Trends and Globalization cousre. Please check it out. Here is the linkSoeunK (talk) 06:43, 10 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241110064300","author":"SoeunK","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-SoeunK-20241110064300-Deadline_6:_Kwon_Soeun","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241111012200-SoeunK-20241110064300"]}}-->
@SoeunK Good Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here01:22, 11 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241111012200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241111012200-SoeunK-20241110064300","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Deadline 5 and 6:WU SHUHAN(Media Trends and Globalization)
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Deadline 5: I have completed the translation of the project article and expanded it. Please check it.
Deadline 6: I have already evaluated another student's essay, please check it.
Thank you. WSH0927 (talk) 10:03, 10 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241110100300","author":"WSH0927","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-WSH0927-20241110100300-Deadline_5_and_6\uff1aWU_SHUHAN\uff08Media_Trends_and_Globalization\uff09","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241111012300-WSH0927-20241110100300"]}}-->
@WSH0927 Good Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here01:23, 11 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241111012300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241111012300-WSH0927-20241110100300","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Dear professor:
I'm taking two courses, "Media Trends and Globalization" and "Understanding Small Data and Big Data through Wikis."
I have completed Deadline 6. Suggesting editorial content for other editors.
@Cuicuizan For your first message, please copy it from your friend's sandbox talk page to their man talk page. People don't get notifications or check the talk pages of their subpages. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here00:43, 11 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241111004300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241111004300-Cuicuizan-20241107164900","replies":["c-Cuicuizan-20241111053300-Hanyangprofessor2-20241111004300"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I have already copied it to the talk page. Please confirm. Thank you! Media Trends and Globalization:1Cuicuizan (talk) 05:33, 11 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241111053300","author":"Cuicuizan","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Cuicuizan-20241111053300-Hanyangprofessor2-20241111004300","replies":[]}}-->
@Uuueol Good. If you comment on Chinese Wikipedia, please make sure to translate your comment to Chinese as well. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here00:52, 11 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241111005200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241111005200-Uuueol-20241107171400","replies":["c-Uuueol-20241111025700-Hanyangprofessor2-20241111005200"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I have already changed my comment to Chinese. Please confirm. Thank you! Uuueol (talk) 02:57, 11 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241111025700","author":"Uuueol","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Uuueol-20241111025700-Hanyangprofessor2-20241111005200","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241113024200-Uuueol-20241111025700"]}}-->
@Uuueol Good Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:42, 13 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241113024200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241113024200-Uuueol-20241111025700","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Your work looks good. Good progress. If you have translated most content, you can publish your article by moving the draft to the mainspace (see zh:Help:页面重命名 on how to do this); then we will see what the Chinese reviewers will say.
Lastly, if a term exists in English Wikipedia and has an article there, but not on Chinese Wikipedia, please use this tool zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi to link it. If you need help, I can demonstrate how to use it
Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here01:19, 11 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241111011900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241111011900-Laoxinyi-20241110023900","replies":["c-Laoxinyi-20241111132500-Hanyangprofessor2-20241111011900"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
@Laoxinyi Very good. Now we will wait to see if there are any comments by the reviewers. For extra credit, you can translate more similar articles. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:48, 13 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241113024800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241113024800-Laoxinyi-20241111132500","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Dear Professor:
I've done deadline5 in Media Trends and Globalization course. Please check it out. Here is the link.
Thank you for your checking. Dbinni (talk) 14:59, 10 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241110145900","author":"Dbinni","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Dbinni-20241110145900-Deadline_5:_Dabin_Kim,_Eunyeong_Kang","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241111012300-Dbinni-20241110145900"]}}-->
@Dbinni I am afraid you forgot to post the link, please try again Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here01:23, 11 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241111012300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241111012300-Dbinni-20241110145900","replies":["c-Dbinni-20241111103300-Hanyangprofessor2-20241111012300"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I realized I forgot to attach the link in my previous message. Here is the two links for Deadline 5: Eng to Kor, Kor to Eng
Thank you for your time and feedback! Dbinni (talk) 10:33, 11 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241111103300","author":"Dbinni","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Dbinni-20241111103300-Hanyangprofessor2-20241111012300","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241113030000-Dbinni-20241111103300"]}}-->
@Dbinni Your Korean sandbox appears to contain two different articles. You can publish them both to get extra credit; please send me links to them once they are published - then we will see what Korean reviewers will say. In either case, your work looks good. Good progress. If you have translated most content, you can publish your article by moving the draft to the mainspace (see ko:위키백과:문서 이동 on how to do this).
Your Englis article looks well, but you need to fix errors in the references with metadata; please stop by my office or talk to me in class and I can show you how to do it.
After this you can publish your article by moving it ot the mainspace; after moving please add WP:CATEGORIES similar to the ones seen in the Korean article. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:00, 13 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241113030000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241113030000-Dbinni-20241111103300","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
@Zzzxxxrrr Good Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:00, 13 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241113030000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241113030000-Zzzxxxrrr-20241111042100","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor,
I am taking two courses, "Media Trends and Globalization" and "Understanding Small Data and Big Data through Wikis."
I have completed the deadline of 6. I left feedback and suggestions on the discussion pages of articles.
Media Trends and Globalization: 1
Learn about small data and big Data through Wikis: 2
Please check. Thank you 白诗棋 (talk) 04:29, 11 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241111042900","author":"\u767d\u8bd7\u68cb","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-\u767d\u8bd7\u68cb-20241111042900-Deadline6_:_\u767d\u8bd7\u68cb","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241113030100-\u767d\u8bd7\u68cb-20241111042900"]}}-->
@白诗棋 Good Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:01, 13 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241113030100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241113030100-\u767d\u8bd7\u68cb-20241111042900","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor,
I am currently enrolled in the "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis" course.
I’ve completed Deadline 4(peer review) for this course and have attached the link for your review. I would appreciate it if you could kindly check it.
Thank you! Dbinni (talk) 10:18, 11 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241111101800","author":"Dbinni","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Dbinni-20241111101800-Deadline_4:_Dabin_Kim","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241113030700-Dbinni-20241111101800"]}}-->
@Dbinni Very good Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:07, 13 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241113030700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241113030700-Dbinni-20241111101800","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor.
I am studying “Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis” and “Media Trends and Globalization”.
This is the first article I translated, and this is the sandbox link. Translated from English to Chinese, please check.https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:MUYW/%E6%B2%99%E7%9B%92
Also, my blog invitation has expired, can I be re-invited? I have sent an email to your email address MUYW (talk) 10:25, 11 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241111102500","author":"MUYW","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-MUYW-20241111102500-Deadline_4:MUYE_2","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241113030800-MUYW-20241111102500"]}}-->
@MUYW Very good, your work looks good. Good progress. If you have translated most content, you can publish your article by moving the draft to the mainspace (see zh:Help:页面重命名 on how to do this); then we will see what the Chinese reviewers will say.
Blog invitations do not expire. Please try logging in at blogger.com; you have most likely already accepted the invitation and just need to log in. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:08, 13 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241113030800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241113030800-MUYW-20241111102500","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor. I am studying “Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis” and “Media Trends and Globalization”. Here's my edit link to Wikivoyage, check it out。
https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/AletaiMUYW (talk) 11:00, 11 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241111110000","author":"MUYW","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-MUYW-20241111110000-Deadline5:MUYE","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241113031200-MUYW-20241111110000"]}}-->
more listings with GPS coordinates; many of the current listings don't have GPS information
a section on climate (with text, you already have the graph - good)
the first sentence should be longer, with a bit advertising on why tourists would like to visit that city
main local bus station should have a GPS address, just like the main tran station does. The names of the bus and train stations should be clearly marked. Airport needs a GPS marker.
One entry (Kanas) is duplicated in see and do, chose one and merge the other into it.
Buy section needs to be expanded with more information.
Please add some pictures
Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:12, 13 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241113031200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241113031200-MUYW-20241111110000","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor: I am taking the course "Understanding Small Data and Big Data through Wikis"
Learn about small data and big data through Wikipedia: We have finished editing Emeishan City
Thank you for your checking. Xjx921 (talk) 14:52, 11 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241111145200","author":"Xjx921","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Xjx921-20241111145200-Deadine5:XI_JIAXIN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241113031700-Xjx921-20241111145200"]}}-->
more listings with GPS coordinates; you only have one see and one do - many more are needed
a section on climate (with text, you already have the graph - good)
the first sentence should be longer, with a bit advertising on why tourists would like to visit that city
Please add some pictures
Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:17, 13 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241113031700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241113031700-Xjx921-20241111145200","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I'm taking the course Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis.
Here is the Link. Please check the final draft ! Thank you. :) Parksungeun (talk) 01:17, 12 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241112011700","author":"Parksungeun","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Parksungeun-20241112011700-Deadline_5:_Parksungeun","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241113032000-Parksungeun-20241112011700"]}}-->
In particular, please expand the first sentence, and add a bit more detail to the get around. Are there taxis or rental bikes? What apps can people use them to catch taxi or rent a bike?
In the do section, add a section on local festivals, if there are any. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:20, 13 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241113032000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241113032000-Parksungeun-20241112011700","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Here is the Link(Pocheon). Please check the final draft !
Thank you. :) Kim jong min (hanyang) (talk) 02:02, 12 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241112020200","author":"Kim jong min (hanyang)","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Kim_jong_min_(hanyang)-20241112020200-Deadline_5_:_Kim_jong_min,_Kang_taeho","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241113032100-Kim_jong_min_(hanyang)-20241112020200"]}}-->
Additionally, please expand the first sentence so that it tells the reader why they should visit the city, and write up the get around section. Are there buses? What apps can people use them to catch taxi or rent a bike?
In the do section, add a section on local festivals, if there are any Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:21, 13 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241113032100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241113032100-Kim_jong_min_(hanyang)-20241112020200","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Dear professor
I'm taking 'Media Trends and Globalization' class.
Good. Please remember to sign your talk page messages. --Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:22, 13 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241113032200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241113032200-Deadline_6:_Kang_Taeho","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear professor, I'm taking "Understanding Small Data and Big Data with Wikis."
I left my feedback and suggestions on another student's article. Talk:DanyangKang Taeho (talk) 02:13, 12 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241112021300","author":"Kang Taeho","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Kang_Taeho-20241112021300-Deadline4\uff1aKang_Taeho","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241113032300-Kang_Taeho-20241112021300"]}}-->
@XIONG CHAOLI Good Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:23, 13 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241113032300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241113032300-Kang_Taeho-20241112021300","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
@XIONG CHAOLI Mhm. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:23, 13 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241113032300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241113032300-XIONG_CHAOLI-20241112054600","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear professor: I'm taking course is "Media Trends and Globalization" .
I completed two Chinese Wikipedia entries by myself (English to Chinese translation).
Here is the sandbox link:1)https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:MUYW/%E6%B2%99%E7%9B%92
2)https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:MUYW/%E6%B2%99%E7%9B%922
Please check and let me know what needs to be modified.
Also, can you re-invite me to blog? MUYW (talk) 06:07, 12 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241112060700","author":"MUYW","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-MUYW-20241112060700-Deadline5\uff1aMUYE","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241113032500-MUYW-20241112060700"]}}-->
@MUYW Your work looks good. Good progress. If you have translated most content, you can publish your article by moving the draft to the mainspace (see zh:Help:页面重命名 on how to do this); then we will see what the Chinese reviewers will say.
Blog invitations do not expire. Please try logging in at blogger.com; you have most likely already accepted the invitation and just need to log in. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:25, 13 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241113032500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241113032500-MUYW-20241112060700","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Please check the final draft. Xisuux (talk) 14:31, 12 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241112143100","author":"Xisuux","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Xisuux-20241112143100-Deadline_5:_Yoon_sarang_&_Lee_jisu","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241113032700-Xisuux-20241112143100"]}}-->
@Xisuux Good. For get in, please add a listing with GPS for the main local intercity bus station.
You can write up the get around section. What apps can people use them to catch taxi or rent a bike?
In the do section, add a section on local festivals, if there are any Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:27, 13 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241113032700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241113032700-Xisuux-20241112143100","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I am studying “Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis” and “Media Trends and Globalization”.
This is my first draft of the sandbox linkCaizzz (talk) 06:12, 7 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241007061200","author":"Caizzz","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Caizzz-20241007061200-Deadline4\uff1aCAI_ZHIHANG","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241007082000-Caizzz-20241007061200"]}}-->
@Caizzz Good start. Please make sure to add references to your article. Please remember that only referenced content can be added to English Wikipedia and only such content will count for credit. The content from Chinese article that has no references needs to be referenced first before being translated. See Wikipedia:Verifiability
In some cases you have links to Baidu content rather then Wikipedia - please make sure to fix your links. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:20, 7 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241007082000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241007082000-Caizzz-20241007061200","replies":["c-Caizzz-20241007123000-Hanyangprofessor2-20241007082000"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
This is my new linkCaizzz (talk) 12:30, 7 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241007123000","author":"Caizzz","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Caizzz-20241007123000-Hanyangprofessor2-20241007082000","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241008061800-Caizzz-20241007123000"]}}-->
@Caizzz Good, but please check your links. Your url for reference 1 leads to Chinese Wikipedia, instead of the book in question.
Next, if the source is in Chinese (ex. 李鹏《六四日记》), please use both the Chinese and English titles. Use Chinese title in the 'title' field, and English in the 'translated title' field. If you need help, stop by my office and I'll demonstrate how to do so. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here06:18, 8 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241008061800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241008061800-Caizzz-20241007123000","replies":["c-Caizzz-20241011052500-Hanyangprofessor2-20241008061800"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Here is the new linkCaizzz (talk) 05:25, 11 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241011052500","author":"Caizzz","type":"comment","level":5,"id":"c-Caizzz-20241011052500-Hanyangprofessor2-20241008061800","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241011072400-Caizzz-20241011052500"]}}-->
@Caizzz Good job adding English titles, but please fix link to Wikipedia in your reference 1, it should link to the book in question. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:24, 11 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241011072400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":6,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241011072400-Caizzz-20241011052500","replies":["c-Caizzz-20241014045400-Hanyangprofessor2-20241011072400"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Here is the new linkCaizzz (talk) 04:54, 14 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241014045400","author":"Caizzz","type":"comment","level":7,"id":"c-Caizzz-20241014045400-Hanyangprofessor2-20241011072400","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241015011900-Caizzz-20241014045400"]}}-->
@Caizzz I have fixed it for you. Please see how it should be done. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here01:19, 15 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241015011900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":8,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241015011900-Caizzz-20241014045400","replies":["c-Caizzz-20241018043100-Hanyangprofessor2-20241015011900"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Here is the new linkCaizzz (talk) 04:31, 18 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241018043100","author":"Caizzz","type":"comment","level":9,"id":"c-Caizzz-20241018043100-Hanyangprofessor2-20241015011900","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241021014400-Caizzz-20241018043100"]}}-->
@Caizzz Good progress. The content from Chinese article that has no references needs to be referenced before being published. See Wikipedia:Verifiability
Also, please add links (and Chinese title, if the source is in Chinese) to references 5, 13 and 15. If the reference is not online, please add other information that allow confirmation that the source exist (link to library catalogue entry for the position or such). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here01:44, 21 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241021014400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":10,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241021014400-Caizzz-20241018043100","replies":["c-Caizzz-20241028042300-Hanyangprofessor2-20241021014400"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Here is the new link 5,13,15 Annotation has been completed. Caizzz (talk) 04:23, 28 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241028042300","author":"Caizzz","type":"comment","level":11,"id":"c-Caizzz-20241028042300-Hanyangprofessor2-20241021014400","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241030013400-Caizzz-20241028042300","c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241030013500-Caizzz-20241028042300"]}}-->
@Caizzz Good. Please replace reference 15 with a better source. Per the discussion and explanation at 1Wikipedia:BAIDU, Baidu is not allowed on Wikipedia (too many errors). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here01:34, 30 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241030013400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":12,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241030013400-Caizzz-20241028042300","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
For ref 23 - is this a book? Can you add ISBNs to it and other books? Also, if it is in Chinese, it needs a Chinese title, not just English. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here01:35, 30 October 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241030013500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":12,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241030013500-Caizzz-20241028042300","replies":["c-Caizzz-20241111042000-Hanyangprofessor2-20241030013500"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Reference 15 has been revised. The original text in reference 23 has no annotations.Here is the linkCaizzz (talk) 04:20, 11 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241111042000","author":"Caizzz","type":"comment","level":13,"id":"c-Caizzz-20241111042000-Hanyangprofessor2-20241030013500","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241113023500-Caizzz-20241111042000"]}}-->
@Caizzz Ok. Please carefully check all references one by one to ensure they have metadata information (author, title, publisher, date). Next, if the source is in Chinese (ex. 李鹏《六四日记》), please use both the Chinese and English titles. Use Chinese title in the 'title' field, and English in the 'translated title' field. If you need help, stop by my office and I'll demonstrate how to do so.
Please correct a link to Baidu in article body in the 'Folk commemoration' section, it should link to Wikipedia instead.
Please add references to the content that is missing them. I see many sentences and even paragraphs without a reference. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:35, 13 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241113023500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":14,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241113023500-Caizzz-20241111042000","replies":["c-Caizzz-20241115043900-Hanyangprofessor2-20241113023500"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
The Chinese title and English title have been written. The Baidu link in the folk memorial has also been replaced with a Wikipedia link. Then there are only 24 references in the original article, and I have already made 24。This is my new linkCaizzz (talk) 04:39, 15 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241115043900","author":"Caizzz","type":"comment","level":15,"id":"c-Caizzz-20241115043900-Hanyangprofessor2-20241113023500","replies":["c-Caizzz-20241115044200-Caizzz-20241115043900","c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241117071400-Caizzz-20241115043900"]}}-->
The Chinese title and English title have been written. The Baidu link in the folk memorial has also been replaced with a Wikipedia link. Then there are only 24 references in the original article, and I have already made 24。This is my new linkCaizzz (talk) 04:42, 15 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241115044200","author":"Caizzz","type":"comment","level":16,"id":"c-Caizzz-20241115044200-Caizzz-20241115043900","replies":[]}}-->
@Caizzz The references look better, but you have not fixed metadate for most, despite my request above. As such, more fixes are still needed. Reference 5 for example needs a Chinese title, date and publisher and the link is wrong - it leads to a generic table of contents that does not mention anything about the topic. Similar issues are present in other references
What is reference 23 ("Mass media and Tiananmen square")? Is this a book? It probably needs Chinese title. All books should have ISBNs as well as information what particular page we are citing. For example, reference 6 is to a book. Which page in this book is being cited? It needs to be identified.
As noted before, you need to ensure all your content is referenced - I still see unreferenced paragraphs. such as the one that begins with "After Hu Yaobang's death". Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:14, 17 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241117071400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":16,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241117071400-Caizzz-20241115043900","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
@Hanyangprofessor2 I have completed deadline 4 of "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis". Here is the linkLaoxinyi (talk) 05:46, 15 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241115054600","author":"Laoxinyi","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Laoxinyi-20241115054600-Laoxinyi-20241110030400","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241117071700-Laoxinyi-20241115054600"],"displayName":"link"}}-->
@Laoxinyi Good Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:17, 17 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241117071700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241117071700-Laoxinyi-20241115054600","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Please check, Thanks Tyuni06 (talk) 07:11, 14 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241114071100","author":"Tyuni06","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Tyuni06-20241114071100-Deadline_6:TANG_YINI","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241117083300-Tyuni06-20241114071100"]}}-->
@Tyuni06 Please add your own thoughts, not AI generated content, which is hardly relevant (which images are beautiful and relevant)? Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:33, 17 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241117083300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241117083300-Tyuni06-20241114071100","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Thank you for checking. WANGYIZHE1124 (talk) 04:05, 13 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241113040500","author":"WANGYIZHE1124","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-WANGYIZHE1124-20241113040500-Deadline_6:WANGYIZHE","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241117082500-WANGYIZHE1124-20241113040500"]}}-->
@WANGYIZHE1124 This is not correct (wrong place, AI generated useless content). Please post your own thoughts Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:25, 17 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241117082500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241117082500-WANGYIZHE1124-20241113040500","replies":["c-WANGYIZHE1124-20241117121500-Hanyangprofessor2-20241117082500"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Sorry, I commented in the wrong place, I have asked Jihaiyun classmates to explain the situation WANGYIZHE1124 (talk) 12:15, 17 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241117121500","author":"WANGYIZHE1124","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-WANGYIZHE1124-20241117121500-Hanyangprofessor2-20241117082500","replies":[]}}-->
Dear Professor we have completed deadline5 of "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis" please check itBabaibiaobin (talk) 11:15, 14 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241114111500","author":"Babaibiaobin","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Babaibiaobin-20241114111500-Deadline5:gaoxiaoxia\/chensiting","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241118015000-Babaibiaobin-20241114111500"]}}-->
Please expand the first sentence by adding some more content (2-3 sentences) describing most interesting aspects of this location - tell people why they would want to visit this place, what makes it special.
Are there any festivals that could be discussed under the do section?
Please make sure all entries have some description, for example Wuhai People's Park has none; the first store listed likewise.
You can zoom in and recenter the map to make it more useful
Please take a look at feedback you got a Talk:Wuhai – Travel guide at WikivoyagePiotrus at Hanyang| reply here01:50, 18 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241118015000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241118015000-Babaibiaobin-20241114111500","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor,
This is my Deadline4 for Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis.
I left my feedback and suggestions on another student's articleBabaibiaobin (talk) 11:24, 14 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241114112400","author":"Babaibiaobin","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Babaibiaobin-20241114112400-Deadine4:gaoxiaoxia","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241118015100-Babaibiaobin-20241114112400"]}}-->
@Babaibiaobin Good Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here01:51, 18 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241118015100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241118015100-Babaibiaobin-20241114112400","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
This is my deadline6 for Media Trends and Globalization Babaibiaobin (talk) 11:43, 14 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241114114300","author":"Babaibiaobin","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Babaibiaobin-20241114114300-Deadline6:gaoxiaoxia","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241118015100-Babaibiaobin-20241114114300"]}}-->
@Babaibiaobin Good Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here01:51, 18 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241118015100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241118015100-Babaibiaobin-20241114114300","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
But another article keeps being deleted by other users,So sorry Professor, we may need a little more time https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Potala_Palace_SquareBabaibiaobin (talk) 12:09, 14 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241114120900","author":"Babaibiaobin","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Babaibiaobin-20241114120900-Deadline5:gaoxiaoxia\/chensiting_2","replies":["c-Babaibiaobin-20241114125300-Babaibiaobin-20241114120900"]}}-->
But I found the content on this website is completely copied and translated from Baidu.
We know that Wikipedia cannot use content from Baidu, and we will find more valuable references.
Just confused, why is the content on this website (https://www.chinawiki.net/thread/48/22696.) copyrighted?Maybe Is there any cooperation with Baidu? Babaibiaobin (talk) 12:53, 14 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241114125300","author":"Babaibiaobin","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Babaibiaobin-20241114125300-Babaibiaobin-20241114120900","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241118022000-Babaibiaobin-20241114125300"]}}-->
@Babaibiaobin A lot of people on the Internet steal content from other websites, ignoring (breaking) Copyright. I don't know if people who run chinawiki.net have permission to use Baidu content, I expect they are just stealing it. But we cannot steal it from them; two wrongs do not maker a right. Also, please note that copyright works like this: EVERYTHING IS COPYRIGHTED UNLESS IT IS VERY OLD OR RELEASED UNDER A LICENCE THAT EXPLICITLY STATES OTHERWISE (read also: Copyleft). So unless you see a message on a page saying that a content is free (such as a note saying Creative Commons license is used - visible for example at the bottom of each Wikimedia Foundation-affiliated page), the content of that page is copyrighted and cannot be used without receiving explicit permission from the owner. Read also: Wikipedia:Copyright violationsPiotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:20, 18 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241118022000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241118022000-Babaibiaobin-20241114125300","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
@Babaibiaobin Good. Please carefully check all references one by one to ensure they have metadata information (author, title, publisher, date). Next, if the source is in Chinese (ex. 走进布达拉宫广场-四川经济网-经济门户".), please use both the Chinese and English titles. Use Chinese title in the 'title' field, and English in the 'translated title' field. If you need help, stop by my office and I'll demonstrate how to do so. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:21, 18 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241118022100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241118022100-Babaibiaobin-20241114152000","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I have already evaluated another student's ( Syouziiye )essay, please check it. Thank you. YZY2233 (talk) 06:48, 15 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241115064800","author":"YZY2233","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-YZY2233-20241115064800-Deadline6:YUE_ZIYI","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241118023400-YZY2233-20241115064800"]}}-->
@YZY2233 Good Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:34, 18 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241118023400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241118023400-YZY2233-20241115064800","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I am taking the Media Trends and Globalization course. I have completed Deadline 6. I wrote a feedback on YUE ZIYI's article “未来”please check it here.
Thank you. Syouziiye (talk) 07:03, 15 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241115070300","author":"Syouziiye","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Syouziiye-20241115070300-Deadline_6:SHU_YING","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241118023500-Syouziiye-20241115070300"]}}-->
@Syouziiye Ok Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:35, 18 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241118023500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241118023500-Syouziiye-20241115070300","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello professor, these are the three Wikipedia articles I have recently edited, totaling 30 edits. Perhaps you can help me check, thank you very much. Here is the link.1.2.3.Jzhdylb (talk) 07:24, 16 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241116072400","author":"Jzhdylb","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Jzhdylb-20241116072400-Deadline_6_---FAN_XINRU_2","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241118023500-Jzhdylb-20241116072400"]}}-->
@Jzhdylb Looking good! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:35, 18 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241118023500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241118023500-Jzhdylb-20241116072400","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Hello professor, these are two articles from our group. This is the published English-Chinese translation.世界价值观调查.This is an English article-Early buildings of Wuhan University.Please check ZAIWEI0328 (talk) 16:40, 16 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241116164000","author":"ZAIWEI0328","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-ZAIWEI0328-20241116164000-Deadline5:ZAIWEI&WANGTAO-Media_Trends_and_Globalization","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241118024100-ZAIWEI0328-20241116164000"]}}-->
Regarding your translation to Chinese (WVS), if you have translated most content, you can publish your article by moving the draft to the mainspace (see zh:Help:页面重命名 on how to do this); then we will see what the Chinese reviewers will say. If a term exists in English Wikipedia and has an article there, but not on Chinese Wikipedia, please use this tool zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi to link it. If you need help, I can demonstrate how to use it.
Regarding your English translation, please add references to all content. I still see unreferenced paragraphs. Please make sure to add references to your article. Please remember that only referenced content can be added to English Wikipedia and only such content will count for credit. The content from Chinese article that has no references needs to be referenced first before being translated. See Wikipedia:VerifiabilityPiotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:41, 18 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241118024100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241118024100-ZAIWEI0328-20241116164000","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
This is my Chinese to English translation project: The Long Night
This is my extra English-Chinese translation project: Asian Pride
Please check, Thank you Xuan6699 (talk) 16:47, 16 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241116164700","author":"Xuan6699","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Xuan6699-20241116164700-Deadline_5\uff1aXU_YAN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241118024900-Xuan6699-20241116164700","c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241118024900-Xuan6699-20241116164700-1"]}}-->
@Xuan6699 Please convert the bullet points into prose, which is the preferred way of writing in English. The award section should have all awards in the table, not just one.
And for that table (The 3rd "Asian Content Awards) the reference is only about nominations. Please find a reference that confirms that this movie won the "Best OTT Original" award (and was nominated for others - they are not even mentioned in that reference, ex. 'Best Idea').
The section on 'Publicity Fun Facts' seems to be random WP:TRIVIA and should be rewritten, moved aroud or deleted so that it is not random trivia (read the linked guideline).
Please proofread yoru article carefully, and compare it to the guideline at Wikipedia:Manual_of_Style/Film#Primary_content . Please ensure your heading (section titles) are named accordingly with that guideline.
Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:49, 18 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241118024900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241118024900-Xuan6699-20241116164700","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Regarding your translation to Chinese (Asian Pride), if you have translated most content, you can publish your article by moving the draft to the mainspace (see zh:Help:页面重命名 on how to do this); then we will see what the Chinese reviewers will say. If a term exists in English Wikipedia and has an article there, but not on Chinese Wikipedia, please use this tool zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi to link it. If you need help, I can demonstrate how to use it. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:49, 18 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241118024900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241118024900-Xuan6699-20241116164700-1","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Hi Professor, I have already provided feedback to another editor, please check——feedbackZAIWEI0328 (talk) 16:49, 16 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241116164900","author":"ZAIWEI0328","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-ZAIWEI0328-20241116164900-Deadline6:ZAIWEI-Media_Trends_and_Globalization","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241118025100-ZAIWEI0328-20241116164900"]}}-->
@ZAIWEI0328 Good Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:51, 18 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241118025100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241118025100-ZAIWEI0328-20241116164900","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Hello Professor. I have left feedback on another student's discussion page. Please check——feedbackWangtao626 (talk) 16:56, 16 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241116165600","author":"Wangtao626","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Wangtao626-20241116165600-Deadline6:WANGTAO-Media_Trends_and_Globalization","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241118025100-Wangtao626-20241116165600"]}}-->
@Wangtao626 Good Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:51, 18 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241118025100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241118025100-Wangtao626-20241116165600","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Thank you. Dbinni (talk) 07:37, 17 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241117073700","author":"Dbinni","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Dbinni-20241117073700-Deadline_6:_dabin_kim","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241118025100-Dbinni-20241117073700"]}}-->
@Dbinni Ok Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:51, 18 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241118025100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241118025100-Dbinni-20241117073700","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
https://en.m.wikivoyage.org/wiki/Menghai This is MENGHAI WANGYIZHE1124 (talk) 12:33, 17 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241117123300","author":"WANGYIZHE1124","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-WANGYIZHE1124-20241117123300-Deadline6_WANGYIZHE","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241118025700-WANGYIZHE1124-20241117123300"]}}-->
@WANGYIZHE1124 Regarding your translation to English, please move it from Chinese Wikipedia to English Wikipedia (to your user sandbox here) ; then work on ensuring all content is properly referenced. Good start. Please make sure to add references to your article. Please remember that only referenced content can be added to English Wikipedia and only such content will count for credit. The content from Chinese article that has no references needs to be referenced first before being translated. See Wikipedia:Verifiability . Also, if a term exists in Chinese Wikipedia and has an article there, but not on English Wikipedia, please use Template:Interlanguage link to link it. If you don't know how to use that tool, come to my office hours and I'll demonstrate
Regarding your Wikivoyage article:
Please add more information to Get in, such as the listing (with GPS) for the bus station. Is there no train connection? Look at how it is done in other articles (ex, Ansan, etc.)
You need many more listings for see, as well as the do section (in which you can mention local festivals, for example).
You have a climate infobox, but you should add a section explaining it in words. Look at Ansan or similar articles.
Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:57, 18 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241118025700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241118025700-WANGYIZHE1124-20241117123300","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello Professor! I have finished commenting on my classmate's Wikipedia article. Please check it out! Thank you! Yangpeifu (talk) 15:36, 17 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241117153600","author":"Yangpeifu","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Yangpeifu-20241117153600-Comment:YANGPEIFU","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241118025700-Yangpeifu-20241117153600"]}}-->
@Yangpeifu Very good, identifying bad sources! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:57, 18 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241118025700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241118025700-Yangpeifu-20241117153600","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I'm taking the course Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis.
Here is the Link. Please check it out. Thank you. Parkjeongeun0430 (talk) 11:59, 11 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241111115900","author":"Parkjeongeun0430","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Parkjeongeun0430-20241111115900-Deadline5:_Jeongeun_Park","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241113031500-Parkjeongeun0430-20241111115900"]}}-->
Looking at the map I am a bit confused - why is there a shaded area in the middle of the map?
Which neighourhood is in the middle, which is on the left and which is on the right? We should explain it.
The map probably should be zoomed out by one level so all listings can be seen in it Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:15, 13 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241113031500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241113031500-Parkjeongeun0430-20241111115900","replies":["c-Parkjeongeun0430-20241113075400-Hanyangprofessor2-20241113031500"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I know it looks like weird. But you should look this picture. Originally, Seoul/North is exactly like my map. Parkjeongeun0430 (talk) 07:54, 13 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241113075400","author":"Parkjeongeun0430","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Parkjeongeun0430-20241113075400-Hanyangprofessor2-20241113031500","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241117073900-Parkjeongeun0430-20241113075400"]}}-->
@Parkjeongeun0430 I see. I started a discussion on the talk page of that article - I am not sure it makes sense to group all those districts in a single article - what do you think? Best - reply there Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:39, 17 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241117073900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241117073900-Parkjeongeun0430-20241113075400","replies":["c-Parkjeongeun0430-20241117122600-Hanyangprofessor2-20241117073900"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I replied on discussion. Please check and answer to my question. Parkjeongeun0430 (talk) 12:26, 17 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241117122600","author":"Parkjeongeun0430","type":"comment","level":5,"id":"c-Parkjeongeun0430-20241117122600-Hanyangprofessor2-20241117073900","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241118025800-Parkjeongeun0430-20241117122600"]}}-->
@Parkjeongeun0430 Ok :) Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:58, 18 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241118025800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":6,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241118025800-Parkjeongeun0430-20241117122600","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Dear professor
I'm taking 'Media Trends and Globalization' class.
Please check it.Xisuux (talk) 04:34, 1 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241101043400","author":"Xisuux","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Xisuux-20241101043400-Deadline_5_:_Lee_jisu","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241104024800-Xisuux-20241101043400","c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241104025100-Xisuux-20241101043400"]}}-->
@Xisuux Good. Please change the English article titles from the see also template to Korean. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:48, 4 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241104024800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241104024800-Xisuux-20241101043400","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
PS. And double check whether the article does not exist in Korean. For example. Disinformation in the Russian invasion of Ukraine exists at ko:2022년 러시아의 우크라이나 침공과 중국Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:51, 4 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241104025100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241104025100-Xisuux-20241101043400","replies":["c-Xisuux-20241118044500-Hanyangprofessor2-20241104025100"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I have reflected your feedback.
I found an article with a Korean version and corrected it.
Please check it. Xisuux (talk) 04:45, 18 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241118044500","author":"Xisuux","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Xisuux-20241118044500-Hanyangprofessor2-20241104025100","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241119010600-Xisuux-20241118044500"]}}-->
@Xisuux Good. If a term exists in English Wikipedia and has an article there, but not on Korean Wikipedia, please use this tool - zh:틀:임시링크 . If you need help with it, please stop by my office and I'll demonstrate how to use it Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here01:06, 19 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241119010600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241119010600-Xisuux-20241118044500","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor: I am taking two courses, "Media Trends and Globalization" and "Understanding Small Data and Big Data through Wikis."
Understanding Small and Big Data through Wikipedia: We have completed the editing Mohe
"Media Trends and Globalization": I completed the translation of all my articles in the sandbox User:Zzzxxxrrr/sandbox
Thank you for your checking. Zzzxxxrrr (talk) 04:42, 1 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241101044200","author":"Zzzxxxrrr","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Zzzxxxrrr-20241101044200-Deadline5\uff1aZHANG_XIAORUI","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241104025700-Zzzxxxrrr-20241101044200"]}}-->
Regarding Mohe, it looks good. Please try to find and propose a new banner (see our instructions at https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/User:Hanyangprofessor2#Banners ) .
Regarding your Chinese translation to English, about the diary, please proofread it carefully (you can use AI or tools like Grammarly). Right now, there are many grammar or vocabulary issues, and the article is very hard to read because of numerous errors. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:57, 4 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241104025700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241104025700-Zzzxxxrrr-20241101044200","replies":["c-Zzzxxxrrr-20241104043700-Hanyangprofessor2-20241104025700"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello, professor. I have added a new banner to Mohe's article and reviewed it (this is the link), please check it. Zzzxxxrrr (talk) 04:37, 4 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241104043700","author":"Zzzxxxrrr","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Zzzxxxrrr-20241104043700-Hanyangprofessor2-20241104025700","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241106025100-Zzzxxxrrr-20241104043700"]}}-->
@Zzzxxxrrr Very good. But see the talk page at Talk:Mohe – Travel guide at Wikivoyage - a better (larger) image is needed. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:51, 6 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241106025100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241106025100-Zzzxxxrrr-20241104043700","replies":["c-Zzzxxxrrr-20241111051900-Hanyangprofessor2-20241106025100"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Thank you for your checking. Zzzxxxrrr (talk) 05:19, 11 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241111051900","author":"Zzzxxxrrr","type":"comment","level":5,"id":"c-Zzzxxxrrr-20241111051900-Hanyangprofessor2-20241106025100","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241113024000-Zzzxxxrrr-20241111051900"]}}-->
@Zzzxxxrrr You can upload only the pictures you have taken yourself. Please show me proof in class that this picture was taken by yourself; otherwise, it will be deleted as stolen. 
Regarding your English translation, please proofread it carefully with AI or Grammar tools - if you have done so already, this was clearly not sufficient. There are many grammar or vocabulary errors, and it is difficult to read; many sentences have errors and are confusing. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:40, 13 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241113024000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":6,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241113024000-Zzzxxxrrr-20241111051900","replies":["c-Zzzxxxrrr-20241118060100-Hanyangprofessor2-20241113024000"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear professor, I have modified Mohe’s banner again. There are grammatical errors in the article, please check it. Zzzxxxrrr (talk) 06:01, 18 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241118060100","author":"Zzzxxxrrr","type":"comment","level":7,"id":"c-Zzzxxxrrr-20241118060100-Hanyangprofessor2-20241113024000","replies":["c-Zzzxxxrrr-20241118060300-Zzzxxxrrr-20241118060100"]}}-->
The grammatical errors in the translation of the article have been corrected, please check.User:Zzzxxxrrr/sandboxZzzxxxrrr (talk) 06:03, 18 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241118060300","author":"Zzzxxxrrr","type":"comment","level":8,"id":"c-Zzzxxxrrr-20241118060300-Zzzxxxrrr-20241118060100","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241119011100-Zzzxxxrrr-20241118060300"]}}-->
@Zzzxxxrrr The picture is not formatted correctly - it is obviously unnatural. Please reupload it with proper aspect ratio, then upload another version for the banner using the tool here: https://croptool.toolforge.org/ You need to CROP the image, not stretch it.
Please expand the first sentence by adding some more content (2-3 sentences) describing most interesting aspects of this location - tell people why they would want to visit this place, what makes it special.
Are there any festivals that could be discussed under the do section?
Please see the feedback at Talk:Mohe – Travel guide at WikivoyagePiotrus at Hanyang| reply here01:11, 19 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241119011100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":9,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241119011100-Zzzxxxrrr-20241118060300","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Additionally, please expand the first sentence by adding some more content (2-3 sentences) describing most interesting aspects of this location - tell people why they would want to visit this place, what makes it special.
Add a GPS listing for the port in which the ferry arrives, similar to the raiway and bus station.
Are there any festivals that could be discussed under the do section? Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:06, 13 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241113030600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241113030600-Syouziiye-20241111043800","replies":["c-Syouziiye-20241115061800-Hanyangprofessor2-20241113030600","c-YZY2233-20241115063800-Hanyangprofessor2-20241113030600"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
We've corrected it accroding to your guidance. But there is no discuss here now. Please check it first. Thank you. Syouziiye (talk) 06:18, 15 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241115061800","author":"Syouziiye","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Syouziiye-20241115061800-Hanyangprofessor2-20241113030600","replies":[]}}-->
We have initiated a discussion request on the article's talk page, but have not received any comments yet. YZY2233 (talk) 06:38, 15 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241115063800","author":"YZY2233","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-YZY2233-20241115063800-Hanyangprofessor2-20241113030600","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241117073000-YZY2233-20241115063800"]}}-->
@YZY2233 To receive feedback, you need to follow my instructions. You created a section with a heading but no content, and you did not link it from the noticeboard for linking such requests. Please re-read my instructions at the bottom of my instruction page. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:30, 17 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241117073000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241117073000-YZY2233-20241115063800","replies":["c-Syouziiye-20241118045600-Hanyangprofessor2-20241117073000"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
We followed your instructions to work it out,please check it again. Thank you. Syouziiye (talk) 04:56, 18 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241118045600","author":"Syouziiye","type":"comment","level":5,"id":"c-Syouziiye-20241118045600-Hanyangprofessor2-20241117073000","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241119011300-Syouziiye-20241118045600"]}}-->
@Syouziiye Very good, now this is correct Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here01:13, 19 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241119011300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":6,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241119011300-Syouziiye-20241118045600","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor: I am taking two courses, "Media Trends and Globalization" and "Understanding Small Data and Big Data through Wikis."
We have completed the issue changes for the English to Chinese [66] and Chinese to English [67] articles.Please check! Honghaotian (talk) 04:25, 15 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241115042500","author":"Honghaotian","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Honghaotian-20241115042500-Deadline6:HONG_HAOTIAN&LI_MENGCHEN","replies":["c-Limengchen2777-20241115042700-Honghaotian-20241115042500"]}}-->
This is our finished putian introduction, please check thanks[68]Limengchen2777 (talk) 04:27, 15 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241115042700","author":"Limengchen2777","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Limengchen2777-20241115042700-Honghaotian-20241115042500","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241118022900-Limengchen2777-20241115042700","c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241118023200-Limengchen2777-20241115042700"]}}-->
Regarding your translation to Chinese (biodiversity), if you have translated most content, you can publish your article by moving the draft to the mainspace (see zh:Help:页面重命名 on how to do this); then we will see what the Chinese reviewers will say. If a term exists in English Wikipedia and has an article there, but not on Chinese Wikipedia, please use this tool zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi to link it. If you need help, I can demonstrate how to use it.
Regarding your translation to English, please proofread it carefully - for example, "The search engine fills in the volunteer event" - is event the correct word here? Or "Finding the official volunteer entrance is complex" - what do you mean by entrance? Or in another section: "Most stickers were banned". There are many such errors in the text, making reading and comprehension hard. The 'In 2015, the main owner of the fleet collection bar was replaced' section is another example, I read half of it and I don't know what it is talking about. Is this a forum for people collecting ship models? Please work with an AI tool or preferably a real person fluent in English to carefully proofread your text. What is a bar? See bar - usually it means Bar (establishment)Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:29, 18 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241118022900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241118022900-Limengchen2777-20241115042700","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
As for Wikivoyage (Putian):
Please expand the first sentence by adding some more content (2-3 sentences) describing most interesting aspects of this location - tell people why they would want to visit this place, what makes it special.
Get around section is missing.
For festivals, can you add location, time and homepage information? A Chinese name would also be useful
You can zoom in and recenter the map to make it more useful
Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:32, 18 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241118023200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241118023200-Limengchen2777-20241115042700","replies":["c-Limengchen2777-20241118044900-Hanyangprofessor2-20241118023200"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professors, Putian has been revised, and the English translation of the article has also been published.1Limengchen2777 (talk) 04:49, 18 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241118044900","author":"Limengchen2777","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Limengchen2777-20241118044900-Hanyangprofessor2-20241118023200","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241119011500-Limengchen2777-20241118044900"]}}-->
@Limengchen2777 Good job adding the lead section, but other issues I mentioned do not appear to have been corrected yet. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here01:15, 19 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241119011500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":5,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241119011500-Limengchen2777-20241118044900","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Dear Professor
I'm taking 'Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis' class. I have finished deadline 5. This is my draft .
Thank you for your checking. SongHyeonmin2020007129 (talk) 04:12, 18 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241118041200","author":"SongHyeonmin2020007129","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-SongHyeonmin2020007129-20241118041200-Deadline_5\uff1aHyeonmin_Song_2","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241119011900-SongHyeonmin2020007129-20241118041200"]}}-->
Please expand the first sentence by adding some more content (2-3 sentences) describing most interesting aspects of this location - tell people why they would want to visit this place, what makes it special. Right now you mention some names of attractions, but they need to be explained a bit more to make them appealing.
Then please ask for review pf your article by experienced volunteers and follow their recommendations after you receive them in a few days (see https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/User:Hanyangprofessor2#Final_review). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here01:19, 19 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241119011900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241119011900-SongHyeonmin2020007129-20241118041200","replies":[],"displayName":"https:\/\/en.wikivoyage.org\/wiki\/User:Hanyangprofessor2#Final_review"}}-->
Dear Professor: I am taking two courses, "Media Trends and Globalization" and "Understanding Small Data and Big Data through Wikis."Me and my group members LINYUYANG@l01yy11
Your translation at User:WANGRUITONG is a good start but needs much more work. There are untranslated Chinese characters (see infobox).
The image at the top is malformatted, with caption outside it. Move it to the middle of the article and adjust the placement of the caption.
References are malformatted - please edit them so that they contain no red errors, and instead have the correct metadata (author, title, date, etc.). Books should have ISBN numbers. Next, if the source is in Chinese (ex. 费正清,崔瑞德. 剑桥中华民国史(下卷)), please use both the Chinese and English titles. All references should use citation templates. Use Chinese title in the 'title' field, and English in the 'translated title' field. If you need help, stop by my office and I'll demonstrate how to do so.
Please make sure to add references to your article. Please remember that only referenced content can be added to English Wikipedia and only such content will count for credit. The content from Chinese article that has no references needs to be referenced first before being translated. See Wikipedia:Verifiability
If a term exists in Chinese Wikipedia and has an article there, but not on English Wikipedia, please use Template:Interlanguage link to link it. Again, if you need help with this, stop by my office and I'll demonstrate.
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Please note there are some issues raised at 性别薪酬差距 in the warning box at the top. Please work with editor or editors who added this warning to resolve them. You can identify them by looking at the history of your article, and then you should ask them for explanation if you don't understand the issues mentioned, or asked to check if they have been resolved if you have already tried to address them.
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The banner for Libo is bad - it just shows the top of some tree? Please use a different picture that shows something more interesting.
You can zoom in and recenter the map to make it more useful
Are there any festivals that could be discussed under the do section?
Then please ask for review pf your article by experienced volunteers and follow their recommendations after you receive them in a few days (see https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/User:Hanyangprofessor2#Final_review) Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here01:34, 19 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241119013400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241119013400-WANGRUITONG-20241118080000","replies":[],"displayName":"https:\/\/en.wikivoyage.org\/wiki\/User:Hanyangprofessor2#Final_review"}}-->
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Please check my final draft, thank you. Hee Jung, Yoon (talk) 05:02, 13 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241113050200","author":"Hee Jung, Yoon","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Hee_Jung,_Yoon-20241113050200-Deadline5_:_Yoon_Hee_Jung","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241117082600-Hee_Jung,_Yoon-20241113050200"]}}-->
@Hee Jung, Yoon Good progress. Are there any festivals that could be discussed under the do section?
Please also address the issues raised at Talk:Danyang – Travel guide at WikivoyagePiotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:26, 17 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241117082600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241117082600-Hee_Jung,_Yoon-20241113050200","replies":["c-218.235.241.133-20241122055100-Hanyangprofessor2-20241117082600"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I addressed issues and added 'festival' in do section! 218.235.241.133 (talk) 05:51, 22 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241122055100","author":"218.235.241.133","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-218.235.241.133-20241122055100-Hanyangprofessor2-20241117082600","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241124021500-218.235.241.133-20241122055100"]}}-->
@Hee Jung, Yoon Good Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:15, 24 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241124021500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241124021500-218.235.241.133-20241122055100","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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I'm taking the course Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis.
Here is the Link. Please check my final draft ! Thank you. :)JHyunlee (talk) 07:45, 13 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241113074500","author":"JHyunlee","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-JHyunlee-20241113074500-Deadline_5:_Lee_Jae-hyun","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241117082700-JHyunlee-20241113074500","c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241117083200-JHyunlee-20241113074500"]}}-->
@JHyunlee Good progress. Are there any bus stations to add to the Get in? Get around needs to be written up, as does the Connet section at the bottom (compare Ansan or other cities). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:27, 17 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241117082700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241117082700-JHyunlee-20241113074500","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Also, please take a look and address the issues raised at Talk:Nonsan – Travel guide at WikivoyagePiotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:32, 17 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241117083200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241117083200-JHyunlee-20241113074500","replies":["c-JHyunlee-20241122042000-Hanyangprofessor2-20241117083200"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello, professor. I added Sections named 'Get in', and 'Connect'.
And I also modified the issues that pointed out in my discussion page.
I hope you check my article and please give a feedback for me. Thank you! JHyunlee (talk) 04:20, 22 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241122042000","author":"JHyunlee","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-JHyunlee-20241122042000-Hanyangprofessor2-20241117083200","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241124021600-JHyunlee-20241122042000"]}}-->
@JHyunlee Very good Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:16, 24 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241124021600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241124021600-JHyunlee-20241122042000","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Please expand the first sentence by adding some more content (2-3 sentences) describing most interesting aspects of this location - tell people why they would want to visit this place, what makes it special.
For get in section - is there no train connection?
Are there any festivals that could be discussed under the do section?
Please take a look at feedback you got at Talk:Dangjin – Travel guide at WikivoyagePiotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:31, 17 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241117083100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241117083100-Jeong_Ahram-20241114062600","replies":["c-Jeong_Ahram-20241121015800-Hanyangprofessor2-20241117083100"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I revised it by reflecting the feedback. Please check, Thank you. Jeong Ahram (talk) 01:58, 21 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241121015800","author":"Jeong Ahram","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Jeong_Ahram-20241121015800-Hanyangprofessor2-20241117083100","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241124021700-Jeong_Ahram-20241121015800"]}}-->
@Jeong Ahram Very good. If festivals have pages (URL), you can add the links to their mentions. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:17, 24 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241124021700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241124021700-Jeong_Ahram-20241121015800","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello, professor. I left 1.2 feedback on another student's discussion page. Please check Buryab0ne (talk) 02:11, 19 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241119021100","author":"Buryab0ne","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Buryab0ne-20241119021100-Deadline6_QIAN_ZIYI","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241124022100-Buryab0ne-20241119021100"]}}-->
@Buryab0ne Good Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:21, 24 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241124022100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241124022100-Buryab0ne-20241119021100","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Weekly additional edits,ZAIWEI-Media Trends and Globalization
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Hello Professor, please check my contribution history for any additional edits I have made since the start of the semester.——Additional EditsZAIWEI0328 (talk) 14:45, 19 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241119144500","author":"ZAIWEI0328","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-ZAIWEI0328-20241119144500-Weekly_additional_edits\uff0cZAIWEI-Media_Trends_and_Globalization","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241124022600-ZAIWEI0328-20241119144500"]}}-->
@ZAIWEI0328 Good job, your edits seem well referenced and relevant Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:26, 24 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241124022600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241124022600-ZAIWEI0328-20241119144500","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Additional Edits,WANGTAO-Media Trends and Globalization
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Hello Professor, here are my additional edits so far, please check——Additional EditsWangtao626 (talk) 14:48, 19 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241119144800","author":"Wangtao626","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Wangtao626-20241119144800-Additional_Edits\uff0cWANGTAO-Media_Trends_and_Globalization","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241124022700-Wangtao626-20241119144800"]}}-->
@Wangtao626 Good job, your edits seem well referenced and relevant Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:27, 24 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241124022700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241124022700-Wangtao626-20241119144800","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I'm so late. I'll do my best until the other deadlines.
I've done one extra edit outside of the sandbox, and I've added a reference to an article about Korean entertainment company
Thank you.
송여근 (talk) 02:02, 22 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241122020200","author":"\uc1a1\uc5ec\uadfc","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-\uc1a1\uc5ec\uadfc-20241122020200-Deadline3_:_Yeogeun_Song","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241124023800-\uc1a1\uc5ec\uadfc-20241122020200"]}}-->
@송여근 Ok. Please post a link here to your one extra edit outside the sandbox, and for the reference added. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:38, 24 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241124023800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241124023800-\uc1a1\uc5ec\uadfc-20241122020200","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Thank you for your checking. Peter011008 (talk) 05:57, 22 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241122055700","author":"Peter011008","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Peter011008-20241122055700-Deadline_5\uff1aLiu_Zifu","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241124024100-Peter011008-20241122055700"]}}-->
@Peter011008 Good. Here are some suggestions for improvement:
for your Wikopedia translation, please try to add WP:CATEGORIES to your articles if they don't have any; see categories at the bottom of the original articles for ideas and try to find similar categories in Chinese. Then we will see if the Chinese reviewers have any comments
Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:41, 24 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241124024100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241124024100-Peter011008-20241122055700","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello professor, these are the three Wikipedia articles I have recently edited, totaling 30 edits. Perhaps you can help me check, thank you very much. Here is the link.1.2.3. Jzhdylb (talk) 15:24, 22 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241122152400","author":"Jzhdylb","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Jzhdylb-20241122152400-Deadline_6_---FAN_XINRU_3","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241124024300-Jzhdylb-20241122152400"]}}-->
@Jzhdylb Your edits are good, but please make sure to add citations to your text. For example, what is the source for the claim that "Jade Girl Peak, with an altitude of 625 meters, was formed during the Paleozoic Era. The name of Jade Girl Peak comes from the fact that Jade Girl Peak stands tall and tall for dozens of feet, and looks like a graceful girl from a distance." ? Please remember that only referenced content can be added to English Wikipedia and only such content will count for credit. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:43, 24 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241124024300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241124024300-Jzhdylb-20241122152400","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I'm taking 'Understanding Small and Big Data' class.
This is my final draft Hongseong for main project.
Please check, Thanks, Yujin0203 (talk) 07:52, 13 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241113075200","author":"Yujin0203","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Yujin0203-20241113075200-Deadline5_:_Yujin_Jang","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241117082900-Yujin0203-20241113075200","c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241117083100-Yujin0203-20241113075200"]}}-->
@Yujin0203 Good progress. Are there any festivals that could be discussed under the do section? Are there any bus stations to add to the Get in? Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:29, 17 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241117082900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241117082900-Yujin0203-20241113075200","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Also, please take a look and fix the issues mentioned in the feedback at Talk:Hongseong – Travel guide at WikivoyagePiotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:31, 17 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241117083100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241117083100-Yujin0203-20241113075200","replies":["c-Yujin0203-20241126170000-Hanyangprofessor2-20241117083100"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I added a bus terminal and added a festival category in the do part to list the festivals of Hongseong. Also, I made additional modifications by referring to the talk page.Thank you! Yujin0203 (talk) 17:00, 26 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241126170000","author":"Yujin0203","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Yujin0203-20241126170000-Hanyangprofessor2-20241117083100","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241127031000-Yujin0203-20241126170000"]}}-->
@Yujin0203 Good. For the festivals, please add links to their pages, so readers can click and read more about them. Also, please add their names in hangul. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:10, 27 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241127031000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241127031000-Yujin0203-20241126170000","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Please Checking.
송여근 (talk) 01:59, 22 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241122015900","author":"\uc1a1\uc5ec\uadfc","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-\uc1a1\uc5ec\uadfc-20241122015900-Deadline2:_Yeogeun_Song_2","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241124023700-\uc1a1\uc5ec\uadfc-20241122015900"]}}-->
@송여근 Deviance and Criticism of capitalism have already been selected by another student; how about translating Modernization theory since 근대화 이론 - 위키백과 is very short? You also linked Sociocultural evolution is ok and is approved - you can expand 사회문화적 진화 - 위키백과 If you want to discuss selection of other topics to translate, please talk to me in person after class. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:37, 24 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241124023700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241124023700-\uc1a1\uc5ec\uadfc-20241122015900","replies":["c-218.235.241.132-20241125060500-Hanyangprofessor2-20241124023700"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
OK, I'll choose that one. 218.235.241.132 (talk) 06:05, 25 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241125060500","author":"218.235.241.132","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-218.235.241.132-20241125060500-Hanyangprofessor2-20241124023700","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241127031400-218.235.241.132-20241125060500"]}}-->
@송여근 Ok. Please see me after class so we can record your choices; I cannot locate your name in our spreadsheet. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:14, 27 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241127031400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241127031400-218.235.241.132-20241125060500","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Please expand the first sentence by adding some more content (2-3 sentences) describing most interesting aspects of this location - tell people why they would want to visit this place, what makes it special.
Are there any festivals that could be discussed under the do section?
