overview articles and details on the ActionScript Technolgy Center here: http://www.adobe.com/devnet/actionscript/ ActionScript language spec: http://livedocs...

2018 (UTC) In this edit, I've made an effort to rewrite and reorder the section "2008–2010: The Script" (at least some of it; it's long) for easier reading...

Cham script http://www.jstor.org/stable/20071506? On the Possible Cham Origin of the Philippine Scripts Geoff Wade Journal of Southeast Asian Studies Vol...

designed/works, not what you can do with it Renaming the "Frameworks" section to "ActionScript" is nonsensical The sentence "Applications built without the framework...

wrong way. As things sit right now, the Rewrite engine article has this to say about rewrite engines: "A rewrite engine is software located in a Web application...

first two sections, which will hopefully help a bit. I don't have time to rewrite the types at the moment, but I did try to clean up the real world examples...

Why are Mongolian and Arabic script discussions on this page? There are articles about both already. Evertype 10:39, July 25, 2005 (UTC) Most likely relicts...

as long as there's been ActionScript, there has always been an Actionscript Virtual Machine in the Flash Player. In ActionScript 1 and 2, code was translated...

wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:ActionScript#Scripting_Language.3F : Same discussion. ActionScript is more similar to Java than JavaScript. Fırat KÜÇÜK 04:56, 8...

from http://www.engr.mun.ca/~adluri/telugu/language/script/index.html. So either we need to rewrite or delete this. mlpkr 15:52, 26 January 2007 (UTC)...

(UTC) Sir Mr KumarRao, Now I am completely convinced you are trying to rewrite South Indian history by taking a POV website as your reference material...

lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): Fix dashes using the script What script?--Jackyd101 (talk) 22:48, 15 July 2015 (UTC) CharInsert. It is on...

speak my language and weren't taught it at school. It would be better to rewrite a sentence than interpolate solecisms. See now, Regards Keith-264 (talk)...

browser due to previous actions by site D, that the browser includes with the bogus message from the JavaScript program. The JavaScript program thus runs with...

JavaScript minifiers. I've rewritten the article to include only the most important and unique tools and programming libraries. I'll have to rewrite the...

here's your example: maps.google.com AJAX makes it possible to use JavaScript to rewrite sections of HTML without need full a full-page refresh, and CSS provides...

remember what I had originally written here, and I am too busy to try to rewrite it at the moment. So if you could PLEASE find the original, maybe that...

.. implementations such as JavaScript, JScript and ActionScript." and has a quite confusing table listing "JavaScript" under "Implementation and latest...

April 2005, this article was nominated for deletion. The result was keep rewrite. See Wikipedia:Votes for deletion/24SevenOffice for a record of the discussion...

reservations about ActionScript being listed as a current OOP. It seems to be in no sense a general-purpose programming language, but more of a scripting wrapper...

recent incarnation of Flash's scripting language (called "actionscript", which is an ECMA language similar to JavaScript) incorporates long-awaited usability...

disagree with me moving this page to Khmer script? Khmer isn't really an alphabet, so I feel the term 'script' better suits it. Plus, all the stuff about...

would welcome an original rewrite. As long as it is made clear that the IVC remains "silent" in the sense that the "script" remains undeciphered. The...

2006 (UTC) Arnold was unhappy with the original script, and insisted on Goldman being hired to do a rewrite. He got $1 million for a month's work. Goldman...

to discuss it. There is no need to ping me in response. Rationale: this rewrite; note WP:AISIGNS particularly in superficial analyses and vocab distro...

I remember I rewrote the first script to make a better stopgap. The second rewrite was the one which involved rewriting the whole thing in C. It involved...

"JavaFX" in reference to "JavaFX Script", does not mean the articles should be merged (any more than the ActionScript article should be merged into Flash/Flex)...

improvement. -- Infrogmation 22:52, 8 April 2006 (UTC) I barely started a rewrite, and will contitue later. While we're at it, why not change the title?...

incompatibility between 1.11 and 1.2 , the Ajax part very used in web 2.0 has been rewrited (for good) making updating a heavy step. Lacrymocéphale 17:00, 24 July...

Cham script Khmer script Sukhothai script Thai script Tai Viet script Fakkham script Tai Noi script Lao script Lai Tay script Khom Thai script Tamil...

his story which was now due to be broadcast first, rather than rewriting Webber's scripts. Anyone know a better way to handle this? Also if anyone's got...

17 November 2012 (UTC) ActionScript is implemented natively in Flash Player. I don't see how it's different from JavaScript.—Best Dog Ever (talk) 06:30...

Concerning editing and maintaining JavaScript-related articles... If you are interested in collaborating on JavaScript articles or would like to see where...

when we think we have come up with a good script, we are told (by Sesame Workshop in the U.S.) to rewrite it because it is 'not suitable' for a 'Sesame...

something missing here, and I can't exactly tell what you mean to say. I'd rewrite the first couple of sentences to make clear that ISIS/ISIL captured the...

it. Čeha (razgovor) 18:05, 23 June 2010 (UTC) I'm starting a complete rewrite of the article. The Ethnology section will remain. --Zoupan (talk) 21:07...

Probably best under a new History section on Greasemonkey page. Perhaps a rewrite/cleanup may be better done at same time, as page rather messy and unfathomable...

of permission grant is simply not compelling. Ideally, someone should rewrite the page. Unless that is done, I favor deletion. Kat 18:25, 6 Aug 2003...

worked on the programme! (Script Editor, series 4, 5, special) So - I hope this doesn't offend anyone - I've done a total rewrite. The only thing I'm not...

create any part of the film script (as Ross was involved with the entire film script). Ross took successful legal action against Angus & Robertson. Angus...

Garland's name has already been written in full. Why repeat this? Perhaps rewrite it as "a copy of Garland's novel The Tesseract." Make sure you use this...

leaks. The next day she met up with Carter and David Nutter at Fox. Please rewrite as currently unclear and un-grammatical. Better but now you have two adjacent...

directly in the targetted players message\action log (In this case the player entering the trigger or area the script was attached to), which is as close as...

if followed by a version number, e.g. "JavaScript 1.7"); people who refer to "JScript" (or "ActionScript", etc.) always mean those specific implementations...

(Carakan script)? I know that Javanese language uses Hanacaraka (Carakan script), but I think Kawi uses its own script called Kawi script. And Kawi script is...

Southeast Asian commercial releases first, then later (Western) releases. Rewrite to “Following its Thai release, the film expanded regionally across Southeast...

implies that Flash/Flex/ActionScript as well as HTML/JavaScript/CSS can be used in all AIR apps. However, the HTML/JavaScript/CSS way of building AIR...

source of the Brahmi script, ancestor of the Brahmi family of scripts, which includes Devanagari". But how can it be true? Brahmi script is found in Indus...

appreciate that you at least took the time to make a talk page post about your rewrite tag, but I have to say this is not a helpful explanation. You say that...

something like Call of Duty, and clearly it isn't that big. Recommend rewriting or deleting. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 75.97.31.201 (talk)...

a successor to the throne.[35]" - were their other successors? If not, rewrite as "succeeded him to the throne." If there were other claimants, then that...

fonts for most Indic scripts are available, albeit far too few.TsengTH (talk) 05:15, 28 October 2008 (UTC) Thanks for doing that rewrite. That section has...

stalled thanks to his blatant edit warring. I wrote: Would a fully sourced rewrite of these two articles using proper sources take care of the present situation...

not encyclopedic, as it should be. If anyone wants to take a stab at rewriting this article, be my guest. :) --Ashley Rovira (talk) 02:43, 24 September...

"more artificial"? Someone should rewrite this clearer. I believe that the assertion of typeface commissions for script-hands is quite misleading here sense...

--Karl.brown (talk) 23:53, 24 March 2012 (UTC) This is my suggestion for a rewrite. Many of the points mentioned in the article presented a limited view of...

with "javascript:") are blocked should say: inline JavaScript scripts (e.g. <script></script>, DOM event attributes like onclick, and anchor tags with...

want to disassociate themselves from the first script and tie themselves to Ms Asante’s skilled rewrite with attempted allusions to paraphrasing. If this...

is. Bazonka (talk) 15:10, 23 March 2014 (UTC) OK. I have had a go at rewriting the first paragraph. I think that makes it clearer what PAR is, although...

serial, or buying the script? Nation's scripts required little editing from Spooner, and he was too busy to undertake rewrites. Did anyone want them to...

dialog. Joss Whedon has been an uncredited script doctor on many films.). The mere fact WP:V that he did a rewrite does not mean he should be highlighted...

00:21, 13 August 2007 (UTC) Please note that User:AlcoS4 is attempting to rewrite this article at User:AlcoS4/Sandbox1. Feel free to work together and collaborate...

