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Latest comment: 2 years ago4 comments2 people in discussion
Hi,
I am employed by ETAS and want to correct some factual errors on the page due to a big change in the strategy and the corporate design (logo) of ETAS GmbH. One Wikipedia admin told me to try this instead of directly publishing the contents. I'm not sure what type of texts are too much marketing. Can you help? From our point of view the page should look something like this:
Intro
ETAS is an international full-service solutions provider for the software-defined vehicle.
Table of Contents
- 1 Business
- 2 Portfolio (anstelle von Wesentliche Produkte; Inhalte zu ASCET, BUSMASTER etc. löschen)
Dr. Thomas Irawan, Nicolet Eglseder, Mariella Minutolo
Revenue
356 m. Euro (2022)
Number of employees
2.300 (01.01.2023)
Business
Founded in 1994, ETAS GmbH is a wholly owned subsidiary of Robert Bosch GmbH, represented in twelve countries in Europe, North and South America, and Asia. ETAS' portfolio(1) includes vehicle basic software, middleware, development tools, cloud-based operations services, cybersecurity solutions, and end-to-end engineering and consulting services for the realization of software-defined vehicles. Our product solutions and services enable vehicle manufacturers and suppliers to develop, operate, and secure differentiating vehicle software with increased efficiency.
Portfolio // (replace current contents by link to company website)
Some parts we can update but some parts we have to reject.
Your requested intro amounts to jargon that the average reader will not understand. The existing intro "designs tools for the development of embedded systems for the automotive industry" is far more understandable.
The use of German language on an English article is not appropriate.
The new logo we can probably do. We do have to be careful about copyright.
The portfolio list should be here on Wikipedia. Wikipedia is meant to be self contained. Although each point should, of course, have a reference to back it up.
I suspect you are sensitive to the mention of Russia. We do not remove historical information. However, if you can provide an appropriate reference to discontinuing service to Russia then we can insert the fact of discontinuance.
Similarly, we keep the history of the company, not just its present form. Therefore we keep the origin and merger history.
English references are much preferred. German references are acceptable if there is no equivalent English reference available. Remember that many of our readers do not read German and even English is often a second language. Stepho talk23:51, 6 October 2023 (UTC)Reply
Hi Stepho, thanks a lot for your quick reply.
The use of German was a mistake, sorry about that.
Intro: the current intro might be more understandable but it's no longer completely correct. As of now, ETAS sells products (= software and hardware), solutions, and services to enable vehicle manufacturers and suppliers to develop, operate, and secure differentiating vehicle software with increased efficiency. How can we show that on the page in an understandable way?
What kind of security do you need from me in order to replace the logo?
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