Please add listings for the main bus and train/subway stations, with GPS coordinates, so they'd show up on the map
Please add at least one entry to the drink section Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:20, 27 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241127032000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241127032000-Dbinni-20241124090500","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Professor, I'm sorry to finish this task so late, but I'm going to speed it up. Here is my sandbox link, which is now 50% translated.
https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Wjyy1212/%E6%B2%99%E7%9B%92Wjyy1212 (talk) 10:30, 24 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241124103000","author":"Wjyy1212","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Wjyy1212-20241124103000-Deadline_4-WEN_JIAYAO","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241127032100-Wjyy1212-20241124103000"]}}-->
@Wjyy1212 If you are translating from Chinese to English, please do so in your English Wikipedia sandbox, not on Chinese Wikipedia. Let me know when you have added blue links (hyperlinks) and references.
lease remember that only referenced content can be added to English Wikipedia and only such content will count for credit. The content from Chinese article that has no references needs to be referenced first before being translated. See Wikipedia:Verifiability
Please carefully check all references one by one to ensure they have metadata information (author, title, publisher, date). Next, if the source is in Chinese (ex. 李鹏《六四日记》), please use both the Chinese and English titles. Use Chinese title in the 'title' field, and English in the 'translated title' field. If you need help, stop by my office and I'll demonstrate how to do so.
Also, if a term exists in Chinese Wikipedia and has an article there, but not on English Wikipedia, please use Template:Interlanguage link to link it. If you don't know how to use that tool, come to my office hours and I'll demonstrate Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:21, 27 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241127032100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241127032100-Wjyy1212-20241124103000","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I took two courses, "Media Trends and Globalization" and "Understanding Small Data and Big Data through Wikis."
I have completed deadline 6. Suggest editing content for other editors.
This is the link to "Media Trends and Globalization"
This is the link to "Learn about Small Data and Big Data through Wiki"
Then the media trend and globalization of the article "Meizhou Mazu Temple" has been amended, please check, thank you. Xjx921 (talk) 12:43, 24 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241124124300","author":"Xjx921","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Xjx921-20241124124300-Deadline6\uff1aXI_JIAXIN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241127032800-Xjx921-20241124124300"]}}-->
@Xjx921 Your first comment should be moved from your friend's sandbox talk to their main user talk. Please copy it there.
Regarding your second comment (on Wikivoyage), someone asked for you to clarify what you meant - please explain it there in more details.
Regarding your article translation (MM Temple), the following fixes are needed:
Remove the Chinese characters from the beginning of each heading. They can and should be present the first time you mention a Chinese proper name (for a person or place) if that entity has no Wikipedia article that can be linked to
if a term exists in Chinese Wikipedia and has an article there, but not on English Wikipedia, please use Template:Interlanguage link to link it. If you don't know how to use that tool, come to my office hours and I'll demonstrate.
Please remember that only referenced content can be added to English Wikipedia and only such content will count for credit. The content from Chinese article that has no references needs to be referenced first before being translated. See Wikipedia:Verifiability. A lot of your content has no references and cannot be published.
Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:28, 27 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241127032800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241127032800-Xjx921-20241124124300","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I am studying your Understanding Small Data and Big Data through Wikis course.
This is the link to Deadline 5. I will continue to enrich this article.Please check it. Thanks for your patience. 1.241.68.131 (talk) 14:47, 24 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241124144700","author":"1.241.68.131","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-1.241.68.131-20241124144700-Deadline_5-LIU_XINRUI","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241127033300-1.241.68.131-20241124144700"]}}-->
Dear student. Please remember to WP:SIGN your posts; otherwise I cannot notify you that you received a response here.
The following fixes are needed for your article:
Your article needs a climate chart
Is there a local intercity bus station, like the Ansan Express Bus Terminal in Ansan? If so, please mention it in the 'get in'.
Zoom out your map a bit and perhaps recenter it so that more listings are shown.
For listings in the Do section, please asdd GPS coordinates. Also, please add a subsection about local festivals, if there are any in this area.
Also, add GPS coordinates for restaurants mentioned.
If you forgot how to do some of that, see our assignments instructions at User:Hanyangprofessor2 – Travel guide at Wikivoyage or come to my office for a demonstration Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:33, 27 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241127033300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241127033300-1.241.68.131-20241124144700","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Thank you for checking. HYH031277777 (talk) 06:18, 25 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241125061800","author":"HYH031277777","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-HYH031277777-20241125061800-Deadline_5_:_HUANG_YANHAN_&_MA_CHENXIAO","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241127034000-HYH031277777-20241125061800"]}}-->
@HYH031277777 Good. The following fixes are needed:
Please expand the first sentence by adding some more content (2-3 sentences) describing most interesting aspects of this location - tell people why they would want to visit this place, what makes it special.
please write up a short (2-3 sentences) explanation of the local climate (you have a climate graph already, good, but it should have a text section. See articles on Ansan or Beijing or such for examples)
In Get in, please add listigns with GPS coordiantes for the main railway station, and the main intercity bus station.
Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:40, 27 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241127034000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241127034000-HYH031277777-20241125061800","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor. I am studying “Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis” and “Media Trends and Globalization”. Here's my edit link to Wikivoyage, check it out。BAOTOUShuo1103 (talk) 10:12, 25 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241125101200","author":"Shuo1103","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Shuo1103-20241125101200-Deadline_5\uff1aZHANG_MINGSHUO","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241127035600-Shuo1103-20241125101200"]}}-->
please write up a short (2-3 sentences) explanation of the local climate (you have a climate graph already, good, but it should have a text section. See articles on Ansan or Beijing or such for examples)
Your article needs a climate section with a chart
get around section is missing
do section is emtpy. Please add some suggestions there. Are there any festivals that could be discussed under the do section?
Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:56, 27 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241127035600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241127035600-Shuo1103-20241125101200","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
@Laoxinyi Good progress. Your article needs a banner, a climate section with a chart, and your listings need to be expanded with GPS coordinates and other content (description, address, websites).
If you forgot how to do some of that, see our assignments instructions at User:Hanyangprofessor2 – Travel guide at Wikivoyage or come to my office for a demonstration Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here01:22, 11 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241111012200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241111012200-Laoxinyi-20241110030900","replies":["c-Laoxinyi-20241115065200-Hanyangprofessor2-20241111012200"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
@Hanyangprofessor2 Hello, Professor. I have revised the article according to your suggestions. Please check it! thanks! Laoxinyi (talk) 06:52, 15 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241115065200","author":"Laoxinyi","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Laoxinyi-20241115065200-Hanyangprofessor2-20241111012200","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241117071900-Laoxinyi-20241115065200"]}}-->
@Laoxinyi Good job with the banner - now please work on the other issues I mentioned above Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:19, 17 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241117071900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241117071900-Laoxinyi-20241115065200","replies":["c-Laoxinyi-20241128084000-Hanyangprofessor2-20241117071900"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
@Hanyangprofessor2 Hello professor, other questions have been modified, please confirm! Thank you.Laoxinyi (talk) 08:40, 28 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241128084000","author":"Laoxinyi","type":"comment","level":5,"id":"c-Laoxinyi-20241128084000-Hanyangprofessor2-20241117071900","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241129050300-Laoxinyi-20241128084000"]}}-->
@Laoxinyi Good. Now try to populate the 'Do' section - for example with information about local festivals Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:03, 29 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241129050300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":6,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241129050300-Laoxinyi-20241128084000","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor. I am studying “Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis” and “Media Trends and Globalization”. Here's my edit link to Wikivoyage, check it out。JinchengSHENZIHE (talk) 03:02, 29 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241129030200","author":"SHENZIHE","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-SHENZIHE-20241129030200-Deadline5\uff1aSHENZIHE_2","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241129052100-SHENZIHE-20241129030200"]}}-->
Please expand the first sentence by adding some more content (2-3 sentences) describing most interesting aspects of this location - tell people why they would want to visit this place, what makes it special.
please add GPS for Lingchuan Red Maple
Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:21, 29 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241129052100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241129052100-SHENZIHE-20241129030200","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Dear Professor:
I'm taking "Media Trends and Globalization"
I've finished the Deadline 5 , translating the second article in my sandbox. [69]
Please check. Syouziiye (talk) 06:59, 4 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241104065900","author":"Syouziiye","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Syouziiye-20241104065900-Deadline_5:_SHU_YING","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241106031200-Syouziiye-20241104065900"]}}-->
Then we will see if the Chinese reviewers have any comments
Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:12, 6 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241106031200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241106031200-Syouziiye-20241104065900","replies":["c-Syouziiye-20241111130400-Hanyangprofessor2-20241106031200"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Professor,according to your guidance, I uploaded this article. Please check itSyouziiye (talk) 13:04, 11 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241111130400","author":"Syouziiye","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Syouziiye-20241111130400-Hanyangprofessor2-20241106031200","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241113024200-Syouziiye-20241111130400"]}}-->
@Syouziiye Your article remains in your sandbox. To finish the assignment, you need to publish it (merge it into the article in the public mainspace). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:42, 13 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241113024200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241113024200-Syouziiye-20241111130400","replies":["c-Syouziiye-20241115064900-Hanyangprofessor2-20241113024200"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
OK,it was published now,please check it here. Syouziiye (talk) 06:49, 15 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241115064900","author":"Syouziiye","type":"comment","level":5,"id":"c-Syouziiye-20241115064900-Hanyangprofessor2-20241113024200","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241117071600-Syouziiye-20241115064900"]}}-->
@Syouziiye Good, now please observe it to see if the Chinese reviewers raise any issues that should be fixed. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:16, 17 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241117071600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":6,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241117071600-Syouziiye-20241115064900","replies":["c-Syouziiye-20241118050900-Hanyangprofessor2-20241117071600"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
OK,I'll watch out for that. By the way for another translated article,now it is also succesfully published. Please check it here.Syouziiye (talk) 05:09, 18 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241118050900","author":"Syouziiye","type":"comment","level":7,"id":"c-Syouziiye-20241118050900-Hanyangprofessor2-20241117071600","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241119011200-Syouziiye-20241118050900"]}}-->
@Syouziiye Good. Please try to add WP:CATEGORIES to your articles if they don't have any; see categories at the bottom of the original articles for ideas and try to find similar categories in Chinese. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here01:12, 19 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241119011200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":8,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241119011200-Syouziiye-20241118050900","replies":["c-Syouziiye-20241129054300-Hanyangprofessor2-20241119011200"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I added them at the bottom,please check itSyouziiye (talk) 05:43, 29 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241129054300","author":"Syouziiye","type":"comment","level":9,"id":"c-Syouziiye-20241129054300-Hanyangprofessor2-20241119011200","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241129065300-Syouziiye-20241129054300"]}}-->
@Syouziiye Good Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here06:53, 29 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241129065300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":10,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241129065300-Syouziiye-20241129054300","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear professor, this is my understanding https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/Penglaiof small data and big data, homework, please take a look, thank you Hanyangdaxue (talk) 05:49, 18 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241118054900","author":"Hanyangdaxue","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Hanyangdaxue-20241118054900-Deadline_5\uff1aLYU_YANGCHENG","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241119012600-Hanyangdaxue-20241118054900"]}}-->
Please expand the first sentence by adding some more content (2-3 sentences) describing most interesting aspects of this location - tell people why they would want to visit this place, what makes it special.
Your banner needs to be formatted the correct ratio. Please upload a new image based on the current one using this tool: https://croptool.toolforge.org/ then use it as a banner instead of the current one
Please add a GPS coordinate for the Penglai train station
Please recenter the map - right now most of the listings are hidden on the edge. We probably don't need to show the location of the outlying restaurant or the airport
Are there any festivals that could be discussed under the do section?
Then please ask for review pf your article by experienced volunteers and follow their recommendations after you receive them in a few days (see https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/User:Hanyangprofessor2#Final_review). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here01:26, 19 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241119012600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241119012600-Hanyangdaxue-20241118054900","replies":["c-Hanyangdaxue-20241129053500-Hanyangprofessor2-20241119012600"],"displayName":"https:\/\/en.wikivoyage.org\/wiki\/User:Hanyangprofessor2#Final_review"}}-->
https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/Penglai Dear teacher, please take a look, thank you Hanyangdaxue (talk) 05:35, 29 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241129053500","author":"Hanyangdaxue","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Hanyangdaxue-20241129053500-Hanyangprofessor2-20241119012600","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241129065500-Hanyangdaxue-20241129053500"]}}-->
@Hanyangdaxue Good progress. Please add some more listings, and information about festivals, if any are in the area, Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here06:55, 29 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241129065500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241129065500-Hanyangdaxue-20241129053500","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I'm taking 'Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis' and "Media Trends and Globalization" class.
in "Media Trends and Globalization" class. I've finished the final translation from English to Chinese.
This is my workCHEN HEBING (talk) 04:19, 29 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241129041900","author":"CHEN HEBING","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-CHEN_HEBING-20241129041900-Deadline5\uff1aCHEN_HEBING","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241129072200-CHEN_HEBING-20241129041900"]}}-->
@CHEN HEBING Good, now let's wait and see if the Chinese reviewers have any feedback Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:22, 29 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241129072200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241129072200-CHEN_HEBING-20241129041900","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello,I am xiong chaoli.I am from Media Trends and Globalization.
My topic is the North Korean military parade, and I've finished editing the English-to-Korean translation of this article on the sandbox.Here is the link.
XIONG CHAOLI (talk) 05:09, 28 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241128050900","author":"XIONG CHAOLI","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-XIONG_CHAOLI-20241128050900-Deadline4\uff1aXIONG_CHAOLI","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241129051000-XIONG_CHAOLI-20241128050900"]}}-->
I have already solved it, here is the link to the translated article. Please check it. Thank you XIONG CHAOLI (talk) 05:29, 29 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241129052900","author":"XIONG CHAOLI","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-XIONG_CHAOLI-20241129052900-Hanyangprofessor2-20241129051000","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241201071600-XIONG_CHAOLI-20241129052900"]}}-->
@XIONG CHAOLI Good, now we can wait and see if there are any comments by other reviewers. Good job so far! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:16, 1 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241201071600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241201071600-XIONG_CHAOLI-20241129052900","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I'm taking 'Media Trends and Globalization' class. I've finished the second article. This is my second article.
Thank you for your checking. SongHyeonmin2020007129 (talk) 07:18, 29 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241129071800","author":"SongHyeonmin2020007129","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-SongHyeonmin2020007129-20241129071800-Deadline_7\uff1aHyoenmin_Song","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241201072200-SongHyeonmin2020007129-20241129071800"]}}-->
@SongHyeonmin2020007129 Good progress. Please merge your content from your sandbox to ko:인종의 용광로, following the instructions at ko:위키백과:문서 합치기Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:22, 1 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241201072200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241201072200-SongHyeonmin2020007129-20241129071800","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
@Yangpeifu Well done, you can get a lot of extra credit. You can publish your template as well (if you don't know how, stop by my office and I'll show you). Please proofread your articles with Grammarly or a similar tool - I've just read Draft:Chen Yingsheng and I see a number of errors (I fixed a few but more remain). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:26, 1 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241201072600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241201072600-Yangpeifu-20241129093800","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Hello Professor! I'm taking 'Media Trends and Globalization' class.I have completed two translation assignments, English to Korean and English to Chinese, please check it:
Hnlyyyy (talk) 11:43, 29 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241129114300","author":"Hnlyyyy","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Hnlyyyy-20241129114300-Deadline_5_HAN_JIAYI","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241201072800-Hnlyyyy-20241129114300"]}}-->
@Hnlyyyy Good. Now we will see if the Korean and Chinese reviewers have any comments. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:28, 1 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241201072800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241201072800-Hnlyyyy-20241129114300","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello, professor,I am xiong chaoli. I am from Media Trends and Globalization. My topic is the North Korean military parade, and I've finished editing the English-to-Chinese translation of this article on the sandbox.Here is the link.Please check it, thank you ! XIONG CHAOLI (talk) 15:20, 29 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241129152000","author":"XIONG CHAOLI","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-XIONG_CHAOLI-20241129152000-Deadline_5\uff1aXIONG_CHAOLI","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241201072900-XIONG_CHAOLI-20241129152000"]}}-->
You can publish your article by moving the draft to the mainspace (see zh:Help:页面重命名 on how to do this); then we will see what the Chinese reviewers will say.
Remember: if a term exists in English Wikipedia and has an article there, but not on Chinese Wikipedia, please use this tool zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi to link it. If you need help, I can demonstrate how to use it. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:29, 1 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241201072900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241201072900-XIONG_CHAOLI-20241129152000","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello Professor, I have recently edited three Wikipedia articles, a total of 30 times. Please check it out, thank you.1.2.3Jzhdylb (talk) 06:48, 30 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241130064800","author":"Jzhdylb","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Jzhdylb-20241130064800-Deadline_7---FAN_XINRU","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241201073100-Jzhdylb-20241130064800"]}}-->
@Jzhdylb Very good! You have learned a lot about editing wiki! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:31, 1 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241201073100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241201073100-Jzhdylb-20241130064800","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello professor, I continued to edit Wikitravel, re-corrected the GPS and added introductions to attractions and GPS, and also edited other content, please check itBai0926 (talk) 05:19, 26 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241126051900","author":"Bai0926","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Bai0926-20241126051900-Deadline5\uff1aBAILINHAN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241127035900-Bai0926-20241126051900"]}}-->
please write up a short (2-3 sentences) explanation of the local climate (you have a climate graph already, good, but it should have a text section. See articles on Ansan or Beijing or such for examples)
Please add a see section and popualate it. Please split entries between see and do - see for example how this is done in Ansan – Travel guide at Wikivoyage
Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:59, 27 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241127035900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241127035900-Bai0926-20241126051900","replies":["c-Bai0926-20241130052600-Hanyangprofessor2-20241127035900"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Professor, I wrote the climate introduction again. Is this appropriate? Bai0926 (talk) 05:26, 30 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241130052600","author":"Bai0926","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Bai0926-20241130052600-Hanyangprofessor2-20241127035900","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241201071400-Bai0926-20241130052600"]}}-->
@Bai0926 The climate section seems good now. Please try to work on the next item I listed above (fixing the see and do sections). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:14, 1 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241201071400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241201071400-Bai0926-20241130052600","replies":["c-Bai0926-20241201134500-Hanyangprofessor2-20241201071400"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Professor, I added content based on Ansan's do, but since Taierzhuang does not have a separate festival, no festival was added. Please check it Bai0926 (talk) 13:45, 1 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241201134500","author":"Bai0926","type":"comment","level":5,"id":"c-Bai0926-20241201134500-Hanyangprofessor2-20241201071400","replies":[]}}-->
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Hello, professor. I'm Kang eun yeong. I've finished writing articles for English to Korean translation and additional scores. I attach the link, so please check it. Thank you!
Eng->Kr, extra credit pointsKang eunyeong (talk) 00:33, 21 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241121003300","author":"Kang eunyeong","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Kang_eunyeong-20241121003300-Additional_Edits,_Kang_eun_yeong-Media_Trends_and_Globalization","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241124023000-Kang_eunyeong-20241121003300"]}}-->
@Kang eunyeong Good. Please try to add WP:CATEGORIES to your articles if they don't have any; see categories at the bottom of the original articles for ideas and try to find similar categories in Korean
If a term exists in English Wikipedia and has an article there, but not on Chinese Wikipedia, please use this tool 틀:임시링크 - 위키백과 to link it. If you need help, I can demonstrate how to use it. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:30, 24 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241124023000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241124023000-Kang_eunyeong-20241121003300","replies":["c-Kang_eunyeong-20241202042000-Hanyangprofessor2-20241124023000"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
@Kang eunyeong Good Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:10, 3 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241203031000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241203031000-Kang_eunyeong-20241202042000","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Professor, I created a new article and edited it 40 times, please check itBai0926 (talk) 14:23, 1 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241201142300","author":"Bai0926","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Bai0926-20241201142300-Weekly_Edit\uff1aBAILINHAN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241203031800-Bai0926-20241201142300"]}}-->
@Bai0926 Your article seems to be gone, because the reviewers concluded it is just a copy and paste from another website. We cannot copy (steal) content from other websites. Please note that if you copy too much content from other websites, your account will be blocked and you may have trouble completing my courses. Please read the guide at Wikipedia:Copyright violationsPiotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:18, 3 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241203031800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241203031800-Bai0926-20241201142300","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello professor, I have posted my article, please check it. Hanyuanyuan613 (talk) 04:06, 2 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241202040600","author":"Hanyuanyuan613","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Hanyuanyuan613-20241202040600-Article_Release--HAN_YUANYUAN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241203031900-Hanyuanyuan613-20241202040600"]}}-->
@Hanyuanyuan613 Good, now we can wait for the Chines reviewers to comment. Please check it every few days to see if there are any comments. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:19, 3 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241203031900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241203031900-Hanyuanyuan613-20241202040600","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Please check the final draft. Xisuux (talk) 04:12, 2 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241202041200","author":"Xisuux","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Xisuux-20241202041200-Deadline_5:_Yoon_sarang_&_Lee_jisu_2","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241203032100-Xisuux-20241202041200"]}}-->
@Xisuux Good. Can you add, to the do section, a list of local festivals (with links to their pages)? See how it is done for example in Ansan – Travel guide at WikivoyagePiotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:21, 3 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241203032100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241203032100-Xisuux-20241202041200","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I'm taking 'Media Trends and Globalization' class.
I edited and translated two additional articles. One Chinese translation into English, one English translation into Chinese. Please check. Thank you very much. Hhhlx (talk) 02:59, 3 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241203025900","author":"Hhhlx","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Hhhlx-20241203025900-Additional_edited_articles-HUANG_LINGXUAN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241203033500-Hhhlx-20241203025900"]}}-->
@Hhhlx Good, this can certainly count for extra credit. Please note the question at Talk:Liu LantaoPiotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:35, 3 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241203033500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241203033500-Hhhlx-20241203025900","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/YangjiangGuoying1 (talk) 07:00, 6 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241206070000","author":"Guoying1","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Guoying1-20241206070000-Operational_inspection","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241206075100-Guoying1-20241206070000"]}}-->
@Guoying1 Feedback provided in class - let me know if you have any other questions Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:51, 6 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241206075100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241206075100-Guoying1-20241206070000","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Please expand the first sentence by adding some more content (2-3 sentences) describing most interesting aspects of this location - tell people why they would want to visit this place, what makes it special.
All entries under see should be converted into listings, right now only the first two are done correctly
Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:33, 18 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241118023300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241118023300-Ydaeun0306-20241115045400","replies":["c-Ydaeun0306-20241118065600-Hanyangprofessor2-20241118023300"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear professor.
We fixed feedbacks by you and other peoples. Ydaeun0306 (talk) 06:56, 18 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241118065600","author":"Ydaeun0306","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Ydaeun0306-20241118065600-Hanyangprofessor2-20241118023300","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241119011600-Ydaeun0306-20241118065600"]}}-->
@Ydaeun0306 Very good. Can you find some more content to add to the listings under the see section? Are there any other museums or landmarks, manmade or natural, tourists could visit in the area? Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here01:16, 19 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241119011600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241119011600-Ydaeun0306-20241118065600","replies":["c-Ydaeun0306-20241129054000-Hanyangprofessor2-20241119011600"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear professor.
We added to the listings under the see section! Thank you! Ydaeun0306 (talk) 05:40, 29 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241129054000","author":"Ydaeun0306","type":"comment","level":5,"id":"c-Ydaeun0306-20241129054000-Hanyangprofessor2-20241119011600","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241201070900-Ydaeun0306-20241129054000"]}}-->
@Ydaeun0306 Good. Please add GPS entries (listings) to the main local bus and train stations, so that they show on the map (in the 'Get in' section). You are almost done :) Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:09, 1 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241201070900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":6,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241201070900-Ydaeun0306-20241129054000","replies":["c-Ydaeun0306-20241206064800-Hanyangprofessor2-20241201070900"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear professor.
We added listing the main local bus station and train stations! Ydaeun0306 (talk) 06:48, 6 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241206064800","author":"Ydaeun0306","type":"comment","level":7,"id":"c-Ydaeun0306-20241206064800-Hanyangprofessor2-20241201070900","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241206075900-Ydaeun0306-20241206064800"]}}-->
@Ydaeun0306 Very good Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:59, 6 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241206075900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":8,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241206075900-Ydaeun0306-20241206064800","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:17, 27 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241127031700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241127031700-Uuueol-20241124074400","replies":["c-Uuueol-20241203175300-Hanyangprofessor2-20241127031700"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I have added the festivals section as requested and already asked for reviews. I also have made changes based on the suggestions provided. Please check it!Thank you so much! Uuueol (talk) 17:53, 3 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241203175300","author":"Uuueol","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Uuueol-20241203175300-Hanyangprofessor2-20241127031700","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241206081500-Uuueol-20241203175300"]}}-->
@Uuueol Very good Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:15, 6 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241206081500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241206081500-Uuueol-20241203175300","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I took two courses, "Media Trends and Globalization" and "Understanding Small Data and Big Data through Wikis."
I have completed Deadline 6. I wrote feedback on GUO YING's article, Abortion in Poland.
Deadline 5 has also been revised. Translation of the article "Media Trends and Globalization": Asiacentrism,Indocentrism And add content to Indocentrism
”Understanding Small Data and Big Data through Wikis”The Wikipedian guide: shangraoJiayyyyy (talk) 06:46, 25 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241125064600","author":"Jiayyyyy","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Jiayyyyy-20241125064600-Deadline6\uff1aJIA_YUAN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241127035400-Jiayyyyy-20241125064600"]}}-->
@Jiayyyyy Good. Please ask User:糯米花 if their concerns over 亚洲中心主义 have been resolved.
For Shangrao , please expand the first sentence by adding some more content (2-3 sentences) describing most interesting aspects of this location - tell people why they would want to visit this place, what makes it special.
Also:
please write up a short (2-3 sentences) explanation of the local climate (you have a climate graph already, good, but it should have a text section. See articles on Ansan or Beijing or such for examples)
For main train/subway/bus stations, please add listings with GPS coordinates
Are there any festivals that could be discussed under the do section?
Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:54, 27 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241127035400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241127035400-Jiayyyyy-20241125064600","replies":["c-Jiayyyyy-20241206051000-Hanyangprofessor2-20241127035400"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
As for Asiacentrism, users were asked about it, but no response was received. About shangrao to be modified to address your questions. Jiayyyyy (talk) 05:10, 6 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241206051000","author":"Jiayyyyy","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Jiayyyyy-20241206051000-Hanyangprofessor2-20241127035400","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241206081900-Jiayyyyy-20241206051000"]}}-->
@Jiayyyyy Good - advice given during office hours, let me know if you have more questions Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:19, 6 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241206081900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241206081900-Jiayyyyy-20241206051000","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Dear Professor,
I'm taking 'Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis' class.
I have completed the modification up to feedback from Deadline 5:
- Expand the first sentence by adding some more content (2-3 sentences) describing most interesting aspects of this location - tell people why they would want to visit this place, what makes it special.
- Add some festivals that could be discussed under the do section.
- Add listings for the main bus and train/subway stations, with GPS coordinates.
- Add some entry to the drink section.
Please check the final draft. Thanks. Dbinni (talk) 11:15, 3 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241203111500","author":"Dbinni","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Dbinni-20241203111500-Deadline_6:_Dabin_Kim_2","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241206084000-Dbinni-20241203111500"]}}-->
@Dbinni I am afraid your edits have been declined, but I see you received explanation and you read it (User talk:Dbinni – Travel guide at Wikivoyage). Please ping me again when you restore your edits with the improved content.
Also, please check Climate section, which reads "Ansan's climate is very similar to...". It's ok to copy content but you have to modify it to be relevant. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:40, 6 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241206084000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241206084000-Dbinni-20241203111500","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I'm taking Media Trends and Globalization. I've completed the second article. Here is the link.
Extra: I translated Early Roman Empire (로마 시대 초기) of Greece in the Roman era into Korean. Here is the link.
Thank you for checking.Parkjeongeun0430 (talk) 16:25, 5 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241205162500","author":"Parkjeongeun0430","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Parkjeongeun0430-20241205162500-Deadline7:_Jeongeun_Park","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241206084200-Parkjeongeun0430-20241205162500"]}}-->
@Parkjeongeun0430 Very good; now we can wait and see if Korean reviewers have any comments.
Here's a suggestion on how to make your articles even better:
If a term exists in English Wikipedia and has an article there, but not on Korean Wikipedia, please use this tool to link it: 틀:임시링크 - 위키백과
Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:42, 6 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241206084200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241206084200-Parkjeongeun0430-20241205162500","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello Professor, I have chosen to expand the article on Cangzhou as my task. This is my second time editing and I have expanded and added it according to your requirements. Can you help me look it up? It would be even better if you could point out the issues that need to be changed. Thank you very much, looking forward to your reply. Jzhdylb (talk) 08:58, 16 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241116085800","author":"Jzhdylb","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Jzhdylb-20241116085800-ARTICLE_EXPANSION_TASK--FAN_XINRU","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241118023800-Jzhdylb-20241116085800"]}}-->
Please expand the first sentence by adding some more content (2-3 sentences) describing most interesting aspects of this location - tell people why they would want to visit this place, what makes it special.