I have done extensive trimming and rewriting of the plot section as requested some time ago on this page, correcting a few errors in the process. Its...

actually conflicted with the sources they gave, it was not supportable. The rewrite is better. Goldenrowley 04:11, 20 October 2006 (UTC) I happen to know the...

various forms "screenwriting" takes - spec scripts, assignments, rewrites, staff writing, polishes, script doctoring, etc. Finally, the article is entirely...

the "Life & Career" section in particular would benefit greatly from a rewrite. Aprude51 (talk) 00:27, 10 September 2018 (UTC) Hello fellow Wikipedians...

unecessary but feel that the Hindi script (following Urdu) is acceptable. Please let me know if the following rewrite of the introduction is acceptable:...

website. Perhaps you two could take a look at particular sentences and rewrite them? That way the copyvio material would be rewritten, while the article...

space really has anything to do with script quality. Riotgear 08:18, 25 July 2007 (UTC) I've attempted a rewrite of the plot entry. It's much shorter...

something missing here, and I can't exactly tell what you mean to say. I'd rewrite the first couple of sentences to make clear that ISIS/ISIL captured the...

version of this article before I rewrote it. I have detailed my reasons for rewriting it beneath the original. DionysosProteus 01:27, 12 August 2007 (UTC) Representational...

Michael bliss 1982 book "The discovery of Insulin" and his 1993 article "Rewriting Medical History: Charles Best and the Banting and Best myth" in the Journal...

three third-party sources.--Msr69er 20:05, 3 May 2006 (UTC) I tried to rewrite it a bit. I don't know anything more about the site to add. Can we have...

are the standard criticisms, yet you removed the section anyway? Just rewrite it to improve it, don't delete it unless you can show they are outright...

section. Plus, too many events are missing. If you begin to wonder why the rewrite and expand sections are there, now you know. -017Bluefield (talk) 06:31...

portal? Fleurstigter 09:58, 21 April 2007 (UTC) I have placed the "cleanup-rewrite" tag on the page since the article is very poorly written, especially lower...

RAmble Ramble Ramble The script derived from arabic and persian after adding some local indian phonems is called perso arabic script. Urdu is known to be...

approach to their content — see Life on Earth for an example. Please do not rewrite articles without discussion first. At least wait until the series is broadcast...

{{Use dmy dates|date=June 2019}} was added following a major expansion/rewrite and GOCE copy edit and during GA/DYK review, which I'd think shows some...

work in film. The only way this was successfully made into a film was by rewriting the story entirely. There's almost nothing original from the book in the...

part of the suggested rewrite, we need to discuss the inscriptions containing the Proto-Sinaitic script (or the similar) script to reinterpret the symbols...

one-hour network program, -- writing their first experience? Could use a rewrite "The sisters, which were asked staff writers Glen Morgan and James Wong...

March 2010 (UTC) This article is a complete mess, and badly in need of a rewrite. The language is informal and non-standard, and there are no sources to...

pretend death. Why it didn't work out isn't made clear. I'm not sure how to rewrite the summary to reflect this. --OGoncho (talk) 03:27, 19 April 2010 (UTC)...

combined with action scenes and visual effects that are a mixed bag end up pulling down Mamangam". Deccan Herald said it has good script, but bad acting...

used now (I believe only 1.0), that 1.0 should really be added to it. Actionscript 3.0, which has been the de facto standard for years now, is a fully class-based...

some little rules and tricks I've developed, so I'm going to go back and rewrite and add to Ryu_Kaze's guide and see if I help WP:CVG. --Zeality 00:42,...

brought onboard to rewrite the script for the big-screen adaptation of the 1960s series. Hsiao is the latest to take a stab at the script for the long-planned...

rewrite. To facilitate this process, I am creating subpages of the Talk pages for the each article, named Web development (rewrite) and Web design...

think this was actually the case. You're making some serious claims, rewriting the entire history of the alphabet, which if not original research require...

otherwise. I see someone removed the POV tag, so I've added a {{cleanup-rewrite}} and a {{Translation}} tag, which might be more appropriate. Please don't...

appreciate holding off another discussion until I manage to do a bit of a rewrite on the article. Thanks. – Reidgreg (talk) 12:41, 25 February 2019 (UTC)...

please go ahead. But for now, give me a few hours for this rewrite, because I'm rewriting it in place. I'll be done by midnight (MST), but if I get done...

shot, and scriptwriters were apparently up in arms over the number of rewrites they were asked to do. In 2005 it was reported that because of these problems...

org/web/20110612093715/http://eagle.brooklynpubliclibrary.org/Default/Scripting/ArchiveView.asp?BaseHref=BEG%2F1893%2F12%2F20&Page=8&SelectedEntity=A...

introduction. So if you ask me, I think this article needes more work that just a rewrite to make more sense. -- Marcel Douwe Dekker (talk) 16:26, 6 November 2008...

warrens trimming or cuts WP:TOOBIG. Maybe a clean up (copyedits and some rewriting into smaller thematic paragraphs) and making more cohesive in style and...

accessible without a secret, leading to the action being protected, for the security to be breached. Provided JavaScript is enabled, an attacker can load the...

JavaScript and XML," which is hardly notable by itself and the reason the deletion/merge was brought up. I support FatalError or someone rewriting this...

"The studio quickly offered financial backing"--would that be an accurate rewrite? "it led to confidence in the studio" -- Raimi had confidence in the studio...

welcome.--Eva bd 04:57, 10 March 2007 (UTC) Hey all. I've done a fairly bold rewrite of this article. I think it is an improvement, but I'm open to suggestions...

13:09, 9 February 2024 (UTC) Hello. I think we should discuss a potential rewrite of the voice cast section, since it was removed due to a WP:COPYVIO. Any...

Python. It is better to rewrite this document with a language with first class functions like JavaScript or Scala. I will rewrite and add all the examples...

Eastons website at UCI, which is unacceptable here. Now I have tried to rewrite some of it, removed the rest, and added the source. -- Marcel Douwe Dekker...

leave this up for a week and await any replies. Failing that, I plan to rewrite the section mentioning "Karl Seidl" in light of these findings. — Preceding...

significant to the entry on the whole series. If anyone can find a way to rewrite and clip this so it isn't quite so wordy, then it might serve as an "example...

article that should be called "Chinese calligraphy", which redirects here. Rewrite the lead sentence, & set up a disam page for EAC with the various national...

Get ready for a Tsunami called KICK at the ticket window. It is sure to rewrite box-office records. Salman fans, rejoice. KICK is a sure-shot B-L-O-C-K-B-U-S-T-E-R...

A script isn't a reliable source for an unbroadcast episode, especially since it's been known that titles can change. Besides, we can wait two whole months...

Company Production), and 1998, but I don't know whether the 1976 and 1998 rewrites were connected with specific productions. I suspect they are. I you have...

the elections are over and done with, aren't they? I can't find a way to rewrite it, though 83.104.37.31 (talk) 12:18, 29 July 2008 (UTC) The "Malaysia...

accepting some, reverting others. It amounts to having to rewrite the article. I had to rewrite the plagiarism section, which I thought had been mangled...

putting the Korean original script into google translate, and mangling the meaning -- it makes no sense. Can't someone rewrite it in proper English? — Preceding...

reasons, incremental improvements are almost always more successful than a rewrite. Instead of proposing to restructure the article, find one thing in the...

who points out how notable Expect is. The page could use a heavy-duty rewrite, but we've got articles for things like dd and Perl. --Plutor 16:15, 6...

sections? cdv (talk) 10:34, 28 January 2016 (UTC) Agreed. I'd lose or rewrite the tools section. Lists of unexplained links never work on wikipedia....

the proper article to discuss technical details of actionscript. I added a link to main ActionScript article and removed some doubled information. joaoflash...

about critical acclaim. "Anderson is currently in pre-production for " -- rewrite per WP:REALTIME "Other Work" -- Why is this separate from "career"? As...

didn't. The Singing Badger 14:58, 15 December 2005 (UTC) Did extensive rewrite, especially after someone said that Smiley (the mentall retarded guy) was...

2006 (UTC) The first paragraph sounds like marketing talk and needs a rewrite. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 2003:CA:BF10:9400:E553:DEE7:CDD3:4604...

defunct/esoteric ignored) ArkTS - According to its wiki, it's interpreted bytecode. ActionScript - JIT Ballerina - JVM bytecode BASIC - a family of languages with no...

anyone else agrees, I might be willing to chip in, and help do a complete rewrite. "it is helpful to understand how the JSP compiler transforms the page...

