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Nominator: ZKang123 (talk · contribs) 02:16, 6 March 2026 (UTC)
Reviewer: Whyiseverythingalreadyused (talk · contribs) 11:48, 6 March 2026 (UTC)
I intend to review this article as I saw it fresh out of the oven at the WikiProject Singapore page. Hello there, ZKang123 Whyiseverythingalreadyused (t · c · he/him) 11:48, 6 March 2026 (UTC)
I appreciate your effort to review. However, I felt this article would best also have a second pair of eyes, especially from a more experienced reviewer. I encourage you to actually try review other shorter articles in the meantime. Plus, I don't think the suggestion mode is a reliable AI-detector either.--ZKang123 (talk · contribs) 04:28, 7 March 2026 (UTC)
Pinging Epicgenius and ZKang123; Seloloving is pinged above for his opinions on a certain history map Whyiseverythingalreadyused (t · c · he/him) 02:01, 10 March 2026 (UTC)
My prose comments are here. Epicgenius (talk) 20:02, 10 March 2026 (UTC)
Lead:
via a loop around the city centre.- I would say "...making a loop around the city centre." Also, I would specify that this refers to the Central Area, Singapore.
Despite the insolvency of Alpine Bau, the main contractor for three stations, Stage 2 commenced operations in 2015, followed by Stage 3 in 2017, which spans from Fort Canning to Expo.- I would split these into two sentences (after "commenced operations in 2015"). I would also mention which stations Stage 2 covers.
At 41.9 kilometres (26.0 mi), the DTL is the longest underground- I would specify that it is the longest such fully-underground line.
Planning:
The BTL and the northern half of the ERL were subsequently incorporated into the Downtown Line (DTL).- This seems to be mentioned in paragraph 3. Is it necessary to mention here as well?
Comprising five stations from Milennia (now Promenade)- Are we sure the spelling wasn't "Millenia"? The Promenade MRT station uses both "Millenia" and "Milennia", so I'm not sure what's correct.
Construction:
Construction of DTL2 officially began with a groundbreaking ceremony at Beauty World station on 3 July 2009. DTL2 tunnelling works began in June 2011.- Do we know why it took nearly two years for tunnelling to begin? I would not ask this question if we were talking about NYC or a similar city, but such a delay seems to be more unusual for Singapore.
Through engagement with the Ministry of Manpower,- What did this "engagement" involve?
McConnell Dowell South East Asia and SK E&C; (Singapore)- Is that semicolon necessary?
Opening:
presided by prime minister Lee Hsien Loong- Is the correct wording in Singapore (and British English in general) not "presided over by prime minister Lee Hsien Loong"? Same with para 3, "presided by transport minister Khaw Boon Wan".
The DTL was hit by a 15-minute disruption on its opening day.- This seems so minor to me that it doesn't really bear mentioning, even considering that Singapore has fewer delays and disruptions than counterparts such as NYC.
In July 2016, the LTA reported that daily weekday ridership on the DTL has tripled from 83,000 in October 2015 to 250,000.- This should be "had tripled from 83,000..."
In August 2020, transport minister Ong Ye Kung disclosed that the DTL's construction costs amounted to S$21 billion.- Conversely, this should be "had amounted to S$21 billion".
Subsequent developments:
While initially planned to be completed by 2024, transport minister Chee Hong Tat announced on 6 December 2024 that DTL3e would only commence operations in the second half of 2026.- Did this involve any tunnelling or other contracts? You mention this for the firt three stages, so I'm surprised it's not mentioned here.
Service:
The DTL is a medium-capacity rail line. In June 2025, the DTL recorded 463,000 daily passenger trips.- Could these perhaps be combined?
Route:
The line self-intersects between Bencoolen and Jalan Besar.- I'd say "crosses itself", and maybe you can also clarify that there's no physical interchange between the two portions of the line at that point.
The DTL will be extended to connect with the Thomson–East Coast Line at Sungei Bedok station- Might be good to repeat the date here.
Stations:
Eleven stations (eventually twelve upon completion of the Cross Island Line) connect to other MRT/LRT lines. Three interchange stations – Bukit Panjang, Newton and Tampines – operate as out-of-station interchanges, requiring passengers to tap out and re-enter the system to transfer between the lines.- Do the eleven include the three out-of-station interchanges?
Rolling stock; Depot - I will review this tomorrow
Signalling - I will review this tomorrow, but para 3 has a typo: ...modules were developed to suppor UTO.
- should be "support"
Rest of article - will review tomorrow
@Whyiseverythingalreadyused and @ZKang123, I'll review the rest tomorrow, but this is what I got so far. – Epicgenius (talk) 20:02, 10 March 2026 (UTC)
From 2021 to 2024, the DTL was the most reliable MRT line by mean kilometres between failures (MKBF)). – Epicgenius (talk) 13:21, 11 March 2026 (UTC)
The DTL's rolling stock consists of a fleet of 92 three-car trains- Do we really need "a fleet of", or is "The DTL's rolling stock consists of 92 three-car trains" sufficient?
in Changchun, with design work done in a Bombardier engineering centre in Hennigsdorf- I would add the country for Changchun and Hennigsdorf.
The trains are fully automatic- It's mentioned in the Signalling section that the trains are driverless. One of these may be redundant
The train design is intended to improve commuters' comfort and convenience, which include an ergonomic curved seat design and perch seats in the gangway for wider standing space.- Grammatically, this would be incorrect since this would read as "the train design ... which include". Do you mean "...with features which include"
reducing overall weight and electricity consumption of about 2,000 MWh per year- Since the 2,000 MWh figure refers only to the electricity consumption, I'd say "...reducing overall weight and cutting electricity consumption by about 2,000 MWh per year."
the line's train fleet.- "The line's fleet" seems more concise.
The Tai Seng Facility Building is two-level underground structure- This should be "a two-level underground structure".
The Sirius CBTC system ... is configured for driverless Unattended Train Operation (UTO)- Given that the driverless aspect of the line has been mentioned twice, I would be very surprised if it weren't configured for UTO. Perhaps UTO can be mentioned earlier?
incorporating Doppler radar, axle-mounted tachogenerators and absolute position reference beacon readers- should this be "Doppler radars"?
Wider fare gates allow easier access for wheelchair users into the station- To avoid people saying "wider than what?", I'd change this to "wide fare gates".
Stevens station, which has a depth of 34.22 metres (112.3 ft), has a stacked platform arrangement due to limited space constraints by the nearby flyover and canal.- Since you mention this, do the sources say whether the remaining stations have side or island platforms?
Each artwork must not only be integrated into the station's architecture- The word "must" raises the question, who imposed this restriction? Or is it that the LTA seeks to integrate each artwork into the architecture?
— Preceding unsigned comment added by Whyiseverythingalreadyused (talk • contribs) 16:08, 12 March 2026 (UTC)
The result was: promoted by Zzz plant (talk) 01:48, 18 March 2026 (UTC)
ZKang123 (talk · contribs) 00:34, 13 March 2026 (UTC).
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Overall:
Obviously, for an article that just passed GA, the review is more about the hook than the article content, which has already been checked: and my own checks of the content turned up no problems. I'm not crazy about a map as a source for ALT2, but it'll do. ALT1 is supported but could be made more interesting: "...diverting the Singapore River two times?" I'm not really getting the sources for ALT0, though: they seem to just say it will be completed in three stages, rather than being three separate projects. This is not very unusual anyway; as I said above, I'd much rather run one of the other hooks, so the question is rather moot. Cremastra (talk · contribs) 18:15, 15 March 2026 (UTC)
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