You need more listings. The middle one (Cangzhou zhan) is unfinished - what is it?
For festivals, can you add location, time and homepage information? A Chinese name would also be useful
Entries in Go next should have blue links to them. What is "Hometown America.Transportation method: Self-driving tour (about 4.5 hours)"? Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:38, 18 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241118023800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241118023800-Jzhdylb-20241116085800","replies":["c-Jzhdylb-20241123145600-Hanyangprofessor2-20241118023800"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello professor, thank you for your guidance last time. I have modified and supplemented according to the guidance. If you can, please help me check the newly revised article again. I want to do better. Thank you very much for your time.Attached article link again. Jzhdylb (talk) 14:56, 23 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241123145600","author":"Jzhdylb","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Jzhdylb-20241123145600-Hanyangprofessor2-20241118023800","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241124022000-Jzhdylb-20241123145600"]}}-->
@Jzhdylb Good. You still need to convert mention of Cangzhou Iron Lion (新滄州鐵獅子) into a listing with GPS coordinates. Festival and Expo should have GPS coordinate as well.
And you should be able to add more listings to see. Are there no other monuments or attractions in this area? Is this really so boring? This city is 7 million. Compare to how many listings your colleagues added to a much smaller Korean city at Nonsan – Travel guide at Wikivoyage for example. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:20, 24 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241124022000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241124022000-Jzhdylb-20241123145600","replies":["c-Jzhdylb-20241128155400-Hanyangprofessor2-20241124022000"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello Professor, thank you for the reference article you provided me last time. I've changed and added a lot along the lines of this and each template comes with GPS coordinates. If there are other areas that need improvement, please point them out for me. Thank you very much. Link. Jzhdylb (talk) 15:54, 28 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241128155400","author":"Jzhdylb","type":"comment","level":5,"id":"c-Jzhdylb-20241128155400-Hanyangprofessor2-20241124022000","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241129050500-Jzhdylb-20241128155400"]}}-->
@Jzhdylb Good progress. Please add GPS for the Cangzhou Passenger Terminal.
Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:05, 29 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241129050500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":6,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241129050500-Jzhdylb-20241128155400","replies":["c-Jzhdylb-20241129143300-Hanyangprofessor2-20241129050500"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Thanks again. I completed the revision and review request as required above, thank you for your time.link is. Jzhdylb (talk) 14:33, 29 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241129143300","author":"Jzhdylb","type":"comment","level":7,"id":"c-Jzhdylb-20241129143300-Hanyangprofessor2-20241129050500","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241201071200-Jzhdylb-20241129143300"]}}-->
@Jzhdylb Very good, and good job participating in the talk page discussion and review. I wonder if you could suggest some better banner photos? Most of the current one is just a sky. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:12, 1 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241201071200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":8,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241201071200-Jzhdylb-20241129143300","replies":["c-Jzhdylb-20241203141300-Hanyangprofessor2-20241201071200"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Thank you Professor, this is an interesting suggestion. This picture is the ‘Cangzhou Iron Lion’, the landmark building of the city introduced in this article, but it looks a bit lonely due to the shooting angle. Unfortunately, I couldn't find a more suitable one among the images currently available on Wikimedia Commons. I hope to apply for copyright by contacting users who own Cangzhou beautiful photos, but due to IP reasons, this may take time, please understand. Jzhdylb (talk) 14:13, 3 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241203141300","author":"Jzhdylb","type":"comment","level":9,"id":"c-Jzhdylb-20241203141300-Hanyangprofessor2-20241201071200","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241206080000-Jzhdylb-20241203141300"]}}-->
@Jzhdylb I understand. Good luck with obtaining better pictures. See commons:Commons:Email templates for some useful tools Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:00, 6 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241206080000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":10,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241206080000-Jzhdylb-20241203141300","replies":["c-Jzhdylb-20241207115400-Hanyangprofessor2-20241206080000"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Thanks!I'll learn how to use it. Jzhdylb (talk) 11:54, 7 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241207115400","author":"Jzhdylb","type":"comment","level":11,"id":"c-Jzhdylb-20241207115400-Hanyangprofessor2-20241206080000","replies":[]}}-->
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Dear professor, this is my revised Chinese-English translation of the article "The Long Night". Do you think this is okay? Xuan6699 (talk) 21:10, 7 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241207211000","author":"Xuan6699","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Xuan6699-20241207211000-Deadline_5\uff1aXU_YAN_2","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241209010800-Xuan6699-20241207211000"]}}-->
@Xuan6699 Good progress, but we still need to fix more content. I fixed headings for you, but you need to add references to the plot synopsis and 'differences from the original novel' (each paragraph needs a reference, right now the latter section only has a reference for the first paragraph).
The sentence "iQiyi's self-produced suspense short series "The Long Night" has attracted the attention of many overseas media, including The Guardian, The Economist, South China Morning Post, Content Commerce Insider, SupChina, Radii, SixthTone" should be expanded with a short summary of what those sources said, and at the very least, each of those mentions should be linked through its own reference (footnote). Here, for example, is a reference for the Sixth Tone: Short Show ‘The Long Night’ Offers Quality Over Quantity
Also, if a topic exists in Chinese but not English, please link it using this tool: Template:Interlanguage link. If you don't know how to use this, come to my office and I'll demonstrate. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here01:08, 9 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241209010800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241209010800-Xuan6699-20241207211000","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello professor, I have edited this Wikipedia article 30 times this week. Could you please help me review it? Thank you very much. Jzhdylb (talk) 06:20, 8 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241208062000","author":"Jzhdylb","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Jzhdylb-20241208062000-Week_14---FAN_XINRU","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241209011000-Jzhdylb-20241208062000"]}}-->
@Jzhdylb Very good. The only thing you can do better is to add more links for terms like Emperor Wu (which one?), and similar. See Wikipedia:Manual of Style/LinkingPiotrus at Hanyang| reply here01:10, 9 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241209011000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241209011000-Jzhdylb-20241208062000","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Dear Professor, I have posted a comment on the discussion page, please checkBai0926 (talk) 05:49, 6 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241206054900","author":"Bai0926","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Bai0926-20241206054900-Deadline5:_BAI_LINHAN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241206085100-Bai0926-20241206054900"]}}-->
@Bai0926 Make sure to link it from the discussion forum for reviews if you haven't yet Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:51, 6 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241206085100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241206085100-Bai0926-20241206054900","replies":["c-Bai0926-20241209060000-Hanyangprofessor2-20241206085100"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Professor I re-added the discussion, please check it outBai0926 (talk) 06:00, 9 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241209060000","author":"Bai0926","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Bai0926-20241209060000-Hanyangprofessor2-20241206085100","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241211061800-Bai0926-20241209060000"]}}-->
@Bai0926 Good. Please check every few days to see if you got feedback Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here06:18, 11 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241211061800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241211061800-Bai0926-20241209060000","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Professor, I have commented on other students' Wikivoyage, please check it outBai0926 (talk) 06:01, 9 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241209060100","author":"Bai0926","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Bai0926-20241209060100-Deadline4\uff1aBAILINHAN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241211064600-Bai0926-20241209060100"]}}-->
@Bai0926 Good Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here06:46, 11 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241211064600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241211064600-Bai0926-20241209060100","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
In "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis " class, the editing of Suqian is completed.
Thank you for checking. CHEN HEBING (talk) 07:34, 9 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241209073400","author":"CHEN HEBING","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-CHEN_HEBING-20241209073400-Deadline5\uff1aCHEN_HEBING_2","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241211072700-CHEN_HEBING-20241209073400"]}}-->
@CHEN HEBING @LJY2455 I Regarding your article in English, as you can see, it was declined because the sourcing is insufficient. I already outlined this and other issues in my feedback to you from last month (November 4th: User_talk:Hanyangprofessor2/Archive_4#Deadline_6_---FAN_XINRU). I can only assume you forgot to read it then, since I do not see that anything I wrote then has been fixed.
Regarding Suqian, the following fixes are needed:
Please expand the first sentence by adding some more content (2-3 sentences) describing most interesting aspects of this location - tell people why they would want to visit this place, what makes it special.
Please see the feedback you got on the talk page, and carry out changes required by the reviewers
In the do section, add a subsection about local festivals
Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:27, 11 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241211072700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241211072700-CHEN_HEBING-20241209073400","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I am taking 'Understanding Small Data and Big Data' course. My topic assignment is Burqin, you can check the link. And I also made an extra credit, Qianjiang. I will continue to enrich this article.
Thank you for checking.
Hope u have a nice day~ Leeinm (talk) 04:45, 25 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241125044500","author":"Leeinm","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Leeinm-20241125044500-Deadline_5-LI_LINLIN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241127033700-Leeinm-20241125044500"]}}-->
@Leeinm Good. The following fixes are needed in Burqin:
Please expand the first sentence by adding some more content (2-3 sentences) describing most interesting aspects of this location - tell people why they would want to visit this place, what makes it special.
Are there any festivals that could be discussed under the do section?
Please add GPS info for 'River Promenade' and 'Market'. Try to add some more entries to the 'see' section.
For your other article, Qianjiang:
Please add get around, do and buy sections. Well done with the extra credit project. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:37, 27 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241127033700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241127033700-Leeinm-20241125044500","replies":["c-Leeinm-20241203005700-Hanyangprofessor2-20241127033700"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello, Professor.
About the article burqin:
I have modified the banner with tools and expanded on the interesting aspects of the local area.
All relevant words in the article have been modified based on other users' interfaces on the talk page.
For 'River Promenade' and 'Market', GPS info has been added and info updated.
I also ask for additional review for both articles, Please check here.
Thanks~ Leeinm (talk) 00:57, 3 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241203005700","author":"Leeinm","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Leeinm-20241203005700-Hanyangprofessor2-20241127033700","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241203030900-Leeinm-20241203005700"]}}-->
@Leeinm Good, but please double check my comments above. For example, both articles still need to have more info in the introduction about their most interesting aspects. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:09, 3 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241203030900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241203030900-Leeinm-20241203005700","replies":["c-Leeinm-20241212003800-Hanyangprofessor2-20241203030900"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello, Professor.
I add the comments for both articles. Please check here and here.
Hope u have a nice day~ Leeinm (talk) 00:38, 12 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241212003800","author":"Leeinm","type":"comment","level":5,"id":"c-Leeinm-20241212003800-Hanyangprofessor2-20241203030900","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241213025100-Leeinm-20241212003800"]}}-->
@Leeinm Good. Please see comments at Talk:Qianjiang you received a while ago and consider adjusting your article to reflect the points made there. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:51, 13 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241213025100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":6,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241213025100-Leeinm-20241212003800","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Dear Professor,
We are taking the Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis class.
We have completed the modifications based on the feedback from Deadline 5:
-Expanded the first sentence by adding 2-3 sentences describing the most interesting aspects of Sanmenxia, highlighting why people would want to visit and what makes it special.
-Added a short (2-3 sentences) explanation of the local climate to accompany the climate graph, using examples from similar articles like Ansan and Beijing for reference.
-Included listings with GPS coordinates for the main railway station.
@Mcx8202229, let me know if you have any additional thoughts or suggestions! HYH031277777 (talk) 15:27, 8 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241208152700","author":"HYH031277777","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-HYH031277777-20241208152700-Deadline_6_:_HUANG_YANHAN_&_MA_CHENXIAO","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241209011300-HYH031277777-20241208152700"]}}-->
Can you create a map with districts, like for File:District_of_Ansan.jpg, with colors matching the ones used in your article (in the listing of districts, which I moved to the 'Orientation' section)? Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here01:13, 9 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241209011300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241209011300-HYH031277777-20241208152700","replies":["c-HYH031277777-20241209141300-Hanyangprofessor2-20241209011300"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Thank you very much for your suggestions. I didn't make such a diagram, but I marked the areas in the map. I wonder if it could be used as the same effect. Please take a look. HYH031277777 (talk) 14:13, 9 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241209141300","author":"HYH031277777","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-HYH031277777-20241209141300-Hanyangprofessor2-20241209011300","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241211062000-HYH031277777-20241209141300"]}}-->
@HYH031277777 Very nice, it's an advanced way of editing that will be awarded extra points. However, I wonder: two places (gray one and blue five) seem to have pins outside the area. Do they belong to a different city? If so, please move them to the right articles. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here06:20, 11 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241211062000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241211062000-HYH031277777-20241209141300","replies":["c-HYH031277777-20241211081200-Hanyangprofessor2-20241211062000"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
@Hanyangprofessor2 We have corrected some of the wrong locations and removed some of the attractions that do not belong to the city of Sanmenxia. HYH031277777 (talk) 08:12, 11 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241211081200","author":"HYH031277777","type":"comment","level":5,"id":"c-HYH031277777-20241211081200-Hanyangprofessor2-20241211062000","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241213025400-HYH031277777-20241211081200"]}}-->
@HYH031277777 Good. Rather then removing, for extra credit it is better to move them to the correct article (cut and paste rather then delete). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:54, 13 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241213025400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":6,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241213025400-HYH031277777-20241211081200","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor. I am studying “Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis” and “Media Trends and Globalization”.Here's my edit link to Wikivoyage, check it out。BAOTOU。I have added the changes you have suggested。Thank you. Shuo1103 (talk) 06:16, 9 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241209061600","author":"Shuo1103","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Shuo1103-20241209061600-Deadline_5\uff1aZHANG_MINGSHUO_2","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241211065500-Shuo1103-20241209061600"]}}-->
Please expand the first sentence by adding some more content (2-3 sentences) describing most interesting aspects of this location - tell people why they would want to visit this place, what makes it special.
Understand section should have a short section on history and another one on climate, with a climate chart (see how it is done at )Ansan – Travel guide at Wikivoyage or Sanmenxia – Travel guide at Wikivoyage . I see you have a climate section elsewhere - you should move it to the understand as a subsection and rewrite to it looks similar to those in the linked articles.
Please remember that you can only add your own work to Wikipedia -that includes images. Please show me on your computer how you made the File:Baotou Climate Map.jpg image - otherwise it will be removed as copied from another website (plagiarized)
Get around section is totally wrong. That section should discuss how to travel in Batou (what are the local public transportations and like). The content you currently have there should be moved to see/do as listings
Your do section is also wrong; it reads like generic useless AI generated text. Please replace it with proper listings about specific attractions that can be taken part in (ex. festivals)
Please ask for your article to be reviewed as discussed in our assignment at the bottom of the page here: User:Hanyangprofessor2 – Travel guide at Wikivoyage, then in few days check what was written and carry out any changes based on advice there and report back to me.
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Professor, this is my revised version, Baotou.I don't know why you can't add climate maps. Shuo1103 (talk) 11:35, 12 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241212113500","author":"Shuo1103","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Shuo1103-20241212113500-Hanyangprofessor2-20241211065500","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241213030000-Shuo1103-20241212113500"]}}-->
@Shuo1103 I can show you how to add climate chart in my office (just copy the one from Ansan, for example, then correct the numbers).
Please re-read my comments above. I do not see, for example, any improvement to the lead. I do not see a history section. Whatever you did it clearly ignored most of my comments above.  Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:00, 13 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241213030000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241213030000-Shuo1103-20241212113500","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Please expand the first sentence by adding some more content (2-3 sentences) describing most interesting aspects of this location - tell people why they would want to visit this place, what makes it special.
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We have reflected your feedback to our wikivoyage page and added more spots and information for dangjin.
Please check it. Thank you. @Jeong AhramJo HyeonSeong (talk) 00:55, 9 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241209005500","author":"Jo HyeonSeong","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Jo_HyeonSeong-20241209005500-Deadline_7_\uff1aJo_HyeonSeong_&_Jeong_Aram","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241209014100-Jo_HyeonSeong-20241209005500"]}}-->
@Jo HyeonSeong Very good, but I can't find the Solmoi holy site mentioned in the listings - the name appears just in the lead?
For the understand section, add a short (2-3 sentences) subsection about 'history'.
For the festivals, please add URL (links) to their homepages. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here01:41, 9 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241209014100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241209014100-Jo_HyeonSeong-20241209005500","replies":["c-Jeong_Ahram-20241209022600-Hanyangprofessor2-20241209014100"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I revised the professor's feedback on Sollmae Village(Not solmoi holy site. It was my mistake). In addition, I attached a link to the festival and attached a short history part. Please check. Thank you. Jeong Ahram (talk) 02:26, 9 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241209022600","author":"Jeong Ahram","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Jeong_Ahram-20241209022600-Hanyangprofessor2-20241209014100","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241211062400-Jeong_Ahram-20241209022600"]}}-->
@Jeong Ahram Very good. Can you also check the "Sinri holy site" - that's another term used in the opening that I cannot locate in the article. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here06:24, 11 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241211062400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241211062400-Jeong_Ahram-20241209022600","replies":["c-Jeong_Ahram-20241212001500-Hanyangprofessor2-20241211062400"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I checked and corrected it. More specifically, I changed from Sinri holy site to site of bishop St. Marie Nicolas Antoine Daveluy in dangjin sin-ri. Please check. Jeong Ahram (talk) 00:15, 12 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241212001500","author":"Jeong Ahram","type":"comment","level":5,"id":"c-Jeong_Ahram-20241212001500-Hanyangprofessor2-20241211062400","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241213025500-Jeong_Ahram-20241212001500"]}}-->
@Jeong Ahram Good, but I don't see "St. Marie Nicolas Antoine Daveluy" in any listing? Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:55, 13 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241213025500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":6,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241213025500-Jeong_Ahram-20241212001500","replies":["c-Jo_HyeonSeong-20241213043600-Hanyangprofessor2-20241213025500"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
We added Site of Bishop St. Marie Nicolas Antoine Daveluy in Dangjin Sin-ri on See part. Please check it. Thank you. Jo HyeonSeong (talk) 04:36, 13 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241213043600","author":"Jo HyeonSeong","type":"comment","level":7,"id":"c-Jo_HyeonSeong-20241213043600-Hanyangprofessor2-20241213025500","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241213055800-Jo_HyeonSeong-20241213043600"]}}-->
@Jeong Ahram @Jo HyeonSeong Good Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:58, 13 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241213055800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":8,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241213055800-Jo_HyeonSeong-20241213043600","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I finished Deadline5 and uploaded the article, please check it.Thank you. Hyodong318 (talk) 04:29, 9 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241209042900","author":"Hyodong318","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Hyodong318-20241209042900-Deadline5:ZHANG_XIAOTONG","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241211063200-Hyodong318-20241209042900"]}}-->
@Hyodong318 Good. Please note that this topic was accidentally translated by another student in our class for extra credit a bit earlier. Can you combine two existing articles into one? See the notice on the top of your translation project Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here06:32, 11 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241211063200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241211063200-Hyodong318-20241209042900","replies":["c-Hyodong318-20241212051400-Hanyangprofessor2-20241211063200"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Professor, I have confirmed and registered with you before confirming the article, so how can I merge the two articles into one? I don't know how to operate. Hyodong318 (talk) 05:14, 12 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241212051400","author":"Hyodong318","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Hyodong318-20241212051400-Hanyangprofessor2-20241211063200","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241213025600-Hyodong318-20241212051400","c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241213025700-Hyodong318-20241212051400"]}}-->
@Hyodong318 Compare the two articles, then if you think any part of your article is better (better language, grammar, links, etc.) replace the part in the older article with what you have done. You can get extra credit for that (your main project is finished successfully). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:56, 13 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241213025600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241213025600-Hyodong318-20241212051400","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
PS. Read more at 维基百科:合并页面 - 维基百科,自由的百科全书Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:57, 13 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241213025700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241213025700-Hyodong318-20241212051400","replies":["c-Hyodong318-20241213053800-Hanyangprofessor2-20241213025700"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I have combined two existing articles into one, please check it, thank you. Hyodong318 (talk) 05:38, 13 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241213053800","author":"Hyodong318","type":"comment","level":5,"id":"c-Hyodong318-20241213053800-Hanyangprofessor2-20241213025700","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241213060000-Hyodong318-20241213053800"]}}-->
Ok Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here06:00, 13 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241213060000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":6,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241213060000-Hyodong318-20241213053800","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Dear Professor
we are taking a class on 'Globalization' and 'Data'.
Thank you! Kim jong min (hanyang) (talk) 04:27, 13 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241213042700","author":"Kim jong min (hanyang)","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Kim_jong_min_(hanyang)-20241213042700-Deadline7_(Kang_Taeho_and_Kim_Jongmin)","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241213060200-Kim_jong_min_(hanyang)-20241213042700"]}}-->
@Kim jong min (hanyang) Regarding your translation to English, there is much unreferenced content (with no footnotes). Please remember that only referenced content can be added to Wikipedia and only such content will count for credit. See Wikipedia:Verifiability
For Pocheon, add a short subsection on history to understand (2-3 sentences will be enough), and 2-3 pictures to the article. See also the important feedback at Talk:Pocheon – Travel guide at Wikivoyage and carry out the fixes requested there. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here06:02, 13 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241213060200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241213060200-Kim_jong_min_(hanyang)-20241213042700","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Hello, dear professor, my team member hong jiaran and I are in the two courses of Media Trends and Globalization and Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis. After discussion, we want to modify our Chinese-English and English-Chinese translations as well as wikivoyage. The topic, although time is very tight, but we will complete it as soon as possible without delaying the final time. This is the original title after we changed it, Chinese to English, English to Chinese,wikivoyageHkiho (talk) 11:33, 2 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241202113300","author":"Hkiho","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Hkiho-20241202113300-Modify_the_theme--_Huang_Qihao_Hong_Jiaran","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241203033100-Hkiho-20241202113300"]}}-->
@Hkiho It is good that you have chosen the topics. zh:静寄山庄 seems like a good choice to translate, but remember that only referenced content can be added to English Wikipedia and only such content will count for credit. The content from Chinese article that has no references needs to be referenced first before being translated. See Wikipedia:Verifiability
When translating, please make sure to add blue links to related articles on English Wikipedia. If a term exists in Chinese Wikipedia and has an article there, but not on English Wikipedia, please use Template:Interlanguage link to link it. Again, if you need help with this, stop by my office and I'll demonstrate.
Baaghi (1990 film) is fine to translate to Chinese, but it is rather short, and since you chose your topics late, you missed some required deadline reducing your final points. As such, I suggest you also translate another article for extra credit. How about With Fire and Sword (film)?
Please expand the first sentence by adding some more content (2-3 sentences) describing most interesting aspects of this location - tell people why they would want to visit this place, what makes it special.
Understand section should have a climate subsection with a chart, and your listings need to be expanded
See and do sections should have listings (with GPS coordinates and other content (description, address, websites).
Get in section should have listings for the main local bus and train stations
Are there any festivals that could be discussed under the do section?
Please try to find and propose a new banner (see our instructions at https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/User:Hanyangprofessor2#Banners ) .
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OK professor, I will work with my teammates to add all the articles to the dashboard Hkiho (talk) 12:31, 3 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241203123100","author":"Hkiho","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Hkiho-20241203123100-Hanyangprofessor2-20241203033100","replies":[]}}-->
Dear professor, my teammates@Redyeoni and I have completed the Chinese-English translation and two English-Chinese translations, as well as the editing of Wikivoyage. Please check.User:Hkiho/sandbox
https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/LaixiHkiho (talk) 04:11, 6 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241206041100","author":"Hkiho","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Hkiho-20241206041100-Hanyangprofessor2-20241203033100","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241206083200-Hkiho-20241206041100"]}}-->
@Hkiho Good progress. In your Jingji Villa I've added [citation needed] to all parts that need footnotes.
Regarding your translations to Chinese, once all content is translated, you can publish them by moving them (see zh:Help:页面重命名 if you need help with that).
Regarding Laixi, please see my feedback above. Understand section still needs content (text) - compare to Ansan – Travel guide at WikivoyagePiotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:32, 6 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241206083200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241206083200-Hkiho-20241206041100","replies":["c-Hkiho-20241209035800-Hanyangprofessor2-20241206083200"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello professor, my teammates@Redyeoni and I have already posted the three articles and Wikivoyage, but the Chinese encyclopedia needs time to wait for the administrator to upload, and we cannot move the pages ourselves on the Chinese site. Hkiho (talk) 03:58, 9 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241209035800","author":"Hkiho","type":"comment","level":5,"id":"c-Hkiho-20241209035800-Hanyangprofessor2-20241206083200","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241211061000-Hkiho-20241209035800"]}}-->
Your other articles linked above, on zh wiki, (I count two?) have been published - good job.
In the Jingji Villa, please add the interlanguage (interwiki) link clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button and linking the Chinese article. Also, please add WP:CATEGORIES - see what categories are used on zh wiki and add similar ones here. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here06:10, 11 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241211061000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":6,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241211061000-Hkiho-20241209035800","replies":["c-Redyeoni-20241213082500-Hanyangprofessor2-20241211061000"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello professor, my teammates and I have completed your request. Redyeoni (talk) 08:25, 13 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241213082500","author":"Redyeoni","type":"comment","level":7,"id":"c-Redyeoni-20241213082500-Hanyangprofessor2-20241211061000","replies":[]}}-->
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Hello professor, this is my sandbox draft. I have modified and streamlined the article after the administrator's prompts. Please check it out.User:Mcx8202229/sandboxMcx8202229 🇨🇳❤️ (talk)06:19, 25 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241125061900","author":"Mcx8202229","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Mcx8202229-20241125061900-Article_revision_Ma_chenxiao","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241127035100-Mcx8202229-20241125061900","c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241206081900-Mcx8202229-20241125061900"]}}-->
@Mcx8202229 Good progress. The following fixes are needed:
Please make sure to add references to your article. Please remember that only referenced content can be added to English Wikipedia and only such content will count for credit. The content from Chinese article that has no references needs to be referenced first before being translated. See Wikipedia:Verifiability. Currently, Game content, Background setting and Development have no references.
The review section should summarize the reviews; but they seem to be just translations . We cannot copy and translate someone's review, we have to summarize it, or quote briefly. Please rewrite this to summarize what the reviewers said. For example of how this should be done, see The Elder Scrolls V: Skyrim - Wikipedia or Genshin Impact - Wikipedia
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I made some minor changes. Please check it. If there are any errors, please point them out. Thank you.User :Mcx8202229/sandboxMcx8202229 🇨🇳❤️ (talk)05:42, 2 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241202054200","author":"Mcx8202229","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Mcx8202229-20241202054200-Hanyangprofessor2-20241127035100","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241203031600-Mcx8202229-20241202054200"]}}-->
@Mcx8202229 Please read my comments again, I don't see significant changes. The references are still missing for the Game content and Development sections, and reviews still read like direct translations without quotations . We cannot just copy parts of the review and translate them. You have to summarize what the reviewer said, or attribute them with clear quotations like this: "Reviewer ABC writing for website XYZ said 'I like this because blah blah'." Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:16, 3 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241203031600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241203031600-Mcx8202229-20241202054200","replies":["c-Mcx8202229-20241203120500-Hanyangprofessor2-20241203031600"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I understand, professor, and now I have made some changes User :Mcx8202229/sandboxMcx8202229 🇨🇳❤️ (talk)12:05, 3 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241203120500","author":"Mcx8202229","type":"comment","level":5,"id":"c-Mcx8202229-20241203120500-Hanyangprofessor2-20241203031600","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241206081800-Mcx8202229-20241203120500"]}}-->
@Mcx8202229 Very good. I've marked two parts in the 'Game content' section where footnotes are needed. I think you are almost done - after you add the references, I asked for you can publish your article by moving it to the mainspace (see Help:How to move a page). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:18, 6 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241206081800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":6,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241206081800-Mcx8202229-20241203120500","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
PS. Is there an official webpage for the game? It should be added in the bottom, in a section called External links. Consider for example S.T.A.L.K.E.R. 2: Heart of Chornobyl (look at the bottom of that article). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:19, 6 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241206081900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241206081900-Mcx8202229-20241125061900","replies":["c-Mcx8202229-20241209035300-Hanyangprofessor2-20241206081900"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello professor, I have completed the article and published it Mcx8202229 🇨🇳❤️ (talk)03:53, 9 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241209035300","author":"Mcx8202229","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Mcx8202229-20241209035300-Hanyangprofessor2-20241206081900","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241211060100-Mcx8202229-20241209035300","c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241211060300-Mcx8202229-20241209035300"]}}-->
@Mcx8202229 Very good. You can ask for extra feedback and review here: WT:VG. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here06:01, 11 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241211060100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241211060100-Mcx8202229-20241209035300","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
@Mcx8202229 I noticed that the Chinese Wikipedia article about the game has an interesting but unreferenced section about account trading (Treasure Chamber). Can you find reliable sources to verify the content there and add it to your article here? Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here06:03, 11 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241211060300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241211060300-Mcx8202229-20241209035300","replies":["c-Mcx8202229-20241213084000-Hanyangprofessor2-20241211060300"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Professor, as far as I know, because a large number of players are using other account trading platforms, the trading platform in the game is almost not used. Now it seems that even the official has forgotten this setting, and I have not found any relevant news on the website, so I have abandoned this part and have not translated it. Mcx8202229 🇨🇳❤️ (talk)08:40, 13 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241213084000","author":"Mcx8202229","type":"comment","level":5,"id":"c-Mcx8202229-20241213084000-Hanyangprofessor2-20241211060300","replies":[]}}-->
__DTSUBSCRIBEBUTTONDESKTOP__{"headingLevel":2,"name":"h-Jeong_Ahram-20241209053800","type":"heading","level":0,"id":"h-Deadline7:_Jeong_Aram_&_Jo_HyeonSeong-20241209053800","replies":["c-Jeong_Ahram-20241209053800-Deadline7:_Jeong_Aram_&_Jo_HyeonSeong"],"uneditableSection":true,"text":"Deadline7: Jeong Aram & Jo HyeonSeong","linkableTitle":"Deadline7: Jeong Aram & Jo HyeonSeong"}-->
Thank you for checking. Thank you. Jo HyeonSeongJeong Ahram (talk) 05:38, 9 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241209053800","author":"Jeong Ahram","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Jeong_Ahram-20241209053800-Deadline7:_Jeong_Aram_&_Jo_HyeonSeong","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241211064200-Jeong_Ahram-20241209053800"]}}-->
Very good. Some issues to fix in your English translation:
if a topic exists in Korean but not English, please link it using this tool:틀:임시링크 - 위키백과. If you don't know how to use this, come to my office and I'll demonstrate
Please carefully check all references one by one to remove errors and to ensure they have metadata information (author, title, publisher, date). Next, if the source is in Korean, please use both the Korean and English titles. Use Korean title in the 'title' field, and English in the 'translated title' field. If you need help, stop by my office and I'll demonstrate how to do so.