(UTC) Before spending a lot of time rewriting, be sure you review WP:OR, WP:SYN, WP:RS, and WP:V. If your rewrite is not properly referenced to mainstream...

doesnt make logical sense. You are ignoring my source and basing your rewrite on your opinion and not facts. You think it is above him to be called a...

is fine. Sutyarashi (talk) 14:56, 21 December 2024 (UTC) Okay. I will rewrite to try and make a compromise. Ixudi (talk) 14:58, 21 December 2024 (UTC)...

put up or give up with his rewrite. His "rewrite" approach is anti-collaborative and he has been claiming that his rewrite is pending for over two years...

something, please read the source (continued here) and tell me, then I'll rewrite. --Kailash29792 (talk) 16:50, 15 April 2020 (UTC) Kailash29792 I like your...

probably assert some notability. I won't deny that it would need a major rewrite (as it currently is a "puff piece"), but I think it should be looked into...

current econ section was taken almost wholely from CIA Factbook. We should rewrite it despite its public domain status. __earth 06:17, July 29, 2005 (UTC)...

the "see below". - Mark Dixon 06:57, 24 July 2007 (UTC) Page needs edit/ rewrite. Maynard most certainly not a hippie. Hippies had not come into being when...

am afraid that an ongoing GA Review is not the place to rewrite an article. Once they rewrite it, they can submit for a fresh review. TrangaBellam (talk)...

Woolsey was asked to work into her storyline. Saward did a substantial rewrite as script-editor. However others who have spoken to Saward on different occasions...

նշան, պատիվ, ենթամնայ. Can you say the names of the others? I want to rewrite the section “Punctuation Marks”. Ulf-S. 21:12, 27 September 2006 (UTC)...

worry about telegraphing the plot, but that will go better with a total rewrite. User 194.81.199.56 do we still expect something from you?Dankarl (talk)...

writing even in 2009)? If so, what do you think would be a better way to rewrite it? I'm not really sure how to amend it without adding extraneous detail;...

2 other independent sources. Perhaps,the author can supply the cite or rewrite accordingly, as I have limited knowledge of the subject.Bjhodge8 (talk)...

Wikipedia standards.Anonimu (talk) 21:05, 17 April 2025 (UTC) We could rewrite the text to exclude some numbers while still briefly describing the identity...

time on my hands, so I did some researching and an extensive expansion/rewrite. --Antorjal 21:16, 7 September 2006 (UTC) There is a also a sanskrit slokam...

7 December 2017 (UTC) A new editor has recently added this edit which rewrites the origin claims again. They seem to be downplaying the Croatian connection...

semicolon, semicolon, comma, comma, parenthetical, period. Split and rewrite the sentence. It transcribes Mandarin phonetically in the Republic of China...

and the first documented release version is 5.01 on 2006-03-18 The new rewrite ver 5 had these features; http://www.csounds.com/manual/html/RecentDevelopments...

English-language, LARP portals Complete rewrite of the remaining article. I implemented most of these suggestions, marked as "bold rewrite" in the edit history. I left...

removed the scripts that were in the Links section. I think it is silly to link to two specific scripts out of the thousands of scripts that exist. It...

FreeNAS and has re-established an independent Wikipedia page, I propose this rewrite of this FreeNAS page: User:Maiklsdeksters/FreeNAS This is intended to be...

saying? That the sentence in the introduction needs rewriting? If so, how would you suggest rewriting it? Andrew Dalby 16:38, 1 January 2013 (UTC) As the...

canon is defined for better or worse as the live-action TV episodes and movies. Since my major rewrite of this article back in January, I have tried to...

merge them together. For example, do I sort the sections as Write-once/Rewritable, or Single layer/Dual layer, or Dash/Plus? I just need to know exactly...

(talk) 23:14, 6 July 2014 (UTC) I don't trust my literary skills enough to rewrite this section, but it clearly needs serious work. 70.152.49.206 20:24, 1...

looking towards a rewrite. For example, there were three separate instances in which it was mentioned that AutoIt is a "scripting language with BASIC-like...

and script "Coinhive" where Krebs published the names of admins of the German imageboard pr0gramm, as a former admin is the inventor of the script and...

This is not a complete sentence and, as it is unclear what is being said, I don't know how to rewrite these. Angiest (talk) 02:26, 14 August 2023 (UTC)...

Bollywood is banned in Pakistan is now out of date. I'll do a temporary rewrite later today (should be working now) but I would appreciate some help in...

"fundemental scientific method" which -to me- makes little sense. Could somone rewrite or even remove that sentance please? Obikirk (talk) 19:42, 14 January 2010...

(UTC) Hello, I think the sections are currently to short, and need to be rewrite in a better way. Yug (talk) 09:29, 7 September 2007 (UTC) I really object...

the chart position or the release year. Everything referenced in the rewrite. Pahunkat (talk) 08:05, 15 May 2026 (UTC) Ref #46 & #47 (NECSUS & ArtAsiaPacific):...

When Zito joined the project, the new director hired Barney Cohen to rewrite the script. No again. We worked with Joe Zito. Barney was only hired after we...

Source of the script anecdote is Stephen Bach's memoir, "Final Cut". — Preceding unsigned comment added by 209.149.235.254 (talk) 16:58, 22 February 2004...

com/servlet/downloads/public/JavaScript_Hijacking.pdf to http://www.fortify.com/servlet/downloads/public/JavaScript_Hijacking.pdf When you have finished...

is/20041029191642/http://www.jimcrowhistory.org/scripts/jimcrow/sports.cgi?state=California to http://www.jimcrowhistory.org/scripts/jimcrow/sports.cgi?state=California...

as tagged, this article is of poor quality and badly needs a complete rewrite. Even the footnotes, as fragmentary as they are, are in a non-Wikipedia...

before i knew this (found site when searching for sources) and a complete rewrite is in order. I shall look to fix the article shortly. Sillyfolkboy (talk)...

majority of investment is coming from British Bangladeshis. I recommend a rewrite of this article along the lines of Dhaka & Shahbag so that the information...

University of New York Press.) Mooretwin (talk) 15:14, 18 April 2011 (UTC) The rewrite as far as i was aware stated that some rules aided the alienation or exclusion...

least a native explanation of them; I don't know whether to drastically rewrite it or just remove it. The section "Interpretation of the Inscriptions"...

org/web/20110612093715/http://eagle.brooklynpubliclibrary.org/Default/Scripting/ArchiveView.asp?BaseHref=BEG/1893/12/20&Page=8&SelectedEntity=Ar00807&skin=BEagle&GZ=T...

why I didn't find it. Added. The bit about it being lack of time 'for rewriting' comes from the BHOTT ref - should I repeat that reference? Percy Snoodle...

need of a sort of rewrite. It is just way too Sanskrit and Hindi oriented, and if anything it's more of a phonology article than script. Also, there are...

with little to no English resources. I would like to or hope someone will rewrite the entirety of the tones section. Feel free to correct me if I'm wrong...

see if Nightingale Properties has sold other subdivisions of Common I Rewrite the lede to better summarize the body of the article based on these changes...

The Kurdish text is completely messed up. Can an Arabic/Kurdish speaker rewrite it. I just checked the history of this page, and one one edit, someone...

or CUP, and including everything in between. I propose some clean-up, rewrite or split be done. As the article stands, it is downright misleading. Kilgore...

removed the above section pending better verification. Either way it needs rewriting for NPOV. Shouldn't the headquarters of the IITS business be in Barrington...

someone to step back, decide on the approach the article should take and rewrite it. 109.155.120.57 (talk) 21:23, 6 March 2025 (UTC) I still dont get it...

--Pericles of AthensTalk 16:57, 31 July 2009 (UTC) It's done, I have finished rewriting the article and it's a "beaut". I hope whoever used that Miriam Lichtheim...

WP cannot vouch for the quality of such links. We also have to rewrite the ActionScript code into pseudocode, or just remove it altogether. QVVERTYVS (hm...

Dynamiccookies (talk | contribs) 21:51, 21 May 2021 (UTC) I just finished rewriting the Postcrossing-themed stamps section as a gallery with a photo for each...

replacement for The Game Fanatics, but am willing to remove the source and rewrite information that relies upon it (specificities like "lighting" and "depth...

see if Nightingale Properties has sold other subdivisions of Common I Rewrite the lede to better summarize the body of the article based on these changes...

tools" section as it seems to have devolved into gibberish. Free free to rewrite it in a clearer manner, and without a surfiet of crufty links, but please...

ChrisO 14:56, 13 Dec 2003 (UTC) Okay, rewrite done. My observations: Radivoje Pesic's theories on the Vinca script are kooky, or at least on the far fringes...

it describes the U.S. tour as "mostly using the Nelson script" when it was a ground-up rewrite from Robert Coe), but changes made to the sections are...

create animation series infobox rewrite of some of the plot, characters section to be a li'l more cri/analytical; (cf. Dexter's Laboratoy, Powerpuff Girls)...

Would like to rewrite. The current article follows the historical development of Lagrangian mechanics which isn't the order which is most useful for teaching...

have to discount to account for my factual error, since i am not going to rewrite it. As i said, i need to apologize: i was not alert enuf to catch the fact...

screenwriters presumes that their script has been used in some capacity when Burns and Waller-Bridge hired to rewrite their script. Now that may be as simple...

