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I am back to propose changes to the page. I know you want sentence by sentence changes but there is so much content on the page that it is difficult to do. When one sentence is changed, it changes the context of the paragraph and ultimately results in the moving of other sentences. However, I did it both ways so that it will be easier (hopefully) for those reviewing. These changes are applicable to the first four paragraphs of the page.
CURRENT VERSION
(Here is the current version as it exists on the page as of October 15, 2018) FXCM, also known as Forex Capital Markets, is a retail foreign exchange broker, now run from London after being banned from United States markets for defrauding its customers.[2][3][4] Its former parent company, Global Brokerage, Inc. filed for bankruptcy on December 11, 2017.[5][6][7] The operating company, known as FXCM Group, is now owned by Jefferies Financial Group,[8] which changed its name from Leucadia National Corporation in 2018.[9]
FXCM allows retail clients to speculate on the foreign exchange market and provides trading in contract for difference (CFDs) on major indices and commodities such as gold and crude oil. Global Brokerage shareholders lost over 98% of their investment since January 2015.[10]
On February 6, 2017 the firm agreed to pay a $7 million penalty to settle a suit from the U.S. Commodity Futures Trading Commission (CFTC) involving fraudulent misrepresentation by FXCM to its customers and to regulators. FXCM withdrew its CFTC registration and agreed not to re-register in the future, effectively banning it from trading in the United States.[11] Three top managers resigned under regulatory pressure and the majority owner of the firm changed its name to Global Brokerage Inc., effective January 27, 2017.[12][13][14][15]
A Managing Director of Leucadia National Corp, which before the bankruptcy held a 49.9% equity stake in the operating company,[16] was appointed chairman of the FXCM Group board.[17] Its U.S. accounts were sold to Gain Capital. About 40,000 customer accounts were sold at about $375 each.[13][18]
PROPOSED VERSION (Here is the proposed final version as outlined line by line below)
FXCM, also known as Forex Capital Markets, is a retail foreign exchange broker currently based in London.[1] FXCM allows retail clients to speculate on the foreign exchange market and provides trading in contract for difference (CFDs) on major indices and commodities such as gold and crude oil.[2][3] The exchange's operating company, FXCM Group, is owned by Leucadia.[4]
In February 2017, the firm agreed to settle a suit with the U.S. Commodity Futures Trading Commission (CFTC) after FXCM was accused of fraudulent misrepresentation involving its customers and regulators.[5] Its parent company changed its name to Global Brokerage, Inc. (formerly FXCM, Inc.) that month.[6][7] The parent company and three founding partners were ordered to pay a $7 million penalty and withdraw their CFTC registration, effectively ending the exchange's U.S. operations.[5] Its U.S. accounts (around 40,000 in total) were sold to Gain Capital for $375 apiece.[8]
Global Brokerage filed for bankruptcy in November 2017, but officially reorganized in February 2018.[4][9] While the company technically owns a 51% equity stake in FXCM Group, its agreement with Leucadia and FXCM about future distributions of cash flows places its real economic interest in FXCM at 10 to 50%. Leucadia remains the de facto parent company of the FXCM Group.[4][9]
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NOTE - Above I went through line by line and hopefully got it right. However, I put everything into what the actual opening paragraphs would be like with the changes above so that you can see it all laid out. Let me know if there are any questions or you need additional clarification for any of the changes. --Formilds (talk) 03:12, 16 October 2018 (UTC)
Notes
Spintendo, I am confused as the response above does not address all of the requests. What I am looking to do is have someone review all of the proposed edits that are in my sandbox. The current article does not list the history correctly as there seems to be a confusion of ownership throughout the years. The copy in my sandbox better defines it and also reads more neutral than the current article, including the opening paragraphs. I was looking through recent requests for COI edits which led me to find another similar request which was handled without all the need to break down each and every section. I would request that the draft article in my sandbox be reviewed and the changes updated to the live page. --Formilds (talk) 00:42, 27 October 2018 (UTC)