See your reference one for correctly formatted footnote
Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here06:42, 11 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241211064200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241211064200-Jeong_Ahram-20241209053800","replies":["c-Jo_HyeonSeong-20241215090000-Hanyangprofessor2-20241211064200"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
We revised our article based on your feedback. Please check it. Thank you Professor. Jo HyeonSeong (talk) 09:00, 15 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241215090000","author":"Jo HyeonSeong","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Jo_HyeonSeong-20241215090000-Hanyangprofessor2-20241211064200","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241216020400-Jo_HyeonSeong-20241215090000"]}}-->
@Jo HyeonSeong Very good Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:04, 16 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241216020400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241216020400-Jo_HyeonSeong-20241215090000","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Professor, here are my 80 Wikipedia edits, pleasecheck itBai0926 (talk) 08:15, 13 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241213081500","author":"Bai0926","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Bai0926-20241213081500-Wiki_edit:BAI_LINHAN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241216021200-Bai0926-20241213081500"]}}-->
@Bai0926 Very nice. The only item to check is reference 7 in Guo Degang - Wikipedia - is it reliable? See WP:BAIDUPiotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:12, 16 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241216021200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241216021200-Bai0926-20241213081500","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I'm taking "Media Trends and Globalization" I'm so late.
Among the Deadline 4 tasks, I'm attaching the translation from my sandbox. Please check.
Thank you. I'll do best untill last week.
송여근 (talk) 15:36, 13 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241213153600","author":"\uc1a1\uc5ec\uadfc","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-\uc1a1\uc5ec\uadfc-20241213153600-Deadline4:_Yeogeun_Song","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241216021900-\uc1a1\uc5ec\uadfc-20241213153600"]}}-->
@송여근 Good. Make sure to translate some text like 'democratization after 1918' and the text in the see also (you can just remove that section, it is not needed). If a term exists in English Wikipedia and has an article there, but not on Chinese Wikipedia, please use this tool 틀:임시링크 - 위키백과 to link it. If you need help, I can demonstrate how to use it.
Then if you think your translation is good (proofread it to make sure there are no errors), please move it to mainspace and then we will see what Korean reviewers will say.
After the move, please try to add WP:CATEGORIES to your articles if they don't have any; see categories at the bottom of the original articles for ideas and try to find similar categories in Korean. Also, please add the interlanguage (interwiki) link by clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button and link the other language articles. If this is unclear, ask me in class or during my office hours and I'll demonstrate. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:19, 16 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241216021900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241216021900-\uc1a1\uc5ec\uadfc-20241213153600","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello, Professor. This is the Chinese-English translation of our group. It has been translated. Since there are two problems in the Chinese article, although we have submitted the English manuscript to mainspace, it has been rejected. How can we solve this problem? CHEN HEBING (talk) 06:27, 15 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241215062700","author":"CHEN HEBING","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-CHEN_HEBING-20241215062700-Wiki_edit:CHEN_HEBING&LIU_JUNYU","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241216023900-CHEN_HEBING-20241215062700"]}}-->
@CHEN HEBING You need to ensure all content in your article is properly referenced. Please remember that only referenced content can be added to English Wikipedia and only such content will count for credit. The content from Chinese article that has no references needs to be referenced first before being translated. See Wikipedia:Verifiability . See how your collegues have properly referenced their article on Criticisms of Baidu (they just started few weeks ago, asked me for feedback several times, and finished last week). You need to find references for all claims in the article, or remove the content that cannot be verified. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:39, 16 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241216023900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241216023900-CHEN_HEBING-20241215062700","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello Professor, I have recently completed 30 Wikipedia edits, including these three articles. Please check them out. Thank you!1.2.3. Jzhdylb (talk) 08:35, 15 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241215083500","author":"Jzhdylb","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Jzhdylb-20241215083500-Week_15---FAN_XINRU","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241216024100-Jzhdylb-20241215083500"]}}-->
@Jzhdylb Very good. I moved a picture that was making one of the your articles look bad. Keep up the good job, you are getting a lot of extra credit :) Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:41, 16 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241216024100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241216024100-Jzhdylb-20241215083500","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor:
I'm taking "Media Trends and Globalization" sorry I'm late.
Among the Deadline 4 tasks, I have modified my sandbox. Please check. Thank you. Minazhuang777 (talk) 13:09, 15 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241215130900","author":"Minazhuang777","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Minazhuang777-20241215130900-Deadline4\uff1aZhuang_Minna","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241216024600-Minazhuang777-20241215130900"]}}-->
@Minazhuang777 Good. I still see some unreferenced content, however. Please remember that only referenced content can be added to English Wikipedia and only such content will count for credit ("On the same day, a Facebook page named "Release Simon Cheng" uploaded...").
Also, reference [29] is bad ( "警方提供郑文杰与不同女性进出会所房间以及嫖卖双方忏悔的视频" ). See WP:Huanqiu. It cannot be used - it has too many fake news. We need to remove it and replace it with another better reference, or remove claims made by that outlet.
If a term exists in Chinese Wikipedia and has an article there, but not on English Wikipedia, please use Template:Interlanguage link to link it. If you need help with this, stop by my office and I'll demonstrate.
After you fix those issues, you can publish your article (see Wikipedia:Moving a page). After the move, please add the interlanguage (interwiki) link clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button and linking the Chinese article. Also, please add WP:CATEGORIES - see what categories are used on zh wiki and add similar ones here. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:46, 16 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241216024600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241216024600-Minazhuang777-20241215130900","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I take "Media Trends and Globalization" course, and work on the main project with Eunyeong Kang.
However, I have encountered some difficulties in translating the document titled "Press room and press corps of the South Korean government" into English, particularly with the challenge of locating citation sources. Despite seeking your assistance in your office last week, I have found it difficult to properly complete this task.
Following your suggestion last week that it would be fine to switch to a different document, I have decided to change the final project document to "The 1st Korean Music Awards" for the Korean-English translation. The translation of the previous document, "Press room and press corps of the South Korean government," will be kept as an extra credit assignment.
Both the completed translations—of the original and the new document—are available in my sandbox. Please find the link below for your review:[Sandbox link]
I would greatly appreciate it if you could kindly review the materials and provide feedback.
Thank you. Dbinni (talk) 15:00, 15 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241215150000","author":"Dbinni","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Dbinni-20241215150000-Deadline_7:_Dabin_Kim","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241216024900-Dbinni-20241215150000"]}}-->
@Dbinni Your press room... article is almost finished. It would be a shame to waste your effort. I think you can publish it. Same for your work on the 1st Korean music awards. Just make sure to split them before publishing. Please let me know when you have published both.
You can publish your article (see Wikipedia:Moving a page). After the move, please add the interlanguage (interwiki) link clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button and linking the Korean article. Also, please add WP:CATEGORIES - see what categories are used on ko wiki and add similar ones here. Stop by my office if you need help. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:49, 16 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241216024900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241216024900-Dbinni-20241215150000","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
When I was discussing with my friends today, I suddenly realized that I joined the Blogging through Media Trends and Globalization (2023) invited by the professor, but my friends joined the Blogging through Media Trends and Globalization (2024). My blogs were all published in 2023. Will it have any impact?
Thank you!! Zhangzhang111 (talk) 17:29, 15 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241215172900","author":"Zhangzhang111","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Zhangzhang111-20241215172900-ZHANG_BINGYI","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241216025000-Zhangzhang111-20241215172900"]}}-->
@Zhangzhang111 This should be ok, but just in case, send me an email reminding me that you submitted your work to 2023 blog. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:50, 16 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241216025000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241216025000-Zhangzhang111-20241215172900","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I am taking the course “Media Trends and Globalization”.
Here is a link to my feedback on the article. Please check it out, thank you. Xuan6699 (talk) 18:17, 15 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241215181700","author":"Xuan6699","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Xuan6699-20241215181700-Deadline6\uff1aXU_YAN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241216025200-Xuan6699-20241215181700"]}}-->
@Xuan6699 Good Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:52, 16 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241216025200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241216025200-Xuan6699-20241215181700","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear professor,"Media Trends and Globalization": I finished translating my article in the sandbox, and modified it, please check.This is my link. Buryab0ne (talk) 05:00, 19 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241119050000","author":"Buryab0ne","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Buryab0ne-20241119050000-Deadline5_QIAN_ZIYI","replies":["c-Buryab0ne-20241122050300-Buryab0ne-20241119050000"]}}-->
Dear professor, this is my understanding of small data and big data homework.This is my link. Please take a look, thank you Buryab0ne (talk) 05:03, 22 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241122050300","author":"Buryab0ne","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Buryab0ne-20241122050300-Buryab0ne-20241119050000","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241124022500-Buryab0ne-20241122050300"]}}-->
@Buryab0ne Regarding your translation, it reads well. Please fix the following issues:
Please make sure to add references to your article. Please remember that only referenced content can be added to English Wikipedia and only such content will count for credit. The content from Chinese article that has no references needs to be referenced first before being translated. See Wikipedia:Verifiability
Please carefully check all references one by one to remove errors and to ensure they have metadata information (author, title, publisher, date). Next, if the source is in Chinese (ex. 李鹏《六四日记》), please use both the Chinese and English titles. Use Chinese title in the 'title' field, and English in the 'translated title' field. If you need help, stop by my office and I'll demonstrate how to do so.
Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:25, 24 November 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241124022500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241124022500-Buryab0ne-20241122050300","replies":["c-Buryab0ne-20241206053400-Hanyangprofessor2-20241124022500"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear professor,"Media Trends and Globalization": I modified it, please check.This is my link.
Dear professor, this is my understanding of small data and big data homework.This is my link. Please have a look, thank you! Buryab0ne (talk) 05:34, 6 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241206053400","author":"Buryab0ne","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Buryab0ne-20241206053400-Hanyangprofessor2-20241124022500","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241206080500-Buryab0ne-20241206053400","c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241206080800-Buryab0ne-20241206053400"]}}-->
Regarding your wikivoyage article, the see section is full of generic content that reads like it was generated by AI. Please convert information there into proper listings, with GPS coordinates, descriptions, url links to the websites of the museums and such. Compare this section to the much better section on do (although it is still missing any info on festivals). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:05, 6 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241206080500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":5,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241206080500-Buryab0ne-20241206053400","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Regarding your Wikipedia article, the references are still in pretty poor shape. Several of them are to Wikipedia article, which is not allowed (see Wikipedia:CIRCULAR). There is still a lot of errors and metadata that is missing - the only thing you fixed is adding English title translations. Please reread my comments above - much more is needed to fix your work. Stop by my office hours if you need more help Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:08, 6 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241206080800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":5,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241206080800-Buryab0ne-20241206053400","replies":["c-Buryab0ne-20241216063200-Hanyangprofessor2-20241206080800"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear professor, this is my understanding of small data and big data homework.I modified it.This is my link. Please have a look, thank you Buryab0ne (talk) 06:32, 16 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241216063200","author":"Buryab0ne","type":"comment","level":6,"id":"c-Buryab0ne-20241216063200-Hanyangprofessor2-20241206080800","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241217071800-Buryab0ne-20241216063200"]}}-->
@Buryab0ne Good progress. To finish this assignment, please fix the following:
Please find and add more see locations, currently there is just one - this is way to little. Ansan – Travel guide at Wikivoyage has over 30. I am sure you can find a dozen or so interesting things to recommend to tourists in Pu'er - monuments, landmarks, etc.
Pu'er Tea Culture Exhibition Area entry should be converted into a listing, with GPS coordinates and an url.
Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:18, 17 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241217071800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":7,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241217071800-Buryab0ne-20241216063200","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I have posted my article, please check it. HYH031277777 (talk) 17:42, 8 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241208174200","author":"HYH031277777","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-HYH031277777-20241208174200-Deadline_7_\uff1aHUANG_YANHAN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241209012600-HYH031277777-20241208174200","c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241209014300-HYH031277777-20241208174200"]}}-->
@HYH031277777 This is a good start, but many fixes are needed:
Please make sure to add references to your article. Please remember that only referenced content can be added to English Wikipedia and only such content will count for credit. The content from Chinese article that has no references needs to be referenced first before being translated. See Wikipedia:Verifiability
For example, first and last paragraph of Tang Yin are not sufficiently referenced
Please add a reference for the term "Four Talents of Gusu," being used; I could not locate it. I have added examples for the use of other terms you mention in the lead.
Please carefully check all references one by one to remove errors and to ensure they have metadata information (author, title, publisher, date). Next, if the source is in Chinese (ex. 李鹏《六四日记》), please use both the Chinese and English titles. Use Chinese title in the 'title' field, and English in the 'translated title' field. If you need help, stop by my office and I'll demonstrate how to do so.
Also, if a topic exists in Chinese but not English, please link it using this tool: Template:Interlanguage link. If you don't know how to use this, come to my office and I'll demonstrate
Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here01:26, 9 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241209012600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241209012600-HYH031277777-20241208174200","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
PS. Please try to add WP:CATEGORIES to your articles if they don't have any; see categories at the bottom of the original articles for ideas and try to find similar categories in English to the ones you can see in Chinese Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here01:43, 9 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241209014300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241209014300-HYH031277777-20241208174200","replies":["c-HYH031277777-20241214165700-Hanyangprofessor2-20241209014300"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I have made the modifications based on your requirements. Below are the updates I have completed:
Improved citations for all sections.
Added English titles to Chinese references.
Linked topics without English pages to relevant Chinese Wikipedia pages.
Added appropriate categories to the page.
Please let me know if there are additional areas where I could further refine the article. HYH031277777 (talk) 16:57, 14 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241214165700","author":"HYH031277777","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-HYH031277777-20241214165700-Hanyangprofessor2-20241209014300","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241216020400-HYH031277777-20241214165700"]}}-->
@HYH031277777 Good, but I still see some paragraphs with no citations, please check again (near the end of 'Wen Zhengming' section). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:04, 16 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241216020400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241216020400-HYH031277777-20241214165700","replies":["c-HYH031277777-20241216065000-Hanyangprofessor2-20241216020400"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
@Hanyangprofessor2Okay, Professor, I've added this part. HYH031277777 (talk) 06:50, 16 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241216065000","author":"HYH031277777","type":"comment","level":5,"id":"c-HYH031277777-20241216065000-Hanyangprofessor2-20241216020400","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241217071900-HYH031277777-20241216065000"]}}-->
@HYH031277777 Very good Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:19, 17 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241217071900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":6,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241217071900-HYH031277777-20241216065000","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Dear Professor, I am taking 'Understanding Small and Big Data' class.I added a few images to make the Wikivoyage article more beautiful. Please review the final draft.YuzhouHanyuanyuan613 (talk) 06:37, 9 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241209063700","author":"Hanyuanyuan613","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Hanyuanyuan613-20241209063700-Deadline_7:_HAN_YUANYUAN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241211071700-Hanyuanyuan613-20241209063700"]}}-->
Good, but we cannot copy random images from Baidu (or similar) and claim that "This file is licensed under the Creative CommonsAttribution 4.0 International license". It is very unlikely any of the files are licensed in such a way, and that means we are stealing them - they will therefore be deleted shortly. You can only use files already on Wikimedia Commons or upload images you took yourself or from websites where the authors have clearly indicated they are using free license.
Some things to fix/improve:
Please ask for your article to be reviewed as discussed in our assignment at the bottom of the page here: User:Hanyangprofessor2 – Travel guide at Wikivoyage, then in few days check what was written and carry out any changes based on advice there and report back to me.
Please expand the first sentence by adding some more content (2-3 sentences) describing most interesting aspects of this location - tell people why they would want to visit this place, what makes it special.
Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:17, 11 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241211071700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241211071700-Hanyuanyuan613-20241209063700","replies":["c-Hanyuanyuan613-20241214110000-Hanyangprofessor2-20241211071700"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Good evening, Professor. I have made the changes as you requested. Please checkHanyuanyuan613 (talk) 11:00, 14 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241214110000","author":"Hanyuanyuan613","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Hanyuanyuan613-20241214110000-Hanyangprofessor2-20241211071700","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241216020600-Hanyuanyuan613-20241214110000"]}}-->
@Hanyuanyuan613 Good progress. The expanded lead is encyclopedic-style rather than a tourist guide. Please add something to it that tells people why this is a fun or interesting place to visit.
Double check the feedback you got on talk as well for some ideas and comments. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:06, 16 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241216020600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241216020600-Hanyuanyuan613-20241214110000","replies":["c-Hanyuanyuan613-20241216044000-Hanyangprofessor2-20241216020600"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor, I have made some changes according to your suggestions and those in the discussion. Please check.https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/YuzhouHanyuanyuan613 (talk) 04:40, 16 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241216044000","author":"Hanyuanyuan613","type":"comment","level":5,"id":"c-Hanyuanyuan613-20241216044000-Hanyangprofessor2-20241216020600","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241217073900-Hanyuanyuan613-20241216044000","c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241217074100-Hanyuanyuan613-20241216044000"]}}-->
@Hanyuanyuan613 Very good, see the nice comments you got on the talk page Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:39, 17 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241217073900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":6,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241217073900-Hanyuanyuan613-20241216044000","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
PS. Last suggestion from me: add a subsection on festivals to the 'do' section, like in Ansan – Travel guide at WikivoyagePiotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:41, 17 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241217074100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":6,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241217074100-Hanyuanyuan613-20241216044000","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Please expand the first paragraph by adding some more content (2-3 sentences) describing most interesting aspects of this location - tell people why they would want to visit this place, what makes it special. Right now it talks about industry - but why would tourists want to see the city?
Please try to find and propose a new banner (see our instructions at https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/User:Hanyangprofessor2#Banners ) .
please expand 'understand' section. It should have a paragraph on history and another one on the climate. See for example Ansan – Travel guide at Wikivoyage or Nonsan – Travel guide at Wikivoyage. If there are districts/neighborhoods, discuss them in the 'orientation' section.
For main train/subway/bus stations, please add listings with GPS coordinates
Are there any festivals that could be discussed under the do section?
In the buy section, discuss briefly what are best things for tourists to buy (special local gifts, food, etc.)
Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:24, 16 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241216022400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241216022400-Fifi623623-20241214082100","replies":["c-Fifi623623-20241216043700-Hanyangprofessor2-20241216022400"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I have corrected it, please check it again. Fifi623623 (talk) 04:37, 16 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241216043700","author":"Fifi623623","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Fifi623623-20241216043700-Hanyangprofessor2-20241216022400","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241217074700-Fifi623623-20241216043700"]}}-->
@Fifi623623 Very good, all that remains is asking for feedback from Wikivoyage reviewers, please do so ASAP. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:47, 17 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241217074700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241217074700-Fifi623623-20241216043700","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello, Professor. This is the Chinese-English translation of our group. It has been translated. Aaiiuuu (talk) 03:40, 16 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241216034000","author":"Aaiiuuu","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Aaiiuuu-20241216034000-Deadline_7:FAN_JINGYU","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241216035400-Aaiiuuu-20241216034000"]}}-->
Remember: if a term exists in English Wikipedia and has an article there, but not on Chinese Wikipedia, please use this tool zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi to link it. If you need help, I can demonstrate how to use it.
Once you fix that, you can publish your article by moving it (see zh:Help:页面重命名 if you need help with that). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:54, 16 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241216035400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241216035400-Aaiiuuu-20241216034000","replies":["c-Aaiiuuu-20241216150800-Hanyangprofessor2-20241216035400"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Sorry professor, I don't know how to operate it and I can't find where the mobile interface is. Aaiiuuu (talk) 15:08, 16 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241216150800","author":"Aaiiuuu","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Aaiiuuu-20241216150800-Hanyangprofessor2-20241216035400","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241217080200-Aaiiuuu-20241216150800"]}}-->
@Aaiiuuu I can show you in class on Friday, or ask many of your friends who learned how to do it, or you can ask on live Wikipedia help chat. See places to ask for help listed at the top of the article here: 维基百科:IRC聊天频道 - 维基百科,自由的百科全书Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:02, 17 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241217080200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241217080200-Aaiiuuu-20241216150800","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
your history section is way too long for Wikivoyage, which is not an encyclopedia. Please condense it to two paragraphs (cut by 75%)
in get around, mention whether rental bikes are available
some of your listings under 'see' need a description, likeCheongpungho Lake Observatory (there are others). Others, like I mentioned in class already, seem to have strange names (badly machine translated?) like "a small garden". We do not translate place names
are there any festivals in the city? If so, mention them in the do section
Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:26, 17 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241217082600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241217082600-Parksungeun-20241216061900","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello, Professor.This is the Chinese-English translation that we have revised again. Please check it out. Thank you. CHEN HEBING (talk) 11:08, 16 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241216110800","author":"CHEN HEBING","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-CHEN_HEBING-20241216110800-Wiki_edit:CHEN_HEBING&LIU_JUNYU_2","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241217083800-CHEN_HEBING-20241216110800"]}}-->
@CHEN HEBING As you can see, your submission has been speedy declined by the reviewers as insufficiently sourced. I can see, in five seconds, numerous paragraphs missing references. Please read my prior comments / reviews and carry out all the fixes requested first, before asking me for another review. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:38, 17 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241217083800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241217083800-CHEN_HEBING-20241216110800","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Additional credits——Wangtao626(Media Trends and Globalization)
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Hello professor, this is my blog post this semester——blogger.This is all the additional edits so far this semester——additional edits, Please check. Wangtao626 (talk) 11:32, 16 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241216113200","author":"Wangtao626","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Wangtao626-20241216113200-Additional_credits\u2014\u2014Wangtao626(Media_Trends_and_Globalization)","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241217083900-Wangtao626-20241216113200"]}}-->
@Wangtao626 Well done, I'll be grading them shortly Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:39, 17 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241217083900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241217083900-Wangtao626-20241216113200","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Deadline 8: Wangtao626 & ZAIWEI0328(Media Trends and Globalization)
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Hello professor, here are two articles from our group, one in English(Early buildings of Wuhan University) and one in Chinese(世界价值观调查), please check ZAIWEI0328 (talk) 11:38, 16 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241216113800","author":"ZAIWEI0328","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-ZAIWEI0328-20241216113800-Deadline_8:_Wangtao626_&_ZAIWEI0328(Media_Trends_and_Globalization)","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241217084000-ZAIWEI0328-20241216113800"]}}-->
@ZAIWEI0328 Well done. Please make sure to check them every few days in the next few weeks for feedback from local reviewers. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:40, 17 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241217084000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241217084000-ZAIWEI0328-20241216113800","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Additional credits——ZAIWEI0328(Media Trends and Globalization)
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Hello Professor, this is my weekly extra edit for this semester. Here is my blog post. ZAIWEI0328 (talk) 11:41, 16 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241216114100","author":"ZAIWEI0328","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-ZAIWEI0328-20241216114100-Additional_credits\u2014\u2014ZAIWEI0328(Media_Trends_and_Globalization)","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241217084100-ZAIWEI0328-20241216114100"]}}-->
@ZAIWEI0328 Well done, I'll be grading them shortly Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:41, 17 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241217084100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241217084100-ZAIWEI0328-20241216114100","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I'm taking 'Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis' class. This is my final draft Yangju. Thank you for your checking. SongHyeonmin2020007129 (talk) 12:28, 16 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241216122800","author":"SongHyeonmin2020007129","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-SongHyeonmin2020007129-20241216122800-Deadline_7:_Hyeonmin_Song","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241217085000-SongHyeonmin2020007129-20241216122800"]}}-->
please add a lead to your article, explaining why the city is interesting to see for the tourists. I removed the text that was there because it was terribly written
please make sure all your listings have descriptions which likewise explain why the location is worth visiting. For example, your first listing there is "Korea's 15th national park. No cooking, smoking, or bringing in flammable substances. No tents or parasols." That sounds terribly uninspiring and almost funny in a bad away. Your second listing just states that the place is "A historical landmark.", which is even more unispiring. Having read those, almost all tourists would be convinced this place is very boring.
Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:50, 17 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241217085000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241217085000-SongHyeonmin2020007129-20241216122800","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
@주영영 Good progress but many of your references were not translated correctly and some are plainly wrong (they are just links to English Wikipedia). Please ensure each footnote for translated content is in the correct place and contains correct information. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here10:56, 17 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241217105600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241217105600-\uc8fc\uc601\uc601-20241216142200","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Dear Professor,
I am taking the course “Media Trends and Globalization”and 'Globalization' and 'Data'.
I've published two articles with links to deadline5 comments that you've already seen and are now reposting as deadline7 in the discussion page.
Thank you. Syouziiye (talk) 04:39, 16 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241216043900","author":"Syouziiye","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Syouziiye-20241216043900-Deadline_7:_SHU_YING","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241217081700-Syouziiye-20241216043900"]}}-->
@Syouziiye Regarding Fuding, see my comments above to your colleague.
Your other articles look fine, but always check for feedback from local volunteers. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:17, 17 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241217081700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241217081700-Syouziiye-20241216043900","replies":["c-Syouziiye-20241217112600-Hanyangprofessor2-20241217081700"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Thank you for double-checking. I'll keep an eye on the feedback Syouziiye (talk) 11:26, 17 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241217112600","author":"Syouziiye","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Syouziiye-20241217112600-Hanyangprofessor2-20241217081700","replies":[]}}-->
I am currently taking the courses "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis" and "Media Trends and Globalization."