U-Company, Can you please explain the rationale behind the inclusion of urdu script in Anil Kapoor's biography.-Bharatveer 09:03, 8 November 2006 (UTC) Enough...

and the music as well. If you're hung up on the current article scope, rewrite it to seem more ambiguous so that it doesn't focus on either the game nor...

scielo.br/scielo.php?script=sci_arttext&pid=S0102-01882002000100007 189.104.138.45 (talk) 02:02, 15 February 2010 (UTC)Bob I rewrited part of the first section...

use, with simpler examples that explain the concept of a callback. I am rewriting most of this article to include much more information. -- Who said this...

problem with it, I'd like to rewrite it. Most of it is copied straight from the Warholstars.org page so I think a complete rewrite is in order. I've got plenty...

talk page. Now that you are here, see that I did your work for you by rewriting the paragraph to link to appropriate Wiki articles. You clearly do not...

Eagles 24/7 (C) 05:36, 20 December 2009 (UTC) I reverted User:GeorgeC rewrite of the introduction. It was loaded with peacock terms, unsourced statements...

@François Robere: I am not familiar with this subject, so can you please rewrite the article as appropriate, particularly the introduction. Thanks, Number...

(UTC) Agreed that it is WP:OR in it current form. Absent a RS, could we rewrite it in a way which would not be disputed? --Useerup (talk) 00:19, 10 April...

the United States". I may not have the expertise to properly correct or rewrite this article, but I at least wanted to get the discussion started. Thank...

probably not a good example, but then the whole section is in need of a rewrite based on solid sources. Kanguole 13:59, 13 November 2017 (UTC) Thanks,...

really no reason to think the final script would cover only the events of Halo:Combat Evolved, especially with a rewrite in the works. Elsely, I mostly scrubbed...

going to have to substantially rewrite the Retrospect article, I think I would get more understandable results by rewriting it with a "Main features" section...

accusations of voyeurism, because it rather reeks of tabloidism, and I couldn't rewrite it without a liberal dose of Weasel Words. Also, the source is in Chinese...

until someone can see fit to rewrite it. Clearly nobody has responded to your message to they're unlikely to restore and rewrite it. brob (talk) 22:14, 16...

Thankfully this sentence is gone after User:Darkwarriorblake's impressive rewrite. 70.163.208.142 (talk) 05:17, 23 August 2022 (UTC) The bigger question...

lot of the family details can be removed - but I don't have the guts to rewrite an article on Carnatic music :-) Tintin 14:57, 11 November 2005 (UTC) The...

(an "old" and a "new" version, which seems to be related to ActionScript 2.0 vs ActionScript 3.0) -- it becomes especially relevant to the list of application...

fashion would be confusing to readers. -- User:98.95.60.137 We have to rewrite all articles then. -- Magioladitis (talk) 06:11, 13 May 2010 (UTC) I'm...

more knowledge than me about the American Supreme Court to completely rewrite this article. Ok, I've gone ahead and done it. It can still use a lot more...

who claims "no technical knowledge" of plants, though, this is a superb rewrite. Choess (talk) 17:59, 24 March 2013 (UTC) This review is transcluded from...

but if we see coverage of action, such as Variety reporting that the studio hired so-and-so screenwriter to pen a script for the third film, I support...

on Sky Broadband in the UK, perhaps) want to rename (move) the article? Rewrite the lede? I've read this Talk section and am really confused as to what—specifically—is...

suggested he was acquitted after his impeachment. But I do think your rewrite is much better than what was there. I removed the clause "Despite the acquittal...

analysis as far as I can tell. In some sources, the Action Groups are referred to as the Action Troops. Rewrite by removing the WP:WEASEL word, i.e., some, by...

Flash API. You can use all the Flash API like you were used to do in ActionScript." The first sentence seemingly contradicts the second sentence. "Porting...

noticed when I read Meinel's bio is that it says her style of hacking is 'script kiddie.' The person who wrote this must have never actually looked at her...

consistent, would close the discussion. The Israeli habit of constantly rewriting non-Hebrew names (see Hertzel for Herzl, Bugrashov for Bograshov, etc...

for a user script that does not yet exist, or you have a cool idea for a user script or gadget, you can post it at Wikipedia:User scripts/Requests. And...

textbook; I have never seen it in a published research paper. It's not fair to rewrite the article based on this idea. (Of course, you have a right to maverick...

I recalculated the 2020 census (published last year) and was going to rewrite certain pages related to urban population figures in Malaysia, unfortunately...

be legitimised under the Official Links designation. But I think I will rewrite and reduce to a single paragraph, moving it to the prior 20th century section...

sqcic /§ 19:48, 3 May 2026 (UTC) Sorry for the "edit war". An updated plot rewrite adhering to WP:WAF as best as I understand it Groundhog plot /§ sqcic /§...

- EG but by March 1748 had decided to rebuild on the same site. Slight rewrite to: but had decided by March 1748 to rebuild on the same site. Fixed. -...

Wow, was this written by Bobby's parents or what? This needs a complete rewrite after some credible sources are found to reference. ~ I saw the movie,...

texts and their predominant interpretations: it needs a more thorough rewrite than I have time to give right now. Steuard (talk) 12:55, 12 May 2018 (UTC)...

POV, that was not at all my intention! I'm happy for suggestions and to rewrite whatever's felt to be unbalanced. Wikidea 02:19, 25 February 2008 (UTC)...

UTC on 19 November 2006. I've rewritten most of the article. I think my rewrite addresses all your points, but if you see any further problems, just go...

use the NoScript add-on. Most of the Zeus and FakeAV infections start with some scripting. By allowing only a subset of the Internet to script you reduce...

to-do list, in order of priority: Rewrite the Plot section. (I will watch the VCD, write the plot in point form, and rewrite it based on the points). Expand...

archers. . Kirat= Limbu and Rai. n i got this info this website. can u rewrite it? —Preceding unsigned comment added by 81.110.210.207 (talk) 15:49, 4...

conversion to the US AQI value) If there is no objection I can attempt a rewrite of this section. Hantms (talk) 02:42, 17 August 2017 (UTC) I don't see...

"imply" anything - I was adding information. I will think of a way to rewrite it though that doesn't give the "implication" that you apparently perceive...

by itself. ~a (user • talk • contribs) 05:05, 11 December 2009 (UTC) So rewrite it if you want, but I don't think it's justifiable to remove relevant content...

gave a shot at an article rewrite, I decided to act on my own suggestion... This is a first, tentative draft of a possible rewrite of the main text of the...

if the threading model isn't up to par on a specific machine, you can rewrite it to use larger granularity. It's programmer and implementation dependent...

How far apart are they. I failed to see this in the article. I'd like to rewrite this to clarify it, but I don't even know what needs clarifying or correcting...

one). I don't have much time at the moment to write or rewrite articles, but I could rewrite the Thesis article sometime and expand the part on TheMix...

2004 (UTC) Hopefully, my rewrite has fixed this. - IMSoP 23:10, 26 Jul 2004 (UTC) Can anyone explain the significance of the script or "cursive" insignia...

bloat, but the solution is not to arbitrarily cut out large chunks and rewrite what's left in poor English, which is why I reverted. And I would point...

There is a script called Grantham (which shows up as Grantha in Wikipedia). This page should be a disambiguation page. Swami 19:33, 18 February 2006 (UTC)Saiswa...

discussion [though may not call for a complete rewrite, just modifcations] Mesoamerican writing systems. Maya script deserves discussion. J. D. Redding 17:43...

Tisdale who are going to swarm this page and most likely do a complete rewrite. Once the film is released most of the references for the early information...

"NPOV" and "citation needed" and "disputed" and so on. So I suggest a rewrite: add in ample quotation and citation of Witzel & Farmer, and of Romila...

third one is a useful addition though. So, if you want to rewrite the article, then rewrite it. But don't just butcher any and all useful factual substance...

(UTC) Its not a question of being bold. Its a question of time. I plan to rewrite this article in entirety, but due to lack of time am not being able to...

overlooks the fact that any statements about Ellison's original or the rewrite can be confirmed or denied simply by looking at the sources -- the original...

without the addition of other components, which commonly include web scripting and database management software. Due to the importance of this relationship...

copyright, I'll be erasing them. But if anyone wants to come along and rewrite them in the mean time, go to it. Llamabr (talk) 20:34, 23 April 2010 (UTC)...

the right writing style or structure at all. think they need complete rewrites. the live coding page doesn't even properly exist. i think we could improve...

I'll be taking a stab at rewriting this article with the goal of bringing it back to GA-status and higher. See work in progress here. The current article...