Formilds, with all due respect, this company has a ton of legal issues and they are very difficult to wade through. The current page is difficult to decipher but so is the draft you presented. I am going to wait for feedback from others on the bankruptcy section below prior to doing any further edits. Even though you have a COI, you are welcome to engage in the discussion as long as you do not make edits to the article itself. --CNMall41 (talk) 17:29, 11 December 2018 (UTC)
The company has quite a bit of negative information to include, but not sure the current lede is reflected of the page history, especially after the implementation of several COI request (above). Here is the proposed wording by the COI editor. I would rather get a consensus on this prior to implementing any on the actual page. Note that I copied and pasted directly from User:Formilds/sandbox.--CNMall41 (talk) 01:16, 20 December 2018 (UTC)
FXCM, also known as Forex Capital Markets, is a retail foreign exchange broker currently based in London.[2] FXCM allows retail clients to speculate on the foreign exchange market and provides trading in contract for difference (CFDs) on major indices and commodities such as gold and crude oil.[3][4] The exchange's operating company, FXCM Group, is owned by Leucadia.[5]
In February 2017, the firm agreed to settle a suit with the U.S. Commodity Futures Trading Commission (CFTC) after FXCM was accused of fraudulent misrepresentation involving its customers and regulators.[6] Its parent company changed its name to Global Brokerage, Inc. (formerly FXCM, Inc.) that month.[7][8] The parent company and three founding partners were ordered to pay a $7 million penalty and withdraw their CFTC registration, effectively ending the exchange's U.S. operations.[6] Its U.S. accounts (around 40,000 in total) were sold to Gain Capital for $375 apiece.[9]
Global Brokerage filed for bankruptcy in November 2017, but officially reorganized in February 2018. While the company technically owns a 51% equity stake in FXCM Group, its agreement with Leucadia and FXCM about future distributions of cash flows places its real economic interest in FXCM at 10 to 50%. Leucadia remains the de facto parent company of the FXCM Group.[5][10]
I removed this for a second time in as many days since it is not related to the company. Just because the CEO makes a statement about the industry doesn't mean that it is about the company or belongs on the company page. Would be happy to discuss and get a consensus if there are people who feel otherwise. Also, if we are including CEO quotes about the industry, why we would include this one in particular and not others?--CNMall41 (talk) 07:08, 2 January 2019 (UTC)
Smallbones, I understand your want to make sure that negative information about this company is covered in Wikipedia. However, it is covered extensively. There is also a process for discussing edits and you seem to cross the line of WP:5P2 and WP:5P4. The edits I made were discussed not only on this page but also in detailed edit summaries. The edits I implemented were not as-is from the company and if you actually look, you will see that all the negative information about the company is in there (in fact, there is very little positive other than a few facts). However, you reverted them all saying "revert to last Alaney2k, per discussion at WP:COIN." Your revert caused the re-introduction of WP:SYNTH and edits that were not WP:NEUTRAL.
The discussion you mention was a report filed by you, basically stating that edits requested by a COIN editor are tainted if implemented by me since they originated from a company you are "running out of patience" with. The most relevant statment I see from the COIN report is from an admin who said - "Since the COI issue was previously flagged, and since Formilds is going through all the correct steps, there is nothing left for this board to resolve. User:CNMall41 is doing just what they are supposed to do in handling requests from a COI-affected editor. The material is not forever 'tainted' by originating from a proposal by User:Formilds. It is to be reviewed like any other proposed content."
There has bee NO policy base reason you have given for your reverts and NO discussion from you about the edits. I have reverted you a final time prior to filing an ANI report and ask that you discuss here. Please start to WP:AGF and not use Wikipedia to WP:RIGHTGREATWRONGS. --CNMall41 (talk) 19:35, 7 January 2019 (UTC)
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michael should be replaced as www.forexwolf.in 111.223.2.232 (talk) 17:52, 9 May 2020 (UTC)
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