This is the additional Wikipedia task I completed personally Fang Lina Please check, thank you. Zzzxxxrrr (talk) 04:31, 6 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241206043100","author":"Zzzxxxrrr","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Zzzxxxrrr-20241206043100-Deadline_7_\uff1aZHANG_XIAORUI","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241206084900-Zzzxxxrrr-20241206043100"]}}-->
@Zzzxxxrrr Very good idea. Can you add some content about awards she received, and use as references articles which discuss her as a person, not just her work? Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:49, 6 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241206084900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241206084900-Zzzxxxrrr-20241206043100","replies":["c-Zzzxxxrrr-20241212153100-Hanyangprofessor2-20241206084900"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello, Professor, this is another extra credit project I completed. Please review Yang Qi-dong .Thank you. Zzzxxxrrr (talk) 15:31, 12 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241212153100","author":"Zzzxxxrrr","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Zzzxxxrrr-20241212153100-Hanyangprofessor2-20241206084900","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241213025300-Zzzxxxrrr-20241212153100"]}}-->
@Zzzxxxrrr Very good. The only thing you can improve now is to add more specific categories. I've added one that was obvious and missing. Look at your other articles and similar ones, and at categories on zh wiki, and think what categories you can add to your articles? Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:53, 13 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241213025300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241213025300-Zzzxxxrrr-20241212153100","replies":["c-Zzzxxxrrr-20241217101900-Hanyangprofessor2-20241213025300"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Professor, I have revised the article based on the issues you raised. Please review it. Zzzxxxrrr (talk) 10:19, 17 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241217101900","author":"Zzzxxxrrr","type":"comment","level":5,"id":"c-Zzzxxxrrr-20241217101900-Hanyangprofessor2-20241213025300","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241218024000-Zzzxxxrrr-20241217101900"]}}-->
@Zzzxxxrrr Good, but I see you created two articles on the same topic: Fang Lina and Lina Fang . Please combine them into a single article. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:40, 18 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241218024000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":6,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241218024000-Zzzxxxrrr-20241217101900","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I take Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis and would like to submit the Final Draft.
I checked what you left in the discussion, but there are some issues to correct the article in Seoul/North divided into East and West:
Relatively, there's little information in the northwest (Eunpyeong) compared to the northeast(Gangbuk, Seongbuk, Dobong, and Nowon). If you make a separate article in the northwest, it will be an article with extremely little information. Therefore, I think it is a better option to merge with Seodaemun-Mapo next to Eunpyeong in terms of location. Seodaemun-Mapo articles are as follows. Seodaemun-Mapo
I have been faithfully adding and revising information to articles in Seoul/North for a semester. As I suggest above, the article in Seoul/North is my current result. Seoul/North
Thank you! Parkjeongeun0430 (talk) 15:07, 13 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241213150700","author":"Parkjeongeun0430","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Parkjeongeun0430-20241213150700-Deadline_7:_Jeongeun_Park","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241216021500-Parkjeongeun0430-20241213150700"]}}-->
To make Seoul/North better, I'd suggest the following fixes:
add the 'Understand' heading above climate, then add a tiny section on 'history' and 'orientation' (that would explain the map issues). See how it is done in Ansan
Regarding the possible split, copy your argument above to Talk:Seoul/North – Travel guide at Wikivoyage then ask for feedback linking that discussion from https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/Wikivoyage:Travellers%27_pub to see what experienced editors at Wikivoyage will say Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:15, 16 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241216021500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241216021500-Parkjeongeun0430-20241213150700","replies":["c-Parkjeongeun0430-20241218014400-Hanyangprofessor2-20241216021500","c-Parkjeongeun0430-20241218015800-Hanyangprofessor2-20241216021500"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
And I added History. Please check it out. Seoul/NorthParkjeongeun0430 (talk) 01:58, 18 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241218015800","author":"Parkjeongeun0430","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Parkjeongeun0430-20241218015800-Hanyangprofessor2-20241216021500","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241218024500-Parkjeongeun0430-20241218015800"]}}-->
@Parkjeongeun0430 Excellent Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:45, 18 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241218024500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241218024500-Parkjeongeun0430-20241218015800","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor, I am taking 'Understanding Small and Big Data' class
I have added more city content on Laiyang's Wikivoyage, please check it out, thank you. Hyodong318 (talk) 13:11, 14 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241214131100","author":"Hyodong318","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Hyodong318-20241214131100-Deadline6:ZHANG_XIAOTONG","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241216022800-Hyodong318-20241214131100"]}}-->
Please expand the first paragraph by adding some more content (2-3 sentences) describing most interesting aspects of this location - tell people why they would want to visit this place, what makes it special. Tourists don't care about boring encyclopedic details like population.
You cannot copy maps from the Internet, upload them to Wikipedia and claim they are your own work. Please create your own map for the districts, in English. See examples of how this can be done in Ansan or Sanmenxia
Are there any festivals that could be discussed under the do section?
Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:28, 16 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241216022800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241216022800-Hyodong318-20241214131100","replies":["c-Hyodong318-20241216063000-Hanyangprofessor2-20241216022800"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Professor, I recreated the map myself and added interesting aspects and festival-related content under the do section on Laiyang Wikivoyage, please check it out, thank you. Hyodong318 (talk) 06:30, 16 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241216063000","author":"Hyodong318","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Hyodong318-20241216063000-Hanyangprofessor2-20241216022800","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241217075000-Hyodong318-20241216063000"]}}-->
@Hyodong318 Ok - where is the new map? I only see the old one in the article. Festival section looks good. And don't forget to ask for feedback and follow recommendations, there is not much time to compelte this step. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:50, 17 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241217075000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241217075000-Hyodong318-20241216063000","replies":["c-Hyodong318-20241217143600-Hanyangprofessor2-20241217075000"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I directly applied to delete the problematic map and asked for feedback. Please check again. Thank you. Hyodong318 (talk) 14:36, 17 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241217143600","author":"Hyodong318","type":"comment","level":5,"id":"c-Hyodong318-20241217143600-Hanyangprofessor2-20241217075000","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241218025000-Hyodong318-20241217143600"]}}-->
@Hyodong318 Ok Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:50, 18 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241218025000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":6,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241218025000-Hyodong318-20241217143600","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Please check them.Thank you so much. Donghem (talk) 04:01, 16 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241216040100","author":"Donghem","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Donghem-20241216040100-Deadline_7:XUE_DONGXIN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241217080500-Donghem-20241216040100"]}}-->
Please try to add WP:CATEGORIES to your articles; see categories at the bottom of the original articles for ideas and try to find similar categories for your articles in English
Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:05, 17 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241217080500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241217080500-Donghem-20241216040100","replies":["c-Donghem-20241218011800-Hanyangprofessor2-20241217080500"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I've added categories.Please check it out. Thanks. Donghem (talk) 01:18, 18 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241218011800","author":"Donghem","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Donghem-20241218011800-Hanyangprofessor2-20241217080500","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241218025400-Donghem-20241218011800"]}}-->
@Donghem Ok Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:54, 18 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241218025400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241218025400-Donghem-20241218011800","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Thank you! YZY2233 (talk) 04:18, 16 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241216041800","author":"YZY2233","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-YZY2233-20241216041800-Deadline_7:YUE_ZIYI","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241217081300-YZY2233-20241216041800"]}}-->
@YZY2233 Good, but I think you did not finish all the translation; for example, the popular culture section of spaghetti has not been translated yet.,
Regarding your Wikivoyage article, please recenter the map a bit - right now it is a bit too far north to show all the interesting spots. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:13, 17 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241217081300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241217081300-YZY2233-20241216041800","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241217081400-Hanyangprofessor2-20241217081300","c-YZY2233-20241217102900-Hanyangprofessor2-20241217081300"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
PS. And check the talk page for reviews - I've asked experienced editors to give you some reviews, since nobody stopped by so far... Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:14, 17 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241217081400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241217081400-Hanyangprofessor2-20241217081300","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
OK, professor, I have re-added the translation of the popular culture in the Spaghetti, and I have made some changes to Fuding's article according to the suggestions on the discussion page. Please review it again. Thank you. YZY2233 (talk) 10:29, 17 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241217102900","author":"YZY2233","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-YZY2233-20241217102900-Hanyangprofessor2-20241217081300","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241218025500-YZY2233-20241217102900"]}}-->
@YZY2233 Good. If you corrected the issues raised on the talk page, please post there saying so (after making sure you addressed the most recent issues raised). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:55, 18 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241218025500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241218025500-YZY2233-20241217102900","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Dear Professor
we are taking a class on 'Globalization' and 'Data'.
We've made changes to reflect your feedback. We need your review of our final document. ;) Kim jong min (hanyang) (talk) 14:29, 16 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241216142900","author":"Kim jong min (hanyang)","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Kim_jong_min_(hanyang)-20241216142900-Deadline_8_Kim_jong_min(hanyang),_Kang_taeho","replies":["c-Kim_jong_min_(hanyang)-20241216143100-Kim_jong_min_(hanyang)-20241216142900"]}}-->
@Kang Taeho@Kim jong min (hanyang)Kim jong min (hanyang) (talk) 14:31, 16 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241216143100","author":"Kim jong min (hanyang)","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Kim_jong_min_(hanyang)-20241216143100-Kim_jong_min_(hanyang)-20241216142900","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241218025800-Kim_jong_min_(hanyang)-20241216143100"]}}-->
@Kim jong min (hanyang) @Kang Taeho Good, but make sure all content is referenced. For example, what is the source for this: "After receiving attention through this tournament, he joined Daewoo Royals (now Busan I'Park), the parent company of Ajou University." or "However, towards the end of the first half of the season, he suffered a serious injury and it became difficult for him to continue playing." ?
Regarding Pocheon, please see the feedback you got at Talk:Pocheon – Travel guide at Wikivoyage and carry out the fixes requested there Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:58, 18 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241218025800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241218025800-Kim_jong_min_(hanyang)-20241216143100","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I'm taking 'Media Trends and Globalization' class. This is my final project 페르미 역설(Fermi paradox), 용광로 이론(Melting pot). Thank you for your checking. SongHyeonmin2020007129 (talk) 04:49, 17 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241217044900","author":"SongHyeonmin2020007129","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-SongHyeonmin2020007129-20241217044900-Deadline_8:_Hyeonmin_Song","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241218030800-SongHyeonmin2020007129-20241217044900"]}}-->
@SongHyeonmin2020007129 Good. Please check those pages over the next few days to see if there is any feedback from the zh wiki reviewers Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:08, 18 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241218030800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241218030800-SongHyeonmin2020007129-20241217044900","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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I'm taking 'Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis' class.
I would like to submit my Final Draft to professor.
Here is my final draft. NonsanJHyunlee (talk) 05:48, 13 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241213054800","author":"JHyunlee","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-JHyunlee-20241213054800-Deadline_7:_Lee_Jae-Hyun","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241213060400-JHyunlee-20241213054800","c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241213060500-JHyunlee-20241213054800"]}}-->
add a short subsection on history to understand (2-3 sentences will be enough)
add a short description to listings that are missing it (like Oknyeobong Park)
Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here06:04, 13 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241213060400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241213060400-JHyunlee-20241213054800","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
See also comments at Talk:Nonsan – Travel guide at Wikivoyage and fix the issues mentioned (for cafes, keep the most unique/interesting ones) Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here06:05, 13 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241213060500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241213060500-JHyunlee-20241213054800","replies":["c-JHyunlee-20241213101700-Hanyangprofessor2-20241213060500"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello, professor. As I accepted your feedback, So I added a short subsection on history to understand, and also added a short description to listings that are missing it.
And you said that I have to fix the issues mentioned in "Nonsan discussion page", but I already fixed already!(Deadline 5)
Thanks to your feedback!! JHyunlee (talk) 10:17, 13 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241213101700","author":"JHyunlee","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-JHyunlee-20241213101700-Hanyangprofessor2-20241213060500","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241216021100-JHyunlee-20241213101700"]}}-->
@JHyunlee Very good. If you fixed issues raised on talk, post a message there (Talk:Nonsan – Travel guide at Wikivoyage) pinging editors who gave you feedback, thanking them for it and saying that you fixed the issues they have asked you to fix. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:11, 16 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241216021100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241216021100-JHyunlee-20241213101700","replies":["c-JHyunlee-20241218044000-Hanyangprofessor2-20241216021100"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I completed all of them! JHyunlee (talk) 04:40, 18 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241218044000","author":"JHyunlee","type":"comment","level":5,"id":"c-JHyunlee-20241218044000-Hanyangprofessor2-20241216021100","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241218070900-JHyunlee-20241218044000"]}}-->
@JHyunlee Very good Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:09, 18 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241218070900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":6,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241218070900-JHyunlee-20241218044000","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear, Professor, this class is about 미디어트랜드와글로벌라이제이션.
English Supplement :https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Niushoushan
English to Chinese :https://zh.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E9%A9%AC%E5%B0%94%E5%A0%A1%E5%9F%8E%E5%A0%A1
This is what we've done.
주영영2022009598
장문비2022096399 주영영 (talk) 05:26, 15 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241215052600","author":"\uc8fc\uc601\uc601","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-\uc8fc\uc601\uc601-20241215052600-Zhang_Wenfei\u3001Zhu_Yingying","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241216023500-\uc8fc\uc601\uc601-20241215052600"]}}-->
@주영영 I am afraid your English contributions are not at an acceptable level; I have hidden them in the article's history. Please read specific reasons below:
Please remember that only referenced content can be added to English Wikipedia and only such content will count for credit. The content from Chinese article that has no references needs to be referenced first before being translated. See Wikipedia:Verifiability
your footnotes were links to Chinese Wikipedia. This is not correct. Read Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Linking . Footnotes are used for references, not links to other Wikipedia articles. If a term exists in Chinese Wikipedia and has an article there, but not on English Wikipedia, please use Template:Interlanguage linkI to link it. f you need help with this, stop by my office during office hours and I'll demonstrate.
You also removed the existing WP:LEAD in the article, which was correctly formatted. Do not replace existing good content with lower quality one.
I had to hide your Chinese contributions as well because they also did not have proper links/references.
Note that your translated content is visible in article history. You can restore it, but only with proper links and references. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:35, 16 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241216023500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241216023500-\uc8fc\uc601\uc601-20241215052600","replies":["c-Fifi623623-20241216135100-Hanyangprofessor2-20241216023500","c-Fifi623623-20241217085100-Hanyangprofessor2-20241216023500"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I corrected my article. Fifi623623 (talk) 13:51, 16 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241216135100","author":"Fifi623623","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Fifi623623-20241216135100-Hanyangprofessor2-20241216023500","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241217080000-Fifi623623-20241216135100"]}}-->
@Fifi623623 @주영영 It's better but still not fully fixed. There are still several footnotes to Wikipedia that should be converted to internal links (I count twelve). I also see some paragraphs that have no reference (outside the incorrect links to Wikipedia). You should also add a source for the claim that As described in Jinling Langu (A Glimpse of Ancient Jinling): “From afar, the two peaks compete in height, resembling ox horns.”
Additionally, if a term exists in Chinese Wikipedia and has an article there, but not on English Wikipedia, please use Template:Interlanguage link to link it. For example, zh:法融禅师 should be linked in such a way. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:00, 17 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241217080000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241217080000-Fifi623623-20241216135100","replies":["c-Fifi623623-20241218044000-Hanyangprofessor2-20241217080000"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear professor,
I corrected it as you requested, could you please check if this change is correct?
I couldn't find the source, so I deleted ‘Jinling Langu (A Glimpse of Ancient Jinling): “From afar, the two peaks compete in height, resembling ox horns.”’.
NiushoushanFifi623623 (talk) 04:40, 18 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241218044000","author":"Fifi623623","type":"comment","level":5,"id":"c-Fifi623623-20241218044000-Hanyangprofessor2-20241217080000","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241218071200-Fifi623623-20241218044000"]}}-->
@Fifi623623 That is fine. If we cannot find a source for some claims, they should be removed as they can be false (read also: Zhemao hoaxes).
@Adakiko (re: unexplained content removal) - the removed content was discussed above (unreferenced or badly referenced content). Feel free to give more feedback to the student (she is trying to improve that article; it's a class assignment I am supervising). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:12, 18 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241218071200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":6,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241218071200-Fifi623623-20241218044000","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear professor,
The article has been corrected,please check again.
@Fifi623623 No it hasn't. The same problems I identified above exists in the current version, for both of your articles. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:53, 18 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241218025300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241218025300-Fifi623623-20241217085100","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello, Professor. These are all the additional blogs I have completed. Please review them.
Thank you, Professor. Zzzxxxrrr (talk) 10:24, 17 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241217102400","author":"Zzzxxxrrr","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Zzzxxxrrr-20241217102400-Extra_credit_blog\uff1aZHANG_XIAORUI","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241218071300-Zzzxxxrrr-20241217102400"]}}-->
@Zzzxxxrrr Ok Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:13, 18 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241218071300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241218071300-Zzzxxxrrr-20241217102400","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Among the Deadline 5 tasks, My article finished in my sandbox. I'm attaching the link, so please check.
I've finished both topics. I'll work hard on the rest of it. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 송여근 (talk • contribs) 13:55, 17 December 2024 (UTC)
송여근 (talk) 06:25, 18 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241217135500","author":"\uc1a1\uc5ec\uadfc","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-\uc1a1\uc5ec\uadfc-20241217135500-Deadline_5:_YeogeunSong","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241218072000-\uc1a1\uc5ec\uadfc-20241217135500"]}}-->
@송여근 If you have finished your translation, please publish it, by merging it with 근대화 이론 - 위키백과 . Then see if there is any feedback from the Korean reviewers. When copying your text, make sure not to delete the existing referenced content (it should be incorporated into your expansion). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:20, 18 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241218072000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241218072000-\uc1a1\uc5ec\uadfc-20241217135500","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello, Professor. These are all the additional blogs I have completed. Please review them.
Thank you, Professor. Honghaotian (talk) 05:48, 18 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241218054800","author":"Honghaotian","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Honghaotian-20241218054800-Extra_credit_blog\uff1aHONG_HAOTIAN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241218072200-Honghaotian-20241218054800"]}}-->
@Honghaotian Ok Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:22, 18 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241218072200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241218072200-Honghaotian-20241218054800","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor
I revised the article and added the missing parts in the original article. They are notes 6 7 8 13 20 22 23
Here is the linkCaizzz (talk) 04:50, 9 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241209045000","author":"Caizzz","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Caizzz-20241209045000-Deadlin_\uff1aCAI_ZHIHANG","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241211063600-Caizzz-20241209045000"]}}-->
@Caizzz Good progress. Please note that several other parts of your article need citations (references/footnotes). I've marked them in your text with [citation needed]. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here06:36, 11 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241211063600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241211063600-Caizzz-20241209045000","replies":["c-Caizzz-20241211084200-Hanyangprofessor2-20241211063600"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I made additional comments on 2 3 6 23 25 36 38 39 40 Here is the linkCaizzz (talk) 08:42, 11 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241211084200","author":"Caizzz","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Caizzz-20241211084200-Hanyangprofessor2-20241211063600","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241213025800-Caizzz-20241211084200","c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241213025900-Caizzz-20241211084200"]}}-->
Very good. Please note that two references are low quality and should be replaced with better ones: 25 is WP:EPOCHTIMES and 39 is a blog (see WP:SPS) Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:58, 13 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241213025800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241213025800-Caizzz-20241211084200","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
@CaizzzPiotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:59, 13 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241213025900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241213025900-Caizzz-20241211084200","replies":["c-Caizzz-20241213053800-Hanyangprofessor2-20241213025900"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I have re-annotated comments 25 and 39.Here is the linkCaizzz (talk) 05:38, 13 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241213053800","author":"Caizzz","type":"comment","level":5,"id":"c-Caizzz-20241213053800-Hanyangprofessor2-20241213025900","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241213055600-Caizzz-20241213053800"]}}-->
Good. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:56, 13 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241213055600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":6,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241213055600-Caizzz-20241213053800","replies":["c-Caizzz-20241216051500-Hanyangprofessor2-20241213055600"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
This is my Wikivoyage linkCaizzz (talk) 05:15, 16 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241216051500","author":"Caizzz","type":"comment","level":7,"id":"c-Caizzz-20241216051500-Hanyangprofessor2-20241213055600","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241217072500-Caizzz-20241216051500"]}}-->
Please format the see and do properly - see how this is done in Ansan – Travel guide at Wikivoyage . Each tourist location should have a separate listing, with GPS coordinates, address, description, and if possible, URL.
Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:25, 17 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241217072500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":8,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241217072500-Caizzz-20241216051500","replies":["c-Caizzz-20241218103600-Hanyangprofessor2-20241217072500"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I re-edited the entire article, here is the linkCaizzz (talk) 10:36, 18 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241218103600","author":"Caizzz","type":"comment","level":9,"id":"c-Caizzz-20241218103600-Hanyangprofessor2-20241217072500","replies":["c-Caizzz-20241218104900-Caizzz-20241218103600"]}}-->
This is the latest linkCaizzz (talk) 10:49, 18 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241218104900","author":"Caizzz","type":"comment","level":10,"id":"c-Caizzz-20241218104900-Caizzz-20241218103600","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241219024600-Caizzz-20241218104900"]}}-->
@Caizzz Very good. All that remains is to ask for a review per my final bullet point above. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:46, 19 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241219024600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":11,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241219024600-Caizzz-20241218104900","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello,professor.I'm taking 'Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis' and "Media Trends and Globalization" class.
Deadline3:Media Trends and Globalization
I have completed the task of referencing once, please check.The referenced link is here.
Deadline3:Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis
My partner LIU ZIFU and I completed the Wikivoyage task last month. After your feedback, we have added Chengdu Shuangliu International Airport and Chengdu Tianfu International Airport. I think there are still areas for improvement in our work, so I will continue to improve our assignments this week and report back to you at any time. Looking forward to your feedback.
Deadline4&5 :Media Trends and Globalization
I have completed the translation work for Wikipedia, 100% done. Please check(1)
Deadline4:Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis
I have completed the task evaluation for other classmates.I have completed the modifications to our group's Wikivoyage based on your feedback to LIU ZIFU last month. By modifying the content of our group, I have gained some experience, which I have used to complete the peer review. Please check.
Deadline5:Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis
I have completed the modifications to our group's Wikivoyage based on your feedback to LIU ZIFU last month. Please check.
Deadline6 :Media Trends and Globalization
I have completed this task and provided suggestions for HUANG YANHAN's article in his translation task. Please [[Talk:Four Scholars in Wuzhong#Suggestions:ZHANG QI[edit source]|review]].
Deadline8 :Media Trends and Globalization & Deadline7 :Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis
When I was completing my translation task, the person who posted the photos was officially banned by Wikipedia, so two of the photos could not be accurately synchronized to my translation task. Please forgive me. And when I was doing the translation task, I used templates to reference both of the following templates in my article, and corrected any links that did not display correctly using templates like this.[[:zh: en| zh]]
May I obtain additional scores by completing these two templates.
Thanks. ZHANGQI1066 (talk) 07:27, 10 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241210072700","author":"ZHANGQI1066","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-ZHANGQI1066-20241210072700-Deadline\uff1aZHANG_QI","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241211074200-ZHANGQI1066-20241210072700"]}}-->
@ZHANGQI1066 Good. For references, if the source is not in English, the title should be in the original language (here, Chinese), and the English translation of the title is added to the 'translated title' parameter. Stop by my office hours if you want me to show you how to do it.
Listings in 'get in' should include the main train and bus station (with GPS coordinates)
Are there any festivals that could be discussed under the do section?
Please ask for your article to be reviewed as discussed in our assignment at the bottom of the page here: User:Hanyangprofessor2 – Travel guide at Wikivoyage, then in few days check what was written and carry out any changes based on advice there and report back to me.
Please make sure to add references to your article. Please remember that only referenced content can be added to English Wikipedia and only such content will count for credit. The content from Chinese article that has no references needs to be referenced first before being translated. See Wikipedia:Verifiability. There are numerous paragraphs in your article that have no references. Please add references to them.
Please carefully check all references one by one to remove errors and to ensure they have metadata information (author, title, publisher, date). Next, if the source is in Chinese, please use both the Chinese and English titles. Use Chinese title in the 'title' field, and English in the 'translated title' field. If you need help, stop by my office and I'll demonstrate how to do so.
Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:42, 11 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241211074200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241211074200-ZHANGQI1066-20241210072700","replies":["c-ZHANGQI1066-20241211081100-Hanyangprofessor2-20241211074200"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
OK, I will reply to you again after I have completed all the additional information. ZHANGQI1066 (talk) 08:11, 11 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241211081100","author":"ZHANGQI1066","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-ZHANGQI1066-20241211081100-Hanyangprofessor2-20241211074200","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241213030100-ZHANGQI1066-20241211081100"]}}-->
Ok Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:01, 13 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241213030100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241213030100-ZHANGQI1066-20241211081100","replies":["c-ZHANGQI1066-20241218083000-Hanyangprofessor2-20241213030100"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
First of all, I have completed your first suggestion - I have translated the Chinese materials in the citations and checked all the citations. I also deleted several inappropriate citations and citations whose pages were deleted.Battle of Weixian
Secondly, I completed the modification of Wikipedia. I added the historical background of Longquanyi and the climate and climate map. And I also added the train station. Finally, according to your suggestion, I also found the local festivals and put the festivals after the history. Please check.[70]
However, I don’t quite understand this paragraph: Please ask for your article to be reviewed as discussed in our assignment at the bottom of the page here: User:Hanyangprofessor2 – Travel guide at Wikivoyage, then in a few days check what was written and carry out any changes based on advice there and report back to me.Because I am in the same group as LIU ZIFU, he has already completed the review, but you may have deleted the previous information. You can check whether you have modified his and my grades to know that we completed this assignment ahead of schedule last month, but only he left a message on the page, so you may not know. Please check
Regarding Battle of Weixian: I added a few citations and checked and modified the previous ones. The citation I added is the Battle of Huaihai. I don't know if you can understand what I said. Because the Battle of Weixian is the beginning of the Battle of Huaihai, they are related, so I quoted some citations with titles similar to the Battle of Huaihai. Finally, I completed your last request: Next, if the source is in Chinese, please use both the Chinese and English titles. Use Chinese title in the 'title' field, and English in the 'translated title' field. If you need help, stop by my office and I'll demonstrate how to do so. Please checkZHANGQI1066 (talk) 08:30, 18 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241218083000","author":"ZHANGQI1066","type":"comment","level":5,"id":"c-ZHANGQI1066-20241218083000-Hanyangprofessor2-20241213030100","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241219025200-ZHANGQI1066-20241218083000"]}}-->
@ZHANGQI1066 Very good progress. I see only one paragraph now missing a reference ("In terms of tactics, the PLA emphasized "steady and methodical" attacks..."). Can you add a reference to it (otherwise it should be removed)?
The only other thing to improve is to address the Wikipedia:Orphan issue of this article not being linked from others. See what articles link to this on Chinese Wikipedia and try to see if this is mentioned in similar places in corresponding English articles, and if not, add a mention of your new article to them. Compare Pages that link to "Battle of Weixian" - Wikipedia vs 链接至“潍县战役”的页面 - 维基百科,自由的百科全书
Regarding " Please ask for your article to be reviewed as discussed..." for Longquanyi – Travel guide at Wikivoyage this has not been yet completed. You should go to talk page of your Wikivoyage article, start a discussion section asking for a review, then link it from the bottom of Wikivoyage:Requests for comment – Travel guide at WikivoyagePiotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:52, 19 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241219025200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":6,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241219025200-ZHANGQI1066-20241218083000","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I am taking 'Understanding Small Data and Big Data' course.
My topic assignment is Burqin, and I also made an extra credit wikivoyage article:Qianjiang.
About weekly wiki-editing project, I have done over 170 edits total, plaese check by this.
For the more extra credit, I also translated a Korean article: 열두 살에 부자가 된 키라 into Chinese: 小狗钱钱.
Please check by the link~
Have a nice day.
Leeinm (talk) 07:49, 12 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241212074900","author":"Leeinm","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Leeinm-20241212074900-Deadline_6-LI_LINLIN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241213030700-Leeinm-20241212074900"]}}-->
@Leeinm Good. Check feedback on talk of Burqin and Qianjiang and my comments on how to improve them above in other sections.
Good job with your weekly edits. Regarding your extra credit translation, please add reference to it (also you can add a reference ot the Korean original article for extra credit). Please remember that only referenced content can be added to Wikipedia and only such content will count for credit. See Wikipedia:Verifiability - in zh wiki that's 维基百科:可供查證 - 维基百科,自由的百科全书Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:07, 13 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241213030700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241213030700-Leeinm-20241212074900","replies":["c-Leeinm-20241218132900-Hanyangprofessor2-20241213030700"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor,
I checked the discussion pages of burqin and qianjiang and made some modifications based on comments from other users.
For extra credit translated articles, references are also added. Please check it here.
I also translated a english article Separate spheres to Chinese and added references. Please check it here.
Thanks~ Leeinm (talk) 13:29, 18 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241218132900","author":"Leeinm","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Leeinm-20241218132900-Hanyangprofessor2-20241213030700","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241219025700-Leeinm-20241218132900"]}}-->
@Leeinm Good. Regarding your book article, I think you should translate the claim in German that "In China, A Dog Called Money has been the most successful German children's book in recent years, selling 1.5 million copies within a year. ", with a reference. If you could add some Chinese reviews to your article, it would be very useful to the readers too. You could then translate it to English for even more extra credit. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here02:57, 19 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241219025700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241219025700-Leeinm-20241218132900","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor,
I am currently taking the courses "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis" and "Media Trends and Globalization."