2007, they showed actual movie clips in which script descriptions were read while the screen action was seen taking place. And some of these "descriptions"...

lead: I removed promotional tone by rewriting the sentence, see Talk:Modafinil/Archive 1#Distinct mechanisms of action of modafinil make it an option for...

of the term 'satellite state' whatsoever. On that basis, I am going to rewrite the relevant sentence. AndyTheGrump (talk) 17:13, 16 February 2012 (UTC)...

September 2014 (UTC) Here is my suggestion of improving the article. Again. Rewrite the section about Jared Lee Loughner so it's clear to all readers who Loughner...

responsible for adding all this material to the article. Anyone up for trying a rewrite? I haven't seen the movie myself. Everyking 03:25, 20 August 2005 (UTC)...

present, is rife with opinion. Needs a complete top to bottom edit or rewrite. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 67.188.144.12 (talk) 05:35, 19 October...

someone has simply deleted the second to last paragraph, while neglecting to rewrite the plot summery.--74.69.108.90 (talk) 17:14, 21 June 2014 (UTC) -- I removed...

to it. Deb 16:38, 3 Aug 2004 (UTC) No offence taken. However, I began a rewrite of the article on this town at Nesebâr because I believe that is the correct...

Particularly the green-side ones with their fancy script. Thanks! This article is in need of a rewrite. There are a lot of unsourced statements that sound...

least rewrite it to conform to the VERY CLEAR guidelines for plot and OR. You say I make valid points, yet you reverted every single change. Rewrite the...

copypastaed from the wikia, so it's possible that nothing short of a complete rewrite will fix it. Also, every reference link was untitled, so I spent a lot...

to the Hindu/Urdu/Hindustani issue. Sorry, I have not had time to do a rewrite of the article that gives this issue the space that it needs. BOTH views...

Malayali came from Tamil words.Thats the point. If thats the case we have to rewrite all Wiki malayalam article to add this come from Tamil word. ! Daya Anjali (talk /...

categories. --  Gadget850 talk 13:24, 16 January 2014 (UTC) I fixed this by rewriting Template:Vgrtbl in Lua. Jackmcbarn (talk) 22:12, 21 March 2014 (UTC) Please...

processor and which in some cases be programmed itself through support for rewritable microcode. So PHP as of PHP 4 is compiled, and this is an important point...

trivia. Similarly, the significant difference between Rubin's script and Ramis's rewrite are a little more notable than, again, a background detail of...

of *Acorán.” *Celestial god. Feel free (all of you) to correct this and rewrite it according to Wikipedia's standards. I will work on it anyway. The citation...

discussion begins. The features section was flagged advert, so needs some rewriting. IMO these are the lines that would need the most work, or that seem to...

problematic. The issue with the IQ claim (again, being reputation managed by the rewrite) is that the only source for the claim is O'Brien. The media didn't make...

reasons. In fact, the thought springs to mind that Tosh tended to rewrite every DW script that was delivered in his time on the show - maybe he was just...

(talk) 02:12, 21 April 2020 (UTC) I feel like this entire article needs a rewrite. It has become a summation of facts with no clear story. History and popularity...

corresponding to the Indic script alphabets are mentioned in the page. The transliteration is recommended to avoid using multiple Indic scripts and consequently...

Since there are no !votes yet, you are free per WP:REDACT to modify or rewrite the Rfc as you wish. If it were up to me, I'd start right off at the top...

that point Taylor himself would know he was infected. I think a serious rewrite needs to happen in this regard, possibly making it more neutral as to what...

given the copyright and litigation notice at the bottom of the pages but a rewrite with sourcing will satisfy that issue. As for reliability, it's likely...

tried to archive it, but it is a script so it won't show up on WebCite. Hopefully it can be preserved before a rewrite happens.--¿3family6 contribs 03:18...

Audiobooks. It looks as if somebody is attempting what is pretty near a total rewrite of an article which appears to represent collective work of a number of...

on placements. If you dont like the way the section is written please rewrite it. But I think the section should not be removed. Image you have a encyclopedia...

are getting their information. This is very strange. We need a complete rewrite and data correction here. Here is a complete list of release dates: http://www...

veteran director readily agreed to changes in the script. However, the resulting laborious rewrite and slow pace of principal photography again alarmed...

explain this. Sukusala (talk) 00:48, 7 November 2022 (UTC) I've added a rewrite template to the article, for these reasons: The article is very difficult...

using to base my plot summary on. Took out the pasted bit and kept my own rewrite. GRAPPLE X 21:08, 29 May 2012 (UTC) Production: "…as well as directing…"...

from the information about her receiving an English degree. I suggest rewriting the last sentence, to "Because of the community's reaction to her MySpace...

based on American soldiers throughout history and usage of "blindly". Rewrite this. Done. I recommend combining the citations to Rules of Nature into...

I am going to clean up this article in the next few days with a rewrite. Development, character and reception sections will be expanded. My sources currently...

serial, or buying the script? Nation's scripts required little editing from Spooner, and he was too busy to undertake rewrites. Did anyone want them to...

no objections, I'll remove the excessive detail there now and possibly rewrite to make it less NEP specific. Chipmunkdavis (talk) 06:54, 16 November 2010...

made to this discussion. I think that introductory paragraph needs some rewriting for clarity. I don't think you'd call his appearance in A View to a Kill...

--Florian Blaschke (talk) 23:09, 3 November 2012 (UTC) I have done a major rewrite to eliminate much (though far from all) of the unintelligible or misleading...

when the consensus is very clear. In addition, there is zero effort to rewrite any of the sampled reviews in our words. It is just an endless stream of...

much is in order that needs to be specified. test I've been working on rewriting some of this article, especially the first few paragraphs in the current...

will probably be the only time they will work together. Also, could you rewrite the sentence to read: Her character is the only woman to offically married...

like straight up, nor front and back. I would love to personally try to rewrite that sentence/section, but for the life of me I can't make heads or tails...

templates or without templates. Are you really stating that you wish to rewrite the Plot summary to reflect NY geography and NY references in order to...

Account 2 (talk) 18:36, 16 June 2026 (UTC) @The Account 2: I finished up my rewrite, at least for now. Does everything look good to you? Generalissima (talk)...

science fiction-oriented action thriller. This is the only way I can see this working if I have to, as you put it, "rewrite it instead". Cognissonance...

like a language, so I understand your preference and agree. I've been rewriting (and grammatically capitalizing) the first sentence because until now...

about Mr. Biggart, and doesn't need to list all these other folks, just rewrite the one sentence in question so as not to state or imply that he was the...

all of it when I came back to his article. I'm removing and will try to rewrite it in the future. hbdragon88 (talk) 18:36, 10 May 2008 (UTC) Wikipedia:Ignore_all_rules...

deliberately to trouble.For we are victims too...I strongly recommend rewriting of border problem in real neutral point of view.Perhaps a non-marathi...

script was written by Murphy and Falchuck, and then Brennan came on to rewrite it, that would be credited as "Written by Ryan Murphy & Brad Falchuck and...

--200.81.126.54 (talk) 23:28, 1 September 2010 (UTC) I have just applied a rewrite to Claudia Schiffer's wikipedia page. I have kept virtually all of the...

article into being and not a day goes by before you are attempting to rewrite the thing. The prose are intended to convey a narrative, and they are a...

attend her gravesite. — This phrasing is a bit awkward. Perhaps you could rewrite to clarify intent: Mengju tells M she wants a large burial plot, hoping...

villain with only a few appearances such as Zzzax. I'm happy to offer up a rewrite, and then throw to the floor for feedback. This is not an insurmountable...

07:26, 13 April 2016 (UTC) Alright, I'm thinking about doing a tentative rewrite of this article in my sandbox soon. The problem is, I realized we have...

papers by Dr. Desarda themselves. I would recommend erasing or heavily rewriting this section for a neutral stance, using independent sources. —Preceding...

late 1980s, --Jerzy•t 16:14, 2005 August 21 (UTC) For my still-in-beta rewrite (see User:B.C.Schmerker/Deborah Gibson (beta)#The Atlantic Years, 1986—1994)...

one of the controversies, integrated the interview into references in a rewrite and added explanation for the removal in this talk page. 30 September 2012...

presenting a side of a case. The entire article is thin, and needs a drastic rewrite, or complete deletion. Harper (talk) 13:40, 13 December 2007 (UTC) If you...

done out of necessity (because of Brando and Hackman's departure, and script rewrites) or for creative reasons, and ascribes no motive to Lester for wanting...

(with whom Phoenix previously worked on The Master) was recruited to rewrite the script." Perhaps someone with better knowledge can confirm the actual date...

about where the major characters enter the story. I feel it needs another rewrite that keeps the same overall length and pace but reintroduces some of the...

down for the night, but I'll stay on top of this stuff as we go. Happy to rewrite or phrase things closer to the source's language. Just let me know what...

