If you have an edit request, posting on the talk page of the article or a WikiProject is fine, but notifying individual users is disruptive. See WP:CANVASSING. Thank you. >>> Ingenuity.talk(); 19:06, 8 August 2022 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20220808190600","author":"Ingenuity","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Ingenuity-20220808190600-Please_stop_canvassing","replies":[]}}-->
I have made some of the edits that you requested. Best, Thriley (talk) 04:22, 11 August 2022 (UTC)[reply]__DTELLIPSISBUTTON__{"threadItem":{"timestamp":"20220811042200","author":"Thriley","type":"comment","level":1,"id":"c-Thriley-20220811042200-Edit_requests","replies":[]}}-->