I have completed our final project. This is the article I translated from Chinese to English, and it has already been published.
Battle of Baotou(CN->ENG) (ENG->CN)戈佐岛体育场 Please review them.
Thank you, Professor Shuo1103 (talk) 17:49, 17 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241217174900","author":"Shuo1103","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Shuo1103-20241217174900-Deadline8\uff1aZHANG_MINGSHUO","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241218072200-Shuo1103-20241217174900"]}}-->
@Shuo1103 Your English article has been declined because the translation is not finished - it is missing references. Please make sure to add references to your article. Please remember that only referenced content can be added to English Wikipedia and only such content will count for credit. The content from Chinese article that has no references needs to be referenced first before being translated. See Wikipedia:Verifiability
Your work is placed in Draft:Battle of BaotouPiotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:22, 18 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241218072200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241218072200-Shuo1103-20241217174900","replies":["c-Shuo1103-20241218112700-Hanyangprofessor2-20241218072200"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello, Professor.I added references and re-posted the Battle of Baotou Please check it out. Thanks. Shuo1103 (talk) 11:27, 18 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241218112700","author":"Shuo1103","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Shuo1103-20241218112700-Hanyangprofessor2-20241218072200","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241219043900-Shuo1103-20241218112700"]}}-->
If the source is in Chinese (ex. 中国抗日战争年度焦点: 醒狮怒吼,1937-1939), please use both the Chinese and English titles. Use Chinese title in the 'title' field, and English in the 'translated title' field. If you need help, stop by my office and I'll demonstrate how to do so.
The last paragraph still needs a reference.
Please finish translating the content from the infobox (Chinese commander names are not translated) and other links are broken.
Many other links to relevant articles are missing from your translation (ex. Fu Zuoyi) in the background. Others are wrong, for example "Chen Bingyi" links to a wrong person (artist born in 1975...).
If a topic exists in Chinese but not English, please link it using this tool: Template:Interlanguage link. If you don't know how to use this, come to my office and I'll demonstrate. For example, "Eighth War Area" should be linked to 绥西三战役 (and the correct name in English would likely be the "Third Battle of Suixi").
Then you should address the Wikipedia:Orphan issue of this article not being linked from others. See what articles link to this on Chinese Wikipedia and try to see if this is mentioned in similar places in corresponding English articles, and if not, add a mention of your new article to them. Compare Special:WhatLinksHere/Battle of Baotou vs 链接至“包头战役”的页面 - 维基百科,自由的百科全书Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:39, 19 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241219043900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241219043900-Shuo1103-20241218112700","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear professor, we have revised our translation of Hong Kong Media Controversy, but we are still unable to submit it. The reason given by the administrators is that the reference sources of our article are unreliable, but the information sources in the Chinese article are also unreliable, so we are unable to successfully upload it now. This is the reply given by the administrators. CHEN HEBING (talk) 08:26, 18 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241218082600","author":"CHEN HEBING","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-CHEN_HEBING-20241218082600-CHEN_HEBING&LIU_JUNYU","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241219045000-CHEN_HEBING-20241218082600"]}}-->
@CHEN HEBING That is a good response, but see also my last comment to you from few days ago. The references you currently have in the article are ok, but a lot of the content in your article has no references. You need to either find references for them, or delete the unreferenced content from your translation. Per our class policies, only referenced content is accepted for this assignment.
For example, you have the following short section, which cites no source: "In 2000, Next Magazine published an article titled "Addicted to the Top Scholars Exam", in which the first interviewee said, "It's so boring to go back to work every day. If I don't take exams, I will feel tired all over." The interviewee complained to the Privacy Commissioner's Office and the Hong Kong Journalists Association that the content was fabricated." Either find a reference to prove this is true or delete this. You can likewise delete this from zh wiki for extra points, with the rationale that is has no references. If someone cares and can find a reference, they can restore it. Otherwise we cannot host such information on Wikipedia - it may be false. See also this case study: Zhemao hoaxes - WikipediaPiotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:50, 19 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241219045000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241219045000-CHEN_HEBING-20241218082600","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor, I am taking the courses "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis" and "Media Trends and Globalization." I have completed our final project. This is the article I translated from English to chinese, |全球金融体系]and it has already been published. 白诗棋 (talk) 08:27, 18 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241218082700","author":"\u767d\u8bd7\u68cb","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-\u767d\u8bd7\u68cb-20241218082700-Deadline8\uff1a\u767d\u8bd7\u68cb","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241219045100-\u767d\u8bd7\u68cb-20241218082700"]}}-->
@白诗棋 Very good, now wait and see what the Chinese reviewers will say about your translation. Please monitor your work over the next week and address any issues raised. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:51, 19 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241219045100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241219045100-\u767d\u8bd7\u68cb-20241218082700","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello, Professor. These are all the additional blogs I have completed. Please review them
Thank you, Professor. Limengchen2777 (talk) 08:33, 18 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241218083300","author":"Limengchen2777","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Limengchen2777-20241218083300-Extra_credit_blog\uff1aLIMENGCHEN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241219045100-Limengchen2777-20241218083300"]}}-->
@Limengchen2777 Good, grades will be posted shortly (within a few days). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:51, 19 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241219045100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241219045100-Limengchen2777-20241218083300","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Dear professor, this is my revised content. Regarding the citation of the part about "differences from the original novel", citation [15] contains all the sources of this part. So can I just add it to the first paragraph? Xuan6699 (talk) 19:17, 18 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241218191700","author":"Xuan6699","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Xuan6699-20241218191700-Deadline_5\uff1aXU_YAN_3","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241219050300-Xuan6699-20241218191700"]}}-->
@Xuan6699 It should be added to every paragraph that is based on it. In addition, in several places you cite a low quality source (see WP:GLOBALTIMES). Try to replace it with better quality sources if possible. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:03, 19 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241219050300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241219050300-Xuan6699-20241218191700","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello, professor. I have finished my homework on Wikipedia.Please check it. Thank you!User:Wjyy1212/sandboxWjyy1212 (talk) 03:04, 19 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241219030400","author":"Wjyy1212","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Wjyy1212-20241219030400-Deadline_8_\uff1aWEN_JIAYAO","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241219050400-Wjyy1212-20241219030400"]}}-->
@Wjyy1212 Good, but you still need to fix the following issues, many of which I mentioned in my previous reviews of your work:
Please make sure to add references to your article. Please remember that only referenced content can be added to English Wikipedia and only such content will count for credit. The content from Chinese article that has no references needs to be referenced first before being translated. See Wikipedia:Verifiability
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Dear Professor Piotr, Our course is: Media Trends and Globalization.
I'm done with the blog about this class. Click here to check it out.@SssnuanAlexk27 (talk) 09:19, 19 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241219091900","author":"Alexk27","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Alexk27-20241219091900-SHAO_JIANUAN","replies":[]}}-->
Dear Professor Piotr, Our course is: Media Trends and Globalization.
I'm done with the blog about this class.You can click this link to view it. Thank you for taking the time to read my blog during your busy schedule.@Alexk27Alexk27 (talk) 09:33, 19 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241219093300","author":"Alexk27","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Alexk27-20241219093300-WANG_YIKE","replies":[]}}-->
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Dear Professor, My course is: Media Trends and Globalization. I'm done with the blog about this class. Please check it. LJY2455 (talk) 11:01, 19 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241219110100","author":"LJY2455","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-LJY2455-20241219110100-Blog:_LIU_JUNYU","replies":[]}}-->
Dear Professor,I am taking the courses "Media Trends and Globalization."
This is my blog posts, please check
it .
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I'm taking the ''Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis' class.
I completed the final version reflecting feedback from Deadline 6 and 7. Here is the link.
Please let me know if there is anything else I need to supplement.
Thank you and have a nice day! Parksungeun (talk) 17:01, 18 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241218170100","author":"Parksungeun","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Parksungeun-20241218170100-Deadline_7:_Parksungeun","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241219045900-Parksungeun-20241218170100"]}}-->
@Parksungeun Well done. That article seems fine. Double check the feedback from its talk page. If you have acted on it and fixed the issues mentioned there, please reply there to the editor who reviewed, pinging them and thanking them for their review, and tell them all has been fixed so they can double check. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:59, 19 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241219045900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241219045900-Parksungeun-20241218170100","replies":["c-Parksungeun-20241219153200-Hanyangprofessor2-20241219045900"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
All right, thank you for the feedback :) Parksungeun (talk) 15:32, 19 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241219153200","author":"Parksungeun","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Parksungeun-20241219153200-Hanyangprofessor2-20241219045900","replies":[]}}-->
Thank you Peter011008 (talk) 04:34, 20 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241220043400","author":"Peter011008","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Peter011008-20241220043400-Extra_Creadit_Blog\uff1aLIU_ZIFU","replies":[]}}-->
https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Hanyangdaxue/%E6%B2%99%E7%9B%92 Dear professor, do you think this is okay? Hanyangdaxue (talk) 06:39, 6 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241206063900","author":"Hanyangdaxue","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Hanyangdaxue-20241206063900-Deadline5:_LYU_YANGCHENG","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241206085200-Hanyangdaxue-20241206063900"]}}-->
@Hanyangdaxue As we discussed in class, regarding your translations to Chinese, once all content is translated, you can publish them by moving them (see zh:Help:页面重命名 if you need help with that). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:52, 6 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241206085200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241206085200-Hanyangdaxue-20241206063900","replies":["c-Hanyangdaxue-20241213073300-Hanyangprofessor2-20241206085200"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Sir, I have finished. Thanks Hanyangdaxue (talk) 07:33, 13 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241213073300","author":"Hanyangdaxue","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Hanyangdaxue-20241213073300-Hanyangprofessor2-20241206085200","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241216015500-Hanyangdaxue-20241213073300"]}}-->
@Hanyangdaxue Ok. Looking at your draft talk page, I think @自由雨日 may have some concerns. Please ask them if they think you need to fix your article before getting it published. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here01:55, 16 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241216015500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241216015500-Hanyangdaxue-20241213073300","replies":["c-Hanyangdaxue-20241219115900-Hanyangprofessor2-20241216015500","c-Hanyangdaxue-20241219120000-Hanyangprofessor2-20241216015500"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
老师您好,我已经按照管理员的要求维基化,修改文章了,但是管理员没有给我移动发布文章。 Hanyangdaxue (talk) 11:59, 19 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241219115900","author":"Hanyangdaxue","type":"comment","level":5,"id":"c-Hanyangdaxue-20241219115900-Hanyangprofessor2-20241216015500","replies":[]}}-->
Hello teacher, I have wikied and modified the article according to the administrator's request, but the administrator did not allow me to move and publish the article Hanyangdaxue (talk) 12:00, 19 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241219120000","author":"Hanyangdaxue","type":"comment","level":5,"id":"c-Hanyangdaxue-20241219120000-Hanyangprofessor2-20241216015500","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241220045000-Hanyangdaxue-20241219120000"]}}-->
@Hanyangdaxue I hope the feedback I gave you in class is helpful (please ask more wiki admins in the live chat for help) Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:50, 20 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241220045000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":6,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241220045000-Hanyangdaxue-20241219120000","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear professor, this is my extra credit blog.Please check it.Thank you Buryab0ne (talk) 04:50, 20 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241220045000","author":"Buryab0ne","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Buryab0ne-20241220045000-Extra_Creadit_Blog\uff1aQIAN_ZIYI","replies":[]}}-->
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Hello professor This is the article we translated, but it seems that I can only send it by link网址:https://w.wiki/CLz5]] Linlin406 (talk) 16:14, 8 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241208161400","author":"Linlin406","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Linlin406-20241208161400-LIN_AIJIA_AND_QU_HONGYU","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241209011500-Linlin406-20241208161400"]}}-->
you need references for most content (See Wikipedia:Verifiability). Only referenced content can be published.
the translation quality is very bad and not complete ("It is made of iron, and is made of iron." or "complicated and varied in 栱."). Please proofread it carefully. Poor translations cannot be published.
Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here01:15, 9 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241209011500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241209011500-Linlin406-20241208161400","replies":["c-Linlin406-20241213044200-Hanyangprofessor2-20241209011500"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello professor, this is our revised article.
网址:https://w.wiki/CLz5Linlin406 (talk) 04:42, 13 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241213044200","author":"Linlin406","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Linlin406-20241213044200-Hanyangprofessor2-20241209011500","replies":["c-Linlin406-20241213044400-Linlin406-20241213044200"]}}-->
网址:https://w.wiki/CPzqLinlin406 (talk) 04:44, 13 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241213044400","author":"Linlin406","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Linlin406-20241213044400-Linlin406-20241213044200","replies":["c-Linlin406-20241213044600-Linlin406-20241213044400"]}}-->
[71]https://w.wiki/CLz5Linlin406 (talk) 04:46, 13 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241213044600","author":"Linlin406","type":"comment","level":5,"id":"c-Linlin406-20241213044600-Linlin406-20241213044400","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241213055800-Linlin406-20241213044600"]}}-->
@Linlin406 You have changed content, but you still need to add references - see my first comment above.
Unreferenced content cannot be published on Wikipedia and cannot be accepted for our project. Please add footnotes to all relevant content verifying the information stated. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:58, 13 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241213055800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":6,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241213055800-Linlin406-20241213044600","replies":["c-Linlin406-20241219222700-Hanyangprofessor2-20241213055800"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
[[72]]hello professor,this is our revised article Linlin406 (talk) 22:27, 19 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241219222700","author":"Linlin406","type":"comment","level":7,"id":"c-Linlin406-20241219222700-Hanyangprofessor2-20241213055800","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241220045300-Linlin406-20241219222700"]}}-->
@Linlin406 I am afraid this is not revised enough, or at all (in a good way). All you have added are some badly formatted links to other Wikipedia articles. This is not correct. Please read the following guidelines:
Please remember that only referenced content can be added to English Wikipedia and only such content will count for credit. The content from Chinese article that has no references needs to be referenced first before being translated. See Wikipedia:Verifiability
your footnotes were links to Chinese Wikipedia. This is not correct. Read Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Linking . Footnotes are used for references, not links to other Wikipedia articles. If a term exists in Chinese Wikipedia and has an article there, but not on English Wikipedia, please use Template:Interlanguage linkI to link it.
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@1eleven0086 Very good. Please add a reference to the text marked with citation requests ("More than 2700 teachers in Zhejiang Province have been selected to participate in the evaluation of the college entrance examination. They are all university teachers with higher professional levels in their respective disciplines, or in-service high school teachers with three years or more of teaching experience, and the title of first level teacher or above in secondary schools") Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:16, 18 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241218071600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241218071600-1eleven0086-20241217113100","replies":["c-1eleven0086-20241219155900-Hanyangprofessor2-20241218071600"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor we have add a reference to the text marked with citation requests pkease check thank you! 1eleven0086 (talk) 15:59, 19 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241219155900","author":"1eleven0086","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-1eleven0086-20241219155900-Hanyangprofessor2-20241218071600","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241220050100-1eleven0086-20241219155900"]}}-->
If the source is in Chinese (ex. 中国抗日战争年度焦点: 醒狮怒吼,1937-1939), please use both the Chinese and English titles. Use Chinese title in the 'title' field, and English in the 'translated title' field. If you need help, stop by my office and I'll demonstrate how to do so.
In the website name parameter, please use the name of the website, not URL like jxyk.zisu.edu.cn. It should instead say something like The New York Times or Chinese Ministry of Education
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Hello, Professor, I'm taking "Media Trends and Globalization"
I have fixed some issues, and this is the Template:Taiwanese artists during the Japanese occupation that has been modified exactly. Yangpeifu (talk) 05:18, 19 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241219051800","author":"Yangpeifu","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Yangpeifu-20241219051800-Extra_credit_blog_and_Wikipedia_(YANGPEIFU)","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241220050800-Yangpeifu-20241219051800"]}}-->
You should also add relevant attribution to your other translations
Good job! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:08, 20 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241220050800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241220050800-Yangpeifu-20241219051800","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello, Professor. These are all the additional blogs I have completed. Please review them.[73]
Thank you, Professor. Hanyuanyuan613 (talk) 05:10, 20 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241220051000","author":"Hanyuanyuan613","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Hanyuanyuan613-20241220051000-Extra_credit_blog\uff1aHAN_YUANYUAN","replies":[]}}-->
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Extra credit project for international students——QIAN ZIYI
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Dear professor, this is my extra credit project for international students blog.Please check it.Thank you Buryab0ne (talk) 05:11, 20 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241220051100","author":"Buryab0ne","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Buryab0ne-20241220051100-Extra_credit_project_for_international_students\u2014\u2014QIAN_ZIYI","replies":[]}}-->
I'm taking 'Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis' class.
I would like to submit my Final Draft to professor.
(There was no separate link to the festival that gave feedback last time, so I didn't post it.)
This is my draft Hongseong at Wikivoyage for main project individually.
Please check, Thanks. Yujin0203 (talk) 06:22, 16 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241216062200","author":"Yujin0203","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Yujin0203-20241216062200-Deadline_7:_Yujin_Jang","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241217083000-Yujin0203-20241216062200"]}}-->
@Yujin0203 Well done. Please add a short (2-5 sentences) subsection on history to the understand section.
Double check the talk page of your article to see if there are any outstanding suggestions from reviewers Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:30, 17 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241217083000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241217083000-Yujin0203-20241216062200","replies":["c-Yujin0203-20241219100600-Hanyangprofessor2-20241217083000"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I added a subsection on history and double-checked the discussion. Thank you for your feedback ! Yujin0203 (talk) 10:06, 19 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241219100600","author":"Yujin0203","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Yujin0203-20241219100600-Hanyangprofessor2-20241217083000","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241220045500-Yujin0203-20241219100600"]}}-->
@Yujin0203 Good, but have you addressed the issue about Phone numbers that the reviewer @LPfi asked about on the talk page? I still see the 0s. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:55, 20 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241220045500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241220045500-Yujin0203-20241219100600","replies":["c-Yujin0203-20241220053500-Hanyangprofessor2-20241220045500"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Regarding the phone number issue, I addressed the parts that I couldn't correct by mistake. Yujin0203 (talk) 05:35, 20 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241220053500","author":"Yujin0203","type":"comment","level":5,"id":"c-Yujin0203-20241220053500-Hanyangprofessor2-20241220045500","replies":[]}}-->
I am taking the 'Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis' class. This is my final editor. This is my blog post.Please check, thank you. Thank you for your help during the semester. Best regards and thankyou! 유신예 (talk) 07:12, 19 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241219071200","author":"\uc720\uc2e0\uc608","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-\uc720\uc2e0\uc608-20241219071200-LIU_XINRUI","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241220063900-\uc720\uc2e0\uc608-20241219071200"]}}-->
convert entries in the 'do' section to listings, with GPS addresses
add description to listings that are missing them (ex. Huanyuan Garden)
add addresses to all listings, but make sure not to add to much (Common error to avoid: you should add an address (street, building number, etc.) to your listing BUT do not repeat the city name. For example, if your listing is in Ansan, the address does not need to contain the city name.)
for the do section, add listings for festivals
zoom out your map so that it shows more points of interests (listings)
Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here06:39, 20 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241220063900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241220063900-\uc720\uc2e0\uc608-20241219071200","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Professor, I have edited the blog additionally, please check it outBai0926 (talk) 11:48, 20 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241220114800","author":"Bai0926","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Bai0926-20241220114800-Extra_Creadit_Blog-BAI_LINHAN","replies":[]}}-->
@Fifi623623 Good progress. You can publish it now. If you need help, ask for help here: zh:Help:页面重命名Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here06:34, 20 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241220063400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241220063400-Fifi623623-20241219053500","replies":["c-Fifi623623-20241220131200-Hanyangprofessor2-20241220063400"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
@Jeong AhramJo HyeonSeong (talk) 14:28, 16 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241216142800","author":"Jo HyeonSeong","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Jo_HyeonSeong-20241216142800-Deadline_8_:_Jo_Hyeon_Seong_&_Jeong_Aram","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241217110000-Jo_HyeonSeong-20241216142800"]}}-->
@Jo HyeonSeong There are no working links in your post. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here11:00, 17 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241217110000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241217110000-Jo_HyeonSeong-20241216142800","replies":["c-Jeong_Ahram-20241219002700-Hanyangprofessor2-20241217110000"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Sorry. I added a link! Please check it. Jeong Ahram (talk) 00:27, 19 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241219002700","author":"Jeong Ahram","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Jeong_Ahram-20241219002700-Hanyangprofessor2-20241217110000","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241219042900-Jeong_Ahram-20241219002700"]}}-->
@Jeong Ahram @Jo HyeonSeong Good. Can you add the link for the "Minister Hyochunghoe"? This does not seem like the correct name for that presumably imporant person in English - it exists only in your article. There is also some unreferenced content; I've marked it with [citation needed] for you. Please add references for the claims made in these sentences. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:29, 19 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241219042900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241219042900-Jeong_Ahram-20241219002700","replies":["c-Jo_HyeonSeong-20241219070300-Hanyangprofessor2-20241219042900"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
We have completed modifying our article by your feedback. Please chech it. Thank you. Jo HyeonSeong (talk) 07:03, 19 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241219070300","author":"Jo HyeonSeong","type":"comment","level":5,"id":"c-Jo_HyeonSeong-20241219070300-Hanyangprofessor2-20241219042900","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241220050000-Jo_HyeonSeong-20241219070300"]}}-->
@Jeong Ahram @Jo HyeonSeong Good, but what is the name of "Minister of pro-Japanese group"? Can you add it? It can be in hangul or Chinese if no English is available Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:00, 20 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241220050000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":6,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241220050000-Jo_HyeonSeong-20241219070300","replies":["c-Jo_HyeonSeong-20241220161200-Hanyangprofessor2-20241220050000"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Thank you for your feedback. Your feedaback made our article be better.
I addede a reference for it.
Please check it. Thank you professor. Jo HyeonSeong (talk) 16:12, 20 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241220161200","author":"Jo HyeonSeong","type":"comment","level":7,"id":"c-Jo_HyeonSeong-20241220161200-Hanyangprofessor2-20241220050000","replies":[]}}-->
Hello, Professor. Here are all the blogs and extra points blogs I have completed, please check it out. Thank you, Professor. Xuan6699 (talk) 18:04, 20 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241220180400","author":"Xuan6699","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Xuan6699-20241220180400-Extra_credit_blog\uff1aXU_YAN","replies":[]}}-->
Hello professor, this is my extra credit blogLinlin406 (talk) 21:33, 19 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241219213300","author":"Linlin406","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Linlin406-20241219213300-Extra_credit_blog:LIN_AIJIA","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221045000-Linlin406-20241219213300"]}}-->
@Linlin406 Blog content should be posted on our blog, not on wiki Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:50, 21 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241221045000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221045000-Linlin406-20241219213300","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor, we have revised the draft of the Hong Kong media controversy again. The original Chinese text also adds the source. Please check it . CHEN HEBING (talk) 08:35, 19 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241219083500","author":"CHEN HEBING","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-CHEN_HEBING-20241219083500-CHEN_HEBING&LIU_JUNYU_2","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221045600-CHEN_HEBING-20241219083500"]}}-->
@CHEN HEBING Good but as I said several times, you are supposed to reference ALL content or remove parts that are not referenced. Your submission will not be accepted until this is fixed. @Prince of Erebor - thanks for checking... Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:56, 21 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241221045600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221045600-CHEN_HEBING-20241219083500","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Hello, Professor. I am currently taking the courses "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis" and "Media Trends and Globalization."These are all the additional wikipedia,thank you.
Regarding your English translation, please make sure to link it to the translated original article clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button.
It also has some uneferenced paragraphs. Please add references to them. Only referenced content is accepted for our class (unreferenced content can be deleted from Wikipedia at any moment).
Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:13, 21 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241221051300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221051300-Tyuni06-20241219095600","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello professor, I have edited Wikipedia 80 times and hope to get extra points for my final grade. Thanks for looking, link here1.2.3.4.5.6.7.8. Jzhdylb (talk) 10:06, 19 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241219100600","author":"Jzhdylb","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Jzhdylb-20241219100600-Week_16---FAN_XINRU","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221051400-Jzhdylb-20241219100600"]}}-->
@Jzhdylb Ok :) Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:14, 21 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241221051400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221051400-Jzhdylb-20241219100600","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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For Modaomen Waterway, please make sure to link it to the translated original article clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button, and do the same for your other translations.
Shen Liming needs additional sources to show that the subject is important (more references like newspaper articles or academic works mentioning him). Otherwise it will be deleted shorty for failing the Wikipedia:Notability requirement Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:22, 21 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241221052200","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221052200-Guoying1-20241219103200","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Professor, I made 40 extral Wikipedia edits, please checkthem outBai0926 (talk) 12:50, 19 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241219125000","author":"Bai0926","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Bai0926-20241219125000-Extra_credit_Wikipedia_\uff1aBAI_LINHAN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221052400-Bai0926-20241219125000"]}}-->
@Bai0926 Good Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:24, 21 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241221052400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221052400-Bai0926-20241219125000","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Professor,I am taking the courses "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis" .I made 60 extral Wikivoyage edits.Wenzhou and BaojiHYH031277777 (talk) 13:04, 19 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241219130400","author":"HYH031277777","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-HYH031277777-20241219130400-Extra_credit_Wikivoyage_\uff1aHUANG_YANHAN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221052500-HYH031277777-20241219130400"]}}-->
@HYH031277777 Good, I will consider them for extra credit Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:25, 21 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241221052500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221052500-HYH031277777-20241219130400","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Dear Professor, this is the content that I have modified in response to your opinion, and this is the link, please check! Thank you very much! Xjx921 (talk) 14:19, 19 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241219141900","author":"Xjx921","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Xjx921-20241219141900-Wikipedia_content_correction:_XI_JIAXIN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221053100-Xjx921-20241219141900"]}}-->
@Xjx921 Good progress. Reference 14, 16, 24 and 25 to Baidu Baike need to be changed per WP:BAIDU (Baidu has too much low quality content to be accepted as a reference).
Please add more links to your article - the first time an important topic like Meizhou Island is mentioned, it should be linked.
Please carefully check all references one by one to remove errors and to ensure they have metadata information (author, title, publisher, date). Next, if the source is in Chinese (ex. 福建省"), please use both the Chinese and English titles. Use Chinese title in the 'title' field, and English in the 'translated title' field. If you need help, stop by my office and I'll demonstrate how to do so.
After that, you can publish your article (move it to mainspace, see Help:Move). After that, please make sure to link it to the translated original article clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button, and do the same for your other translations. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:31, 21 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241221053100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221053100-Xjx921-20241219141900","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor i'm taking "Media Trends and Globalization"
I have completed Deadline 6. I wrote feedback on articles by Kim kyungmin article송여근 (talk) 04:27, 20 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241220042700","author":"\uc1a1\uc5ec\uadfc","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-\uc1a1\uc5ec\uadfc-20241220042700-Deadlin6:_Yeogeun_Song","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221054000-\uc1a1\uc5ec\uadfc-20241220042700"]}}-->
@송여근 Ok, but this is too late for your friend to benefit from it, so it is not going to be worth much credit Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:40, 21 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241221054000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221054000-\uc1a1\uc5ec\uadfc-20241220042700","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
2. This is the link to the article translated from English to Korean: [Korea–Ukraine relations]
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Dear student. Please remember to sign your posts, otherwise I cannot notify you easily when I reply here.