Firebrace (talk) 22:46, 18 August 2017 (UTC) Firebrace, did you do the rewrite edits of this article? Good job. Balanced. 222.165.9.81 (talk) 22:52, 18...

a successor to the throne.[35]" - were their other successors? If not, rewrite as "succeeded him to the throne." If there were other claimants, then that...

the same sentence as the false allegations, seems biased to me. I will rewrite it with the references to the evidence that the sketch was written years...

knows if this, he has MI6 watchers shadow him." This sentence needs a rewrite. Cast The first pargraph gets a little repetative: "Keeley Hawes returns...

appear throughout, and I'd really like that to be fixed! This involves rewriting a bunch of the content, so hopefully the content will be great after that...

You gave a reference. And you didn't reference each statement, and your rewrite was misleading, and you deleted information, and the list goes on. Did...

VICTORIOUS ☣✅ 18:37, 16 June 2021 (UTC) "changes in script" → "changes in the script" or "changes to the script"  Done--25 CENTS VICTORIOUS ☣✅ 18:37, 16 June...

here without attribution. Would some editor please read the original and rewrite this article to remove these huge quotes? Please. You can find the text...

Hola! Viva Catalunya! but... there is no doubt that Franco tried to rewrite history, as such you can talk of historical revisionism (the distinction between...

sentence-by-sentence edits are going to help this article very much. A full rewrite is in order. I've read quite a lot of tutorials on RoR, and many of them...

must start rewriting one by one instead of wasting time by arranging because we can rearrange at any time. As you all agreed, we need to rewrite Concepts...

oversee the production. After Mark Bomback (Die Hard 4) was hired to rewrite the script in July 2004, the project was scheduled to go into production in fall...

Aykroyd both confirmed. Maybe in 3 years it'll be confimed that another script rewrite is in the making LOL 180.194.244.241 (talk) 07:54, 27 February 2014...

Manhattan out of the events leading to the Crash of 1929. Significant rewrites are needed for WaMu and numerous investment banks. In my view, the existing...

go back in early 1900s and force Tagore to rewrite it in Devnagari. You yelled that the "THE ORIGINAL SCRIPT OF OUR NATIONAL ANTHEM IS HINDI". Wow, what...

the Mandarin WP, which I then helped copy-edit. Someone could probably rewrite the article according to English sources they had access to, but if it...

well (we do not use parantheses on entire paragraphs) that I am going to rewrite it now. Falcon June 28, 2005 05:27 (UTC) if there's no further objection...

insist that we should keep it, then we are going to need to completely rewrite the introduction of the article. Right now, it is referring to deliberate...

little more about the original script instead of jumping in at Daniel Water rewrite hopefully this should make a lot more sense. -- 109.79.69.228 (talk) 13:51...

October 2011 (UTC) Can someone who has seen this film - I haven't - please rewrite the plot section urgently? The current version has atrocious grammar and...

and even uses a blog to support several citations. It needs a complete rewrite IMO and to rid of those ugly bullets and bold/italics and to be written...

them "Fuzzies" ("Furries"?) but that the name was somehow changed during script development. I seem to recall that he said the direction came from people...

understanding. -- FayssalF - Wiki me up® 15:29, 8 May 2007 (UTC) recent rewrite has neglected years 1961 to 1984 ie most of this persons life. Will help...

better way of saying it. The "Voting" section overall just needs a total rewrite. I can do that, but I'm keen for the previous two matters to be cleared...

seems to have made the wrong call and blindly reverted. A rewrite with a discussion of said rewrite here was the correct way to do this. Also some disappointing...

Rohitbd 12:35, 3 February 2006 (UTC) I took the liberty of completely rewriting the article, shortening the synopsis and leaving out the details of the...

an improvement, and hope that I have not broken any rules by the major rewrite, let me know. Thx --PatClay 18:32, 12 September 2006 (UTC) Things look...

has been altered/fabricated in the Genesis 5 account... it completely rewrites the Genesis 4 account... either: Seth (the son Eve never had) is simply...

Sawadeekrap (talk) 06:30, 2 December 2013 (UTC) The whole section needs a rewrite, this can't be the best you can do. I have no axe to grind, other than...

mention it, he's actually working for InstantAction at the moment and rewriting parts of Tribes for the InstantAction release. So that guy knows what he's talking...

asked? Just look pretty before cutting to commercials? The section needs rewriting (don’t make your readers guess about details if you know what they are)...

article about this demo, and since simply removing the images without that rewrite would leave a mess I won't do it. However, since the images are almost...

about this topic (I am by no measure an expert), I made the effort to rewrite the article in less technical language. I hope this lowers the barrier...

which is unsourced, irrelevant, or just wrong. Would anybody be up for a rewrite of the article? I think there should be the following sections: 1. Introduction...

the usage of despite doesn't make it sound necessarily neutral. Can you rewrite this sentence to make it more clear and not twisty and wordy? Agreed. Re-worked...

MAINTAIN NEUTRAL POV :-) Sodabottle (talk) 13:49, 27 October 2009 (UTC) rewrite lead summarising the whole article background section cost and numbers...

I was going to tackle Murgh's request to rewrite this section in encyclopedic style, but after browsing a few Achille Talon albums, the comment that Greg...

Cheers.—InternetArchiveBot (Report bug) 08:35, 24 January 2018 (UTC) Much rewriting is needed (in English) Very incomplete, very unclear, needing a lot more...

put back into the article by intforce ― so now intforce takes care of rewriting the article. Luamssuk (talk) 20:19, 26 February 2024 (UTC) deleted (talk)...

am following her advice and am slowing working towards creating a new rewrite of the section that was criticized for not being NPOV. If I was intent...

a certain level of momentum is required to traverse it. See if you can rewrite that one. The second-to-last paragraph in the Receiption section has too...

is an important piece of the article. Perhaps whoever removed it could rewrite it under another header. Until we have a place to put it, though, the part...

before. Its writing style, at any rate, is terribly biased, so it needs a rewrite either way. Johnleemk | Talk 03:23, 14 April 2007 (UTC) It seems to me...

do. You have an opinion. I have an opinion. Neither is allowed to just rewrite the content of the entry to reflect our opinion. Kindly read the standards...

the inadequacy of those purported sources, support their removal and a rewriting of the article opening to match what Suny writes, as the main scholar...

least, if not a 70% trim, then better sources. I would even suggest a rewrite. History2007 (talk) 18:57, 25 April 2012 (UTC) It has been mentioned here...

concentrations that are clinically significant.” Perhaps you could provide a rewrite on the talk page here that incorporates the above facts that you would...

81.174.158.49 (talk) 12:54, 1 February 2014 (UTC) For what it's worth, rewriting the code to use continuation passing style isn't the only alternative...

" Removed. --Katolophyromai (talk) 08:02, 29 July 2018 (UTC) Suggested rewrite for this rather long sentence: "Kratos and his sister Bia make a brief...

17:44, 26 July 2009 (UTC) Very much. Please go ahead with the proposed rewrite. -- Sundar \talk \contribs 11:07, 29 July 2009 (UTC) Agreed, splitting...

completely uncited. As well, the prose is not at all up to standard and needs a rewrite. GamerPro64 06:45, 31 January 2022 (UTC) Man Ray and Germaine Krull weren’t...

written with several spelling and grammar errors. I think this needs a total rewrite.68.227.184.246 20:11, 14 June 2007 (UTC) Why was my edit corrected? My...

Manchus is treated as though it were "Chinese"? Removing the script is tantamount to rewriting history. There is no more graphic way of showing the dual...

have done to some extent; ultimately it should be looking at an entire rewrite but it's decent enough for now. I also removed some links and converted...

sections are being removed. This definitely needs a clean-up, possibly even a rewrite. tmopkisn tlka 22:02, 25 July 2006 (UTC) He belongs in both, as he was...

supposed to be doing the meaning. The way forward? Find the right sources, rewrite the text, verify it in footnotes. Thank you. Drmies (talk) 21:11, 3 September...

to McCarthy as the later days are described by but decided to put the rewrite on the article page as I was at a dead stop and time is running short....

days when they merged with the arabs. so i think someone (mybe me)should rewrite the beginning atleast,people should pay attention to what they call "arab"...

Wikipedia article or other types of libel are not acceptable. If you wish to rewrite your claims as a neutral point of view and cite it under controversy or...

of the article. Duhon (talk) 03:58, 5 January 2013 (UTC) Some form of rewrite that reduces the "who's best" format would probably go a long way to help...

something, please read the source (continued here) and tell me, then I'll rewrite. --Kailash29792 (talk) 16:50, 15 April 2020 (UTC) Kailash29792 I like your...

which I can't find anywhere. The lead definitely needs work, perhaps a rewrite while making sure that only information already present is added. The development...

26 July 2023 (UTC) In the civic administration subsection, can someone rewrite this to explain how the Thimphu Municipal Corporation relates to the gewogs...

