Hi, very interesting article, great job! Xebe22 (talk) 12:49, 12 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
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Hi, very interesting article, great job! Xebe22 (talk) 12:49, 12 July 2024 (UTC)
Hi, nice to meet you!
First of all, nice article and interesting topic:)
In general I found each section comprehensive and clear, as it analyses many different aspects related to the topic in a brief but still valuable way. For the sake of clarity, I'd just add a brief explanation, related to the concept of boolean operations and gaussian curvature.
However, maybe the structure of the article might be a bit refined, to balance the lenght of the two sections of "Geometry" and "Architecture and Engineering". In my opinion, a possible structure might consist of: . Explanation of curved structures and their geometry generation . History and current advancements, (also comprising the construction process) . Mechanical, acoustic and visual properties
Just a minor thing: in the construction section, it might be interesting to add also innovative practices related to curved structures, (for instance, the avoidance of timber frameworks by using knitted textiles developed by Mariana Popescu for the project "Knitted concrete") Camilla.vi (talk) 13:01, 12 July 2024 (UTC)
I noticed that the "extrusion" link links to a german page. I don't know if this was done intentionally, so I left it there, but I also checked that the English 'extrusion' article exists, so maybe it was an error. Anyway, a very good, complete and comprehensible article, I enjoyed it! 77Davide77 (talk) 14:03, 12 July 2024 (UTC)
The following observations and suggestions for improvements were collected, following an expert review of the article within the Science, Technology, Society and Wikipedia course at the Politecnico di Milano, in July 2024.
This sentence can be simplified:"They traditionally differentiate from the other most diffused construction technology, namely the post and lintel, which results from the addition of regular and linear architectural elements.[1]".
typo in section 2: "genetratrices "
section 2: "An arch is generated by the revolution of a point", please revise. revolution of a point or line? Also in the same sentence it is recommended to correct "thought as" to "thought of as".
section 2: "The actions performed to make these solids are the same needed to generate them in a CAD[3] or – to some extent – in a FEM software to analyse them.[4]" I would remove the second part of the sentence since the section is dedicated to geometry only. I believe there is no need to address FEM, as some readers can miss it.
section 2: "Differently from the post and lintel construction, which capacity ...". I would remove this sentence as it is arguable such generalization. E.g., so the capacity of non-curved elements do not rely on their geometry? The span is not important?
section "structural behaviour", this sentence can be improved: "The boundary conditions that would cause bending and shear stress in a post and lintel structure, in a curved structure cause just axial stress in the unit elements". the boundary conditions cannot cause shear stress? Better to be more specific, highlighting that when subjected to vertical gravity forces are governed by compressive stresses.
Suggestion to replace "The resistance of an arch then,..." to "The capacity of an arch then, ..."
"Studying the problem of a hemispherical membrane in a gravitational field,", be more specific. Under its self-weight?
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