I do not see any content recently added to articles you mention, in either English or Korean. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:45, 21 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241221054500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221054500-218.235.241.133-20241220044500","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Dear Professor:
Hello. I'm taking "Media Trends and Globalization"
I've done one extra edit outside of the sandbox, and I've added a reference to an article about 송강호's parasiteJiseong754 (talk) 05:01, 20 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241220050100","author":"Jiseong754","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Jiseong754-20241220050100-dead_line_3_jisung_choi","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221054800-Jiseong754-20241220050100"]}}-->
I am afraid it is too late for you to complete the assignments for that class; you should have started months ago and completed them on time. Please try again next semester. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:48, 21 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241221054800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221054800-Jiseong754-20241220050100","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Good progress. To finish, please add the interlanguage (interwiki) link clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button and linking the Chinese article. Also, please add WP:CATEGORIES - see what categories are used on en wiki and add similar ones here Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:56, 21 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241221055600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221055600-Xuan6699-20241220174600","replies":["c-Xuan6699-20241221164600-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221055600"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
It has been added. please check it. thank you, professor. Xuan6699 (talk) 16:46, 21 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241221164600","author":"Xuan6699","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Xuan6699-20241221164600-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221055600","replies":[]}}-->
I'm taking 'Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis' class. I modified it according to the feedback. This is my draft Yangju. Thank you for your checking. SongHyeonmin2020007129 (talk) 08:11, 21 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241221081100","author":"SongHyeonmin2020007129","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-SongHyeonmin2020007129-20241221081100-Extra_fix:_Hyeonmin_Song","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221170300-SongHyeonmin2020007129-20241221081100"]}}-->
@SongHyeonmin2020007129 Very good. Your current points for this class are at B. I recommend doing some extra edits to Wikivoyage to improve your score to A. Good luck, Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here17:03, 21 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241221170300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221170300-SongHyeonmin2020007129-20241221081100","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
@Xuan6699 Good. Please make sure to proofread your article carefully; if it is declined due to poor translation, the score will be lower. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here17:20, 21 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241221172000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221172000-Xuan6699-20241221171500","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Dear Professor, I am taking the courses "Media Trends and Globalization." Here's my Wikipedia:
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@Kdjdxx208 Good. To finish your assignment, publish your article by moving the draft to the mainspace (see zh:Help:页面重命名 on how to do this); then we will see what the Chinese reviewers will say. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:23, 21 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241221052300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221052300-Kdjdxx208-20241219115500","replies":["c-Kdjdxx208-20241221185000-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221052300"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello professor, I have moved the Jiangxi Provincial Library article, but the low-power broadcasting that article can not find the moving button, which is very distressing to me Kdjdxx208 (talk) 18:50, 21 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241221185000","author":"Kdjdxx208","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Kdjdxx208-20241221185000-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221052300","replies":[]}}-->
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Would you please ask your students to leave edit summaries? There are three request to the student in question to leave edit summaries. While the latest edits are on talk pages and an ES may not be as much of an issue, that student has not left any ES. It seems few of your students are leaving ES.
Edit summaries are useful for searching the wp:page history to find specific edits. Please ask your students to leave edit summaries - see WP:FIES. People doing wp:RCP would rather not have to analyze edits when an ES could get to the point. Briefly describe your changes and a link to its help page is right there just above the "Publish changes" button. Please ask them to leave their reasoning especially if removing citations. Thank you Adakiko (talk) 19:35, 19 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241219193500","author":"Adakiko","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Adakiko-20241219193500-Please_ask_your_students_to_leave_edit_summaries","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221180600-Adakiko-20241219193500"]}}-->
@Adakiko Oh, I ask them, for years. Some will not listen and will fail the course. Sorry for the trouble, Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here18:06, 21 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241221180600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221180600-Adakiko-20241219193500","replies":["c-Adakiko-20241221201000-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221180600"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Then please don't complain when they get reverted for not explaining deletions? I, and I suspect many other wp:RCP, would appreciate more edit summaries. ES are very helpful so that complex edits can be glossed over rather than having to analyzed in depth. I get that complaint often . Maybe have your students to check the Preferences -> Editor -> Prompt me when entering a blank edit summary box as the first thing after registering? I have it clicked or I would often forget to leave one.
Thank you for teaching that course, I hope your students and Wikipedia benefit from it. Thank you Adakiko (talk) 20:10, 21 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241221201000","author":"Adakiko","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Adakiko-20241221201000-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221180600","replies":[]}}-->
Hello, Professor. These are all the additional blogs I have completed. Please review them.
Thank you, Professor Jiayyyyy (talk) 02:35, 22 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241222023500","author":"Jiayyyyy","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Jiayyyyy-20241222023500-Extra_credit_blog\uff1aJIA_YUAN","replies":[]}}-->
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Dear Professor,
I am currently taking the courses "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis" and "Media Trends and Globalization."
This is the additional Wikipedia task I completed personally Lin Chih-chuChen qixueYiwei Guangzhou uprisingPlease check, thank you. Limengchen2777 (talk) 04:14, 3 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241203041400","author":"Limengchen2777","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Limengchen2777-20241203041400-Deadline_7_LI_MENGCHEN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241206083600-Limengchen2777-20241203041400"]}}-->
@Limengchen2777 Good progress. Feedback provided in office hours, let me know if you have more questions Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:36, 6 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241206083600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241206083600-Limengchen2777-20241203041400","replies":["c-Limengchen2777-20241209062600-Hanyangprofessor2-20241206083600","c-Limengchen2777-20241210104400-Hanyangprofessor2-20241206083600"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello, Professor! This is the new bonus material I have created.Lü Thiat-chiuPlease review it. Thank you! Limengchen2777 (talk) 06:26, 9 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241209062600","author":"Limengchen2777","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Limengchen2777-20241209062600-Hanyangprofessor2-20241206083600","replies":[]}}-->
Hello, Professor! This is the new bonus material I have created.Zhang BojuHou ZhenyaHuang HuaqingPlease review it. Thank you! Limengchen2777 (talk) 10:44, 10 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241210104400","author":"Limengchen2777","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Limengchen2777-20241210104400-Hanyangprofessor2-20241206083600","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241211061400-Limengchen2777-20241210104400"]}}-->
@Limengchen2777 Very good, those will be awarded many extra points. I noticed a small error in one of your articles and explained it on your talk page. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here06:14, 11 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241211061400","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241211061400-Limengchen2777-20241210104400","replies":["c-Limengchen2777-20241221230800-Hanyangprofessor2-20241211061400"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Hello professor, I have modified my question. Limengchen2777 (talk) 23:08, 21 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241221230800","author":"Limengchen2777","type":"comment","level":5,"id":"c-Limengchen2777-20241221230800-Hanyangprofessor2-20241211061400","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241222043600-Limengchen2777-20241221230800"]}}-->
What question? Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:36, 22 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241222043600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":6,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241222043600-Limengchen2777-20241221230800","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I am currently taking the courses "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis" and "Media Trends and Globalization."
This is the additional Wikipedia task I completed personally Lin Aqin , Qiu Jinlian ,Zhou Hongchou .Please check, thank you! Honghaotian (talk) 08:12, 11 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241211081200","author":"Honghaotian","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Honghaotian-20241211081200-Deadline7:HONG_HAOTIAN","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241213030300-Honghaotian-20241211081200"]}}-->
@Honghaotian Very nice. The main thing to improve in your submissions are links: If a term exists in Chinese Wikipedia and has an article there, but not on English Wikipedia, please use Template:Interlanguage link to link it. If you need help with this, stop by my office and I'll demonstrate. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here03:03, 13 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241213030300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241213030300-Honghaotian-20241211081200","replies":["c-Honghaotian-20241217030800-Hanyangprofessor2-20241213030300","c-Honghaotian-20241218041800-Hanyangprofessor2-20241213030300"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor, I have revised the question you asked. Honghaotian (talk) 03:08, 17 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241217030800","author":"Honghaotian","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Honghaotian-20241217030800-Hanyangprofessor2-20241213030300","replies":[]}}-->
Hello, Professor! This is the new bonus material I have created. Weng Kun De ,Chen Xue jun,Chen Daming . Please review it. Thank you! Honghaotian (talk) 04:18, 18 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241218041800","author":"Honghaotian","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Honghaotian-20241218041800-Hanyangprofessor2-20241213030300","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241218070700-Honghaotian-20241218041800"]}}-->
@Honghaotian Very good, but for Chen Daming you should add more sources. A mention in a single obituary is not enough to estabilish Wikipedia:NotabilityPiotrus at Hanyang| reply here07:07, 18 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241218070700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241218070700-Honghaotian-20241218041800","replies":["c-Honghaotian-20241220100700-Hanyangprofessor2-20241218070700"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I have already added more sources. Please check! Honghaotian (talk) 10:07, 20 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241220100700","author":"Honghaotian","type":"comment","level":5,"id":"c-Honghaotian-20241220100700-Hanyangprofessor2-20241218070700","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221044100-Honghaotian-20241220100700"]}}-->
@HonghaotianWikipedia:BAIDU , as explained in the link here, is not considered a good source (it steals a lot of content from Wikipedia without attribution and has very low standards for guarding against fake information). Please look for better, more reliable sources (newspapers, books, journals). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:41, 21 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241221044100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":6,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221044100-Honghaotian-20241220100700","replies":["c-Honghaotian-20241221134500-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221044100"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I've revised the link, please check! Honghaotian (talk) 13:45, 21 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241221134500","author":"Honghaotian","type":"comment","level":7,"id":"c-Honghaotian-20241221134500-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221044100","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221164500-Honghaotian-20241221134500"]}}-->
@Honghaotian Very good. Your grade for the Globalization class is A+; for the Big and Small data I recommend making some extra credit work if you want A+ for that class as well (best: extra edits to Wikivoyage). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here16:45, 21 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241221164500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":8,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221164500-Honghaotian-20241221134500","replies":["c-Limengchen2777-20241221204300-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221164500"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Please let us know what we need to add so that we can get a Limengchen2777 (talk) 20:43, 21 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241221204300","author":"Limengchen2777","type":"comment","level":9,"id":"c-Limengchen2777-20241221204300-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221164500","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241222043800-Limengchen2777-20241221204300"]}}-->
@Limengchen2777 I recommended choosing an article about a different city and improving it with listings and some other content for extra credit. Please try to finish within 24h Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:38, 22 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241222043800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":10,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241222043800-Limengchen2777-20241221204300","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor, we are taking the courses Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis here is edit we have completed https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/Garz%C3%AAhttps://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/Jishou please check thank you! 1eleven0086 (talk) 15:54, 19 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241219155400","author":"1eleven0086","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-1eleven0086-20241219155400-LIU_YUNXIANG&_SHAO_JIANUAN_&WANG_YIKE","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221180100-1eleven0086-20241219155400"]}}-->
@1eleven0086 I am afraid those projects are far from finished; you should've asked me for review weeks ago.
Garzê needs a climate and history sections, get in section needs listings for train and intercity bus station, a map, all entries in the see and do section need to be reformatted into listings, do section should list festivals.
Jishou is little better, but at least it has some properly formatted listings and a map (but it is not zoomed in correctly).
Please note that currently the poor state of your Wikivoyage articles and lack of relevant Wikidata activities and weekly assignments mean that you and your team grade for that class is passing at best.
You have 48h to improve your work - good luck Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here18:01, 21 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241221180100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221180100-1eleven0086-20241219155400","replies":["c-Alexk27-20241222044200-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221180100"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor I’ve updated the See and Do sections for Garzê into listings and added festivals under Do. The Buy section is also reformatted with more details about local products. A map has been added showing key locations. Let me know if anything else needs to be adjusted! Alexk27 (talk) 04:42, 22 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241222044200","author":"Alexk27","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Alexk27-20241222044200-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221180100","replies":[]}}-->
Dear Professor Piotr, Our course is: Media Trends and Globalization.
This is our article translated from Chinese to English. This is our article translated from English to Chinese, please check it. This is @Alexk27 and @Sssnuan thank you for taking the time to read it. Alexk27 (talk) 09:10, 19 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241219091000","author":"Alexk27","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Alexk27-20241219091000-SHAO_JIANUAN&WANG_YIKE","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221050000-Alexk27-20241219091000"]}}-->
Your Chinese translation was deleted due to very poor translation (see explanation at https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/User_talk:Alexk27 ). You can ask @Wcam to restore it to your sandbox and fix it there, and ask them to review it again but please remember the deadline for this assignment ends in 24-48h. You should have tried to complete it weeks ago, per the deadlines in our syllabus.
Regarding your English translation, please make sure to link it to the translated original article clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button.
It also has some uneferenced paragraphs. Please add references to them. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:00, 21 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241221050000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221050000-Alexk27-20241219091000","replies":["c-Alexk27-20241222041100-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221050000"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I am sorry that we missed the deadline, but we have worked hard to revise the article translated from Chinese to English. Thank you for reading. I am really sorry. Here is our linkAlexk27 (talk) 04:11, 22 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241222041100","author":"Alexk27","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Alexk27-20241222041100-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221050000","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241222044700-Alexk27-20241222041100"]}}-->
@Alexk27 Your new article is still assessed as being poorly translated. Please correct those errors quickly before your article is deleted again Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:47, 22 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241222044700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241222044700-Alexk27-20241222041100","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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This is my editorial article. Please check, Thank you. :) Parksungeun (talk) 18:31, 21 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241221183100","author":"Parksungeun","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Parksungeun-20241221183100-Extra_credit_Wikipedia_:_Parksungeun","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241222045300-Parksungeun-20241221183100"]}}-->
@Parksungeun Very good, your grade for that class should be A+ Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:53, 22 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241222045300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241222045300-Parksungeun-20241221183100","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor,Our course is: Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis. I’ve updated the See and Do sections for Garzê into listings and added festivals under Do. The Buy section is also reformatted with more details about local products. A map has been added showing key locations. In the section about Jishou I adjusted the map and modified the exact coordinates. Let me know if anything else needs to be adjusted!@Sssnuan@1eleven0086Alexk27 (talk) 05:22, 22 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241222052200","author":"Alexk27","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Alexk27-20241222052200-WANG_YIKE&_SHAO_JIANUAN&LIU_YUNXIANG","replies":[]}}-->
Dear Professor Piotr, Our courses are:Media Trends and Globalization.I am sorry that we missed the deadline, but we have worked hard to revise the article translated from Chinese to English. Thank you for reading. I am really sorry. Here is our link and my team members @SssnuanAlexk27 (talk) 04:06, 22 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241222040600","author":"Alexk27","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Alexk27-20241222040600-SHAO_JIANUAN&WANG_YIKE_2","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241222045500-Alexk27-20241222040600"]}}-->
@Alexk27 @Sssnuan As I replied above, please try to fix the issues raised at the top of the article in the orange box. You can ask for additional advice and explanation on live Wikipedia help chat in Chinese language. See places to ask for help listed at the top of the article here: 维基百科:IRC聊天频道 - 维基百科,自由的百科全书Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:55, 22 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241222045500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241222045500-Alexk27-20241222040600","replies":["c-Alexk27-20241222052300-Hanyangprofessor2-20241222045500"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Thank you for your reply, I will look it up in Chinese Wikipedia and will correct our problem, thank you. Alexk27 (talk) 05:23, 22 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241222052300","author":"Alexk27","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Alexk27-20241222052300-Hanyangprofessor2-20241222045500","replies":[]}}-->
장문비2022096399 Fifi623623 (talk) 08:10, 18 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241218081000","author":"Fifi623623","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Fifi623623-20241218081000-wiki:ZHANG_WENFEI\u3001ZHU_YINGYING","replies":["c-Fifi623623-20241218081100-Fifi623623-20241218081000"]}}-->
NiushoushanFifi623623 (talk) 08:11, 18 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241218081100","author":"Fifi623623","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Fifi623623-20241218081100-Fifi623623-20241218081000","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241219044600-Fifi623623-20241218081100"]}}-->
@Fifi623623 Good. But the links to Chinese Wikipedia need to be fixed. If a topic exists in Chinese but not English, please link it using this tool: Template:Interlanguage link. If you don't know how to use this, come to my office and I'll demonstrate.
For example, Bao'en Temple should be linked to that temple's article in English if it exists, and if Chinese if not (if it exists in Chinese).
If the source is in Chinese (ex. 景区概况), please use both the Chinese and English titles. Use Chinese title in the 'title' field, and English in the 'translated title' field. If you need help, stop by my office and I'll demonstrate how to do so. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:46, 19 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241219044600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241219044600-Fifi623623-20241218081100","replies":["c-Fifi623623-20241219064300-Hanyangprofessor2-20241219044600"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I corrected it as I understood it, and I don't know if it's correct.
User:Fifi623623/sandboxFifi623623 (talk) 06:43, 19 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241219064300","author":"Fifi623623","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Fifi623623-20241219064300-Hanyangprofessor2-20241219044600","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241220050500-Fifi623623-20241219064300"]}}-->
@Fifi623623 Please read them manuals again. There are still some wrong links like " Xuanyang Gate (now Zhonghua Gatezh:中华门)," or "uddha’s parietal bone reliczh:舍利"
There are still some places in the article that need references (footnotes). I marked them with [citation needed].
Please fix the issue I explained above ("If the source is in Chinese..."), it has not been fixed yet, Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:05, 20 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241220050500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":5,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241220050500-Fifi623623-20241219064300","replies":["c-Fifi623623-20241220131200-Hanyangprofessor2-20241220050500","c-Fifi623623-20241220134500-Hanyangprofessor2-20241220050500"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
User:Fifi623623/sandbox#cite note-:4-3Fifi623623 (talk) 13:45, 20 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241220134500","author":"Fifi623623","type":"comment","level":6,"id":"c-Fifi623623-20241220134500-Hanyangprofessor2-20241220050500","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221044600-Fifi623623-20241220134500"]}}-->
@Fifi623623 Ok, now please fix this and other issues in Niushoushan (you don't have to work in your sandbox). Please note I and others made some fixes to that article already. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:46, 21 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241221044600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":7,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221044600-Fifi623623-20241220134500","replies":["c-Fifi623623-20241221155400-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221044600"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
NiushoushanFifi623623 (talk) 15:54, 21 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241221155400","author":"Fifi623623","type":"comment","level":8,"id":"c-Fifi623623-20241221155400-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221044600","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221164700-Fifi623623-20241221155400","c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221164900-Fifi623623-20241221155400"]}}-->
@Fifi623623 Please review your changes. You have fixed some stuff but broke other stuff fixed by others, such as native name; and you removed some references (footnotes) resulting in some paragraphs being unreferenced. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here16:47, 21 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241221164700","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":9,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221164700-Fifi623623-20241221155400","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Please restore all good fixes that you removed in your recen edit (native name, links like that to Ashoka Pagoda, and references) Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here16:49, 21 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241221164900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":9,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221164900-Fifi623623-20241221155400","replies":["c-Fifi623623-20241222054100-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221164900"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I have revised it again, please check it. Fifi623623 (talk) 05:41, 22 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241222054100","author":"Fifi623623","type":"comment","level":10,"id":"c-Fifi623623-20241222054100-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221164900","replies":[]}}-->
Dear Professor, I am taking 'Understanding Small and Big Data' class
I have added more city content on Jieyang's Wikivoyage, please check it out, thank you. Minazhuang777 (talk) 08:13, 16 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241216081300","author":"Minazhuang777","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Minazhuang777-20241216081300-Deadline6:_Zhuang_Minna","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241217083600-Minazhuang777-20241216081300"]}}-->
Please expand the first sentence by adding some more content (2-3 sentences) describing most interesting aspects of this location - tell people why they would want to visit this place, what makes it special.
Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here08:36, 17 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241217083600","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241217083600-Minazhuang777-20241216081300","replies":["c-Minazhuang777-20241219140200-Hanyangprofessor2-20241217083600"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I have made some changes to Jieyang according to your request. Please check. Thank you. Minazhuang777 (talk) 14:02, 19 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241219140200","author":"Minazhuang777","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Minazhuang777-20241219140200-Hanyangprofessor2-20241217083600","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241220045800-Minazhuang777-20241219140200"]}}-->
Hello, I have made some changes according to your request, please check, thank you Minazhuang777 (talk) 09:13, 22 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241222091300","author":"Minazhuang777","type":"comment","level":5,"id":"c-Minazhuang777-20241222091300-Hanyangprofessor2-20241220045800","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241222094000-Minazhuang777-20241222091300"]}}-->
@Minazhuang777 Good, I have updated your grade. I recommend more extra credit editing within the next 24h to improve your grade for that class to B. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here09:40, 22 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241222094000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":6,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241222094000-Minazhuang777-20241222091300","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Dear Professor
I'm taking 'Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis' class.
Here is my final draft for the Wikivoyage article on Pyeongtaek. I have incorporated all the feedback you provided in Deadlines 5 and 6.
Please let me know which parts should be further revised or improved to achieve an A+ grade.
Thank you for your checking. Dbinni (talk) 10:27, 18 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241218102700","author":"Dbinni","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Dbinni-20241218102700-Deadline_7:_Dabin_Kim_2","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241219045500-Dbinni-20241218102700"]}}-->
add a short 1-2 paragraphs subsection on 'history' to the 'understanding' section
Pyeongtaek Bus Terminal should have a proper listing with GPS coordinates
see section should have at least 10 entries. Can you find some other landmarks in the area to recommend to tourists? Some old historical buildings, or natural landmarks? How about the two museums I see mentioned at THE BEST Pyeongtaek Specialty Museums (2024) - Tripadvisor ?
Have you seen the feedback you got at Talk:Pyeongtaek – Travel guide at Wikivoyage ? If so, please reply there to the editor who reviewed, pinging them and thanking them for their review, and tell them all has been fixed so they can double check.
Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:55, 19 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241219045500","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241219045500-Dbinni-20241218102700","replies":["c-Dbinni-20241222092300-Hanyangprofessor2-20241219045500"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor,
As per your suggestions, I have made the necessary adjustments. Here’s a summary of the changes:
- Added a 1-2 paragraph subsection on the history of Pyeongtaek in the "Understand" section.
- Included proper GPS coordinates for Pyeongtaek Bus Terminal.
- Expanded the "See"(and other) section with additional recommendations, including landmarks, historical buildings, and natural spots. I’ve also added two museums mentioned on The Best Pyeongtaek Specialty Museums (2024) on TripAdvisor.
- Responded to the feedback on Talk:Pyeongtaek – Travel guide at Wikivoyage, thanking the reviewer and informing them that all suggested changes have been made.
Please feel free to double-check the article. Let me know if further revisions are needed to achieve an A+ grade..
Thank you for your continued support! Dbinni (talk) 09:23, 22 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241222092300","author":"Dbinni","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Dbinni-20241222092300-Hanyangprofessor2-20241219045500","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241222094000-Dbinni-20241222092300"]}}-->
@Dbinni Good; your grade should be A or A+ for both classes. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here09:40, 22 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241222094000","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241222094000-Dbinni-20241222092300","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Deadline 8, Additional Edit: Dabin Kim, Eunyeong Kang
Please review the documents. Thank you! Dbinni (talk) 10:43, 18 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241218104300","author":"Dbinni","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Dbinni-20241218104300-Deadline_8,_Additional_Edit:_Dabin_Kim,_Eunyeong_Kang","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241219045800-Dbinni-20241218104300"]}}-->
@Dbinni Very good. See the issues pointed out by reviewers at the top of your published press article. Can you fix any? Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here04:58, 19 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241219045800","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241219045800-Dbinni-20241218104300","replies":["c-Dbinni-20241222092700-Hanyangprofessor2-20241219045800"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Dear Professor,
Thank you for your helpful suggestions. I attempted to fix the issues pointed out by reviewers at the top of my published press article, but I found it difficult to do on my own and was unable to make the revisions.
Since this is an edit for additional credit rather than the main project, I was wondering if not being able to make these changes will have any impact on my score.
I appreciate your understanding and would be grateful for your guidance.
Best regards,
Dabin Kim Dbinni (talk) 09:27, 22 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241222092700","author":"Dbinni","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Dbinni-20241222092700-Hanyangprofessor2-20241219045800","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241222094100-Dbinni-20241222092700"]}}-->
@Dbinni Your score is good enough for A in our classes, but I recommend fixing the issues above to improve your public digital portfolio for your own future. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here09:41, 22 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241222094100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241222094100-Dbinni-20241222092700","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Hello Professor
This is the main project for Media Trends and Globalization.1,2,3
This is the main project for Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis.1
This is Extra credit Wikipedia translate article.1,2
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@Babaibiaobin Good; your grade for both classes is A/A+ Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here09:51, 22 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241222095100","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241222095100-Babaibiaobin-20241222093000","replies":[],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
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Extra credit: World Value Survey country comparison --QIAN ZIYI
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Dear Professor. This is the xls that I exported and analyzed. This is the link, please check. Buryab0ne (talk) 05:59, 20 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241220055900","author":"Buryab0ne","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Buryab0ne-20241220055900-Extra_credit:_World_Value_Survey_country_comparison_--QIAN_ZIYI","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221054900-Buryab0ne-20241220055900"]}}-->
@Buryab0ne Please post this on your blog for extra credit; it is too late to submit it as a regular project. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here05:49, 21 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241221054900","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221054900-Buryab0ne-20241220055900","replies":["c-Buryab0ne-20241222111300-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221054900"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
I have submitted, thank you! Buryab0ne (talk) 11:13, 22 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241222111300","author":"Buryab0ne","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Buryab0ne-20241222111300-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221054900","replies":[]}}-->
Dear Professor. I am currently taking the courses "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis" and "Media Trends and Globalization."These are all the additional wikipedia,thank you!
1.Historic Site of Daedong2.Ruins of Xuejiagang3.羑 Lane Historic Site4.Ruins of Shijiahe5.Ruins of Xiyin VillageBuryab0ne (talk) 19:05, 19 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241219190500","author":"Buryab0ne","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Buryab0ne-20241219190500-Extra_credit_Wikivoyage--QIAN_ZIYI","replies":["c-Buryab0ne-20241220143800-Buryab0ne-20241219190500"]}}-->
Professor, this is the translation of my two articles, English to Chinese.1.坦卡尔维尔城堡 2.马里波恩街道 Please check it. Thank you. Buryab0ne (talk) 14:38, 20 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241220143800","author":"Buryab0ne","type":"comment","level":2,"id":"c-Buryab0ne-20241220143800-Buryab0ne-20241219190500","replies":["c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221175300-Buryab0ne-20241220143800"]}}-->
@Buryab0ne I am afraid the currently submitted extra credit assignments in English are too poorly written to be accepted. The references in the first one are unreliable (Wikipedia). Two out of four references in the second one link to Wikipedia as well. The references are not properly formatted (metadata errors). The last submission has no references. Your Chinese drafts are not even on zh wiki, but on en wiki (wrong website).
Currently all your work is at an early draft level and would be deleted if published. You can try to fix it within the next 48h, but I am likely going to too busy to be able to offer you detailed feedback.
I recommend you use Wikipedia live chat help and ask volunteers to review your work and give you feedback using Wikipedia:Discord - Wikipedia , Wikipedia:IRC or Wikipedia:Teahouse - Wikipedia , If the volunteer or volunteers reviewing your work accept it and it is published within the next 48h or so, please let me know and I'll give you extra credit.
For review of Chinese work, ask Chinese volunteers at one of the live chat options listed here: 维基百科:Discord交流群 - 维基百科,自由的百科全书
Also, note that currently you have a passing grade in the Globalization class, but not in Big and Small data. Please see my review of your work for that class from few days ago above, and fix the issues raised ASAP.
Good luck Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here17:53, 21 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241221175300","author":"Hanyangprofessor2","type":"comment","level":3,"id":"c-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221175300-Buryab0ne-20241220143800","replies":["c-Buryab0ne-20241222112600-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221175300"],"displayName":"Piotrus at Hanyang"}}-->
Professor, “Big and Small data”is there anything else I need to do in this class?TuT Buryab0ne (talk) 11:26, 22 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241222112600","author":"Buryab0ne","type":"comment","level":4,"id":"c-Buryab0ne-20241222112600-Hanyangprofessor2-20241221175300","replies":[]}}-->
Dear Professor, I am taking the courses "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis" and "Media Trends and Globalization." Here are 4 of my blogs. The extra points blogs I have completed are also here. please check them. Thank you Wuwenhao19960507 (talk) 12:09, 22 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241222120900","author":"Wuwenhao19960507","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Wuwenhao19960507-20241222120900-Extra_credit_Blog\uff1aWU_WENHAO","replies":[]}}-->
Dear Professor, I am taking the courses "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis" and "Media Trends and Globalization." Here are all the blogs I have done. The two extra credit blogs are also included in this link. please check them. Thank you! Cuicuizan (talk) 12:55, 22 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241222125500","author":"Cuicuizan","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Cuicuizan-20241222125500-Extra_credit_Blogs\uff1aCUI_ZAN","replies":[]}}-->
I am currently taking the courses "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis" and "Media Trends and Globalization." I’ve included all the blogs I’ve completed, including the extra credit ones. Please let me know if there’s anything I need to revise. Thank you! Uuueol (talk) 12:55, 22 December 2024 (UTC)__DTREPLYBUTTONSCONTENT__-->__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20241222125500","author":"Uuueol","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Uuueol-20241222125500-Extra_credit_Blog\uff1aGUAN_YUE","replies":[]}}-->
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