Caliphates yet that aspect was ignored. Instead this article chooses to rewrite controversial topics regarding religious and cultural conflicts. For example...

and they will certainly be removed as part of the rewrite. No fan sites will be part of the rewrite, and that includes commanderbond.net. We do not allow...

editors. If the text is badly written, then please BE BOLD AND FIX IT. Just rewrite the problematic text. --Enric Naval (talk) 11:42, 16 December 2010 (UTC)...

adverb. Either omit it entirely, write it as "internal system" instead or, rewrite as Interplay developed their own system called SPECIAL for the game.  Done...

informartion and should be subject to a large rewrite. Miskin 03:55, 26 March 2006 (UTC) It requires a rewrite based on NPOV. Not edits such as "They called...

for script kiddie, rather than code monkey --JamesTheNumberless 10:45, 29 December 2006 (UTC) To me, it sounds more like code monkey. To me a script kiddie...

history pages. Jay 07:15, 16 Nov 2004 (UTC) I'll be doing some major rewriting soon, not tonight, late enough right now. I have some books, they are...

from a rant here without attribution. I decided to find more sources and rewrite that little section, rather than just adding a citation to that pasted...

of the Supreme Court. I'm too busy too to fix it but somebody needs to rewrite the article from scratch - Z I recently came across this article, and I...

http://oldgeeksguide.github.io/presentations/html5devconf2013/wtod.html#/ A total rewrite is necessary here. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 213.7.99.175 (talk)...

grammar in this is appalling. I suggest a rewrite. 3|9|3|0|K (talk) 16:22, 2 November 2012 (UTC) A rewrite will probably happen automatically over the...

149 (talk) 11:39, 5 December 2016 (UTC) If anyone doesn’t object, I can rewrite the criticism of Rothman into the page and make it more neutral than it...

you should be tell me in advance, you destroyed my hard work trying to rewrite it. Khmerloy9 (talk) 17:04, 4 January 2021 (UTC) Materialscientist You...

the page as it existed, but to support the possibility that a keep and rewrite made sense. The academic/theater usage is the one that is the most coherent...

Flash 5, Introduction of ActionScript - Flash 6 (MX) - Flash 7, ActionScript 2 ? - Flash 8 - Adobe purchase? - Flash 9, ActionScript 3 - Flash 10 Usage -...

and McCarthy | (Complain here) 17:14, 29 January 2007 (UTC) Attempts to rewrite have been going slow. Regardless, I'm going to reinstate the Plot template...

those trying to <script type="text/javascript" src="http://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User:Omegatron/monobook.js/addlink.js&action...

information that proves its notability then please add it back (with a rewrite) and a link to the info. Kineticpast 02:54, 16 August 2006 (UTC) I changed...

syntactical mistakes. The maths may not be very clean or standard. The article-rewrite was exported from a LibreOffice document (see [[1]]). I exported the ODT...

activities may then be decoupled from the nationalism tag. I will try and rewrite this paragraph. You may change it as you and Arvind may wish. - Parthi...

the source code and can find no such script. Tavin (talk) 14:33, 28 October 2024 (UTC) I finished a complete rewrite of the article. I hope it is a lot...

Stradivarius (drop me a line) 10:22, 1 November 2010 (UTC) More things to do: Rewrite/move "Reception" section as per Talk:Teaching Proficiency through Reading...

issues and improve the cited references (and also a general cleanup). That rewrite was recently reverted by Salithak1. Due to the BLP and copyright issues...

to other claims you make when rewriting the section. Specifically, you claim that "Wadaad's writing" is not Arabic script, and imply that it's a single...

material I used to write Bussell family and Thomas Vasse and did a bit of a rewrite of the history section. Bunbury was head of a contingent of troops stationed...

it. Woolfy123 (talk) 19:16, 3 March 2016 (UTC) I've at least finished rewriting the entirety of the "Background" section, but the rest of the narrative...

"complete rewrite" is a lot of work. If any editor isn't prepared to do a lot of work, then they shouldn't be trying to do a "complete rewrite" In doing...

this sentence is unsourced: "Dante Harper later wrote a new script, but an extensive rewrite was performed by screenwriter John Logan. Logan had previously...

misleading and conceptually flawed from the beginning, and needs radical rewriting with expunging of system-specific stuff to topical articles and removal...

accusations, and poor, often broken citations, and would benefit from a complete rewrite to consolidate content (and potentially merge into Second Life). 75.70...

that is surmise on my part that snuck into the synopsis, so I'm going to rewrite that bit to make it hew more to what we see on screen. --khaosworks 14:37...

(talk) 14:10, 13 January 2013 (UTC) (The numbers in my comment are from a script which I use for auditing changelogs - not a guess) TEDickey (talk) 14:13...

July 2020 (UTC) Support, with rewrite I propose combining the two sentences into one: "Many of his comments and actions have been accused of being racially...

contradicts it) says our version misleads, and offers a hint toward a rewrite: Elliot Stabler: You manipulated us just like Jake did. Brett Morton: There's...

apparently an attempt to coin a neologism (google only finds copies or rewrites of this article) 168.12.253.82 16:11, 3 November 2005 (UTC) One reason...

advocate either removing the legacy section altogether or completely rewriting it. 'Off the court activities?' He's neither a lawyer nor tennis player...

episodes would be animated at a near-theatrical quality level." Could use a rewrite for consistency, maybe with a citation clarifying just how good or bad...

this article. Harris appears to visit this site sometimes. Some of the rewrites that keep cropping up in the article sounds either like his work or those...

circa 2019. Given the above, I believe this page deserves a significant rewrite (or possibly even merging into a sub-section of a larger PGP/GPG article)...

stages.174.253.64.148 (talk) 17:47, 28 November 2020 (UTC) I'm planning on rewriting and expanding this page, expanding relevant sections from my sandbox as...

would hope that this article will include that sort of idea in a future rewrite. Peter Shearan 13:28, 26 June 2006 (UTC) The image cover presented here...

your rewrite does not demonstrate an improvement in readability. Your rewrite has increased the number of paragraphs to in excess of four. Your rewrite has...

your own words. --Bacteria 18:31, 2 February 2006 (UTC) Somebody needs to rewrite the last trivia point. It is poorly written, and doesn't make much sense...

vandalizing my user page [2] (note the deceptive edit summary) and even rewriting my own words on this talk page. [3] The IP addresses vandalizing the article...

trolling project that we've modified was Shitstorm.pl and what we did was rewrite it in python. It's also your opinion (not fact) that our code is buggy...

show us how you'd rewrite Darkwarriorblake's proposal to include it, because honestly, I don't see how we abandon his proposed rewrite at this point. --GoneIn60...

(UTC) I've been mulling over your last comment for a couple of days. The rewrite of the one paragraph I provided was intended to be an example to guide...

using Lists or some other default data structure in a basic way. Simply rewriting the factorial example as a function is something we could do as well....

we are all talking about is Yugoslav. Screw all you racists trying to rewrite history. Zalgo (talk) 06:40, 15 September 2009 (UTC) —Preceding unsigned...

in this case the script is a perfectly suitable source. It's the authority. Since you're busy here I expect you to studiously rewrite every other movie...

reflecting what she thought was a seriously deficient, depoliticized rewrite done at Jane Fonda's direction and originally to be credited in part to...

as secondary sources. I am in the process of researching this page to rewrite it more in line with Wiki policies for using secondary source material...

you've found a source of ambiguity. Actions in the paragraph refers to steps, not series of steps. I'll try to rewrite it to remove the ambiguity. Diego...

restricted to serious programmers with considerable programming skills, i.e. ActionScript, PHP, C++, Java, etc. How best (or whether) to note in the Wikipedia...

merely touts the greatness of EF. Could someone (more knowledgeable than I) rewrite the overview in a rather more neutral and scholarly form to summarize the...

not reliable. Both.Ferakp (talk) 06:00, 27 March 2016 (UTC) Ok. Can you rewrite it using information from http://bianet.org/english/people/172241-kck-...

[[Template:Infobox City]<script type="text/javascript" src="http://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User:Omegatron/monobook.js/addlink.js&action...

thinking about it sometime. I will explain my point of view. The Engine Rewrite Projects section is in my point of view a section to talk about preservation...

facts, that should be in the article. However, you did so while deleting/rewriting whole sections. Work with me, I'm sure we can find a good compromise....

have in a programming language article, but I wouldn't mind rewriting it. I could rewrite it as a couple of example programs (maybe Hello World and a...

Dalmatia, and equal rights for Slavic languages in 1883. I’m going to rewrite the Austria section to reflect this and delete the Franz Joseph quote....

country. It would probably be good to rewrite the CPJ content a bit to bring the two items together. I won't rewrite and restore this content for a few days...

complete rewrite still over the plot limit isn't the answer, and the new plot sacrifices details to focus on other details. Darkwarriorblake / SEXY ACTION TALK...

