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Nominator: SurfingPenguinPhd (talk · contribs) 23:36, 30 November 2024 (UTC)
Reviewer: Voorts (talk · contribs) 02:11, 1 December 2024 (UTC)
I am quickfailing this nomination. First, the article does not comply with the Manual of Style layout guideline (GA criterion 1b). Second, there is an uncited section and several paragraphs lack citations (2b). Third, it appears to contain the article authors' original thoughts, and does not neutrally describe the subject in summary style (2c; 3b; 4). For example:
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