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Hello, I am affiliated with NOIRLab (user Marcodatadev), so I am proposing this here for review rather than editing the article directly. I am aware this is a Good Article, so I am keeping my suggestion minimal and non-disruptive. The existing content and images would all remain in place; this would simply add one freely licensed image as a modest supporting illustration.

Proposed change: Add a single freely licensed artist's illustration of a hot Jupiter (a giant exoplanet analogous to Jupiter) as a modest supporting image, without removing or altering any existing image. Because it is an illustration rather than a telescopic image, I am suggesting it as a minor, smaller-sized addition rather than a prominent one. Image: File:Artist’s illustration of hot Jupiter with magnetic field (noirlab2614a).tiff Suggested placement: At the end of the "Interaction with the Solar System" section, where the article discusses Jupiter's wider planetary context, complementing the lead's existing mention that Jupiter-like exoplanets have been found in other systems. The "Impacts" subsection already carries the Shoemaker–Levy 9 image, so placing this lower in the section keeps the layout balanced and the existing imagery untouched. Suggested caption: Artist's illustration of magnetic activity around a hot Jupiter, a giant exoplanet analogous to Jupiter. The exact wikitext I suggest is:
Justification: The article notes that Jupiter-like exoplanets have been found in other systems and links to Jupiter analogue, but it currently has no illustration of one. As an artist's impression rather than an observational image, it is best suited to a supporting role at a smaller size, which is why I have set |upright=0.85. The illustration accompanies recent research using the Gemini North telescope and the ESO Very Large Telescope reporting evidence of magnetic fields on ultra-hot Jupiters.[1] The caption is kept descriptive and neutral, with detailed science left to the linked articles.
License: Creative Commons Attribution 4.0 International (CC BY 4.0), with credit to International Gemini Observatory/NOIRLab/NSF/AURA/M. Garlick.
I am happy to adjust the caption, size, or placement if editors prefer. If the community feels the article is better as it stands, I am happy to withdraw the request. Thank you. Marcodatadev (talk) 16:11, 13 June 2026 (UTC)
Marcodatadev (talk) 16:11, 13 June 2026 (UTC)
User:Praemonitus, it looks like you think we should use the word this instead of it to refer to Jupiter in a few of the sentences in the first paragraph of the lede. I disagree, and I think it is clearly the better choice.
Although your version is technically grammatically correct, it is awkward and distracting. The words this and it are not functionally interchangeable. We typically use the words this or that to change the antecedent or mark some kind of contrast or shift in focus, but we use it when we want the subject to stay the same. Switching between different pronouns makes it look like you're switching between antecedents and subjects, even though you're just referring to Jupiter the whole time.
Jupiter is the fifth planet from the Sun, and the largest in the Solar System. This is a [...]
For example, in the quote above, the first word of the second sentence is supposed to refer to Jupiter. But because we're using this instead of it, we're throwing the reader off, and now it looks like we could be talking about Jupiter's status as the fifth planet or as the largest planet, or maybe the Sun or the Solar System. Using it would fix this altogether.
For an example of this principle in action, take a look at the articles for Mercury and Earth. In Mercury's article, the first word of the second sentence is it, because the subject is Mercury itself. But in Earth's article, the first word of the second sentence is this, because the subject is Earth's status as a life-harboring planet, not Earth itself. The use of this clearly marks a change in subject.
If you agree with me, please un-revert my edit. If you disagree, please explain why.
–CopperyMarrow15 (talk · edits) 00:16, 1 August 2026 (UTC)
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