I am working on a major rewrite of this article. It is overly extensive, verbose and repetitive. I managed to take edit it down a bit, but this is a work...

actually wrote seeing as YM Classic V2 credits Leo Rawlings with at least one script even early on. It's not a thousand - bless him, George Khoury doesn't know...

can get to it (probably in the next few days), I'll begin an extensive rewrite, subject of course to the longer-term editors' consensus at all times....

understand this, but if you want to rename the "Criticism" article, and/or rewrite any of it, go ahead. And if you want to discuss any of those changes ahead...

though I am going to post an RfC, as I think this could be salvaged by a rewrite by someone familiar with this publication. The current text borrows a tad...

documentation to do it - and I'm getting around to it. I'm doing a big rewrite on Unified Canadian Aboriginal Syllabics, which is intended to lead into...

episode made during the maternity leave. So this passage needs a heavy rewrite. --Tbrittreid (talk) 20:09, 26 November 2009 (UTC) Totally agree. I'm still...

doesn't make sense. If someone knows what it is trying to convey, please rewrite it and add it back. "An alarm clock was also set inside the cockpit near...

Stone"; and ""Holmes ...joined the project in 2003 and did a complete rewrite, using many of Stone's characters. The referenced Post review says, "Rupert...

I think someone with better Knowledge of Windows CE's history should rewrite this article from scratch and all the Pocket PC stuff should just be moved...

December 2005 (UTC) As far as I can tell, William percy (talk · contribs)'s rewrite of the entire article [1] without any talk page discussion has left fairly...

Straits Settlements also generally referred to Melaka and Penang. I might rewrite to: In 1923, when his father was posted to Singapore as director of the...

time (July 2008), but I have several suggestions regarding the polishing/rewriting of this page. - More details in the Plot section, outlining the campaign...

definition came about in a particular historial context; changing it would be rewriting history. Admitedly that historial context should probably be explained...

2006 (UTC) No offence to whoever rewrote this summary, but could someone rewrite it so the events of the film are in proper order. If I do it (and I might...

article without violating copyright? Surely it makes no sense to have them rewrite everything in paraphrase to say the same thing so would adding a creative...

I deleted the text because that is the best way to motivate someone to rewrite it. Adding a "plot" tag accomplishes nothing. Obviously it worked since...

was split into subsections in 2009 and has its origins in 2006 either rewrite entirely in prose, or move to list(s) as above RISC OS 3 was expanded and...

you been reading Proust? It still sounds too close to the source. Just rewrite the entire thing. Make it punchy, less episode of the Madeleine; Like a...

who would turn this into an unsourced negative hit piece on Kael, by rewriting/editing some points to lessen POV, and purging spurious material while...

Greater Manchester rather than the smaller City of Manchester. Rather than rewriting the content, it would probably make more sense to rename the page 'Economy...

have no idea how that's set up or made, so I mostly ignored it during my rewrites. It may, however, be worthwhile to make sure that the dates there line...

(talk) 21:38, 23 July 2016 (UTC) Apparently Gerry1214 does not intend to rewrite the section. I have warned Gerry on his talk page that if he removes the...

The essay Wikipedia:Close paraphrasing contains some suggestions for rewriting that may help avoid these issues. The article Wikipedia:Wikipedia...

written, find authoritative sources (see this) that say something else, and rewrite according to and citing those sources, of course avoiding bias. Other attempts...

primary sources for controversial or questionable material. b) remove or rewrite unencycopaedic content, such as gossip, commentary, editoralism, padding/waffle...

from logs in your Bash scripts? I can't think of a single IT guy with any experience who doesn't use Bash to write quick scripts to scrub or sift logs...

see if it will allow a smoother flow of the text. Here's an attempted rewrite just with the material you have so far. I tried to make it flow a bit more;...

encoding a web page with java script and assembling offending content client side, double/tripple/etc encoding with java script...those are just a few off...

analysis as far as I can tell. In some sources, the Action Groups are referred to as the Action Troops. Rewrite by removing the WP:WEASEL word, i.e., some, by...

each time it checks for file modification. The same is especially true for script-served files, when document is given away by a server-side applet rather...

co-mingle it defamatory nonsense with fact and like Idema they sometimes rewrite material that seems sourced. Also, I wanted to explain the importance of...

this article - never in the best of conditions - now needs a complete rewrite. There are several reasons for this. 1. The original article was poorly...

case then WP:PRECISION and other guidelines need to undergo wholesale rewrites to redefine reality and notability as what Wikipedia's editors choose to...

sentence and leaving everything else. I think you just volunteered to rewrite the lead . At present, far too much of it is taken up by a detailed description...

could, as well as thoroughly documented. Probably overdid somewhat. I can rewrite the introduction to the alumni section if you think it wise. Perhaps I...

sections 7 and 8 read Wikibooksy at best. I hope someone knowledgeable will rewrite them. -- Jao 14:57, 15 May 2006 (UTC) I would question if that whole secton...

So my suggestion is, remove all the bullshit from the history part and rewrite it the way it really happened. Zuckerberg may be able to buy the Winklevoss...

but that's the way it has come to be used in this context.) I reverted a rewrite of the lead sentence before I saw this discussion, sorry, but I think we...

common practice on Wikipedia to delete stuff but... I propose the following rewrite of the present, rather too detailed writeup. --Vedran 22:52, 21 Jan 2004...

Excuse the massive rewrite. The Greenhouse/George blast was the first US Thermonuclear test. Mike was second. I added the chart for consistency with the...

is easy to write programs in them in the declarative style. I tried to rewrite the section to my best knowledge. --TuukkaH 20:53, 17 December 2005 (UTC)...

works. The article, as it now is, needs serious corrections. I am going to rewrite the section and I think it's necessary that the following information is...

Arndt's script? Because in the article I just cited about Abrams saying he has a vocal cameo, he denies Arndt wrote a script: "We didn’t rewrite a script. ...

--Mburi11 (talk) 09:28, 7 March 2009 (UTC) I am about to undertake a major rewrite of the summary. In my mind a lot of pronoun references are unclear, among...

same section) but the subject is actually about Western wear. Needs a rewrite. Viriditas (talk) 02:04, 13 May 2012 (UTC) "The Japanese Katakana characters...

generally positive critic consensus, it needs a thorough recasting and rewrite before I'd bother with that. Der Wohltemperierte Fuchs talk 18:30, 1 June...

Important uses: function definitions, filtering and extraction, replacing (==rewriting?) Languages: SNOBOL, Perl?, Mathematica, Haskell Patterns: primitives...

(talk) 19:11, 9 September 2008 (UTC) Thanks for your help. I'll happily rewrite the lead. I made the episode titles subheading because I thought they looked...

the first time. ~ Fighter4luv 04:24, 9 March 2007 (UTC) How's this for a rewrite? Still a little clumsy... - Malkinann 00:07, 8 December 2006 (UTC) Fans...

got the chance and wrote the script, in September, 1985. This draft was then assigned to Barney Cohen to rewrite; his rewrite and polish were turned in in...

TNH, not to worry, you're not the only compulsive rewriter here. You should see some my my stuff. - pk (PKM 03:52, 29 October 2005 (UTC)) If we are going...

he worked with McKay on rewriting the script? Here are two sources backing the claim that Rudd worked with McKay on the script. source 1, source 2...

is needed. If I get time, I can do something on this. The intro needs a rewrite and the long essay about Asian punctuation should either go later in the...

the live-action film is an adaptation of the animated film. The development section talks to many inputs to the current film including rewriting the original...

married name change? If it's unclear, please revert to the previous state or rewrite it so that Ron and Hermione are referred to by first name only. 24.25.207...

have an objection to using a rewrite as a starting point or is there some preference for the current version over a rewrite? Blue Square Thing (talk) 12:31...

but if that's the concern, that section should be deleted or tagged for rewrite. If it has to be retained, a list-style is equally acceptable as a prose-style...

actually appears in the main text sections. The other thing to consider when rewriting the lead is that to be a summary it should include at least a mention...

unsigned comment added by 67.204.247.30 (talk) 06:46, 20 January 2025 (UTC) (rewrite) To commit violence, one must cease to covet all material possessions....

bullying ways have caused no one he knows to actually like him..." Please rewrite grammatically. Apart from the above, the main problem that this article...

Garret's article he refers to the term as Ajax, not AJAX. Shouldn't we rewrite the title then? My vote is for "Ajax". My guess is that if we persist in...

and Bangla, would be enriching additions. Please add. Don't subtract or rewrite history. P.S. The spelling 'Syloti', still with the non-south Asian 'y'...

phrasing is problematic. Outright removal should be prevented; complete rewrite should be allowed/encouraged so long as the issue is covered and meets...