Talk:Meyn Food Processing Technology

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I gathered the following feedback which I will use to improve the article before submitting it for review:

1. Article seems good at first impression.Kudpung [[1]]

Dotsonti Let's Talk! 15:20, 27 May 2019 (UTC)Reply

1. References need to be changed: #6 (Wiki, not reliable), #7 (Altor, not independent), #8 (Interview with company employee, not independent). Scottyoak2
2. Images on Commons need to be verified: File:Eieren_kisten_1959.png and File:Apollo_1970.png (source is municipality archive; need proof of free use in draft, or supply reason for fair use after article publication), File:Meyn's_office_in_the_USA.png and File:Meyn's_office_in_Poland.png and File:Meyn's_head_office_in_the_Netherlands.jpg (source is author, submit release form). DragonflySixtyseven

Dotsonti Let's Talk! 15:20, 27 May 2019 (UTC)Reply

Hi DragonflySixtyseven, images have been updated with the correct data and a release email has been sent by an official representative of the owner for further processing by an OTRS volunteer. Dotsonti Let's Talk! 13:54, 28 May 2019 (UTC)Reply

Hi Scottyoak2, the references have been replaced and more have been added with well-established news sources. Dotsonti Let's Talk! 14:14, 29 May 2019 (UTC)Reply

1. Rewrite following sentence: "... is one of the world’s largest suppliers of poultry processing solutions.". It is not backed by references. Waggie
2. References need to be changed: #2 (Interview and press release, not reliable), #4 (Press release, not reliable). Note: "You can use such sources, but relying on them as heavily as you are, that often ends up in articles that read like advertising and don't demonstrate notability." (Waggie). Waggie

Dotsonti Let's Talk! 15:51, 5 June 2019 (UTC)Reply

Hi Waggie, I have rewritten the sentence to correctly summarize the content of the references used, it also results in a more neutral summary. Dotsonti Let's Talk! 09:29, 7 June 2019 (UTC)Reply

Hi Waggie, I have removed the references and revised the text based on new references. Dotsonti Let's Talk! 09:29, 7 June 2019 (UTC)Reply